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Ok. Here is my mod from my M4M queue as promised~

[General]

Resnap timing sections!
First Kiai section is uncalled for. Delete it.

[Basic]

00:01:790 (1) - Not on beat!
00:02:728 (3) - Add whistle
00:05:177 (3) - ^
00:09:156 (1) - ^
00:08:544 (4) - ^
00:32:422 (4) - Move to 00:32:269
01:02:269 (5) -
01:04:105 (2) - End at 01:04:718 to follow rhythm
01:06:095 (2) - End slider at 01:06:554 and remove return
01:17:728 (1) - Add a whistle at start

[Advanced]

00:02:728 (4) - Add whistle at begin
00:05:636 (4) - Remove whistle
00:37:779 (2,3,4) - Change with returning slider
00:45:891 - 00:48:340 - Why this break? Add a spinner in it
01:16:350 (5) - Move to , and make it look like this:



01:26:299 (1) - Mute spinner (5%)

[Extreme]

I can't pass this yet, so I can't mod it. Sorry (''._.)

[Overall]

Well, the mapset seems fine but it still needs more mods on the Extreme. And don't forget the Generals! They are much and much more important than the other ones. With that said:

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Heya~
From my modding queue

[EXTREME]
00:01:809 (9) - Sampleset: Normal and add a finishi? Sounds pretty nice.
00:08:162 (7) - Whistle on the slider start?
00:09:156 (1) - Whistle?
00:09:463 (5) - ^
00:09:616 (1) - ^
00:10:075 (1) - ^
00:10:228 (2) - Add a finish on the slider start~
00:41:912 (7) - Whistle?
00:59:207 (8) - Whistle on the slider end~
01:04:565 (7) - Move the slider end point to x:368 y:200 for a better blanket.
01:06:554 (4) - Finish on the slider start?
01:23:391 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?

There are a few Unsnapped Inherited Points. You may want to snap them.


[ADVANCED]
00:14:667 (3) - Add a reverse for a better flow?
00:33:646 (1) - A finish here would be nice.
00:36:095 (1) - Whistle on the reverse?
00:58:748 (4) - Whistle on the start?
00:59:207 (5) - ^
00:59:820 (7) - Remove the whistle here if you added the ones i've mentioned above.
01:00:279 (9) - Whistle on the slider end~
01:16:350 (5) - Move the slider end point to x:336 y:48

Same here, a few unsnapped Inherited Points.

[BASIC]
00:03:034 (4) - Remove the whistle on the slider trail it doesn't really fit her imo.
00:05:483 (4) - ^
00:14:054 (1,2) - This plays a bit weird imo. How about doing something similar to this: 00:18:952 (1,2)?
00:16:503 (1,2) - ^
00:21:401 (1,2) - ^
00:35:024 (3) - Whistle on the slider end?
00:38:544 (1) - Remove the whistle on the slider trail.
00:51:861 (3) - ^
00:59:207 (3) - ^
01:04:105 (2) - ^
01:09:156 (4) - Extend this one to the white line?
01:14:054 (3) - ^
01:33:340 - Consider adding a note here.

Here are also a few unsnapped Inherited Points.


Well, that's all
Good luck!
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Could I make CTB GD map?
^^
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SUBSTAC9 wrote:

Could I make CTB GD map?
^^
Sorry :(
only standard
posted
Hi!

[General]
  1. Your kiais are unsnapped, consider re-snapping them to make your map more enjoyable for players!
  2. Disable letterboxes during breaks, you have no breaks at all, there's no point in keping it enabled!
  3. Don't forget to add Tatsuya Iyama to the tags, it's the real name of the composer, if I'm not wrong. Don't believe me? Check it here!


[BASIC]

  • The diff itself is too hard to be BASIC. It feels more like something complicated Nor,al or maybe even Normal+, but I think you're naming your diff this way to copydiff names from jubeat
  1. Rhythm of the song is changeable, it's a bit hard to catch it for beginners, try to use OD1 here, please!
  2. 00:02:116 (2) - this slider seems to be TOO short for the easiest diff. Ask some beginners to test it and see if thy can pass it or not. Remember, this is the easiest diff!
  3. 00:05:483 (4,1) - tail of the slider (2) is too close. Players may mistakenly hit it and get a miss. Try to make your flow intuitive and readable for beginners, please!
    Note: 00:42:218 (2,3) - same!
  4. 00:09:156 (1) - nazi - seems like you could make a bit better blanket here, try to improve it by moving (1) a bit down. example
  5. 00:16:044 - I don't get why do you ignore this beat, you could place a slider or a circle here to make your rhythm more consistent and playable.
    Note: 00:18:493 - same as above, 1/2 slider here will fit. WEll, try to have some fun with your rhythm, make it more consistent and interesting for beginners! Easy diffss can be really enjoyable, too! :3
    Note2: 00:20:942 - and the same again. I won't complain about similar mistakes anymore, but please, try to fix such patterns!
  6. 00:22:549 (3) - such things are unreadable for beginners, this slider is too short and the second reverse-arrow appears too late. Beginners don't notice it in tim and miss it. :< Try to make this slider more playable somehow. For example, remove the second repeat and put a circle on 00:23:391 - instead!
    Note: 00:38:544 (1) - same here. The BPM is very fast, so I wouldn't make the diff even harder by using such sliders.
  7. 00:44:820 - you should remove all unused green lines. Don't confuse mordeers and other mappers, think about people, who will mod it! Also, green lines may bug osu!.
  8. 00:58:442 (2) - kinda the same as 00:22:549 (3) but this slider is TOO short. I wasn't sure bout previous sliders, but this one will make poor beginners cry! C'mon, be more friendly with beginners!
  9. 01:27:983 (1) - this circle is a bit too unexpected after the spinner, if I were you, I'd give some more time to recover for beginners.

    Well, rhythm of the diff is hard and you've mapped it pretty good. You can work o your flow a bit more, though.


[ADVANCED]

  • Diff gap between Easy and Normal+/Hard is too big. It feels strange, so I'd recommend you to do something to make it better. For example, try AR4 on [BASIC] diff!
  1. 00:25:687 (6) - well, this jump feels too hard. try to reduce DS here a bit to make your mapset more balanced and playable.
    Note: 00:50:177 (6) - same. Please, try to fix all similar patterns to be consistent!
  2. 00:37:243 - it looks really, really weird to me. Please, tell me, what's the point of these lines? Try to avoid useless green lines, they make no sense and make modders/mappers confused. Don't spam people with extra things if you don't even use them!
  3. 00:40:993 (1,2) - I've already mentioned such sliders on [BASIC] diff, and the same happens here. They are annoying for players due to their bad playability. Try to avoid them if it's possible. However, if they're here on purpose, to make map harder, feel free to keep them!
    Note: 01:05:483 (1) - same here. Be consistent, fix ALL similar issues, please!
  4. 01:07:932 (1) - appears too soon after the spinner, it's just too fast. Players won't be able to read it properly, try to have some more space after spinners!
  5. 01:37:320 (1,2) - clear example of overjumping. This jump doesn't fits good and it hurts your flow, try to avoid it to make your diff more enjoyable!

    That's a nice diff, sudden crazy jumps hurt your flow, but it's the ~olny~ thing that really SHOULD be fixed here, imo.


[EXTREME]
  1. 00:06:095 (11) - I've expected here something less boring. For example, something like 00:01:197 (1,2,3) - it keeps players in action. Long sliders are too boring for such diffs!
  2. 00:09:539 - don't ignore such beats, please! It's important to follow music and to make your map consistent. Just place a circle here and fix your spacing, it'll fit better here.
  3. 00:37:779 (1) - the DS here feels strange. it'd conuse me as a player, so I recommend you to keep it a little bit more consistent.
  4. 00:45:891 (1) - good usage of slowdown here, like it!
  5. 01:18:340 (1) - the NC here feels kinda extra. it's out of your pattern and it doesn't really fits with music, I'd remove it to keep consistency, but it's up to you!

    Phew, seems to be a cute diff. Good job!


You did a good job, there're a few thing to improve, but there're also a lot of good ideas and nice patterns!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!
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[General]

01:07:932 - : 이 부분 부터 소리를 조금만 줄여주세요.

01:37:320 - : ^

[Basic]

00:30:738 (3,5) - 슬라이더 모양이 이상합니다. 보완해주세요.


00:54:310 (3) - 이렇게 blanket 시켜주는게 좋을 것 같습니다.


01:16:656 (3) - Finish는 어색합니다. 뺴주세요.

01:45:968 (1) - 01:45:891 (1) - 로 옮겨주시고 마지막을 흰색 선에 맞게 마무리

[Advanced]

00:18:493 (7) - 00:18:952 (1) - 하고 너무 가깝습니다. 00:18:952 (1) - 를 좀 더 위로 올려주세요.

00:24:769 - 00:25:075 - : 갑자기 비어있으니 많이 어색합니다 노트 추가해주세요. 배치는 디스턴스에 맞게

00:29:667 - 00:30:279 - : ^

00:32:575 (5) - : 소리가 좀 어색합니다. 이렇게 해보세요.


00:44:054 (2) - 실수로 점 넣으신거 같은데, 00:43:442 (1) - 돌려서 다시 해주세요.


[Advanced]

00:02:116 (5,1,2,3,4) - : 박자는 같지만 치는 박자가 좀 다릅니다. 이렇게 해주세요.


00:07:779 (5) - 너무 가까워요. 좀 더 벌려주세요.

00:08:162 (7) - 슬라이더 대신 서클로 해주시는게 좋아요.

00:33:646 (1,2,3,4) - 코드 입력 하실 줄 아시죠?
436,220,33646,6,2,P|460:144|440:68,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,8,34105,2,2,P|268:84|288:160,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,292,34565,2,2,L|132:284,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,35024,2,2,L|288:160,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

굳!
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W h i t e wrote:

[General]

01:07:932 - : 이 부분 부터 소리를 조금만 줄여주세요.

01:37:320 - : ^

[Basic]

00:30:738 (3,5) - 슬라이더 모양이 이상합니다. 보완해주세요.


00:54:310 (3) - 이렇게 blanket 시켜주는게 좋을 것 같습니다.


01:16:656 (3) - Finish는 어색합니다. 뺴주세요.

01:45:968 (1) - 01:45:891 (1) - 로 옮겨주시고 마지막을 흰색 선에 맞게 마무리

[Advanced]

00:18:493 (7) - 00:18:952 (1) - 하고 너무 가깝습니다. 00:18:952 (1) - 를 좀 더 위로 올려주세요.

00:24:769 - 00:25:075 - : 갑자기 비어있으니 많이 어색합니다 노트 추가해주세요. 배치는 디스턴스에 맞게

00:29:667 - 00:30:279 - : ^

00:32:575 (5) - : 소리가 좀 어색합니다. 이렇게 해보세요.


00:44:054 (2) - 실수로 점 넣으신거 같은데, 00:43:442 (1) - 돌려서 다시 해주세요.


[Advanced]

00:02:116 (5,1,2,3,4) - : 박자는 같지만 치는 박자가 좀 다릅니다. 이렇게 해주세요.


00:07:779 (5) - 너무 가까워요. 좀 더 벌려주세요.

00:08:162 (7) - 슬라이더 대신 서클로 해주시는게 좋아요.

00:33:646 (1,2,3,4) - 코드 입력 하실 줄 아시죠?
436,220,33646,6,2,P|460:144|440:68,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,8,34105,2,2,P|268:84|288:160,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,292,34565,2,2,L|132:284,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,35024,2,2,L|288:160,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

굳!
올ㅇㅋ
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Hi~ Lena

2 쿠도스라 서로모딩은 면제됩니다. ( 기존 한국분이셔서 서로모딩은 하지 않습니다. )

모든난이도 오프셋 1810 > 1798로 변경. 초록색 선들 모두 - 12

[ BASIC ]

HP OD + 1

01:09:144 (3) -


01:12:512 (3) - 서클 추가 해 주세요.

01:14:042 (3) - 여기 만약 위에 01:09:144 (3) - 이걸 변경하셧다면 똑같은 박자로 해주세요.

01:15:267 (1) - 여기는 01:10:369 (1) - 이것과 같게 해주세요 .. 그러면 대충 박자가 더 좋아지셧을꺼라고 봅니다.

01:18:940 (2) -


01:20:165 (3) -


01:23:838 (2) - 여기서부터
이렇게 박자추가해주시면 될듯싶네요.

[ ADVANCED ]

HP OD + 1

01:38:226 (3,4) - 간격 1.35로 변경해주세요 .. 1.23으로 되어있네요..

[ EXTREME ]

OD - 1 생각도 조금 해보셔야 될듯 . 는 별로 상관없을수도있구요.. 자세한건 뱃이 잡아주겠죠!

문제 없음.

스타~ 굿 럭 !!
posted
From my queue~

[General]
  1. Tags suggetion:
    DDR
    snowy core

[BASIC]
  1. I prefer CS -1 because it's th easiest diff
  2. you should conform DS as much as possible
  3. 00:53:532 (2) - end at 00:53:838
  4. 01:10:369 (1,2,3) - how about this pattern?

[ADVANCED]
  1. 00:04:706 (2) - end at 00:04:859
  2. 00:50:165 (6) - Ctrl+G
  3. 00:50:471 (7) - Ctrl+G if you accept above
  4. 00:54:144 (4,6) - how about stack ?
  5. 01:03:787 (3,4) - this is more suitable to rhythm
  6. 01:16:338 (5) - blanket correctly
    444,99,76338,2,4,P|405:56|347:45,3,120,0|4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[EXTREME]
  1. several objects aren't snapped! recheck AI-mod
  2. 00:01:951 (4) - move to 00:02:027
  3. 00:04:859 (1) - end at 00:05:088
  4. 00:05:624 (3) - move to 00:05:701
  5. 00:17:563 (6,7) - how about blanket?
  6. 00:54:298 (6) - I prefer Ctrl+G
  7. 01:04:553 (7) - I prefer to change into a note : 01:04:706


~Good Luck~
posted
1:874 strange...
posted
곡이 신선하고 깔끔하네요

[ADVANCED]
01:06:083 (2) - 혹시 여기 다음에 노트 1,2개 추가하실 수 있으면....
(Basic에서는 노트가 없고 Extreme에서는 1/4박 기준으로 풀노트네요)
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[EXT]
00:01:191 (1,2) - Change to one and use volume change to show it
00:04:558 (4,5) - Change to slider?
00:06:089 (6,7) - same as 00:01:191 (1,2) -
00:07:160 (3) - not same as 00:06:701 (1) -
00:15:579 (6,7,8,9,10) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350650
>00:16:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350651
00:22:466 (5) - NC
00:21:395 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350654
Rhythme is well but flows bad
00:30:119 (7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350656
00:49:405 (5,6,7,8,9) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350661
>00:50:170 (6) - NC
00:53:844 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350668
>00:55:681 (1,3) - swap
00:56:752 (6) - NC
01:04:099 (5,6) - swap
01:09:609 (6) - move to 376,200
01:11:752 (5) - blanket
01:14:507 (7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350671
01:15:885 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350674
01:18:181 (3,4) - Exchange
01:23:691 (7,8,9) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350680
01:29:201 (3) - Ctrl+G
If you get some thought of flow in my mod,Try to watch you map again:3
Needs more work
[ADV]
00:05:017 (3) - not fit
00:09:609 (2) - reverse
00:17:568 (5) - blanket
00:58:742 (4) - ^
01:13:436 (3,4) - slider
01:29:048 (4) - Ctrl+G,Move down
01:35:936 (4) - not fit
Needs more work
[BSC]
CS-1 OD-2
00:09:150 (4) - blanket
00:29:813 (2) - ^
no problem IMO:3
posted
Okay, let's try to mod this.

o3o - Suggestions
o3o - Highly suggestions

[ADVANCED]
00:07:925 (4) - There's an important rhythm here o3o Maybe this?
00:09:150 (1, 2) - Sounds better this. ^^
00:10:527 - I miss one note here...
00:21:089 (8) - Ctrl+G for a better flow and follow (1).
00:23:385 (7, 1) - Put a simple (7) note and start a slider (1) at 00:23:844, I don't know if you understand. Like this:
01:25:068 (7) - Add NC~

I really liked this diff. (:

[EXTREME]
00:57:823 (1) - Remove NC and add it to 00:58:130

Nothing much to say, it's an awesome map. <3
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Hi ! as your M4M request.
제 모딩이 마음에 들지 않으신다면, 모딩을 안해주셔도 무방합니다 :3
저의 모딩은 대부분 '제안' 입니다. 꼭 수정하실 필요는 없습니다.
하지만 Unrankable 을 지적했다면 꼭! 수정해주세요 :3

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[General]

큰 문제는 없어 보입니다.

[BASIC]
역시 마찬가지로 Kiai Time과 다른 모든 Inherited Points가 Snap이 되어 있지 않습니다. 꼭 수정해주세요.

베이직이라면 이지나 노말을 목적으로 만드셨다고 생각됩니다. 이지나 노말에서는 디스턴스 변화는 없는게 좋습니다. 이 맵에서는 대략 0.7~1.2가 사용되고 있는데 하나로 통일 시켜주시면 좋겠습니다. (1.2가 제일 나을 것 같네요.)

00:11:599 (1) - 이 스핀과 00:14:048 (1) - 이 노트가 너무 겹쳐보입니다. 크게 문제는 없지만 약간의 혼동이 올 수 있다고 생각합니다. 스핀을 00:12:823 - 이 정도까지 줄이시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

[ADVANCED]
역시 마찬가지로 Kiai Time과 다른 모든 Inherited Points가 Snap이 되어 있지 않습니다. 꼭 수정해주세요.

AR , OD + 1 ?

00:21:089 (8) - Ctrl + G ? 이러면 다음 노트와 약간 거리가 생기긴 합니다만, 그래도 개인적으로는 Ctrl + G 하는게 더 나은 것 같습니다.

00:37:237 - 00:37:390 - 안 쓰시는 경우라면 지워주시는 것도 좋겠네요.

전체적으로 문제는 없어보입니다만... 익스트림에 비해서 너무 쉽다고 느껴집니다.

[EXTREME]
전체적으로 매우 깔끔하고 좋군요.
다만 Kiai Time 이 Snap이 되어 있지 않습니다. 약간씩 어긋나 있는 선을 01:07:925 - 01:27:517 - 이 부분으로 정확하게 맞춰주세요.
정확히는 모든 Inherited Points 가 어긋나있는 것 같네요. 수정해주시기 바랍니다 :3
제가 잡을건 별로 보이지 않네요. 다만 한가지 추천을 드리고 싶은 것은 히트 사운드 쪽입니다.
00:01:803 (3) - 이런 노트처럼 강조되어 있는 사운드의 경우에는 왼쪽의 Sampleset 을 이용하여 Normal 사운드를 주면 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:03:640 (1,2) - 이런 노트들의 경우에도, Sampleset 은 Normal, Additions 은 Soft로 하여 좀 더 느낌을 살릴 수 있을 것 같네요.
즉 제가 하고 싶은 말은 강조되어 있는 음에서의 히트사운드를 좀 살리시면 더 좋은 맵이 되실 것 같다는 것입니다. 이 사항에 대해서는 더이상 적진 않겠습니다.

00:15:885 (7,9) - Add NC? 디스턴스도 전 노트와 좀 떨어져 있는 편이고, 음악의 느낌이 전부분과는 약간 다른 느낌이 드니 뉴콤을 넣어주시는 것도 나쁘지는 않을 것 같습니다.

00:20:783 (6,8) - Add NC? 6번에는 딱히 넣지 않더라도, 8번은 디스턴스가 많이 멀어지고, 역시 위에서 말한 것과 같이 약간 다르다는 느낌이 들므로 뉴콤을 추가하셔도 무방하실 것 같습니다.

00:50:476 (3) - Add NC? 이어지는 것 보다는 뉴콤이 들어가는편이 개인적으로는 더 좋은 것 같네요.

01:23:385 (5,6) - Ctrl + G ? 01:22:772 (1,2,3,4) - 이 노트들과 전혀 다른 느낌이 아닌데 갑자기 동선이 바뀌는건 좀 이상 한 것 같다고 느껴집니다.



제 모딩은 이걸로 끝입니다. 도움이 되셨다면 좋겠네요 :]
Good Luck!
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