1. Hard (4.89 stars, 325 notes)
2. Laurier's Insane (5 stars, 402 notes)
3. Normal (3.25 stars, 155 notes)

enjoy
This map is for fachan0773 since she like Date a Live a lot lol :\
Harez made a special insane diff xD --> http://puu.sh/3lf5g.osu
also XK2238 for the sweet-evil-inner Taiko diff! ></ --> http://puu.sh/3q9s5.osu

thanks you two for the time :3

Special thanks to:
Ranked by Nyquill
Bubbled by wcx19911123
Insane diff by Laurier

Gloria Guard wrote:

10nya-chan ! <3 gloria-kun <3

[General]

Letterbox during breaks uncheck
Add tag anime,opning added opening only, anime will be specify in genre o3o;

[Normal]

00:35:555 (1,2,3,4) I think this pattern shape more improve imo.

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ok owo)v
00:42:633 (1) umm.. I hear lryics beat 1/4 reserve one repeat beat is better imo
if you change this slider spinner move 00:44:066 here spinner is follow the vocal tough o3o;
00:46:004 add note? no orz vocal start 00:46:173
00:56:622 (2,3) add finish? this is intense sound here already added on 2 doesn't fit on 3 tough ;w;
01:02:015 (1,2,3) ^ too loud to add finish x.x
01:21:397 (2,3,4) I suggest this pattern shape here

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okk
01:27:296 remove green line
01:27:633 ^ all done lol
02:20:723 (2,3,4) I think this pattern symmetry is better imo

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02:29:824 (6,2) why this note unstack? i think this note (6) slider head stack is better shape
2 unstacked

[Hard]

00:42:633 (1,2,3) I suggest this pattern shape

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keep current pattern orz;;
00:23:251 (3,4) umm.. now this is beat is fine but i think awkward.. so i recommend this beat

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keep current, it follow guitar imo
00:25:779 (2,3,4) ^ This is too awkward beat imo so i recommend this

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^ orz ;_;
00:34:038 (3) slider end remove finish and add clap because i don't hear finish sound
ok owo
01:07:914 (5,1) hmm.. you intended? i think this small jump is bad imo..
this is intended orz since vocal here;;
02:02:858 (7,8,9,10) This is too.. small jump is bad flow imo.. i think paste is better flow
aware this, fixed i think;;

Lovely map~~ Good luck nya chan !

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Laurier's Insane]

00:28:644 (1,3) I don't understand this pattern overlap.. i think change shape this

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1. "Letterbox during breaks" is not need unless you make SB.

1. I think spinner is too many.Spinner is one of the most difficult thing for beginner.This mapset doesn't include Easy difficulty, then you make Normal more easy.
2. 00:25:442 (4) - NC
3. 00:27:802 (1,2,3,4) - Why here DS is different from others?
4. 00:38:251 - add circle?
5. 00:40:611 (3,4) - NC either one
6. 00:56:622 (2) - move to (X:344,Y:120)?flow is better imo.
7. 01:10:274 -add circle
8. 01:11:622 - ^
9. 01:23:083 (1,1,1) - This pattern is a bit difficult for Normal.
10. 01:31:847 (3) - add circle
11. 01:32:858 (4) - NC
12. 01:55:105 (4) - NC
13. 02:23:083 - add circle
14. 02:30:498 (1,1,1) - This pattern is a bit difficult for Normal.

1. 00:23:925 (5) - NC
2. 00:26:622 (5) - NC
3. 00:45:330 (1) - move to (X:352,Y:144).this stack is better imo.
4. 01:05:217 (3,4,5) - This jump is too far.This is my suggestion.---(1)
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5. 01:24:599 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This spacing is hard to play.especially, 01:25:105 (7,8) this jump.
6. 01:25:779 (1,2,3) - I think this stack is not good.Because 1 and 2 are on the white line but 3 is on the red line, intuitive playing is difficult.
7. 01:54:094 (4) - NC
8. 02:02:689 (6) - move to (X:244,Y:100).flow is better
9. 02:04:375 (3) - flow is not good.like this?
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10. 02:12:633 (3,4,5) - same as (1)
11. 02:33:700 (3) - move to (X:324,Y:160)

1. 00:28:982 (4) - もう少し下に配置した方がいいと思います。ＨＰバーぎりぎりです---(1)
2. 01:05:470 (4) - この配置は少し難しいと思います。もう少し重ねるか、角度を変えた方がいいと思います。
3. 01:59:993 (4) - (1)と同じです。
4. 02:18:195 (1) - スライダー終わりぎわにくびれがあるため、スタックされている２が見えにくいです。くびれの位置を下げるか、配置を変えた方がいいと思います。

asaink wrote:

hi, for M4M.
[Laurier's Insane]

1. 00:28:982 (4) - もう少し下に配置した方がいいと思います。ＨＰバーぎりぎりです---(1) ギリギリなのできっとセーフです^^
2. 01:05:470 (4) - この配置は少し難しいと思います。もう少し重ねるか、角度を変えた方がいいと思います。　insaneですし難しくてもいいと思います^^
3. 01:59:993 (4) - (1)と同じです。
4. 02:18:195 (1) - スライダー終わりぎわにくびれがあるため、スタックされている２が見えにくいです。くびれの位置を下げるか、配置を変えた方がいいと思います。 問題ないと思います^^

Good Luck!

asaink wrote:

hi, for M4M.
This is all suggestion, so feel free ignore.but, please tell me why it is no change.I can't mod about hitsounds sorry...
hi~
ahh ok~

[General]

1. "Letterbox during breaks" is not need unless you make SB.
   I didn;t make sb for this so i add letterbox during breaks

[Normal]

1. I think spinner is too many.Spinner is one of the most difficult thing for beginner.This mapset doesn't include Easy difficulty, then you make Normal more easy. I think it's ok because note after spinner is a bit far (2 white ticks)
2. 00:25:442 (4) - NC ok
3. 00:27:802 (1,2,3,4) - Why here DS is different from others? 0.88 resemble 0.90 tough~
4. 00:38:251 - add circle? um ok
5. 00:40:611 (3,4) - NC either one added on 3
6. 00:56:622 (2) - move to (X:344,Y:120)?flow is better imo. ok
7. 01:10:274 -add circle ok
8. 01:11:622 - ^ nope
9. 01:23:083 (1,1,1) - This pattern is a bit difficult for Normal. this is normal and normal player will notice this (since the hitsounds are loud and fit):3
10. 01:31:847 (3) - add circle ok
11. 01:32:858 (4) - NC ok
12. 01:55:105 (4) - NC ok
13. 02:23:083 - add circle
14. 02:30:498 (1,1,1) - This pattern is a bit difficult for Normal.

[Hard]

1. 00:23:925 (5) - NC
2. 00:26:622 (5) - NC no, it'll make followpoint to next note
3. 00:45:330 (1) - move to (X:352,Y:144).this stack is better imo. ah ok, aware this issue tough xD
4. 01:05:217 (3,4,5) - This jump is too far.This is my suggestion.---(1)
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   it's ok, since this is hard without stream so I decided to make hard with jumps
5. 01:24:599 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This spacing is hard to play.especially, 01:25:105 (7,8) this jump. ^
6. 01:25:779 (1,2,3) - I think this stack is not good.Because 1 and 2 are on the white line but 3 is on the red line, intuitive playing is difficult. ^
7. 01:54:094 (4) - NC no .3.
8. 02:02:689 (6) - move to (X:244,Y:100).flow is better wow thanks xD
9. 02:04:375 (3) - flow is not good.like this?
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   oh ok~
10. 02:12:633 (3,4,5) - same as (1) ._.
11. 02:33:700 (3) - move to (X:324,Y:160) no, i like this pattern hehe

Good Luck!

P A N wrote:

m4m from in-game :3
hi~

[Hard]
00:24:936 (7) - center to 421|230 and move tail to 388|166 for more blanket ok
00:37:577 (6) - 1 grid up? nope the height is the same as previous slider~
01:25:273 (8,9,10) - move them 1 grid right ok
02:27:127 (3) - 1 grid down and move 02:27:633 (1) 's tail right 1 grid ok

[Normal]
hmm.. I think the easiest diff should be 3 star, not 3.5 damn just realized this
00:30:498 (1) - 1 grid right? ok~
00:42:633 (5) - make this slider end at 00:43:307 fixed in another way
01:55:105 - avoid stack note in easiest diff :3 maybe try this beat for easier? ok
02:15:330 (3,4) - same as above, i think stack is hard for the easiest diff. maybe take a look at other part too. umm =="

Good luck and star

kajiyatta wrote:

[Insane]
Placement
00:24:600(4,1) (4)でCtrl+Gかけて、(1)をこんな感じでずらすと、いい流れでジャンプできると思います。 うーん^^;

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00:27:296(4)　2連スタックだと流れが止まる感じがするので、x:340,y:168とかに持ってきてはどうですか？ このままでいいと思います！！
00:47:521(3)x:268y:333 [(1)の始点] に持ってきては？スタックよりもグルっと回すように配置したほうが流れがいいと思います　その流れはちょっと古いかなーと思います
00:49:880(2)これも同じ感じで　（スタック→ジャンプの配置が多いので、そういったスタイルであれば一連の提案はスルーで構いません。）　ちょっとその流れになる理由がわからないのでパス

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[/spoilerbox]
01:05:723(5) ちょっとジャンプがきついのと、少し予想しづらかったのでCtrl+G？no
01:06:566(3)これもスタックではなくばらしてこんな感じで no
[spoilerbox]

01:55:274(1) Ctrl+G. ボーカルの初めなので(2)ではなく(1)でジャンプしたほうが合ってると思います ???
Hit Sonud
KIAI中のfinishのつけドコロにやや違和感。あまり統一されてない感じがしました
00:42:633(1,3) (1)でfinish使うのであれば(3)でも付けたほうが良いです、バックの音同じなので。もしくは両方clapに置き換えるとか、いずれにせよ揃えたほうが
01:12:296(1) finish始点に追加 ok
02:24:937(1)^ ok

nice map. good luck & star!

1. nothing

1. 00:23:083 - consider adding a note here?
2. 01:09:431 (1) - 1 gird down?
3. 01:13:307 (2) - put the middle anchor point to x488 y132 and the last anchor point to x416 y72 for a better slider
4. 02:04:880 (4) - the right anchor point put at x418 y216 seems better: ↓
   
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5. 00:28:139 (2,4) - try to symmetrize these sliders?
   
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6. 02:20:049 (2,4) - ^

1. 00:43:307 (2) - put it at x336 y292 in order to be symmetrical with 00:42:633 (1) - ?
2. 00:43:982 (3) - add whistle here? add whistle at 00:44:487 (4) - and 00:44:993 (4) - also.
3. 01:27:464 (4) - this whistle is a little bit noisy imo, consider removing it? If you take this suggestion, remove whistle at 02:34:880 (6) - too.
4. 02:24:262 (9) - NC here instead 02:25:273 (1) -

1. 00:28:813 (3) - put it at x160 y128 looks better
2. 01:06:566 (3) - unstack it seems to be proper to the music

Combo Colour

1. BPM fine
2. Offset fine
3. ga ada Easy?

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188,244,86453,6,4,P|280:268|324:244,1,150

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256,88,77858,5,0,0:0:0:0:
328,60,78026,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,100,78195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,176,78363,2,0,P|408:220|424:256,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,100,78869,1,4,0:0:0:0:

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168,248,85274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,172,85442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,124,85611,1,2,0:0:0:0:

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284,208,100611,5,2,0:0:0:0:
339,86,100779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,195,100948,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,131,101116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,118,101285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,240,101453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,240,101959,5,0,0:0:0:0:

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100,132,141060,2,0,P|92:84|100:44,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,192,141566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,141734,2,0,P|276:232|312:224,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

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52,336,144768,6,0,P|40:304|44:268,1,70,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

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Harez wrote:

Request via Ingame PM yo

[General]

Combo Colour

1. BPM fine
2. Offset fine
3. ga ada Easy? malas xD

[Normal]
00:27:128 - kenapa ga di isi note aja disini?menjaga star rate hue
00:29:150 (3) - 1 grid ke atas k
00:42:634 (1) -

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slider (1) dipendekin ke tick putih ke dua, terus di-repeat, spinner geser ke tick merah
it follow vocal actually ~
01:02:521 (3,4,5) -

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(4) di rotate 60 derajat counter clockwise, terus pindahin ke 168, 292. (5) pindahin ke 192, 204
rotate 60 will break the flow imo
01:26:453 (1) -

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dibikin simetris aja

188,244,86453,6,4,P|280:268|324:244,1,150

current one is not symmetry? k then =w=
01:39:262 (3) - 1 grid ke kiri (CTRL + H dari (2)) k~
01:58:476 (2) - 1 grid ke atas whoop fixd
02:33:869 (1) -

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sama kayak 01:26:453 (1), tapi di putar 180 derajat

[Hard]
00:36:903 (4,5,6) - 1 grid ke kiri semua, biar (4) tepat di (2), dan (5,6) tetap didekat (4) xD
00:39:094 (2) - whistle di awal sama di repeat
01:05:217 (3) -

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slidernya dipendekin jadi 3/4, terus tambahin not di 01:05:555 + clap want to focus at jump here
01:09:936 (2) - 1 grid ke bawah fixd in other way tough
01:17:858 (1,2,3,4,5) -

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gimana kalo gini aja, biar kelihatan lebih rapih

256,88,77858,5,0,0:0:0:0:
328,60,78026,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,100,78195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,176,78363,2,0,P|408:220|424:256,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,100,78869,1,4,0:0:0:0:

prefer mine sorry ;w;
01:19:206 (6,7,8,9,1) - CTRL + H dari 01:17:858 (1,2,3,4,5) itu emang sengaja 6nya gak pas di 1 xD
01:25:105 (7,8) - woo.. jump tiba-tiba kayak gini bikin repot juga lho, soalnya 01:23:588 (2,3) - kan jump 1/1 at least ther're readable (hard player is smart)
01:25:274 (8,9,10,1) -

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biar ga kejauhan dari 7, coba ini aja

168,248,85274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,172,85442,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,124,85611,1,2,0:0:0:0:

324,192,85779,5,4,0:0:0:0:
01:26:453 (2,3,4) - ngikutin ke (1) *kalo saran yang atas diterima
01:40:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -

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dibikin segi-6 aja
uh pengen star pattern disini ;_;

284,208,100611,5,2,0:0:0:0:
339,86,100779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,195,100948,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,131,101116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,118,101285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,240,101453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,240,101959,5,0,0:0:0:0:

01:57:296 (5,6) - whistle di (5) dan awal slider (6) ok
01:58:644 (2) - remove whistle, kedengaran kayak dangdut *heh?* oh yea, missplaced whistle =w= should be at 01:58:813 lol (after hear the music 25% lol
02:12:633 (3) - sama kayak 01:05:217 (3)
02:21:060 (5,6) -

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100,132,141060,2,0,P|92:84|100:44,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,192,141566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,141734,2,0,P|276:232|312:224,2,70,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:24:262 (1) - remove new combo
02:24:768 (2) - New combo disini,

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k~

52,336,144768,6,0,P|40:304|44:268,1,70,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:34:375 (5,6) - ga yakin ini, jump 4x sexy

[Testplay]

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^ so noob

good luck nyaa~

EDIT: Bungkusin Image dengan Spoilerbox

wcx19911123 wrote:

DingGGu found this map to me thanks dinggu .,

[General]
fine

[Normal]
00:43:982 - how about add a section with 5% volume here, it fit the song better when silenced the spinner imo
01:26:453 (1) - how about move it down a bit, or the anti-jump(jump from spinner centre) is kinda sudden
02:04:038 - this finish is too loud imo, I suggest remove it or turn down the volume at least
02:33:869 (1) - same as 01:26:453 (1) - , move this one up a bit?
all done

[Hard]
01:25:105 (7,8) - first, the jump is too huge to be a Hard diff. second, it's jumping from(jump between 01:25:105 - and 01:25:274 - ) a heavy beat(01:25:105 - here's a heavy beat) but not jumping to(jump between 01:24:937 - and 01:25:105 - ) a heavy beat. this two points make this pattern is hard to play and doesn't fit the song. my suggestion is making 01:24:599 (4,5,6) - into a group, and 01:25:105 (7,8,9,10,1) - in another group, make a smaller(than current one) jump from 01:24:937 - to 01:25:105 - . then the pattern would be much better yep, i do believe so, it's look like i miss-heard the music orz, reduced jump ><
01:29:319 - hope you can change this newcombo's color manually, pink is kinda hard to read for players who were using the old default skin h new combo recolored

I'll give some advice to your future maps here:
first, please avoid of using slider end to follow a heavy beat. well the rhythm looks the same at 00:23:419 (4) - and 00:24:936 (1) - , but pay attention to the heavy beat(00:23:588 - and 00:24:937 - ), one of them is at a slider end and the other one is at a slider head. when you play a slider, you need to click the slider when the slider begin, and need to hold it till it end, then release it. clikc is a better action to fit a heavy beat than release. so if you use slider head to follow heavy beat, it'll play better
second, please avoid of using a single circle to follow a long voice. like the circle at 01:02:858 (6) - and 02:30:498 (1) - , the rhythm is fine, it's easy to tell that you're following vocal at that place. but pay attention, the vocal is a continuous voice, it's a long voice, use a slider to fit a long voice would play much better than a single circle, even with the same rhythm
well the 2 points is not saying about issues but better mapping technique imo, hope this can help you in your future maps
ah thank you! it really helo a lot, i hope i can be better in my next map

well because this is hard without stream so i decided to make a lot of jump, but it didn't turn out very well eh, =w=

kinda nice map, feel free to call me back