1. Advanced (2,46 stars, 215 notes)
2. Normal (1,72 stars, 164 notes)
3. Sakata's Hyper (3,37 stars, 286 notes)
4. Saturnalize's Ex (4,48 stars, 444 notes)
5. wendao's Basic (1,2 stars, 96 notes)

• 00:11:179 (3) - i think there should a Kiai time until 00:39:179 (5) -

• I think ur Standard are too EZ as like as a Normal ._. So I just mod it as Normal...

• 01:29:624 (2,4) - i think these notes are too fast for beginners

• 01:31:624 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i don't think new babies can read this kind of note...OAO

• 01:35:846 (2,4) - same with the first one

• 00:12:957 (1,2,3) - change to a slider would be more easiler for normal ^^

• 00:13:624 (4,5) - y they were so far ._.

• 00:14:290 (1) - the slider's end y don'n try to be at 00:14:735 - ?

• 00:14:735 (2) - del note

• 00:30:068 (4) - maybe it can be shorten to one return...ended at00:30:513 - and add a circle at 00:30:735 -

• 00:32:068 (1) - no return is more better~

• 00:32:068 (1,2) - too close ._.

• 00:43:179 (8,1) - y don't just copy 00:39:624 (5,6,7) - ? I do think it is better~

• 00:34:068 (1) - Note should be started at00:34:290 (5) - and with 1 return only~

• 01:30:735 (1) - with out NC

• just one thing.....i think it is better to remap...almost half of the notes are not snapped ._.

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Piyoko_9796 wrote:

[General]

• 00:11:179 (3) - i think there should a Kiai time until 00:39:179 (5) -

Well the second kiai give more impact than the first one, so I'll keep on have one kiai time

• I think ur Standard are too EZ as like as a Normal ._. So I just mod it as Normal...

Yes, It was supposed to be Normal diff

[beginner]

• 01:29:624 (2,4) - i think these notes are too fast for beginners

Fixed~

• 01:31:624 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i don't think new babies can read this kind of note...OAO

Fixed~change into another pattern

• 01:35:846 (2,4) - same with the first one

Fixed~

[Standard]

• 00:12:957 (1,2,3) - change to a slider would be more easiler for normal ^^

Rejected~I keep It that way

• 00:13:624 (4,5) - y they were so far ._.

Fixed~reduce spacing

• 00:14:290 (1) - the slider's end y don'n try to be at 00:14:735 - ?

But It sound weird to me imo

• 00:14:735 (2) - del note

Rejected~I follow the flute sound

• 00:30:068 (4) - maybe it can be shorten to one return...ended at00:30:513 - and add a circle at 00:30:735 -

Rejected~ I don't think so, It fit well with the next pattern

• 00:32:068 (1) - no return is more better~

But It sound weird to me imo

• 00:32:068 (1,2) - too close ._.

Fixed~

• 00:43:179 (8,1) - y don't just copy 00:39:624 (5,6,7) - ? I do think it is better~

Rejected~The slider look better like that

• 00:34:068 (1) - Note should be started at00:34:290 (5) - and with 1 return only~

I don't think so, It fit well with the next pattern

• 01:30:735 (1) - with out NC

Fixed~

懂中文的嗎((掩面;w;
((just ignore it if u don't understand^^

Loli Cjj wrote:

http://puu.sh/3W8Yo.osu

Diff title as EX because your put popnmusic as source, which is the mapset should be EZ, NM, HD, EX

But you can change it, ofc!

Also, don't forget to put my name on tags

DX5536 wrote:

M4M
[Beginner]
Distance and rhythm
00:10:262 (1,2) - This wil confuse new player, try something like this Fixed

SPOILER

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/945763

00:11:151 (3) - NC Ok
00:13:374 (1) - remove NC Ok
00:14:262 (4) - I know this is beginner but, new player need to learn hard thing too, something like this maybe No, I keep It that way

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the sounds also sound better to the rhythm

00:56:040 (2,3,4) - 00:59:596 (2,3,4) - 01:03:151 (2,3,4) - Their place will confuse newbies, i'm pretty sure newbies will think 2 at red tick instead of white Fixed
01:19:596 (5) - is kinda out of the screen, you know Fixed, thanks for reminding

Hitsounds
00:10:707 (2) - Whistle
00:16:484 (3) - i would recommend you to use a repeat slider here and add Clap at the repeat point
00:17:818 (1) - Finish
00:19:596 (3) - Whistle
00:23:151 (4) - here too
00:28:485 (1) - Clap
00:30:707 (4) - i would recommend you to use a repeat slider here and add Clap at the repeat point
00:35:596 (1,2,3) - Maybe clap at those repeat points?
00:53:818 (1,3) - 00:57:374 (1,3) - 01:00:929 (1,3) - 01:04:485 (1) - (1= at the repeat point) clap
01:30:262 (3) - end: Finish
01:32:929 (1) - Finish
01:46:707 (2) - clap instead of whistle
01:50:707 (3) - end: Finish

[Standard]
Distance and rhythm
00:13:151 (1,2) - Slider instead of circle No, I follow the flute sound
01:32:261 (4,5) - I thought this is Normal, if yes then del the note at blue tick No, that was the hard part, Normal+ btw
01:34:485 (1,2,3) - ^ Same as above

Hitsounds
00:12:929 (3,6) - Clap instead
00:16:929 (4) - Finish
00:17:818 (1,1) - Clap
00:20:040 (2) - End: Finish
00:21:373 (1,2,3) - Whistle the whole slider, not only at the beginning etc.
00:27:151 (2) - End: Finish
00:28:485 (4) - Clap
00:31:151 (5,6) - Finish
00:32:929 (2,4) - (4= begining of the slider) clap, instead of whistle at 4
00:38:707 (4) - Finish at begining and end, not repeat point
00:39:596 (5) - remv Finish
01:12:930 (1,3) - (3= beginig) Finish Del 2 finish
01:16:485 (1,3) - ^ same here
01:20:041 (1,3) - ^
01:23:597 (1,3) - ^ but del 3 end point finish too
01:27:151 (1,3) - ^
01:39:596 (2,4) - (4= beginig) clap
01:44:929 (1,4) - (begining) clap
01:50:707 (4) - Finish

After all your map is pretty good, but consider about the amount of Whistle in Beginner, Standard and kapursirih's Another.
Pls right what you fixed or not, i'm kinda curious . If there is any questions, PM me

Good luck ~

kapursirih wrote:

http://puu.sh/4aiEK.osu

updated diff, more hitsound, more notes,..


modding

beginner
stiap nomer, lebih sreg klo satu kesatuan

1. 00:21:387 slider dari 00:21:387 smpe ke 00:21:818 dilanjutkan slider dari 00:22:262 smpe ke 00:22:707
ubah ke ini http://puu.sh/4agqg.jpg bntuk slider melingkar, circle brikutnya mulai dari tengah puteran tadi http://puu.sh/4ags1.jpg Kesannya jadi lebih susah kak, aku lebih prefer slider yang agak panjang buat easy

2. dilanjutkan lagi 00:23:596 (5) - diganti slider biasa berhenti di 00:24:484 dilanjutkan circle di 00:24:929 dilanjutkan slider di 00:25:373 smpe 00:26:262 repeatslider 1x Kesannya jadi lebih susah kak, aku lebih prefer slider yang agak panjang buat easy

3. 00:32:484 smpe 00:34:262 dikosongin, soalnya tiba2 dibagian itu lebih kosong Ada suara flute kok kak, lebih baik diisi

4. 01:25:818 slider nomer 5 digeser ke sebelahnya, kyk gini http://puu.sh/4ahhd.jpg supaya pas dgn patern 2circle 2circle Memang bagus, tapi itu sengaja kak

gitu aja kali ya, snappingnya udah bener, asal dibawah 1 dan konsisten

standard
hmm aku langsung keinget map miharu, sliderrepeatnya banyak XD

1. aku saranin sih pas bagian yg banyak suaranya jangan banyak dikosongin, misal "sliderepeat kosong sliderrepeat kosong" >> diganti jadi gini lebih bagus >>"sliderpendek/dobel circle slider panjang sliderpendek/dobel circle slider panjang" kyk di 00:13:818 smpe 00:17:373, aku lebih prefer mapping kyk gini http://puu.sh/4ahKC.jpg kesannya jadi lebih banyak keisi dgn circle yg masih sama dgn yg sebelumnya, circle circle nya udah pas kok di timeline, cuma mungkin lebih divariatifkan supaya ga kerasa 'kosong' yg kujelasin tadi. Aku ngikutin suara flute kak, jadi ada sedikit jeda atau kosong

2. 00:17:818 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G supaya spacing lebih deket Ini udah sesuai kok kak sama distance snaping 0.8, jadi kurang lebih sama aja

3. 00:57:373 (1) - spacing dgn yg sebelumnya kykny sengaja 2.0, kykny terlalu gede, ga tau deng, coba tanya yg lain dulu Fixed, makasih kak udah diingetin XD

4. 01:34:484 wahh ada triplet, ganti slder mungkin biar lebih gampangan XD Sengaja kak itu bagian susahnya, aku mau ada yang miss di situ XD

hmmm gitu aja kali ya, koreksi yaaa map easy normal mmng cocokny buat mapper yg seneng simplifikasi,. XD

*selamat anda orang pertama yg pernah saya modding

• 00:14:484 (3) -
  00:20:707 (5) -
  00:28:707 (6) -
  00:34:040 (1) - (then next note NC)
  00:34:929 (7) -
  01:12:262 (5) -
  01:18:040 (4) -
  01:26:040 (5) -
  01:36:040 (4) -
  01:40:929 (1) - (then prev note NC)
  01:44:262 (4) -

SPOILER

• 00:23:151 (1) - x 168 y 304
  00:23:373 (2) - x 296 y 252
  00:23:596 (3) - x 188 y 168
  00:23:818 (4,5,6) - x 218 y 242

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hi =D

From your modding queue (M4M)

[Easy]
00:30:262 (3) - This circle is better at x:312 y:172 Ok
00:56:929 (4) - Maybe you can place this circle at x:256 y:232 (for don't break the distance snap with 00:57:374 (1) ) Fixed, thanks for reminding
00:59:596 (2,3) - Here interchange the circles Fixed, thanks for reminding
01:19:151 (4,5) - The circle over the slider is too hard for a beginner =/ I guess no, unless the next slider border not seen

[Standart]
00:52:929 (3) - This circle is better at x:256 y:144 I keep it that way

That's it =3

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m www
[General]audio bit rate is larger than 192kbps, pls change the mp3 file and take care of ur timing after it Yeah I know, but I can't find or lower the bitrate myself I hope someone will help to fix it
[Standard]lots of part didn't blanket well, not a serious problem thou
others r just fine :)
[Beginner]00:21:818 (3) - reverse I don't get it
01:47:151 (3) - ^ I don't get it
00:33:818 (1,2,3) - idk if ds can be changed in easy diff... Well, it's still readable though
00:53:818 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^, it's better not imo Fixed, thanks for reminding
and more ^ Fixed, thanks for reminding
01:15:151 (4) - bent this? No

hmm... not quite a easy diff 0.0
nekomata again lol
good luck

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m www
[General]audio bit rate is larger than 192kbps, pls change the mp3 file and take care of ur timing after it Yeah I know, but I can't find or lower the bitrate myself I hope someone will help to fix it u need a audio software to low down the audio bit rate, just like audition or something. and when u change the mp3, u must redo the timing work, coz the mp3 file's offset can't be unchanged. maybe u can find some timer help u, or it's impossible to get ranked, be serious on this! D:
[Standard]lots of part didn't blanket well, not a serious problem thou
others r just fine :)
[Beginner]00:21:818 (3) - reverse I don't get it reverse = ctrl+g
01:47:151 (3) - ^ I don't get it

kapursirih wrote:

if bitrate is too high maybe i can convert to 128 with my foobar, if u like, i will try to convert it

Setsurei wrote:

[LC's EX]
delete this, seems overmapped, and imo I prefer 3 taps rather than 4 (4 taps are weird) - Rejected all, I'm following flute ಠ_ಠ

• 00:14:484 (3) -
  00:20:707 (5) -
  00:28:707 (6) -
  00:34:040 (1) - (then next note NC)
  00:34:929 (7) -
  01:12:262 (5) -
  01:18:040 (4) -
  01:26:040 (5) -
  01:36:040 (4) -
  01:40:929 (1) - (then prev note NC)
  01:44:262 (4) -

01:31:151 (1,1,1,1) - overmapped, add more gap and reduce the return ): - changed

now for the placement
00:10:262 (1,2) - nice, iswydt :3 - ;D
00:21:818 (2) - red point x 176 y 124, tail point x 132 y 80 - nope, I want to keep the gap between sliderpath same.
00:22:262 (3) - x 80 y 120 - no, refer to above
00:22:707 (4) - x 16 y 148 - no, refer to above
00:23:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - prefer like this? - no, spacing conflict

SPOILER

• 00:23:151 (1) - x 168 y 304
  00:23:373 (2) - x 296 y 252
  00:23:596 (3) - x 188 y 168
  00:23:818 (4,5,6) - x 218 y 242

00:26:262 (3) - tail point x 332 y 60 < blanket 00:25:373 (1) - head - It fits perfect already . . .
00:30:262 (4) - center point x 312 y 212, tail point x 348 y 248 - Done
00:37:818 (1) - x 336 y 172, center point x 284 y 224, tail point x 212 y 208 - Won't change the head position, sorry.
00:38:262 (2) - x 180 y 176 - Refer to above
00:52:929 (1) - x 452 y 200 - I like this position, no
00:53:373 (2) - x 440 y 184 - Refer to above, but changed because inconsistency visual spacing between before and after the note.
00:53:818 (1) - x 408 y 176 - Refer to above
00:54:262 (2) - x 268 y 108 - Refer to above
00:54:707 (3) - x 176 y 236 - Refer to above
00:55:151 (4) - x 112 y 92 - Refer to above
01:16:707 (3) - x 392 y 212 - sharp curve intended
01:45:373 (1) - center point x 164 y 64, tail point x 208 y 40 - done

DX5536 wrote:

Why is the hitsounds different

Graph1te Edge wrote:

Hi from Unlimited Queue Works


[kapursirih's Another]
*00:23:929 (3) - Move to 156;72
*00:24:040 (4) - ^ 132;64
*00:28:373 (3) - ^ 176;52
*00:28:484 (4) - ^ 192;36
*00:30:929 (2,3,4) - Add more spacing, try this:

SPOILER

fix
*00:31:373 (5,6,7) - ^
*00:36:707 (1) - Stack with 00:35:818 (1) -
*00:37:596 (1) - ^
*00:53:151 (8) - Delete and extend the stream to 00:53:373 - fix fix
*01:07:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as 00:30:929 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
*01:12:373 (4) - Move to 156;196
*01:12:484 (5) - ^ 140;184


I conclude about your mod,
about spacing triplet, okey I just finish remap and make triplet spacing like that, thanks
about stream, just remap and extend just like your mod, thanks
about positioning, because I just remap , I can't use your mod, sorry,
but thanks for mod my map

GL!

Nazalion wrote:

Kapursirih Another

00:02:262 - jadiin kaya gini change, thnks
01:08:262 - di mundurin 01:08:040 abis diremap, bagian itu bukan spinning lagi, cuma draining time
01:23:596 - buat slider ampe 01:23:707 abis di remap, bagian itu jadi streaming pendek
01:36:707 - giniin abis remap, bagian itu lebih ke circle jumping, maaf
01:47:151 (2) - ganti whistle aja lebih suka sebelumnya

udah sekian hehe

Hollow Wings wrote:

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m www
[General]audio bit rate is larger than 192kbps, pls change the mp3 file and take care of ur timing after it Yeah I know, but I can't find or lower the bitrate myself I hope someone will help to fix it u need a audio software to low down the audio bit rate, just like audition or something. and when u change the mp3, u must redo the timing work, coz the mp3 file's offset can't be unchanged. maybe u can find some timer help u, or it's impossible to get ranked, be serious on this! D: just converted, I think timing is not necessary because duration mp3 still same

kapursirih wrote:

update 192kbps CBR, pas diganti langsung mp3 nya, timingnya masih pas tuh

updated diff
http://puu.sh/4fhvC.osu

Nazalion wrote:

numpang GD

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 19. .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 10707
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.9
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Caral no Tsuki
TitleUnicode:カラルの月
Artist:Nekomata Gekidan
ArtistUnicode:猫叉劇団
Creator:Mako Sakata
Version:Nazal Rainy
Source:pop'n music 20 fantasia
Tags:nekomata master konami arcade crevice kapursirih theramdans loli cjj
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:9
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"kararaBG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
485,444.444444444444,4,2,0,50,1,0
10707,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,50,0,0
34262,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
39596,-200,4,2,0,50,0,0
53818,-153.846153846154,4,2,0,50,0,0
69818,-80,4,2,0,50,0,1
97373,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
111151,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
119484,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,149,202
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 206,157,255

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344,96,24262,2,0,L|400:96,2,53.9999983520508
232,96,24707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,96,24929,2,0,B|152:60|152:60|112:152,1,215.999993408203,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,160,25818,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,184,26040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,144,26262,2,0,P|172:128|72:152,1,215.999993408203,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,240,26929,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,216,27151,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,196,27373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,160,27596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,232,27818,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,320,28040,2,0,P|220:272|312:332,1,215.999993408203,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,308,28707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,308,28818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,308,28929,2,0,L|48:260,1,161.999995056153
100,244,29373,6,0,L|212:200,1,107.999996704102
416,248,29818,2,0,L|296:200,1,107.999996704102
200,204,30262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,204,30484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,204,30707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,204,30929,6,0,P|416:176|460:180,1,107.999996704102
232,136,31373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,124,31596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,108,31818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,136,32040,2,0,P|360:116|456:144,1,215.999993408203
300,192,32929,2,0,P|176:212|56:172,2,215.999993408203
196,244,34040,5,2,0:0:0:0:
92,268,34262,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,288,34484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,224,34707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,220,34929,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,288,35151,2,0,P|116:308|212:280,1,180
312,284,35818,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,36040,2,0,B|340:200|340:200|424:144,1,180
252,192,36707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,36929,2,0,B|172:200|172:200|88:144,1,180
252,192,37596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,136,37818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38040,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,38484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,132,38707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,38929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,136,39151,2,0,L|404:104,1,90
220,48,39596,6,0,L|24:48,2,180,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,128,41818,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,136,42262,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,136,42707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,208,43151,2,0,L|460:212,2,180,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,136,45373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,136,45817,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,128,46262,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,212,46707,2,0,L|32:208,2,180,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,152,48929,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,152,49373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,152,49818,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,116,50262,2,2,L|352:116,2,180,10|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,164,52484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,164,52596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,196,52707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,196,52818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,224,52929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,224,53040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,244,53151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,244,53262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,276,53373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,276,53484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,224,53596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,172,53818,6,0,L|8:172,1,116.999994644165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,54484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,172,54707,2,0,L|492:172,1,116.999994644165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,55373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,55596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,55818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,56040,6,0,L|0:164,1,116.999994644165,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,56707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,180,56929,2,0,L|500:188,1,116.999994644165,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,57596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,180,57818,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,172,58040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,168,58262,2,0,L|24:148,1,116.999994644165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,160,58929,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,59151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,164,59373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,164,59596,2,0,L|312:184,1,87.749995983124,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,264,60040,2,0,L|228:248,1,87.749995983124,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,164,60484,2,0,L|312:184,1,87.749995983124,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,176,60929,2,0,L|376:136,1,233.999989288331,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,62040,5,2,0:0:0:0:
316,72,62262,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,72,62484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,72,62707,2,0,L|264:72,2,116.999994644165,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,64040,6,0,L|224:144,1,116.999994644165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,64707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,136,64929,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,136,65151,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,136,65373,2,0,L|480:140,1,233.999989288331,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,96,66484,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,96,66596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,96,66707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,66929,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,67040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,67151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,67373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,67484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,67596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,184,67818,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,188,68040,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68151,12,0,69596,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69707,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,180,69818,2,0,L|20:152,1,112.5
340,184,70262,2,0,L|484:160,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,180,70707,2,0,L|28:144,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,252,71151,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,280,71373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,208,71596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,212,71818,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,280,72040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,340,72262,2,0,L|252:344,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,268,72707,2,0,L|260:268,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,256,73151,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,256,73262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,256,73373,2,0,L|-32:204,1,168.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,188,73818,2,0,L|320:140,1,168.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,112,74262,2,0,L|-32:40,1,168.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,104,74707,2,0,L|464:184,1,225
352,200,75373,5,2,0:0:0:0:
236,232,75596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,188,75818,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,244,76040,2,0,B|96:216|96:216|208:176,1,225,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,212,76707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,76929,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,77040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,77151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,244,77373,2,0,L|428:176,1,168.75
132,248,77818,2,0,L|-24:152,1,168.75
260,132,78262,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,128,78484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,168,78707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,88,78929,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,132,79151,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,180,79373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,232,79596,2,0,L|32:232,1,225,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,232,80262,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,232,80373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,232,80484,2,0,L|408:232,2,225
264,228,81596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,81818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,228,82040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,232,82262,6,0,L|32:100,1,112.5
164,108,82707,2,0,L|232:104,2,56.25
404,172,83151,2,0,L|288:172,1,112.5
144,256,83596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,264,83707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,268,83818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,272,83929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,272,84040,2,0,L|400:120,1,168.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,84484,6,0,L|104:40,1,168.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,192,84929,2,0,L|416:44,1,168.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,60,85373,2,0,L|172:44,1,112.5
108,116,85818,5,2,0:0:0:0:
232,136,86040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,176,86262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,208,86484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,236,86707,2,0,B|256:288|256:288|140:336,1,225
352,324,87373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,324,87484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,324,87596,6,0,L|388:152,1,168.75
160,316,88040,2,0,L|120:120,1,168.75
352,324,88484,2,0,L|388:124,1,168.75
160,316,88929,2,0,L|120:124,1,168.75
156,124,89373,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,124,89596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,92,89818,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,84,90040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,44,90262,2,0,L|372:44,1,225
476,68,90929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,68,91040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,68,91151,2,0,L|476:184,1,112.5
332,168,91596,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,168,91707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,168,91818,2,0,L|196:168,1,112.5
176,172,92151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,176,92262,2,0,L|136:232,1,56.25
372,224,92484,2,0,L|372:288,1,56.25
144,276,92707,2,0,L|144:332,1,56.25
372,316,92929,5,0,0:0:0:0:
152,276,93151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,280,93373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,304,93596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,93818,2,0,L|136:284,1,225
328,204,94484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,204,94596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,204,94707,2,0,B|228:148|228:148|352:96,1,225
360,48,95596,6,0,L|488:48,1,112.5
360,48,96040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,48,96262,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,48,96484,2,2,L|216:48,1,112.5
132,52,96929,1,2,0:0:0:0:
28,56,97151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,128,97373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,128,97484,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,132,97596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,132,97707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,136,97818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,136,97892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,136,97966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,136,98040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,140,98114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,140,98188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,208,98262,6,0,P|216:224|140:192,1,180
248,136,98929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,99151,2,0,L|504:288,1,135
268,220,99596,2,0,L|176:328,1,135
384,172,100040,2,0,L|244:112,1,135
32,160,100484,2,0,L|196:128,1,135
428,112,100929,2,0,L|256:160,1,135
216,172,101373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,101596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,324,101818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,102040,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,268,102151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,264,102262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,264,102373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,256,102484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,256,102596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,248,102707,2,0,L|304:208,1,135
160,212,103151,2,0,L|324:144,1,135
472,160,103596,2,0,L|304:108,1,135
160,136,104040,6,0,L|296:84,1,135
484,56,104484,2,0,L|304:44,1,180
216,52,105151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,100,105373,2,0,L|196:136,1,135
88,184,105818,2,0,L|236:216,1,135
128,256,106262,6,0,L|264:288,1,135
380,308,106707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,224,106929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,160,107151,2,0,L|32:156,2,360
184,200,109151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,109373,6,0,L|212:140,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,232,109818,2,0,L|224:132,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,110262,6,0,L|212:140,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,232,110707,2,0,L|224:132,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,88,111151,5,2,0:0:0:0:
428,80,111373,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,56,111596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,116,112040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,88,112262,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,44,112484,5,6,0:0:0:0:
72,188,112707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,188,112818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,200,112929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,200,113040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,216,113151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,216,113262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,228,113373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,228,113484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,113596,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,113707,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,256,113818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,256,113929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,312,114040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,312,114151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,312,114262,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,114484,12,0,119596,0:0:0:0:

silahkan mapnya dinilai

theramdans wrote:

hmm update my diff

redownload me!

1. How about addding "Gekidan Record" for tags

1. 00:10:262 (1) - move to the place near the center. for easy, it's difficult because short time after 00:07:596 (1) -
2. 00:33:818 (1,2,3) - it is better not to change DS from 0.8x. otherwise, beginner player may be confused
3. 00:52:040 (1) - I suggest to make this spinner 00:50:262~00:52:929
4. 01:19:151 (4,5) - avoid overlap
5. 01:25:818 (5,1) - ^
6. 01:54:262 (1) - end at 01:59:596?

1. 00:10:262 (1) - move to the place near the center. I think a little difficult for normal
2. 00:39:596 (5) - How about NC
3. 00:59:595 (3,4) - I like 2/1 silider for this part
4. 01:32:262 (4,5) - How about changing for a slider. For normal, it's difficult imo.
5. 01:34:707 (3,4) - the following is better
   
6. 01:46:485 (3) - it is better to delete
7. 01:54:262 (1) - same as beginner

1. 00:34:263 (1,2) - it is better to align in a straight line
2. 01:07:819 (4) - a slider is better : 01:07:596~01:07:818
3. 01:08:040 (1) - "soft-hitnormal.wav" is not suitable
4. 01:13:152 (4) - move to x:252 y:252
5. 01:13:263 (5) - move to x:284 y:228
6. 01:27:374 (4) - move to x:252 y:136
7. 01:27:485 (5) - move to x:284 y:160
8. 01:56:040 (1) - "soft-hitnormal.wav" is not suitable

1. 00:34:262 (7) - NC
2. 00:35:818 (2) - remove whistle

1. 00:59:818- I want to add a note
2. 01:03:373- ^
3. 01:32:484 (1) - cool!

RandomEffect wrote:

[LC's EX]

1. 00:59:818- I want to add a note - Intended, I was following the bass, not the timpani (or what it should called)
2. 01:03:373- ^
3. 01:32:484 (1) - cool! - ofc #slapped

~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. How about addding "Gekidan Record" for tags Ok~

[Beginner]

1. 00:10:262 (1) - move to the place near the center. for easy, it's difficult because short time after 00:07:596 (1) - It almost near the center, I geuss it's still ok
2. 00:33:818 (1,2,3) - it is better not to change DS from 0.8x. otherwise, beginner player may be confused Fixed, and a bit re-arrangement~
3. 00:52:040 (1) - I suggest to make this spinner 00:50:262~00:52:929 Ok~
4. 01:19:151 (4,5) - avoid overlap Fixed~
5. 01:25:818 (5,1) - ^ Well I geuss it's ok, no one mention it before though
6. 01:54:262 (1) - end at 01:59:596? Ok~

[Standard]

1. 00:10:262 (1) - move to the place near the center. I think a little difficult for normal Ok~
2. 00:39:596 (5) - How about NC Ok~
3. 00:59:595 (3,4) - I like 2/1 silider for this part :)
4. 01:32:262 (4,5) - How about changing for a slider. For normal, it's difficult imo. Well no changes in this one, I need a part that a bit harder
5. 01:34:707 (3,4) - the following is better Ok~
   
6. 01:46:485 (3) - it is better to delete Ok~
7. 01:54:262 (1) - same as beginner Ok~

I like Nekomata's song very much! <3
but the maps of pop'n music are so hard... Indeed !
~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~



[kapursirih's Another]

1. 00:34:262 (7) - NC how about NC in (6) instead 00:34:074
2. 00:35:818 (2) - remove whistle no

~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

[theramdans's Hyper]

1. 00:34:263 (1,2) - it is better to align in a straight line
2. 01:07:819 (4) - a slider is better : 01:07:596~01:07:818 ~ not exactly as you said, but changed to somewhat similar
3. 01:08:040 (1) - "soft-hitnormal.wav" is not suitable ~ it is suitable and fine in my ears
4. 01:13:152 (4) - move to x:252 y:252 ~ OK!
5. 01:13:263 (5) - move to x:284 y:228 ~ ^
6. 01:27:374 (4) - move to x:252 y:136 ~ ^
7. 01:27:485 (5) - move to x:284 y:160 ~ ^
8. 01:56:040 (1) - "soft-hitnormal.wav" is not suitable ~ it is suitable and fine in my ears

Lizbeth wrote:

Hello~

[LC's EX]
All the velocity changes kinda threw me off, it is highly recommended not to use more than three slider velocity in a map because will avoid confusion. - I thought my point of using those sv is quite clear, I'll leave it for now

00:00:485 (1,1,1,1) - I wouldnt recomment do start a map with jumps, especially when the song starts so softly. - Nah, it fits quite greatly imo.

00:14:484 (3,4,5,1) - There s nothing in the song in that section on 1/8, this made me fail all the time. Same for every cases like this, like 00:34:040
(1,2,3,4) - 00:34:707 (5,6,7,8) - etc . Stick to 1/4 with this song. - Ack, haven't give a 25% speed listening, so I thought it plays 1/6 (not 1/8 that you mention). I'll change it. However, parts like 00:34:707 (4,5,6,7) - will get no treatment since it fits with the flute (plays 1/6 on that time)

00:38:707 (3,4,5) - try to keep jumps in single combos. New combo can help read a change on spacing, so a new combo on 3 would work a lot here. - Only on 3.

01:32:484 (1) - isnt snapped properly, do this slider again and be sure to snap reverse spot and end. - It's 1/3

01:37:299 (1,2,3,4) - not snapped - It's 1/6

I didnt like how some parts of the map has perfect symetry, but then other parts are totally freestyle, is good to have consistency. - You mean that slow part in the middle before kiai and before ending? Intended ofc, I don't know what to do to fill that long notes with, while slider art will just . . . ruin my mind.

For that ending . . . it was funny to put it there so I'll let it

. . . at least I don't copy pattern every stanza like that every lazy mapper do!

Lizbeth wrote:

Hello~

[Standard]
This diff needs a lil more work. it has problem in spacing and kinda messy in some parts. And the same thing I mentioned on hyper about the not intentional overlapping: http://puu.sh/4N5BY.jpg
example of mistakes in spacing: 00:24:040 (4,1) - the distance between them is lot shorter compared to other notes that are a beat apart.
00:53:818 - after this section there s some nice claps in the song that maybe you want to take advantage of them, you basically ignore them, it s up to you tho.
in the kiai time spacing is smaller, usually mappers put bigger spacing in kiai time cuz is more "challenging" and blah blah, but switching it to smaller is veeeery confusing and doesnt makes sense in my opinion.
01:32:261 (4,5,6) - I'm not sure about using 1/4 notes if your trying to make this diff a "Normal"
I decide to remap this diff, umm not actually remap though just fixed some you mentioned above, maybe it take a time. And thanks for the advice Fixed~done

[Beginner]
Keep consistence in spacing. Thanks for reminding, changed distance snap to 0.9 to make it more consistence. Fixed~done


There s a problem with the spread of this mapset

from 1.73 to 4.00 and up. it seems like standard should be tone down a bit to fill that gap, cuz I bet you dont want to add another diff to a 5 diffs mapset. Remapped standard diff. Fixed~done

Good luck~

ps. Kiiwa you re a baka~

Lizbeth wrote:

Hello~

[theramdans's Hyper]
hmm im curious about the hitsounds, are completely different than the other.. I guess isnt a problem, but would be good to keep consistency between diffs.
overall the map is fine, but I think it could be more organazing, some sliders are overlapping when is clearly not intentionally, like here: http://puu.sh/4N5qS.jpg, When there so many maps in pending and you want yours ranked, is good to be picky about this stuff.
No other complaints about this diff, I liked it and hitsounds are nice~ Ah thanks , Gotta fix those overlapping sliders~

Jekate wrote:

hola~
gw ga bisa mod sebener nya tp krn mako yg minta, it can't be help

Beginner
00:10:262 - sampai 00:39:596 - baik nya pake normal hitsound aja, kerasa kurang cocok kalo pake soft, sama delete semua whistle kurang cocok imo Heeeem, ada benernya juga, pake soft terlalu lembut sedangkan lagunya uppbeat
00:53:818 - naikin volume nya jadi 40-50% Untuk masalah volume udah aku atur ulang semuanya
saat kiai time 01:09:818 - sampai 01:37:373 - kok volume nya sama kyk yg sebelum nya? coba naikin jd 60% kan ini climax lagunya Okkee~
bagian ini 01:37:373 - baik nya pake normal hitsound aja, sama delete semua whistle Fixed~done
01:54:262 - spinner itu suara nya makin kecil, coba ikutin inherit point nya si loli deh yg itu udah pas Udah aku ikutin, terdengar lebih halus saat volume lagunya turun
untuk flow sama penempatan nya udah ok Iya dooong weeee

Standard
masalah nya sama kaya beginner Fixed~done

segitu aja yg bisa gw bantu mako, and here have my star *