Gloria Guard wrote:

[General]

I think soft-sliderslide add is better imo..
because it's spoil the mood of the song

- i added it (again) XD

[Easy]

01:04:966 ~ 01:28:216 This part sound really big! because this part hear really quiet.
i recommend sound volume 40~50%. down imo

- you're right, i fixed this

[Normal]

00:06:079 (2,3) Umm this slider pattern shape more improve imo. - fixed, i changed like your pattern

SPOILER

01:04:966 ~ 01:28:216 easy diff same

- fixed

[Hard]

01:51:466 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) You don't overlap notes please.. this overlap playing really confuse. - fixed
You increase this part spacing 1.2x please.
01:52:966 (1,2,3) (1) repeat slider why (2),(3) repeat sliders overlap?.. It is interfere with playing.- fixed

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! Your requested mod :3

General:
I feel like that kiai part should be actually 00:52:966 (1) - 01:04:966 (1) I don't understand why you put the kiai on a slow part.
then also add kiai here 01:43:966 (1) - 01:55:966 (1) - if you want to know why look above, i changed the kiai to your suggestion

Easy:
00:06:466 (2) - I think a longer reverse slider would fit better - http://puu.sh/3BS0H.jpg - because of the melody, it actually feels weird while playing, so the place between these sliders 00:06:466 (2,1) - feel empty, but if you made that reverse slider longer, it wouldn't be empty, but it would still fit the music, and as I can see, you did it similarly here - 00:24:466 (3)
00:09:466 (2) - ^
00:12:466 (2) - ^
01:12:466 (2,3) - remove (2) and put (3) earlier, and make it longer, like this - http://puu.sh/3BSdi.jpg - it fits the melody very well
01:15:466 (2,3) - same here ^

Actually this is a very nice difficulty, good job.
Thanks :3 I fixed all

Normal:
00:05:716 (2) - this should be a simple slider and not a reverse slider, it would fit better to the melody, but like that this 00:06:278 - feels too empty, so maybe you could try mapping this differently, for example: http://puu.sh/3BSxG.jpg or maybe just add a hit circle? - i added a circle
00:08:716 (3) - ^ ^
00:11:716 (2) - ^ ^
00:53:716 (3,6,3,6) - these claps sound kind of odd or unfitting, maybe you could try using something else, something that is softer (like a soft whistle or..etc.) - I'm really disagree
01:06:091 (4,4) - don't use clap here, it's too loud, and this is a silent part in the music - fixed
01:23:341 (2,3,2,3) - same about the claps, you could also give some curve to these sliders maybe? it might look nicer, just like this - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864537 - your idea was great, looks much better now
01:44:716 (3,6) - not really a good idea to stack these, try to place them in another way, this is an example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864544 - also fixed, but in another way
01:47:716 (3,6) - same as above ^ try to think of something else ^
01:51:466 (1) - what about ctrl+G on this slider? so that the flow will be better, look at this - http://puu.sh/3BUdb.jpg - fixed
01:56:716 (3,4) - I already mentioned this before, it's the same as - 00:05:716 (2) - all fixed like above
01:59:716 (3,4) - ^ ^
02:02:716 (3,4) - ^ ^
02:04:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this is too much for a Normal, and if you listen to the melody, it doesn't need so many sliders, I think you shold do it like you did previously - fixed

Hard:
00:06:466 (3,4) - I think you should follow the melody more, because it actually feels weird to play this, something like this - http://puu.sh/3BUEc.jpg - fixed
00:13:966 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should improve this pattern, I personally don't like little overlaps, but aside from that 00:15:091 (4) - doesn't look so nice, so at least try to change the place of that one (if you don't want to change all of them)- fixed
00:15:841 (1,2,3,4) - I repeat what I mentioned above, try to improve the pattern, and improve the flow too, it is not so nice to go to (3) from (2) and then go back to (4) which is at the same spot, so, something like this could work too? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864853 - it's just an example, but I think it might improve flow - fixed, used youre suggestion
00:21:091 (4) - this is a bit confusing, because the melody is actually on 00:20:903 - so maybe try replacing (4)? and you start following the melody here anyway 00:21:278 (1,2) - so it would fit- fixed
00:23:153 (2) - add hit circle? it would fit the melody - would fit, but doesnt't sounds good
00:26:341 (2) - ctrl+G for better flow (and good distance)- fixed
00:28:403 (5,6,1) - I think you should change this, simply to make a nicer pattern and also because (4) leads in the opposite direction, so if you changed the pattern, it would flow better, for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864861 - fixed
00:34:966 (1,1) - I think you should remove the whistles, they don't fit, you used a kind of "drum" or whatever before, so try to change the whistle
also, according to the beat the reverse slider should be something like this - http://puu.sh/3BYzf.jpg - so it should have the reverse arrow on the white tick 1/2 after where it is now, but of course if you did that, you should change this 00:37:966 (1) - too - the voulme was too high, i lowered it
00:52:966 (1) - add new combo after the spinner - some wayne stuff, but okay
00:52:966 (1,2,3) - this kind of pattern would have a better flow, since (3) would lead into (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864873- fixed
00:59:341 (2,3,4) - this would flow better and it looks nicer too - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864876- fixed
01:00:841 (2,3) - this little jump is weird, it feels forced just to keep symmetry, so you should try to think of a better way to place these, and there are many objects near each other, so it would be better if you placed them in another way- fixed
01:06:091 (4,5,6) - remove clap from these, they sound weird, also, I don't know why you placed 3 objects, because the song has a long melody, and I think 3 objects sound unfitting, so you should make one long slider- added a custom clap
01:09:091 (4,5,6) - same as above ^ both hitsounds and too many objects - ^
01:13:403 (6) - according to the melody there should be only a simple slider, and not a reverse slider - you're listened wrong to the melody
01:13:403 (6,3) - use something else instead of the claps, like soft whistle or..etc. - claps sounds different now XD
01:23:903 (3,6) - ^ ;P
01:29:716 (3,4) - it's weird that you suddenly start (4) on the other side, so it's confusing, and again, you seem to do that because of symmetry, so I would suggest you to try something else, for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864908 - though, for this, you'll slightly have to change these 01:28:966 (1,2,3) - mhh changed but i didn't used your suggest, would looks bad with the slider before :C
01:43:966 (1) - add new combo after spinner- wayne D:
01:46:591 (4) - I would replace this for better flow, and because it is quite far from (1), but you used distance snap, so it looks weird that the distance is not near 1.00 between (4) and (1), you could try placing it somewhere in the red section - http://puu.sh/3BZH1.jpg - mhh i'm disagree
01:53:341 (2,3) - I think this would work better, since (1) leads upwards, but you placed (2,3) down - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864927 - changed like your suggest
02:09:466 (5,7) - very small thing, but it would look nicer if you placed these a little bit further from each other - beause your mod is great, okay XD
02:15:466 (5,6) - don't overlap these
02:15:841 (6) - why is this a long slider? I think 1/2 would fit better for the melody (well if you don't change the previous things, at least make this a better blanket 02:15:841 (6,7) - ) - changed patern

I hope it was useful, good luck!

mathi747 wrote:

Hi~

Hard:
Feels a bit undermaped tbh
00:10:966 (1,3) - those sliders sound weird imo - sounds like every slider on this map
00:34:966 (1,1) - well not sure if this 2 big sliders are the best idea for this part maybe you can change them - fit to the synth in the back
00:59:341 (2,3) - imo this overlap dont look good - but i think it does
00:25:403 (4) - this is very personal but how about using 1.5 spacing with this circle - why should i do this
02:10:966 - maybe this is too loud, how about lowering by 5% or 10% - would bring inconsistency to the presilder

Normal:
Looks good for me but i feel like ar too high for such a slow map and i dont know you but im not fan of small circles so how about ar-1 and cs+1 - i don't think so, the map would look messy with CS+1

Easy:
Looks good for me too but generally easy goes with od 2 or even 1 - fixed

Sorry poor mod a bit rushed
Good luck!

Krah wrote:

Hi =)
Random mod


[General]

- Ok


[Easy]

- 00:16:966 (1,2) - *nazi* y=248 for harmonize the distance snapping. - okay, okay XD
- 00:58:216 (4) - It would be better if your slider curves up insted of curving down - jup
- 01:05:716 (2) - Please avoid stack for beginner. - .___. , i changed it, because a few modder said this already, i know this by myself, but imp it's so a stupid suggest
- 01:13:966 (1) -This can be really confused for a beginner. Make instead a circle slider ? - no, not a circle, changed the slider shape :3
- 02:10:966 (2,3) - NC for both of this notes. - jup


[Normal]

- 00:33:466 (3,4,5,6) - I really think you can make a better pattern with this notes. - how about a suggestion? XD
- 00:34:966 (1) - Map this instead of just do a slider ? - no, fits to the synth :3
- 00:57:466 (4) - x=372,y=40 for harmonize the distance snapping - you're such a nazi modder, but well , okay fixed XD
- 01:01:966 (5) - Ctrl+g - yes :3
- 01:06:091 (4) - This slider is offscreen and really limit on a 4:3 screen :s Fix this - fixed
- 02:10:966 (2,3) - NC for both of this notes- jep


[Hard]

- 00:14:716 (3) - Ctrl+g
- 00:15:466 (5) - Untack this ? - no, i like it how it is, sry :/
- 00:23:341 (2) - Ctrl+g - jep :3
- 00:59:716 (3) - ^ - jep :3
- 01:52:403 (4) - There is no need here for a repeat slider. Make instead a simple slider of 1beat. - no way, sounds much better how it is
- 01:57:841 (2) - Ctrl+g - fixed
- 02:00:841 (2) - ^ - fixed


Good luck for rank =)

backstep wrote:

Mod as your request (Quick check i need some rest now, it started mod 1:35 PM)

General

I'm hitsound modder, so i don't mod about your style arrange notes.

Easy

00:53:716 (2) - Normal Clap pattern i feel weird, i suggest remove ALL CLAPS then add whistle at start slider (It's look better)
00:55:216 (4) - ^
00:56:716 (2) - ^
00:58:216 (4) - ^
00:59:716 (2) - ^
01:01:216 (4) - ^
01:44:716 (2) - ^
01:46:216 (4) - ^
01:47:716 (2) - ^
01:49:216 (4) - ^
01:50:716 (2) - ^
01:52:216 (4) - ^

It sounds really bad whistle instead of clap,i'm really disagree

Normal

- Suggestion like Easy diff - same as above, ab big NO

00:53:716 (3) - Normal Clap pattern i feel weird, i suggest remove ALL CLAPS then add whistle at start slider (It's look better)
00:55:216 (6) - ^
00:56:716 (3) - ^
00:58:216 (6) - ^
00:58:966 (1) - Add whistle at the end of slider.
01:00:466 (3) - ^
01:44:716 (3) - Normal Clap pattern i feel weird, i suggest remove ALL CLAPS then add whistle at start slider (It's look better)
01:46:216 (6) - ^
01:47:716 (3) - ^
01:49:216 (6) - ^
01:49:966 (1) - End of slider add whistle.
01:51:466 (1) - ^

Hard

You kidding me? .___.

00:52:966 (1) - Add whistle at end of slider.
00:54:466 (3) - ^
00:56:716 (3) - Whistle.
00:58:216 (6) - Add Whistle at start of slider.
00:59:716 (3) - ^
01:00:841 (2) - Add Whistle at end of slider.
01:43:966 (1) - ^
01:45:466 (3) - ^
01:46:966 (1) - ^
01:49:216 (4) - Add Whistle at start of slider.
01:50:716 (3) - Add whistle.
01:52:216 (3) - ^
02:16:216 (7,8) - Swap this note ? (It's look easy to guess it.) - the only useful suggest

I hate "TRANCE" but this is i can do, good luck

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ AnimeStyle

In - Game PM Request!!

[Easy]

Sry, but I DIDN'T change anything that have to do with hitsounds, they are already perfect o_O

00:53:716 (2) - The end of the slider remove clap

00:55:216 (4) - ^ ( Same as above )

00:56:716 (2) - ^

00:58:216 (4) - ^

00:59:716 (2) - ^

01:01:216 (4) - ^

01:44:716 (2,3,4) - ^

01:47:716 (2,3,4) - ^

01:50:716 (2,3,4) - ^

[Normal]

02:02:716 (3) -

SPOILER

Would it be better?

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hi o/

[General]
Blue combo: it feels really dark. You should do a little brighter. Remember that most of the players darken the background, and a dark color combo is almost invisible. - it's good , that you take this in mind, but it's not a problem, i played the map with darken background, and you can see the blue ones really good :3

[Hard]
00:08:716 (4,5,6) - It feels cluttered. Use the rotation tool, and rotate -25° for better flow. - changed , great idea by the way
00:34:966 (1) - the whistle not hear. You have two choices: 1) you turn up the volume, or 2) you're going down on each hit in 00:31:591 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 5% (70%, 65% ... 25%, 20%).
It's horrible when such sudden changes in hitsounds without an obvious reason. - added a normal-sliderwhistle(with an other sound) , so i don't have to change the volume at this point ;3
00:40:966 (1) - mm ... I do not know ... I think it would be nice to feel a blow stronger here. - 50% volume now
01:04:216 (7) - wtf xD, here it should be a little longer, because it feels so empty. It should be up 01:04:591. - added a circle
01:55:216 (7) - ^ to 01:55:591. - ^
01:08:716 (3) - I understand that you did well to maintain symmetry, but, seriously, it feels very bad that the next slider does not begin at the end of this. My advice is to go up a little, because it is well hidden and hard to read. So: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/910381 - i'm really disagree, your suggest doesn't look good, and i think it's readable very well ._.
01:31:216 (7,1) - Epic xD - Thanks XD
02:01:966 (1,1) - is whistle not hear, and they have no forgiveness. UP THE VOLUME! (To 40% or a little more) - same as above ^^

[Normal and Easy]
good, _ YEAH *-*


Luck for rank!

AnimeStyle wrote:

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hi o/

01:08:716 (3) - I understand that you did well to maintain symmetry, but, seriously, it feels very bad that the next slider does not begin at the end of this. My advice is to go up a little, because it is well hidden and hard to read. So: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/910381 - i'm really disagree, your suggest doesn't look good, and i think it's readable very well ._. <-- try play with HR xDDDD, pls, change this ^^

Aldwych wrote:

Mod as resquest :
Easy

- 00:29:716 to 00:34:216 : Move these objetcs to the middle of the map (up all). - fixed
- 02:07:966 : Please, thoses circles don't make sense, moreover in double-time + hidden. Add Some long sliders? - o_O stupid suggestion, of course the make sense, have you maybe looked on normal at this time? everytime in normal starts a slider, in easy is a circle :3


]Normal

- 00:30:466 : Why two different Y positions for these 4 circles? Or maybe down n°4 and n°5. have you chagened them? (3) is 264 and (6) too 84) and (5) are 256
- 00:49:966 : Imo this part of music doesn't seems different as the break part before, you should remove it. - I like spinner at the end of a break, sry but personal reason :3
- 01:25:966 : No for all thoses circles, better put a long spinner here. There's no reason to put circles with finish hitsoubund here X_x - please first take a look on all diffs before saying something like this, same thing like in hard w_w

Hard

- 00:09:270 : Ok for the pattern, but the beat snap with the 3 circles is a bit confusing, can you fix that? - fixed
- 00:28:966 : Tooooooo much circles! :'< - NO :>
- 00:34:966 : Thoses whistles. - already fixed, i added during your mod a normal-sliderwhistle LOL
- 01:00:091 (4)(5) : Replace by a slider and finish the symetrical pattern. - fixed, but this overlap looks not sooo good
- 01:28:966 : Same thing as normal diff, you can let the 1/4 slider. - no way dude, forget it XD
- 02:01:966 : WHISTLE!! - ^



That's it for today! Gl for rank.

1. title: 植松伸夫 (Uematsu Nobuo)

1. 00:01:966 (1) - why did you use finish? I feel there is instruments same as 00:02:716 (2,3,4) - . so this finish would not fit here. would better to exchange clap.
2. 00:01:966 (1,2,3,4) - these notes' hitsound may be too loud. because this section is really quiet. suggest to use 50%.
   this issue is also to other diffs.
3. 00:04:966 (1,2) - imo these notes do not follow same sounds (or not able to do enough). only (1) followed drum on this section. so need to adjust here (and also what have same pattern).
   but I suggest to follow drum on overall because if you choose (2)'s pattern, it will be complex and hard to grasp to beginner.
   
   
   1. 00:04:966 (1) - 2/1 slider
   2. 00:06:466 (2) - ^
   3. 00:07:591 (3) - circle (if you think not need, you can remove this)
   this is my suggestion to follow drum.
4. 00:10:966 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:13:966 (3) - why did you change rhythm? imo this section does not need arranging because instruments is same as before.
6. 00:24:466 (3) - same as 00:04:966
7. 00:27:466 (3) - ^
8. 00:31:966 (3) - I guess forget to add NC.
9. 00:52:966 (1) - why did not use 1/1 slider? 00:53:716 ~ 00:55:591 - also have same insturuments.
10. 00:55:966 (1) - ^
11. 00:58:966 (1) - ^
12. 01:43:966 (1) - ^
13. 01:46:966 (1) - ^
14. 01:49:966 (1) - ^
15. 02:03:466 (3) - same as 00:04:966
16. 02:06:466 (3) - ^
17. 02:16:966 (1) - remove finish? this spinner end is silence, so not makes sense to use finish.

1. 00:01:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is slow part, so would not better to use consecutive circles.
   
   like this
2. 00:06:278 (3) - fmm... this circle fits this song, but this balance is not good as compared with overall. this section stand out because this map is used 1/1 in almost parts.
   in addition, you did not follow 00:06:841 - 00:07:403 - . it does not have a consistent.
   I suggest to remove this circle. if you change this, you also need to do 00:09:278 (4) - 00:12:278 (3) - 00:16:028 (5) - 01:57:278 (4) - 02:00:278 (4) - 02:03:278 (4) - .
3. 00:18:466 (5) there has been a change in melody and notes from 00:16:966 - . but only this slider did not change like 00:16:966 (1,2,3,4) - so what use like 00:06:466 (4) - does not fit here. at least should use 1/1 on this map.
   
   like these
4. 00:21:466 (5) - ^
5. 00:24:466 (5) - ^
6. 00:27:466 (3) - ^
7. 00:34:966 (1) - 00:37:966 ~ 00:40:966 - ? 00:34:966 ~ 00:37:591 - is mappable and not exist instruments to extend spinner.
8. 00:58:966 (1,2,3,4) - why did not use some normal-hitclaps?
9. 01:52:966 (1,2,3,4) - these kick sliders will confuse beginners. you should be easy.
   
10. 02:07:966 (1,1,1) - kinda nice
11. 02:16:966 (1) - same as Easy

1. 00:06:841 (4) - ctrl+G? I think (4,5)'s distance is not good now... bit hard to play imo.
2. 00:14:341 (2,3) - slider length is too short in this hard. so this placement is hard to see the way.
   
   
   ^my suggestion
3. 00:17:903 - add any note here. like 00:20:716 (3) - .
4. 00:34:966 (1,1) - why did you use whistle? these is just really loud... ;_;
5. 00:40:591 - this volume may be unrankable because 5% is hard to hear. try to use 20%
6. 00:59:341 (2,3) - same as 00:14:341 (2,3)
7. 01:04:966 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 02:01:966 (1,1) - same as 00:34:966 (1,1)
9. 02:16:966 (1) - same as Easy

NewRulerNA wrote:

as your request
too short mod here

red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.


[General]

1. title: 植松伸夫 (Uematsu Nobuo)

- fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:01:966 (1) - why did you use finish? I feel there is instruments same as 00:02:716 (2,3,4) - . so this finish would not fit here. would better to exchange clap. - fixed
2. 00:01:966 (1,2,3,4) - these notes' hitsound may be too loud. because this section is really quiet. suggest to use 50%.
   this issue is also to other diffs. - lowed down to 65% in all diffs
3. 00:04:966 (1,2) - imo these notes do not follow same sounds (or not able to do enough). only (1) followed drum on this section. so need to adjust here (and also what have same pattern).
   but I suggest to follow drum on overall because if you choose (2)'s pattern, it will be complex and hard to grasp to beginner.
   
   
   1. 00:04:966 (1) - 2/1 slider
   2. 00:06:466 (2) - ^
   3. 00:07:591 (3) - circle (if you think not need, you can remove this)
   this is my suggestion to follow drum.
4. 00:10:966 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:13:966 (3) - why did you change rhythm? imo this section does not need arranging because instruments is same as before.
6. 00:24:466 (3) - same as 00:04:966
7. 00:27:466 (3) - ^
8. 00:31:966 (3) - I guess forget to add NC. -fixed
9. 00:52:966 (1) - why did not use 1/1 slider? 00:53:716 ~ 00:55:591 - also have same insturuments. - only thing of the easy mod i didn't changed, it sounds so good, and it's consistent to the follow kiai, same instruments, but other melody
10. 00:55:966 (1) - ^
11. 00:58:966 (1) - ^
12. 01:43:966 (1) - ^
13. 01:46:966 (1) - ^
14. 01:49:966 (1) - ^
15. 02:03:466 (3) - same as 00:04:966
16. 02:06:466 (3) - ^
17. 02:16:966 (1) - remove finish? this spinner end is silence, so not makes sense to use finish.

- fixed

FIXED ALMOST ALL

[Normal]

1. 00:01:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is slow part, so would not better to use consecutive circles. - i'm disagree, because i used in every diff at the beginning , also fits better to the beginning imp
   
   like this
2. 00:06:278 (3) - fmm... this circle fits this song, but this balance is not good as compared with overall. this section stand out because this map is used 1/1 in almost parts. - deleted
   in addition, you did not follow 00:06:841 - 00:07:403 - . it does not have a consistent. - it's consistent
   I suggest to remove this circle. if you change this, you also need to do 00:09:278 (4) - 00:12:278 (3) - 00:16:028 (5) - 01:57:278 (4) - 02:00:278 (4) - 02:03:278 (4) - . - deleted
3. 00:18:466 (5) there has been a change in melody and notes from 00:16:966 - . but only this slider did not change like 00:16:966 (1,2,3,4) - so what use like 00:06:466 (4) - does not fit here. at least should use 1/1 on this map. - it fit's don't annoy with 1/1 on a normal, it was boring enough to change the whole easy just for you, so don't expect this for my normal too
   
   like these
4. 00:21:466 (5) - ^ - no
5. 00:24:466 (5) - ^ - no
6. 00:27:466 (3) - ^ - NO
7. 00:34:966 (1) - 00:37:966 ~ 00:40:966 - ? 00:34:966 ~ 00:37:591 - is mappable and not exist instruments to extend spinner. - i need this spinner, to be CONSISTENT to easy
8. 00:58:966 (1,2,3,4) - why did not use some normal-hitclaps? - fixed, used default
9. 01:52:966 (1,2,3,4) - these kick sliders will confuse beginners. you should be easy. - did it like before
   
10. 02:07:966 (1,1,1) - kinda nice - thanks, i thought you want that i delete them ._.
11. 02:16:966 (1) - same as Easy- fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:06:841 (4) - ctrl+G? I think (4,5)'s distance is not good now... bit hard to play imo. - fixed
2. 00:14:341 (2,3) - slider length is too short in this hard. so this placement is hard to see the way.
   
   
   ^my suggestion - fixed
3. 00:17:903 - add any note here. like 00:20:716 (3) -fixed
4. 00:34:966 (1,1) - why did you use whistle? these is just really loud... ;_; - already fixed
5. 00:40:591 - this volume may be unrankable because 5% is hard to hear. try to use 20%- fixed
6. 00:59:341 (2,3) - same as 00:14:341 (2,3) - fixed
7. 01:04:966 (1,2,3) - ^ - it's readable very well, instead of the the sliders you metioned
8. 02:01:966 (1,1) - same as 00:34:966 (1,1) - already fixed
9. 02:16:966 (1) - same as Easy

- fixed


I did not mostly check hitsounds. but still needs more mods atm.

mod time: 2 hours

good luck

MathiasXII wrote:

Alright, here's my mod. I may sound harsh at some part (as usual), it's not because I'm being mad. It's just that it's how I communicate .

So overall, the maps makes sense... It seems this song would be ready to welcome the idea of a harder difficulty, but for what's there, it is very good quality .

[Easy]

- All good

[Normal]

Probably this beatmap's best asset. This is a really good normal difficulty!

I really have nothing to say here. I love the funky sliders, the flow is perfect.

- All good

[Hard]

Overall this difficulty is nice! It just all makes sense while being challenging.

Just a general remark : Make sure to use overlapping sliders SELDOMLY as in "it was absolutely necessary to overlap those sliders for my note pattern that I was trying to make". I wouldn't recommend overlapping sliders as a pattern itself just because it prevents you from using the precious 196 608 other pixels on your screen waiting for their time to shine . Some of the recent modding made you remove some overlapping sliders thought, making it acceptable now ~.

00:07:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can't relate ANYTHING from the song that justifies the use of a 0,50 spacing instead of the regular 1,00 spacing at that specific part. I'm not saying it's a bad idea to do so, I'm just saying that if there's no reason behind the variation of your spacing or no constancy (it happens once and that's it), you're better off using regular spacing. - fixed

00:58:966 (1,2,3,4) - I saw this part has been fixed! Thumbs up! - ^^

01:04:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just for feeback, I'm not really fond of slider orgies, even if I'm pretty sure they love each other so much they couldn't help it! I'm sure there is many other pattern possibilites that would be as fun and would not require sliders to be cramped up in such a tiny space. It's not a problem thought as it still plays decently well. - i like them (was before modding way worser ;3)


That's anything really. The spacing is great and the pace is great too! Everything I spotted was fixed in the previous moddings.

Good luck!

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from in-game request

[General]
1. You can delete the .osb file if the beatmap doesn't have a storyboard. Oops.. I forget u have combo burst in ur map - XD

[Easy]
1. 00:10:966 (1) - would it be better to make this slider doing a blanket with 00:12:466 (2)? Or I will suggest something like this:

SPOILER

1.Sry this slide don't exist anymore, say thanks to NewRulerNA ._.
2. 02:07:966 - I would suggest adding a break time in between these two notes: 02:07:966 (1,1). It helps players realize the appearance of the next note because some arrows like these will come out. The same trick can be put within 02:10:966 (1,1) and 02:13:966 (1,1).

SPOILER

2. added

[Normal]
1. 00:24:466 (5) - same as those previous reversed sliders, make a kink at the middle would fit the music more imo like this:

SPOILER

1. okay
2. 00:27:466 (3) - ^
2. ^
3. 00:31:966 (1,3) - stack the end of the slider with the circle.
3. i didn't like this idea ._. sry
4. 01:52:966 (1,2,3,4) - I would say it's too difficult to put such a pattern which only appears in hard or insane in a normal difficulty. Try to use curved sliders to indicate the music. What I mean is to create some sliders like these three: 02:07:966 (1,1,1). I think your creativity is far more than enough to do such stuff. lol
4. already fixed

[Hard]
1. OD+1
1. no way XD
2. 00:06:278 (3,4,5) - how about changing into this pattern?

SPOILER

2. lol already fixed , say thanks to NewRulerNA
3. 00:27:278 - add a circle here.
3. added
4. 01:57:091 (4,1) - switching these two guys sounds nice.

SPOILER

4. makes no difference since i added a normal-sliderslide
5. 02:16:216 (7,8) - ^
5. ^
That's all. Nice song and map! Good luck!
If you have any questions, feel free to pm me or find me in-game!

1. Tags könntest du noch die Firma und die Konsole eintragen: Square Soft und PS1, Playstation, PSX
2. Den Applaus könnte man eig. stutzen, um Platz zu sparen. Niemand wird sich eine Minute lang das Lied geben ...
3. Ist wirklich nur persönliche Präferenz und kann sogar als nicht nötig argumentiert werden, wegen Visual Settings und Skin ignorieren:
   - Ich finde, dass die dunkelblaue und braune Farbe zu sehr in dem Hintergrund untergehen und nicht sehr leicht zu sehen sind :/

1. 00:29:716 (2) - Keine Ahnung wieso aber ich finde der Flow ist besser insgesamt von (1,2) und (2,1,2) wenn du diesen Slider umdrehst mit Strg+g oder Strg+h.
2. Der nächste Punkt ist wirklich nur meine Meinung aber
   01:16:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
   01:17:716 (2,4,2,4) - fühlen sich so ... fehl am Platz an, weil für mich kein spezifischer Ton getroffen wird. Ich würde die entfernen oder zumindest die lauten Whistles entfernen bzw. leiser machen
3. 01:23:716 (2) - Die Claps passen nicht so, finde ich :/ Ich würde sie lieber weglassen oder andere Hitsounds nehmen.
   
4. NCs
5. 00:13:966 (3) - Die NCs in deiner Map wären konstanter wenn du hier einen NC setzt. Du verfolgst die gesamte Zeit über einen "Jeder dritte Downbeat" NC Trend. Daher solltest du den hier fortsetzen eig.
   Eigentlich, weil dir das bestimmt nachher noch mehr Leute erzählen werden und weil mit persönlich NCs zum großteil egal sind ...
6. 01:01:966 (5) - ^
7. 01:52:966 (5) - ^

1. 01:06:091 (4) - Ein wenig Nazi aber du könntest den Slider noch mehr wie ein S aussehen lassen oder zumindest die Kurven runder aussehen lassen
2. 01:24:466 (1) - stack den vllt auf 01:22:966 (1) - Das hat einen besseren Flow mit 01:23:903 (3,1,2) - meiner Meinung nach.
3. 01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Das ist so ein Finish spam :S außerdem zu laut :/ leiser machen? ein paar entfernen vllt? Ich finde es momentan etwas störend

1. 00:12:466 (3) - Strg + G ? Hat irgendwie einen etwas besseren Flow für mich
2. 00:54:091 (2) - Ich würde es auf die selbe Position wie 00:55:591 (4) - setzen. Füllt sich besser an im Flow mMn.
3. 01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - wie auch bei Normal ist das ein Finish spam für mich. Ich würde sie zumindest viel leiser machen, weil man eig. gar nicht mehr mitbekommt was das Lied angibgt. Hitsounds sollten das Lied unterstützen und nicht "sein"
4. 01:30:091 (4,6) - Finde die beiden Slider etwas unschön, die sind schon wirklich sehr gequetscht und überlappen sich selbst :/

1. 01:11:622 (2,3) - Ich weiß beim besten Willen nicht wieso mir das hier nicht gefällt aber ich finde es hört sich besser an wenn du statt (2,3) einen einzigen Slider verwenden würdest oder (2,3) vertauschst :/ ...
2. 02:07:778 (6) - Ich finde es hört sich besser an, wenn du (6) entfernst
3. 01:55:591 (1) - Würde lieber einen Repeater entfernen und stattdessen eine Note auf den Downbeat setzen. "Sliderenden" haben nunmal nicht so einen Eindruck wie Noten wo man klicken muss, finde ich

bomber34 wrote:

Hey du hast mich um 'nen Mod gebeten und hier bin ich

Allgemein:

1. Tags könntest du noch die Firma und die Konsole eintragen: Square Soft und PS1, Playstation, PSX - gute idee , fixed
2. Den Applaus könnte man eig. stutzen, um Platz zu sparen. Niemand wird sich eine Minute lang das Lied geben ... - doch, ich jedes mal XD
3. Ist wirklich nur persönliche Präferenz und kann sogar als nicht nötig argumentiert werden, wegen Visual Settings und Skin ignorieren:
   - Ich finde, dass die dunkelblaue und braune Farbe zu sehr in dem Hintergrund untergehen und nicht sehr leicht zu sehen sind :/

- tzz , es gibt maps bei denen es viel schlimmer ist, man muss sich bei sowas nicht immer reinsteigern XD

Easy

1. 00:29:716 (2) - Keine Ahnung wieso aber ich finde der Flow ist besser insgesamt von (1,2) und (2,1,2) wenn du diesen Slider umdrehst mit Strg+g oder Strg+h. - fixed
2. Der nächste Punkt ist wirklich nur meine Meinung aber
   01:16:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
   01:17:716 (2,4,2,4) - fühlen sich so ... fehl am Platz an, weil für mich kein spezifischer Ton getroffen wird. Ich würde die entfernen oder zumindest die lauten Whistles entfernen bzw. leiser machen - ich hab auf allen diffs zwei timingpoints gelöscht der ablauf war 60,70,80,70 , die zwei in der mitte wurden entfernt
3. 01:23:716 (2) - Die Claps passen nicht so, finde ich :/ Ich würde sie lieber weglassen oder andere Hitsounds nehmen. - mir gefällt es so :3
4. NCs
5. 00:13:966 (3) - Die NCs in deiner Map wären konstanter wenn du hier einen NC setzt. Du verfolgst die gesamte Zeit über einen "Jeder dritte Downbeat" NC Trend. Daher solltest du den hier fortsetzen eig.
   Eigentlich, weil dir das bestimmt nachher noch mehr Leute erzählen werden und weil mit persönlich NCs zum großteil egal sind ... - fixed
6. 01:01:966 (5) - ^ - fixed
7. 01:52:966 (5) - ^ -fixed

Schöne Easy, hab zwar einen Punkt geschrieben zu Claps ... aber ich bin eigentlich für die gesamte Maps kein Freund von denen ... naja es war noch in einem erträglichen Bereich. Ich finde nicht, dass das Lied Töne/Instrumente/Stellen bietet wo Claps passen :/ - ich kann wirklich nicht verstehen , was alle gegen die claps haben, ich persönlich mag sie sehr, vorallem in easy, gibt der Kiai ein wenig PEPP imp XP

Normal

1. 01:06:091 (4) - Ein wenig Nazi aber du könntest den Slider noch mehr wie ein S aussehen lassen oder zumindest die Kurven runder aussehen lassen - ein runderes S, Tadaaaa :3
2. 01:24:466 (1) - stack den vllt auf 01:22:966 (1) - Das hat einen besseren Flow mit 01:23:903 (3,1,2) - meiner Meinung nach. - ich würde den persönlich echt ungern stacken, das wäre mir dann wieder zu kreisartig, da die die pattern danach dann in etwa das ganze wieder umschließt , und das gefäält mir garnicht <_<
3. 01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Das ist so ein Finish spam :S außerdem zu laut :/ leiser machen? ein paar entfernen vllt? Ich finde es momentan etwas störend

- ich hab jeweils auf dem beginn des taktes von Finish zu whistle gewechselt, ist jzt etwas weniger schlimm XD
Sehr schöne Normal. Allerdings stören mich hier die Claps sogar noch mehr als bei Easy was aber vermutlich daran liegt, dass du auf 1/2 repeater slidern alles mit Claps belegst wie z.B. 01:44:716 (3,6) - 01:47:716 (3,6) - . Ich würde lieber bei den Custom Claps bleiben, welche du am Anfang verwendet hast
- niemand wird mir diese claps wegnehmen XD
Etwas was in meiner Grauzone liegt ist 01:01:966 (5,6,1) - da das Spacing abnimmt. Es ist schwer zu erklären, weil auf der einen Seite es zum Lied passt und das auch keine "Anfänger" Map unbedingt sein muss aber solche Spacing Veränderungen sind dennoch unüblich für Normals :/ Ich würds jetzt nicht ändern wollen aber ich merke es dennoch mal an - das ganze ist nur von 6 zu 1, ich hab ne SV änderung drin, deshalb ist das so, ich benutzte SVänderungen ziemlich
gerne, wobei ich sagen muss, dass das bis jzt nie ein Problem war, vorallem da die Geschwindigkeit ab-, und nicht zunimmt, meiner Meinung nach ist das noch im Bereich des möglichen :3

Hard

1. 00:12:466 (3) - Strg + G ? Hat irgendwie einen etwas besseren Flow für mich - und da merkt man , dass jeder flow anders definiert, ich kann behaupten, dass ich ich das aus demselben grund schon getan habe, vorher war es wie du es jzt willst, ich lass es wie ist, einfach weil das jzt sonst wirklich ins lächerlich abrutscht XD
2. 00:54:091 (2) - Ich würde es auf die selbe Position wie 00:55:591 (4) - setzen. Füllt sich besser an im Flow mMn. - da das ganze auf symetrie aufbaut, nein, ausserdem find ich das ganze als Viereck besser :3
3. 01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - wie auch bei Normal ist das ein Finish spam für mich. Ich würde sie zumindest viel leiser machen, weil man eig. gar nicht mehr mitbekommt was das Lied angibgt. Hitsounds sollten das Lied unterstützen und nicht "sein" - Das sollte ich mir merken, wundevolles Zitat, siehe oben - allerdings will ichs nicht noch leiser machen, ehrlich gesagt finde ich es von der Lautstärke gut wie es ist , trotzdem danke der anmerkung :3
4. 01:30:091 (4,6) - Finde die beiden Slider etwas unschön, die sind schon wirklich sehr gequetscht und überlappen sich selbst :/- wollte ich eigentlich zuerst nicht ändern, aber nun gut, da

Nette Hard. Im Gegensatz zu Easy und Normal benutzt du hier nur für den einen ruhigen Part in der Mitte die Default skin Claps. Das kommt schon viel besser finde ich, auch wenn ich die Claps von 01:04:966 - bis 01:25:778 - trotzdem eher als störend und unpassend empfinde :/ - claps, i love them Q_Q

BounceBabe's Insane

1. 01:11:622 (2,3) - Ich weiß beim besten Willen nicht wieso mir das hier nicht gefällt aber ich finde es hört sich besser an wenn du statt (2,3) einen einzigen Slider verwenden würdest oder (2,3) vertauschst :/ ... - etwas , dass ich iwie nicht nachvollziehen kann :c
2. 02:07:778 (6) - Ich finde es hört sich besser an, wenn du (6) entfernst - gehört zur drum im hintergrund
3. 01:55:591 (1) - Würde lieber einen Repeater entfernen und stattdessen eine Note auf den Downbeat setzen. "Sliderenden" haben nunmal nicht so einen Eindruck wie Noten wo man klicken muss, finde ich

- fixed
Sehr gute Insane, sry das ich nicht wirklich Weltbewegendes gefunden habe. Gab im Gegensatz zu den anderen Diffs auch keine Default Skin Claps (oder ich hab das verpeilt ...)
Einziges wo ich mir unschlüssig ist der Stream: 01:29:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - weil vor dem Spinner man schon eig. klar diesen Stream hört und das etwas komisch kommt. Ich weiß, dass man nicht direkt nach einem Spinner Noten setzen soll aber so ist es nunmal :/ - ich fand dies im ersten moment auch nicht sehr schlüssig, aber den stream an den spinner anzuschließen ist defintiv zu viel, widerrum kann man aber auch nicht den spinner durch nen stream ersetzten , dass wäre wirklich zu viel des guten, lassen wir uns mal sahen was die folgenden modder sagen :3


Das war mein Mod, hoffe da ist was hilfreiches dabei.
Das Mapset ist insgesamt wirklich schon sehr gut ^^ fang an BATs zu nerven ^^

1. Timing point - note is placed before timingpoint in insane diff. This is not recommended. You should put a timing point(offset) before it. so change to 1966⇒466 is better. (Resnap by changes do not require. but please do not forget to change the all diff. )
2. Song Setup - Romanised Artist 「Nobuo Uematsu」 - it is better to change 「Uematsu Nobuo」. This is the name of Japan and You use the Japanese name for Artist.
   
   Rule

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT/MAT for help.
3. Song Setup - combo colors - consecutive 1 and 4 have a similar color. so I suggest the order that it understands clearly. for ex; http://puu.sh/4lhqj.png ( replace the 3 and 4 )
   
   SPOILER

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 0,0,64
   Combo2 : 128,64,0
   Combo3 : 255,255,157
   Combo4 : 255,128,0

1. OD+1 balance with the normal diff is not good. it mean Easy;HD2 OD1 but Normal;HD3(Easy+1) OD4(Easy+3, This difference is too big)
2. 00:13:966 (1) - i suggest ctrl+G flow. 00:10:966 (1,2,1) - These flows are always constant. so I suggest that change the flow regularly. ( 00:06:466 (2,1,2) - Here also, but I did not have good design..orz )
3. 00:37:966 - I thought that there is no need to lower the volume in the middle of a spinner. If anything, I thought that you should increase the volume. for ex; http://puu.sh/4lbio.png ( 00:40:216~ sound less, so lower the volume ..etc )
4. 01:04:591 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out in this time. but if this is intentional I do not recommend. You should not put the thing which is not necessary for map
   
   SPOILER

   ・01:27:091
   ・01:28:591
   ・01:55:591
5. 01:16:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - A lot of circle avoids continuing for easy. for ex; 01:19:966 (1,2,3,4) - These use the slider. Suggestion of the design for ex: http://puu.sh/4lgwD.jpg Please refer to code for the later flow.
   
   SPOILER

   256,76,79216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   192,188,79966,6,0,P|160:260|192:332,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   321,330,81466,2,0,P|351:258|320:188,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,76,82966,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   128,68,83716,2,0,P|44:76|8:144,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 01:25:966 (1,2) - remove finish to end of the slider. and add whistle instead. finish is too much outstanding. I thought that original finish was not necessary here. ( i mean do not have a sound that is instead of a finish here. )
7. 01:28:966 (1) - add Additions-soft finish? and volume same as 00:34:966 (1). ( 01:31:216~ Because It have not almost sounds, so i feel it is slightly noisy )
8. 02:07:966 (1,1,1,1) - have a space to put the Breaktime between these. i think it is better to put break time imo. It helps timing and decrease of hp.

1. 00:18:466 (5,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the flow for ex: http://puu.sh/4m7wt.jpg It is faithful to the flow direction of the slider.
   
   SPOILER

   56,256,18466,2,0,P|36:184|52:112,2,150,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   104,332,19966,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   192,320,20341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   240,244,20716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   172,184,21091,1,0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:23:341 (2,3,4) - ^ and same reason. for ex: http://puu.sh/4m7Hi.jpg ( 00:23:341 (2) - x376,y128. 00:23:716 (3) - x460,y160. 00:24:091 (4) - x488,y244. )
3. 00:25:966 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. ( same as similar pattern. 00:18:466 (5,1) - 00:21:466 (5,1) -
4. 00:28:966 (1) - ^ If you do not put it I feel it particularly quiet here. and same as other diff
5. 00:37:966 - same as Easy diff
6. 00:52:966 (1) - add finish. reason same as 00:28:966 (1)
7. 01:01:966 (5) - add NC is better. ( combo is not long but time to change little longer.
8. 01:01:966 (5,6,1) - I do not recommend that change the interval suddenly in the same timing for normal. If you want to really use it, you should put it to be easy to understand. In this case, If this is me do not put 6. As for the timing, i think it will become clearer.
9. 01:26:341 (2,3,4) - 01:27:841 (2,3,4) - 01:28:966 (1) - remove finish. reason same as Easy diff 01:25:966 (1,2).
10. 01:43:966 (1) - add finish. reason same as 00:28:966 (1)
11. 01:51:466 (1) - remove NC and 01:52:966 (3) - add NC.
12. 01:57:466 (5) - try the blanket here? http://puu.sh/4m9uM.jpg ( 02:00:466 (5) - distinguish a slider direction

1. HD +1 I thought 4 is too low for Hard. 5 or 6 is generally used for hard. and because this hard is not so difficult
2. 00:13:966 (1,2) - 00:14:716 (3,4) - sorry, nazi. It symmetrical slightly different. http://puu.sh/4mb3Z.jpg
3. 00:34:966 (1,1) - This rhythm is too simple and i think repeat part does not match rhythm. 00:37:966 (1) - especially i feel that rhythm from 00:40:216~ does not match. Please consider increasing the 1/4 instead >.<; reference to insane.
4. 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel noisy you put finish in all here suggestion of rhythm and hitsound for ex: http://puu.sh/4mddE.jpg and hitsound, 01:02:341 (2,3,5,6) - not put finish.
5. 01:26:341 (2,3,4) - 01:27:841 (6,7,8) - 01:28:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sorry, finish sound same as Normal. volume increase of them is too large if you use a finish. I cannot recommend that you put finish of the megavolume(about 80~100%) in succession.
6. 01:52:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
7. 02:01:966 (1,1) - add finish to start of the slider.
   
   comment about the rhythm
   00:16:966~ hihat is added to the music from here. so I thought that you could increase note a little more.
   00:28:966~ 00:40:966 - especially this part, I feel the rhythm is too simple for Hard. if anything, I thought that you should increase rhythm than before.
   
   Design is made neatly. but I felt that some original nature stood out too much about the hit sound.

1. 00:10:966~ i think volume is too increased. ( difference of 25% before and after ) I think that do not have much difference in the sound 00:07:966 - add the volume of the middle here? ( about 62% )
2. 00:16:403 (6,7,8,9) - i suggest replace the placed. http://puu.sh/4n0f7.jpg I think that it has a more faithful flow.
3. 00:25:966 (1,2,3,4,1) - I suggest that you make these the flow that is different from 00:22:966 (1,2,3,4,1). because They have a similar pattern and similar flow. so I thought that you changed the flow and should increase variations. for ex changed to reverse flow from the 00:25:966 (1). http://puu.sh/4n0OI.jpg code↓ ( This is for example. form is not accurate )
   
   SPOILER

   272,128,25403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   288,16,25591,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   288,16,25966,6,0,P|200:16|144:56,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   88,152,26528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   144,56,26716,2,0,P|184:112|184:200,1,160
   152,304,27278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   184,200,27466,6,0,L|248:248,1,80,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   424,208,27841,2,0,L|359:161,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,112,28216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   200,16,28403,1,0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:49:403 (2,3) - I felt a little strange this jump. because it do not have most of the jumps of such a circle in map. I thought it was slightly sudden jump. I prefer do not put the jump here. or 00:49:216 (1,2,3,4) - let these jump at similar distance.
5. 00:52:216 (4) - add finish to start and end of the slider and 00:52:591 (5,6) - add finish?
6. 01:13:028 (5,7) - add whistle. It is slightly quiet as compared with before and after sound.
7. 01:17:341 - Why is this breaktime pulled backward? The beginning of breaktime is slightly slow and it is strange to me. I think that it should put it just after 01:15:466 (4) -
8. 01:31:966~01:43:966 - I think the volume is too large ( vol 100% ) 　i feel excitement of kiaitime from 01:43:966 is not enough. ( vol 100% ⇒ 70%. lower the volume too much. i think kiaitime is directed to increase the excitement ) so i suggest return the volume after 01:31:966. ( it is better to put 01:32:059 - and volume 50~60% )

kosiga wrote:

Hello AnimeStyle >_<

sorry, for the long long delay... orz

only when you are really useful, please throw kudosu

here my mod~

[General]

1. Timing point - note is placed before timingpoint in insane diff. This is not recommended. You should put a timing point(offset) before it. so change to 1966⇒466 is better. (Resnap by changes do not require. but please do not forget to change the all diff. )
2. Song Setup - Romanised Artist 「Nobuo Uematsu」 - it is better to change 「Uematsu Nobuo」. This is the name of Japan and You use the Japanese name for Artist. - fixed
   
   Rule

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT/MAT for help.
3. Song Setup - combo colors - consecutive 1 and 4 have a similar color. so I suggest the order that it understands clearly. for ex; http://puu.sh/4lhqj.png ( replace the 3 and 4 ) -fixed
   
   SPOILER

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 0,0,64
   Combo2 : 128,64,0
   Combo3 : 255,255,157
   Combo4 : 255,128,0

[Easy]

1. OD+1 balance with the normal diff is not good. it mean Easy;HD2 OD1 but Normal;HD3(Easy+1) OD4(Easy+3, This difference is too big) - fixed
2. 00:13:966 (1) - i suggest ctrl+G flow. 00:10:966 (1,2,1) - These flows are always constant. so I suggest that change the flow regularly. ( 00:06:466 (2,1,2) - Here also, but I did not have good design..orz ) - fixed
3. 00:37:966 - I thought that there is no need to lower the volume in the middle of a spinner. If anything, I thought that you should increase the volume. for ex; http://puu.sh/4lbio.png ( 00:40:216~ sound less, so lower the volume ..etc ) - [color=#40FF00 ]fixed[/color]
4. 01:04:591 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out in this time. but if this is intentional I do not recommend. You should not put the thing which is not necessary for map - [color=#40FF00 ]fixed[/color]
   
   SPOILER

   ・01:27:091
   ・01:28:591
   ・01:55:591
5. 01:16:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - A lot of circle avoids continuing for easy. for ex; 01:19:966 (1,2,3,4) - These use the slider. Suggestion of the design for ex: http://puu.sh/4lgwD.jpg Please refer to code for the later flow. - [color=#40FF00 ]fixed[/color]
   
   SPOILER

   256,76,79216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   192,188,79966,6,0,P|160:260|192:332,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   321,330,81466,2,0,P|351:258|320:188,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,76,82966,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   128,68,83716,2,0,P|44:76|8:144,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 01:25:966 (1,2) - remove finish to end of the slider. and add whistle instead. finish is too much outstanding. I thought that original finish was not necessary here. ( i mean do not have a sound that is instead of a finish here. ) - i don't like whistle at this point, i prefer finish sry
7. 01:28:966 (1) - add Additions-soft finish? and volume same as 00:34:966 (1). ( 01:31:216~ Because It have not almost sounds, so i feel it is slightly noisy ) - 00:34:966 is quiter , thats's why I made it louder
8. 02:07:966 (1,1,1,1) - have a space to put the Breaktime between these. i think it is better to put break time imo. It helps timing and decrease of hp. - but it looks way too stupid

[Normal]

1. 00:18:466 (5,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the flow for ex: http://puu.sh/4m7wt.jpg It is faithful to the flow direction of the slider. - fixed
   
   SPOILER

   56,256,18466,2,0,P|36:184|52:112,2,150,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   104,332,19966,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   192,320,20341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   240,244,20716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   172,184,21091,1,0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:23:341 (2,3,4) - ^ and same reason. for ex: http://puu.sh/4m7Hi.jpg ( 00:23:341 (2) - x376,y128. 00:23:716 (3) - x460,y160. 00:24:091 (4) - x488,y244. ) - fixed
3. 00:25:966 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. ( same as similar pattern. 00:18:466 (5,1) - 00:21:466 (5,1) - fixed
4. 00:28:966 (1) - ^ If you do not put it I feel it particularly quiet here. and same as other diff fixed
5. 00:37:966 - same as Easy diff fixed
6. 00:52:966 (1) - add finish. reason same as 00:28:966 (1) - don#t really fits, and i don't want to use it one this spinner at the other diffs
7. 01:01:966 (5) - add NC is better. ( combo is not long but time to change little longer. - fixed
8. 01:01:966 (5,6,1) - I do not recommend that change the interval suddenly in the same timing for normal. If you want to really use it, you should put it to be easy to understand. In this case, If this is me do not put 6. As for the timing, i think it will become clearer. - okay D:
9. 01:26:341 (2,3,4) - 01:27:841 (2,3,4) - 01:28:966 (1) - remove finish. reason same as Easy diff 01:25:966 (1,2). - same reason then before
10. 01:43:966 (1) - add finish. reason same as 00:28:966 (1) - ^
11. 01:51:466 (1) - remove NC and 01:52:966 (3) - add NC. - fixed
12. 01:57:466 (5) - try the blanket here? http://puu.sh/4m9uM.jpg ( 02:00:466 (5) - distinguish a slider direction- fixed

[Hard]

1. HD +1 I thought 4 is too low for Hard. 5 or 6 is generally used for hard. and because this hard is not so difficult - fixed
2. 00:13:966 (1,2) - 00:14:716 (3,4) - sorry, nazi. It symmetrical slightly different. http://puu.sh/4mb3Z.jpg - fixed
3. 00:34:966 (1,1) - This rhythm is too simple and i think repeat part does not match rhythm. 00:37:966 (1) - especially i feel that rhythm from 00:40:216~ does not match. Please consider increasing the 1/4 instead >.<; reference to insane. - i really don't think so , i won't repeat this anymore, have a look at some other mods
4. 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel noisy you put finish in all here suggestion of rhythm and hitsound for ex: http://puu.sh/4mddE.jpg and hitsound, 01:02:341 (2,3,5,6) - not put finish. - i really don#t want to change this
5. 01:26:341 (2,3,4) - 01:27:841 (6,7,8) - 01:28:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sorry, finish sound same as Normal. volume increase of them is too large if you use a finish. I cannot recommend that you put finish of the megavolume(about 80~100%) in succession. - success XD
6. 01:52:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
7. 02:01:966 (1,1) - add finish to start of the slider. - fixed
   
   comment about the rhythm
   00:16:966~ hihat is added to the music from here. so I thought that you could increase note a little more.
   00:28:966~ 00:40:966 - especially this part, I feel the rhythm is too simple for Hard. if anything, I thought that you should increase rhythm than before. - something that disturbs me in osu, it's just annoying that people make their hard diffs harder and harder, almost every hard, i have seen in the last time was totally an insane, this is nonsense, why people do this? in this case i make real hards, which havent't got 5,00 stars ~
   
   Design is made neatly. but I felt that some original nature stood out too much about the hit sound.

[/list]

sorry again for the delay - no prob :3

Good luck~

Irreversible wrote:

The link is broken for me.. could you reupload? ><

jericho2442 wrote:

nana its still broken, i get the mp3 but not the .osu

reup again and check the beatmap id in each of the .osu´s

also check for any 0byte hitsounds and remove them

1. Song title should be "Battle Theme" or even "Final Fantasy 9 - Battle Theme (Remix)" as it's listed on his bandcamp. If you want to use the official title from the game which would be "Battle 1".
2. The artist could be Fredrik Miller instead of Nobuo Uematsu see here - http://fredrikmiller.bandcamp.com/album ... -3-remixes
3. It should be Nobuo Uematsu (the preferred romanisation which is accounted for in the rule) not Uematsu Nobuo, a quick glance at itunes (or elsewhere) could have told you this.

Shulin wrote:

Your artist and song title is wrong.

1. Song title should be "Battle Theme" or even "Final Fantasy 9 - Battle Theme (Remix)" as it's listed on his bandcamp. If you want to use the official title from the game which would be "Battle 1".
2. The artist could be Fredrik Miller instead of Nobuo Uematsu see here - http://fredrikmiller.bandcamp.com/album ... -3-remixes
3. It should be Nobuo Uematsu (the preferred romanisation which is accounted for in the rule) not Uematsu Nobuo, a quick glance at itunes (or elsewhere) could have told you this.

I'd go for Nobuo Uematsu - Battle 1 (Fredrik Miller Remix) if you want to credit the original composer or Fredrik Miller - Final Fantasy 9 - Battle Theme (Remix) if you want to be uber correct.

Sorry for jumping in and good luck ^_^