이 맵은 사용자의 요청으로 삭제되었습니다.

Analyzer sucks~

BPM: 126.00
Offset: 16,714

I'll use my kudosu stars when this map is completed~

[Not Yet]
28:142(4)-> Extend 1/4 beat
37:662(1)-> This slider will be SHIT after you resnapped. Move this slider 1/4 beat backward and this slider's bug(?) will be fixed.
40:519(4)-> 1/4 beat forward

*Ahem*
Revived by mapper's request.

minyeob wrote:

*Ahem*
Revived by mapper's request.

Thx, I'll work hard for the rank.

나중에 하드 완성되면 모딩 ㄱ

[All]
대체적으로 사진이 화질이 않좋네요. 좀더 좋은걸로 구해봅시당

[Normal]
노말은 다 트집^^
00:47:214 - 오디오 변경할떄 노트 위에 바로 두면 안됩니다. 노트 한칸 전에 두세요. 다른분들 오디오 한거 보면 노트 위에 오디오 설정한거 없습니다. 오디오 노트 위에 설정하면 전에 있던거랑 오디오 섞인 애매한 소리가 나기때문
01:17:691 - 위에 꺼랑 마창가지
01:21:500(1,2,3) - ^
01:24:357 - 노말에서 5번노트 이렇게 배치해도 되나요? 4번노트의 모양을 좀더 안쪽으로 땡겨도 되고 좀 바꿔주시는게 좋을꺼 같음
01:28:167(5) - ^
01:37:691 - 이부분도 kiai있었으면 좋겠네요
01:38:643(2) - 슬라이더 모양이 조금 마음에 안드네요
01:43:405 - 여기에 노트를 하나 두고 6,7번을 없애고 싶네요
01:45:310(2) - 이걸 모양을 조금 바꿔서 3번노트의 공간을 마련해두시는게 좋을꺼 같아요
01:49:595(3) - 위치좀 좀더 남서쪽으로 이동했으면 좋겠네요
01:52:691(2) - 스페이싱
01:58:643(2) - 모양을 좀더 안쪽으로 집어넣었으면 좋겠음
02:00:548 - 왜 뉴콤보?? 이거 해체 하고 다음노트에 하시는걸 추천
02:02:214 - 이것도 왜 뉴콤보?
02:03:405 - 여기에 뉴콤보 했으면 좋겠음 그리고 이런 슬라이더는 노말에서는 않쓰는게 좋을꺼 같은데
02:22:214 - 여기도 왼쪽으로 끌어다 두는게? 뒤에있는것도 다 고칠꺼라 생각하고 이제 언급않함
02:25:310 - 내가 하드하던 시절에 이런노트 보고 급당황 했습니다. 이런거 되도록이면 노말에서 자제
02:26:262 - 뉴콤보 했으면 좋겠음 0.5배속 구간인데 많이 헷갈릴듯 다음노트 연타로 알아볼 수 있는 상황까지
02:32:929(1,2) - 이것도 마창가지로 위아래 구분 안가는 노말플레이어들
02:33:881 - 여기도 뉴콤보 했으면 좋겠네요 아까전과 마창가지로
02:49:595 - 뉴콤보 헤체하고 다음노트에 뉴콤보
02:54:595(1) - 이 노트 끝지점을 02:57:214 까지 했으면 좋겠음 그리고 피니쉬 넣는거 추천
02:57:691 - 피니쉬 추천
02:58:643(1,2) - 이노트도 그만 지적할께요
02:59:595(4,5,6,7) - ^
03:14:833(2,3) - 2번을 직선으로 왼쪽으로 집어넣고 3번을 조금 이동해서 직선으로 하시는게 좋을꺼 같음
03:21:500 - 좀더 안쪽으로 집어넣었으면 좋겠음
03:23:167 - 여기서 잠깐 키아이 풀리는거 않좋습니다. 0.5배속에서 잠깐 해체 그런건 되는데 갑자기 왜 여기서? 스핀에서 터뜨리려고? 어짜파 스핀은 스토리보드도 가리고 다 가려서 소용없어요.
03:23:405 - 03:25:310에서 끝내시는게??

[Hard]
WIP now

------
Star

여 일단 별 1개 반이고
플레이타임 2분 5초 ^^ ;

Download: Tmax - Almost Paradise (sonnyc) [hutka's Easy].osu

스타

이 맵을 다운받아봤는데 넘버가 7000대......혹시 묘지에서 부활하신겨...;;

[Hutka's Easy]
Fine.

[Hard]

01:24:357 (4) All clap?
02:45:072 (4,1) Nazi...but spacing?
03:20:548 (5) Remove clap?

이 외에도 마지막 부분에 Clap이 좀 많아서 듣기가 조금 어색한 면도 있는 것 같네요..

[Insane]

00:16:738 (4) New combo.
02:36:738 (2,3,4,5,6,7) Very Tricky~ lol. I think that redisigning is better.
02:55:548 (1) 인세인이라지만 이건 좀....

Starred..

Tanmak wrote:

이 맵을 다운받아봤는데 넘버가 7000대......혹시 묘지에서 부활하신겨...;;

그건 중요하지 않습니다! ㅋㅋ
Thx for modding

Ayeonghasaseyo!

[General]
1) Source?

[Hard]
00:17:453 (x) - Add note?
01:31:738 (x) - ^

[Insane]
01:34:595 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have bonus score at least 2000)
03:22:453 (6) - Move 1 grid left

Nice map!
STAR

Leorda wrote:

Ayeonghasaseyo! -> Anyeonghaseyo

[General]
1) Source? -> OK, I'll put in..

[Hard]
00:17:453 (x) - Add note? -> Ok..
01:31:738 (x) - ^ -> Fix
[/color]
[Insane]
01:34:595 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have bonus score at least 2000) -> Fixed, but I didn't know that the 2000 BP includes also to insane..
03:22:453 (6) - Move 1 grid left -> Well.. Fixed

Nice map!
STAR

+ Did you check out Hutka's Easy?

Hmm, can't read prtevious post
I don't know Korean ;_;
oh,花样男子o.o

well, mod start~

[General]

1. Delete osb.file

[hutka's Easy]

1. raise both OA and HPDR 3-5 tick, it's really tooooooooo low
2. 01:36:500 - spinner stars here

[Hard]

1. 00:23:167 (2,3) - no clap here
2. 01:34:595 (1) - end at 01:37:214
3. 02:26:262 timing section - put it 1/4 early in case of early hit result in different slider speed
4. 02:33:881 timing section - ^
5. 02:57:214 - spinner ends here
6. 03:02:453 (4) - turn of grid snap and put it overlapped with the end of (3)
7. 03:23:286 timng section - delete it, I don't think here need a fountain

[Insane]

1. 01:01:500 (7) - unexcepted 1/2 x BPM
2. 01:34:595 - 1 spinner is better than 2, start 01:34:595 and end 01:37:214 wirh finish
3. 02:26:262 timing section - put it 1/4 early in case of early hit result in different slider speed
4. 02:33:881 - ^
5. 02:42:929 (5) - werid spacing
6. 03:23:286 timng section - delete it, I don't think here need a fountain

That's all, good map
have a star

fixed

Download: Tmax - Almost Paradise (sonnyc) [hutka's Easy].osu

Breeze wrote:

Hmm, can't read prtevious post
I don't know Korean ;_;
oh,花样男子o.o Flower Shaped Guy??

well, mod start~

[General]

1. Delete osb.file

Yes, but what's the use of OSB file?

[hutka's Easy]

1. raise both OA and HPDR 3-5 tick, it's really tooooooooo low He raised some
2. 01:36:500 - spinner stars here

Actually, he doesn't want to

[Hard]

1. 00:23:167 (2,3) - no clap here
2. 01:34:595 (1) - end at 01:37:214
3. 02:26:262 timing section - put it 1/4 early in case of early hit result in different slider speed
4. 02:33:881 timing section - ^
5. 02:57:214 - spinner ends here
6. 03:02:453 (4) - turn of grid snap and put it overlapped with the end of (3)
7. 03:23:286 timng section - delete it, I don't think here need a fountain

Fixed all~

[Insane]

1. 01:01:500 (7) - unexcepted 1/2 x BPM
2. 01:34:595 - 1 spinner is better than 2, start 01:34:595 and end 01:37:214 wirh finish
3. 02:26:262 timing section - put it 1/4 early in case of early hit result in different slider speed
4. 02:33:881 - ^
5. 02:42:929 (5) - werid spacing
6. 03:23:286 timng section - delete it, I don't think here need a fountain

Fixed all~

That's all, good map
have a star

Thanks for the star, and modding~~

Add "hutka" into the tags.
Any custom colours?
There's an unused background picture in the folder called "F4.jpg". Please delete it.


Star.

fartownik wrote:

Add "hutka" into the tags.
Any custom colours?
There's an unused background picture in the folder called "F4.jpg". Please delete it.

[hutka's Easy]
It would be nice if you change the Circle Size to Large.

[Hard]
Raise HP Drain by 1-2 ticks. It's like Normal parameters.
00:20:548 (7,1) - Swap new combo.
00:54:357 (5) - Finish hitsound.
00:58:167 (3) - Distance it directly.
[01:38:643] - Add a kiai flash?
01:40:072 (4) - Add a repeat to this slider?
02:33:405 (2) - Hidden slider. No idea it's a slider or 2 notes. Reposition please.
02:58:643 (2) - New combo.
03:23:405 (1) - End the spinner here: 03:25:310.

[Insane]
Raise HP Drain by 2-3 ticks!
Raise Overall Difficulty by 1-2 ticks!
00:48:524 (5,6) - Move 1/4 back.
00:56:143 (5,6) - ^
[01:38:643] - Add a kiai flash?
[02:37:453] - I expected a note here.
02:41:976 (3) - Delete this note, move next slider 1/4 back and expand it by 1/4.
02:54:595 (1,1) - This section looks ugly. Try to make it like this: First spinner end: 02:55:786; second spinner start: 02:56:738; second spinner end: 02:58:167; add a note here 02:56:262.
03:24:476 (1) - End the spinner here: 03:25:310.

Star.

Well, hutka doesn't want to change the circle size~
Thanks for your help anyways.

Wow. good map. I know this song.

anyway, I give a star

I think many modding makes this map so good.

but most of all, sonnyc is good at mapping, maybe

hutka's Easy

Since this isn't a difficulty you made, I don't think you'll be able to change it. But, my opinions:

00:19:351 (4, 1) - It's fine, I just personally don't like it
01:36:738 (1) - Try shortening it to 01:38:167. Newbies aren't really good at spin recovery
01:39:119 (1 ~ 1) - Feels a bit empty. Maybe can add something here

Hard
00:45:310 ~ 00:47:214 - Seems a bit like a pointless break

Overall, I find it a bit easy for Hard. And slider velocity feels a bit slow for a hard.

Insane
Looking fine
------------------------
If Hard and Insane are gonna be your hardest difficulties, name Hard "Almost Paradise" and Insane "Paradise" or something. I think that'll work well

star ~ *

~hutka's Easy~
Fine.

~Hard~
00:23:881 (4) - new combo
00:28:167 (5) - ^
00:33:881 (5) - ^
01:17:691 (1) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:20:548 (3,4,5) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:50:548 (5) - new combo
01:56:262 (4) - ^
02:02:214 (1) - remove new combo
02:03:405 (3) - new combo
02:24:119 (6) - ^
02:25:310 (1) - remove new combo
02:31:738 (6) - new combo
02:32:929 (1) - remove new combo
02:40:548 (3) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:47:214 (1) - remove new combo
02:47:691 (2) - new combo
03:02:929 (6) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
03:03:405 (8,9,10) - ^
03:15:786 (4) - new combo

~Insane~
00:37:453 (5) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
01:01:262 (6) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:32:214 (1) - remove new combo


+Star

As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

Star.

Fixed

Download: Tmax - Almost Paradise (sonnyc) [hutka's Easy].osu

hutka's Easy
00:30:548 (2) - move it a square up

Hard
00:33:881 (5) - new combo
00:33:881 (5,6,7,8) - fix spacing
01:40:786 (5,6,1) - ^
02:03:405 (3) - new combo

Insane
Sounds fine.

I seldon found spacing errors here, so I think you must check something little about new combos; the rest was ok.
Here's your star!

Fixed ~

Download: Tmax - Almost Paradise (sonnyc) [hutka's Easy].osu

There’s a Korean version of Boys Over Flowers?

General:

~ Please resize BG image to 800x600 or 1024x768
~ Delete .osb file and do a full submission.
~ “F4”.jpeg is not used, delete and full submit.
~ Set BG color to black.

hutka’s Easy:

00:38:405 (2,3) – Looks better stacked?
00:40:310 (2,3) - ^
00:59:833 (3) – Directly to the left of 00:59:357 (2) – is easier.
01:10:072 (1,2) Confusing for an easy please respace.
01:15:786 (1) – Remove new combo?
01:38:643 (x) – Note? kiai looks better starting on a note. You could start kiai earlier or later so it coincides with a beat.

Hard:

00:16:738 (3) – Kiai explosion isn’t really necessary since the song has just started XD
00:20:548 (1) – Remove new combo
00:23:167 (1) – New combo here
00:23:881 (1) – Remove new combo
00:23:881 (1) – move to 00:23:762 (blue tick)
00:58:643 (1) – Make this slider a little neater, maybe a curve?
01:38:643 – Two inheriting sections at the same time is not a good idea delete one
01:44:357 (x) – Note?
01:44:833 (x) - ^
01:47:214 (5) – One square down.
02:00:548 (1) – Remove new combo?
02:01:024 (2) – Add new combo here if you took ^ suggestion.
02:05:429 (1) – Start at 02:05:548 (red tick) end at same point.
02:43:405 (x) – Note?
02:43:881 (x) - ^
03:07:214 (5,6,7,8) – Too many claps.

My suggested added notes are to try and make the beat flow a little better, feel free to ignore them if you don’t like them.

Insane:

00:31:976 (1) – Remove new combo.
00:43:524 (1) – Start at 00:43:643 (red tick), end in same place.
01:38:643 - Again two inheriting sections in the same place delete one.
01:40:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – This was really confusing, maybe stack 1,2,3 and stack 4,5,6?
01:56:262 (3) – Works better placed directly above 2.
02:05:429 (1) – Start at 02:05:548 (red tick), end in same place.
02:22:810 (4) – Delete this note? It sounds a little odd.
02:51:024 (1) – Move down one square.
02:51:500 (2,3,4,5) - Move right one square and down one square.
03:17:810 Delete this inherited section.
03:18:167 ^
03:24:476 (1) – Try not to start spinners on blue ticks XD

Overall:

Nice song and the maps are fun

~ Star

Shulin pretty much covered everything I wanted to say, and then a whole bunch more, so here's an alternate background image, I guess. The current one is pretty low-res and doesn't look too good.

http://learners.in.th/file/nonloveao/22222222.jpg

Kytoxid wrote:

Shulin pretty much covered everything I wanted to say, and then a whole bunch more, so here's an alternate background image, I guess. The current one is pretty low-res and doesn't look too good.

http://learners.in.th/file/nonloveao/22222222.jpg

I know that the BG looks.. bad,
but the image you gave me, the title is some what different.
꽃보다 "Teen Ring"<-This isn't the one.. lol
Still, I'll try it

Any way, thx shulin

sonnyc wrote:

Kytoxid wrote:

Shulin pretty much covered everything I wanted to say, and then a whole bunch more, so here's an alternate background image, I guess. The current one is pretty low-res and doesn't look too good.

http://learners.in.th/file/nonloveao/22222222.jpg

I know that the BG looks.. bad,
but the image you gave me, the title is some what different.
꽃보다 "Teen Ring"<-This isn't the one.. lol
Still, I'll try it

Any way, thx shulin

Man, I'm terrible. Was half-asleep and sick, lol. Sorry. Still, lots of good pictures around everywhere.

Fixed

Download: Tmax - Almost Paradise (sonnyc) [hutka's Easy].osu

cut the mp3, you have over 1min at the end unused


[hutka's Easy]

....nice map but wierd problem, i dont kno how you did it, but all your notes are a tiny tiny bit out of spacing, i guess it dont need fixing but thought i would let you kno, how ever it got like that though i dont kno :/

[Hard]
00:41:976 (3) - i kno its nazi, but it really bugs me, line up (3) with (2) and (4), it looks rather ugly the way it is
01:50:072 (4) - spacing is wrong, look at (1,2) the spacing there is not the same as (3,4) make (3,4) the same as (1,2)
01:59:119 (3) - spacing is wrong on this note to (2) also this would look much better with the same curve as (2) as it is , its very very ugly
02:46:262 (3) - nazi, line up with (2)

[Insane]
(suggestion) 00:23:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern looks ugly to me, make it prettier
00:31:976 (7) - would look much better lined up with (5)
01:50:548 (2) - bit too far off screen to me

________________________-
good enough for a star, enjoy

Well, in my opinion, it's better to have a larger circle size, because then the notes can be a little farther away from each other.

[General]
That background is creepy. She doesn't seem to have feet.

[hutka's Easy]
00:32:453 (2) - Make it point towards the next note? Like this.

[Hard]
02:25:786 (5) - It's partially overlapped by (2), making it awkward to play
02:33:405 (5) - same as ^
02:27:214 (2,3) - Technically correct according to distance snap, but maybe make the distance between these notes the same as earlier?
02:33:881 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same as ^
03:01:500 (2,3) - I don't understand why sliders are used from here until the rest of the song.

[Insane]
I don't understand why whistles are placed where they are. I think there are too many Normal-set whistles, because they hurt my ears.
02:56:262 (1) - The center of the grid isn't where the center of the spinner is anymore. Move it down?

Fixed

Download: Tmax - Almost Paradise (sonnyc) [hutka's Easy].osu

Dusty wrote:

[General]
That background is creepy. She doesn't seem to have feet.

Lol, it does look weird.

Here are some alternate BG's you might want to consider:

A bit different:
Link

Similar to the one you have now (with feet):
Link

If you decide to use one of them make sure to delete the old one and do a full submit

Dusty wrote:

03:01:500 (2,3) - I don't understand why sliders are used from here until the rest of the song.

To increase difficulty?

Thx for everyone, and Thankyou shulin for the BG

I didn't found anything xD

[Insane]

Well, the map is really nice, but I don't like the use of whistles sometimes >_<


Star*

Use custom combo colors?

[hutka's]
good~

[Hard]
00:41:976 (3,5) - symetry
01:00:548 (2,3,4) - center this (put (3) in the center and apply symetry)
03:14:833 (2,3) - paralelism

[Insane]
00:51:262 (1,3) - Symetry


The map is nice insane is nicely done, give the song a more attractive rhythm

Maybe turn up hitsound volume a bit.

[Hard]
01:25:786 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe consider putting this at the center (2 grids to the right)

That's it for now

good song~!

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
I think it's ok <3

[hutka's easy]
Think is ok :3

[Hard]
00:41:024 (1) Delete this one.
03:12:929 (4) Move this 2/4 before.
Please decide to follow the voice or the rythm, not all.

[Insane]
Look at what AImod has to say [Ctrl + Shift + A].
For the rest is ok!

And that's all! Sorry if i posted this late but I was really really busy with other things -.- Starred x3

모딩이라기보단 조언하나 해드릴께요. 지금 맵을 보시면 히트사운드가 좀 도배됬다는 생각이 드네요. 주로 히트사운드들은 Red Tick에 들어가서 좋게 들리는 경우는 많지가 않아요. 그러니 좀 줄여보세요.
스페이싱 문제는 안보이네요.
훗카님한테 드릴 조언은 딱히 없네요.

아 그리고 노트색들 바꿔보시는게 어때요? (오른쪽 상단에 있는 꽃들의 색이라도?)

Heya!

Easy
Can't find anything wrong

Hard
00:19:357 - Insert hit circle, make it a new combo
00:19:595 - Remove new combo

Insane
Well mapped, couldnt find anything wrong.

Nice maps, although I didn't care for the song itself, star'd

Thx, everyone
Finally(?) added custom colors

*Delete this post*

[hutka's Easy]

Overall: Increase the Circle size please!

01:36:738 (1) Move it 2/4 back and then make this longer of 2/4
02:00:548 (2) In the middle between (1) and (3), then stack 02:02:453 (4) with the same (2)
01:34:595 (3) Ugly postion, and the slider seems a bit random. Try something like this?



Overall Rating 8,5/10

[Hard]

Overall:No major problems found. Hitsounds seems a little random, but they are good.

00:47:214 (1) Whistle at the start
01:31:976 (1) Remove new combo
01:32:691 (6) New combo
01:32:929 (1) Remove new combo
03:22:453 (3,4,5,6) Make a perfect quadrangle

Overall rating 8/10

[Insane]

Overall: I didn't find nothing of wrong. Good gob!

01:17:214 (x) Place a hitcircle here

Overall Rating 8,5/10

Fixed

Download: Tmax - Almost Paradise (sonnyc) [hutka's Easy].osu

[Mp3]
Cut it! A big chunk is unused

[hutka]
No visible problems....Not that exiting but hey, it's just a easy.

[Hard]
I dislike jumps between Easy and Hard.......
It was good otherwise

[Insane]
Maybe lower the HP drain by one tick?
03:23:405 (1,1) - I would prefer this as one spinner...

*star*

Can anyone cut the MP3 please?
I don't know where to.

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Insane
00:47:691 (3) - make this 1/2 length and remove (4) I think fits better this way
00:54:119 - add note
01:25:310 (5,6,7) - this triple doesnt fit, try this: add note at: 01:25:191 and remove 01:25:429 (6)
01:27:214 (2,3,4) - same here
02:28:762 (4) - remove and add one here 02:29:000
02:59:000 - add note and remove 02:59:238 (4) -

Hard
I suggest to make circle bigger.. so it wont be the same as insane
00:31:500 (3) - put the start point at 00:31:262 removing (2), and the end point just where it is.
02:26:262 (1,2,3) - you could use the regular spacing here, same for the others like this (just a suggestion)

hutka's Easy
i find it too hard for an easy, i suggest to rename it to normal.

Good luck guys!
star!

Thanks, fixing process.
Easy is ..hard?

Fixed

Download: Tmax - Almost Paradise (sonnyc) [hutka's Easy].osu