ignorethis wrote:

1) mp3 should be changed okay

2) raise the volume to ~80% since i could bearly hear any hitsounds i raised to 65-70%

3) arrangement of objects could be more variable i'll change some... maybe. but generally you're right here

00:00:275 - 00:05:640 (4) - you could make this part match the song rather than using your own rhythm nope, it was planned

rhythm in other parts of the map is great though thanks ^^

1. Why do you demand other mp3? I felt that it is already sufficient quality. but I tried a thing of other sound quality. so Please check it by yourself once. and attach low-quality video together ⇒ http://puu.sh/3tjho.zip
2. Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - It seems too short. +2000ms

1. 00:01:674 (4,1) - It seems to be randomly placed. for ex, how to put it to have a pattern. http://puu.sh/3tjZK.jpg ( i use 00:01:674 (4) - copy 00:00:275 (1). 00:02:141 (1) - copy 00:00:974 (3). )
2. 00:02:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hmm.. It has the original rhythm as compared to the rhythm of before or after. I prefer to put them in a constant rhythm. for ex: http://puu.sh/3tkzS.jpg ( and Place to put a whistle: 00:02:607. 00:03:191. 00:03:424. 00:03:774. ) and 00:03:191 (5) - if you change the rhythm, I think there is no need to change the volume here. or even if you do not change the rhythm, I thought there is no need to change the volume and whistle.
3. 00:07:273 (7) - remove whistle to start and end of the slider. and volume change to 40%. ( do not have a sound almost here. so I recommend that place to fit the sound rather than put a whistle. )
4. 00:07:762 - Overlap of the green line and red line. so plz remove green line that does not have a meaning. also 00:07:820.
5. 00:10:574 (5,6,7) - 00:11:043 (6,7) - I feel that these do not match vocal. even if it is based upon the sound 00:11:277 - I think that you should put a sound for the beginning of vocal here. for ex: http://puu.sh/3vj13.jpg (I thought this was enough.) or http://puu.sh/3vj8u.jpg ( emphasize a vocal rhythm. i prefer this. ) or http://puu.sh/3vjlG.jpg ( another pattern )
6. 00:15:144 (x) - i prefer to put the sound here for vocal. so i suggest add note here or 00:14:793 (9) - extend the slider end.
7. 00:17:137 (5,6) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/3vjNn.jpg ( just suggest. but also it is important that use map widely )
8. 00:22:762 (9) - add finish. ( additions-soft )
9. 00:27:215 (1,2) - volume is slightly lower. I think that even 65% are enough. >_<;
10. 00:30:965 (1,2) - ^
11. 00:34:949 (4,1) - Suggestion of the flow for ex: http://puu.sh/3vkvB.jpg ( 00:34:949 (4,1) - The distinction between the flow of these. )
12. 00:47:137 (4) - if you want can be expanded end to 00:47:488. and 00:47:605 (5) - end to 00:47:840. and 00:48:074 - add note. and with 00:49:012 (3) - end to 00:49:363. http://puu.sh/3vkMG.jpg
13. 00:51:590 (5) - i prefer add NC here. and 00:52:293 (1) - remove NC.
14. 00:53:933 (1) - add whistle. It will be able to emphasize the vocal as 01:01:433 (1) -
15. 00:55:808 (1) - ^
16. 00:59:324 (2,3) - add finish to end of the slider. ( sampleset-soft )
17. 01:06:590 (x) - have a vocal should be emphasized here. since you match most with vocal-rhythm in kiai-time. so I suggest rhythm to put note here. for ex: http://puu.sh/3vlrk.jpg ( i use 1/4. Because I thought that it was fit even if it was not 1/8. )

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Kodora :3

thank you for the request~

here my mod~

[General]

1. Why do you demand other mp3? I felt that it is already sufficient quality. because of two reasons: first - it have unnaturally bpm change what most like should not exist (probably mp3 fault). second - soft "clicking" sound at some parts what is not part of music. If its ok i'll try to get more opinions about mp3's quality.but I tried a thing of other sound quality. so Please check it by yourself once. and attach low-quality video together ⇒ http://puu.sh/3tjho.zip thanks ^w^ denied video due to quality & because it not fit the song as for me lol
2. Song Setup - Audio Lead-in - It seems too short. +2000ms added lol i was sure that i set it before

[Blaze]

1. 00:01:674 (4,1) - It seems to be randomly placed. for ex, how to put it to have a pattern. http://puu.sh/3tjZK.jpg ( i use 00:01:674 (4) - copy 00:00:275 (1). 00:02:141 (1) - copy 00:00:974 (3). ) changed
2. 00:02:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hmm.. It has the original rhythm as compared to the rhythm of before or after. I prefer to put them in a constant rhythm. for ex: http://puu.sh/3tkzS.jpg ( and Place to put a whistle: 00:02:607. 00:03:191. 00:03:424. 00:03:774. ) and 00:03:191 (5) - if you change the rhythm, I think there is no need to change the volume here. or even if you do not change the rhythm, I thought there is no need to change the volume and whistle. very good, applied all
3. 00:07:273 (7) - remove whistle to start and end of the slider. and volume change to 40%. ( do not have a sound almost here. so I recommend that place to fit the sound rather than put a whistle. ) i do not know how this instrument called but it sounds so loud here and i think that whistle is needed because of it.
4. 00:07:762 - Overlap of the green line and red line. so plz remove green line that does not have a meaning. my fault, fixed. (i found bpm change here after adding green lines) also 00:07:820.
5. 00:10:574 (5,6,7) - 00:11:043 (6,7) - I feel that these do not match vocal. even if it is based upon the sound 00:11:277 - I think that you should put a sound for the beginning of vocal here. for ex: http://puu.sh/3vj13.jpg (I thought this was enough.) or http://puu.sh/3vj8u.jpg ( emphasize a vocal rhythm. i prefer this. ) or http://puu.sh/3vjlG.jpg ( another pattern ) Applied first one. Second one missed strong best on vocal-based slider so i prefer first instead :p
6. 00:15:144 (x) - i prefer to put the sound here for vocal. so i suggest add note here or 00:14:793 (9) - extend the slider end. extended slider
7. 00:17:137 (5,6) - Suggestion of the form: http://puu.sh/3vjNn.jpg ( just suggest. but also it is important that use map widely ) keeping mine for now because your added jump and i'm not sure about this but maybe i'll change it later
8. 00:22:762 (9) - add finish. ( additions-soft ) yes
9. 00:27:215 (1,2) - volume is slightly lower. I think that even 65% are enough. >_<; was unsure about it too, applied!
10. 00:30:965 (1,2) - ^ here too
11. 00:34:949 (4,1) - Suggestion of the flow for ex: http://puu.sh/3vkvB.jpg ( 00:34:949 (4,1) - The distinction between the flow of these. ) i like it, applied!
12. 00:47:137 (4) - if you want can be expanded end to 00:47:488. and 00:47:605 (5) - end to 00:47:840. and 00:48:074 - add note. and with 00:49:012 (3) - end to 00:49:363. http://puu.sh/3vkMG.jpg good, applied all.
13. 00:51:590 (5) - i prefer add NC here. and 00:52:293 (1) - remove NC. nope because pattern combo
14. 00:53:933 (1) - add whistle. It will be able to emphasize the vocal as 01:01:433 (1) - yes
15. 00:55:808 (1) - ^ yes
16. 00:59:324 (2,3) - add finish to end of the slider. ( sampleset-soft )
17. 01:06:590 (x) - have a vocal should be emphasized here. since you match most with vocal-rhythm in kiai-time. so I suggest rhythm to put note here. for ex: http://puu.sh/3vlrk.jpg ( i use 1/4. Because I thought that it was fit even if it was not 1/8. ) sorry, no, because i focusing mostly on drums here :p

>.<

Good luck

Mashley wrote:

Both diffs are generally pretty solid and hard to criticise. Nice work!


Blaze
Spacing is very inconsistent, but I would say that I didn't feel like it was off while playing so it might just work. Yes, it was planned, just a little spacing raising on strong parts, that wouldnt hurt players even if they will play with mods.
00:06:573 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Daaamn this pattern is hard to read. Just change it somehow, the spacing and timing changes make it cramped and confusing. This really threw me off when I was playing it. It technically fits the music but players will be confused by this. This is most generosity thing what i can made here, song naturally have 1/8 beats here and just replacing with 1/4 will not work - sounds too empty. Timing change is probably mp3's fault, but in any case note on new timeline is way far away to get any confusion here.
01:26:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - As above, this is a little weird. same here

As I said I will check the new difficulty when it's added, but may time some reminding.

1. 01:27:033 - 01:29:611 - ...Kiai times are supposed to be set only for the parts of the song that are noticeably stronger compared to the other sections. I can't even feel the slightest energetic feeling from this part. Seriously, remove the kiai time here. It's useless, trust me.

1. 00:00:080 - You should really add a finish here to follow the instrument...
2. 00:01:955 (1,3) - Swap NC? According to the song and how you are placing the NCs later, it should be (3) that is NC'd. And no, a pattern-based combo placement can't be forced here.
3. 00:05:236 (4) - Umm, what about if you place this at the same y coordinate as 00:03:361 (2) (y:208) so the pattern will look neater.
4. 00:09:513 - This green timing point is unused. There's already one at 00:09:865, and 00:09:923 (2) (the object after the green timing point at 00:09:865) will follow the 00:09:865 timing point's setting, not the one at 00:09:513. To make it short, remove this because it's unused.
5. 00:09:982 - ^
6. 00:12:794 - ^
7. 00:13:263 - ^
8. 00:13:732 - ^
9. 00:14:201 - ^
10. 00:14:669 - ^ (There are still more things like this later, so please remove those unused timing points. This also applies to the Blaze diff.)
11. 00:30:080 - There is nothing in this spot that indicates the need of a finish, so just remove that finish here.
12. 00:30:548 (4) - And this one NEEDS a finish, as indicated by the music, so add one here instead of adding it at the end of (3).
13. 00:37:111 - Since the volume of the cymbal's sound in the song is pretty low, use 35% for the finish here?
14. 00:38:048 (3,1) - Swap NC to follow how the song goes (aka following the stanza)?
15. 00:38:517 (1) - Uh, to make it look neater in addition to the objects nearby it, move the anchor point on the head to (264,304) and the one on the tail to (352,336)?
16. 00:40:861 - There isn't any cymbal sound here, so remove the finish since it's unnecessary.
17. 00:44:142 (1,3) - Swap NC to follow how the stanza works? It feels jarring to me while playing and looking at the editor.
18. 00:55:861 (1,2) - ^
19. 00:59:142 (5,6) - Add whistles here to emphasize the vocal?
20. 01:01:486 (1,4) - Swap NC, seriously. This should be obvious. Why would you apply an NC to an object three ticks after the beginning of a new stanza without any reason?
21. 01:05:236 (1) - Also remove NC here? I don't see why should there be an NC.
22. 01:18:361 (1,2) - Swap NC? (You seem to try to follow the lyrics, but placing NCs according to the lyrics doesn't seem to work well here...)
23. 01:21:642 (1,1) - The NCs here aren't necessary at all. Just don't use them.

1. 00:05:705 (3) - Use a Soft finish here instead? Normal sampleset doesn't really work, IMO.
2. 00:08:048 - Why don't you use the Normal sampleset here?
3. 00:14:611 - Normal finish is kinda loud here. Just use a Soft finish with a somewhat-lowered volume?
4. 00:21:642 - Add a whistle to follow the instrument in the song?
5. 00:22:111 - ^
6. 00:23:048 - Use Normal here too? Seems to be intentional, but I feel that the absence of the Normal sampleset sound is jarring, so I think it should be there.
7. 00:42:267 (3) - Try the Drum sampleset here? Seriously feels empty if you only use Soft, IMO.
8. 00:49:298 - Use Normal here?
9. 00:50:236 - ^
10. 00:50:470 - Finish to follow the instrument?
11. 00:53:048 (2,3) - This looks neater in my eyes.
12. 01:00:548 - And yep, use Normal too?

1. 00:00:783 - Hmm, try to add a circle here? Feels weird for a 1/4-filled place to not be mapped at all, because then they'll feel strangely empty.
2. 00:04:533 - ^
3. 00:30:548 (1) - Use finish instead? There's nothing on the music part of the song that indicates the need of a clap, but there's a cymbal's sound, which means a finish is needed here.
4. 00:37:111 - ^
5. 00:41:095 - And yeah, add a finish here to follow the instrument?
6. 00:59:611 (3) - Remove the finish here because there isn't anything to follow in the song and the finish is unnecessarily loud.
7. 01:04:767 (4) - Add a clap here? Yes, I know the pattern will be broken, but there is no spot where a clap can be placed in this stanza, the absence of clap is weird for me, and the instrument actually fits. Up to you though; I simply think that it just feels like something is missing without any clap.
8. 01:10:861 (4,1,2) - Uh, why is the spacing inconsistent here? I don't see why should it be like this, so make them... consistently spaced?
9. 01:13:439 - Uh, add a note to follow the vocal? Don't you think it's strangely empty without anything?
10. 01:20:001 - Also add a note to follow the instrument here?

1. 00:02:892 (4,5) - The flow will be better here if you stack (4) above (5)'s head.
2. 00:06:408 (2,3) - Even if the spacing does show the difference between 1/8 and 1/4, mixing them up will only end with making them confusing. Just combine them into a 1/8 slider altogether.
3. 00:13:205 (1) - Uh, why NC here? I think it's unnecessary. Just remove it I guess?
4. 00:14:611 (1,2) - Also swap the NC here to follow the stanza?
5. 00:18:830 (12,1) - Space them by 1.8x? Notes that are 3/4 beats away from each other will have a better flow if their spacing is widened compared to the normal spacing.
6. 00:45:080 (5,1) - Swap NC? I think the reason should be obvious, and I don't think there's any kind of justification for this.
7. 01:11:095 (1) - Whistle to emphasize the vocal here?
8. 01:14:845 (5) - And also try a whistle here? Sounds wonderful for me~
9. 01:18:478 (9,10) - Uh, I'm sure enough the cymbal is played at (10)'s place, so place the finish there instead of (9)?

1. Audio Lead-In 2500 (cuz we need at least 2.5 secs before clicking the first note)
2. Add a muted soft-sliderslide2?

1. 00:04:298 (2) - This slider can be un-curve a bit, the shape is too curve, which is ugly :C
2. 00:08:048 - Don't you think that leave a break here is a weird thing if you called this diff as an insane? Well I do think of that. To avoid boring empty part, at least add a note at 00:08:048 -. You can hear a clap sound here obv, why not try to follow it?
3. 00:09:923 (4,5) - Nazi thing, but you could improve the flow here by making the pattern like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:13:908 (5,7,1) - Not a bit fan of not-same-spacing triangle. You should use same spacing between these three object to make the pattern more clean!
   Oh well, I'm not really nazi, but I must say this diff isn't clean at all. Some slider shape can be improve, some hitsounds can be improve, some placement can be improve.

1. Before writing any issue, I have to say that I FKING LOVE YOUR AVA
2. 00:13:439 (3,4) - Is this jump intentional? I can't see any reason for a jump here! You should use random spacing (that's 1.2x I think) to replace it, and then the players won't be confused! (Since there's nothing special in the music, players might think "oh, is that 1/1 between these two objects?" and get a 50 or even X)
3. 00:23:517 (2,3) - You know how to improve this blanket right ):
   Nice diff you've got there.

1. 00:02:892 (5,6) - Not a big fan of these kinds of overlaps, try to avoid that pls ;_;
2. 00:23:048 - / 00:49:298 - / 00:50:236 - / 01:00:548 - You miss a clap here I think~
   Check the claps again pls .-.

1. k I get nothing

General

Easy

KSHR's Normal

Laurier's Hard

Blaze

That's all sry my poor mod. anyway, GL

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71,90,15080,2,0,P|38:157|51:262,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,336,15783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,336,16017,2,0,P|309:293|348:195,1,170,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

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good luck

1. 01:27:033 - 01:29:611 - random kiai time here

1. 00:09:923 (2) - soft whistle
2. 00:12:267 (1) - normal sampleset at the start and soft whistle at the end
3. 00:13:205 (2) - soft whistle at the reverse-arrow
4. 00:16:017 (1) - soft whistle at slider end
5. 00:18:830 (3) - remove whistle
6. 00:20:705 (2) - soft whistle at the reverse-arrow
7. 00:25:392 (3) - soft whistle at slider start
8. 00:26:798 (4) - remove whistle
9. 00:29:142 (3) - whistle atslider start
10. 00:30:548 (4) - finish fits with nothing , remove it and same with the whistle
11. 00:32:892 (3) - soft whistle at slider start
12. 00:34:298 (4) - soft whistle at slider end
13. 00:35:236 (1) - remove whistle from slider start
14. 00:38:517 (2) - soft whistle at slider start
15. 00:40:392 (1) - soft whistle at slider start
16. 00:42:267 (3) - soft whistle at slider start
17. 00:44:142 (1) - soft whistle at slider start
18. 00:45:080 (3) - soft whistle at slider end
19. 00:46:486 (1) - normal whistle fits with nothing here
20. 00:47:892 (2) - soft whistle

1. 00:03:595 (6) - why don't you try something like?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:46:486 (3,4) - try to improve this overlap
3. 00:53:048 (2,3) - what about
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:01:955 (4,5) - i don't like this overlap ;_;
5. 01:15:783 (2,3) - same ;_; ^

1. 00:50:470 (3) - i woud suggest to put this sicle stacked with the end of the slider 00:49:767 (2) -

1. 00:13:673 (7) - new combo, remove from 00:14:611 (1) - and add it 00:16:017 -
2. 00:09:455 (3,4) - try to do a better copy pasted pattern here
3. you really need to work on hitsounds in the first part...

Lally wrote:

yo

[General]

1. 01:27:033 - 01:29:611 - random kiai time here no way

[Easy]
Hitsounds:

1. 00:09:923 (2) - soft whistle yes
2. 00:12:267 (1) - normal sampleset at the start and soft whistle at the end yes
3. 00:13:205 (2) - soft whistle at the reverse-arrow yes
4. 00:16:017 (1) - soft whistle at slider end yes
5. 00:18:830 (3) - remove whistle yes
6. 00:20:705 (2) - soft whistle at the reverse-arrow yes
7. 00:25:392 (3) - soft whistle at slider start yes
8. 00:26:798 (4) - remove whistle yes
9. 00:29:142 (3) - whistle atslider start yes
10. 00:30:548 (4) - finish fits with nothing , remove it and same with the whistle only finish was wrong here
11. 00:32:892 (3) - soft whistle at slider start yes
12. 00:34:298 (4) - soft whistle at slider end yes
13. 00:35:236 (1) - remove whistle from slider start no way
14. 00:38:517 (2) - soft whistle at slider start yes
15. 00:40:392 (1) - soft whistle at slider start yes
16. 00:42:267 (3) - soft whistle at slider start yes
17. 00:44:142 (1) - soft whistle at slider start yes, but this is note lol
18. 00:45:080 (3) - soft whistle at slider end yes
19. 00:46:486 (1) - normal whistle fits with nothing here disagree
20. 00:47:892 (2) - soft whistle

[Blaze]

1. 00:13:673 (7) - new combo, remove from 00:14:611 (1) - and add it 00:16:017 - oki
2. 00:09:455 (3,4) - try to do a better copy pasted pattern here it is not copypasted o_O
3. you really need to work on hitsounds in the first part... dont see anything wrong with it

good luck =w=

Kodora wrote:

Lally wrote:

[*]00:09:455 (3,4) - try to do a better copy pasted pattern here it is not copypasted o_O [/list]

1. 00:09:923 (2) - Move it to 240|216, flows better imo.
2. 00:15:080 (4) - Move some grids up.
3. 00:16:017 (1) -You can make this slider more curve, imo
4. 00:35:236 (1) - Same ^ (also you should rotate 00:36:642 (2) - anticlockwise a bit because it flows better)
5. 00:18:361 (2,3) - Try a perfect blanket?
6. 00:30:548 (4,1) - Try to do something similar to [url=osu.ppy.sh/ss/868463]this[/url] (I fucked up the slider, but too lazy to fix =w=), so you can stack 00:32:423 (2) - on 00:30:548 (4) -
7. 01:09:455 (3,4) - They can be symmetrical, you know
8. 01:18:830 (2,3,1) - Make them on the same diagonal line
9. 01:23:517 (1) - It should start 1/2 or 1/4 before, your choice.

1. 00:10:861 (6) - Flip vertically this slider
2. 00:29:376 (3) - Same ^
3. 00:43:205 (5,6) - Move them 3/4 grids left

1. 00:41:330 (1,2,3) - Follow vocals?

1. 00:14:611 (6,7) - Try to make (6) curve and (7) linear?
2. 00:22:111 (5,6,7,8,9) - Not really good.. make it more symmetrical
3. 01:07:580 (1) - Make it following the stream (= more to the left)
4. 01:27:091 (1) - Remove kiai from it.

1. Beatmap asked for updating after downloading it. Try to upload it agaun, it may solve this problem. Or you can get confirmation from other people.
2. Be creative, make your map different from others' maps! FInd another bg and stop being lazy, mapping is all about creativity! Poke me if you'll need help with it.
3. AudioLeadIn 2000 would be enough. No need to use more than it.
4. Find a softer clap, current one sounds strange. Or else, you can reduce volume of this clap manually.
5. 00:59:611 - snap end of kiai #1 here, or at least to 00:59:845 - so, it will fit with music. Even if it's here just fr fountain.
6. Talk to Laurier! I'm sure that it'd be better to have kiais consistent. Anyway, that's optional, so I'm not forcing you to do it.
7. Combo colours are kinda too bright. Consider fading them a bit, so players could enjoy your map more!
8. You didn't even check tags! Please, take your time and make sure that all tags are added. You can add second season to tags. (or at least "second" since this anime is also known as Shakugan no Shana Second)! Also, you need tag J.C. Staff (since you use their background animation as your BG video) and Takase Kazuya (composer). Tags help us to find your map, so you can even add names of main characters!

1. The whole diff has qute messy flow, since you're pretty new mapper that's probably ok but we can improve it, so if you're not interesting is making your diff better - poke me for a detailed mod for almost every object! I won't post it all because it's really minor suggestions.
2. 00:10:392 (3,1) - nazi - it'd be a good idea to make them parallel. So, flow here will look smother and more understandable fo beginners! example
   Note: same happens to 00:54:455 (3,1) - 00:54:455 (3,1,2) -
3. 00:32:892 (3) - nazi - try to curve it as your curved (4), so you'll get pretty awesome symmetrical pattern which will give pretty interesting flow here.
4. 00:36:642 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - nazi - the whole patern looks pretty weird here, to be honest. It looks out of your regular flow because of straight angles, consider making sliders curvy to make flow more interesting and to make map look better.
   Note: vocals are really soft here, so having softly-curved sliders is a great idea, imo!
5. 01:21:642 (1,1) - remove these two NCs. They will bug beginners a lot, they're out of your regular combo pattern and they don't reflect music well. I'm sure, that you should remove them!
   
   I'm begging you, work on your flow and patterns, they could be much. much better!

1. 00:08:751 (3,4) - in my opinion, this pattern sounds kinda strange and off vocals. I'd try to emphasize vocals in this part! How? By starting (4) 1/2 earlier. example
   Note: as you can see on example picture, slider's shape emphasizes downbeat, so it fits here really good!
2. 00:53:048 (2) - nazi - I don't really like how slider changes its derection. Try to make it fit with music, so it'd look like this! As you can see, slider will change its dirrection exactly on 00:53:517 - where loud beat appears.
   Note: oh, and 00:08:048 (2) - changes its direction too suddenly. Since it doesn't repressent vocals and music I'd recommend you to use softer shape here!
   
   Nice diff, neat patterns and cute rhythm!

1. 00:08:986 (4,1) - well, jump here looks good but it doesn't represent music well. In fact, jumps follow nohing here, so I'd remove it or at least reduce distance here. What's more jump distance is too big for a [Hard] diff, I'd keep it under x2.00 since this diff is NOT the hardest!
   Note: same goes for 00:18:361 (3,1) - 00:23:517 (2,3) - and so on. Poke me for a detailed list if you want, but I think you can find such patterns yourself
   
   Such jumps break your flow and I really disapprove them, rest is fine.

1. Use Tick Rate 2, it makes patterns like 00:48:830 (3) - sounds better + it fits with your rhythm here!
2. 00:07:111 (7) - finish this slider on 00:07:462 - to emhasize that fading sound of stream. It'll give you better rhythm and will make diff a bit more challenging!
3. 00:07:814 - try to mix vocals and music a bit, map this part! This is the hardest diff, after all.
4. 00:14:083 - unused green lines should be removed. keeping them doesn't make any sense at all! they confuse you and modders :<
5. 00:45:080 (5) - NC here to emphasize velocity changing. It'll help us to rad your flow and rhythm much easier!
6. 01:00:314 - probably you should add a circle here, it'd fit with music perfectly and make your rhythm more consistent, try it!
   
   Not bad!