1. Hard (4,71 stars, 374 notes)
2. Normal (2,97 stars, 224 notes)
3. Symbolic (4,78 stars, 437 notes)

Gens wrote:

[Overall]
- Could you lower down the beat volume abit? Done.

[Timing]
Use offset 7,115. I tried it, but it still felt a little off to me, will look at that again later.

[Easy]
- Overall, good job, but it may be a little boring for some people
00:20:69 (8,1) - Spacing problems like these should not occur in Easy! Done.
It'd be fine for a... Normal I guess.

03:04:04 (4) - Maybe divide this slider into 2? Done.

[Normal]
- Looks more like a [Hard] D: Yeah, I was starting to get that feeling too.
I'll wait until you finish this difficulty to mod it.

Some Tips:
- You can set different hitsounds for both points on a slider by double-clicking on a single point. Thanks, I didn't know that!
- Use Distance Snap for your first map! Done, for the most part. Some notes I've left unsnapped on purpose.

~ ~ ~

Keep going~
I really liked what you did with those hitsounds.
Unfortunately, I can't star this until you finish at least 2 difficulties.
Good Luck!

Armin wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:80 Stack manually with (6) End Done.
00:17:62 (10) New combo? Done.
00:29:00 Stack manually with the Done.
00:30:32 Maybe new combo? Done.
00:23:31 ^ Done.
00:37:00- 00:44:33 I don't like this part. Maybe you can add spinners when you listen the singer that says "Crussssh" XD Gonna take a look at that tomorrow.
00:59:22 This is an illegal slider. Make a new slider that starts on 00:58:35 and ends on 00:59:20 Assuming you meant spinner - Fixed.
00:59:89 Replace this break. Done.
01:22:87 New combo? Done.
01:29:88^ Done.
02:20:24 unintuitive bpm change Hmm, agreed. Fixed.

Offset maybe is wrong. Try 7.106

I'm going to work also to mod the hitsounds.
Star.

Matma Rex wrote:

Here we go. Great song.

[Easy]
Overall difficulty is too low IMO. I missed few notes because they appeared too early :/
Also, IMO this should be renamed to [Normal]. I'll crank up the difficulties a little and make it Normal.

00:27:04 (1) - add clap or finish to the end. Fixed.
00:45:655 ~ 00:57:479 - I like this part myself, but notes quickly after spinners do not match Easy. In Normal they'll be all right.
01:06:02 (1) - I would add clap/finish only to the end, but it's fine now. Also, if I tell you to add clap/finish to end, you can chage slider to be like this one. Fixed.
01:10:18 (1,2,3) - sounds weird. See screenshot below - it's how I would do it. Agreed, fixed.
01:26:60 (1) - add clap or finish to the end. Fixed.
01:58:35 (1,2) - okay, there's nothing wrong with this jump, but in Normal. Jumps should not exist in Easy.
02:16:09 (1) - add clap or finish to the end. Fixed.
02:23:10 (1) - ^ Fixed.
02:25:50 (1) - ^ Fixed.
03:02:29 (2,3,4,5) - too many sounds IMO. Agreed, fixed.

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[Hard]
Oh damn, it's actually hard.
I really like your mapping style here. Thank you a lot! That's really nice to hear when you're just getting started.
00:22:88 (7) - needed? I would delete it. Yes, but changed it into a slider.
00:26:82 (12) - maybe just circle here? It's timed correctly on spies, I think.
01:11:28 (4) - circle here. Fixed.
01:11:71 (5) - 1/4 back (on blue tick), longer by 1/4 too. But I'm not sure - it's weird part.
01:22:44 (7) - needed? I would delete it. Yes, but changed it into a slider.
01:26:39 (12) - maybe just circle here? It's timed correctly on spies, I think.
02:23:32 (8) - seems a lil bit misaligned.Fixed.
02:30:77 (1) - 1/2 forward, if it's mean to go with words. Correct, fixed.
02:44:77 (1) - ^ Correct, fixed.


And, surely, star :D

Gens wrote:

[Overall]
- Hello. Hello again!

[Timing]
Yes, I know it's my own offset, but how about adding +2? I just noticed ;p I'm not sure at all, but it does sound better. I'll keep it for now.

[Normal]
00:31:64 (1,1) - Eeeuh, the other jumps are OK with me, but could you lower down this one a bit?Made it match more with the other jumps.
00:35:14 (1) - Doesn't sounds too good... Maybe extend it by 1 beat? Agreed, fixed.
01:10:83 (2,3) - I'm not sure about these parts... Shouldn't these be in 1/3s? I dunno, just sayin'. Nah, I think me and Matma got them right now.
01:58:35 (1,2) - Maybe you should make the (2) New combo, as you did in [Hard], just for consistency. Agreed, fixed.

[Hard]
00:12:81 (7) - Hidden repeat slider. Sorry, but this is unrankable, and therefore you need to move the slider. You're right, fixed.
00:43:46 (1) - Meh, auto can only make 1000 Bonus on this spinner. Ever heard about the guideline? Auto must get 2000 Bonus, otherwise the spinner is unrankable. I really like the spinner though, I don't want you to change it, but maybe you'll need to. Oh, I thought it was 1000. I made it start half a beat earlier, won't feel very different.
01:09:31 (9) - Maybe the slider arrow is kinda hidden by (7). It could still be doable at first try though. I think this one should be fine.
02:12:59 (17,1) - This jump can be frustrating rather than fun. Agreed, fixed.
03:02:30 (2) - 2x'd sliders can be no fun for anyone ): Agreed, fixed, I was too focused on making the map harder than it needs to be.

~ ~ ~

You really have some potential for mapping. This map is quite good to be one of your firsts. Don't let the nazi mods whimper you down! Thank you very much.
Here you go, the star I promised~ And kudos to you!

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

BPM fine. Offset 7.120 <- Then resnap all notes. Done.

[Normal]

Redid a lot of beat placements in this difficulty to fix spacing issues and jumps.

00:29:45 (4,1,1) - No JUMPS on normal.
00:31:20 (3,1,1) - ^
01:10:73 (2) - Sounds bad. Try to change it. Done.
01:22:00 (4,1,1) - No JUMPS on normal.
01:23:76 (3,1,1) - ^
01:58:36 (1,1) - ^

[Hard]

00:43:25 (1) - Sounds bad. It's either that or a Auto+1k spinner. Anyone have a good suggestion on what I can do to fix it?
01:07:34 (1) - Remove new combo. I don't know where this suddenly came from, but fixed.
01:07:78 (1) - ^ I don't know where this suddenly came from, but fixed.
01:11:72 (5) - Sounds bad. You're right. I extended it by 1/4.
01:42:81 (1) - ^ It's either that or a Auto+1k spinner. Anyone have a good suggestion on what I can do to fix it?
02:18:29 (12) - New combo. Done.

Kiai time is bad placed. Fixed.

Good job for a first map, star.

1. 00:50:90 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2,
2. 01:10:83 (2) - Cut by 1/4,
3. 01:58:78 (1) - Remove new combo?,
4. 02:36:01 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2,
5. 02:46:52 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2,
6. 02:50:02 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2.

1. 00:43:24 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+),
2. 01:27:69 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove hitsounds from Red Ticks and place on White Ticks,
3. 01:33:38 (11) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2,
4. 01:42:80 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+),
5. 01:58:78 (1) - Remove new combo?,
6. 02:39:95 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+).

Lissette wrote:

Nice map
star ^^

suggestions

Normal
01:10:84 (2) Make this slider end at 01:11:06 (next white tick)
01:11:39 (3) Start this slider at 01:11:49 (next white tick), and ends at 01:12:37 (sounds better imo ^^ )
01:43:79 (1)(2) move to the next white tick

Hard
01:42:81 (1) Remove the spinner and place a note here 01:43:03 and stack it with the next note ^^ Thanks a lot, that fixed the Auto+1k problem nicely!

Thanks for the help!

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
[Timing]
BPM: 137.000 (fine)
Offset: Try 7 110.
Resnap all notes on all diffs.
[Normal]

1. 00:50:90 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2, Fixed.
2. 01:10:83 (2) - Cut by 1/4, Fixed.
3. 01:58:78 (1) - Remove new combo?, Fixed.
4. 02:36:01 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2, Fixed.
5. 02:46:52 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2, Fixed.
6. 02:50:02 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2. Fixed.

[Hard]

1. 00:43:24 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+), Fixed.
2. 01:27:69 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove hitsounds from Red Ticks and place on White Ticks, Fixed.
3. 01:33:38 (11) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2, Fixed.
4. 01:42:80 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+), Fixed.
5. 01:58:78 (1) - Remove new combo?, Fixed.
6. 02:39:95 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+). Fixed.

Thanks Sterrum!

EEeee wrote:

Normal
01:10:83 (2) - make this end 1/4 back, on the white tick, ( this note is the second "c'mon" which is faster than01:10:17 (1 )but 01:10:17 (1) is just fine make sure u space 3 afterward Fixed.
01:26:59 (1) - just make it rebound 1 more time Fixed.

Nice diff, really liked the ending Thanks. ^_^

Hard
00:15:65 (6) - new combo this or space it, but new combo would be cooler and proper Fixed.

Thanks for the help and suggestions!

animask wrote:

[Normal]
00:21:12 (1) - Add a finish here instead of the previous note Fixed.
00:27:03 (1) - End with a whistle? I like that, added.
00:56:81 (2) - Remove Finish Fixed.
00:59:22 (1) - ^ it sounds interesting that way to me Fixed.

[Hard]
Raise Circle size by 1? I prefer it as it is.
00:21:12 (1) - Finish here Done.
00:26:81 (12) - Start slider on red tick and adjust? It's good as is.
00:34:04 (11) - ^ It's good as is.
00:46:96 (5) - Finish? Fixed.
00:50:46 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:58:35 (1) - No finish? Changed to Soft Whistle.
01:26:38 (12) - Start slider on red tick and adjust? It's good as is.
01:33:38 (11) - ^ It's good as is.
01:46:52 (5) - Finish? Fixed.
02:27:25 (1) - ^ Fixed.
02:27:47 (2) - Remove Clap Fixed.
02:44:99 (1) - Add a Clap? Done.
02:49:59 (5) - Finish Fixed.

minyeob wrote:

Just One Thing

[Normal]
00:07:11 (1) ~ 00:24:62 (1) - Borrrrring Please try to add sliders on this part.Added a few to make it a little more exciting. xD

That's all

I like the map
Star for you Thank you!

GbL wrote:

[Normal]:

00:21:90: Break here? Naw, added some notes instead.
01:58:35 (1,2): spacing Good as it is.

Dont see anything wrong in Hard, nice.
Star. Thanks!

tieff wrote:

[Normal]
01:58:35 (1,2) - Jumps on normal diff? Alright, fixed.

[Hard]
00:55:504 ~ 00:56:051 - Stream here? Though I like the stream to the drums, I mapped the song to the lyrics, so I'm keeping it this way.
02:51:122 ~ 02:51:779 - ^ ^
02:55:28 (1,2) - Whistles. I like it, added.

Very cool map! Thank you!

Rolled wrote:

Just took a quick look because I like the song, and I think claps are heavily overused. Other than that it's pretty solid, though I don't like the spinners at 00:39:95 followed by the hitcircles. Maybe you could make it a bit more interesting. I'd even prefer like a 1/2 bpm slider repeating sliders over the spinner. Either way though it's up to you, I just think it could be a bit more interesting.

Lizbeth wrote:

nice map

Normal
all fine

Hard
00:33:82 (11) - i think sounds better if you move slider start point 1/2 beat later. (only the Start of Slider)
01:33:38 (11) - same
I think they're good as they are, but thanks for looking. ^^

this are just my suggestions, u can ignore it if u want.

anyway nice job Thanks!
star!

Symbolic wrote:

<3 Paramore


[Normal]

00:08:86 (4) - New combo. Fixed.
00:11:05 (7) - ^ Fixed.
00:13:24 (11) - ^ Fixed.
00:15:86 (5) - ^ Fixed.
00:19:37 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:26:38 (4) - New combo + whistle. The earlier whistles/new combo's are matched with the background guitar, so not fixed.
00:33:38 (4) - ^ ^
00:33:82 (5) - After that ^, new combo. ^
01:07:10 (2) - New combo. Fixed.
01:08:86 (6) - ^ Fixed.
01:15:43 (7) - ^ Fixed.
01:25:94 (4) - New combo + whistle. See 00:26:38 (4)
01:32:51 (2) - Whistle on endpoint. ^
01:34:263 (x) - Add a note here. Fixed.
02:29:00 (5) - New combo. Fixed.
02:32:51 (5) - ^ Fixed.
02:56:81 (3) - Extend this slider 1/2 so it ends on the guitarsound. Fixed.
03:03:16 (3) - New combo. Fixed.
03:04:04 (4) - ^ Fixed.
03:04:92 (5) - ^ Fixed.
03:05:79 (6) - ^ Fixed.


[Hard]

00:07:32 (2) - New combo goes here. Fixed.
00:49:37 (1) - Exten- wait this sounds kewl how it is, nvm ^-^
02:56:81 (2) - Extend 1/2 so it ends on the guitarsound. Fixed.


Best song + map ever,
Starred * + Kudosu *


P.S.: My diff will come soon <3

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
00:59:22 (1) - Redo break after this note. It'll lengthen quite a bit.
Redo last break as well. Fixed.


Overall~
The believe the file size limit is 20MB with video.
Is there a chance that you can maybe lower it a little more? I'll get on that.

Nice maps :3 Thanks!

Breeze wrote:

hi Eddycted
sorry for my late mod

here's some suggestion:

[Noamal]

have you used 1/8 distance spacing? I'm not sure about BPM, but it seemed your some of your notes are not snap to the tick, please confirum your BPM and OFFSET, then resnap all the notes by 1/4 distance spacing Checked and realigned to be sure.
00:37:774 - add finish Fixed.
01:10:175 (1) - a little be coverd by front note, try array it from another side Fixed.
01:26:672 (1) - position is strange, put it at 01:26:380 Not fixed, it's matches the sound as it is.

[Hard]

bigger circle for more fun please I'll think about that.
00:37:041 - add break Fixed.
02:53:642 - ^ Fixed.

nice map
star! Thanks!

fartownik wrote:

[Normal]
01:11:489 (3) - 1/4 forward and 1/4 shorter. Naw, it's good as it is (synced to lyrics "let's play")

[Hard]
I think almost everything is fine, but I don't like one thing. Clap hitsounds in some places sounds randomly a bit. And there are too much of them. I will take a look at that, since it isn't the first complaint. I'll probably end up redoing most, if not all, hit sounds.

~Starry

Symbolic wrote:

Here's my diff ^_^

mrtn wrote:

try offset 6218

[normal]
00:21:56 (1) - remove new combo Working as intended.
00:59:45 - reinsert break Fixed.
01:28:13 (1) - remove new combo Working as intended.
01:59:01 - reinsert break Fixed.

[hard]
no problems Woot. ^^

good job, starred Thank you!

mrtn wrote:

[symbolic]
00:55:28 (4,5) - i don't like this overlap I wanted to storyboard a reverse-arrow but you didn't think that would help so changed it...
01:54:84 (4,5) - ^ ^
02:13:24 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this jump is very unexpected k
02:52:65 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - this spacing change is unexpected I wanted to storyboard x0,5/x1,0/x2,0 signs but you didn't want to help me with it so it's your own fault


good job, starred thanks for modding

Skyripper wrote:

[Normal]
01:11:38 (3) - The ticks of the slider are ticking on blue ticks and it's just awful (no offense meant). Consider placing a beat here 01:11:38, and then a slider here 01:11:70. Fixed.
01:34:70 (1) - I feel like this spinner should extend to 01:38:20 (1).. (this one is just a suggestion, no need to change)

[Hard]
00:15:65 (1) - this isn't spaced properly at all, I'm not sure if it was on purpose, but if you let the editor distance snap, you can put the endpoint of the slider on the (5) in the previous combo. Move other things accordingly Fixed.
00:44:34 (2) - this isn't spaced right either, should be further from the slider (for consistency), it currently looks like it should happen 1/8 faster than it does Fixed.
01:43:90 (2) - ^ Fixed.

PM me to rebubble

Skyripper wrote:

[Sym]
02:52:00 (1,2,3) - I suggest stacking this or something because in the next combo (02:53:31 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) is spaced identically and it's pretty much the most confusing thing EVER fixed