Hi, from
♪ ♫~O2Jam-based Style Modding Team~♫ ♪suggestion kiai
00:49:755 to 01:14:529
01:33:110 to 01:45:497
[Lv.5]
01:42:981 (102981|2) - move on 4 looks better
-feel dont want to touch more
[Lv.12]
00:59:626 (59626|3) - move 6
01:01:948 (61948|4,62045|2,62142|1) - too weird here, how about this?
http://puu.sh/44QlF.png or
http://puu.sh/44Qmd.png or
http://puu.sh/44QmU.png < mirrored too also can
01:07:368 (67368|0,67368|4) - move right 2 times
01:07:755 (67755|2) - move 5 if you changed ^ that note
01:07:948 (67948|3) - move 2
01:12:013 (72013|5) - move 7
01:12:981 (72981|3,73174|3,73368|3,73561|3) - how about this?
http://puu.sh/44TRk.png01:14:626 (74626|2) - move 2 ( it fit with 01:14:432 (74432|4,74529|5) - )
01:14:819 (74819|4,75013|3,75206|2) - move left 1x
01:16:465 (76465|3) - move 3
01:30:013 - add 1 full hold measure for bass (you add hold for synth and and still have bass sound there, dont miss it)
01:57:884 (117884|3) - hold end 02:00:981 - (02:00:594 there still have sound yet when you 50%)
[Lv.22]
-bumps/gimmicks suggested on this diff
OD 8 Please
01:00:884 (60884|4) - misplace?
01:30:013 - missing bass hold note
01:57:884 (117884|2,117884|0,117884|6,117884|4) - hold end 02:00:981
-pattern all looks okay for me but some ladder note are not following the rhythm
-and am i seeing looks like Mirrored / Repeating notes