LunarSakuya wrote:

hi~

General
- Not sure if it's necessary for the offset to be in the negatives. However, the notes before 00:07:840 (1) - sounds off so you'll most likely need more timing points anyway. I suggest you get a timing expert to check on that. The timing is right see this map

- In your .osb, Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg",0,0 has no code underneath it... I set it to make the Storyboard start with a black screen


Brown
01:03:362 (5) - NC on this or the next note, similar part as 01:17:690 (1) - ? k
01:23:064 (2) - Consider making a 1/1 slider here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/896891 this gap didn't feel right, especially when the bgm seems to keep going at a constant pace k
01:26:646 (2,3) - Spacing, use distance snap fix

Purple
00:09:183 (3,4) - hmm i think you should use the vocals as a guide more since the instruments aren't that dominating yet, maybe something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/896904 I remap this part in a different way. more suitable

Black
00:17:467 (2) - similar issue in easy, i'd add more notes in these kinds of gaps fix
00:47:690 (2) - Follow the vocals to keep consistent with 00:48:138 (3) - i guess~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/896908 make a slider like 00:48:138 (2) - maybe more better
00:51:049 (1,2,3) - I found this part somewhat misleading. i'd try to incorporate both the vocals and instruments to give a solid transition into the kiai, try this rhythm: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/896917 (if not for this diff, maybe consider applying this in White?) it's ok imo.
01:18:586 - Add note, this gap in the vocals also disturbed me a bit sure

White
00:07:728 (1) - snap to 1/6 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/896938 nice!
00:11:646 - Add note, again i think the vocals should be followed more in this quiet part to maintain a flow k
00:47:690 (2) - same as Black change it like hard that I have done


Lovely map <3 <3
Feel free to call me back after a couple mods

KevinKang wrote:

[Black]
00:07:690 (1) - 符合节奏但是不知道这样可不可以。。按照BAT说的改了~ 没事
[White]
01:06:049 (1) - 听起来稍微有点硬，减一点音量 还好啦~
其他我感觉没问题 我也觉得没问题
感觉是好图一张，祝早日rank

elinia wrote:

req from in-game chat.

[General]
offset+5~10，我打了几遍都是late，然后开25%调整听了好久觉得-1103比较合适.. 请看这张图 应该不会错吧 lol

[Brown]
01:02:019 (4) - 这个直滑条稍微弯点吧？ 好
01:11:870 (3) - reverse滑条顺时针转一点flow好一点的样子 不了

[Purple]
00:04:705 (2,3,4) - 听vocal明显这样的节奏比较正常…… 跟着节奏没事

SPOILER

01:01:123 (3) - 和下一个滑条做成同样的形状舒服些 好

[Black]
Good! Thanks~

[White]
00:05:153 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如果滑条这个方向是不是这样的顺序更好 现在这样也是五角跳啦~ 没事的

SPOILER

00:09:407 (4) -

SPOILER

不影响~ 于是不改了~
00:11:422 (1,2,3,1,1,2) - 强烈建议改成

SPOILER

好想法~ 不过是跟着Vocal了啦~ 现在也行的说
01:27:541 (1,2) - 无聊了，改成多个滑条或者连打+滑条吧？不要结尾难人啦~ 这图没什么stream的说~

[Others]
Storyboard和Skin好棒~谢谢啦！

1. 图还好吧, 就是这图都是24clap放得3/4的滑条也是24clap, 有点不舒服, 我一般都是加在蓝线上的
2. 00:11:870 (2) - 建议放到x:84 y:100
3. 00:13:213 (1) - 可以就在00:13:661 - 结束然后加个note的..
4. 01:20:489 (5) - 加个clap
5. 01:21:720 (1) - 这之后的clap感觉有点多余了, 可以换一下用whistle放

1. 没有black啊, 你杯具了
2. 00:11:422 (6) - 间距好像有点不科学..
3. 00:23:511 (6) - 是不是放里面好点? 下一个就容易看出来一点 http://xiangce.baidu.com/picture/detail ... 5fcbf7bad4

1. 00:27:541 (1,2) - 这里3/4的节奏好像容易看错, 还是放3/4比较好

LunarSakuya wrote:

no kds

Brown
01:23:064 (2) - forgot Clap on end

Black
00:52:168 (3) - Finish on tail like White (or vice-versa)
01:07:616 (2) - i believe moving this to the white tick makes more sense https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/904739 more natural to land on the emphasis from the vocals
01:27:317 - Add something here, the instruments are screaming for something imo

i'll be waiting~

LunarSakuya wrote:

Nice~ Good luck

Zero__wind wrote:

耶~恭喜小米 `w`