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Amane - Eternal Maiden

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Card N'FoRcE
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 4 agosto 2009 at 0.27.38

Artist: Amane
Title: Eternal Maiden
BPM: 148
Filesize: 5596kb
Play Time: 03:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,87 stars, 439 notes)
  2. Normal (3,36 stars, 184 notes)
  3. tieff's Beat (4,98 stars, 573 notes)
Download: Amane - Eternal Maiden
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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A very big WIP Moved to pending

Normal & Hard: completed
Added [Tieff's Beat] (thanks <3)
Last edited by Card N'FoRcE , edited 22 times in total.
Gabi
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Gabi
Map moar of the mp3!!!!!

this song :3 i want to make a diff D:
tieff
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tieff
Here we go!

Download: Amane - Eternal Maiden (Card N'FoRcE) [tieff's Beat].osu
kioukiou
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Joined June 2008
kioukiou
I just can't wait for this rank. :)
Andrea
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Andrea
Awesome map <3 Star'd
Alace
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Alace
<Normal+Hard>
cool except hard`s BG (can`t see in preview)

<tieff>
Well some hidden sliders really bug me XD (00:40:62 (1,2) ) (00:58:86 (3,4,1,2) )
IMO you put too many notes and the note placements are hard to catch

I like the part in 01:58~02:11 maybe you can follow that part
make your map easy to read and create a melody which fits the song

btw i think the custom clap is the best for this song
take your time to map it i will recheck it
tieff
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tieff
Oh... Sorry, CNF, problem becouse of me.
I'll remap some part today or tomorrow.
Sorry.
EEeee
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EEeee
Normal
made some sample set suggestions, but I asked u on IRC and now I hear the custom hitsounds, so meh, suggestions
00:43:86 (1) - this doesn't sound good with ur custom finish, I would put a sample set with something loud to finish this Spinner(soft finish, no custom)
00:56:84 (1) - ^
01:05:35 (1) - add Finish/make it loud
01:14:67 (4) - move to the left, is this suppose to be not aligned with 3?
01:24:00 (5) - New combo

Hard
well I'm not gonna point out the sample set stuff in this diff, just if u get the urge to use them, try and compare this to the stuff I pointed out in nornal
00:06:976 - add note?
01:01:70 (1) - remove new combo?
02:23:59 (1) - ^

tieff's beat
00:03:63 (3) - move 1/4 forward, and place over 4 and 5
02:22:17 (1) - move up a bit? and move the rest of the notes after this up a little
Card N'FoRcE
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EEeee wrote:

Normal
made some sample set suggestions, but I asked u on IRC and now I hear the custom hitsounds, so meh, suggestions
00:43:86 (1) - this doesn't sound good with ur custom finish, I would put a sample set with something loud to finish this Spinner(soft finish, no custom) Ok, done
00:56:84 (1) - ^ No, i don't like it here.
01:05:35 (1) - add Finish/make it loud Done
01:14:67 (4) - move to the left, is this suppose to be not aligned with 3? Done
01:24:00 (5) - New combo Nah

Hard
well I'm not gonna point out the sample set stuff in this diff, just if u get the urge to use them, try and compare this to the stuff I pointed out in nornal
00:06:976 - add note? Nah
01:01:70 (1) - remove new combo? Intentional (followpoints)
02:23:59 (1) - ^ ^
Thanks for modding, i'll leave tieff's to him.
Mukku
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Mukku
Normal
[00:09:611] (4) Put a clap here

Hard
[01:19:543] (1,4,7) Finish em o/



All that I could find T_T

Awesome map, star!
Card N'FoRcE
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
sesito71
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sesito71
Awesome maps ;)

Just some suggestions :D

[Hard]
01:35:781 (1) Why new combo here?
02:23:533 (1) Quit new combo
02:26:098 (2,3,4) New combos
02:30:647 (3) New combo (4,5) New combo in 4

[Normal]
01:00:303 Add a break here and...
01:02:263 ...here :D It looks cooler xD
01:58:893 (2) Look the position of (1) and put it right ^^
02:05:593 (2) Ok, I have just seen it, and maybe it's intentional, anyways if you want to change it, it won't be bad ;)

Tieff's seems ok ^^

Starred *-*
Card N'FoRcE
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Zodiark1020
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Modding time again, so long I don't mod. This map is so cool, and considering it is Amane's, the music is awesome *_*

~Normal~
00:15:59 (3,4) - 1/4 later (the 3 on the red tick and the 4 on the white)
00:18:02 (3,4) - ^
00:20:45 (3,4) - ^
00:22:88 (2) - move it 1/4 later
01:38:80 (x) - you can add a note here, on the beginning of the slider, sounds Cool :)
02:04:13 (x) - I'd add a note before the 2 notes (4 and 5), just to change the sound of it, cos the previous musical phrase [(01:57:85 (5,6)] is really similiar :?
02:07:58 (x) - I'd add a note here :P

~Hard~
Nothing to say here, everything okay :D

~tieff's Beat~
Wow, really insane...
Nothing to say here too :D

Star'd obviously :P
Card N'FoRcE
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Zodiark1020 wrote:

Modding time again, so long I don't mod. This map is so cool, and considering it is Amane's, the music is awesome *_*

~Normal~
00:15:59 (3,4) - 1/4 later (the 3 on the red tick and the 4 on the white)
00:18:02 (3,4) - ^
00:20:45 (3,4) - ^
00:22:88 (2) - move it 1/4 later
This first 4 things are a nono, sorry D:
01:38:80 (x) - you can add a note here, on the beginning of the slider, sounds Cool :) Ok
02:04:13 (x) - I'd add a note before the 2 notes (4 and 5), just to change the sound of it, cos the previous musical phrase [(01:57:85 (5,6)] is really similiar :? Done
02:07:58 (x) - I'd add a note here :P Done

~Hard~
Nothing to say here, everything okay :D

~tieff's Beat~
Wow, really insane...
Nothing to say here too :D

Star'd obviously :P
Thanks for modding :)
tieff
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tieff
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Amane - Eternal Maiden (Card N'FoRcE) [tieff's Beat].osu
Card N'FoRcE
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tieff wrote:

[Normal]
00:04:94 (4) - Whistle on return. I don't like it
00:37:38 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps on normal? I know, it easy jumps, but... They're just a bit enhanced, come on... D:
01:54:61 (6) - Add note with whistle? Ok, sounds good
02:06:57 (4) - Note here. I made a slider
02:06:97 (5) - Clap. There's a clap already O.o

[Hard]
00:38:80 (9,1) - Spacing. Sorry for nazi. Intentional
00:41:03 (3) - Clap.
00:41:84 (6) - ^
00:42:65 (3) - ^ Intentional
I also added your diff again, thanks for modding :D
tieff
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You don't submit my diff. It's old version. D:
Card N'FoRcE
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Weird, i was pretty sure i submitted it...
I resubmitted it again, now
GladiOol
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Offset Looks fine

Hard
00:01:70 (3) - Make this a normal hitsound, just for the 'effect' (?) I know you want soft hitsounds, but just make this one normal with hit finish, it sounds awesome imo.
00:19:74 (2) - Make this 1/4 later.
01:36:26 (1) - Make this start 1/4 later.

Normal
Looks fine, I think.

Tieff's Beat
00:59:98 - Make this inherit point start 1/4 later, sounds weird now.

Starred~
Card N'FoRcE
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Gladi wrote:

Offset Looks fine

Hard
00:01:70 (3) - Make this a normal hitsound, just for the 'effect' (?) I know you want soft hitsounds, but just make this one normal with hit finish, it sounds awesome imo. True, added
00:19:74 (2) - Make this 1/4 later. Auto won't get 2k bonus
01:36:26 (1) - Make this start 1/4 later. ^

Normal
Looks fine, I think.

Tieff's Beat
00:59:98 - Make this inherit point start 1/4 later, sounds weird now. This happens even more often xD Anyway, i'll let tieff decide :P

Starred~
Thanks for modding :)
-SiN-
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-SiN-
no no no no no no NOooooo!!!

There is one thing i hate from this map..
the BG is ugly.. lol

now.. please use this.. :3
it's really hard to find them in my 18gb of touhou picts folder xD

Card N'FoRcE
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Sorry, your BG is great but i also like mine, so i won't change it.
EDIT: maybe i'll use it in my next Amane map, thanks =3
Takuma
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-SiN-
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Card N'FoRcE wrote:

EDIT: maybe i'll use it in my next Amane map, thanks =3
oh .. no please dont... you should choose the bg carefully..
i hate some map with unmatched bg and the music.
i'll help u then :)
Card N'FoRcE
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Takuma wrote:

Really cool map! XD The only thing I don't like is 01:58:86 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1) in Hard difficulty. It's pretty unpredictable, imo. I really think you should change that. Have a shiny star for now!
I swear, i made some players play the map and NOONE got a X there.
Sorry, but it's a no, it's readable D:

-SiN- wrote:

oh .. no please dont... you should choose the bg carefully..
i hate some map with unmatched bg and the music.
i'll help u then
I know that the original song is a theme of Suika Ibuki.
Anyway, i'll appreciate your help when i'll submit that map :)
deepsea
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The part takuma mentioned looks random but I don't getany problem when I first played it, so I think it's ok, also confirmed from other players.

Bubbled.
Gabi
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Gabi
what i thought i starred this before :3

EDIT:
here are some suggestions for [tieffs beat], not necessary to change.

i am quite thrown off by this 00:41:03 (2) - its covered by everything
00:14:57 (15,1) - these should be stacked imo since stack leniency makes it difficult to read aswell.




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Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
's good

[Hard]
okay i guess

[tieff]
00:43:86 (1,1,1,1) - Dx im never going to pass this


anyways, playing woes aside, this is pretty good...rankable, even ;o
EEeee
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EEeee
In tieff's beat , , , I wanna hear how this isn't hidden, plz enlighten me anyone 00:40:62 (1,2) - 2 is hidden, also the color of it being a red slider makes it even ........uhhhh damn, , , well just pointing this out, it's hidden imho

if u check it out, make sure u play the map or have auto play it, it may look good in editor, but hell in play
deadbeat
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EEeee wrote:

In tieff's beat , , , I wanna hear how this isn't hidden, plz enlighten me anyone 00:40:62 (1,2) - 2 is hidden, also the color of it being a red slider makes it even ........uhhhh damn, , , well just pointing this out, it's hidden imho

if u check it out, make sure u play the map or have auto play it, it may look good in editor, but hell in play
Yea....i looked...it seemed fine. I can manage sliders like that so and that says ALOT
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