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WHITE ASH - Crowds (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Teru21

Erina wrote:

From my mod for voice queue!

I haven't watched this show, but according to you, it seems epic. Most of my friends said that the music from this show was amazing. I'll probably watch it soon.

Once again, I'm pretty new to modding, so I apologize for the bad mod. Feel free to treat everything below as suggestions. I'd also appreciate it if you could reply and tell me why you applied/did not applied some of my mods (so I can learn :) )

[Insane]
00:11:041 (1) - Move it to the right to align with 00:11:743 (3) sighhh okay =3=
00:12:445 (1) - If you followed ^, maybe have this slider start where 00:11:041 (1) was. nope ;; I'll just let it stack
00:14:988 (4) - This note doesn't seem to follow anything in the music. I guess it still works though.
00:21:918 (3) - Consider putting more curve into this slider so it's a bit more symmetrical to the slider before it lol it already symmetric .w.
00:24:199 (2,3) - I'm not a big fan of this jump, feels kind of hard to catch is why we called this insane
00:49:813 (3) - Consider moving this slider down a bit more so the straight edges on this slider and the slider before it match up better kk
00:53:146 (1,2,3,4) - Consider increasing the spacing here to prepare people for the increase in slider velocity well hey thats a nice idea OAO;;

[Hard]
00:01:414 (4) - I think moving this down a bit to align it in a straight line with the objects around it looks better well no ._. I think curvy better X')
00:12:445 (1,2,3) - This part feels kinda weird, the third slider doesn't seem to fit :? It might just be me though ;w;
00:15:076 (7) - Moving this slider under 00:14:550 (6) directly looks better in my opinion I don't think so ;w;
00:27:883 (4) - I'm not sure if this repeat slider fits if you're mapping the vocals here I'm following the drum .w.
00:53:497 (1,2,3) - You could consider making the spacing between these larger well okay =3=
00:55:076 (2) - This slider might be better if curved to kind of wrap around the end of the previous slider, I don't know what you call this method, but it looks nicer (http://puu.sh/6XSfO.jpg) that called blanket but meh sorry no =3= I like mine
01:01:567 (3) - Maybe ctrl+h this and then curve the end a bit to make it align directly with the next note doesn't make sense tho so no change

[Normal]
00:28:409 (1) - Remove NC nice
00:29:287 (2) - Add NC ^

[Easy]
00:20:866 (3) - It's just my personal tastes, but I'm not a big fan of this slider :o well? this one still need remodelled @A@;;
00:32:094 (1) - This slider looks a bit out of place - the design of it looks weird compared to the rest of your sliders fine ;; too much complain ;; ima make it S
00:32:094 (1) - Remove NC to keep consistent with 00:20:866 (3) kk
01:15:645 (1) - Maybe move this so its under the end of 01:12:795 (1), at around x:240, y:172 make it polygonal tho .w.

I really like this map! :) Hopefully my mod was somewhat helpful, I couldn't find much to fix because I thought the map is really good already.

Contact me later about what you're gonna sing! :D
Yay >w< Thanks ;; its halpful .w.)a;; X') .w.)/
TKS
i love the WHITE ASH!!

[ Oni]
  1. 00:00:190 (1) - no finisher here. the notes is the same sound as 00:00:714 (2) - so you should prioritize integrity.
  2. 00:10:953 (30) - del? and 00:11:041 (30,31,32,33) - add all finisher? the Muzukashii has finisher already. if you want to keep current pattern, i recommend change the pattern of the Muzukashii.
  3. 00:16:041 (59) - => 00:16:129 - move here. the snaredrum sound is strong in fact.
    00:27:269 (23) - the sam as above.
  4. 00:17:357 (68,69) - swap these notes. if you want to follow the vocal sound. 00:17:181 (67,68) - swap these notes.
  5. 00:23:322 (96,97,98,99,100) - 1/4stream + finisher is not prefer pattern basically. so 00:23:585 (99) - delete?
    00:46:041 (64) - the same as above.
    01:00:076 (33) - ^
    01:05:690 (73) - ^
  6. 00:28:936 (35,36) - swap is better. sounds good to me.
  7. 00:52:006 (95) - => 00:52:094 - maybe move here? i think this is correct rhythm.
  8. 01:02:971 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - swap these patterns? i mean, change to d kkd k d kd dk. more fits the vocal sound imo.
  9. 01:05:076 (66,67,68,69) - swap to ddkk. it works well for the snaredrum.
  10. 01:07:620 (83) - delete. sounds good for vocal.
  11. 01:15:427 (127) - too early timing this one!! maybe move 01:15:470 - here? anyway, the current timing is too early.


[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:00:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i think that these Ds should be unified with the Oni.
  2. 00:16:216 (16) - => 00:16:129 - the same reason as the Oni. current pattern is sounds weird. cause is the snaredrum.
    00:27:445 (64) - ^
  3. 00:37:883 (105) - delete. the Oni has an empty here.
    00:39:287 (110) - the same as above. also 00:39:111 (109) - the Oni has D here.
  4. 00:50:339 (151) - change to D? the Oni has D.
  5. 01:15:427 (252) - please check my suggestion on the Oni.
i might be rude, i didnt know your name.
but you surprised me. because Taiko diffs are really great for me.
anyway please check the uniformity between Oni and Muzukashii!
Topic Starter
Teru21

TKSalt wrote:

i love the WHITE ASH!! <3

[ Oni]
  1. 00:00:190 (1) - no finisher here. the notes is the same sound as 00:00:714 (2) - so you should prioritize integrity.
  2. 00:10:953 (30) - del? and 00:11:041 (30,31,32,33) - add all finisher? the Muzukashii has finisher already. if you want to keep current pattern, i recommend change the pattern of the Muzukashii.
  3. 00:16:041 (59) - => 00:16:129 - move here. the snaredrum sound is strong in fact.
    00:27:269 (23) - the sam as above.
  4. 00:17:357 (68,69) - swap these notes. if you want to follow the vocal sound. 00:17:181 (67,68) - swap these notes.
  5. 00:23:322 (96,97,98,99,100) - 1/4stream + finisher is not prefer pattern basically. so 00:23:585 (99) - delete?
    00:46:041 (64) - the same as above.
    01:00:076 (33) - ^
    01:05:690 (73) - ^
  6. 00:28:936 (35,36) - swap is better. sounds good to me.
  7. 00:52:006 (95) - => 00:52:094 - maybe move here? i think this is correct rhythm. following the vocal owo
  8. 01:02:971 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - swap these patterns? i mean, change to d kk d k d kd dk. more fits the vocal sound imo. change to d kkd d kd dk d XD
  9. 01:05:076 (66,67,68,69) - swap to ddkk. it works well for the snaredrum. change the next note to k too
  10. 01:07:620 (83) - delete. sounds good for vocal.
  11. 01:15:427 (127) - too early timing this one!! maybe move 01:15:470 - here? anyway, the current timing is too early.


[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:00:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i think that these Ds should be unified with the Oni.
  2. 00:16:216 (16) - => 00:16:129 - the same reason as the Oni. current pattern is sounds weird. cause is the snaredrum.
    00:27:445 (64) - ^
  3. 00:37:883 (105) - delete. the Oni has an empty here.
    00:39:287 (110) - the same as above. also 00:39:111 (109) - the Oni has D here.
  4. 00:50:339 (151) - change to D? the Oni has D. I am making difference between these both 00:37:708 (104,109) -
  5. 01:15:427 (252) - please check my suggestion on the Oni. yep fixed XDD ;; Thanks a lot in this one :| I didn't really notice that its too early before wwww


i might be rude, i didnt know your name.
but you surprised me. because Taiko diffs are really great for me.
anyway please check the uniformity between Oni and Muzukashii!
anything that I didn't reply means changed X3 ;; and the uniformity eh ;; hmm I don't think so :| because oni and muzu should be a different difficulty.. I think in taiko's' you shouldn't just simplified your diff from the hardest ;; XD nvm

Thanks~ I'll update when my internet come back =w=
TKS

Teru21 wrote:

hmm I don't think so :| because oni and muzu should be a different difficulty.. I think in taiko's' you shouldn't just simplified your diff from the hardest ;; XD nvm
ofc, its no problem if its an intentional.

btw, i asked to other BAT about this part. 01:15:252 (123,124,125) -
please try this. v
[TimingPoints]
190,349.854227405248,4,1,0,60,1,0
6831,350.877192982456,4,1,0,60,1,0
54550,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
75602,349.854227405248,4,1,0,60,1,9
75645,-100,4,1,0,60,0,8

and please resnap d d D to 01:15:252 - , 01:15:471 - , 01:15:646 - .
i guess that should be fine.
Topic Starter
Teru21

TKSalt wrote:

btw, i asked to other BAT about this part. 01:15:252 (123,124,125) -
please try this. v
[TimingPoints]
190,349.854227405248,4,1,0,60,1,0
6831,350.877192982456,4,1,0,60,1,0
54550,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
75602,349.854227405248,4,1,0,60,1,9
75645,-100,4,1,0,60,0,8

and please resnap d d D to 01:15:252 - , 01:15:471 - , 01:15:646 - .
i guess that should be fine.
Idk the point of using the 75602 "unherit previous timing" at the last part :OO so i delete it ;w;)/ ;; thanks
TKS
i was talked with Teru about a few things. these are ready for go already. really great job as the one of Taiko mapper.
Topic Starter
Teru21

TKSalt wrote:

i was talked with Teru about a few things. these are ready for go already. really great job as the one of Taiko mapper.
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY ;; Thanks ;w; ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; made my day so much wwwwwwwwwwww
SkyDevil
-patiently waiting for this to get ranked-
Topic Starter
Teru21

SkyDevil wrote:

-patiently waiting for this to get ranked-
patiently waiting for BAT ;w;)/
BeatofIke

SkyDevil wrote:

-patiently waiting for this to get ranked-
Patience is key!
Topic Starter
Teru21

BeatofIke wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

-patiently waiting for this to get ranked-
Patience is key!
patienly waiting for key .w.

EDIT : I wonder if I can really get this ranked =A=)/
BeatofIke
Oh no! Sorry for forgetting about this map. :(
Anyways, your timing is wrong. Try this one!
This change should NOT require re-snapping notes and timing sections AFTER 00:06:830.


I'll mod the rest of the mapset once you reply to this! :D
Topic Starter
Teru21

BeatofIke wrote:

Oh no! Sorry for forgetting about this map. :(
Anyways, your timing is wrong. Try this one!
This change should NOT require re-snapping notes and timing sections AFTER 00:06:830.


I'll mod the rest of the mapset once you reply to this! :D
updated
BeatofIke
Turns out you already have some unsnapped timing sections to begin with. Please fix the following!
EDIT: Remove TV Size from title as well. There has been a heated argument from this thread: t/164430/start=45

Actually, don't even mess with it!
[Normal]
AIBat
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:05:437 - snap to 00:05:427
00:58:125 - snap to 00:58:146
00:58:301 - snap to 00:58:322
00:59:529 - snap to 00:59:550
00:59:704 - snap to 00:59:725

[Hard]
AIBat
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:05:437 - snap to 00:05:427
00:06:931 - snap to 00:06:918
00:44:090 - snap to 00:44:111
00:44:266 - snap to 00:44:287
00:58:125 - snap to 00:58:146
00:58:301 - snap to 00:58:322
00:59:529 - snap to 00:59:550
00:59:704 - snap to 00:59:725
01:14:299 - snap to 01:14:287
01:15:951 - snap to 01:15:953
01:16:301 - snap to 01:16:304
01:16:651 - snap to 01:16:655
01:17:001 - snap to 01:17:006

[Insane]
AIBat
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:14:299 - snap to 01:14:287
Topic Starter
Teru21

BeatofIke wrote:

Turns out you already have some unsnapped timing sections to begin with. Please fix the following!
EDIT: Remove TV Size from title as well. There has been a heated argument from this thread: t/164430/start=45

[Normal]
AIBat
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:05:437 - snap to 00:05:427
00:58:125 - snap to 00:58:146
00:58:301 - snap to 00:58:322
00:59:529 - snap to 00:59:550
00:59:704 - snap to 00:59:725

[Hard]
AIBat
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:05:437 - snap to 00:05:427
00:06:931 - snap to 00:06:918
00:44:090 - snap to 00:44:111
00:44:266 - snap to 00:44:287
00:58:125 - snap to 00:58:146
00:58:301 - snap to 00:58:322
00:59:529 - snap to 00:59:550
00:59:704 - snap to 00:59:725
01:14:299 - snap to 01:14:287
01:15:951 - snap to 01:15:953
01:16:301 - snap to 01:16:304
01:16:651 - snap to 01:16:655
01:17:001 - snap to 01:17:006

[Insane]
AIBat
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
01:14:299 - snap to 01:14:287
idk.. all of this are snapped properly D:nvm, but it doesn't necessary too I guess D: ima fixing some kiai stuff aaand updated
Damnae

BeatofIke wrote:

EDIT: Remove TV Size from title as well. There has been a heated argument from this thread: t/164430/start=45
There's no need to remove it, the (TV size) title does exists for this song:
http://vgmdb.net/album/39964
BeatofIke
Thank goodness! :)
I really hope that we can see more TV Sizes on anime OP/ED
winber1
I very quickly just looked through the map. These are some things that I noticed immediately. I didn't really want to go into any more detail since beyond that is just all my personal opinion and suggestion, and the map plays fine even without those changes.

Insane

00:33:497 (5) - new combo
00:33:497 (5,6,7,8) - do you want to use this pattern? I was thinking it might look better as a square. up to you.
00:53:146 (1,2,3,4) - personally the spacing increases at such a rapid rate that it looks weird to me. I don't know if you like this, but personally I like it better if the increase in spacing was more gradual like this http://puu.sh/9zwxD/1ef0b7cb19.jpg
00:59:638 (3) - to me it feels more fluid is this slider was turned into two hitcircles http://puu.sh/9zwKy/bfc102acd6.jpg
01:11:304 - add a note and rearrange the hitcricles. I believe this sounds better and matches the drums and also matches what you've done previously
01:12:708 - consider adding a note here too.
01:15:690 (1) - use soft hitsounds for the end of the spinner? it sounds better to me that way.

There's a special flow you get when your spacing is smaller than your slider velocity (during the kiai section). In my opinion, this sort of flow may have been overused and feels a little mismatched by the music. It's up to you to change anything, but I am just stating what I feel. You may want to keep that in mind for the next time you map something. Otherwise the rest of the map feels fine.

Since I said I would take a look at the insane map, I did, but I currently don't have much time to look at the rest. Kudosu this if you feel it was helpful. I honestly don't need kudosu so if you did not find this helpful do not kudosu.

Good luck.

(In-game/forum PM me if you want to ask me something)
Topic Starter
Teru21

winber1 wrote:

I very quickly just looked through the map. These are some things that I noticed immediately. I didn't really want to go into any more detail since beyond that is just all my personal opinion and suggestion, and the map plays fine even without those changes.

Insane

00:33:497 (5) - new combo fixed
00:33:497 (5,6,7,8) - do you want to use this pattern? I was thinking it might look better as a square. up to you. nah I want to leave it as it is. I somehow like it x'D
00:53:146 (1,2,3,4) - personally the spacing increases at such a rapid rate that it looks weird to me. I don't know if you like this, but personally I like it better if the increase in spacing was more gradual like this http://puu.sh/9zwxD/1ef0b7cb19.jpg fiiix xD
00:59:638 (3) - to me it feels more fluid is this slider was turned into two hitcircles http://puu.sh/9zwKy/bfc102acd6.jpg I remap the part. ;W; and turn that into 2 circles.
01:11:304 - add a note and rearrange the hitcricles. I believe this sounds better and matches the drums and also matches what you've done previously uhh added and how I place it looks awkward.
01:12:708 - consider adding a note here too. ^
01:15:690 (1) - use soft hitsounds for the end of the spinner? it sounds better to me that way. awwwkay .w.

There's a special flow you get when your spacing is smaller than your slider velocity (during the kiai section). In my opinion, this sort of flow may have been overused and feels a little mismatched by the music. It's up to you to change anything, but I am just stating what I feel. You may want to keep that in mind for the next time you map something. Otherwise the rest of the map feels fine.

Since I said I would take a look at the insane map, I did, but I currently don't have much time to look at the rest. Kudosu this if you feel it was helpful. I honestly don't need kudosu so if you did not find this helpful do not kudosu.

Good luck.

(In-game/forum PM me if you want to ask me something)

yeeeep thanks alot x'D it was really helpful ;; and I've stop being stoneminded. remap some x'D
BeatofIke
Moe~
[Normal]
  1. Look, I know it's 2014 and all, but I still think that AR6 is pretty high for a Normal difficulty. >.<
  2. 00:22:269 (2,3) - I'm not sure whether this was intended or not, but the spacing between these notes is inconsistent compare to the rest of the patterns. You may want to take a look at that to confirm. Same applies to 01:01:567 (3,4).
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:901 (4) - Maybe you could add a clap here so it is consistent with the slider tick clap at 00:13:497 (3).
EDIT: Bubbled!
Taiko Icon: p/2961630
Topic Starter
Teru21

BeatofIke wrote:

Moe~
[Normal]
  1. Look, I know it's 2014 and all, but I still think that AR6 is pretty high for a Normal difficulty. >.< ah right. the new editor DD: -1
  2. 00:22:269 (2,3) - I'm not sure whether this was intended or not, but the spacing between these notes is inconsistent compare to the rest of the patterns. You may want to take a look at that to confirm. Same applies to 01:01:567 (3,4). oh.. fix the (2,3) one, but (3,4) isn't a mistake I guess. I made 1.2x spacing for the long distance and 1.0x spacing for the shorter distance.
[Hard]
  1. 00:24:901 (4) - Maybe you could add a clap here so it is consistent with the slider tick clap at 00:13:497 (3). awkay .w.)b
Thanks ;W;)////////////

EDIT: Bubbled!
Taiko Icon: p/2961630
Thanks. ALOT ///W/// YAAAAAY
SkyDevil
GOGOGOGO RANK
blackabyss
\:3/
Topic Starter
Teru21

SkyDevil wrote:

GOGOGOGO RANK

blackabyss wrote:

\:3/
;W;)a;;
10nya
ooh! ganbatte~
Topic Starter
Teru21

10nya wrote:

ooh! ganbatte~
:'3 arigatou
captin1
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:568 - seems you forgot to change this one to 7/4. also, the volume difference between this and 00:00:164 - is a bit weird
  2. 01:14:199 (1) - add clap on the end? the lone clap on 01:15:427 (2) - sounds weird right now
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:568 - forgot 7/4 again! in fact, the only diff you do have it is Easy lol
nothin to say so no kd, just fix that 7/4 lol
Topic Starter
Teru21
DO YOU WANNA BUILD A SNOWMAAAAAAAAN ;; DO YOU WANNA BUILD A SNOW MAAAAAAAAN ;; AWKAY BAI. WWWWWWW

captin1 wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:568 - seems you forgot to change this one to 7/4. also, the volume difference between this and 00:00:164 - is a bit weird yuhh I see that. I make it all 40% on all diff :'3
  2. 01:14:199 (1) - add clap on the end? the lone clap on 01:15:427 (2) - sounds weird right now fix fix

[Hard]
  1. 00:01:568 - forgot 7/4 again! in fact, the only diff you do have it is Easy lol LOLOLOL IKR ;; fix :'3
nothin to say so no kd, just fix that 7/4 lol
yuuh Thanks .w.)b
captin1
looks good!

ranked
10nya
grats~
NaxelCL
Finally , gongratz~
Setsurei
gratz on first ranked!
Topic Starter
Teru21
yaaay :'3 captin thaaaanks >w< and ike too thanks ;; and and TKS too >w<)b ;; and the other who supported mah map thanks guys ;w;)///
Senritsu
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy gratzzzzzz owo)//////
Myxo
Congratz ^-^
Meowcenaries
Congratulations on rank!
Flandre_Vampir
gratz
blackabyss
yatta teruuuuuuu //hooray
pkk
\o/ congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
machomuu
Finally! Congratulations! :)
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