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Blue: Things I really like
Green: Things I like, but might want you to change if it seems unfitting
Black: Suggestions
Purple: Things I think you should change, but you don't need to.
Orange: Things I think are important to change, and if you don't, I WANT TO KNOW WHY.
Red: Unrankable things, or things that you must change.
GeneralDifficulty settings seem to be making a pattern but they're not, you should either accomodate for Ozzy's mod by making the settings:
Kantan: HP/OD 3
Futsuu: HP/OD 4
Muzukashii: HP/OD 5
Oni: HP/OD 6
or you could lower all those values by one to accomodate for the current Oni diff settings of 5/5.
01:28:320 -
Kiai Time end isn't snapped, this needs to be fixed!Also,
THERE ARE TWO I'S IN MUZUKASHII. GET IT CORRECT!Kantan00:16:162 (12) - I think you should change this to a kat purely for consistency with the song and the other notes.
00:24:562 (21) - This seems to fit better as a spinner, and as Ozzy said, the drum rolls are really fast.
00:35:962 (29) - Like the first suggestion, change to a kat for consistency.
01:24:754 (95) - 01:28:318 (100) - Like the other spinner suggestion.
01:10:688 - 01:28:318 -
There's quite a bit of imbalance here as there are some segments which are pretty dense for a Kantan and there's some segments that aren't so dense. I would recommend balancing the notes if possible.01:33:070 (106) - This seems like it should be a kat, again, consistency.
01:55:727 (141) - This slider seems better as a spinner, exact same reason as before.
02:04:649 (149) - This should be a kat I think, because the singer's pitch increases here.
02:07:619 - 02:17:171 -
You couldn't have mapped this part of the song even a bit? There's certainly room for at least 15 notes here.02:19:571 (3) -
This desperately calls for a kat, since the pitch is quite high, and needs that bit of emphasis.02:21:971 (6) - Slider -> Spinner, need I explain why?
02:25:571 (8) -
I like this slider, because it fits with the fluctuation of the instruments, but maybe other modders might want you to make it a spinner.02:33:806 (23) - Make this a kat, since this note has some emphasis behind it.
02:40:825 (37) -
Um, is it only me or is this slider bugged to hell and back? 02:45:601 (42) - Slider -> spinner, as usual...because it fits with the music, blablabla.
02:50:360 (45) - ^
02:52:740 - 03:07:018 -
I think you should map this bit as well for consistency between diffs, this just doesn't seem right I think this Kantan really needs attention to become something great. Keep getting mods and you'll get a great mapset!
Futsuu00:08:062 (9) -
This extra note here seems awkward, move it to 00:08:362 - or add a note at that point. If you follow the latter, remove 00:09:862 (14) - 00:11:662 (19) - This seems like it should be a kat for consistency with the song.
00:14:362 -
Seems like there should be a note here since it's an audible part of the song.00:27:112 (59,60) -
This really seems like it should be moved half a beat forward, because this is really awkward for a Futsuu, even if it fits.00:28:762 -
I would like to see a note here, 'cause it really would fit here.00:36:262 (81,82) -
To maintain flow, move these half a beat forward, then remove some notes in this pattern: 00:37:162 (83,84,85,86,87,88,89) - 00:44:362 -
Add a note here to maintain flow with the music!00:50:362 (117) - Move this one beat back, because it fits with the music better!
00:50:662 - Add a note here, it fits well.
00:52:162 -
Audible beat here, place a note!00:55:762 - ^
00:57:112 (134) -
Kind of awkward for a Futsuu, move back to the downbeat.00:58:162 -
What up with the gap here?00:59:362 -
Again, what up with the gap?01:10:688 - 01:28:318 -
This part's really good, you should learn from this part and try to influence it to make a brilliant lowdiff.01:37:674 (23,24) -
Eh...it fits but it just seems out of place in a Futsuu...try moving them a half-beat back?02:01:382 - Maybe you could place a note here to fit with the song.
02:43:063 (90,91) -
These should be moved half a beat forward to fit with the song and to make the pattern more fun to play.02:44:108 (1) -
End this spinner one beat earlier, it just sounds much better. Also add a note where the spinner originally ended.I dislike the start of this Futsuu but I really really like the second half, it seems as if it was made by a different person
Muzukashii00:16:612 (55) - Maybe you could remove this note.
00:19:312 (70) - ^
00:41:362 (187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201) -
This pattern's kinda long for a Muzu, remove 190, 194 and 198.00:45:412 (210) - Remove this, this doesn't fit IMO.
00:46:612 (216,217) - Maybe move these two notes back half a beat?
01:50:652 - I would say you should add a kat here.
02:45:749 (175) - Maybe you could remove this.
02:46:615 (178,179) -
This is stupid and unnecessary, remove 178 ASAP. Not a bad Muzukashii, but it's kinda hard ;~; also that unrankable thing, fix it now.
Oni00:23:962 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - This might be better as a ddkkddkkd pattern.
01:06:187 - Add a note here to get the swingy feel of this section of the song!
01:15:591 (471) -
I would recommend removing this note, it doesn't seem to fit.01:41:100 - 01:41:249 - Maybe add notes here?
01:50:652 - ^
02:25:865 (884) - A d seems to fit more in this scenario!
03:06:572 - Maybe you could add a note here!
Nice Oni
The lowdiffs need some work, try getting help from people who are knowledgeable on the Kantan/Futsuu diffs.