I don't know how many things you changed to my Kantan mod aaaaaaaaa
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- 00:08:370 - Here, a kat would be suitable, I don't think mapping to the background instrument is a good idea as people will ask themselves 'What is it mapped to'.
- 00:09:170 - Same goes here.
- 00:14:770 - ^ Although it would be harder to put this right to have a decently made pattern which is not too hard, since the optimal pattern would be ddkd dkdd, which is, I guess, a bit too hard for what you've wanted to make.
- 00:21:570 (47,48,49) - If you've wanted this to map to the piano, move 00:22:370 (49) - to the red tick before ? It sounds a bit less empty than the current you've got now.
- 00:23:170 - As an opening note and clearly audible kick here, why not move 00:23:570 (51) - here ?
- 00:24:770 (54) - Take out the kat, it would be better to focus only on the drums here.
- 00:25:370 (55,56) - Both notes sound a bit off (even though mapped to the vocal), might change to 1/1... I'd recommend moving 00:25:370 (55) - to 00:25:570 - and deleting 00:25:770 (56) - .
- 00:29:570 (65) - Change to a don, there's no real reason for it to be a kat !
- 00:31:770 (70,71,72) - Same comment as 00:25:370 (55,56) -.
- 00:37:970 (83,84,85,86) - Sounds real empty, you need to change it. I recommend a rhythm as this one: http://puu.sh/4I761.png (Cursor @ 00:38:770 - )
- 00:44:370 (98,99,100) - Same as above.
- 00:45:570 (102,103,104,105,106) - Since this rhythm is like this, why not apply somethings that makes the player perceive it in a better fashion ?
- 00:48:770 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - Same comment as in Kantan, make this flow better to the fact it slows down ?
- 00:56:370 - Maybe add a kat ?
- 00:58:370 (133,134,135,136,137) - Same comment as 00:45:570 (102,103,104,105,106) -
- 01:08:370 (14,15) - Invert hitsounding for a better snare consistency. I mean, you've used snares on nearly every other beat 2/4 but not here!
- 01:12:370 - Add a snare ?... I mean kat.
- 01:15:170 (31) - Should it be a Don ?
- 01:20:370 - Same as 01:12:370 -
- 01:20:770 (44,45,46) - You might want to add a snare in its middle as well. Also if you apply so, don't forget to change the pattern so it fits better.
- 01:27:570 (58) - Replace to a kat maybe ? It will fit better to the lyric as well as the drum. Good compromise !
- 01:31:170 (65,66,67) - You didn't make a good compromise to the vocal here, the rhythm is very different (the two last notes are 1/2 earlier than what you put here)
- 01:31:970 (67) - to 01:44:770 (95) - , take in account comments from 00:07:170 (11) - to 00:19:970 (43) - .
- 01:47:970 (102,103,104) - This pattern breaks the flow of the part... I'm certain you can make something better ><
- 01:54:770 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124) - This pattern is a bit off thesong, I recommend using this pattern instead: http://puu.sh/4I7UW.png
- 01:59:170 (129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - Same comment as in 00:48:770 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117) -
- 02:05:970 (144,145,146,147) - I'm lost, I don't know where I pointed this out again but.. Add a kat in it ?
- 02:09:170 (152,153,154,155) - , and the whole kiai, take in accounts the same comments as in the first kiai as they are similar.
- 02:42:370 (67,68,69) - Since it's getting calmer, maybe make it more spaaced in time ?
- 02:47:970 (73) - Kat, make it consistent with the lyrics if that's what you've wanted to.
- 02:55:170 (84) - to 03:09:370 (116) - Nice freestyle here. However one thing to point: 03:04:770 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - It becomes a bit too long don't you think ?
- 03:17:370 (124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - This is a bit risky here, try something else in this fashion ?
- Third kiai has same comments as it's the same. Except where you put the slider, I feel it was misplaced here. The end is the same as the very beginning (Did you run out of ideas ?)