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SHK - Death Moon II

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Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Mittwoch, 27. Jänner 2010 at 15:20:59

Artist: SHK
Title: Death Moon II
Source: o2jam
Tags: fartownik Teara ignorethis
BPM: 150
Filesize: 2843kb
Play Time: 02:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. FARTOWNIK'S STAGE (5 stars, 665 notes)
  2. ignore's Hard (4.75 stars, 465 notes)
  3. Normal (4.48 stars, 272 notes)
  4. Teara's Easy (2.34 stars, 174 notes)
Download: SHK - Death Moon II
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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+Teara's Easy
+Ignores' Hard
+fartownik

thanks :)
Last edited by Hanyuu , edited 52 times in total.
Aqua
298 posts
Joined December 2008
Aqua
really nice map hanyuu :)

I tried to mod but i guess you know me xD i'm a noob in modding. So this mod is nothing special

I just would say

General
Type something in the Submitting Message.
"Enter your message here. Links and general information will automatically be added above this." is a bit weird xD

Hanyuu:
00:20:45 (4) - New Combo
00:23:65 (1) - Why is this Beat in "soft"?
00:26:45 (7) - Align with 6
00:44:85 (5) - Finish
02:01:25 (X) - Sounds a bit empty
02:29:45 (1) - Sounds a bit weird. IF you remove it try to add the following
02:29:25 (x) - Create Beat
02:29:25 (x) - Create Beat


Sousei!:
First of all: omfg. the timing points were a hell work huh?
00:25:26 (1) - Damn. Why is this slider speed up?
01:39:66 (2) - align with end of 1
02:22:86 (2,3,4) - i would say put each of them on a white tick. IF you do that THAN:
02:22:86 (2,3,4) - fix spacing and new-combo 4
A little Suggestion:
02:24:36 (3) - move 1/4 earlier and than fix new spacing
02:24:46 (X) - create a beat

I Think it sounds better. but your map :P your choice


Anyway. Love this song, love the background, (love the ending of hanyuu)
Staaarreeedd
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Hanyuu

Aqua92 wrote:

really nice map hanyuu :)

I tried to mod but i guess you know me xD i'm a noob in modding. So this mod is nothing special

I just would say

General
Type something in the Submitting Message.
"Enter your message here. Links and general information will automatically be added above this." is a bit weird xD

Hanyuu:
00:20:45 (4) - New Combo [/color]
00:23:65 (1) - Why is this Beat in "soft"? [/color]
00:26:45 (7) - Align with 6[/color]
00:44:85 (5) - Finish [/color]
02:01:25 (X) - Sounds a bit empty[/color]
02:29:45 (1) - Sounds a bit weird. you remove it try to add the following[/color]
02:29:25 (x) - Create Beat
02:29:25 (x) - Create Beat

[/color]

Sousei!:
First of all: omfg. the timing points were a hell work huh?
00:25:26 (1) - Damn. Why is this slider speed up? [/color]
01:39:66 (2) - align with end of 1 [/color]
02:22:86 (2,3,4) - i would say put each of them on a white tick. you do that THAN:[/color]
02:22:86 (2,3,4) - fix spacing and new-combo 4
A little Suggestion:
02:24:36 (3) - move 1/4 earlier and than fix new spacing
02:24:46 (X) - create a beat
[/color]

I Think it sounds better. but your map :P your choice


Anyway. Love this song, love the background, (love the ending of hanyuu)
Staaarreeedd
thank you - ok the reply screw up ... T.T. try to read as good as possible XD
Sousei
207 posts
Joined May 2008
Sousei
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Hanyuu

Sousei wrote:

LMAO! OH SHIT I DIDNT SEE THIS UNTIL I WAS LOOKING FOR THE STATUS OF HOLD ME LIKE A PRINCESS
AND I JUST SUBMITTED DM2 WITHOUT KNOWING YOU ALREAYD DID MY BAD LOL!!
GOT RID OF IT NOW, CARRY ON
lol my bad for not telling you
Sousei
207 posts
Joined May 2008
Sousei
actually hanyuu, im sorry but i made the decision to not attempt to get anything ranked anymore :x
i would like if you could remove my difficulty D: but you are still free to map the song if you would like :]
I am going to beat eirrol in having the most unranked maps!
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
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Topic Starter
Hanyuu
ok lol go ahead XD
i will remove it for you
Teara
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814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
~Starry
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac
I love this map and the song.
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi
i suggest the last hitsound a FINISH not whistle
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Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
yes
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac
this is my favorite map
Takuma
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Takuma
Canceling my difficulty - I can't map well for this. >A<
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
>3</hauuu★~~~
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac
this is the map so far. i just wanted see if anything ive done so far needs to be changed. so if anything similar appears later i know what to do.

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [D2R's].osu
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara

ddrmaniac wrote:

this is the map so far. i just wanted see if anything ive done so far needs to be changed. so if anything similar appears later i know what to do.
Nice, I can see you put a lot of work in it.

00:10:481 (3) - feels really out of place thou
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu

ddrmaniac wrote:

this is the map so far. i just wanted see if anything ive done so far needs to be changed. so if anything similar appears later i know what to do.
There are a few things i dont like about your difficulty :

00:11:25 (1) - see if you want to change it like shown in the attachement. i dislike those sliders you put there and this sounds better to me
00:54:45 (1) - to 01:00:45 (13) - change
01:36:05 (1) - this part should be mapped aswell instead of spinners and breaks
01:42:45 (1) - this series of circles looks lazy done. could you think of some patterns about 7-8 beats long?
00:10:55 (3) - should be on red tick not blue

and overall if you want this to be insane you should add some more overall difficulty and do something about the spacing

ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac
ignore this.
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Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
yeah of course
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [D2R's].osu
taka1235
609 posts
Joined February 2009
taka1235
nice map :)

star~
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac
here my finished (hopefully). i didn't use alot of hitsounds because i don't want to cover up some parts.

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [D2R's].osu
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac
updated map with less hitsounds is in my post above this one. oh and thank you for letting me make a map for this song.
Alace
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Alace
spacing is fine

Hitsounds
you guys ALL overused hitsounds
too many claps lol
too many finishs
they don`t really sound good

well
It`s up to you guys
I suggest remove some of them
make a simple hitsounds patten
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac

Alace wrote:

spacing is fine

Hitsounds
you guys ALL overused hitsounds
too many claps lol
too many finishs
they don`t really sound good

well
It`s up to you guys
I suggest remove some of them
make a simple hitsounds patten
Here is mine hopefully the hitsounds are better

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [D2R's].osu
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
thanks D2R you improved your map! but can you have a look on the clap sound at the end the other sound is very good now but the clap is a bit for improvement (near end)
Alace
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Alace
Both you two did a very good job
Idon`t even point out a single part
but you still make your maps better
here
It`s my pink star
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac
i removed the the clap sound from the last hitcircle at the very end.
2:07:657 - added a clap sound.
2:08:057 - added a clap sound.
2:08:857 - added a clap sound.
02:08:25 - added clap sound
02:09:657 - added finish sound

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [D2R's].osu
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
updated

alace thank you ♪
Teara
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Teara
Ok, probably not as good as the other two's, since apparently I don't have a ear for fine things like these. ^^

But I removed, all the hit sounds, and re-added here and there, where it sounded appropriate :)

Granted, this was a rush job, and technically I'm still half asleep. I'll have another look at it tonight when I get home

~ Edit

redone hit sounds, I'm happy with these :)

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=30e9 ... f6e8ebb871

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [Teara' Easy].osu
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minyeob
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minyeob
[Hanyuu]
00:57:05 (7) - Make farther from (6)

That's it!
antony11
153 posts
Joined August 2008
antony11
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
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orioncomet
Star~* :oops:
ddrmaniac
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Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac

antony11 wrote:

Der's:

00:10:65 (3) - late 1/4 beatfixed
00:31:55 (4,5) - late or early 1/4 beat fixed
00:41:85 (2) - spacing fixed
02:22:05 (9) - new combo? nah. I like it the way it is
02:51:25 (1) - I think it is unnecessary nah.

Other difficulties look good Started
Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [D2R's].osu
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu

orioncomet wrote:

Star~* :oops:
Thank :oops:
fartownik
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Joined December 2008
fartownik
Here we go.

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (fartownik) [FARTO STREAMS!!!].osu
fartownik
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Joined December 2008
fartownik
~Full updated version

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [FARTO STREAMS!!!].osu
Malar
70 posts
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Malar
WOW what a map xd make it fast ranked xd
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
Sorry i can not found a better audio quality MP3 for this song. I dont know if there is a better quality in the O2jam game..
but i will try to find a different MP3 because this sounds too loud
heintsi
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heintsi
forgot to star this ~ :)
Ryohan
794 posts
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Ryohan
great map and song - star :D :D :D
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
thank you guys :)
Gabi
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Gabi
i only liked hanyuu's and Teara's diffs. the other 2 are way overmapped and have bad use of sliders (D2R's map has a little potential though).

other then that its great.

star
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac

Gabi wrote:

i only liked hanyuu's and Teara's diffs. the other 2 are way overmapped and have bad use of sliders (D2R's map has a little potential though).

other then that its great.

star
umm is that in a good way or a bad way.
Teara
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Teara

ddrmaniac wrote:

Gabi wrote:

i only liked hanyuu's and Teara's diffs. the other 2 are way overmapped and have bad use of sliders (D2R's map has a little potential though).

other then that its great.

star
umm is that in a good way or a bad way.
That is in a good way.

And thanks Gabi :)
ddrmaniac
62 posts
Joined May 2009
ddrmaniac
i fixed some stuff i took out some of the hitcircles in the small stream 8-)

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [D2R's].osu
Hanyuu
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Topic Starter
Hanyuu

ddrmaniac wrote:

i fixed some stuff i took out some of the hitcircles in the small stream 8-)
updated
gdeath
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gdeath
nice map.
star*
ignorethis
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ignorethis
Definitely FC-able xD

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [ignore's Insane].osu
ignorethis
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ignorethis
Easier

Download: SHK - Death Moon II (Hanyuu) [ignore's Hard].osu
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