[Woodyzak's 4K EZ]
00:06:633 (6633|1,7046|3) - both notes are lacking a finish hitsound for me
00:22:357 - This piano section here could benefit from some finish hitsounds aswell
00:28:564 (28564|3) - Better on the 3rd column?
00:45:529 (45529|1,46771|3,47184|2) - Need hitsound
01:15:322 (75322|1,76150|2) - Better replace this with just notes
[7K EZ]
00:12:426 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990360 I think this arrangement is better for following the previous notes and the pitch. The other note placement looked random to me
00:28:150 (28150|0,28150|1,28564|6,28564|5) - I think this gap is way too big. 00:28:150 - Move the 2 notes to 3rd and 4th column?
00:28:977 - I think if you keep the consistency higher in this pattern it will be better to play. 00:31:460 (31460|4) - Move to 4th column. 00:33:115 (33115|3) - Move to 5th column.
00:34:771 (34771|5) - Change to hold?
00:42:219 - I think you can improve this, even for easy: 00:43:460 - Add note. 00:45:115 - Add note.
00:50:495 - The clap here sounds really wrong, and changing this to have only 1 note on the 4th column would look nice.
01:00:426 (60426|2) - This belongs on 4th column
01:01:253 - Suggestion for this part here, since it started to get repeative:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99038001:15:322 (75322|2) - Better change this hold to notes.
01:20:288 - This is too hard:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990386[4K NM]
The intro looks a bit effortless to me
I think the notes should follow the more identifyable part of the song. Try this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990415 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990417 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990419 00:17:391 - Suggestion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99042600:32:908 - Add note.
00:33:736 - Add note.
01:23:598 (83598|1) - Move this to the 3rd column? it looks better and plays better with 2 hands instead of 1.
[7K NM]
00:37:771 - Hm add a note for guitar?
00:39:426 - ^
00:48:840 - I think this is better displayed as 2 note patterns:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990442 or something
01:16:150 - This arrangement seems way too difficult for normal. Even more after the previous holds. This is more like HD stuff. The parts after it seem very difficult for a NM aswell. I think you should look at it again and see if you want to change something about that.
[justhow's 4K HD]
00:20:495 (20495|0) - This note should have started on previous beat.
00:20:702 -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990452 add more note?
00:23:184 - The beats miss 1 more note for the piano. I think the hold itself is not sufficient for this pattern in MX, just think of the hold being for the lower tone and the note being for the higher piano note which makes the melody.
00:42:219 (42219|2) - Delete.
00:43:046 - I think this pattern needs to improved. Try this: Add notes here: 00:43:150 - 00:43:253 - 00:44:805 - 00:44:908 - . This song is pretty fast paced make use of it
There are also a few other oppurtunities later on to add notes for the exact same pattern if you want that.
[4K MX]
00:05:805 - I think this part is a beat overmapped since its just 4 keys and i get the impression theres a "stream" or anything in the song which isnt.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990471 Try to simplify to something like this.
00:30:219 - Add a hold for guitar?
00:42:219 - Suggestion for this pattern: Add guitar notes: 00:42:529 - 00:44:184 - 00:45:840 -
01:02:495 - This part looks a bit unbalanced and rushing it too much. I would shorten the holds and remove 01:02:908 (62908|2) - There is really no need to have 2 notes on that beat
01:10:357 - Suggestion for this pattern: Add guitar notes: 01:10:667 - 01:11:495 - 01:11:908 - 01:12:322 - 01:12:322 - 01:12:736 -
[7K HD]
00:19:667 (19667|3) - This note looks out of place, delete?
00:45:529 - Hm im not sure about this measure. I think it should be done better. The holds should be in an ascending pitch manner if they were meant for the guitar and the notes next to them dont seem to fit into the part of the song all to well and are just plain beat notes. Maybe look at this one and think about if you want to change it a bit?
01:06:633 (66633|3,66840|3) - Move those 2 1 column right?
01:22:771 (82771|6) - As things look like the star of this part seems pretty hard to press and 01:22:771 (82771|1) - this note should be removed.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/990501 ?
[7K Rumi's Lv.28]
Not going to much into detail on this since it looks a bit messy (especially the beginning, the later parts seem alot better), but it seems to play nice and the notes seem to go fine with the music. Some parts in this map just seem to have added notes to it just to add difficulty and i think if im going to check those i wont come up with a good solution anyways
I didnt really enjoy playing this diff personally because it seems unbalanced and overdone to me
[7K MX]
00:21:012 - 00:21:322 - 00:21:426 - 00:22:150 - Add note
00:43:046 - Hm why not add the 1/4 notes here as you did in the 4K MX? ._. I think they are important and this diff is MX aswell
01:02:805 (62805|4) - Hm while playing i often combo this part without any missed but in the editor it looks pretty harsh but i think its fine, just mentioning
01:10:046 (70046|2,70253|2) - Move to column 2 and 01:10:357 (70357|1) - to column 3?
01:15:840 -
Good Luck!
