1. Easy (2.62 stars, 117 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 296 notes)
3. Normal (3.91 stars, 147 notes)
4. Yuki's Hard (4.87 stars, 270 notes)

Modders

Tsumetaku
sjoy
Autumn
Pink Agate
smallboat
Senbon
Hollow Wings
- Jelly -
gideon5504
Xinely
Melt
Chronotakular
yf_bmp
YOURS
Pagno
Angelina_Rocca
bigfrog
YGOkid8
EnakoRin
Flower
wonders
sheela901
Sun Rainbow
Fycho
Yumih
Nightcore Princess G
lkx_Shore
Asgard
Nymph
Atrue
OniJAM
CXu
-Asagi
yurunneram
HelloSCV
jonathanlfj
NatsumeRin

Nothing here

Tsumetaku wrote:

=,=
作者是OutputP

窩做過這首Orz

還是先鋒

Tsumetaku wrote:

好惹 窩來惹(? 先來幫修一些東東吧w

首先BPM=148 好
先前請教過BAT 這首屬於比較輕快的歌,所以148是沒問題的~~
Offset 建議設在9882 即使是前奏也有一點點琴聲能跟
如果要用現在的Offset的話 Playtime似乎有點過短... 懒Orz 还是保持原状吧 1分半应该也够了..

另外結尾很突兀的掉了呢 如果要的話窩可以幫倪把最後一段的結尾剪到那邊OwO 會比較適合一點... 可以的话十分感谢owo

現在的BG有點小呢...6xx感覺螢幕太大會悲劇 現在My的是1366x768就已經有點GG了w
BG之前窩在做的時候找了超久的... 可以參考一下xD 感谢 已用XD
有點忘記在哪找的...應該也是pixiv吧... 可以爬爬看~~ 对了!P站的图不写来源没问题吗?o.o

另外Easy應該是不需要啦 有點太...簡單 啊!这么短只有两难度真的大丈夫?

歌詞和GD要的話窩可以幫做OwO 窩從去年做玩到現在每天還在哼

好那我要歌词的SB >w< 加完音效做完之后叫你w

sjoy wrote:

你好。from M4M
第一跟红线感觉有点远啊
试着在前面找红线感觉也能做图啊。。 好 我试试在前奏作图
Easy:
SV好低啊。个人建议0.8~1.0 将善良进行到底233
我不知道0.5是否符合RANK
不过改变SV很麻烦你可以问别人看看
01:41:469 (2) - 距离远了 aimod里没提示0 0
01:53:632 (3) - 可以加个FIN fixed
Normal:
还是SV 建议1.0~1.4 ST建议1 SV高了滑条就长了 所以滑条建议不变速 恩..这样也行吧 毕竟改SV挺麻烦..ST1的话slidertick就没用了我也不知道为什么0 0
00:53:632可以加个1/1或者NOTE 麻痹原来有的啊莫名消失了
01:40:253 (1) - 感觉没必要NC 这里是一句的开始啊0 0
01:34:172 (1) -01:27:686 (1) - ^ 这些的话我是想在kiai开始的地方NC..恩
Hard:
还是SV（你够了！）
建议H难度建议是1.4~1.8这样都可以接受 本来我是用74BPM来做的QWQ设的2.2SV 然后就改成148了..
00:41:470 (1) - 没必要NC 这里是一句的开始啊0 0
00:44:713 (5) - NC no
00:56:267 (2) - 建议移到00:56:469 感觉这样的节奏也可以w
01:00:118 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉越听越奇怪啊 用滑条试试看？fixed
01:02:956 (8,6) - 用单点太空了毕竟是H难度 建议改长滑条 fixed
01:14:713 (6) - NC fixed
01:29:916 (1) - 没必要NC fixed
01:34:983 (1) - ^ fixed
01:53:226 (5) - 尾巴加个FIN fixed
总的来说图还行 打起来挺顺的
祝早日RANK 加油

Autumn wrote:

喵
Offset=32591（+40 plz）然后resnap一下 恩0 0

[General]
唔 和LS一样，建议从00:09:848 开始做图 严格地说 drain time至少得是全长的85%以上 好 我去做前奏
然后break后面的结尾那段可以去掉，这样就可以比较好地切歌 如果你愿意的话，切好的歌我已经传上来了：
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link?shareid ... 1040301054
只要改一下offset就能用
棒棒>w<

[Hard]
Clap用在这里有点不好听，可以试试从这几个里选选：
http://puu.sh/4dNOj.rar 233 我全都换了o(￣ヘ￣o* )正好缺clap音
(只是01:00:158 -之前的部分，后面不用换)

00:43:902 (3) - 试试Ctrl+G 好梗!!不得不改
01:00:157 (1,2,3) - 这里BG的鼓音其实变奏了不是？要是我就用一个滑条糊过去 ._. 改成两个3/4滑条了w
01:53:265 (5) - 这个滑条尾用finish比较好 换了mp3之后这段就没了233

[Normal]
Tickrate用1就行 tick用1slidertick就无效了..
OD-1 HP-2 fixed
Normal不要用滑条变速啊 会被挑的OAO 好0 0

[Easy]
十分良心

GL~~

Pink Agate wrote:

MOD

整体音效音量可以加大一些
如果你是白色较多的背景建议用深色combo色

[Easy]

00:35:851 (1) - 这里或许加个finish比较好
00:47:202 (5) - easy里不建议4次回转的滑条，至多一次，建议用普通的长滑条代替
01:14:770 (2) - 这里finish
01:18:013 (2) - finish
01:23:689 (1) - finish

[normal]

01:14:770 (2) - 为何不加finish?
01:18:014 (2) - finish
01:24:500 (2) - finish

以上All fixed

[hard]

很多节奏下的不对，整体间距可以大一些。例如1.4或者1.5 现在节奏应该好了 间距就这样吧._.

00:35:851 (2) - 加finish参考normal和easy的mod all fixed
00:17:405 (4) - 滑条不该在这里开始，移动到后面00:17:608 - 的一根的短白线上比较合适，然后00:17:405 - 这里可加个circlefixed
00:19:534 (3) - 删掉，不合适，手感也不舒适 fixed
00:21:054 (1) - 1的位置不如叠在蓝色的那个2上面 太远了吧..
00:20:243 (1,2,3) - 这三个手感不怎么样，换个摆法 已换

后半部分节奏乱七八糟，乱用变速，其实BPM用回原来的比较好，hard可以用SV3.6，

哭哭哦

smallboat wrote:

嗨. QQ MOD REQ~

怎麼這首歌又有似曾相似的感覺..又改了一次ww

[General]

圖片1364X767..應該是要1366X768吧? 標準尺寸.. 好我去改



[Easy]

00:09:906 (1) - 應該可以在大個10% 使clap聲音能夠聽出來 好
00:20:446 (4) - 看要不要換有弧度的滑條 不太好看 我那一首柔情的歌之前用有角的 朋友說不合適fixed
01:24:601 (1) - 感覺Easy diff沒這樣放的(? 应该不影响 后面是转盘
01:29:365 (2) - 前頭f
01:33:419 (1,2) - 尾端f
01:41:527 (2) - ^
感觉没什么必要加fin啊0 0
01:55:716 (1) - 弄個轉盤 01:59:365

后面加的话就几乎得把全部都做完了..这个结尾段还是不做较好


[Normal]

有些白線可以加個圈或滑條 試著放放看 已經有3以下難度了 可以多放點 难度老是升不上来QAQ


00:09:906 (1) - 可以再大聲 30%我试试
00:18:014 (3) - 拉到白線 fixed
00:14:770 (7) - 折一次比較佳 后面有音
01:06:662 (4) - 放個長滑條 好
01:55:716 (1) - 弄個轉盤 01:59:365 (或在範圍內放圈或滑條) no

[Hard]

hr ar 各-1 毕竟没insane ar还是不减了..HP减了

00:18:622 (6,4) - 盡量別用角的 我觉得蛮好看诶0w0
00:55:311 (3) - 後面的線突出來了 fixed
00:58:554 (1,2,3,4) - 有點怪 有音的
01:53:284 (5) - 後面還可以放東西

變速只能3種速度以下 這樣 改了 re了一段




加油啦 還有進步空間!

Senbon wrote:

Hello, from M4M.

General

SPOILER

Audio preview is different between Easy 01:26:932, Normal and Hard 01:27:338
Very good map already thx

fixed

Easy

SPOILER

00:30:987 (2) - end finish? x
00:53:689 (3) - align with (2) better x
01:08:284 (4) - NC, 7 combo is too much for easy √

Normal

SPOILER

00:30:987 (3) - remove whistle, end finish? x
01:38:892 (5) - ctrl shift r, selection centre, rotate 4 degrees √

Hard

SPOILER

00:29:365 (1) - clap? √
00:31:797 (7) - start finish? x

Hollow Wings wrote:

0,0

General

hs的clap感觉略显单薄，感觉找一个回音响一点的比较好，这方面可以问问拉克丝，他应该会帮你的 好
aimod似乎因为有叠屏sb，所以提示开启epilepsy warning，我也不知道这是否是个问题，你可以问问bat 已开

Hard

00:54:500 (1,2) - 这几个3/4滑条个人推荐消尾音，因为这曲子比较安静 fixed
01:02:405 (6,7) - 这个大跳突然出现总感觉有点突兀，但是也似乎没有不合理的地方，因为你nc下在重白线前面的缘故。个人是建议调整nc，这个你自己看吧 fixed
01:43:960 (3) - 这里我个人建议头尾位置不变，滑条向下凸 这个没办法了0 0
01:50:851 (5) - 这个三连音放过实在可惜，此处推荐改成note+1/4折返滑条 fixed another way

我觉得做的挺不错的 thx XD

Normal

2 unsnap，kiai unsnap，注意check aimod fixed all
00:18:824 (1,2) - 换一下顺手点 fixed
00:46:797 (1,2,3,4,1) - 似乎某人跟我说低难度也请尽量避免太多连续单点，所以个人推荐此处最后的4和1并成一个滑条，注意nc 恩..再想想
01:01:797 (2) - ctrl+g 顺手
01:05:041 (2) - ^
01:14:770 (2) - ^
01:18:013 (2) - fixed
01:26:932 (1,2) - 换一下 fixed
01:37:067 (2,3) - 仔细调整一下blanket，在滑条2上多放一些control pointsfixed
01:40:716 (1,2) - ^ fixed

...

Easy

00:09:906 (1,2) - 为何你这里就意识到要多加control points呢ww，虽然blanket还是没弄好 fixed
00:55:311 (2,3) - 分别ctrl+g fixed


就给点小建议：00:26:122 (1,2) - 像这种地方虽然你又blanket的意思但并没有做好，所以给我这种强迫症一眼就看出来而且感觉很别扭。因为easy这种简单难度滑条比较多，停留时间很长，而且受众也一般是noobs，或许会看重一些谱面美观的方面，所以排列还是细致一些吧w
w 唔..QAQ

就是这样啦
good luck

- Jelly - wrote:

Hard
01:29:365 (5) - 01:35:851 (3) - 01:42:338 (5) - 感觉可加finish 貌似有点突凸
01:49:635 (3,4) - 折角不是很喜欢 这样应该也可以0 0改梗有点麻烦
Normal
01:51:662 (1,2) - 中间似乎少个音 这只是个nm orz
01:52:878 (3) - 提前1/2 [思考 好像可行 不过估计到滑条角度的问题还是算了orz
01:53:689 (4) - 再做个滑条从01:53:284到01:53:689 ez和hd都在这里结束的orz
01:46:392 (5,6) - 感觉再做个折返滑条比较好 fixed

1. 00:47:203 (5) - 感觉这一个slider形状不好看，不如换成一般的圆弧
2. 01:29:365 (2) - 个人觉得弧线反过来好看
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:16:392 (1) - 拉个红点试试？
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:608 (1) - 试试放个note在这
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:689 (1,2) - 个人建议
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:581 (6) - 这个blanket没做好

1. 00:13:554 (1,2,3,4) - 建议用ctrl+shift+d重新摆
2. 01:38:284 (5) - 4,5平行

SPOILER

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi~ From my modding queue: t/139620
I know you requested for a Chinese mod, but the problem is that I ain't good at Chinese and my rule clearly states English mod only.

General:
~Put claps on every 2nd and 4th white tick? Sounds better since you've placed them everywhere.
~Starting new combos on big white tick is the most basic technique to use if you're not sure of what NC pattern you're following.

Easy:
~00:09:906 (1) - Remove clap on head. You already have finish and the clap Shouldn't be on a downbeat.
~00:13:149 - Swap the 2 sliders to the front and circle to the back. It sounds better and matches the music more. http://puu.sh/4hVRz.jpg
~Space them properly after change and I also suggest to stack 00:16:392 (5) on top of 00:17:304 (1) 's head.
~00:16:392 (5) - Add finish.
~00:54:500 (1,2) - Swap combos.
~00:22:068 (5) - Remove clap on end and add finish.
~01:49:635 (3) - Copy and paste 01:47:202 (1) and then CTRL J and CTRL G to make it a symmetrical pattern.
~01:04:229 (1) - Slider end not snapped.
~01:47:202 (1) - ^

Normal:
~Snap your Kiai plz.
~00:13:149 (5) - NC. Cuz this pattern is longer then the others, so split them up plz.
~00:18:824 (1) - Remove NC.
~00:19:635 (3) - NC.
~00:24:500 (3) - Is the red point intentional? I think a normal curve with white points look better here.
~00:37:473 (4,1) - Swap NC.
~00:39:094 (2) - Move the reverse arrow up a bit so it will point more towards the next note for better flow.
~00:40:716 (4,1) - Swap NC.
~00:43:960 (4) - NC.
~00:50:040 (1) - Remove NC.
~00:51:662 (1,2) - Swap NC.
~So basically Start your new combos at the big white tick also known as the downbeat.
~01:06:662 (4) - Delete the slider so it's consistent with 01:00:986 (1,2,3)
~01:07:473 (1) - Move this somewhere else that doesn't overlap.
~01:35:446 (2,3) - Make proper blanket, move the notes to X:408 Y:144.
~Distance snap the notes after.
~01:40:311 (6) - Remove NC.

Hard:
~00:18:622 (1) - Remove NC.
~00:19:635 (10) - NC.
~00:20:243 (1) - Remove NC.
~00:39:703 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Distance this properly or players will get confused between 1/1 notes and 1/2 beat notes.
~01:03:014 (3) - Putting this at the back breaks the flow during play.
~01:45:581 (8) - NC.

Overall, I think it's quite a good map. Just focus on where the NCs should be and how to space and place notes for best flow and comfort during play. Keep it up ^^

Good luck!~

Xinely wrote:

你好 :3
from m4m in my queue, sorry for late D:

• 
  General and SB

1. first of all, it's just suggestion so feel free to skip
2. the SB is fine but (just opinion) how about add rain of flower or blossom or anything in kiai so feel the kiai is energetic part? let me ask tsumetaku about the SB :3
   or it's 2nd opinion , when kiai start 01:27:743 - and in 01:40:716 - (when finish sound appear) try use pulse in here?
   i think current is ok
3. General here : add "flower" in tags? since hana means flower

ok

• 
  Easy
  open AiMod and fix unsnapped objects please :3
  00:13:149 (3) - add clap for consistency
  00:26:122 (1) - try 424,188 for nice flow?
  00:30:987 (2) - add clap in head and tail for consistency
  00:52:878 (2,3,1) - try placement like http://puu.sh/4klkB.jpg ? for more neat current is okay too
  01:13:959 (1,2) - try make more blanket? i am so lazy:(
  01:22:067 (1,1) - no need NC for consistency

others are fixed

• 
  Normal
  check AiMod, unsnapped kiai time
  00:14:770 (7) - remove one repeat and add note in 00:15:987 - ? I can't know where I can put the circle if I do it
  00:18:014 (3,1) - try unstack.. kinda make confuse for newbie imo there is already a diff under 3 stars so i think this diff can be a little difficult
  00:25:716 (4,1) - ^ ^
  00:29:365 (1) - 224,256 for blanket (note: if you follow this, fix spacing after this object)
  00:35:446 (1) - i highly suggest to remove this, since suddenly after spin end (ofc it's hard for normal) and high vocal in after this time, i mean 00:35:851 - so better if you remove and start map in that time)
  00:35:851 (2) - finish in head
  00:40:716 (4) - inconsistency spacing here (1,28x)
  00:54:500 (1) - ^ (1,14x)
  00:57:338 (5) - ^ (1,12x)
  01:01:797 (2) - finish in head also spacing incosistency
  01:35:446 (2) - what? jump here? consistency spacing pls
  01:36:662 (1) - fix spacing 1,28x here

others are fixed

• 
  Hard
  01:26:933 (1) - try remove and make slider in 01:26:527 - i mean this slider http://puu.sh/4kvbF.jpg , it's more fit vocal fixed another way
  01:43:351 (8) - 248,216 for better flower shape? right
  nice hard :3

加油 谢谢:D
nice song here

Melt wrote:

Mod as request

[Easy]

1. 00:47:203 (5) - 感觉这一个slider形状不好看，不如换成一般的圆弧 easy我决定做的傻逼一点
2. 01:29:365 (2) - 个人觉得弧线反过来好看 神梗 不得不改
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:16:392 (1) - 拉个红点试试？神梗 不得不改
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:32:608 (1) - 试试放个note在这 不要把;w;
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:689 (1,2) - 个人建议 感觉这样DS对不上啊;w;
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:581 (6) - 这个blanket没做好 fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:13:554 (1,2,3,4) - 建议用ctrl+shift+d重新摆 呜呜
2. 01:38:284 (5) - 4,5平行 fixed

质量不错，但是有个致命的问题

SPOILER

这个是你的hard，版边的利用实在...强烈建议重新调一下位置，尽量把整个playfield都利用起来 现在应该好很多了

GL

Chronotakular wrote:

Hello! Mod 4 Mod! From like. 3 years ago. Heh.

Also sorry I made you post on my queue! I really didn't want to forget to mod your map D:

Your skin and story board are amazing! O.o
If you could add some combo bursts, it would really be complete!

[Easy]

01:20:446 (1,1,1) - This might be a personal opinion, but I wouldn't have sliders like this on an Easy difficulty, only because it's hard and unexpected for new players. ok

[Normal]

Jeez, I got nothing. I guess that's a good thing?

[Hard]

00:14:568 (1) - Maybe this is just me, but I didn't like this not stacked. It's fine as it is, but I missed it a lot. D: fixed another way
00:26:122 (1) - Is this supposed to be a 1 note combo? yeah I keep this kind of note NC
00:29:365 (1) - Since you did this twice, I guess it is intentional. I would remove these because it makes the song easier fail, because it doesn't restore as much HP. current may be okay too
01:34:635 (4,5,1) -Maybe un-stack these, just to make it a little bit more interesting? ok
[]

Man. This is a really clean map. Awesome job. Sorry this mod sucked. Hope this helped!

Xinely wrote:

1. the SB is fine but (just opinion) how about add rain of flower or blossom or anything in kiai so feel the kiai is energetic part?
   or it's 2nd opinion , when kiai start 01:27:743 - and in 01:40:716 - (when finish sound appear) try use pulse in here?
   I only tend to make lyrics but i can try them btw if i have time :3
   Thanks~

• 00:11:324 (6,7,8) - blanket
  00:12:743 (9,1) - distance可以拉开些 因为中间空出了一拍
  00:13:960 (3,4,5,6) - 这里(3,6)不适宜有重叠 物件可以保持距离能更美观(后面的7调整下):
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:17:608 (5,6,7) - 根据音乐这样会比较好:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:21:257 (2,3) - 对称 或者 包围
  00:30:378 (4,5) - ^
  00:39:703 - 可以加note
  00:43:757 (4) - ^
  00:50:446 (5) - NC
  00:51:054 (2,3) - blanket
  01:00:987 (3,4,5,6,1) - 弧度可以稍大一些 可以美观些
  01:03:216 - 可以尝试这样:
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:16:189 - ^
  01:07:473 (1,2,3) - 稍微拉开
  01:19:230 (3) - 可以尝试这样
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:21:662 - 加note
  01:23:284 - ^
  01:29:365 (1,2,1) - 最好不重叠
  01:38:284 (5,6) - blanket
  01:44:770 (5,6) - ^
  01:52:676 (4,5) - ^
  或者我的建议是 01:52:068 (3,4,5) - 可以成120度旋转对称
  01:53:791 (1) - spinner到长线

• 
  感觉需要"SampleSet Normal, Additions Soft"的部分
  00:10:716 (3) - 00:13:960 (3) - 00:17:203 (3) - 00:20:446 (3) - 00:23:689 (3) - 00:26:933 (3) - 00:28:554 (6) - 00:30:176 (3) - 00:31:797 (7) - 00:35:041 (1) - 01:04:230 (2) - 01:07:473 (1) - 01:12:338 (5) - 01:13:959 (2) - 01:17:203 (2) - 01:20:446 (1) - 01:22:068 (2) - 01:23:689 (3) - 01:28:554 (3) - 01:30:176 (5) - 01:33:419 (1) - 01:35:041 (1) - 01:36:662 (1) - 01:38:284 (5) - 01:39:905 (1) - 01:41:527 (3) - 01:43:149 (7) - 01:44:770 (5) - 01:46:392 (3) - 01:48:014 (5) - 01:49:635 (1) - 01:51:257 (6)
  感觉需要"Additions drum + whistle"的部分
  00:36:662 (2) - 00:38:284 (4) - 00:39:905 (3) - 00:41:527 (1) - 00:43:149 (2) - 00:44:770 (5) - 00:46:392 (8) - 00:48:014 (4) - 00:49:635 (3) - 00:51:257 (7) - 00:52:878 (5) - 00:54:500 (1) - 00:56:122 (4) - 00:57:743 (5) - 00:59:365 (3)
  00:09:906 (1) - 加finish
  00:09:906 (1) - ^
  00:21:257 (2) - 头clap
  00:29:365 (1) - 加finish
  00:47:608 (3) - 尾clap ; 00:48:014 (4) - 尾 additions drum+clap ; 00:48:419 (5) - 尾 additions drum+clap
  01:00:176 (1) - 头additions drum+finish
  01:00:581 (2) - 头additions drum+clap
  01:13:757 (1,2) - additions drum+clap
  01:26:527 (1) - additions drum+clap
  01:33:014 (6) - 尾clap
  01:43:960 (2) - 头clap
  01:48:824 (8) - clap
  01:52:676 (4,5) - 头clap
  01:53:284 (5) - 尾去clap
  01:45:987 (2) - 尾clap
  01:46:797 (1) - clap

• 00:56:527 (4,5) - blanket
  01:00:986 (1,2) - blanket
  01:50:243 (5) - 调的更美观些
  01:52:878 (3,4) - blanket

• 
  00:13:149 (3) - nc
  00:19:635 (3) - ^
  00:42:338 (2,3) - blanket
  00:45:581 (1) - nc
  00:53:689 (3,1) - distance
  01:05:851 (2,2) - 尝试头重叠下
  01:11:527 (4) - nc
  01:24:601 (1) - 转圈移后1/4且缩短1/4
  01:36:662 (3) - nc
  01:43:959 (4) - ^

yf_bmp wrote:

Hi~ for m4m

[Hard]
排列:

• 00:11:324 (6,7,8) - blanket fixed
  00:12:743 (9,1) - distance可以拉开些 因为中间空出了一拍 fixed
  00:13:960 (3,4,5,6) - 这里(3,6)不适宜有重叠 物件可以保持距离能更美观(后面的7调整下): fixed
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:17:608 (5,6,7) - 根据音乐这样会比较好: fixed another way
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:21:257 (2,3) - 对称 或者 包围 对称了
  00:30:378 (4,5) - ^ 对称了
  00:39:703 - 可以加note 不了 我决定整个主歌都善良
  00:43:757 (4) - ^^
  00:50:446 (5) - NC no
  00:51:054 (2,3) - blanket fixed another way
  01:00:987 (3,4,5,6,1) - 弧度可以稍大一些 可以美观些 fixed another way
  01:03:216 - 可以尝试这样: 不要吧感觉略奇怪;w;
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:16:189 - ^ ^
  01:07:473 (1,2,3) - 稍微拉开 fixed
  01:19:230 (3) - 可以尝试这样 no
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:21:662 - 加note fixed
  01:23:284 - ^ fixed
  01:29:365 (1,2,1) - 最好不重叠 fixed
  01:38:284 (5,6) - blanket fixed
  01:44:770 (5,6) - ^ fixed
  01:52:676 (4,5) - ^
  或者我的建议是 01:52:068 (3,4,5) - 可以成120度旋转对称 我135度转了
  01:53:791 (1) - spinner到长线 不了

音效:

• 
  感觉需要"SampleSet Normal, Additions Soft"的部分
  00:10:716 (3) - 00:13:960 (3) - 00:17:203 (3) - 00:20:446 (3) - 00:23:689 (3) - 00:26:933 (3) - 00:28:554 (6) - 00:30:176 (3) - 00:31:797 (7) - 00:35:041 (1) - 01:04:230 (2) - 01:07:473 (1) - 01:12:338 (5) - 01:13:959 (2) - 01:17:203 (2) - 01:20:446 (1) - 01:22:068 (2) - 01:23:689 (3) - 01:28:554 (3) - 01:30:176 (5) - 01:33:419 (1) - 01:35:041 (1) - 01:36:662 (1) - 01:38:284 (5) - 01:39:905 (1) - 01:41:527 (3) - 01:43:149 (7) - 01:44:770 (5) - 01:46:392 (3) - 01:48:014 (5) - 01:49:635 (1) - 01:51:257 (6)
  感觉需要"Additions drum + whistle"的部分
  00:36:662 (2) - 00:38:284 (4) - 00:39:905 (3) - 00:41:527 (1) - 00:43:149 (2) - 00:44:770 (5) - 00:46:392 (8) - 00:48:014 (4) - 00:49:635 (3) - 00:51:257 (7) - 00:52:878 (5) - 00:54:500 (1) - 00:56:122 (4) - 00:57:743 (5) - 00:59:365 (3)
  00:09:906 (1) - 加finish
  00:09:906 (1) - ^
  00:21:257 (2) - 头clap
  00:29:365 (1) - 加finish
  00:47:608 (3) - 尾clap ; 00:48:014 (4) - 尾 additions drum+clap ; 00:48:419 (5) - 尾 additions drum+clap
  01:00:176 (1) - 头additions drum+finish
  01:00:581 (2) - 头additions drum+clap
  01:13:757 (1,2) - additions drum+clap
  01:26:527 (1) - additions drum+clap
  01:33:014 (6) - 尾clap
  01:43:960 (2) - 头clap
  01:48:824 (8) - clap
  01:52:676 (4,5) - 头clap
  01:53:284 (5) - 尾去clap
  01:45:987 (2) - 尾clap
  01:46:797 (1) - clap

音效留下来慢慢改

[Normal]

• 00:56:527 (4,5) - blanket 感觉5的尾巴和4的尾巴一条直线比较好看
  01:00:986 (1,2) - blanket 我试过 不好看
  01:50:243 (5) - 调的更美观些 fixed
  01:52:878 (3,4) - blanket fixed

[Easy]

• 
  00:13:149 (3) - nc
  00:19:635 (3) - ^
  00:42:338 (2,3) - blanket 什么 难道不是blanket?
  00:45:581 (1) - nc
  00:53:689 (3,1) - distance
  01:05:851 (2,2) - 尝试头重叠下
  01:11:527 (4) - nc
  01:24:601 (1) - 转圈移后1/4且缩短1/4
  01:36:662 (3) - nc
  01:43:959 (4) - ^

all fixed
音效参考hard
好听
rank it~