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Venetian Snares - Hajnal

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Topic Starter
Mismagius
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 20 de dezembro de 2014 at 17:49:45

Artist: Venetian Snares
Title: Hajnal
Tags: breakcore rossz csillag alatt szuletett aaron funk marathon
BPM: 174
Filesize: 11142kb
Play Time: 07:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. broken (5,26 stars, 1736 notes)
Download: Venetian Snares - Hajnal
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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[Luanny]
You know when you haven't got enough swag when it's past 44 hours and no one came to your thread to post "first".
Kyshiro
first
[Luanny]
i was first first
first
Kyshiro
i said first first so fuck you and your first.

first.
[Luanny]
i was first before you said first first so i'm the first first even if i didn't say first
first
69653863
i star first
skrew u guys
Timorisu


its back
Mezzaten

Timorisu wrote:



its back
Kazuya
Please. Go rank. : )

Short meta mod:

Replace tags here: breakcore, modern classical, Rossz csillag alatt született, hungarian, magyar

and CS: -1 (4)

Good luck. : )
Topic Starter
Mismagius

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Please. Go rank. : )

Short meta mod:

Replace tags here: breakcore, modern classical, Rossz csillag alatt született, hungarian, magyar some of these are already in the tags, the rest isn't really needed imho

and CS: -1 (4) flows much better with 5, sorry


Good luck. : )
Topic Starter
Mismagius
finished
kittenrequiem

Blue Dragon wrote:

finished
really solid map bd, i like the cs = 5, everything "seems" to be corresponding (sond& notes)

can't wait for it to get ranked! gl!
Kuron-kun
oi

General

  1. Mapa não tem preview point, acho que ficaria legal em 03:32:595 - ou em 04:11:215 -
  2. Mp3 de 194 kbps \:D/

Easy


00:08:793 (1) - Se você mover essa nota pra x360 y268 fica melhor de movimentar o cursor pra próxima nota, não fica um jump pequeno depois um jump grande do nada.

00:21:031 (6) - Da pra stackar ela melhor com 00:20:513 (4) - movendo pra x129 y202.

00:39:991 (5,7) - Blanket

00:47:747 (7) - O que acha de Ctrl + G nesse slider depois 00:47:747 (7,1,2) - Ctrl + G nessas duas.

01:14:981 (3) - Move essa pra x196 y356 pro espaçamento ficar mais certinho.

01:16:187 (9) - Move essa pra x392 y112 pra formar um square mais bonito com 01:15:498 (4,5,6) -

01:17:049 - O som aqui seria de 3 notas juntas e não só duas, coloca uma nota em 01:17:221 - perto do slider ou substitui ele por um triplet, fica legal também.

01:38:687 (6) - Aqui acho que seria melhor acabar o slider em 01:39:031 - e colocar um slider no tick branco pra manter a consistencia com os outros que você fez depois desse.

01:41:100 (5) - ^ só que aqui poderia colocar uma nota no tick branco grande, não sei se um slider ficaria bom aí.

01:44:549 - Aqui pode colocar uma nota já que tem um som.

02:00:526 (5) - Mesma coisa dos sliders acabando em tick branco grande.

02:17:824 (4) - Move pro tick branco, não tem sentido ficar aí eu acho.

02:21:043 (1) - Da pra stackar melhor com 02:20:181 (1) - movendo pra x391 y262.

02:47:997 - Aqui também podia colocar uma nota.

03:02:595 (6) - Da pra stackar melhor com 03:02:077 (4) - movendo pra x407 y183.

03:06:733 (4) - Stack com 03:07:422 (7) - movendo pra x501 y245.

03:11:905 (4) - Stack de novo com 03:12:595 (7) - move pra x446 y32.

03:13:284 - Aqui acho que deveria manter o som em 30% e só muda pra 10% em 03:13:629 - pra dar enfase no finish.

03:15:698 (1) - Coloca um finish aqui com volume 30% depois muda pra 10%

03:18:112 (1) - Aqui também mesma coisa.

03:20:526 (1) - Finish também.

03:22:939 (1) - Finish

03:25:353 (1) - ^

03:27:767 (1) - ^

03:30:181 (1) - Aqui também mas se não quiser colocar não precisa.

03:34:319 (3) - O final desse slider não tá no snap.

03:34:664 (5) - Esse também.

03:34:836 (6) - Esse também não tá.

03:40:526 (8) - Coloca um clap no final do slider, fica bom.

03:43:974 (1) - Clap também.

03:50:870 (1) - ♥

04:12:595 (1) - Stacka com 04:12:078 (6) - movendo pra x245 y231.

04:21:386 (4) - Object isn't snapped!

04:21:386 (4) - Object's end is not snapped!

05:12:939 (3) - Move pra x144 y204 pro espaçamento ficar certinho.

05:18:284 (4) - Coloca um finisher aqui.

06:22:578 (12) - Da ctrl + G fica melhor de ler imo.

pronto, boa sorte
Micka
can i make a diff :D
izzydemon

Mezzaten wrote:

Timorisu wrote:



its back
Sister Jude

RenzMichael wrote:

can i make a diff :D
no
Hula
best spinners in osu.
Topic Starter
Mismagius

Kuron-Kun wrote:

oi

General

  1. Mapa não tem preview point, acho que ficaria legal em 03:32:595 - ou em 04:11:215 - prefiro não começar no breakcore, coloquei no início
  2. Mp3 de 194 kbps \:D/

Easy


00:08:793 (1) - Se você mover essa nota pra x360 y268 fica melhor de movimentar o cursor pra próxima nota, não fica um jump pequeno depois um jump grande do nada. done

00:21:031 (6) - Da pra stackar ela melhor com 00:20:513 (4) - movendo pra x129 y202. done

00:39:991 (5,7) - Blanket done

00:47:747 (7) - O que acha de Ctrl + G nesse slider depois 00:47:747 (7,1,2) - Ctrl + G nessas duas. nah, queria variar um pouco o flow

01:14:981 (3) - Move essa pra x196 y356 pro espaçamento ficar mais certinho. ta

01:16:187 (9) - Move essa pra x392 y112 pra formar um square mais bonito com 01:15:498 (4,5,6) - é q tu estragou o square fazendo isso ^ fixed

01:17:049 - O som aqui seria de 3 notas juntas e não só duas, coloca uma nota em 01:17:221 - perto do slider ou substitui ele por um triplet, fica legal também. os sons fortes são só os dois

01:38:687 (6) - Aqui acho que seria melhor acabar o slider em 01:39:031 - e colocar um slider no tick branco pra manter a consistencia com os outros que você fez depois desse. mas variação > consistência

01:41:100 (5) - ^ só que aqui poderia colocar uma nota no tick branco grande, não sei se um slider ficaria bom aí. ^

01:44:549 - Aqui pode colocar uma nota já que tem um som. done

02:00:526 (5) - Mesma coisa dos sliders acabando em tick branco grande. esse realmente tem um som ali então vou mudar

02:17:824 (4) - Move pro tick branco, não tem sentido ficar aí eu acho. seguindo o piano

02:21:043 (1) - Da pra stackar melhor com 02:20:181 (1) - movendo pra x391 y262. done

02:47:997 - Aqui também podia colocar uma nota. done

03:02:595 (6) - Da pra stackar melhor com 03:02:077 (4) - movendo pra x407 y183. done

03:06:733 (4) - Stack com 03:07:422 (7) - movendo pra x501 y245. done

03:11:905 (4) - Stack de novo com 03:12:595 (7) - move pra x446 y32. done

03:13:284 - Aqui acho que deveria manter o som em 30% e só muda pra 10% em 03:13:629 - pra dar enfase no finish. nem

03:15:698 (1) - Coloca um finish aqui com volume 30% depois muda pra 10% nem

03:18:112 (1) - Aqui também mesma coisa. ^

03:20:526 (1) - Finish também. ^

03:22:939 (1) - Finish ^

03:25:353 (1) - ^

03:27:767 (1) - ^

03:30:181 (1) - Aqui também mas se não quiser colocar não precisa. nah

03:34:319 (3) - O final desse slider não tá no snap. fixed

03:34:664 (5) - Esse também. fixed

03:34:836 (6) - Esse também não tá. fixed

03:40:526 (8) - Coloca um clap no final do slider, fica bom. done

03:43:974 (1) - Clap também. done

03:50:870 (1) - ♥ delicia de slider

04:12:595 (1) - Stacka com 04:12:078 (6) - movendo pra x245 y231. afs done

04:21:386 (4) - Object isn't snapped! n entendo como essas coisas acontecem

04:21:386 (4) - Object's end is not snapped! ^

05:12:939 (3) - Move pra x144 y204 pro espaçamento ficar certinho. done

05:18:284 (4) - Coloca um finisher aqui. não tem finish ali

06:22:578 (12) - Da ctrl + G fica melhor de ler imo. done

pronto, boa sorte
Sarada_old_1
Nice beatmaps, But so Hard T.T


i am to noobs T.T

onotoleonide
remove hungarian from tags since there are no hungarian lyrics
izzydemon

Kazuya

onotoleonide wrote:

mp3
remove hungarian from tags since there are no hungarian lyrics
and?

Please keep the "hungarian" tag and also add the tag "magyar", so Hungarian people can find Hungarian maps more easily. Another reason is that there is no such language category among the beatmap filters. Here's the right album title: Rossz csillag alatt született. Accented characters are allowed.
onotoleonide

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Hungarian maps
what the fuck
venetian snares is from canada
bd is from brazil
there are NO lyrics in hungarian
why should be "hungarian" in tags

for example macintosh plus kill me has albums with japanese title but there are NO japanese lyrics it's just slowed diana ross
Kazuya
... okay :roll:

also:
and add +1 tag: canadian
izzydemon

Kazuya-sama wrote:

... okay :roll:

also:
and add +1 tag: canadian
um
who searches songs by the artist's nationality
Hula

Niokin wrote:

Kazuya-sama wrote:

... okay :roll:

also:
and add +1 tag: canadian
um
who searches songs by the artist's nationality
obviously you don't
Sister Jude
Star
onotoleonide
blaterwolf
Good map needs Break though coz my hands cri

Star~
Osuology

SkyBearer245 wrote:

Good map needs Break though coz my hands cri

Star~
Blue Dragon freaking said "NO BREAKS" in the description. Besides if your hands cry from it, I think you don't have a good stamina amount.
Ultima Fox
Hello Blue Dragon

I'm not that good of a modder, but i think ill give this a try. Because of that, these will mostly be general suggestions

Audio Bitrate is higher than 192kbps. Try to compress it
Filesize of the map Exceeds 10MB without video. I dont know if there is a way to fix that though

00:16:032 (9) - Perhaps NC here
00:32:579 (1) - Maybe end this slider earlier and add 3 circles to go here, or just put a few right after the slider. You have been following the song so much, i think it would be a good idea to do it here
01:31:958 (1) - Possible move the spinner over to the red tick and put a circle on the blue tick that the spinner was on
02:49:031 (5) - NC?
03:36:043 (1,2,3) - Perhaps try to make it like this:
04:06:991 (4,5,6) - Why not jump here ;)
04:43:802 (8) - NC?
05:22:250 (5) - ^
06:38:441 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why so many spinners, surely you can put circles and slider is more than just a few places.

Hope this helped ;)


Fantastic Map By the way!
Topic Starter
Mismagius

GyroX20 wrote:

Hello Blue Dragon

I'm not that good of a modder, but i think ill give this a try. Because of that, these will mostly be general suggestions

Audio Bitrate is higher than 192kbps. Try to compress it gotta do that
Filesize of the map Exceeds 10MB without video. I dont know if there is a way to fix that though

00:16:032 (9) - Perhaps NC here nah, would break the stream in half
00:32:579 (1) - Maybe end this slider earlier and add 3 circles to go here, or just put a few right after the slider. You have been following the song so much, i think it would be a good idea to do it here uh? i don't get the purpose of this
01:31:958 (1) - Possible move the spinner over to the red tick and put a circle on the blue tick that the spinner was on why?
02:49:031 (5) - NC? applied
03:36:043 (1,2,3) - Perhaps try to make it like this: that'd make it confusing because the sliders only have 1 repeat
04:06:991 (4,5,6) - Why not jump here ;) would be too hard
04:43:802 (8) - NC? nah, would make it hard to read imo
05:22:250 (5) - ^ too short
06:38:441 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Why so many spinners, surely you can put circles and slider is more than just a few places. no I can't

Hope this helped ;)


Fantastic Map By the way!
Hula
Thank Lu for this mod and say hi to her for me please



[Insane]
Hitsound volumes could go up a bit, can't hear jackshit in some of the really intense sections.

00:11:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - How about sticking whistles on the white and red ticks to add to that violin feathering.
00:44:989 (2) - How about making a sharp angle on the slider so it accents that violin going OOOEEUURRR.
00:48:436 (3) - This should be 1/2 slider, nothing really on that blue tick
00:59:468 (5) - Make this a bigger jump from previous object since there's that good old trumpet and it currently felt underwhelming.
01:01:881 (5) - Maybe do the same as above, but for some reason this doesn't feel underwhelming unlike the last. so w.e
01:05:845 (2,3) - ctrl+g? it'll add a bit of flavour to it and i think this pattern fits better with the jumpiness of the violin than the square
01:09:120 (5,6,7) - What made you go for the sliders? I think a stream would be more fitting
01:37:077 (1) - THIS BIT IS MY FAVOURITE BIT OF THE SONG - But how about putting drum-hitfinish on the downbeat throughout this section? The hitsound sounds nearly exactly the same as the drum in the song.
02:10:526 (1) - Shorten to 2/3 slider and add a circle on the white tick? the slider end starts on that cool WEOOEOEWOBOBELE, so it'd make sense to map the whole WOOOEOOEWOBOBELE rather than just some of it.
02:17:824 (4) - Huh, put this on the white tick.
02:27:422 (5) - Move on the white tick (shorten too) and add a circle on the red tick before, plays weirdly as it is and this suggestion makes more sense than it is now.
02:44:319 (1) - Make this slider more funky looking after the white tick
03:03:629 (1) - Make more a triangle with 3 and 4, just cos.
03:13:629 (1,7) - Drum sample set and increase the volume then a tiny bit
04:12:595 (1,2,3,4) - This change of slider shape for some reason screamed "you ran out of mapping space!" it could be made neater by making them all straight sliders. Especially since they're the only curved 1/4 sliders in that whole streamy bit until the slow slider.
04:59:491 (1) - Blanket! this one's real bad
06:29:820 (2,3,4) - This should be something more similar to like when you mapped it earlier - 05:22:250 (5,6,7) -

I love the spinners but are spinners like that actually rankable?

Anyway, I really like this tune and map. Just a shame I didn't get those 2 kds
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