1. 00:59:105 (1) - This is off by 9 grids. Move this to x:472 y:192.

Liiraye wrote:

Heyy! Since you told me you'd check mine out when it's ready for ranking I figured I'd check one of yours in return! (also because I'm very bored and have no other mods atm lol) thanks!

Clarity

00:45:043 (1) NC but these kinds of combos are supposed to be consistent with the rest of the map. they make sense to me.
00:57:699 (7) Isn't this supposed to have a finish instead of combo 8? Judging by previous patterns and fitness of the vocals nice. fixed.
01:23:246 (7) NC sure.
01:45:043 (6) Here I'd remove the whistle on the slider and add whistles on the beginning and the end of it to match the vocals not too sure about this one.
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02:12:230 (7) I thought this section sounded very weird and not following as it should be, let me know what you think about this: Finish here
02:12:933 (2) Remove finish
02:13:168 (3) Finish
02:13:871 Remove finish
02:14:105 (5) Finish
IMO it fits way better, but do as you like! n on all above, I like how it is now.
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02:22:308 (5) Why isn't this in symmetry with 02:20:433 (1,3) ? Very strange placement nice catch.
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02:32:855 (4) Finish
02:33:558 Remove finish
02:35:433 (5) Remove finish
02:35:668 Add finish
02:36:371 (2) Remove finish
02:36:605 (3) Add finish gonna have to say n on these again.
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02:57:699 (1) Why not finish here instead of the repeat? placed it at the end~

03:30:746 (2) You probably know this but, this note hangs on a thin thread of being overmapped. Not sure what you feel about it but it kinda bugged me. Not that big of a deal I guess! Though imo a 1/1 slider (from combo 1->3) sounds great I like this as it is now. just preference, at this point.

03:37:074 (2) Remove whistle on sliderstart since she takes a little bit lower tone here! negatory. still works good for me.
03:43:871 (10) Whistle+finish? sure, nice catch.
04:06:605 (3,4) Remove whistle on both sliders and only keep the whistle on the sliderstarts hmm, sure. this sounds better~

JohnWinter wrote:

Really good song and map, I hope this gets ranked

Raose wrote:

Yo yo yo wassup dkun, you pro mapper. Feel free to reject everything I am about to suggest

[General]

maybe add some tags so people find your map easier, not sure what tags to add though... yeah. this is what I came across as well. I don't know what to add.

[Remedy]

00:21:839 (5,1,2,3) - ehhh the 5 & 1 feel funny to me because they don't really match the vocals. How about moving 5 to the next white tick (00:22:074), extending the next slider, and replacing one of the sliders with a circle instead? here's a pic and ignore the colors: tried it out, but didn't like it too much. I understand where you're coming from, but I think my iteration of it is better.

SPOILER

00:30:043 (5) - whistle on the head?
00:53:949 (4) - whistle both done
01:07:543 (4) - i think it'd be cool to have the slider have the sharp turn when the singer starts to say "my" that'd just make the slider play awkward, imo
01:09:418 (1) - think it'd sound nice to have finish on the head, and signal the start of the upbeat part of the song works with me.
03:58:168 (1) - clap at the end of the spinner eh, I don't like this too much
04:16:566 (1) - add a circle here instead and move spinner 1/2 (end at original spot) to be consistent with 01:52:543 (3,4,5) ? totally get where you're coming from, but the start of the spinner is supposed to replace a beat (in correlation to 3,4,5 -- the spinner acts as 5)

[Clarity]

00:21:605 (4) - make this straight and parallel to 5 this is in purpose.
00:45:511 (6) - flows a bit better imo if it curve dthe other way like so: I like how it is now.

SPOILER

00:46:918 (9,1) - stack these? they're not stacked intentionally.
01:20:902 (2) - even listening at 25% i can't hear the 1/4 note x_X kinda used hitsounds to supplement this. it's not so bad, is it?
01:45:980 (8) - instead of a slider, maybe you could put 1/2 circles or sliders to match the word "re-me-dy" n, I enjoy how it is now.
01:53:480 - i hear a stream in the music! why not map it XD argHGHHAHHHHGHH FINE (you're like the third person to note this)
04:08:480 (7) - instead of a slider, maybe you could put 1/2 circles or sliders to match the word "re-me-dy" same as 01:45

goodluck! nice song~ yeah, I love it. thanks for the mod!

1. Changed the background
2. Added some tags: Anton Zaslavski Zaslavsky
3. Many changes on Remedy: patterns, flows, etc.
4. Minor changes on Clarity

Bubbled >//<

vipto wrote:

Congratulations!

Zeraphlol wrote:

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IF OUR LOOOOVE IS INSANITY WHY ARE YOU MY CLARITYYYYY

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