Black Raison d'etre - INSIDE IDENTITY · forum

YoshinoSakura

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2013-08-01T00:40:16+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月15日星期四 at 23:26:47

Artist: Black Raison d'etre
Title: INSIDE IDENTITY
Source: Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags: 1PSA Kawaiwkyik 中二病でも恋がしたい! lantis zaq uchida maaya akasaki chinatsu asakura azumi uesaka sumire kyoto togashi yuuta takanashi rikka nibutani shinka dekomori sanae tsuyuri kumin ending 615915887
BPM: 186
Filesize: 7678kb
Play Time: 04:14
Difficulties Available:

1PSA's Easy (2.89 stars, 245 notes)
Hard (4.89 stars, 626 notes)
wkyik's Insane (4.9 stars, 995 notes)
yf's Normal (4.37 stars, 412 notes)

Download: Black Raison d'etre - INSIDE IDENTITY
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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plz redownload before 2014/3/31
Full version ED from cho-2
Natsu is a good person
[Status]
Easy(By 1PSA)
Normal(By yf_bmp)
Hard(By SB615)
Insane(By Kawaiwkyik)

Last edited by YoshinoSakura 2014-05-15T15:32:02+00:00, edited 43 times in total.

1PSA

119 posts

Joined November 2010

1PSA 2013-08-09T01:41:10+00:00

http://puu.sh/3Xkad.zip Easy finished!!!

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2013-08-15T14:14:19+00:00

http://puu.sh/42Kr9.osu

wkyik

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2013-08-15T15:08:34+00:00

全部加进去了

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2013-08-15T15:52:21+00:00

00:58:034 - set preview time here
[Hard+]
尝试降低这货的难度然后我好做N 其实psa的diff直接改叫normal也没太大问题……吧？._.
AR8
00:05:776 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928940 or just use a circle and a spinner instead
00:57:873 (1) - snap on nothing
00:14:970 (1,1,1,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928946 好像就这里有点难
00:57:066 (5) - NC
01:00:776 (9,1) - 交换NC
01:07:066 (2) - 尾部clap 要不就有点空了
01:28:357 (6) - 直接用spinner
01:44:647 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 是不是掉东西了._.
01:50:131 - note
01:55:937 (2) - 折返
01:58:357 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 六花._.
懒得下24clap给我去下工具啊._.
03:03:357 (1,1,1) - 移开
03:07:873 (1,1,1,1) - 这梗就这么好？
03:12:712 - ~~break start here~~
03:13:034 - 空的意义不明……为啥前面更散却有note这里却没有
03:38:195 (3,4,5) - 改成一个往返
03:39:486 (3,4,5,6) - 俩滑条
03:44:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 用折返比较好
03:44:647 - ._.把这里的加速去掉否则你就需要5diff ENHII
04:13:679 (1,2,3,4) - 发什么神经._.算了反正这里都要remap

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2013-08-15T18:24:15+00:00

来了

General
敢不敢加上lead-in 本来想test一下结果一开就吓尿

柚子
00:01:421 - 和00:01:744 - 的clap呢
00:03:518 (4) - 尾巴上的finish误操作
00:13:679 (1) - 为啥只有这里NC变得频繁了建议整体上加得都频繁一点不然HR的话好像很容易饿死还有00:11:744 (12) - 这种地方完全可以NC 来提示节奏变化的
00:13:195 (4) - 长音错位有点儿难受它应该只有二分拍长度后面红线才起1/1
00:14:970 (1) - 这种地方的finish 不多挑了自己看着办
00:24:970 (1,2) - 这种地方http://puu.sh/42QUc.jpg 这样会不会好点 slider的方向不一定像这样但是我觉得slider头的位置这样放的话 8~9~1~2~1才会比较顺的感觉
00:30:453 (13,1) - 明显的换NC吧
00:29:970 (9,10,11) - 感觉叠到00:29:002 (6) - 的头上那一带会舒服些
00:34:889 - 这条蓝线明明没有拍子是后面那条蓝线上有
00:38:518 (2) - 莫名离前面太近 00:38:034 (1) - 这个slider一出来势头是很强的没有人想要在这么近的地方刹车
00:57:712 (1) - 这里不像前面一样空拍感觉有点怪
00:58:195 (4) - 这个…有点奇怪明明前面有更合适的地方放的 00:58:034 - 这里其实有一个1/6的reverse的
01:07:712 (4) - 尾巴上的finish略怪因为那个finish其实应该在这个slider中间的白线上的
01:09:002 (1) - 这种地方不finish 0.0 无力吐槽
01:16:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这个地方真是有够难 01:17:953 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - 先起串子后放spinner会人性化很多你如果说是为了跟vocal我会满脸黑线的你放一堆串子不是在跟吉他而是突然冒出个跟vocal的spinner？这也有点太……
01:29:324 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么这么诡异的节奏不能正常一点3个slider然后重音的地方单circle么
01:47:873 (1,2,3) - 角度渐变不同均匀啊 2到3变得好少不太好
01:57:873 (10) - 感觉多漏出来点会死…这个打的时候超级难读啊不开HD都很难
01:58:195 (1,2) - 这里明明没有人认为你在跟vocal 然后01:59:163 (3,4,5,6) - 这里又突然变成跟vocal 把01:59:486 - 很重要的一个重拍空掉了太奇怪
02:09:889 (1) - 居然不finish
02:13:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 应该很爽的梗摆得太小家子气了
02:20:615 (1) - 应该是1/6 前面也说过了
02:24:970 (3) - 大概最好还是稍微偏移一下哪怕一点点比较好
02:39:163 (3,4) - 简直超抠唆的 http://puu.sh/42RLS.jpg 这多爽 3也可以叠在1的尾巴
02:44:486 (3,4,5,6) - 这个地方节奏很奇怪……要还原原曲的话应该是http://puu.sh/42RQ8.jpg 这样的不想用1/6的话就还是单拍加三连打稍微好点
02:55:937 (6,7,8) - 从这个梗走出去的超级不舒服 02:56:260 (8) - 移到（352,112）这一带多好
03:44:647 (2,3) - 2刚这么大的跳 3突然离这么近简直无理 03:44:647 (2,3) - 放到（108,84）或者（384,124）两种不同的感觉我觉得都比现在强=。=
04:00:131 (1,2) - 这里突然就不用3/4了
最后的地方…感觉好懒……

Hard你还敢+！
00:02:066 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 尾巴不soft很难听呢
00:05:776 (2) - 这个明显提前结束了二分拍…应该延长到00:07:066 - 的啊……
00:07:228 (1) - 前面都知道加那么多finish 这种地方却不加怀疑被针对
00:11:744 (1,2) - 这种的也是其他的你可以自裁么漏了恨不得100个finish 考虑到是full ver, 怀疑还不止100个
00:14:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 想让你的Hard“安全”一点的话这个梗最好拉开
00:18:195 (2) - 这个因为滑条很短所以这么画不好看 http://puu.sh/42Siu.jpg 这样尾巴不出去比较好但是！你这个方向其实转圈不顺啊…
00:33:034 (1,2,3) - 这节奏简直……
00:56:744 (4,5) - 莫名近
01:24:647 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这么多连续的circle在Hard太难了
01:28:034 (5,6) - 忍不住说这音效实在是…
01:58:357 (2) - 这么短又扭曲成这样真的好难看啊……http://puu.sh/42SAa.jpg 你随便画个这种向外或者向内的结构不也好看得多玩儿起来又没区别
吉他solo之后那个慢速段简直……
03:28:195 (3) - 这东西Hard里面很危险而且你前面都没用这里干嘛突然一时兴起就想起来了
03:44:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 更危险…3456换成1/4reverse不就好了
03:54:163 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - 我瞎了后面mod不写了等你自己把人性捡回来比较好

Normal
我只会种草你会种薰衣草先跪一波
00:05:937 (1) - 最低难度这么短spinner 直接再见换slider
00:12:389 (1) - 延长二分拍会好一些尽量不要在最低难度里让新人把握“一拍半”这个时长而且其实明显后面那红线才是重音
00:37:550 (3) - 换成白线上单circle比较好 1/2 slider在这最低难度简直……
00:42:712 (3) - ^ 其他的不说了
00:56:260 (4,5) - 直接换成3/2 slider 这种折返简直能玩首先太短了而且新人哪里反映的过来要折返几次
01:15:615 (3,1) - 这种结构说实在是也危险
01:19:486 (1) - 这种长slider的多次折返如果要说的话勉强还算可以但是仍然还是建议改掉
02:26:582 (1) - 嘛你也有漏一些finish的…虽然大部分地方都加了还是不错的表扬一下`w`
02:39:486 (4) - 不NC了？
03:08:195 (1) - 这combo set咋这么长orz
其他都是提过的重复问题了耐心自裁吧

就这些了困死

1PSA

119 posts

Joined November 2010

1PSA 2013-08-16T07:49:20+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Normal
我只会种草你会种薰衣草先跪一波
00:05:937 (1) - 最低难度这么短spinner 直接再见换slider 把转盘加长了，换slider不合适
00:12:389 (1) - 延长二分拍会好一些尽量不要在最低难度里让新人把握“一拍半”这个时长而且其实明显后面那红线才是重音 fixed ~~rank的两个图easy明明都有~~
00:37:550 (3) - 换成白线上单circle比较好 1/2 slider在这最低难度简直…… 如果换的话岂不又是一拍半了？
00:42:712 (3) - ^ 其他的不说了同上
00:56:260 (4,5) - 直接换成3/2 slider 这种折返简直能玩首先太短了而且新人哪里反映的过来要折返几次 fixed
01:15:615 (3,1) - 这种结构说实在是也危险是因为有遮挡么
01:19:486 (1) - 这种长slider的多次折返如果要说的话勉强还算可以但是仍然还是建议改掉看了一下rank的nymph的easy也有
02:26:582 (1) - 嘛你也有漏一些finish的…虽然大部分地方都加了还是不错的表扬一下`w` 外边知了叫太大声，难免会漏
02:39:486 (4) - 不NC了？忘了
03:08:195 (1) - 这combo set咋这么长orz ~~因为找不到合适的地方nc了~~
其他都是提过的重复问题了耐心自裁吧

谢谢mod，已传 http://puu.sh/43nX8.zip

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2013-08-22T14:30:52+00:00

我错了，求原谅

Zero__wind wrote:
来了

General
敢不敢加上lead-in 本来想test一下结果一开就吓尿改不来额

Hard你还敢+！
00:02:066 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 尾巴不soft很难听呢 Accepted
00:05:776 (2) - 这个明显提前结束了二分拍…应该延长到00:07:066 - 的啊…… Accepted
00:07:228 (1) - 前面都知道加那么多finish 这种地方却不加怀疑被针对
00:11:744 (1,2) - 这种的也是其他的你可以自裁么漏了恨不得100个finish 考虑到是full ver, 怀疑还不止100个因为开始没加音效
00:14:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 想让你的Hard“安全”一点的话这个梗最好拉开 Accepted
00:18:195 (2) - 这个因为滑条很短所以这么画不好看 http://puu.sh/42Siu.jpg 这样尾巴不出去比较好但是！你这个方向其实转圈不顺啊…
00:33:034 (1,2,3) - 这节奏简直…… 跟人声
00:56:744 (4,5) - 莫名近已改
01:24:647 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这么多连续的circle在Hard太难了好像是的
01:28:034 (5,6) - 忍不住说这音效实在是…
01:58:357 (2) - 这么短又扭曲成这样真的好难看啊……http://puu.sh/42SAa.jpg 你随便画个这种向外或者向内的结构不也好看得多玩儿起来又没区别好主意
吉他solo之后那个慢速段简直……
03:28:195 (3) - 这东西Hard里面很危险而且你前面都没用这里干嘛突然一时兴起就想起来了在看看吧
03:44:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 更危险…3456换成1/4reverse不就好了已改
03:54:163 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - 我瞎了后面mod不写了等你自己把人性捡回来比较好差不多捡回来了吧

就这些了困死

ts8zs wrote:
00:58:034 - set preview time here
[Hard+]
尝试降低这货的难度然后我好做N 其实psa的diff直接改叫normal也没太大问题……吧？._.
AR8 也行
00:05:776 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928940 or just use a circle and a spinner instead
00:57:873 (1) - snap on nothing ？
00:14:970 (1,1,1,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/928946 好像就这里有点难？
00:57:066 (5) - NC
01:00:776 (9,1) - 交换NC 好
01:07:066 (2) - 尾部clap 要不就有点空了好
01:28:357 (6) - 直接用spinner 也行
01:44:647 (5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 是不是掉东西了._.没啊
01:50:131 - note
01:55:937 (2) - 折返
01:58:357 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 六花._.
懒得下24clap给我去下工具啊._.
03:03:357 (1,1,1) - 移开
03:07:873 (1,1,1,1) - 这梗就这么好？有什么不好？
03:12:712 - ~~break start here~~
03:13:034 - 空的意义不明……为啥前面更散却有note这里却没有有点懒，已加
03:38:195 (3,4,5) - 改成一个往返 accepted
03:39:486 (3,4,5,6) - 俩滑条 accepted
03:44:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 用折返比较好好
03:44:647 - ._.把这里的加速去掉否则你就需要5diff ENHII 额，艰难的决定
04:13:679 (1,2,3,4) - 发什么神经._.算了反正这里都要remap

不好意思回晚了，最近比较忙==
话说我的diff为毛还是5star

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2013-08-22T22:28:10+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
来了

General
敢不敢加上lead-in 本来想test一下结果一开就吓尿

柚子
00:01:421 - 和00:01:744 - 的clap呢
00:03:518 (4) - 尾巴上的finish误操作
00:13:679 (1) - 为啥只有这里NC变得频繁了建议整体上加得都频繁一点不然HR的话好像很容易饿死还有00:11:744 (12) - 这种地方完全可以NC 来提示节奏变化的
00:13:195 (4) - 长音错位有点儿难受它应该只有二分拍长度后面红线才起1/1
00:14:970 (1) - 这种地方的finish 不多挑了自己看着办
00:24:970 (1,2) - 这种地方http://puu.sh/42QUc.jpg 这样会不会好点 slider的方向不一定像这样但是我觉得slider头的位置这样放的话 8~9~1~2~1才会比较顺的感觉
00:30:453 (13,1) - 明显的换NC吧
00:29:970 (9,10,11) - 感觉叠到00:29:002 (6) - 的头上那一带会舒服些 打上去沒問題
00:34:889 - 这条蓝线明明没有拍子是后面那条蓝线上有
00:38:518 (2) - 莫名离前面太近 00:38:034 (1) - 这个slider一出来势头是很强的没有人想要在这么近的地方刹车
00:57:712 (1) - 这里不像前面一样空拍感觉有点怪
00:58:195 (4) - 这个…有点奇怪明明前面有更合适的地方放的 00:58:034 - 这里其实有一个1/6的reverse的
01:07:712 (4) - 尾巴上的finish略怪因为那个finish其实应该在这个slider中间的白线上的
01:09:002 (1) - 这种地方不finish 0.0 无力吐槽
01:16:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 这个地方真是有够难 01:17:953 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - 先起串子后放spinner会人性化很多你如果说是为了跟vocal我会满脸黑线的你放一堆串子不是在跟吉他而是突然冒出个跟vocal的spinner？这也有点太……
01:29:324 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么这么诡异的节奏不能正常一点3个slider然后重音的地方单circle么
01:47:873 (1,2,3) - 角度渐变不同均匀啊 2到3变得好少不太好
01:57:873 (10) - 感觉多漏出来点会死…这个打的时候超级难读啊不开HD都很难
01:58:195 (1,2) - 这里明明没有人认为你在跟vocal 然后01:59:163 (3,4,5,6) - 这里又突然变成跟vocal 把01:59:486 - 很重要的一个重拍空掉了太奇怪
02:09:889 (1) - 居然不finish
02:13:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 应该很爽的梗摆得太小家子气了
02:20:615 (1) - 应该是1/6 前面也说过了
02:24:970 (3) - 大概最好还是稍微偏移一下哪怕一点点比较好
02:39:163 (3,4) - 简直超抠唆的 http://puu.sh/42RLS.jpg 这多爽 3也可以叠在1的尾巴
02:44:486 (3,4,5,6) - 这个地方节奏很奇怪……要还原原曲的话应该是http://puu.sh/42RQ8.jpg 这样的不想用1/6的话就还是单拍加三连打稍微好点
02:55:937 (6,7,8) - 从这个梗走出去的超级不舒服 02:56:260 (8) - 移到（352,112）这一带多好
03:44:647 (2,3) - 2刚这么大的跳 3突然离这么近简直无理 03:44:647 (2,3) - 放到（108,84）或者（384,124）两种不同的感觉我觉得都比现在强=。=
04:00:131 (1,2) - 这里突然就不用3/4了
最后的地方…感觉好懒……

就这些了困死

http://puu.sh/48qyw.osu

Ayesha Altugle

3,052 posts

Joined October 2011

Ayesha Altugle 2013-08-25T12:15:09+00:00

BPM:186
OFFSET:765

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2013-08-25T12:16:39+00:00

vahn10 wrote:
BPM:186
OFFSET:765

thx

Graphite Edge

107 posts

Joined April 2011

Graphite Edge 2013-08-26T06:22:48+00:00

Hi from Unlimited Queue Works

My NM as requested :3

* Should be fixed
* Suggestion only
* General Comment

[1PSA's Easy]
*Skipped, cant find anything to mod here, well done maybe D:

[hard]
*02:18:841 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce the square a bit
*02:19:647 (1,2,3,4) - ^
*04:04:324 (5) - NC
*04:12:066 (5) - ^

[wkyik]
*00:07:228 (1) - No NC
*00:11:421 (10) - NC
*00:15:937 (1) - ^
*00:18:679 (5) - ^
*00:21:260 (6) - ^
*00:23:841 (6) - ^
*00:29:808 (8) - ^
*00:34:163 (6) - ^
*00:35:615 (1) - No NC
*00:36:099 (11) - NC
*00:39:808 (6) - ^
*01:00:453 (6) - ^
*01:21:260 (9) - ^
*01:25:776 (6) - ^
*01:36:099 (7) - ^
*01:44:647 (7,8) - Move to 108;204
*01:49:808 (8) - NC
*01:56:744 (5) - ^
*02:17:550 (5) - ^
*03:25:776 (6) - ^
*03:33:679 (8) - NC and also try something like this

SPOILER

*03:36:421 (6) - NC
*03:57:228 (6) - ^

GL!

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2013-08-29T00:21:18+00:00

I think I have nothing changed in my diff

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2013-08-29T01:03:58+00:00

Graph1te Edge wrote:
[wkyik]
*00:07:228 (1) - No NC
*00:11:421 (10) - NC
*00:15:937 (1) - ^
*00:18:679 (5) - ^
*00:21:260 (6) - ^
*00:23:841 (6) - ^
*00:29:808 (8) - ^
*00:34:163 (6) - ^
*00:35:615 (1) - No NC
*00:36:099 (11) - NC
*00:39:808 (6) - ^
*01:00:453 (6) - ^
*01:21:260 (9) - ^
*01:25:776 (6) - ^
*01:36:099 (7) - ^
*01:44:647 (7,8) - Move to 108;204
*01:49:808 (8) - NC
*01:56:744 (5) - ^
*02:17:550 (5) - ^
*03:25:776 (6) - ^
*03:33:679 (8) - NC and also try something like this
SPOILER
*03:36:421 (6) - NC
*03:57:228 (6) - ^

GL!

Thank you for mod but nothing to change
http://puu.sh/4dv2w.osu

thzz

579 posts

Joined May 2012

thzz 2013-08-29T04:44:09+00:00

hi~ from my queue
Sorry for late ;w;

[General]

remove "1psa" or "1PSA" in tags.
tags in wkyik dif have something wrong...
rename "1PSA's Easy" to "1PSA's Normal"?

[1PSA's Easy]

00:04:647 (4) - NC here.
00:05:937 (1) - The object immediatly after a spinner is too difficult for newbies. I would remove 00:07:550 (1) - and put circle at 00:07:873 - if I were you.
00:15:615 (2) - add finish at 00:16:099 - ?
00:25:615 - There's no snare-drum sound, so you shouldn't change slider-tick sound at here imo.
00:53:679 (1) - add finish on the head?
01:13:034 (2) - add finish at 01:13:034 -
01:15:615 (3) - Remove all finishes on this slider because there're not any sounds of the symbal.
01:22:066 (1) - add finish at 01:22:066 -
01:24:647 (1) - ^
01:29:808 (4) - NC?
01:49:163 (2,3) - You should remove finishes at these points.
1. 01:49:163 -
2. 01:49:486 -
3. 01:49:970 -
4. 01:50:131 -

01:53:034 (1,2) - like this?

image/code

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408,164,114324,2,0,P|348:180|360:244,2,135,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:34:324 (1) - remove finish at 02:34:324 -
02:36:905 (1) - add finish at 02:36:905 -
02:38:195 (3) - remove all finishes.
02:42:066 (3) - NC?
03:22:066 (1) - I prefer if this spinner is finish at 03:23:357 -
03:29:808 (1) - add finish on the head.
03:40:131 (1) - ^
03:41:421 (3) - remove all finishes.
03:50:453 (1) - add finish on the head.
04:02:389 (2) - remove finish on the head.
04:02:873 (3) - ^
04:13:679 (3) - NC
04:08:518 (1) - add finish at 04:08:518 -
04:11:099 (1) - ^
04:10:776 (2,1) - Flow like drawing straight line isn't good for me. I would do like this if I were you.
image

[wkyik]

00:16:087 (6) - add finish on the head?
00:16:893 (10,11) - add finish on 00:16:893 (10) - or remove finish on 00:17:054 (11) -
00:58:022 (2) - What sound is this slider following? I can understand if here is same rhythm as 02:20:603 (3,4) - .
01:16:893 (4) - add finish on the head.
01:29:151 - You should add one more 1/4 slider at here. 1/4 hitting of snare-drum is beginning from this point.
01:39:474 (9) - add finish on ther head or remove finish on the tale.
01:40:119 (1) - add finish on the head.
02:05:603 (9) - remove? Any sounds aren't ringing at this time.
02:05:764 (1) - Then, move this a little upside?
02:39:958 (2) - add finish on the head.
02:40:441 (3) - ^
04:05:925 (1) - add finish.
04:08:506 (1) - ^
04:14:474 (5,6) - Here is the last of this long beatmap, so I think you should make more heating at here. Following image is just a suggestion, however, take more distance is suitable for here imo.
image

[Hard]
Almost Insane...><

00:14:647 (9) - Ctrl+G? I think taking more spacing between 00:14:970 (1) - is better because strong sounds are ringing at 00:14:970 - .
00:25:292 (1) - Remove whistle on the head and add finish instead.
00:25:776 (2) - Then, add finish on the head.
00:38:034 (1) - add finish on the head.
00:41:744 (3) - This slider's end should be at 00:42:389 - . The rest from upbeat is not good for me.
00:48:034 (1) - add finish on the head and the tale.
00:52:066 (3) - This slider's end should be at 00:52:712 -
00:58:679 (1) - NC?
01:47:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should put same hitsounds as 00:25:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:00:615 (1) - add finish on the head.
02:03:034 (7) - Ctrl+G? Same reason as 00:14:647 (9) -
02:40:937 (1) - add finish.
03:11:099 (1) - I think this rhythm is more suitable for the vocal.
image
03:34:808 (1) - add finish on the head.
03:39:808 (4) - Ctrl+G? Same reason as 00:14:647 (9) -
03:45:131 (1) - add finish on the head.
03:55:453 (3) - add finish.
04:05:937 (1) - add finish on the head.
04:14:486 (5) - add finish on the tale.
04:14:970 (1) - remove. There're no sounds later than 04:14:808 - . Even if you're depicting reverberation, I think it's excessive expressing.

Well, that's all.
Good luck~

1PSA

119 posts

Joined November 2010

1PSA 2013-08-30T00:30:51+00:00

Cah-m wrote:
hi~ from my queue
Sorry for late ;w;

[General]
remove "1psa" or "1PSA" in tags.
tags in wkyik dif have something wrong...
rename "1PSA's Easy" to "1PSA's Normal"?
[1PSA's Easy]
00:04:647 (4) - NC here.
00:05:937 (1) - The object immediatly after a spinner is too difficult for newbies. I would remove 00:07:550 (1) - and put circle at 00:07:873 - if I were you. But if I change the name to normal,I think it is ok
00:15:615 (2) - add finish at 00:16:099 - ?
00:25:615 - There's no snare-drum sound, so you shouldn't change slider-tick sound at here imo.
00:53:679 (1) - add finish on the head?
01:13:034 (2) - add finish at 01:13:034 -
01:15:615 (3) - Remove all finishes on this slider because there're not any sounds of the symbal.
01:22:066 (1) - add finish at 01:22:066 -
01:24:647 (1) - ^
01:29:808 (4) - NC?
01:49:163 (2,3) - You should remove finishes at these points.
01:49:163 -
01:49:486 -
01:49:970 -
01:50:131 -
01:53:034 (1,2) - like this?
image/code
268,260,113034,6,0,P|272:132|400:76,1,270,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,164,114324,2,0,P|348:180|360:244,2,135,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:34:324 (1) - remove finish at 02:34:324 -
02:36:905 (1) - add finish at 02:36:905 -
02:38:195 (3) - remove all finishes.
02:42:066 (3) - NC?
03:22:066 (1) - I prefer if this spinner is finish at 03:23:357 -
03:29:808 (1) - add finish on the head.
03:40:131 (1) - ^
03:41:421 (3) - remove all finishes.
03:50:453 (1) - add finish on the head.
04:02:389 (2) - remove finish on the head.
04:02:873 (3) - ^
04:13:679 (3) - NC
04:08:518 (1) - add finish at 04:08:518 -
04:11:099 (1) - ^
04:10:776 (2,1) - Flow like drawing straight line isn't good for me. I would do like this if I were you.
image
]

All fixed except one. thx for modding

@615 diff

diff

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 204008
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
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GridSize: 4

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Title:INSIDE IDENTITY
TitleUnicode:INSIDE IDENTITY
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:615915887
Version:1PSA's Normal
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:1psa 1PSA Kawaiwkyik 中二病でも恋がしたい! lantis zaq uchida maaya akasaki chinatsu asakura azumi uesaka sumire kyoto togashi yuuta takanashi rikka nibutani shinka dekomori sanae tsuyuri kumin ending
BeatmapID:289432
BeatmapSetID:108204

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
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YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2013-08-30T06:27:01+00:00

Cah-m wrote:
hi~ from my queue
Sorry for late ;w;

[General]
remove "1psa" or "1PSA" in tags.
tags in wkyik dif have something wrong...
rename "1PSA's Easy" to "1PSA's Normal"?Maybe
[Hard]
Almost Insane...><
00:14:647 (9) - Ctrl+G? I think taking more spacing between 00:14:970 (1) - is better because strong sounds are ringing at 00:14:970 - .
00:25:292 (1) - Remove whistle on the head and add finish instead.
00:25:776 (2) - Then, add finish on the head.
00:38:034 (1) - add finish on the head.
00:41:744 (3) - This slider's end should be at 00:42:389 - . The rest from upbeat is not good for me.
00:48:034 (1) - add finish on the head and the tale.
00:52:066 (3) - This slider's end should be at 00:52:712 -
00:58:679 (1) - NC?
01:47:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should put same hitsounds as 00:25:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
02:00:615 (1) - add finish on the head.
02:03:034 (7) - Ctrl+G? Same reason as 00:14:647 (9) -
02:40:937 (1) - add finish.
03:11:099 (1) - I think this rhythm is more suitable for the vocal.
image
03:34:808 (1) - add finish on the head.
03:39:808 (4) - Ctrl+G? Same reason as 00:14:647 (9) -
03:45:131 (1) - add finish on the head.
03:55:453 (3) - add finish.
04:05:937 (1) - add finish on the head.
04:14:486 (5) - add finish on the tale.
04:14:970 (1) - remove. There're no sounds later than 04:14:808 - . Even if you're depicting reverberation, I think it's excessive expressing.
Well, that's all.
Good luck~

fix most of it thx

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2013-09-08T15:40:01+00:00

Cah-m wrote:
[wkyik]
00:16:087 (6) - add finish on the head?
00:16:893 (10,11) - add finish on 00:16:893 (10) - or remove finish on 00:17:054 (11) -
00:58:022 (2) - What sound is this slider following? I can understand if here is same rhythm as 02:20:603 (3,4) - .
01:16:893 (4) - add finish on the head.
01:29:151 - You should add one more 1/4 slider at here. 1/4 hitting of snare-drum is beginning from this point.
01:39:474 (9) - add finish on ther head or remove finish on the tale.
01:40:119 (1) - add finish on the head.
02:05:603 (9) - remove? Any sounds aren't ringing at this time.
02:05:764 (1) - Then, move this a little upside?
02:39:958 (2) - add finish on the head.
02:40:441 (3) - ^
04:05:925 (1) - add finish.
04:08:506 (1) - ^
04:14:474 (5,6) - Here is the last of this long beatmap, so I think you should make more heating at here. Following image is just a suggestion, however, take more distance is suitable for here imo.
image

Thanks for mod and all fixed

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140,212,246409,2,0,P|184:228|240:216,1,90
300,172,246732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,32,246893,2,0,L|424:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,204,247216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,324,247377,2,0,L|344:316,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,240,247700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,252,247861,2,0,L|40:162,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,28,248183,2,0,L|163:117,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,220,248506,5,4,0:0:0:0:
344,100,248667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,100,248829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
318,188,248990,5,0,0:0:0:0:
286,68,249151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,68,249313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,157,249474,5,8,0:0:0:0:
220,69,249635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,69,249797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,136,249958,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,104,250119,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,104,250281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,129,250441,2,0,P|208:128|160:156,1,90
168,328,250764,2,0,P|212:329|252:309,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,8,251087,6,0,P|268:88|296:172,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,320,251570,2,0,P|431:240|403:156,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,224,252054,2,0,P|220:260|304:232,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,72,252538,2,0,P|140:36|56:64,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,244,253022,2,0,L|156:240,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,320,253345,2,0,L|204:316,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,253667,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,124,253829,1,12,0:0:0:0:
221,287,253990,1,12,0:0:0:0:
290,96,254152,1,12,0:0:0:0:
96,224,254474,1,12,0:0:0:0:
416,160,254797,1,12,0:0:0:0:

可惡..puush壞掉了

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-09-14T16:58:46+00:00

request by Kawaiwkyik

General

wkyik紅線不一致
Audio Lead In 考慮用1000?
去掉 WidescreenStoryboard
02:42:066 - 感覺break有點長;w; 一般維持5-15秒會比較好

1PSA's Normal

00:11:744 (3) - 向這邊?
SPOILER
00:15:615 (2) - 開首加whistle?
00:20:131 (1) - ^, 這裡的音較高
00:36:905 (2,3) - 可以blanket更好 :
SPOILER
02:01:421 (2) - 尾巴移上2-3格可以blanket更好看
02:07:228 (3,1) - blanket
04:06:421 (1,2) - 都是blanket
不錯的diff ;w;b

Hard

00:16:905 (5) - 漏Clap?
00:43:195 (3) - 建議開首放個finish
00:51:099 (1,2,3) - 可以3個滑條的開首都放一下finish ;w; 沒放有點空虛
00:59:163 (4) - stack住 00:58:195 (2) 的尾巴?
00:58:679 (3) - kiai的話NC好點?
01:06:099 (7,2) - 考慮stack一下?
01:27:228 (1,2,3,4) - Hard來說會不會有點遠..? 如果改的話 02:18:841 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) 和 04:13:679 (1,2,3,4) - 也考慮一下
02:03:034 (7,2) - stack
02:05:292 (6) - 去掉滑條的finish, 放在尾巴
02:05:776 (1) - 開首finish
03:03:357 (1,1,1) - 感覺不NC也可以
03:08:518 (1,1,1) - ^
03:24:486 (2) - 如果跟著前面kiai的pattern的話, 應該這裡才開始kiai, 還有開頭加個finish
04:14:808 (6) - 建議這裡完結Kiai
;w;b 好玩

wkyik

00:22:054 (8) - 我的話會在這裡NC一下, 突出一下Bass, 做的話 01:44:635 (7) 也做
00:42:700 (10) - NC會易讀點?
01:10:280 (5,6) - 可以blanket好點;w;
01:20:764 (6,7,8) - 這樣放? 因為(5,6) 不跳怪怪的
SPOILER
02:05:603 (9) - 感覺去掉這個note比較好;w;
02:34:312 (1,2) - 不要overlap?
02:44:312 - streams可以這裡開始唷 >.0
03:02:700 (1) - 這一段滿喜歡的
03:17:538 (6) - 來個stream吧
03:23:506 (2,3,4) - 如果跟音樂逐漸向上的話我會這樣放然後 03:23:829 (4,5) 成大跳 :
SPOILER
04:10:441 (4) - 感覺NC比較好
fun map

好圖! 不射不行!
Good Luck!!

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2013-09-14T17:20:32+00:00

happy623 wrote:
wkyik
00:22:054 (8) - 我的話會在這裡NC一下, 突出一下Bass, 做的話 01:44:635 (7) 也做
00:42:700 (10) - NC會易讀點?
01:10:280 (5,6) - 可以blanket好點;w;
01:20:764 (6,7,8) - 這樣放? 因為(5,6) 不跳怪怪的
SPOILER
02:05:603 (9) - 感覺去掉這個note比較好;w;
02:34:312 (1,2) - 不要overlap?
02:44:312 - streams可以這裡開始唷 >.0
03:02:700 (1) - 這一段滿喜歡的
03:17:538 (6) - 來個stream吧
03:23:506 (2,3,4) - 如果跟音樂逐漸向上的話我會這樣放然後 03:23:829 (4,5) 成大跳 :
SPOILER
04:10:441 (4) - 感覺NC比較好
fun map

好圖! 不射不行!
Good Luck!!

Thanks for mod and all fixed >w<
New: http://puu.sh/4r8O7.osu

Princess God

135 posts

Joined June 2010

Princess God 2013-09-16T02:58:30+00:00

嗯，不好意思拖这么久才来……最近实在忙
~~假殴新恁！~~
老规矩建议最好改

1PSA`s Normal
*00:16:905 (3) - 改成一个二分拍的slider或者二分拍的单折返slider都行
*00:57:873 加一个note
*00:58:195 (3) - nc
*01:00:776 (3) - 两头都加上normal-clap音效（选定要改的物件之后在additions一栏选择normal）
01:11:099 (3) - 也是一个意见
*01:02:712 (2) - 头上的音效加上normal-finish，并在结尾处加一个normal-clap01:13:034 (2) - 也是一个意见
*01:24:647 (1) - 头上的音效改为normal clap
注：以上三条后面的类似部分也可以这么来
*02:04:808 加一个二分拍的silider
*02:58:841~03:02:389 加一个spinner
*03:38:679 加个note，同时 03:38:841 (3) - 头部加上normal finish音效
03:47:066 03:49:002都可以加上，参考综合1
综合1：本来我想加几个二分拍的三连点的那种节奏，不过看你全篇没用过，所以就没写，但是我觉得normal的话，用几个应该问题不大吧！比如说像 02:25:131 还有类似的地方，加上是完全没有违和的，相反应该能更加衬托气氛
综合2：所有的类似00:42:712 (3) - 01:08:518 (3) - 大概可以考虑统统nc掉

wkyik
00:01:570 (3) - 三连就够了感觉，五连太繁琐
*00:24:958 (10) - nc，然后00:25:280 (1) - 取消nc，01:50:119 (10,11,1) - 也是一个意见
*00:42:700 (10) - nc
*00:57:054 (1,2,3,4) - 改成逆时针，从原来的4开始
*01:28:667 加上三连或者换成单折返短滑条，还有01:29:151和01:29:232，总觉得少点啥
*02:15:603 (8) - nc，同时02:16:248 (1) - 取消nc
*02:18:829 (1,2,1,2) - 做成中心对称的排列会好些
*02:20:603 (3) - nc
*02:25:925 (6) - nc
*03:54:958 (4) - nc
*04:14:797 (6) - 不拉个滑条？

Hard
*00:10:050 加个note
*00:32:550 加个note
*01:03:276 和 01:03:599 加一个note
*01:12:953加一个note……（我不是故意的）
综合3：其实，就算是hard多一些这种flow也完全无问题，后面也有许多地方可以这么订正，我就不骗稿费了233
*01:28:034 (5) - 改成note，01:28:357 加一个note，spinner延后一个二分拍
*03:05:292 (1,2,3,4) - 每次转个九十度就完事了

什么？你说为什么越到后面的难度mod的地方就越少了？
其实是这样，综合1和综合2对于后面两个难度都适用，而且能改许多地方，算是比较大的建议，如果全部罗列出来你肯定看着不舒服，如果你觉得这意见不好，大概还觉得很烦，为了避免这种情况，我就直接综合走起了

1PSA

119 posts

Joined November 2010

1PSA 2013-09-19T09:42:38+00:00

@615915887,麻烦你帮我改了，我实在懒得动了，而且开学之后作业真的好多

[quote="Nightcore Princess G"][/quote]
其实我会说本来我做的是easy，后来改成了normal，所以没有二分拍

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2013-09-19T14:55:01+00:00

我改了一些，~~就懒得写了~~
psa的diff改了一些我觉得可以改的(fix some blanket)
柚子你的tags帮你改了
话说为毛我们的kiai都不一样啊

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2013-10-22T15:59:26+00:00

hello~
来自mapper群
摸的很快肯定有些地方没有摸到，不过还是有些地方可以改进。
射一发

General
记得最近Natsu刚刚rank了一张同样的歌，这歌真是很火。。

bg六花似乎有点崩，不妨碍

1PSA's Normal
建议这么快的歌normal怎么这么低的sv，不痛快啊，另外ar+1
另外折返箭头使用太多，减少几个吧
00:05:937 (1,1) - 转盘太短而且之后很快就是note不科学，打的时候如果ar不加的话你会发现滑条在转盘出现没多久后就出现了
01:01:421 (1,2) - 我觉得这里不是很好看，明明不是两个对称滑条却要摆对称
02:01:421 (2) - 滑条覆盖音略多，和你之前的节奏相比反而是缓了，虽然这个梗有点意思
02:16:260 (1,2,3,4) - 对称摆的好看些不要让滑条本身斜着
03:02:712 - 这段break略长且后边的音效下的不喜欢，口哨还好但是声音要小些
03:26:582 (3,1) - 不要非得追求对称。。可以摆的流线一点

Hard
打的有点爽，盼rank
00:57:873 (1) - 为何加note？blanket不正好么？
01:28:034 (5) - 延长半拍我觉得更好
03:01:421 - 似乎break有点大
03:16:260 (2) - vocal在这滑条的前面1/2，我觉得压这个好些

wkyik
打不了，跳太大。。

渣mod仅是一点建议，排版很好，学习了

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2013-10-23T04:16:42+00:00

fix most of it
打死natsu

Atrue

osu! Alumni

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Atrue 2013-10-23T05:07:55+00:00

615915887 wrote:
fix most of it
打死natsu

今早我还看见他看这帖呢~

CET 6

365 posts

Joined August 2012

CET 6 2013-10-24T16:27:51+00:00

HI~ 不怎么会MOD，如有冒犯请见谅

General

AImod 里的问题（timing different

1PSA's Normal

00:26:744 (2) - 这个是为了跟vocal嘛？可是听起来感觉节奏断了
00:31:744 (2,1,2) - 感觉00:33:034 (1,2) - 的布局可以改变一下
00:40:131 (3) - 个人感觉尾巴向左偏比较顺flow
00:42:389 (2) - 或许这个用NC 00:40:776 (1) - 这个NC去掉
00:47:550 (4) - new vocal在滑条尾部开始，感觉不是很好
01:22:066 (1,2,1) - 感觉这里有点丑哈哈哈

Hard

真是hard
感觉滑条太长了- -
00:14:970 (1) - 这个感觉flow不顺，或许可以试试叠到00:14:324 (8) - 的头 00:15:453 (2) - 叠到00:14:647 (9) - 的头 00:15:937 (3,4) - 和前2个滑条半重叠后面相应调整
00:35:776 (1,2,3) - 感觉这个有点丑··
01:27:228 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这个对于hard有点难
03:25:615 (6,7) - 这种梗出镜率好高
03:36:260 (6) - 这个形状或许可以调整一下

wkyik

00:14:635 (10,1,2) -这个布局感觉有点··
01:08:183 (5) - 坑
01:21:409 (10) - 或许这个开头可以加个finish 后面也是类似的

大概就这样了

Good Luck

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2013-10-25T02:28:16+00:00

Fix some of it
@wkyik 快来改diff

Asgard

639 posts

Joined June 2011

Asgard 2013-10-25T11:59:30+00:00

[Hard]
00:05:442 (1) - overlap here. i recommended to move 2 grid right
00:07:700 (2) - place on 72, 136
00:10:764 (8) - maybe NC?
00:25:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about this pattern? try use this code

38,205,25281,6,12,P|63:117|129:58,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,148,25764,2,12,P|205:103|294:108,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,140,26248,2,0,P|385:184|373:226,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,272,26571,2,0,P|301:300|340:303,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,288,26894,2,0,P|447:329|441:373,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,228,27377,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:36:087 (2,3) - more curve each 5 and 10 degree
00:59:152 (2) - stack on yellow 2 slider's end
01:06:571 (1,2) - i hate this shape.. not beauty
01:07:055 (2) - stack on 7 slider's end
01:11:410 (2) - it toucehd HPbar
01:47:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as 00:25:281 -
02:14:152 (2) - just use 3 slider points. make simply
02:17:377 (5) - reverse
02:23:023 (7) - ^
02:35:603 (6) - it touched HPbar
02:39:474 (1) - remove whistle on start of slider. it doesen't fit on song
02:40:442 (3) - remove whistle on end of slider
02:42:377 - too long break time... i think you should make on 02:52:377 - here
03:03:345 (1,1,1) - not good pattern... try use this pattern on this part http://puu.sh/4Z2Kn.jpg
03:20:764 (1,2,3,4) - square is not perfect http://puu.sh/4Z2Nj.jpg
03:31:571 (6,7) - how about like this? http://puu.sh/4Z2Oy.jpg
03:35:442 (3) - remove this circle
03:55:442 - http://puu.sh/4Z2Uf.jpg
04:08:184 (6) - overlap
04:08:990 (2,3,4) - unrank stuff because it can't see repeat arrow

[wkyik]
00:07:700 (3) - maybe reverse?
00:10:926 (9) - ^
i guess you must add more New Combo on Note and slider which have 10↑

actually Hard looks like Insane and Normal looks like Easy...
i think you must add real Hard
Normal SV - 0.8 Hard SV - 1.8
1.0 is really really huge...
consider add Hard and remake normal

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

YoshinoSakura 2013-11-03T11:41:26+00:00

fix some of it
I'm considering how to change the mapset
thx

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Zero__wind wrote:

vahn10 wrote:

Graph1te Edge wrote:

Cah-m wrote:

Cah-m wrote:

Cah-m wrote:

General

1PSA's Normal

Hard

wkyik

happy623 wrote:

wkyik

615915887 wrote:

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