1. Easy (2.39 stars, 92 notes)
2. Hard (4.8 stars, 219 notes)
3. Moway (4.87 stars, 265 notes)
4. Normal (4.24 stars, 134 notes)

SPOILER

20:35 ffstar0716: 哇
20:35 ffstar0716: 那个slider是你做的？
20:42 ffstar0716: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873455
20:46 mintong89: .
20:46 mintong89: 嗯
20:49 ffstar0716: 太强了 ;w;
20:50 mintong89: 骗人 我只是随便做;w;
20:50 ffstar0716: 随便做都那么好，太挂了
20:51 ffstar0716: 00:09:770 (3) - ctrl+J ?
20:51 mintong89: 好
20:54 ffstar0716: 00:20:014 (4,1) - 给点意见，个人觉得这种排法不错，但重复了就没什么特别 ;w;
20:54 ffstar0716: 或许可以试试看这样？
20:55 ffstar0716: http://puu.sh/3FQKB.jpg
20:55 mintong89: 唔 会考虑
20:55 ffstar0716: 不过很多人不喜欢 ;w;
20:56 mintong89: 可是你那个也不好啊
20:56 mintong89: 感觉叠在一起有点奇怪
20:56 ffstar0716: 我是说我的那个很多人不喜欢
20:57 mintong89: 怎么说呢
20:57 ffstar0716: 大家都不喜欢这种重叠的东西
20:57 mintong89: 在play&edit方面都很好吧
20:57 mintong89: 。
20:57 ffstar0716: 不知道
20:57 mintong89: 你没看过重叠图么
20:57 ffstar0716: 我常常看到
20:58 ffstar0716: 但都会被踩
20:58 ffstar0716: 除非真的太好了
20:58 mintong89: 嘛...先看看下一个modder的建议
20:58 mintong89: 不想改 超爱
20:58 ffstar0716: 哈哈
20:59 ffstar0716: 我也喜欢你那中的
20:59 ffstar0716: 那种*
20:59 ffstar0716: 但我想创新一点
20:59 ffstar0716: 所以给你一点意见

> http://puu.sh/3H1ee/312f073821.jpg This BG is for secret base ~Kimi ga Kureta Mono~ (10 years after Ver.) is better

> http://puu.sh/3H1cP/a05ef5e263.jpg This BG is for Aoi Shiori is better

1. 統一一下Source 個人認為還是寫那朵花羅馬然後劇場版再放tag就好 (不過我也不確定=3=)
2. Hard少tag了劇場版 另外多tag opening之類的

1. 00:05:624 (2,3) - 總感覺是先note再slider，因為實際上00:05:868 - 這個地方是重音，如果用slider尾去強化重音就是說不上來的奇怪。另外其實按照你前面的排法，00:05:380 - 應該是要有另一個slider，但你卻只接讓前面的slider停在上面。這還算行，但是接下去的節奏就還是要遵照前面那種每條白線就擺slider的節奏，所以我會建議你這裡先一個note接下來再1/2就行。給你張例圖參考一下怎麼改
   
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2. 00:25:380 (3) - 疊到了好醜，基本上下移一點（或者像我例圖那樣連(2)的方向都改掉）
   
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3. 00:33:185 (5,6,1) - 這三個slider的sliderslide間距一樣才會好看點 (另外我覺得(1)應該ctrl+g，因為00:34:160 (1,2) - 沒什麼跳的理由)
   
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4. 00:47:331 (5,1) - 邊緣互壓 另外試試這個
   
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5. 01:04:892 (4,1) - 感覺有點隨性...感覺(4)直接用(1)複製然後ctrl+g再擺回來就行，像是01:07:819 (2,3) - 這種的就很好看
6. 01:26:111 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 好水
   

1. 00:23:185 - 這裡也上個whistle?
2. 00:37:087 (2,1) - (1)下移點才像個弧度
   
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   這diff出現很多1/2 sliders...而且有些還放在一個note就能代替的位置，這種東西最好下次做慢歌時注意下

1. 00:02:941 (3,1) - 還能再包好看點
   
   
2. 00:27:331 - 你好像忘了clap還是whistle 反正這裡鼓點沒跟到

1. 00:24:404 (1) - how about moving the 2nd slider point to x:168 y:280 it'll look better imo..
2. 00:36:111 (1) - move this slider one grid up so it'll blanket with the other slider better.
3. 00:49:770 (1) - this slider don't fit here imo, how about adding another slider point at x:248 y:48 it'll look more nicer ><
4. 01:07:331 (1) - this slider would look better if you make it curve like all your other sliders in this diff...
5. 01:08:307 (2) - ^

1. 00:14:160 (2) - it'll look better if you stuck this slider under the 00:12:209 (4) - it looks a bit messy atm

1. 00:29:038 (2) - move this under the 00:27:331 (3) - same reason as i said in normal
2. 00:37:575 (6) - this would be played better if you used ctrl+g it'll be more fun imo..
3. 00:42:941 (3,1) - same as i said here 00:29:038 (2) -
4. 01:13:429 (2,5,6,1) - ^
5. 01:15:868 (2,1) - ^

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Mod4Mod from your queue :3


Easy:

1. 00:24:404 (1) - how about moving the 2nd slider point to x:168 y:280 it'll look better imo.. it's just fine imo
2. 00:36:111 (1) - move this slider one grid up so it'll blanket with the other slider better. ok
3. 00:49:770 (1) - this slider don't fit here imo, how about adding another slider point at x:248 y:48 it'll look more nicer >< hmmm... i will think it
4. 01:07:331 (1) - this slider would look better if you make it curve like all your other sliders in this diff... no i like it
5. 01:08:307 (2) - ^

Normal:

1. 00:14:160 (2) - it'll look better if you stuck this slider under the 00:12:209 (4) - it looks a bit messy atm nope, it's already clean imo

Hard:

1. 00:29:038 (2) - move this under the 00:27:331 (3) - same reason as i said in normal
2. 00:37:575 (6) - this would be played better if you used ctrl+g it'll be more fun imo.. hmm....i don't this mapping style orz sorry
3. 00:42:941 (3,1) - same as i said here 00:29:038 (2) -
4. 01:13:429 (2,5,6,1) - ^
5. 01:15:868 (2,1) - ^

mint baka ;w; good map as always <3 good luck with it!

No_Gu wrote:

from in-game

[General]
我比较习惯用负的offset因为红线前面有note。。
01:11:233 - 开个喷泉吧
soft-hitnormal声音太小，这样狗发现的话估计不给过。。因为现在几乎是完全听不见了，突然来个无声note也挺吓人其实。稍微调大点吧

[Easy]
00:00:990 (1) - 你去掉finish听的话其实这里只有大鼓没有镲
00:02:453 (2,3,1,2,3) - 不加点默认whistle？
00:08:794 (1) - 头上大鼓
00:10:746 (3,1,3) - 开头加默认whistle
00:15:624 (4) - 其实结尾能加clap
00:18:550 (3) - 头上没军鼓。。 怎么我听到的...
00:20:502 (1) - ^顺带我真不知道这slider形状有啥意义
00:26:355 (3) - ^...后面不说了，我觉得你还是每个diff都改了比较好
00:47:819 (1) - 开头也有大鼓，addition放个normal然后加个whistle
01:19:038 (1,2) - 这个真心有点难看了。。懒
再用这样的SV我觉得1.1 1.2间距比较好，虽然难度低但是太挤的感觉。。唔下次会记得 谢谢

[Normal]
00:08:307 (5) - 开头没whistle
00:43:429 (6) - 结尾有大鼓
00:47:331 (3) - ^
00:51:233 (4) - ^
00:59:038 (4) - ^...我觉得你还是自己check下

[Hard]
00:24:404 (1,2,3,4) - hard里面note够为啥不全跟啊。。ooxoxoxo这样的鼓点
00:53:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5被后面6顶起来了，你还是间距放大点比较好
01:25:868 (3,4) - 我感觉这完全没啥必要stack啊。。。

这歌全跟鼓的节奏完全可以做个insane
感觉你鼓音效下的还是不好。。再仔细听一遍？。。

1. 00:06:843 (3) 這個好醜..把紅點往下拉 讓上面的弧可以長一點

1. 01:26:843 ctrl+G

Nikita35 wrote:

umm do you have any pending map?

damian_q wrote:

hi~
the song is beautlful,a little suggest~

个人认为总体上有以下可以改进的地方。
一， easy 难度，把遮挡的地方改成平铺会不会更好一些？这已经是很简单了 不信你可以参考那些鬼畜图 这遮挡影响不了easy
二，有些 slider 扭动的不太美观。 指出来啊
三，不要刻意的做“遮挡”和“扭动”。 什么是遮挡 什么是扭动
遮挡和扭动可以增加难度，但 easy 就不用增加难度了吧？：）

easy:
01:17:087 (3,1) - 建议中间加一个 circle 更好一些 感觉还好 我觉得不需要

normal:
00:05:868 (2) - slider 的左边往上边移一点，与前一个 slider 的衔接会更好一些 啊? 这个很正常吧
00:09:770 (2) - 建议往左边移一点，.. 我跟00:08:794 (1) - 的头部
00:10:746 (3,4) - 这两个 slider 的间隔略微有点大 你没看DS么
00:26:355 (1) - 这个 slider，下端往左边偏一点，拉长一点，与后一个 slider 的衔接会更好一些 不明 我觉得可以
00:29:282 (3) - 我觉得这里没有必要做一个 S 型的扭动，像后一个 slider 一样做一个折角的扭动就可以了 我喜欢bybf
00:48:794 (3) - 建议往左边移一点，..
01:02:453 (2,3,1) - 建议整体往左边移一点，与前一个、后一个 slider 的衔接会更好一些

hard:
00:08:794 (1,2) - 建议中间加一个 circle 比较好 我觉得还好吧...
01:26:843 (1) - 个人建议做成一个螺旋更美观一些 这和 る 的形状一样 歌词

我也觉得这个图可以做个 insane 难度，然后把 hard 的难度降低，降到 4星半 左右，现在这个“hard”的难度介于我理想中 insane 和 hard 之间..... 懒 而且我觉得不需要

以上，仅供参考

good luck, waiting for ranked O(∩_∩)O~~

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi~ From modding queue: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/139620&start=0

General:
~Tags conflicts with Hard diff.

Easy:
~It's easy enough. Speechless..

Normal:
~HP+1? Cuz the notes are all easy to press. ok
~00:51:233 (4) - Move it slightly to the left for better cursor flow. ok
~00:53:096 - Move to left slightly and curve it slightly for ^. i think it's ok :/
~01:14:160 (3) - Curve slightly more for ^.
~01:26:843 (1) - Reverse selection for Normal players to get that. i think normal want little hard...so i put like this

Hard:
~00:55:136 (6,7,8,9) - Make this a reverse slider instead. It's hard for hard players to get the beat after a stop. it's fine for me
~01:10:746 (6,7,8,9) - ^Again, because of the triplets already.
~01:25:868 (3,4) - This is too hard for Hard players to read. this is too easy...
~Nice る lol.

That's all from me ^^ Good luck!~

1. Tags 好像不太一样

1. normal的风格不太习惯> < 总感觉note和note靠的好近呀> < (只是吐槽 忽视掉吧~

1. 01:17:331 (2,3) - 这个slider和circle的关系有些微妙呢 不知道是不是包裹着的关系呢？

1. 01:25:327 - 这里感觉这样好些 叠起来的circle和最后的小滑条不太好看的样子 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/883390

1. 00:10:502 - 这种风格的话这里感觉要加个circle 还要whistle

1. 感觉前一段的音效有些空的感觉00:04:404 - 00:04:648 - 00:04:892 - 感觉都要加whistle

1. 00:12:453 - 00:12:697 - 00:15:624 - 这个感觉也好whistle

1. 大体上看不出什么问题> <

1. 00:08:794 - 这里只有一个whistle呀 感觉还是有些缺音> < 把长的白线都加上whistle感觉要好些

320,96,40014,6,0,P|410:102|461:156,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Moway wrote:

go go!

sjoy wrote:

Hi 米桶
From M4M (其实上次就想找你MOD了）

Moway:
AR+1 ？比较有I的感觉确定是I吗？ song not fast enough for higher AR I think
00:19:526 (3,4,5,6) - 看看这样如何？http://puu.sh/3LSkZ.jpg fixed in a different way
00:44:404 试试这样的节奏？http://puu.sh/3LSss.jpg fine the way ti is now
01:17:819 试试这样的节奏？http://puu.sh/3LT2k.jpg leaving
01:26:111 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 好强居然拉出完整的圆 ^^
能力有限，希望能帮到你
祝早日RANK

[Navy] wrote:

Hello~mintong89
M4M
I'm not good at modding ..SORRY

Moway

delete 00:12:087 (4) - think this one is okay

01:21:477 (4,5) - i want to change moved some, don't know exactly what you mean but fixed the curves slightly

I don't have to mod you because..( )
you will know ( )

NoHitter wrote:

[Moway]
- 00:20:989 (2,3,4) - May I suggest a pattern to make the flow better? http://puu.sh/3MoB4.jpg for this I agree the flow could be beter, so I tried a different approach by changing the location of (1) and the curve of (1) slightly so that it leads more naturally into the upward motion of (2,3)
- 00:30:989 (1) - Remove new combo to be consistent with your combo patterning. alright, I had it like this to make it more visible, but since it's not stacked too much I think removing the combo is fine
- 00:34:648 (2) - Looks too compressed IMO. Would be better if you make it less curved. http://puu.sh/3MoHT.jpg fixed
- 01:16:111 (4) - Move this below for better flow? http://puu.sh/3MoM0.jpg fixed

Laurier wrote:

yo from my queue

General
clean

Moway
00:34:160 (1,2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/3MzMj.jpg fixed as with NoHitter's mod

that's all

Kareov wrote:

去除一个句号并不影响,而且外国人也不打那句号。

wonders wrote:

hi~

[Hard]
00:37:021 加个whistle增加一下打击感 感觉不需要也...
00:48:550 不如一个三连来的好 哦哦 考虑考虑

[Normal]
00:00:990 NC 感觉不需要...
00:58:550 这个note是不能漏掉的,节奏不对劲 懒

[Easy]
~

没啥好说的，抱歉啦

pieguy1372 wrote:

sorry for huge delay
from my queue

[Moway]
00:04:648 (6) - add clap? same idea as [Hard]
00:12:453 (6) - ^
00:31:233 (5) - for me it feels weird that this note is close to (6) cause the others are emphasized with larger spacing, maybe try moving to x:132 y:224 or somewhere near there? moved 6
00:50:624 (3) - add clap to match the others
01:15:989 (3) - add clap
01:23:794 (5) - maybe continue the claps till the end? I can hear the drums still going, also at 01:25:746 (3) -

for all the hitsounding I follow what mint did for the hard, so whatever changes are enacted for mint's diff are on mine


nice map gogo rank ~
good luck

wonders wrote:

hi~

[Moway]
sv is too low and ds is too high o.o

GiNa wrote:

[Easy]
00:08:794 (1) - 前面whistle太大聲了，lower to 60% ? 唔 有人说我才换 因为我不怎么觉得
00:16:599 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:00:746 (1,2) - 我覺得這種排法在normal算是比較難的 换了

[Hard]
00:54:648 (5,6) - 這兩個是故意這樣的嗎O_O 我個人是覺得沒必要特地這樣排 嗯,stack住的话不能形成star

A great song with good map and skin

GiNa wrote:

[Moway]
00:10:502 (6) - move to x:352 y:172 for better stack with 00:11:233 (2) fixed
01:10:258 (3,4,5,6) - I personally think this part has too many claps, I would suggest you to remove the one on 01:10:502 (5) i think it matches the music fine

A great song with good map and skin