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Galileo Galilei - Circle Game (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Oyatsu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Fycho
:oops:
mintong89
:)
Topic Starter
Oyatsu
8-)

EDIT: Ok Done~ Complete 3 diffs I made in 2 days. The best of mine. Wait Gero's Normal :D
sheela
M4M from your queue.

[Easy]
00:00:990 (1) - Ctrl+J?
00:56:111 - Add note here?
01:07:819 (4) - NC?

[Hard]
00:08:307 (8) - NC?
00:46:355 (3,4) - The end the 00:46:355 (3) and the head 00:46:965 (4), when I hear it, it doesn't fit with the music. Change it.

[Insane]
01:16:843 (4,1) - It pops in my head. 01:16:843 (4) - Prev: 0.38x 01:17:087 (1) - Prev: 1.05x so the distance won't be confuse. Although, it's insane, so.

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

sheela901 wrote:

M4M from your queue.

[Easy]
00:00:990 (1) - Ctrl+J? :arrow: ok
00:56:111 - Add note here? :arrow: If you are a newbie. Can you play it? baka ><
01:07:819 (4) - NC? :arrow: I don't like 1 color only 2 notes ><

[Hard]
00:08:307 (8) - NC? :arrow: Not
00:46:355 (3,4) - The end the 00:46:355 (3) and the head 00:46:965 (4), when I hear it, it doesn't fit with the music. Change it. :arrow: Fixed my own

[Insane]
01:16:843 (4,1) - It pops in my head. 01:16:843 (4) - Prev: 0.38x 01:17:087 (1) - Prev: 1.05x so the distance won't be confuse. Although, it's insane, so. :arrow: I don't understand this. What's this? >:(

Good Luck!
FreeSongs
M4M from your queue

nice map, star~

[Easy]
add a circle at 00:12:209 - or move 00:10:258 (3,4) - 1/2 beats later and add a circle at 00:10:258 -
add a circle at 00:41:477 - or remove the circle 00:43:429 (3) -
01:00:502 (2) - change into a slider end at 01:00:989 - or add a circle at 01:00:989 -

[Hard]
00:55:136 (7) - finish?
New combo
00:06:843 (5) - NC
00:28:307 (1) - remove NC
00:28:794 (2) - NC
00:54:648 (6) - NC?
01:10:258 (5) - NC?

[Insane]
00:55:136 (7) - finish?
New combo
00:12:209 (9) - NC?
00:12:697 (2) - remove NC?
00:13:672 (1) - NC?
00:29:770 (1) - NC
00:54:648 (6) - NC?
01:03:185 (2) - NC?
01:10:258 (6) - NC?
01:16:599 (1) - NC
01:17:087 (1) - remove NC

sorry for the bad mod :(
hope this helps! :)
NavyYa
Hello~ M4M
Sorry for my Bad English.. :(

Easy

00:02:941 (3) ,00:04:892 (1) - opposite slider curve? will be great

00:56:111 - add note

Hard

My suggestion.. delete 00:24:038 (6) - and

stack 00:24:160 (7,8) on 00:24:404 (1) ~

how about 01:10:989 (7,8) << these notes??

Insane
00:19:282 (3) - move to 00:19:526 - and add note on 00:19:282,
finally delete 00:20:014 (4) ~

That's it~
I think don't need my mod.. great map :)

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Oyatsu
FreeSongs
M4M from your queue

nice map, star~

[Easy]
add a circle at 00:12:209 - or move 00:10:258 (3,4) - 1/2 beats later and add a circle at 00:10:258 - :arrow: I'm makking as vocal. Also creat a break for newbie
http://puu.sh/3WWV2[/img]
add a circle at 00:41:477 - or remove the circle 00:43:429 (3) - :arrow: I prefer of mine ><
01:00:502 (2) - change into a slider end at 01:00:989 - or add a circle at 01:00:989 - :arrow: I think mine is fine

[Hard]
00:55:136 (7) - finish? :arrow: ok
00:06:843 (5) - NC :arrow: ah yea ><
00:28:307 (1) - remove NC :arrow: nope
00:28:794 (2) - NC :arrow: ^
00:54:648 (6) - NC? :arrow: In a pattern Use NC is ugly
01:10:258 (5) - NC? :arrow: ^

[Insane]
00:55:136 (7) - finish? :arrow: if other modders say this. I will fix
00:12:209 (9) - NC? :arrow: ugly
00:12:697 (2) - remove NC? :arrow: nope
00:13:672 (1) - NC? :arrow: ok
00:29:770 (1) - NC :arrow: nope
00:54:648 (6) - NC? :arrow: nope
01:03:185 (2) - NC? :arrow: crazy >:(
01:10:258 (6) - NC? :arrow: nope
01:16:599 (1) - NC :arrow: sorry I think mine is fine
01:17:087 (1) - remove NC :arrow: ^

sorry for the bad mod :(
hope this helps! :)




Navy
Hello~ M4M
Sorry for my Bad English.. :(

Easy

00:02:941 (3) ,00:04:892 (1) - opposite slider curve? will be great :arrow: ok fixed

00:56:111 - add note :arrow: Again If you are a newbie. Can you play it?

Hard

My suggestion.. delete 00:24:038 (6) - and

stack 00:24:160 (7,8) on 00:24:404 (1) ~

how about 01:10:989 (7,8) << these notes??
:arrow: I don't understand this :o
Insane
00:19:282 (3) - move to 00:19:526 - and add note on 00:19:282,
finally delete 00:20:014 (4) ~
:arrow: Maybe you don't hear instrument. Let try to hear careful
That's it~
I think don't need my mod.. great map :)

Good Luck!
OK. Thank all guys help me. Thank you~
xChippy
Hi~ =w=/
In-game M4M

[Insane]
You could make this even more interesting by putting circles at these kind of places:
01:12:087
01:14:038
So at places where the drum is but it's up to you :3 (btw not all are mentioned there^)
00:10:746 (1) - NC
[]
00:19:282 (3) - IMO this doesn't fit the music, also plays weird
My suggestion:
00:19:038 (2) - Instead of circle 1/2 slider
Than add circles here:
00:19:526
00:19:770
Picture if you need~ (Look only rythm) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920095
[]
00:21:233 (3) - Maybe something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920097 looks prettier
00:32:209 (1,2) - Blanket is off here move (1) end point a little down
00:34:160 (1) - Add whistle head
00:39:038 (1) - Maybe add NC music changes
00:55:136 (7) - err I hear cymbal hear soo add finish here
01:12:209 (4,6) - Look closely they are different =w=, soo make them the same :3
01:17:087 (1) - Remove finish and add whistle, also because you have it here 01:01:233 (1) - These parts are the same
01:20:502 (3) - nazi center it

[Hard]
00:10:502 (1) - At the moment it looks kinda weird you should move the end point a little to left so it spreads nicely :3
00:12:453 (5) - NC should be here and not here 00:13:185 (1) -
00:20:014 (4) - add clap at head
00:33:429 (4) - sounds weird o-o make 1/2 slider instead + add a circle
00:34:648 (1) - add clap
00:38:063 (5) - NC should be here not here 00:38:794 (1) -
00:40:989 (4) - add whistle at head
00:42:941 (4) - ^
00:43:916 (1) - Change Finish to whistle, you have it in Insane too, also I don't know why finish o-o
00:59:526 (5) - NC and remove NC here 01:00:014 (1) - you have it here like this too 01:15:136 (1) -
01:05:380 (1) - Same about the finish as mentioned before
01:10:746 (6) - add whistle

[Easy]
The claps in the first verse are a bit weird I dont know why you put on stanza where there is no clap at all o-o Consider removing them imo really doesn't fit
00:02:453 (2) - Nazi =w= baka knows distance is 1.10 here =w=?
01:00:989 (3) - You should add note here feels really awkward without it
[]
01:06:599 (3) - This play weird my suggestion:
01:06:599 (3) - Remove this
01:05:380 (2) - Add repeat
01:07:331 - add note here + NC
Picture if you need it (Look only rythm)~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920204
[]
01:13:672 (4) - remove NC and add NC here 01:15:136 (5) -
Thats all =w=/
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

xChippy wrote:

Hi~ =w=/
In-game M4M

[Insane]
You could make this even more interesting by putting circles at these kind of places:
01:12:087
01:14:038
So at places where the drum is but it's up to you :3 (btw not all are mentioned there^)
00:10:746 (1) - NC
[]
00:19:282 (3) - IMO this doesn't fit the music, also plays weird
My suggestion:
00:19:038 (2) - Instead of circle 1/2 slider
Than add circles here:
00:19:526
00:19:770
Picture if you need~ (Look only rythm) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920095
[]
00:21:233 (3) - Maybe something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920097 looks prettier
00:32:209 (1,2) - Blanket is off here move (1) end point a little down
00:34:160 (1) - Add whistle head
00:39:038 (1) - Maybe add NC music changes
00:55:136 (7) - err I hear cymbal hear soo add finish here
01:12:209 (4,6) - Look closely they are different =w=, soo make them the same :3
01:17:087 (1) - Remove finish and add whistle, also because you have it here 01:01:233 (1) - These parts are the same
01:20:502 (3) - nazi center it

[Hard]
00:10:502 (1) - At the moment it looks kinda weird you should move the end point a little to left so it spreads nicely :3
00:12:453 (5) - NC should be here and not here 00:13:185 (1) -
00:20:014 (4) - add clap at head
00:33:429 (4) - sounds weird o-o make 1/2 slider instead + add a circle
00:34:648 (1) - add clap
00:38:063 (5) - NC should be here not here 00:38:794 (1) -
00:40:989 (4) - add whistle at head
00:42:941 (4) - ^
00:43:916 (1) - Change Finish to whistle, you have it in Insane too, also I don't know why finish o-o
00:59:526 (5) - NC and remove NC here 01:00:014 (1) - you have it here like this too 01:15:136 (1) -
01:05:380 (1) - Same about the finish as mentioned before
01:10:746 (6) - add whistle

[Easy]
The claps in the first verse are a bit weird I dont know why you put on stanza where there is no clap at all o-o Consider removing them imo really doesn't fit
00:02:453 (2) - Nazi =w= baka knows distance is 1.10 here =w=?
01:00:989 (3) - You should add note here feels really awkward without it
[]
01:06:599 (3) - This play weird my suggestion:
01:06:599 (3) - Remove this
01:05:380 (2) - Add repeat
01:07:331 - add note here + NC
Picture if you need it (Look only rythm)~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/920204
[]
01:13:672 (4) - remove NC and add NC here 01:15:136 (5) -
Thats all =w=/
Good luck :3
Thank you for modding, Chippy-sama~. Lazy to reply mod but sure 80% fixed =w=
Gero
Oyatsu o3o/

Here my diff:
G's Normal
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Circle Game.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 53429
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 88307
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Circle Game (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:サークルゲーム (TV Size)
Artist:Galileo Galilei
ArtistUnicode:ガリレオガリレイ
Creator:Oyatsu
Version:Gero's Normal
Source:Ano Hi Mita Hana no Namae wo Bokutachi wa Mada Shiranai
Tags:Saakuru Geemu あの日見た花の名前を僕達はまだ知らない。 あの花 OVA movie
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png",0,0
Video,0,"Video.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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87819,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
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Combo2 : 239,239,239
Combo3 : 169,177,218
Combo4 : 162,206,147
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

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GL!
Topic Starter
Oyatsu
OK. Updated!
HabiHolic
From your reqs~

[Easy]

00:20:014 (4) - Clear or placed elsewhere, because not too confused considering the degree of difficulty are placed
00:43:429 (3) - Remove?
01:09:282 (1) - Remove NC
01:17:575 (1) - ^

[Gero's Normal]
HP -1

00:25:868 (3) - What round of changes to the slider?
00:27:819 (2) - This slider 00:27:331 (1) - After changing the lay side-by-side, like a slider why not?
00:38:063 (1) - Remove NC
00:51:233 (1) - ^
00:51:721 (2) - NC

[Hard]

00:04:404 (2,3) - Distance check
00:08:794 (1,3) - Parallel drop
00:30:258 (6) - Ctrl + G
01:26:477 (7) - Remove

[Insane]

no Pick~

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Oyatsu

HabiHolic wrote:

From your reqs~

[Easy]

00:20:014 (4) - Clear or placed elsewhere, because not too confused considering the degree of difficulty are placed :arrow: it is fine ><
00:43:429 (3) - Remove? :arrow: nope
01:09:282 (1) - Remove NC :arrow: ah yea
01:17:575 (1) - ^ :arrow: ok

[Hard]

00:04:404 (2,3) - Distance check :arrow: A jump
00:08:794 (1,3) - Parallel drop :arrow: My plan
00:30:258 (6) - Ctrl + G :arrow: ah yea
01:26:477 (7) - Remove :arrow: Make as instrument

[Insane]

no Pick~ :arrow: THank you =w=

Good Luck~
Thank you for modding, Habi :D
Gloria Guard
Hi. M4M

[General]

I think read-in time down 1.0~1.5 is better imo, 2.0 really long time


[Easy]

00:12:209 I think this part lyrics start rhythm here also this flow break really bad.
if you agree, add note please.
00:33:672 (2,3) This (2) slider end blanket for (3) slider.
00:41:477 hmm.. why not add note? and this flow break is really confuse, i think this part hear
drum sound here. Can you please add note?
01:09:282 (4) Here is not hear finish sound so slider head remove finish
01:24:892 (3) ^


[Gero's Normal]

I think tick rate 2 better imo.

00:27:331 (1,2,3) Well.. i think this pattern is not good imo. if you think this pattern change here
Can you use this pattern shape?
00:56:111 (1) I think this note spinner after far away imo. Can you move to center?
01:19:526 (2,3,4) I suggestion this pattern rhythm.


[Hard]

00:00:990 (1,2,3) I don't understand this part rhythm, where did you hear the rhythm?
i think you used an invalid rhythm, you change this rhythm
00:04:648 (2,3,1) why you used anti-jump here, it's really confuse imo
If you intended this really bad spacing, can you change this pattern spacing this?
00:07:575 (2,3) Why do you put a jump here? I want to know why and This is wrong to confuse the player jump.
You must decrease this jump spacing.
00:33:185 (3) hmm.. The rhythm of the slider is not accurate. well.. this slider remove and add two 1/2 slider
imo
00:39:282 (1,2,1) I don't understand why you use this spacing. If you intended please tell us why.
and i suggestion this spacing.
00:46:355 (3,4) This part 3/4 rhythm is unsuitable, i think this part rhythm 1/4 imo, so i suggestion this rhythm
00:47:819 (1) I'm not hear this part finish sound, remove finish
00:51:721 (1) ^
00:59:282 (4,1) please you don't use this note jump here. it's playing really confuse, you decrease this jump spacing
01:07:331 (1) slider head remove finish, i'm not hear this part finish sound.
01:09:282 (1) ^
01:10:258 (5) ^
01:20:989 (1) ^
01:24:892 (1) ^
01:25:868 (5) ^


[Insane]

01:07:331 (1) remove finish i'm not hear this part finish sound.
01:09:282 (2) ^
01:10:258 (6) ^
01:13:916 (2,3,4) hmm this pattern flow change?
01:15:624 (1,2) I think this two note spacing increase and jump pattern is better imo
01:18:063 (3) Slider end remove clap sound, i'm not hear clap sound here.
01:20:989 (1) remove finish
01:24:892 (2) ^
01:25:868 (6) ^
hoLysoup
hi~

[Insane]
00:30:258 (6) - NC here, you always NC on the big white tick until here
00:50:746 (3) - maybe move this a little lower? to create contrast, so it's not completely overlapped during game play
00:53:429 (1) - x:208, y:188 it makes this triangle pattern look cleaner
00:53:916 (3) - also this, x: 292, y: 244
00:59:526 (6) - NC here
01:02:453 (1) - remove NC, don't really need here
01:09:038 (1,3) - could move these two closer to each other so the triangle pattern looks better
01:15:624 (1,2,3) - I think this place is a bad place for antijumps. The music during kiai time which is also the chorus makes it feel like it's moving so big jumps here would be great.
01:24:648 (1,2,3,4,5) - here too, but these are just nazi things. I think it looks nicer for me anyway you don't have to change it
That's all~ just little things here


[Hard]
00:12:453 (1) - should remove nc and nc here instead 00:13:185 (2). with the current spacing and rhythm it feels much better
00:30:258 (6) - start nc here maybe
00:37:087 - why is this beat missing? it feels very strange. and there's a drum sound+vocals here too
01:10:014 (4,5) - I think ctrl+g is fantastic here. It sets up better spacing for the jump towards the next (1) beat and makes the jump flow better


[Normal]
00:51:233 (1,2) - switch NC
01:26:843 (3) - should remove finish on this beat. There's no strong finish or drum sound here in music so it should be quieter


[Easy]
Wow, this is a very nice easy diff. very very nice

:> finished
good luck for ranking!
map is quite nice overall
Topic Starter
Oyatsu
Gloria Guard
Hi. M4M

[General]

I think read-in time down 1.0~1.5 is better imo, 2.0 really long time


[Easy]

00:12:209 I think this part lyrics start rhythm here also this flow break really bad.
if you agree, add note please. :arrow: ok
00:33:672 (2,3) This (2) slider end blanket for (3) slider. :arrow: fixed
00:41:477 hmm.. why not add note? and this flow break is really confuse, i think this part hear
drum sound here. Can you please add note? :arrow: I make as vocal
01:09:282 (4) Here is not hear finish sound so slider head remove finish :arrow: ok
01:24:892 (3) ^ :arrow: ok


[Hard]

00:00:990 (1,2,3) I don't understand this part rhythm, where did you hear the rhythm? :arrow: oh yea ><
i think you used an invalid rhythm, you change this rhythm
00:04:648 (2,3,1) why you used anti-jump here, it's really confuse imo :arrow: ok
If you intended this really bad spacing, can you change this pattern spacing this?
00:07:575 (2,3) Why do you put a jump here? I want to know why and This is wrong to confuse the player jump. :arrow: I put jump because after them is a break. I see similar problem in other map. Decreased spacing
You must decrease this jump spacing.
00:33:185 (3) hmm.. The rhythm of the slider is not accurate. well.. this slider remove and add two 1/2 slider :arrow: I don't understand this @@
imo
00:39:282 (1,2,1) I don't understand why you use this spacing. If you intended please tell us why. :arrow: fixed my own
and i suggestion this spacing.
00:46:355 (3,4) This part 3/4 rhythm is unsuitable, i think this part rhythm 1/4 imo, so i suggestion this rhythm :arrow: nope
00:47:819 (1) I'm not hear this part finish sound, remove finish :arrow: but I hear >:(
00:51:721 (1) ^ :arrow: ok
00:59:282 (4,1) please you don't use this note jump here. it's playing really confuse, you decrease this jump spacing :arrow:
01:07:331 (1) slider head remove finish, i'm not hear this part finish sound. :arrow: I will consider
01:09:282 (1) ^
01:10:258 (5) ^
01:20:989 (1) ^
01:24:892 (1) ^
01:25:868 (5) ^


[Insane]

01:07:331 (1) remove finish i'm not hear this part finish sound. :arrow: ok
01:09:282 (2) ^ :arrow: ok
01:10:258 (6) ^ :arrow: ok
01:13:916 (2,3,4) hmm this pattern flow change? :arrow: fixed
01:15:624 (1,2) I think this two note spacing increase and jump pattern is better imo :arrow: ok
01:18:063 (3) Slider end remove clap sound, i'm not hear clap sound here. :arrow: oh yea
01:20:989 (1) remove finish :arrow: I want to similar with 01:19:038 (1) -
01:24:892 (2) ^ :arrow: ok
01:25:868 (6) ^ :arrow: ^

Thank you for mod. holysoup I will fix after, sorry i'm busy after I mod glogu

hoLysoup
hi~

[Insane]
00:30:258 (6) - NC here, you always NC on the big white tick until here :arrow: ok ><
00:50:746 (3) - maybe move this a little lower? to create contrast, so it's not completely overlapped during game play :arrow: I don't understand your mean but I think your mean is grid. idk, I fixed it ><
00:53:429 (1) - x:208, y:188 it makes this triangle pattern look cleaner :arrow: oh yea
00:53:916 (3) - also this, x: 292, y: 244 :arrow: fixed,too
00:59:526 (6) - NC here :arrow: ok, again ><
01:02:453 (1) - remove NC, don't really need here :arrow: ok
01:09:038 (1,3) - could move these two closer to each other so the triangle pattern looks better :arrow: i think they are fine :o
01:15:624 (1,2,3) - I think this place is a bad place for antijumps. The music during kiai time which is also the chorus makes it feel like it's moving so big jumps here would be great. :arrow: How must I fix? @@
01:24:648 (1,2,3,4,5) - here too, but these are just nazi things. I think it looks nicer for me anyway you don't have to change it :arrow: pattern I use many, you know sorry keep
That's all~ just little things here


[Hard]
00:12:453 (1) - should remove nc and nc here instead 00:13:185 (2). with the current spacing and rhythm it feels much better :arrow: oh yea
00:30:258 (6) - start nc here maybe :arrow: you right
00:37:087 - why is this beat missing? it feels very strange. and there's a drum sound+vocals here too :arrow: added
01:10:014 (4,5) - I think ctrl+g is fantastic here. It sets up better spacing for the jump towards the next (1) beat and makes the jump flow better :arrow: kk

[Easy]
Wow, this is a very nice easy diff. very very nice :arrow: Thank you =w=

:> finished
good luck for ranking!
map is quite nice overall
THanks for mod, holy. I will mod your map soon ><

@Gero: Plz fix mod before many thing changes :P
EDIT: @Gero updated~ :D
Gero
EDIT: 1,000 posts YEAH!

HabiHolic
From your reqs~

[Gero's Normal]
HP -1 no

00:25:868 (3) - What round of changes to the slider? i think is okay
00:27:819 (2) - This slider 00:27:331 (1) - After changing the lay side-by-side, like a slider why not? ^
00:38:063 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:51:233 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:51:721 (2) - NC Fixed

Gloria Guard
Hi. M4M

[Gero's Normal]

I think tick rate 2 better imo. nope o3o

00:27:331 (1,2,3) Well.. i think this pattern is not good imo. if you think this pattern change here Fixed
Can you use this pattern shape?
00:56:111 (1) I think this note spinner after far away imo. Can you move to center? Fixed
01:19:526 (2,3,4) I suggestion this pattern rhythm. no i don't like

hoLysoup
hi~

[Normal]
00:51:233 (1,2) - switch NC Fixed
01:26:843 (3) - should remove finish on this beat. There's no strong finish or drum sound here in music so it should be quieter i like this finish, no changes sorry


Here my updated~

G's Normal
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 53429
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Circle Game (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:サークルゲーム (TV Size)
Artist:Galileo Galilei
ArtistUnicode:ガリレオガリレイ
Creator:Oyatsu
Version:Gero's Normal
Source:Ano Hi Mita Hana no Namae wo Bokutachi wa Mada Shiranai
Tags:Saakuru Geemu あの日見た花の名前を僕達はまだ知らない。 あの花 OVA movie gero
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[Difficulty]
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364,324,69770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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467,242,74160,2,0,P|493:299|468:347,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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354,354,75135,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,283,75624,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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@Oyatsu: Sorry for delay but i'm very busy now with the school sorry :(
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