This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, October 22, 2014 at 7:03:47 PM

Artist: KAmiYU
Title: REASON (TV Size)
Source: KARNEVAL
Tags: カーニヴァル anime ending sheela901 Kamiya Hiroshi Irino Miyu
BPM: 126
Filesize: 25003kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (2.52 stars, 178 notes)
2. Insane (3.38 stars, 238 notes)
3. Normal (1.8 stars, 111 notes)

Download: KAmiYU - REASON (TV Size)
Download: KAmiYU - REASON (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
003 - KARNEVAL Ending Theme
"REASON" by KAmiYU
- Video added
- mp3 quality fixed
- timing fixed
Mods are totally welcome
---------------

Difficulty:
Normal: Shouko
Hard: Shouko
Insane: Shouko

Modding Help:
zorefire
Natsu
mingmichael
sheela901
Unsfamiliar
Mira-san
Pandiar
RandomEffect
Squirell
neonat

Can i take the easy?

azu-nyan14 wrote:

Can i take the easy?

Sure azu-nyan14! XD You're really welcome!! XD

zorefire wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:18:582 (1) - move it farther away?
2. 01:02:392 (1,2,3) - keep together to far away
3. 01:27:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - do something different?
   [Hard]
4. All those empty gaps please add notes to them
5. Approach rate is to slow make it a little faster
6. waaaay to far apart 00:14:773 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - bring closer together
   [Insane]
   1 problem
7. Why is 01:27:273 (1,2,3,4,5) - closer then the other diffs spread out more

Thanks! XD

Fixed!!

Timing check

1. 1491 offset your current one is really off
2. bpm is correct
3. also you have 2 mp3 on the osu folder plz delete one
4. 00:01:440 and you got 2 lines on the same spot o.o

GL maybe I mod it if i have time

hey Shouko, please read PM asap

btw, i have checked some at your map, and please delete 1mp3 there ._. because you used 2 mp3 there (delete the KamiYu-Reason_001a one)

and then, change your another mp3 (KamiYu-Reason_001) to be >> http://puu.sh/3IZ3B.mp3 i have changed to be 128kbps
and don't forget change the BG size too

[General]

1. all kiai starts at 00:49:059 and ends at 01:17:630 (2) -
2. if i were you, i would use the preview point at 00:00:963

mingmichael wrote:

hey Shouko, please read PM asap

btw, i have checked some at your map, and please delete 1mp3 there ._. because you used 2 mp3 there (delete the KamiYu-Reason_001a one)

and then, change your another mp3 (KamiYu-Reason_001) to be >> http://puu.sh/3IZ3B.mp3 i have changed to be 128kbps
and don't forget change the BG size too

[General]

1. all kiai starts at 00:49:059 and ends at 01:17:630 (2) -
2. if i were you, i would use the preview point at 00:00:963

Umm? Video BG or image BG?

[General]
KAmiYU is in the tags. Don't put it in because it's already in the artist. And, there's "," in the tags. Remove it. Also, remove KARNEVAL in the tags because it's already in the source
Add "カーニヴァル" in the tags because it's the name of the anime but in japanese. Add also "anime". Is it an ending? Write it in also.
KARNEVAL must not be in capital
Resize the BG. Here's one:
The kiai time must start at 00:49:075 and end at 01:19:551

[Normal]
So there's distance problem. Prees Ctrl+Shift+A and check "Check distance snap"
01:10:503 (2) - Stop it at 01:11:217 ?
00:07:884 (2) - Copy 00:07:170 (1) and paste it and do Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J and remove the new combo so they could be alike

[Insane]
01:25:503 (7) - x:400 y:152
01:25:741 (8) - x:392 y:128
01:27:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - It the same as hard. Maybe Ctrl+G?

Good Luck! Can I make an insane?

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
KAmiYU is in the tags. Don't put it in because it's already in the artist. And, there's "," in the tags. Remove it. Also, remove KARNEVAL in the tags because it's already in the source
Add "カーニヴァル" in the tags because it's the name of the anime but in japanese. Add also "anime". Is it an ending? Write it in also.
KARNEVAL must not be in capital
Resize the BG. Here's one:

SPOILER

The kiai time must start at 00:49:075 and end at 01:19:551

[Normal]
So there's distance problem. Prees Ctrl+Shift+A and check "Check distance snap"
01:10:503 (2) - Stop it at 01:11:217 ?
00:07:884 (2) - Copy 00:07:170 (1) and paste it and do Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J and remove the new combo so they could be alike

[Insane]
01:25:503 (7) - x:400 y:152
01:25:741 (8) - x:392 y:128
01:27:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - It the same as hard. Maybe Ctrl+G?

Done.

sheela901 wrote:

Good Luck! Can I make an insane?

Sure.

Hi from my queue o/

Hard

sheela901's Insane

Insane

Hope my suggestions are helpful. Good luck

Hello.



General:

00:56:455 - Stop kiai time here.
01:04:313 - Enable kiai time here.







PM me so I could recheck later, or tomorrow, idk.

Hi, Random Mod!








That's it! Please think about every suggestion I made.

If you have any question just ask me ingame or via forum pm!

Deni wrote:

Hi, Random Mod!

unrankable: You must fix this for the rankability of your map
bolded: strong suggestion
normal: suggestion
italic: comment

General

Your source is inconsistent. It has to be the same in every difficulty.

Inconsistency in Source

- [Hard] : KARNEVAL

- [Insane] : KARNEVAL

- [Normal] : KARNEVAL

- [sheela901's Insane] : Karneval

Consider adding "sheela901" to all of your tags.

There are a lot of unsnapped green inherited points in every difficulty, you have to resnap them! You simply do this by going to the position where the inherited point normally should be, then press -> Timing -> Timing Setup Panel -> (on the left) Press the ´Use Current Time´ button.

Imo Grid Level 4 is the best for mapping. Consider using it while mapping.

You will need an Easy if you want to rank this map.

Normal

The distance spacing in this difficulty is very inconsistent. Usually, you should have a consistent spacing in a Normal which is not the case here. You could use 1.20x for example.
This Normal is way too Hard at some parts. There shouldn't be jumps at all in a Normal difficulty.

1. 00:05:265 (1,2) - This is a real jump, something like this shouldn't be in a Normal. Decrease the distance to around ~1.20x if you want to have a Normal, not a Hard. I suggest you to move it to x:280 y:232 (Grid Level 4). Would play a lot better for a Normal!
   
   Slider Example

   
2. 00:07:884 (2,3) - The distance between them is waaay to far! Something like this fits into a Hard or Insane, not into a Normal. I highly suggest you to move (3) to x:288 y:352 (Grid Level 4). Will look like this: (Example in Box). You will have to move the following objects with Distance Snap enabled too.
   
   Spacing Example

   
3. 00:14:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing between them is again too far for a Normal. Decrease the spacing between each of these to ~1.20x if you want to have a Normal, not a Hard.
   
4. 00:17:884 (3,1) - They are overlapping which looks and plays strange, you can simply fix this by moving (1) for example to x:308 y:280 for a normal spacing. Will look and play better!
   
   Spacing Example 2

   
5. 00:37:646 (5) - Finish at the head of this slider would fit pretty good since there's a finish in the song itself at this position too!
   
6. 00:37:646 (5,6) - Distance between them is too far, should be around ~1.20x not 2.00x! With 1.20x Distance Snap enabled, you could create a blanket between these two, like I did here: (Example in Box). Will play and look a lot better than your previous version!
   
   Blanket Example

   
7. 00:44:789 (3) - I think you forgot a finish at the end of this slider, you can clearly here there's one in the music so it would fit perfectly.
   
8. 00:47:646 (1,2) - Decrease the distance between these two since (2) is too far away, and increase the distance between 00:48:836 (2,3) - them since there's a little break until you have to hit (3). Leaving it as you did will confuse the player a lot.
   
9. 00:58:598 (4,5) - This jump is not acceptable for a Normal. Decrease the distance between these two objects to around 1.20x!
   
10. 01:02:408 (1,2,3) - Pretty much the same for these three as mentioned above. This jump pattern fits into a Hard / Insane not into a Normal! Consider changing this into a normal part without jumps!
    
11. 01:13:836 (5,6) - Same here, decrease the distance. It's a Normal difficulty, there shouldn't be 3.00x jumps.
    
12. 01:26:217 (1,1) - This is too hard for a Normal, the circle after this short spinner is too close. Players that can only play Normal difficulties will have problems with this part. Consider making it easier. For example, delete 01:27:170 (1) - and extend the spinner to 01:27:170 - . That will fix this problem! Should look like this then:
    

Hard

1. From 00:09:432 - to 00:10:384 - : I really don't see a reason for leaving gaps like this in the beginning part. Try to map to the Beat/Rhythm too, not only to his voice.
   
2. 00:23:122 (8) - The finish at the end of this slider doesn't fit here imo, I'd add one to 00:24:313 (1) - since this fits with 00:20:027 (6) - the finish at the end of this slider.
   So, remove the finish at the end of 00:23:122 (8) - and add one at 00:24:313 (1) - .
   
3. 00:23:122 (8,1) - What about creating a blanket with these two? Would fit and look better imo! Like so:
   
   Blanket Example

   
4. 00:32:170 (1) - This circle doesn't fit in here imo, especially the hitsounds of it.
   I reccomend you to delete this circle, but then don't forget to add a NC to 00:32:646 (9) - !
   
5. 00:37:170 (6,7) - They aren't stacked properly, moving (6) to x:432 y:168 would fix this!
   
6. 00:39:313 (1) - Adding a normal / soft finish at the end of this slider would fit perfectly, so consider adding one!
   
7. 00:39:313 (1,2,3) - The overlaps between them don't look nice, just move each object a bit apart so that they aren't overlapping anymore.
   
8. 00:41:217 (2,4) - Same with these two as mentioned above. You could change the shape of (2) or just move (4) to fix this.
   
9. 01:04:313 (3) - The finish should be at the head of this slider, not at the end. Then it would fit to the music.
   
10. 01:17:646 (2) - Curving this slider more like so: (Example in Box) will look and play better imo.
    
    Slider Example

    

sheela901's Insane

1. 00:00:979 (1) - Since this slider is placed before the red timing point, it's unrankable. You should delete this slider.
   
2. 00:07:170 (2,3) - The overlap between them looks a bit weird. You can simply fix this by rotating (3) a bit to the right (Selection Centre). Like so:
   
   Overlap Fix

   
3. 00:23:241 (4,5) - They aren't stacked properly, but you can simply fix this by moving (5) to x:260 y:192.
   
4. 00:24:551 (1,2,3) - This doesn't fit well to his voice, my suggestion:
   
   00:24:908 - : Circle
   00:25:146 - to 00:25:384 - : Slider
   00:25:503 - to 00:25:741 - : Slider
   00:25:979 - : Circle
   
   Should look like this then:
   
   
   
5. 00:31:932 (1) - I think you forgot to add a finish to the head of this slider! Would fit perfectly here.
   
6. 00:49:075 (1) - Imo there should only be a finish at the head of this slider, not at the end. Would fit and sound better.
   
7. 00:54:551 (2,3,4) - This plays strange imo and it doesn't fit well to the beat/voice. My suggestion:
   
   Delete (3).
   Shorten (2) to 00:54:789 -
   Add a circle at 00:55:146 -
   
   This would fit perfectly to the song!
   
8. 01:02:408 - You should really put a circle here since it would fit much better to the song than leaving a gap.
   If you do this, add a New Combo to this circle and delete the NC from the next one.
   
9. 01:04:194 (1) - I think this slider is misplaced? You should move it to 01:04:313 - .
   
10. 01:21:217 (4,5,6) - This spacing could be improved if you move (5) to x:96 y:172 ; (6) to x:16 y:244.
    Looks like this then:
    
    Spacing Example

    

Insane

1. 00:17:408 (4) - This slider doesn't look so nice, I think a normal curved slider would fit way better here. For example like this:
   
   Slider Example

   
2. 00:19:551 (1,2) - Move (2) a bit apart from (1) so that they aren't overlapping? Would play better. For example to x:212 y:176.
   
3. Adding a finish to 00:45:979 - and 00:46:455 - would fit perfectly since you can here that there is a finish at this positions in the song too.
   
4. 00:46:932 (4) - I don't get why you used the drum sampleset here. Soft would fit much more! (Or at least at the end of the slider)
   
5. 00:47:884 (1,2) - The spacing of (2) is a bit unusual, normally it should be at x:168 y:88. Would play better.
   
6. 00:53:836 (5) - This slider looks a bit old school, using a normal curved slider would fit and play better here imo. For example, as I did here:
   
   Slider Example 2

   
7. 00:55:979 (1,2,3) - If you move (3) to x:144 y:152 you'd have an triangle pattern which looks and plays much better than your previous one. Will look like this:
   
   Pattern Example

   
8. 01:03:598 (5,6) - The transition between these two doesn't look that nice, what about using a mirrored slider pattern as I did here (Example in Box)? Will fit and play better!
   
   Pattern Example 2

   
9. 01:11:932 (6) - Adding a finish to the head of this slider would fit perfectly again since there's also one in the song!
   
10. What about adding a spinner from 01:17:765 - to 01:18:836 - to fill this gap? Would also fit good imo!

That's it! Please think about every suggestion I made.

If you have any question just ask me ingame or via forum pm!

Done!! And Thank you very much!!

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen 楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[General]
Passable.
Not suggesting to use Normal whistle, not suitable >.o /
Try to map some part following cover instead of vocal
Need to work more, hard to be ranked, it's like old map style. Refer some other ranked maps around the BPM

[Normal]
Follow full DS before asking for mod.

[Hard]
Map more, too less notes for hard.
Spacing needs to be attended.
00:02:646 - Add note
00:04:789 (1) - Space further than previous note
00:06:217 (5) - ^
00:10:503 (5) - Not stacking on any note like this situation may confuse players
00:17:408 (2) - Vocal start here 00:17:527 - , quite not balanced for the song
00:25:741 (4,5) - Notes too close and flow isn't correct
00:30:503 (6,7,8) - Stacking like this is more preferable if you wanna skip beats or this 00:36:217 (4,5,6) -
00:39:313 (1) - Remove new combo
00:40:979 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:217 (2) - NC here
00:57:408 (5,1) - Flow like this isn't fun for players, it's like the river is blocked by a dam
01:04:313 (3) - Try to make the first hit of KIAI a new combo
01:15:503 (1,1,1) - Make it 1 combo, not too colorful
01:16:455 - Add note
01:22:408 (1,2,3,4) - Stack to 01:21:694 (1) - and make the line shape a bit more bend
01:26:455 (4,5) - Spacing make it same with 01:27:646 (2,3) -

[Insane]
Your insane is quite easy, make it harder
You can ask Sheela for some suggestions of Insane map
The flow may help players to play the map instead of following the approach circle
AR: -1
00:12:170 (1) - Stack with 00:11:217 (8) -
00:12:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - Arrange this into 1 direction, I cant read
00:55:979 (1) - Spacing too close
01:12:884 (8) - Don't stick with tail of previous note
01:14:551 (1) - This stops for too long and too near from the previous note
01:15:503 (3) - ^
01:17:408 (7) - Don't stick to the tail
01:19:075 (1,2) - Spacing doesn't look nice
01:27:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - All the spacing are same but why 01:27:647 (2,3) - is not same timing? consider to change

[Sheela901's Insane]
00:12:408 (10) - Maybe it's a style but it looks awful
00:22:765 (3) - DS
00:24:908 (2) - ^
00:30:979 (8) - ^
00:49:075 (1) - Make the slider longer
00:55:146 (3) - Spacer and try not to follow the blue tick. You can replace it with slider

01:00:741 (3,4,5) - Make the tail perfect stack if possible
01:06:932 (2,3) - Make spacing here same with 01:22:884 (7,1,2,1,2,3) - , the distance having too big difference
01:23:836 (2,1) - Too far to jump and no symmetry

Thanks.

Hey, from my queue


Looks okay, but the rhythm is confusing. Also, recheck the DS in this map, since some of it is messed up.


Flow is bad, plus there's some really bad and confusing overlaps, which cause me to miss a note or two.


Oh hey, I actually passed this diff. Sliders are too slow, and the rhythms also unpredictable.


...Feels more like a Hard diff imo.

Cheers!

I remade the Insane diff. It's called Circus now.

hi~ from my queue


[General]
deselect letterbox during break
Please check all diff tags setting
(カーニヴァル__anime_ending_sheela901)→(カーニヴァル_anime_ending_sheela901)
Please check all diff AIMOD


[Normal]
AR-3
you should fix "star rating" for beginners.it is 3.51
i recommended 3.0 before and after and DS is 1.0 or make Easy diffs

sorry skip

[Hard]
00:02:646 (2) - overlap not beautiful.how about x:352 y:172?
00:03:836 (5) - the end of slider is 00:04:075
00:05:265 (3) - add finish
00:06:217 (5) - i think not fit slider.how about this?
00:09:075 (3) - add finish and the end of slider is 00:09:313
00:12:884 (4) - add finish
00:13:836 (6) - i think not fit rhythm.how about this?
00:16:694 (1) - add finish
00:23:122 (8) - remove end finish
00:23:836 (9) - add note and finish
00:24:313 (1) - remove finish
00:29:551 (4) - move x:136 y:168
00:45:027 (8) - remove end finish
00:56:694 (4) - add soft finish start point
01:17:646 (2) - add finish?
01:19:551 (2) - add soft finish start point
01:23:360 (5) - ^
01:25:741 (3) - add finish?
01:28:837 (5) - i want soft finish here

[sheela901's Insane]
HP-1 or OD-1
00:01:456 (1) - add finish start point
00:05:265 (2) - ^
00:08:836 (4) - remove finish add clap
00:09:075 (1) - add finish start point
00:12:884 (1) - ^
00:24:313 (5) - add finish
00:39:551 (1) - i want soft finish start point
00:56:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this?
01:00:741 (3,4,5) - more expand spacing :for instance
01:06:217 (1) - add finish
01:08:122 (5) - add finish start point
01:09:075 (6) - ^
01:19:551 (1) - ^
01:21:217 (4) - not beautiful. how about stack 01:20:265 (2)
01:23:360 (1) - add finish start point

[Circus]
HP-2
00:01:456 (1) - add finish start point
00:05:265 (3) - add finish
00:09:075 (3) - add finish start point
00:12:884 (4) - add finish
00:19:908 (2) - remove finish middle point
00:20:265 (3) - add finish end point
00:23:122 (8) - remove finish end point
00:29:551 (4) - move x:136 y:168?
00:34:313 (1) - add finish?
00:43:360 (10) - add finish start point?
00:52:884 (5) - add finish
00:56:694 (4) - add soft finish?
00:58:360 (7) - add soft finish middle point?
01:00:027 (10) - remove finish
01:00:265 (1) - add finish middle point
01:08:122 (3) - add finish
01:17:765 (1) - spinner end is 01:18:598 ?
01:23:360 (3) - add finish
01:28:837 (6) - i want soft finish here

good luck!

Thanks.

And fixed.

Hellow! mod from queue..
so, I wrote this whole mod just now and wanted to post it and my computer decided to let a blue screen pop up.. and everything's gone.
and I am a tiiiiny little bit annoyed by that, so please excuse me, if I sound rude. I don't mean it that way. ><

[General]

1. check AIMod for
   - Audio Preview Time
   - Letterboxing
   - Video file size
   if you have problems with rendering down your video, you might find someone who can help you here: t/128701
2. also, if you include a custom hitcircle, you have to include an approachcirlce and hitcircleoverlay as well.
   
3. your Normal is too hard for the easiest diff of a mapset, the max star rating is 3.30 (iirc). if you fix the Normal it should be easy enough, but you might want to add an Easy to your mapset.

[Normal]

1. AIMod screen

   
   - make sure to have a consistent distance spacing inEasy/Normal diffs, it's essential for readabilty.
2. 00:07:170 (1,2) - use a copypasted, 180° rotated version of 1 for 2. if you take a close look - the lower circles overlap while the upper don't, it doesn't look good.
3. 00:14:789 - don't change slider velocity here. it's too hard to play and furthermore there is no indicator for changing the speed.
4. 01:10:265 (1) - don't hide circles like this (at least not in normal diffs), it's not easy to read.
5. 01:26:217 (1) - imo this spinner is too short, replace it somehow or extend it?

[Hard]
this diff looks much quite good already. just some suggestions:

1. 00:06:217 (5) - use similar style as for 00:05:503 (4)?
2. 00:13:836 (6,7) - pay attention to overlaps like this. imo they don't look nice and I'd prefer 100% visible objects (stacked objects excluded!).
   same here: 00:20:027 (6,1)
3. 00:26:932 (8) - increase angularity a bit
   suggestion

   
   imo this has more character than the current.
   same here: 01:02:170 (5)
4. 00:57:408 (5,1) - DS feels weird here

I'll skip sheela901's Insane for now, sorry. x: -lazy and in a baaad moooood-

[Circus]
looks nice as well
I just kinda expected 'more' than this, cause it's not "Insane" but a custom name.. .o.

1. 00:18:122 (6,7) - it's the same in this diff with those overlaps
   also if 6 is supposed to be aligned to 00:17:884 (5) pay attention to the approach circle of 5 and use it as a referance for the shape of the slider.
   (in this case you should move the last anchor point of 6 to 296|44 for example, that way it matches with the cirlce)
   the same goes for 00:17:408 (4) btw. - and many more, I'm too lazy to point them all out. s:
2. 00:28:122 (1) - stack this with 00:27:408 (9)'s end correctly
3. 00:45:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - shape of this stream looks rather random, maybe think of another form?

That's it, sorry. s:
Hops some thing's were helpful..!
Good luck with this!