This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2019年9月1日 at 下午 01:20:15

Artist: Mayday
Title: Shang Xin De Ren Bie Ting Man Ge (Guan Che Kuai Le)
Tags: Mayuyu myyP AlpacaCokelat victorica_db Rush_FTK Don'ts Single Sad People Should Not Listen To Slow Songs
BPM: 135
Filesize: 6730kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:

1. Alpaca's Normal (1.8 stars, 226 notes)
2. FTK's Normal+ - 4Key (2.15 stars, 1262 notes)
3. Hard (3.85 stars, 530 notes)
4. Insane (4.69 stars, 616 notes)
5. myyP's Insane (4.78 stars, 740 notes)
6. victorica's Hard - 4Key (3.17 stars, 1841 notes)
7. victorica's Normal - 4Key (1.69 stars, 832 notes)

Download: Mayday - Shang Xin De Ren Bie Ting Man Ge (Guan Che Kuai Le)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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五月天 - 傷心的人別聽慢歌（貫徹快樂）
Alpaca's Normal by jyu
Hard by -HaRuNa-
myyP's Insane by vMAYUYUv
Insane by -HaRuNa-
victorica's Normal by [Emiria]
victorica's Hard by [Emiria]
FTK's 4K Normal+ by Rush_FTK

zhi chi

xie xie ni de xin ku

留名

Hi, from queue :3 i will make the gd for you, but it may take a week or more ><

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi, from queue :3 i will make the gd for you, but it may take a week or more ><

It's ok
thank you

五月天神曲! 希望有地表xDD
如果有太鼓譜的話我會很感恩的(開玩笑的 別介意X
如果以後有太鼓譜的話可以找我幫你Mod呦~ 反正我很閒www

-Eternal Love- wrote:

五月天神曲! 希望有地表xDD
如果有太鼓譜的話我會很感恩的(開玩笑的 別介意X
如果以後有太鼓譜的話可以找我幫你Mod呦~ 反正我很閒www

我不會作太鼓譜
而且已經找2個人來幫我GD了，太多的話mod起來會很痛苦
總之謝謝你 xD
以後有機會的話我會繼續作五月天的歌的 w

Hi, here's your GD >< Normal sorry for really late, i lost my internet since friday ;w;
anyway, i'll leave the diff name to you :3

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi, here's your GD >< Normal sorry for really late, i lost my internet since friday ;w;
anyway, i'll leave the diff name to you :3

OK, Thank you very much

[General]

Try to have a balanced mapset
Your map has one 1.70 star difficulty, and two 4+ difficulties.
Consider making a Hard around 3 stars


[Insane]
Not too much of a problem in this map, but in your future maps try using Grid Size Tiny (ctrl+1).
If you use a larger grid size, the editor rounds to higher numbers for distance snap and other things which isn't great
Using a smaller grid size (or even disabling Grid Snap for certain combos) can make your object placement more accurate, and will allow you to make more precise sliders for blankets and such

00:28:811 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is sort of what I'm referring to about the Grid Snap. Using larger values makes your object placement more limited and you create unsmooth combos such as this
Try to place your objects so that they follow a general curvature

00:35:478 (3) - I don't recommend using a double reverse slider. You should break it up into multiple sliders or hitcircles

00:49:367 (3,4,5,6) - more smooth ^^

01:20:145 (5,6,7) - Using large Grid Snap also makes unstable distance snap such as this

01:44:145 (6,7,8,9,1) - smooth (like these! 01:56:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - )

03:07:256 (1) - I suggest you add two notes 03:07:256 - and 03:07:478 - before spinner start because those are very strong beats
It's good to emphasize strong beats with objects rather than using a weak spinner start

[YuZuKi]

HP 7 fits this map much better. Object density is slightly low for CS 5 & OD 8, so there's not much opportunities to get a lot of HP.
(also you have no breaks and instead have little pauses that drain HP without the player doing anything)

00:43:256 (1) - I suggest two objects before spinner start 00:43:256 - and 00:43:478 - because they are quite strong beats that can be emphasized well by hitcircles

00:50:589 (1,2,3) - I like the idea, but SV increase doesn't fit with the song. I think you should remain at a constant SV

01:00:034 (4,5,6,7) - the spacing is very hard to read. Your two sliders are 1/4 away from each other but the hitcircles are 1/2 away but they all have the same spacing. YOu should space out your (6) and (7) so that they look more like 1/2 beats away

01:49:034 (1) - same two note suggestion as other spinner (I know you might be mapping the vocals, but it's better to map the strong beats and THEN compliment the vocal with the spinner)

03:07:256 (1) - ^

[Normal]

OD3 should fit this map better



good luck~

Frostings wrote:

[General]

Try to have a balanced mapset
Your map has one 1.70 star difficulty, and two 4+ difficulties.
Consider making a Hard around 3 stars


[Insane]
Not too much of a problem in this map, but in your future maps try using Grid Size Tiny (ctrl+1).
If you use a larger grid size, the editor rounds to higher numbers for distance snap and other things which isn't great
Using a smaller grid size (or even disabling Grid Snap for certain combos) can make your object placement more accurate, and will allow you to make more precise sliders for blankets and such

00:28:811 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is sort of what I'm referring to about the Grid Snap. Using larger values makes your object placement more limited and you create unsmooth combos such as this
Try to place your objects so that they follow a general curvature

00:35:478 (3) - I don't recommend using a double reverse slider. You should break it up into multiple sliders or hitcircles

00:49:367 (3,4,5,6) - more smooth ^^

01:20:145 (5,6,7) - Using large Grid Snap also makes unstable distance snap such as this

01:44:145 (6,7,8,9,1) - smooth (like these! 01:56:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - )

03:07:256 (1) - I suggest you add two notes 03:07:256 - and 03:07:478 - before spinner start because those are very strong beats
It's good to emphasize strong beats with objects rather than using a weak spinner start


good luck~

Thanks for your modding~
All fixed

I'll consider making a Hard diff

Hi~From #modreqs channel


祝閣下武運昌盛，地圖早日入榜~！

EDITON1(07/24/2014):

Rush_FTK wrote:

Hi~From #modreqs channel

Mod

正體中文語系不是很熟悉，可能有詞語用錯，在此先見諒。
修圖水平低下，希望能幫上忙。

[General]
My Opinion:
- 可以在音頻質量上讓步來降低osz文件總體積。
- 不知是否還有其他難度的計畫，雖然最新的入榜規則里取消了3個難度中最多只能有一個Insane。但是兩個難度中不能含有Insane的規則仍然存在。由此推知3個難度裏面2個insane可能會被BAT找茬……因此建議添加一個Hard(不高於3.75星)難度。 - 我有時間的話就做吧~


[Insane]
精彩絕倫。
Suggestion:
- 01:22:811 ~ 01:23:034 加一個1/4 snap的折返滑條，Vol.=30%。- 感覺怪怪的

My Opinion:
- 00:13:700 既然後面跟了鼓聲前面也跟一個如何？- 我覺得不用 0.0
- 00:27:034 (5) 換成1/2 snap折返如何？- ^
- 00:47:034 ~ 00:48:367 這裡 - 這裡怎麼了 0.0
- 01:04:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) 這樣？- 這個我會在考慮

- 02:19:478 (1,2,3,4) 希望等距，不一定要直線，折線可能更符合歌曲。- 想說這樣比較好玩
- 03:22:145 還是補一個比較舒服？Fixed

祝閣下武運昌盛，地圖早日入榜~！

謝謝你的mod
話說，做Normal的不是我喔，他應該是不懂中文的 0.0

Hello there from CelsiusLK modding queue

[General]
From AImod
Your mp3 bitrate should be 192kbps you can go search for mp3quality changer program to fix this

[Insane]

• Maybe AR=9

1. 00:03:811 (5) - Delete , I don't hear the beat sound here
2. 00:03:700 (4,5,6) - Looks overmapped try delete (5)
3. 00:06:589 (1,2,3) - Looks overmapped try delete (2)
4. 00:06:700 (2) - Delete , I don't hear the beat sound here
5. 00:07:589 (2) - ^
6. 00:13:700 - Add a note here the beat sound strong here
7. 00:35:923 (4) - Ctrl+G for better flow
8. 00:39:256 (3,3) - Stack
9. 00:49:367 (3,4,5) - Looks overmapped try delete (5) and (3)
10. 00:51:034 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for better flow
11. 00:52:256 (2) - I don't hear beat sound here so delete this
12. 00:53:034 (5,2) - Stack at tail
13. 01:07:367 - Add circle to follow drum sound
14. 01:07:589 (2) - Delete , no beat sound there
15. 01:11:923 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Overmapped on blue line so delete the notes on blue line
16. 01:18:145 (3,4) - Should be circle then slider http://puu.sh/ap3LV/26f6f78af4.jpg
17. 01:44:145 (6,7,8,9,1) - Overmapped try delete (7) and (9)
18. 01:56:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped on blue line so delete the notes on blue line
19. 01:57:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
20. 02:58:589 (1,2,3) - ^
21. 02:59:478 (5,6,7) - ^
22. 03:07:700 (1) - I think putting fast spinner here doesn't fit the song , you can try create an exotic slider to replace the spinner
23. 03:14:145 (6,7,8) - Overmapped try this http://puu.sh/ap3ZO/6b11790ffb.jpg
    I know that overmapped can increase a star diff rating but they're still others way to increase the star diff rating for example you can add more jumps in this map that will increase the star diff rating

[YuZuKi's style]

1. 00:03:811 (4) - I don't hear the beat on this note , delete it
2. 00:05:145 (3) - ^
3. 00:05:700 (6) - I think this is overmapped
4. 00:07:367 (5) - I don't hear the beat on this note , delete it
5. 00:12:811 (7,8,9,10,11) - Looks overmapped, delete (8) and (10)
6. 00:19:367 (4) - I don't hear the beat on this note , delete it
7. 00:20:700 (2) - ^
8. 00:22:478 (2) - ^
9. 00:23:367 (6) - ^
10. 00:39:589 (6) - ^
11. 00:42:700 (4) - ^
12. 00:53:367 (4,6) - ^
13. 01:08:923 (3) - ^
14. 01:12:367 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow
15. 01:14:034 (3,5) - I don't hear the beat on these note , delete them
16. 01:20:478 (8) - ^
17. 01:30:034 (2) - ^
18. 01:24:923 (4) - ^
19. 01:30:034 (2) - ^
20. After this is still has overmapped it's just my thought

Hmm.. guess I will skip normal
Sorry if my mods aren't helpful

Good luck

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hello there from CelsiusLK modding queue

[General]
From AImod
Your mp3 bitrate should be 192kbps you can go search for mp3quality changer program to fix this Fixed

[Insane]

• Maybe AR=9 NO

1. 00:03:811 (5) - Delete , I don't hear the beat sound here but i think it's OK 0.0
2. 00:03:700 (4,5,6) - Looks overmapped try delete (5) ^
3. 00:06:589 (1,2,3) - Looks overmapped try delete (2) ^
4. 00:06:700 (2) - Delete , I don't hear the beat sound here ^
5. 00:07:589 (2) - ^ ^
6. 00:13:700 - Add a note here the beat sound strong here Fixed
7. 00:35:923 (4) - Ctrl+G for better flow No
8. 00:39:256 (3,3) - Stack No
9. 00:49:367 (3,4,5) - Looks overmapped try delete (5) and (3) No
10. 00:51:034 (3,4) - Ctrl+G for better flow No
11. 00:52:256 (2) - I don't hear beat sound here so delete this No
12. 00:53:034 (5,2) - Stack at tail I think it's not necessary
13. 01:07:367 - Add circle to follow drum sound No
14. 01:07:589 (2) - Delete , no beat sound there No
15. 01:11:923 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Overmapped on blue line so delete the notes on blue line ^
16. 01:18:145 (3,4) - Should be circle then slider http://puu.sh/ap3LV/26f6f78af4.jpg ^
17. 01:44:145 (6,7,8,9,1) - Overmapped try delete (7) and (9) ^
18. 01:56:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped on blue line so delete the notes on blue line ^
19. 01:57:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
20. 02:58:589 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
21. 02:59:478 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
22. 03:07:700 (1) - I think putting fast spinner here doesn't fit the song , you can try create an exotic slider to replace the spinner No
23. 03:14:145 (6,7,8) - Overmapped try this http://puu.sh/ap3ZO/6b11790ffb.jpg No
    I know that overmapped can increase a star diff rating but they're still others way to increase the star diff rating for example you can add more jumps in this map that will increase the star diff rating

Hmm.. guess I will skip normal
Sorry if my mods aren't helpful

Good luck

Thanks for your mod
but i really don't want to delete so many circles, i think these are fun to play 0.0

Thank you guys, fix almost :p

Rush_FTK wrote:

EDITON1(07/24/2014):

I'm sorry for my poor English at first.
Suggestion:
- 00:18:589 (1,2)Changed SV=x0.75 there,Since it's easy to shape this slider. keep. the current is fine, i think

My Opinion:
- 00:04:367 ~ 00:05:700 Change to a slider which can turn back at 00:04:589 will consider
- 00:16:811 (1,2,3,4) move a little in order to let it more comfortable to play. fix
http://puu.sh/aoSkx/31444940d8.jpg
- 00:48:811 (4,5) Same as former(00:47:034 (1,2,3)). keep. i like the current rhythm
- 01:15:478 (1,2,3,4) A little difficult?And I don't know which instrument you are follow.
I perfer this: will consider

- 03:00:367 ~ 03:01:034 Simpfy like this? fix

Thank you for mod! and thank you for translating it

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]

Hello from this queues !!
[Normal]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds.
01:15:478
02:21:256
03:02:145
03:09:256
[YuZuKi's style/Insane]
Your map are to good !!



GOOD LUCK !! :D

rhalp10 wrote:

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]

Hello from this queues !!
[Normal]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds.
01:15:478
02:21:256
03:02:145
03:09:256
[YuZuKi's style/Insane]
Your map are to good !!



GOOD LUCK !! :D

Thanks xD

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, -HaRuNa- !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..
That’s All -HaRuNa- ! Good luck !

Special Notes : i mod before you update your beatmap

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, -HaRuNa- !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..

Normal

00:31:478 – add spinner until 00:32:367,
01:08:811 (1) – remove finish,
Only that~

Insane

Nothing to mod 

YuZuKi's style

Nothing to mod 

That’s All -HaRuNa- ! Good luck !

Special Notes : i mod before you update your beatmap

Thanks for your modding

Your welcome
If it's not helping, feel free to tell me.. I'll shoot Kudosu star..

What do you think about my Modding Skills ?
Vote now !

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Your welcome
If it's not helping, feel free to tell me.. I'll shoot Kudosu star..

What do you think about my Modding Skills ?
Vote now !

Umm........
I think not bad

Is your URL "What do you think about my Modding Skills ?" wrong?? 0.0
Maybe this?! https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/228707/start=0&view=viewpoll
If is, i have voted just now

Aaa !! Thank you so much !!

Your Welcome ♥

Here is my mod from the channel on osu! I seperated them into different difficulties for the sake of no wall of text~

Normal

Hard

YuZuKi's Style

Insane

Over all verdict:
I give this map a solid 8/10 where there's solid difficulties, but just maybe there could be an easy difficulty itself, just so some people feel comfortable downloading.

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, -HaRuNa- !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..

Normal

00:31:478 – add spinner until 00:32:367, intentional
01:08:811 (1) – remove finish, ok fix
Only that~

Special Notes : i mod before you update your beatmap

Thank you for mod!!

SuiGeneris wrote:

Here is my mod from the channel on osu! I seperated them into different difficulties for the sake of no wall of text~

Normal

SPOILER

I found that the slow speed matches well with it being a beginner difficulty, and didn't really see any parts that could be deemed too difficult for the average, just wanting to play osu or just starting, player. The hitsounds were tailored very well in my honest opinion. With no awkward cymbol crash or sound that didn't belong. They flowed well with the song. The circles themselves were flowing well too, despite me not knowing the artist or even the language, I had a decent time playing the map myself.

Thank you!!

SuiGeneris wrote:

Here is my mod from the channel on osu! I seperated them into different difficulties for the sake of no wall of text~

Hard

SPOILER

I like how this builds on Normal mode, adding the slightest hint of tougher hitcircles, with the drain and approach rate tuned higher. Felt like it could be a good place for people that are just starting to play some tougher maps to start out, and keep trying until they are satisfied. I saw no way that could ruin someone's time there, good hitsounds and good circle placement and set up.

Insane

SPOILER

I like how the streams flowed with the song (even though I have no chance of doing them myself), in that they were short and not too bunched up. The speed seemed better for the song than the Style difficulty, although that difficulty wasn't too fast either, this just seemed much more comfortable.

Over all verdict:
I give this map a solid 8/10 where there's solid difficulties, but just maybe there could be an easy difficulty itself, just so some people feel comfortable downloading.

Thank you

Hello~ from my modding Queue.

[General]

Offset 820

Add tags YuZuKi

[Normal]

00:07:923 (3) - turn -5 degrees. To get here so http://puu.sh/atbdE/7afb8fde5d.jpg
00:15:034 (3) - I think this slider must change form... http://puu.sh/atbio/824268403d.jpg so it looks neater and easier to play
00:31:923 (x) - add circle or slider (which ends here 00:32:367)
03:16:145 (x) - add note. here sounds a beat and you do not put a note here. it is misleading in the game
03:19:700 (x) - ^
03:23:256 (x) - ^
03:26:811 (x) - ^

[Hard]

00:31:708 (x) - add circle or slider (which ends here 00:32:367)
00:43:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps are not felt in the song and to me they seem out of place here
01:07:486 (1) - remove new combo
02:04:153 (6,7) - These sliders are not visible because of the previous sliders. you can do so. push up a bit and then they will be seen http://puu.sh/atc6s/e4bc9ac91f.jpg
02:06:375 (1) - remove nc
02:09:931 (1) - ^
02:13:486 (1) - ^
02:54:375 (1) - ^

[YuZuKi's style]

00:31:034 (8) - finish slider here and here 00:32:145 add circle
01:29:700 (x) - add circle
02:11:034 (1) - remove nc
02:11:923 (1) - ^

[Insane]

02:04:145 (6,7) - These sliders are invisible. Move your them to be visible


all the complexities of the spam new combo.please make a new combo less. otherwise it is not very convenient to play.

Good luck!

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Hello~ from my modding Queue.

[General]

Offset 820

Add tags YuZuKi

[Hard]

00:31:708 (x) - add circle or slider (which ends here 00:32:367)
00:43:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps are not felt in the song and to me they seem out of place here
01:07:486 (1) - remove new combo
02:04:153 (6,7) - These sliders are not visible because of the previous sliders. you can do so. push up a bit and then they will be seen http://puu.sh/atc6s/e4bc9ac91f.jpg
02:06:375 (1) - remove nc
02:09:931 (1) - ^
02:13:486 (1) - ^
02:54:375 (1) - ^

[Insane]

02:04:145 (6,7) - These sliders are invisible. Move your them to be visible


all the complexities of the spam new combo.please make a new combo less. otherwise it is not very convenient to play.

Good luck!

All fixed, except Insane and Hard sliders
I think it's visible 0.0
Thanks for your modding

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

[YuZuKi's style]

00:31:034 (8) - finish slider here and here 00:32:145 add circle
01:29:700 (x) - add circle
02:11:034 (1) - remove nc
02:11:923 (1) - ^

Thank you
I fix.

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Your colours are way too bright and may hurt players' eyes. Also, the green one does not look good with the BG and seems to be totally random. Plaease, find a better replacement for the colours, if it is possible.
   Note: feel free to contact me in-game if you have probems with it
2. Kiais are inconsistent. According to the rules, kiais must be the same in all your diffs. Either change the kiai on Normal or copy them from normal to Insane and Hard. Also, they're unsnapped.
3. Since you have no Widescreen storyboard, keeping the widescreen support toggler enabled is not necessary. Please, disable it for all diffs.
4. Please, start mapping all diffs from the samme point. Keeping more consistency is always good.
   Note: you may need to add audio lead in, if you do so. Just edit your osu file and add 1000-1300 ms of lead in if necessary.

[Normal]

1. Due to polarity/rhythm changes I higly suggest you reducing your HP a bit more. (2,5 would be better). Please note, that this is the easiest diff, and it should be playable for beginners.
   Note: ignore it if you apply the last suggestion.
2. 00:18:597 (1,2) - such sliders sound off music and do not represent the song well. We can clearly hear that some beats like 00:19:042 - 00:19:486 - 00:20:819 - which have pretty strong vocals and/or drums are ignored. Try to use regular 1/1 or 2/1 sliders here instead and use long slider only when they're really necessary.
   Note: same applies to 00:22:153 (1) - and 00:39:931 (1,2) - 01:15:486 (1,2,3,4) - and so on. Please, pay more attention to rhythm. In easier diffs everything should be easy to understand, that is why it is very important to make everything matching with the music as much, as possible.
3. 01:06:597 (5) - the way how slider changes its direction there is unreadable and looks really confusing. Having unreadable slider-paths is not rankable, a specially on the easiest diff of the mapset. Consider removing the red nod. Example
4. 01:11:931 (1) - this is rankable, but the second repeat is pretty much unexpected and does not seem readable enough here. I'd rather use two 1/1 sliders. [url]=http://puu.sh/avKcp.jpg[example/url]
   Note: 02:17:708 (1) - same applies for this one, they are very similar, so, be consistent and apply for all such sliders or ignore it completely.
5. 01:55:931 (4,2) - minor - consider avoiding stacks like this one. (2) appears way too fast aftr (4)'s disappearance. It may make players feel uncomfortable.
6. 03:14:597 (1) - replacing this circle with an 1/1 slider would make yourrhythm much more playable and consistent. It will also fit great with the clap at 03:15:042.
   Note: since 03:18:597 - has practically the same sound, same applies to 03:18:597 - of course. Yes, and to 03:22:153 - as well.And so on, you got the idea.
   
   Just the rhythm being off in some sliders + some issues I've listed. The diff is not bad but could use some more work.

[Hard]

1. 00:02:153 (4,1) - please, avoid random spacing changes. It looks good but it does not match with the music and feels kinda random here.
2. 00:06:153 - the downbeat is unstressed and it feels like a different part of the song. Therefore, it's better to separate this beat. Remove the repeat from 00:05:708 (5) - and place a circle with new combo at 00:06:153. This way it will represent music better and make more sense in terms of rhythm.
   Note: same applies for lots of similar pattern and may require quite a lot of serious work, but the outcome is totally worth it!
3. 00:39:042 (1,2,3,4) - try to unstack them a bit, so, they will be slightly more readable. Not a big deal, but that would be a help for some slow players.
4. 00:43:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure about using jumps like these? They seem random and don't represent anything in the song. I highly suggest you to keep DS consistent here and use jumps only when they're actually needed. Same applies for the diff in general. Mapping is about making a map on the song, therefore, you should use jumps only when the song feels jumpy, this is very important.
5. 00:59:486 (1) - if you listen closely, the slider is overmapped. Overmapping here feels confusing and out of place. You don't have to overmap, at least not in a Hard diff. Same thing about ovrmapping happens to 01:11:931 (3,4,5,6) -
   Note: you might want to check out this article it explains lots of things about rhythm, so, take your time and read it, it migh be very helpful!
6. 01:01:931 (4,5) - sudden stop in a middle of a jumpy pattern it breaks the movement and feels really unpleasant Try to avoid it in ordr to make your diff more understandable and playable.
7. 01:01:264 - sorry, but I strongly believe that you've picked the wrong SV multiplier here. x1.5 makes slider velocity way too fast and AR7 makes it look unbalanced and too hard to read. Also, the sliders become too fast for a Hard diff and the diff feels too hard. Unfortunately, the same applies for all kiais, so, I highly suggest you getting more opinions and consider re-mapping kiais.
   
   Not so much to say, you really need to get more opinions and consider re-working kiais.. Also, getting rid of the overmapped patterns would be a great idea. Feel free to contact me if you decide to remap kiais and need help with it.

[Insane]
I'm just goig to point out important stuff quickly, because most of the mistakes are common and happen often enough.

1. Overmapping. Yes, overmapping makes the map confusing to play and makes rhythm of the song hardly understandable. 01:56:264 (2,4) - here is an example. The stream does not macth here and feels uncomfortable.
2. Random spacing changes. Like 00:13:708 (2,3,4) - here and some others one. Previous patterns with the same sound had no antijumps, therefore this one is totally unexpected and can be misread as 1/4 triplet. There're lots and lots of patterns like 02:50:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - where chages are unnatural and hard to understand.
3. Flow. A huge amount of your transitions feels very confusing or/and rather unpleasant in gameplay. It happens due to their hardly playable placement. You should check out this article about flow and take some ideas from it into consideration. Alternatively, you can use symmetrical patterns and similar things to improve your transitions, as well.
   
   Please, get more opinions from players and rake hte kisted things into consideration. I am sorry, but this is the best I can suggest for now, the diff definetely needs some cleaning and more workon general stuff. If you decide to improve the things I've listed but have problems with understanding them, I'll be more than happy to help you.

[YuZuKi's Style]
I see no connection between your username and the diff name. Also, that'd be btter to rename this diff to something related to the actuall difficulity of the map. Something like Insane/Hyper would match with this diff.

1. Don't overuse hitsounds, for eexample 02:20:375 (7,8,9,10,11) - claps sound way too loud and don't match with the song. Same happens way too often. I believe that you are able to do it re-check and fix hitsounds your own, but if you have troubles with it - feel gfree to ask me or anyone else.
2. The same thing about overmapping applies for your diff. But here it is not a big deal, just a few extra triplets like 00:28:931 (6).
3. 00:09:264 (6) - indicating 1/4 jumps with a new combo would be a nice idea. It's a serious challenge and leaving them ignored would bug players a lot.
4. 00:31:042 (8) - I have absolutely nothing agains this slowdown. Except the fact that it needs a new combo. NC will warn players about the velocity change and make it more readable.
5. 00:43:486 (1,1) - please, give some more time to recover. Leaving an 1/2 gap here is not enough and it will bug players for sure. At least an 1/1 gap should be left here.
   Note: 01:49:264 (1,1) - same applies for allsimilar patterns. For example, 01:49:264 (1,1) - here.
6. 00:55:708 (1,2,3) - minnor - mind unstacking them? The stack stops your flow and it does not feel so comfortable to play.
7. 01:57:931 (1) - personally, i have no problems with this slider, but it's better to ask some more people to confirm that it is understandable and playable. Just to make sure.
8. 03:10:819 (7,8) - feel like there should be a new combo on one of these objects. It would match with your pattern.
9. 03:21:264 (5,6,7,8) - that was really unexpected and felt too confusing. Maybe you could avoid stacking here for the sake of playability?
   
   Without overmapping and with some flow improvements that would be a decent and really fun to play diff. Try to improve it more!

There're a lot of things to improve, keep improving and check out osu!wiki since it has lots of helpful info. Also, you can contact me if you don't understand something or have questions.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

From my modding queue~

[Insane]

Well, that's all I see. Good luck~

Moo-Chan wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Insane]

1. 00:04:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Could maybe make these more even? Fixed
2. 00:07:931 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Blanket these better I don't know what you mean 0.0
3. 00:18:819 (2) - Starting from here, you should increase the hit sound volume. It's pretty low No
4. Make this slider, 00:39:931 (7), the same shape as this one, 00:41:042 (3) Fixed
5. I would consider mapping the break that's after this note 01:22:597 (6) I think it's ok
6. Make this slider, 01:50:819 (5), the same shape as, 01:50:375 (4) No
7. 02:06:375 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
8. 02:10:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps aren't really needed No
9. 02:14:153 (1,2,3,4) - If you're going to do something like this, you should make the SV slower, and the sliders shorter No
10. 02:15:931 (5) - Find something else to do other than a slider that repeats 3 times Fixed
11. Again, make this slider, 03:16:153 (6), the same shape as, 03:15:264 (2) Fixed

Well, that's all I see. Good luck~

Thanks for your mod

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Your colours are way too bright and may hurt players' eyes. Also, the green one does not look good with the BG and seems to be totally random. Plaease, find a better replacement for the colours, if it is possible.
   Note: feel free to contact me in-game if you have probems with it
2. Kiais are inconsistent. According to the rules, kiais must be the same in all your diffs. Either change the kiai on Normal or copy them from normal to Insane and Hard. Also, they're unsnapped.
3. Since you have no Widescreen storyboard, keeping the widescreen support toggler enabled is not necessary. Please, disable it for all diffs.
4. Please, start mapping all diffs from the samme point. Keeping more consistency is always good.
   Note: you may need to add audio lead in, if you do so. Just edit your osu file and add 1000-1300 ms of lead in if necessary.

[Hard]

1. 00:02:153 (4,1) - please, avoid random spacing changes. It looks good but it does not match with the music and feels kinda random here.
2. 00:06:153 - the downbeat is unstressed and it feels like a different part of the song. Therefore, it's better to separate this beat. Remove the repeat from 00:05:708 (5) - and place a circle with new combo at 00:06:153. This way it will represent music better and make more sense in terms of rhythm.
   Note: same applies for lots of similar pattern and may require quite a lot of serious work, but the outcome is totally worth it!
3. 00:39:042 (1,2,3,4) - try to unstack them a bit, so, they will be slightly more readable. Not a big deal, but that would be a help for some slow players.
4. 00:43:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are you sure about using jumps like these? They seem random and don't represent anything in the song. I highly suggest you to keep DS consistent here and use jumps only when they're actually needed. Same applies for the diff in general. Mapping is about making a map on the song, therefore, you should use jumps only when the song feels jumpy, this is very important.
5. 00:59:486 (1) - if you listen closely, the slider is overmapped. Overmapping here feels confusing and out of place. You don't have to overmap, at least not in a Hard diff. Same thing about ovrmapping happens to 01:11:931 (3,4,5,6) -
   Note: you might want to check out this article it explains lots of things about rhythm, so, take your time and read it, it migh be very helpful!
6. 01:01:931 (4,5) - sudden stop in a middle of a jumpy pattern it breaks the movement and feels really unpleasant Try to avoid it in ordr to make your diff more understandable and playable.
7. 01:01:264 - sorry, but I strongly believe that you've picked the wrong SV multiplier here. x1.5 makes slider velocity way too fast and AR7 makes it look unbalanced and too hard to read. Also, the sliders become too fast for a Hard diff and the diff feels too hard. Unfortunately, the same applies for all kiais, so, I highly suggest you getting more opinions and consider re-mapping kiais.
   
   Not so much to say, you really need to get more opinions and consider re-working kiais.. Also, getting rid of the overmapped patterns would be a great idea. Feel free to contact me if you decide to remap kiais and need help with it.

[Insane]
I'm just goig to point out important stuff quickly, because most of the mistakes are common and happen often enough.

1. Overmapping. Yes, overmapping makes the map confusing to play and makes rhythm of the song hardly understandable. 01:56:264 (2,4) - here is an example. The stream does not macth here and feels uncomfortable.
2. Random spacing changes. Like 00:13:708 (2,3,4) - here and some others one. Previous patterns with the same sound had no antijumps, therefore this one is totally unexpected and can be misread as 1/4 triplet. There're lots and lots of patterns like 02:50:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - where chages are unnatural and hard to understand.
3. Flow. A huge amount of your transitions feels very confusing or/and rather unpleasant in gameplay. It happens due to their hardly playable placement. You should check out this article about flow and take some ideas from it into consideration. Alternatively, you can use symmetrical patterns and similar things to improve your transitions, as well.
   
   Please, get more opinions from players and rake hte kisted things into consideration. I am sorry, but this is the best I can suggest for now, the diff definetely needs some cleaning and more workon general stuff. If you decide to improve the things I've listed but have problems with understanding them, I'll be more than happy to help you.

There're a lot of things to improve, keep improving and check out osu!wiki since it has lots of helpful info. Also, you can contact me if you don't understand something or have questions.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Almost fixed
I'll consider change the kiai
Thanks for your modding

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Hello~ from my modding Queue.

00:07:923 (3) - turn -5 degrees. To get here so http://puu.sh/atbdE/7afb8fde5d.jpg fix
00:15:034 (3) - I think this slider must change form... http://puu.sh/atbio/824268403d.jpg so it looks neater and easier to play fix
00:31:923 (x) - add circle or slider (which ends here 00:32:367)
03:16:145 (x) - add note. here sounds a beat and you do not put a note here. it is misleading in the game fix
03:19:700 (x) - ^ fix
03:23:256 (x) - ^ fix
03:26:811 (x) - ^ fix

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Your colours are way too bright and may hurt players' eyes. Also, the green one does not look good with the BG and seems to be totally random. Plaease, find a better replacement for the colours, if it is possible. will leave that to -HaRuNa-
   Note: feel free to contact me in-game if you have probems with it
2. Kiais are inconsistent. According to the rules, kiais must be the same in all your diffs. Either change the kiai on Normal or copy them from normal to Insane and Hard. Also, they're unsnapped. i guess it's fine if it's guest diff
3. Since you have no Widescreen storyboard, keeping the widescreen support toggler enabled is not necessary. Please, disable it for all diffs. fix
4. Please, start mapping all diffs from the samme point. Keeping more consistency is always good. ah i just realized this x.x idk i will ask -HaRuNa- about this
   Note: you may need to add audio lead in, if you do so. Just edit your osu file and add 1000-1300 ms of lead in if necessary.[/color]

[Normal]

1. Due to polarity/rhythm changes I higly suggest you reducing your HP a bit more. (2,5 would be better). Please note, that this is the easiest diff, and it should be playable for beginners.
   Note: ignore it if you apply the last suggestion.
2. 00:18:597 (1,2) - such sliders sound off music and do not represent the song well. We can clearly hear that some beats like 00:19:042 - 00:19:486 - 00:20:819 - which have pretty strong vocals and/or drums are ignored. Try to use regular 1/1 or 2/1 sliders here instead and use long slider only when they're really necessary.
   Note: same applies to 00:22:153 (1) - and 00:39:931 (1,2) - 01:15:486 (1,2,3,4) - and so on. Please, pay more attention to rhythm. In easier diffs everything should be easy to understand, that is why it is very important to make everything matching with the music as much, as possible. intentional, i want the rhythm to be simple at the beginning. but i will change it
3. 01:06:597 (5) - the way how slider changes its direction there is unreadable and looks really confusing. Having unreadable slider-paths is not rankable, a specially on the easiest diff of the mapset. Consider removing the red nod. Example fix
4. 01:11:931 (1) - this is rankable, but the second repeat is pretty much unexpected and does not seem readable enough here. I'd rather use two 1/1 sliders. [url]=http://puu.sh/avKcp.jpg[example/url] i thought it was readable will change it if more modders point this out
   Note: 02:17:708 (1) - same applies for this one, they are very similar, so, be consistent and apply for all such sliders or ignore it completely.
5. 01:55:931 (4,2) - minor - consider avoiding stacks like this one. (2) appears way too fast aftr (4)'s disappearance. It may make players feel uncomfortable. fix
6. 03:14:597 (1) - replacing this circle with an 1/1 slider would make yourrhythm much more playable and consistent. It will also fit great with the clap at 03:15:042.
   Note: since 03:18:597 - has practically the same sound, same applies to 03:18:597 - of course. Yes, and to 03:22:153 - as well.And so on, you got the idea. nice idea. i intended to make the same rhythm like the intro, but now i'm getting too inconsistent x.x will re-think about it
   
   Just the rhythm being off in some sliders + some issues I've listed. The diff is not bad but could use some more work.

Thank you for mods!! sorry for late reply ;w;

update : http://puu.sh/axmji/9cbd9a7fd3.osu

mod经历不多先求不喷QAQ
[insane]
[00:13:931]建议把后两个单点改滑条
[00:24:819]这里改成滑条，[00:25:264]摆三连试试？
[00:27:931]改成一个短的折返滑条或者三个单点可能听起来会舒服一点。
[00:32:153]这个连打似乎没什么道理
[00:33:264]这个如果放单点我觉得23重叠，45重叠更符合歌曲一点。
[00:47:042]这一部分我改了好多不好说，我勉强说一下你试着听的懂不，这里放二分滑条+一个四分单点再接二分滑条折返+两个二分单点
[00:48:597]^
[00:59:486]改成二分跳
[01:03:931]这里用单点接二分滑条折返会舒服
[01:04:819]动词动词跳起来~
[02:41:708]滑条折返不够，再长一点，跟吉他保持一致
[02:43:486]^
[03:30:153]转盘好一点
[YuZuKi's style]
[01:25:931]往右下拖动一点
[01:29:486]一拍长条+二单点
[03:01:708]这里用二分折返滑条吧
除了没有break time我还是挺喜欢这张图的:D



hard和nm我就摸不动了，祝rank~

Hey~

今天我哥突然跑到我房間問我有沒有五月天的歌所以我就完這首(在#modreq 看過蠻多次的) o_o

不是什麼mod拉但我覺得你在這首慢個不適合你現在這樣跳.. 有點像airman?? 你的形狀看起來都不錯但就把他們放近一點吧
00:18:819 (2,3,4) - 時hitsound太安靜了感覺偶點怪怪的
喔還有在 00:41:042 (3) - 你可以跟 00:39:264 (3) - 疊// 可能還有其他部分但感覺你可以回去把圖更美化點


k 沒事了 Good luck~

ProdigyGrape wrote:

mod经历不多先求不喷QAQ
[insane]
[00:13:931]建议把后两个单点改滑条 Fixed
[00:24:819]这里改成滑条，[00:25:264]摆三连试试？ Fixed
[00:27:931]改成一个短的折返滑条或者三个单点可能听起来会舒服一点。我覺得還好 0.0
[00:32:153]这个连打似乎没什么道理 Fixed
[00:33:264]这个如果放单点我觉得23重叠，45重叠更符合歌曲一点。 Fixed
[00:47:042]这一部分我改了好多不好说，我勉强说一下你试着听的懂不，这里放二分滑条+一个四分单点再接二分滑条折返+两个二分单点有聽懂，只是我覺得可以不用這樣改
[00:48:597]^ ^
[00:59:486]改成二分跳 No
[01:03:931]这里用单点接二分滑条折返会舒服 Fixed
[01:04:819]动词动词跳起来~ 我覺得這樣就好
[02:41:708]滑条折返不够，再长一点，跟吉他保持一致 Fixed
[02:43:486]^ Fixed
[03:30:153]转盘好一点 No



hard和nm我就摸不动了，祝rank~

謝謝你的mod

Gaia wrote:

Hey~

今天我哥突然跑到我房間問我有沒有五月天的歌所以我就完這首(在#modreq 看過蠻多次的) o_o

不是什麼mod拉但我覺得你在這首慢個不適合你現在這樣跳.. 有點像airman?? 你的形狀看起來都不錯但就把他們放近一點吧
00:18:819 (2,3,4) - 時hitsound太安靜了感覺偶點怪怪的 提高了10%
喔還有在 00:41:042 (3) - 你可以跟 00:39:264 (3) - 疊// 可能還有其他部分但感覺你可以回去把圖更美化點 OK

play

好久沒打ar8命中率好低T^T replay

k 沒事了 Good luck~

我就是想說OSU裡面中文歌太少了所以來做 xD
謝謝你的意見
我放這些跳是希望能夠好玩點

[General]
貫徹快樂 is the album, so try not add in the source. You can add "Rhythm Master" as source because it is available in the game, anyway

[Normal]
Test play: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1878937
00:04:375 (3) - Erm, try moving point x:240 y:76 to x:256 y:76
00:05:264 (4) - Move point x:272 y:192 to x:256 y:192
00:18:597 (1,2) - Why don't make them just natural curves?
00:34:597 (4) - Just make it a natural curve will do
00:38:153 (3) - Make it more curve
00:39:931 (1,2) - These sliders are strange for me idk
00:43:486 (1) - Suggest following the vocal, by make the spinner start at 00:43:264
00:50:597 (1) - Move point x:252 y:48 to x:276 y:44
00:51:486 (2) - Make it more curve
01:15:486 (1) - I hate this slider
01:20:819 (3) - NC
01:41:264 (6) - Make it a curve?
01:45:708 (1) - Move point x:52 y:136 to x:36 y:156 seems better
01:48:375 (4) - Just the clone of 01:45:708 (1)
01:49:264 (1) - Make it start at 01:49:042 to follow the vocals
01:58:153 (3) - Move point x:372 y:300 to x:376 y:296
01:59:931 (1) - Just make it a natural curve
02:12:375 (5) - Move point x:88 y:80 to x:72 y:112
02:26:153 (2) - I suggest making it to 2 circles
02:51:042 (4,1,2,3,4) - Is that some sort of pyramid pattern idk
02:53:264 (1) - No NC
02:58:597 (1) - I have to say, this slider is weird
03:10:819 (3,4) - I thought of Maroon 5 in the first place
03:12:819 (1) - A weird slider crossing my computer screen (sry I'm rude, I admit it)

No offense for other diffs so that's all of my mod~
Hope your mapset gets ranked

HootOwlStar wrote:

Nothing

Hi
Mod here
My English is poor
These are only suggestions
Hmm, no Easy diff huh
Not my style of introducing myself for mod
What am I saying
WTF is I'm saying
.
.
.
.
.
.
If you really look through these, you are really insane
So rude
Nah, just ignore me

[General]
貫徹快樂 is the album, so try not add in the source. You can add "Rhythm Master" as source because it is available in the game, anyway why is "Rhythm Master" 0.0

No offense for other diffs so that's all of my mod~
Hope your mapset gets ranked

Thanks for modding

HootOwlStar wrote:

Nothing

Hi
Mod here
My English is poor
These are only suggestions
Hmm, no Easy diff huh
Not my style of introducing myself for mod
What am I saying
WTF is I'm saying
.
.
.
.
.
.
If you really look through these, you are really insane
So rude
Nah, just ignore me

i did see this lol

[General]
貫徹快樂 is the album, so try not add in the source. You can add "Rhythm Master" as source because it is available in the game, anyway

[Normal]
Test play: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1878937
00:04:375 (3) - Erm, try moving point x:240 y:76 to x:256 y:76 fix
00:05:264 (4) - Move point x:272 y:192 to x:256 y:192 fix
00:18:597 (1,2) - Why don't make them just natural curves? ee i like this one
00:34:597 (4) - Just make it a natural curve will do fix
00:38:153 (3) - Make it more curve intentional, since previous sliders are already curvy, so i tried some variations
00:39:931 (1,2) - These sliders are strange for me idk
00:43:486 (1) - Suggest following the vocal, by make the spinner start at 00:43:264
00:50:597 (1) - Move point x:252 y:48 to x:276 y:44 intentional, i prefer current shape
00:51:486 (2) - Make it more curve
01:15:486 (1) - I hate this slider nooooo
01:20:819 (3) - NC fix
01:41:264 (6) - Make it a curve?
01:45:708 (1) - Move point x:52 y:136 to x:36 y:156 seems better tweaked it a bit
01:48:375 (4) - Just the clone of 01:45:708 (1)
01:49:264 (1) - Make it start at 01:49:042 to follow the vocals
01:58:153 (3) - Move point x:372 y:300 to x:376 y:296 fix
01:59:931 (1) - Just make it a natural curve
02:12:375 (5) - Move point x:88 y:80 to x:72 y:112
02:26:153 (2) - I suggest making it to 2 circles
02:51:042 (4,1,2,3,4) - Is that some sort of pyramid pattern idk yep
02:53:264 (1) - No NC fix
02:58:597 (1) - I have to say, this slider is weird nooooo
03:10:819 (3,4) - I thought of Maroon 5 in the first place omg i just realized
03:12:819 (1) - A weird slider crossing my computer screen (sry I'm rude, I admit it) nah that's normal

No offense for other diffs so that's all of my mod~
Hope your mapset gets ranked

Thanks for mod!!

Yay!! 好久没看到中文歌曲了……真期待rank的说……

不管怎么样，这是我的Mod……（中文应该Okay吧）




大概是这样了……请回复我的mod哦。这一次真的不是很有信心可以帮到你……

jinhang_ang wrote:

Yay!! 好久没看到中文歌曲了……真期待rank的说……

不管怎么样，这是我的Mod……（中文应该Okay吧）

Hard

1. 不算是很大的问题，不过……从00:19:264开始你就一直在围绕着中心转，不算错，但有一点无聊。可以的话，像之前那样把，乱跑一下也无所谓。稍微改了一下

2. 00:54:153 (1,2) - 没有很完美地fit在一起，00:55:042 (3) - 要成为blanket也要做些修改。Fixed

3. 02:40:819 (1,1,3) - 我必须承认，连续reverse多次的短滑条真的有点无聊。我比较建议这样画。感覺有點怪，而且我不希望這裡太難

就是每一个都reverse 3次左右。

Insane

1. 02:05:264 (1) - Insane嘛，就不要这样了，打圆圈吧，这样玩起来也比较有感！我覺得這樣比較好 0.0

2. 02:40:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 额，其实这里可以这样排。（要注意的是我用1/12拍）02:42:597开始也可以用这个排法。

不懂我的timing有没有问题，有没有排错（所以不要盲目跟从，要仔细检查）不过如果这样排可以直接stream玩整个部分，是很具挑战性而且很好玩的orz。 1/12的話怪怪的吧，所以我還是保持原本的好了

大概是这样了……请回复我的mod哦。这一次真的不是很有信心可以帮到你……

謝謝你的mod
只是可以麻煩把Normal改成英文的嗎 0.0
畢竟那不是我做的

ProdigyGrape wrote:

[YuZuKi's style]
[01:25:931]往右下拖动一点
[01:29:486]一拍长条+二单点
[03:01:708]这里用二分折返滑条吧
除了没有break time我还是挺喜欢这张图的:D



hard和nm我就摸不动了，祝rank~

謝謝，我覺得這曲子分分秒秒都很精彩值得去map他。

-Bakari- wrote:

[YuZuKi's Style]
I see no connection between your username and the diff name. Also, that'd be btter to rename this diff to something related to the actuall difficulity of the map. Something like Insane/Hyper would match with this diff.
[list]
[*]Don't overuse hitsounds, for eexample 02:20:375 (7,8,9,10,11) - claps sound way too loud and don't match with the song. Same happens way too often. I believe that you are able to do it re-check and fix hitsounds your own, but if you have troubles with it - feel gfree to ask me or anyone else.
[*]The same thing about overmapping applies for your diff. But here it is not a big deal, just a few extra triplets like 00:28:931 (6).
[*]00:09:264 (6) - indicating 1/4 jumps with a new combo would be a nice idea. It's a serious challenge and leaving them ignored would bug players a lot.
[*]00:31:042 (8) - I have absolutely nothing agains this slowdown. Except the fact that it needs a new combo. NC will warn players about the velocity change and make it more readable.
[*]00:43:486 (1,1) - please, give some more time to recover. Leaving an 1/2 gap here is not enough and it will bug players for sure. At least an 1/1 gap should be left here.
Note: 01:49:264 (1,1) - same applies for allsimilar patterns. For example, 01:49:264 (1,1) - here.
[*]00:55:708 (1,2,3) - minnor - mind unstacking them? The stack stops your flow and it does not feel so comfortable to play.
[*]01:57:931 (1) - personally, i have no problems with this slider, but it's better to ask some more people to confirm that it is understandable and playable. Just to make sure.
[*]03:10:819 (7,8) - feel like there should be a new combo on one of these objects. It would match with your pattern.
[*]03:21:264 (5,6,7,8) - that was really unexpected and felt too confusing. Maybe you could avoid stacking here for the sake of playability?

Thank you.

重制mod，由于翻页了所以另开新帖了。(No kds.)


真是好歌配好圖~！
再次祝願你的map能ranked~!

08/03/2014 EDITON1:

Rush_FTK wrote:

重制mod，由于翻页了所以另开新帖了。(No kds.)

remod

Not checked for previous modding-text,so may have suggestion same as before version.
沒檢查之前mod的內容所以
[General]
- 討論串更正一下 "YuZuKi's style by myyP" Fixed xD
- Cut掉03:32:375後面的部分，反正也沒有聲音。手邊的軟體掛了0.0 暫時先不改

Ask.fm:
yuzuki's syle指的是什麼。他給自己取的暱稱吧

[Hard]
Suggestion:
- 所有的卡聲(類似於00:03:042 (2) ，我忘記是架子鼓中的哪個部分發出的聲音了)加clap或者whistle強調與其他音符的不同。總覺得加了都怪怪的 0.0
My opinion:
- 00:03:708 (4,5) 這裡聽起來總是有點怪怪的……至少調低一下打擊音量以增加地圖的層次感？OK
- 00:25:042 (8) 這裡還是建議不要用一個折返滑條處理，因為後面部分的音樂組成與前面稍微有些不同。我認為可以拆成這樣：
好
img link(if you can't see this image):
http://puu.sh/aBzTd/832437c25b.jpg
- 01:01:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) 想問一下這是有意設置的梗還是只是權宜之計。算是有意吧 0.0
- 02:00:153 (2,4) 改為曲線或者減小角度。只是個人的審美看法。NO
- 02:05:264 (1) 其實這種梗有個無法判斷何時滑條終止的難點，如果後面的物件比較近建議還是換一個梗。應該還可以判斷吧
- 02:12:819 (2) 取消折返，滑條在02:13:042即停止就好。因為在後面那個時間點沒有特別必要跟上的背景音樂，因此為了與02:12:375 (1)樣式保持一致而為。我想留著
- 02:13:486 (3) NC。過渡點，提醒新排列。Fixed
- 02:17:708 (1) 這個Clap加的好詭異，要麼8個全加要麼8個全不加要麼1357加，因為這裡的音符是2個一組的高低音重複排列，因此高音待遇應當相同。加在1357上
- 02:19:486 (1,2,3,4) 有個鬼畜的想法，加4個whistle。在考慮Finish在這裡是否合適。感覺不太合適 0.0
- 03:07:486 (7) 發電機(什麼意思 D:
- 02:40:819 (1,1) 是權宜之計嗎？算是吧 >_>

[Insane]
My opinion:
- 00:05:153 漏音。即使為了梗保持的話中間也可以加一個note 加了有點詭異 0.0
- 00:21:486 (3,4,5,6) 閣下如果能pass的話這裡也沒什麼意見就是了。可以吧?!
- 00:31:486/00:31:597/00:31:708 可以考慮加3個note，為了層次感而不加也是可以的。不加
- 00:43:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 這個梗應該在Extra存在。放這裡也可以吧?!
- 02:40:819 ~ 02:45:931 堅信曲線才能救國。我滿喜歡直線的
- 02:48:597 (2) 拆成前一個circle後一個Slider。歌詞中“的”是短音，並且感覺沒有長音的音符。NO
- 02:49:708 (5,6) 拆成前面兩個Slider最後一個circle，理由同上。^
- 03:20:819 (8) NC.看著大數不爽。OK
- 03:23:931 (6,7) 變成一個slider和兩個單打，前兩個音符與03:23:486 (5)相同所以建議保持物件一致。我覺得沒必要

最後那個超出我能力範圍就不再重看了。

真是好歌配好圖~！
再次祝願你的map能ranked~!

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This map's draining time is 3:02, so I just mod several diffs instead of whole map. /me flee
I really hope some of these help!
Good luck!
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