This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercoledì 4 settembre 2013 at 12:49:10

Artist: Labyrinth Of Touhou OST
Title: Eientei Battle (1st Ver.)
Source: Labyrinth Of Touhou
Tags: 東方の迷宮
BPM: 150
Filesize: 2585kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:

1. 2012's Insane (4,77 stars, 294 notes)
2. Harder (4,45 stars, 128 notes)
3. Normal (4,22 stars, 115 notes)
4. Phoenix (4,94 stars, 306 notes)

Download: Labyrinth Of Touhou OST - Eientei Battle (1st Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd beatmap.
I hope, this time, this beatmap will be ranked.
Normal:100% (Complete but need more modding)
Harder:100% (Complete but need more modding)
2012's Insane:100% (Complete but need more modding)
Phoenix:100%(Complete but need more modding)
Thanks for modding but i need more modding from more people ;_;
Thanks to Mastercraft2012 for his guest diff.
Added Hitsouds on=Normal,Harder,2012's Insane and Phoenix
(Sorry for my english. Is very bad :C)

BPM e offset sono sbagliati
il bpm giusto e' 150,00
un offset decente e' 00:00:827
tempo 4/4

Dovrai resnappare tutto dopo aver fatto queste modifiche, inherited compresi (le stanghette verdi sulla timeline)

Sephibro wrote:

BPM e offset sono sbagliati
il bpm giusto e' 150,00
un offset decente e' 00:00:827
tempo 4/4

Dovrai resnappare tutto dopo aver fatto queste modifiche, uninherited compresi (le stanghette verdi sulla timeline)

Done.

Oddio *si sgranchisce le dita* cerco di limitare all'essenziale xD

[Phoenix]

Ingrandisci di 1 le note

Questo ritmo in Generale su questa musica ci sta meglio, vedi tu se sistemare tutto:


00:05:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Muovili tutti di 1/4 indietro falli partire dal tick bianco
00:19:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Unrankabile, fallo 1/4
00:21:527 (1,2) - Muovi tutto in 00:21:427
00:22:927 (3,4) - Idem sposta sul bianco
00:24:727 (5,6,7,8,9) - Sposta indietro di 1/4
00:31:927 (7,8) - Sposta in 00:32:027
00:21:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In tutta questa parte usa anche slider, è vuota
00:32:727 (1) - Muovi di 1/4 avanti
00:34:427 (5,6,7) - ^
00:35:927 (1,2,3) - ^
00:37:527 (5,6,7) - ^
00:48:127 (4,5) - Tutte queste pause piccole non ci stanno bene
00:57:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Idem per prima
00:59:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Tutto 1/4 avanti
01:11:127 (1,2,3) -^
01:13:527 (3) - Fallo finire 1/4 prima
01:15:127 (7) - ^
01:36:427 (1) - Fallo finire su un tick bianco

C'è un bel po da sistemare, cerca di ricontrollarti un po lo spacing ^^

[2012's progressive impossible (lungo 40000 caratteri)]

1 - Accorcia il nome della diff owo

2 - la moddo per curiosità xD

00:04:627 (2) - è difficile capire che tutti gli slider per questo suono di chitarra partono dal tick rosso? (posta di 1/4 indietro tutti gli slider così)
00:37:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Che è questo? D:

Ci sono momenti della musica vuoti lol tipo: 00:59:827 - 01:10:427

Cerca di variare il ritmo vedo solo stream e qualche slider owo


[Hard]

Diminuisci la slider velocity e anche di molto lol

Hi, Totoro le Pacha from #modreqs. Let's begin o/

[GENERAL]

1. You should really add whistles and claps on all your maps. Your maps more... monotonous, without them.
2. And put the Grid Level to 3 or 4.

[NORMAL]

1. 00:06:927 (5) - This slider placement is weird, move him a little before, on 00:06:827 (5) like here http://puu.sh/4bueX.jpg
2. 00:18:627 (7,8) - I don't see why those two are here, I doesn't go with the music. But I don't see what we could add here xD Try to add a slider like this ? http://puu.sh/4buTN.jpg
3. 00:32:827 (1,4,1,1,4,7) - Those sliders don't end at the right time. Make them finish 100ms earlier, like this : http://puu.sh/4bv6U.jpg
   
   And I see this map isn't finished. You must map the rest

[HARD]
You should really recheck your Slider Velocity. It's way to quick for an Hard

1. From 00:00:827 (1) to 00:05:327 (2) : You MUST recheck this part, because the rhythm isn't the one of the music. Listen to it, you'll see, your ears will be bleeding.
2. 00:06:927 (7) : Put this slider to 00:06:827 .
3. I must admit that the rhythm of the music is VERY weird. It's why since 00:07:327 (8) , put the beat snap divisor to 1/8, and do like this : http://puu.sh/4bwli.jpg from 00:07:327 (8) to 00:18:427 (3)
   
   Be right back to 1/4 Snap divisor : ]
   
4. 00:38:327 (4,5,6,7) : Put them a divisor on the left : http://puu.sh/4bwIN.jpg
5. 00:42:427 : A part missing ?
6. 00:45:227 (5) - This slider is badly snapped. Make it like this : http://puu.sh/4bwW0.jpg
7. 00:46:927 (3) - Move it to 00:47:027 .
8. 00:48:527 (5) - Move it to 00:48:427
9. 01:12:227 (2) - Here 01:12:427
10. 01:12:527 (3) - Here 01:12:627
11. 01:13:927 (5) - Here 01:14:027
12. 01:14:127 (6) - Here 01:14:227
13. 01:11:127 (1) - Make it a divisor longer
14. 01:12:827 (4) - ^
15. 01:14:427 (1) - ^
16. 01:15:527 (2,3) - A divisor on the right
17. 01:16:727 (5,6,7,8) - A divisor on the left
18. 01:17:627 (1) - A divisor longer
19. 01:19:227 (4) - ^
20. 01:20:827 - Another missing part
    

Good luck for ranking this very good music ! :]

Thanks guys you are very helpful ^^ but i must edit the map tomorrow because i shutdown my pc :c (i write this from my mobilephone lel)

Ci sono momenti della musica vuoti lol tipo: 00:59:827 - 01:10:427 (pizza kun) Quelli ci sono apposta, è una drain zone.

M4M.

[General]
Remove the capital o in Of.
Add in the tags: 東方の迷宮.
The bitrate of your MP3 file is higher than 192kbp/s. Try this one: http://puu.sh/4hrbf.mp3
Each map need a preview point. At 00:07:227 , do Timing-->Set Current Position as Preview Point.
Start the first kiai time at 00:07:227 to 00:20:027 . The second at 00:45:627 to 00:58:427 .

[Normal]
00:04:027 (5) - Stack the end of the trail with the head of 00:02:427 (3) ?
00:05:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not sure if it's right for normal. Try to change it.
00:07:227 (6) - Add new combo.
00:08:627 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move them at one tick before. Like start it at 00:08:527 .
00:39:027 (9) - Remove it. It isn't for normal.
00:44:027 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like 00:05:627 (1,2,3,4,5) .
00:47:027 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Move them at one tick before.
01:17:427 (8) - Remove it.
01:22:427 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like 00:44:027 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:05:627 (1,2,3,4,5) .
01:25:427 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move them at one tick before.

You should recheck the map and use the distance snap.

[Harder]
00:01:827 (2) - x:272 y:96.
00:03:427 (5) - x:300 y:320.

Generally, recheck all of your map. It's not kind of well done. Try to watch some ranked to see where they put the notes.

Good Luck! and star for fun.

Phoenix

00:02:227 (4) - sposta questa sul tick rosso
00:03:827 (8) - ^
00:05:627 (1,2,3,4) - potresti spostare 2 e 4 sul tick rosso e creare una stream che parte dal 5
00:20:027 (7) - dopo questo beat potresti cercare di seguire di più la musica e riempire quel pezzo (è abbastanza noioso da giocare)
00:44:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) -
seleziona tutto questo e sposta sul tick blu (ti basta selezionare e far coincidere il primo slide col tick blu)
00:58:427 (7) - stessa cosa di prima , dopo questo punto c'è il vuoto
01:24:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
stessa cosa del punto precedente
01:36:027 (10,11,1) - sposta il 10 alla fine dello slide , sposta l'11 sul tick rosso e lo slide su quello bianco

Harder

In generale dovresti abbassare un po la sv e ricontrollare lo spacing in alcuni punti
Anche gli slide del primo kiai devono partire sul tick bianco con negli altri due kiai

00:14:827 (1,2) - siccome è una hard eviterei di mettere i beat nascosti dagli slide
01:15:627 (2,3) - anche qui li allontanerei dalla fine dello slide visto che potrebbero confondere

Scusa per la mod un po' carente , spero di essere stato comunque utile

m4m from your modding queue :3

Sadly, this set isn't going to be rankable in current state I'll try to give advice instead.

Normal
Normal is a difficulty for beginner players, so it shouldn't use blue ticks, and definitely not slowdowns, the timing is just too confusing for a weak player. You're trying to follow the melody really close, but in a Normal it's usually a better idea to stick to the beat.
Another thing about Normals is spacing, for a difficulty this low you should *always* have Distance Snap on. It makes it way easier to get a smooth, flowing beatmap. Also don't experiment with slider shapes at first, a map with just 3-point curves and some straight lines can be enjoyable too. Don't forget that spinners are musical elements too, and they should start and end on a sound in music.

Examples:
00:00:827 (1) - All the sliders in the intro would be better if they ended at the red tick (1 tick earlier)
00:06:827 (5) - The slowdown is completely unexpected and unreadable by a beginning player
00:07:327 (6) - All sliders in this part should start on a white tick

Harder
Timing is sometimes confusing here too, try to have circles and sliders mainly on white and blue ticks in a Hard. Distance Snap is recommended in Hards too. Slider Velocity is a little high for the difficulty level, and it shouldn't change this much.

Examples:
00:01:827 (2,3,4) - Spacing between those 3 objects is the same, while the 3rd one is much later
00:07:327 (7) - Those sliders should start on a white tick too, right now the repeat is unsnapped (not on any tick)
00:19:127 (1) - Spinner should end on the white tick
00:37:627 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is good, but confusing. The first time it happens those four circles should be a slider instead so player remembers what's going on and clicks circles right over here 01:16:027 (4,5,6,7,8)

2012's Insane
This diff's timing is more intutive, but it's held back by very low spacing - the map would actually be easier if circles were further apart. It's a little overmapped though, most of the streams don't really fit the music.

Examples:
00:15:527 (2,3,4) - Those objects are really close together and it's hard to even see the approach circles
00:21:427 (1,2) - This part has too little objects, you should follow the drums when there's no riff
00:34:427 (1,2) - There's no stream in music here

Phoenix
This difficulty is the most intuitive in the set, but it would still use consistent spacing in most places. Slower parts suffer from sliders ending at blue ticks, it doesn't play very nice.

Examples:
00:02:127 (4) - There's nothing in music here
00:07:227 - You should put a circle here
00:19:127 (1,2,3,4,5) - It feels strange to finish a stream on a blue tick, you should either make it longer or have a slider after it

Final words
You definitely have potential - the map is timed right and you follow music in the map, so there's a sense of rhythm; the only thing left is learning rules of osu mapping to make it fun for players. Everyone's first maps weren't great, some only got their 10th or even 15th map ranked.
I recommend opening recent ranked maps in the editor and studying how they're made, there's some useful articles in the osu!wiki too. You can also join #modhelp and ask us for a quick opinion on a small part (for example, post a screenshot with shift-f12).

Good luck in your future osu career ^_^

this song's rhythm is so strange.its difficult to set notes i guess,

about all the diff,BPM is 150.022 offset is 71 maybe more suitful

Nomal
you should fix all of this first http://puu.sh/4jfgW.png you can open DS here http://puu.sh/4jfkl.jpg to remove all note to fix it ,for easy and nomal diff,its important,

i will post the others soon, i have to study now,(just give me ONE KD )

NORMAL

00:07:227 (1,2) - I would recommend that you leave a longer distance between these 2 notes
00:08:827 (1,2) - ^
00:10:427 (3,4) - ^
00:12:027 (5,6) - ^
00:13:627 (1,2) - ^
00:15:227 (3,4) - ^
00:16:827 (5,6) - ^
00:10:427 (3) - New Combo
00:12:027 (5) - New Combo
00:15:227 (3) - New Combo
00:16:827 (5) - New Combo
00:19:027 (1) - start 00:19:027 end 00:20:027
00:34:427 (4) - place it as high as 00:34:027 (2,3) -
00:56:827 (2) - should end at 00:57:227
00:57:527 (1) - start at 00:57:427 end at 00:58:427
make a longer distance between 01:12:427 (2,3) and 01:12:827 (4)
make a longer distance between 01:12:827 (4) and 01:14:027 (5,6)
make a longer distance between 01:12:427 (2,3) and 01:12:827 (4)
01:12:827 (4) - New Combo
01:14:427 (7) - New Combo
make a longer distance between 01:17:627 (1) and 01:18:827 (2,3)
01:19:227 (4) - New Combo
make a longer distance between 01:19:227 (4) and 01:20:427 (5,6)
01:20:827 (7) - New Combo
01:20:827 (7) - place it as high as 01:19:227 (4)
make a longer distance between 01:20:827 (7) and 01:22:027 (8,9)

PHOENIX

00:45:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - select them then press 2 times K and the rythm fits with your notes

01:24:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same, select and press 2 times K

Good Luck

ehh.hear is my foilow post here,

harder

00:07:227 - your second SV is 1.8,its a little bit too high especially your first SV is 0.5,maybe here 1.3 or 1.2 is more suitble.
00:18:227 (3,4) - too close,if you dont want to remove 00:18:627 (4,5) - ,maybe you should 00:18:627 (4) - NC
00:37:627 (3,4) - too far,cant be read out in the first time ,maybe this http://puu.sh/4kY1P.jpg
00:45:527 - ^
00:38:927 (7) - change to became a slider end at 00:39:027 -
01:17:327 (8) - ^
00:45:527 - this SV is too high to~
01:23:927 - ^


2012

00:38:727 (5,6) - too far
01:35:527 (2,1) - too close
about this diff i dont know how to mod ,its a totally different style of mine


pho

00:18:527 (9) - NC
00:07:327 (13) - ^
00:08:927 (6) - ^
00:12:127 (9) - ^
00:13:727 (4) - ^
00:08:227 (1) - dont NC
00:12:127 (9) - ^
00:33:527 (4) - end at 00:34:027 -
00:34:427 (5) - NC and more far away from 00:33:527 (4) - or 00:34:227 - add note make it became a suitble transition
00:35:127 (9) - end at 00:35:627 - if you want just change like ^
00:36:727 (4) - ^

LZCSC wrote:

ehh.hear is my foilow post here,

harder

00:07:227 - your second SV is 1.8,its a little bit too high especially your first SV is 0.5,maybe here 1.3 or 1.2 is more suitble.
00:18:227 (3,4) - too close,if you dont want to remove 00:18:627 (4,5) - ,maybe you should 00:18:627 (4) - NC
00:37:627 (3,4) - too far,cant be read out in the first time ,maybe this http://puu.sh/4kY1P.jpg
00:45:527 - ^
00:38:927 (7) - change to became a slider end at 00:39:027 -
01:17:327 (8) - ^
00:45:527 - this SV is too high to~
01:23:927 - ^


2012

00:38:727 (5,6) - too far
01:35:527 (2,1) - too close
about this diff i dont know how to mod ,its a totally different style of mine


pho

00:18:527 (9) - NC
00:07:327 (13) - ^
00:08:927 (6) - ^
00:12:127 (9) - ^
00:13:727 (4) - ^
00:08:227 (1) - dont NC
00:12:127 (9) - ^
00:33:527 (4) - end at 00:34:027 -
00:34:427 (5) - NC and more far away from 00:33:527 (4) - or 00:34:227 - add note make it became a suitble transition
00:35:127 (9) - end at 00:35:627 - if you want just change like ^
00:36:727 (4) - ^

Bonch0 wrote:

NORMAL

00:07:227 (1,2) - I would recommend that you leave a longer distance between these 2 notes
00:08:827 (1,2) - ^
00:10:427 (3,4) - ^
00:12:027 (5,6) - ^
00:13:627 (1,2) - ^
00:15:227 (3,4) - ^
00:16:827 (5,6) - ^
00:10:427 (3) - New Combo
00:12:027 (5) - New Combo
00:15:227 (3) - New Combo
00:16:827 (5) - New Combo
00:19:027 (1) - start 00:19:027 end 00:20:027
00:34:427 (4) - place it as high as 00:34:027 (2,3) -
00:56:827 (2) - should end at 00:57:227
00:57:527 (1) - start at 00:57:427 end at 00:58:427
make a longer distance between 01:12:427 (2,3) and 01:12:827 (4)
make a longer distance between 01:12:827 (4) and 01:14:027 (5,6)
make a longer distance between 01:12:427 (2,3) and 01:12:827 (4)
01:12:827 (4) - New Combo
01:14:427 (7) - New Combo
make a longer distance between 01:17:627 (1) and 01:18:827 (2,3)
01:19:227 (4) - New Combo
make a longer distance between 01:19:227 (4) and 01:20:427 (5,6)
01:20:827 (7) - New Combo
01:20:827 (7) - place it as high as 01:19:227 (4)
make a longer distance between 01:20:827 (7) and 01:22:027 (8,9)

PHOENIX

00:45:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - select them then press 2 times K and the rythm fits with your notes

01:24:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same, select and press 2 times K

Good Luck

I'm working on this. Thanks for modding

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