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YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
来继续
我还是觉得ar9比较好，至少不是很花
01:07:830 (1,2,3,4) - 总觉得有点歪，而且逆时针更顺手一些
01:11:430 (5) - 没叠好
01:13:590 (1) - ^
01:16:710 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 间距差距有点大，建议逐渐减小
01:35:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - 一定是歪了
01:49:110 (5,6,7,8) - 5移到6,6移到7，7移到5
01:57:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 请ctrl+shift+D
02:18:870 - 02:33:270 这段break好了要不累死
02:33:750 (3) - 前两个都是直的为什么这个是弯的
02:52:950 (1) - Ctrl+g
02:57:270 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 我感觉这个unrankable，建议是02:58:230 (1,2,3) - 倒过来，03:00:150 (1,2,3) - 也倒过来，然后调整distance
03:14:070 (4) - 拖近一点
03:15:990 (4) - ^
03:25:110 (4,5,6,7) - 为何如此之近
03:43:110 (5) - 柑橘没包好
03:56:790 (1,3) - Ctrl+g
04:27:510 (1,2,3,4) - 有点远，而且一定是歪了
04:40:230 (4,6) - 往上挪一点
05:17:430 (1) - 这扭得
05:25:110 (1) - 朝右边弯
05:37:110 (4) - Ctrl+g
05:38:550 (1) - 没叠好
05:48:150 (2,4) - Ctrl+g
05:56:310 (2) - 没叠好
05:58:710 (4,5,6) - 这梗不错啊
goodmap 为什么我没听到音效
GL
no KDs or I will shoot back
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc

615915887 wrote:

来继续
我还是觉得ar9比较好，至少不是很花bbu这怎么DT
01:07:830 (1,2,3,4) - 总觉得有点歪，而且逆时针更顺手一些 no change=-=
01:11:430 (5) - 没叠好 fixed
01:13:590 (1) - ^ fixed
01:16:710 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - 间距差距有点大，建议逐渐减小 音乐逐渐提音的 我觉得逐渐增大好些
01:35:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - 一定是歪了 fixed
01:49:110 (5,6,7,8) - 5移到6,6移到7，7移到5 换了种方式
01:57:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 请ctrl+shift+D OK
02:18:870 - 02:33:270 这段break好了要不累死 いやです
02:33:750 (3) - 前两个都是直的为什么这个是弯的 直了难看
02:52:950 (1) - Ctrl+g Nice idea
02:57:270 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 我感觉这个unrankable，建议是02:58:230 (1,2,3) - 倒过来，03:00:150 (1,2,3) - 也倒过来，然后调整distance我觉得这个梗不错啊
03:14:070 (4) - 拖近一点fixed
03:15:990 (4) - ^ fixed
03:25:110 (4,5,6,7) - 为何如此之近 神奇的变远了
03:43:110 (5) - 柑橘没包好 那是幻觉
03:56:790 (1,3) - Ctrl+g 这比之前更能造成读图失误
04:27:510 (1,2,3,4) - 有点远，而且一定是歪了 换了个方式
04:40:230 (4,6) - 往上挪一点好
05:17:430 (1) - 这扭得 你不服?
05:25:110 (1) - 朝右边弯 OK
05:37:110 (4) - Ctrl+g 不好
05:38:550 (1) - 没叠好 Fixed
05:48:150 (2,4) - Ctrl+g 不是很喜欢
05:56:310 (2) - 没叠好 1px你也看得出来..
05:58:710 (4,5,6) - 这梗不错啊 你开玩笑吗/.\....整个map到处是这个东西...不过我想不出其他东西代替
goodmap 为什么我没听到音效音效很轻我也想求指导该怎么弄/.\
GL
no KDs or I will shoot back
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
嗯，说好的mod,K姐赛高！
我觉得有必要突出的地方会用*标记

Insane
如果仅仅有一个难度准备app掉这个的话，难度名字建议改成Speical
00:21:750 (1,2,3) -
排列变换一下也是挺不错的
*00:24:030 (3,4) - 先在00:23:910就爱一个note，然后把00:24:030 (3) - 后移一个四分拍
00:51:030 (4,5,6,7) - 合并成两个短滑条
00:54:870 (4,5,6) - 也可以考虑展开
01:01:110 (9,10) - 都可以nc
01:24:150 (5,6,7) - flip horizontally，最好能让5和2的位置差不多
01:43:350 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/4N8t7.jpg
感觉这里需要这么突出一下，滑条可以加个速，1.25比较合适，滑条起始位置和你原来的5的位置一样
02:19:830 (5,6,7,8) - 和 02:21:750 (4,5) - 这两个地方的梗换个位置也就是说5,6,7,8用滑条代替，而4,5展开为连打
03:03:990 (11) - 也许可以考虑换成一个二分拍长度的滑条，加速为1.25倍
03:13:590 (2,3,4,5) -
试试这种排列
03:15:510 (2,3,4) -
试试这种排列
03:58:710 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉还是适合做成四方跳,第一个1在第一区间，然后顺时针旋转，第二个1放在x正轴上，最后的3,4迁就5的位置就成
04:05:430 (3) - nc
04:05:910 (5) - nc
04:36:510 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - 加大间距试试？
04:52:470 从这之后的KIAI部分建议滑条整体加速，note间距随着滑条加速的倍数提升

整体没什么问题了……
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc

Nightcore Princess G wrote:

嗯，说好的mod,K姐赛高！ ;DD
我觉得有必要突出的地方会用*标记

Insane
如果仅仅有一个难度准备app掉这个的话，难度名字建议改成Speical
00:21:750 (1,2,3) -
排列变换一下也是挺不错的
*00:24:030 (3,4) - 先在00:23:910就爱一个note，然后把00:24:030 (3) - 后移一个四分拍 节奏好怪..
00:51:030 (4,5,6,7) - 合并成两个短滑条
00:54:870 (4,5,6) - 也可以考虑展开 换了个方式=-=
01:01:110 (9,10) - 都可以nc 好
01:24:150 (5,6,7) - flip horizontally ，最好能让5和2的位置差不多 fixed
01:43:350 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/4N8t7.jpg
感觉这里需要这么突出一下，滑条可以加个速，1.25比较合适，滑条起始位置和你原来的5的位置一样 不好/.\
02:19:830 (5,6,7,8) - 和 02:21:750 (4,5) - 这两个地方的梗换个位置也就是说5,6,7,8用滑条代替，而4,5展开为连打反复试了好久还是喜欢以前的/.\
03:03:990 (11) - 也许可以考虑换成一个二分拍长度的滑条，加速为1.25倍
03:13:590 (2,3,4,5) -
试试这种排列
03:15:510 (2,3,4) -
试试这种排列
嘎嘣脆鸡肉味
03:58:710 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 感觉还是适合做成四方跳,第一个1在第一区间，然后顺时针旋转，第二个1放在x正轴上，最后的3,4迁就5的位置就成不好
04:05:430 (3) - nc OK
04:05:910 (5) - nc
04:36:510 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - 加大间距试试？不要太变态=-=这里用声音体现一下就好..
04:52:470 从这之后的KIAI部分建议滑条整体加速，note间距随着滑条加速的倍数提升 /.\待定

整体没什么问题了……
Frostmourne
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Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
From my modding queue.

Overall nice map that I have found nothing worthy mentioning.
Just a few suggestions I am going to give here.

00:59:670 (5) - clap
01:25:110 (1) - finish on head with whistle, both sounds work fine.
01:34:590 (2) - stick with the next slider could be fine because it can be read easier same as you did on 01:35:550 (4) -
SPOILER
02:16:950 (1) - Try this instead of a spinner, I think it's really too short and feels hard to spin it properly. (Add clap on both notes)
SPOILER
02:41:910 (1) - finish head with whistle same as 01:25:110 (1) - that I mentioned above. (head only)
02:52:950 (1) - move this down a bit to this point. It looks a bit not ok when it overlaps with 02:52:470 (10) -
SPOILER
04:05:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try using Drum Sampleset as you did on 04:04:950 (2) - but with around 40-50% volume. I think it fits with the music so much :D

Also I don't think this break 03:57:750 is significant. Maybe you can either remove it or keep it.

Call me back and I will bubble :D
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc

Frostmourne wrote:

From my modding queue.

Overall nice map that I have found nothing worthy mentioning.
Just a few suggestions I am going to give here.

00:59:670 (5) - clap
01:25:110 (1) - finish on head with whistle, both sounds work fine.
01:34:590 (2) - stick with the next slider could be fine because it can be read easier same as you did on 01:35:550 (4) -
SPOILER
02:16:950 (1) - Try this instead of a spinner, I think it's really too short and feels hard to spin it properly. (Add clap on both notes)
SPOILER
02:41:910 (1) - finish head with whistle same as 01:25:110 (1) - that I mentioned above. (head only)
02:52:950 (1) - move this down a bit to this point. It looks a bit not ok when it overlaps with 02:52:470 (10) -
SPOILER
04:05:430 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try using Drum Sampleset as you did on 04:04:950 (2) - but with around 40-50% volume. I think it fits with the music so much :D

Also I don't think this break 03:57:750 is significant. Maybe you can either remove it or keep it.

Call me back and I will bubble :D
all fixed except 01:34:590 (2) - :)
thx very much
Frostmourne
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Frostmourne
:)

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Momochikun
1,927 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
Because first ranked map will be too mainstream.
So it called first approved and first ranked map :roll:
Nymph
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
Nymph
瞎了
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc

Nymph wrote:

瞎了
哇吧妮妮炸出来了_(:з)∠)_
sjoy
1,025 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
真瞎了
比我还屌
不得不服阿 :o
lkx_Shore
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Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
恭喜rank
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
What? A mapper doesn't have ranked and start first with approved. Oh God ><
rokusunkugi
7 posts
Joined August 2010
rokusunkugi
Title:Love A Riddle -> LOVE A RIDDLE

Source:

http://www.please-please.jp/one/item/cd000x.html
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
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Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
ok :D
gxytcgxytc
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Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
gxytcgxytc

rokusunkugi wrote:

Title:Love A Riddle -> LOVE A RIDDLE

Source:

http://www.please-please.jp/one/item/cd000x.html

Frostmourne wrote:

ok :D
thank you xD
sjoy
1,025 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
变灰了，蜡烛
gxytcgxytc
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gxytcgxytc

sjoy wrote:

变灰了，蜡烛
233 过几天找人入坟好了 有点累
gxytcgxytc
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gxytcgxytc
no change pop
tired
Kinomi
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Joined August 2012
Kinomi
怎么戳了？你在干嘛
gxytcgxytc
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gxytcgxytc

Tsukuyomi wrote:

怎么戳了？你在干嘛
各种各样的事吧-.-
而且也要准备考试
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