Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, Oyatsu

Mod request from PM in-game

Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Ehh? This song from eroge game opening You must change "(TV Size)" into "(Short Ver.)"
2. You have used the title unicode is "いろんな形". Please change it into "いろんなカタチ", which you can observe in this video : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jbo36K2ebU
3. Offset is fine, but please change into 10643, since the rhythm start here, or if possible, you should change offset is 2438 will be the best for me.
4. Combo colour in Insane diff is different. Please change 4th combo by this code.
   

   Combo4 : 0,255,255

5. If possible, you should add "opening" in tags because this song from opening of eroge game, and you can add "Sphere", which that is production of this game, and "eroge", too.
6. [color=#0000FF]In 00:10:643 ~ 00:18:848, Volume of this part is lower than other part, which it don't fit to use volume 35%. So please increase volume, which I suggest that increase it about 45% all diffs.[/color]

Standard diffs

Easy

1. HP, AR, and OD -1. It will be easier to playing in easy diff.
2. 00:14:746 - I don't like to make it was empty. So I suggest that remove 00:15:259 (1), but add a slider by start at 00:14:746 until 00:15:259 instead. It will be better to read. Then you can make it's more beautiful than this, you can copy this code, but since these notes is very long to copy these note in the picture. I'm sorry to don't put it.
   

   288,112,14746,6,0,P|240:96|192:104,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   132,184,15771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   192,264,16284,2,0,P|240:268|288:252,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   92,272,17823,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   60,176,18335,2,0,P|44:112|68:64,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:22:438 (5,1,2) - I felt awkward when play these note. If possible, please move 00:23:976 (1,2) by this code, which you can see example picture here.
   
   SPOILER

   

   216,152,23976,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   304,104,24489,2,0,P|360:96|400:112,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:27:053 (4,1) - Spacing between these are too close, which you have use DS about 0.9x please increase this spacing into 1.0x by move 00:36:028 (3) to up 4 grids, and move (4) to x:344 y:292.
5. 00:34:746 (4) - Please add clap on slider begin and end to follow the rhythm.
6. 00:59:361 (5,1) - This, too, but these are too far. So please reduce spacing, since on easy diff, you shouldn't increase or reduce jumping.
7. 01:03:464 (4) - I prefer to add whistle on slider end.
8. 01:04:233 (5) - This, too. I want to add whistle on slider begin.
9. 01:17:310 (5,1,2) - It isn't beautiful. If you want to more beautiful than this, you can make by this picture will be look better.
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:21:412 (4) - It will be better, if you use straight slider or little curve slider.
11. 01:26:028 (2) - Please add whistle on slider repeat, and add clap on slider end to follow the rhythm and melody.
12. 01:31:156 (3,4) - Spacing between these are too far which you have use DS about 1.1x. Please reduce spacing by move (4) to up 3 grids. Similarly, it will look better, too.
13. 01:32:182 (4) - This, too. Please add whistle on slider end.
14. 01:35:259 (1) - Move to left and down 1 grid to reduce spacing between (6,1).
15. 01:36:284 (3,4) - I felt awkward here as well. I want to make by this picture will flow naturally.
    
    SPOILER

    

Normal

1. It will be better if you "reduce HP & OD 1".
2. 00:17:053 (5) - Add whistle here will be better for the melody?
3. 00:43:976 (6) - I prefer to move last point of this slider to down 1 grid.
4. 01:01:412 (2) - I think that move 2nd point of this slider to x:344 y:148 will be better to flowing.
5. 01:37:951 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:38:079 will be better in normal diff?

Hard

1. 00:10:643 ~ 00:17:310 - I want to add or remove some hitsound to follow the rhythm or melody by these.
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:11:412 (2) - Add whistle
   2. 00:11:669 (3) - Remove whistle
   3. 00:11:925 (4) - Add clap on slider end
   4. 00:12:438 (5) - Switch whistle between slider begin and repeat & add whistle on slider end, too
   5. 00:13:464 (7) - Add whistle on slider begin
   6. 00:16:541 (6) - ^
2. 00:15:259 (3) - These notes don't fit for the melody and rhythm. So please use Ctrl+G will be more fit than. Then don't forget to fix the hitsound, too. By use clap on circle (3), and use whistle on slider begin and end of (4).
3. 00:35:515 (6) - Please add clap on slider end to follow the rhythm.
4. 00:38:335 (5) - ^
5. 00:42:951 (6) - This, too. Please add clap on slider begin.
6. 00:43:464 (7) - Same with 00:35:515 (6).
7. 01:21:156 (3,4) - It cause me felt confuse when I read. So please move (3) to stack with slider begin of (4) will be better?
8. 01:47:310 (9,1,2,3,4) - Since (1,2,3,4) are jump, so I want to change the pattern of (9) by make by this picture will be flow naturally imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:05:259 (6,7,8,9) - It cause me felt confuse, too. Please try to avoid overlapping between (6,9)
10. 02:06:284 (9) - Add NC here will be better for the rhythm imo.

Insane

1. 00:14:489 (1,2,3) - It's too hard to read these note, since (1) stack with slider begin of 00:13:464 (8), and I felt that these note don't natural flow, too. So I suggest that make these note to flow naturally than by make by this picture will be easier to read imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:21:669 (6,7,8) - Spacing between (6,7) is 0.05x, which these can lead to confusion about reading. So please try to move it to x:378 y:127 to cause these are stack.
3. 00:30:130 (4) - Please try to move to stack or avoid overlaping with slider end of (3) will be better to read.
4. 00:38:592 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - I want to make by both pictures, which I think that it will be better for me. (In 1st picture, move (10) to stack with 00:38:335 (6), and move (11) to stack with 00:38:079 (5).)
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
5. 00:41:669 (4) - Please add clap on slider repeat to follow the rhythm.
6. 00:43:976 (5) - This, too. Please add clap on slider begin.
7. 00:48:079 (7,1,2,3,4) - I felt that these note are weird when play or read it. So It will be better if you move some point of (7) and (2), and use Ctrl+G on (3,4) by this picture (00:48:079 (7) is overlaping with 00:50:130 (4).)
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:07:310 (2,3) - It doesn't fit for the melody. So I think that fix abour these note by this picture will fit with the melody and rhythm.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:10:673 (4,5,6) - This, too. You can fix these by remove (5). Then change slider (6) into circles triplet instead. It will be more fit with rhythm than this.
10. 01:24:746 (8,1) - Try to stack between these will be better imo.
11. 01:34:233 (1,2,3,4) - It's too hard to read as well. Please move (2) to x:84 y:156, and move (3) to x:136 y:264 (stack with slider begin of 01:33:464 (7).)
12. 01:52:694 (1,2) - These don't natural flow when I read and play. So I suggest that use Ctrl+H. Then move (1) to x:292 y:296, and move (2) to x:216 y:196. It will be able to flow naturally.

Comment : Umm... I think that you should want to more mods from some modders, since I see about flow that it doesn't fit to play, and I heard about the hitsound, which I'm not sure that you forget to add some hitsound or not. So I want to suggest that improve some notes and some hitsound to be better than this. However, I really like your normal diff

Hope my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

• 1. [Easy]
  2. Edits:
     - 00:47:566 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
     - 00:47:694 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
     - 00:55:771 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
     - 00:55:900 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
     - 01:06:028 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
     - 01:06:156 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
     - 01:13:207 (1) - Remove this circle.
     - 01:13:207 - Add a slider from here until 01:13:719, with a NC.
     - 01:58:335 (1) - From Here To Here 02:06:284 (1) - You can remove all the circles and sliders because this is Easy
  
  
• [Normal]
• Edits:
  - 00:27:566 (7) - Remove this circle.
  - 00:28:079 (8) - Remove this circle.
  - Replace them with a slider since this is Normal ↓ ↓
  - 00:27:566 - Add a slider from here until 00:28:078.
  - Add A Break in this Diff
  

OEvil wrote:

Hi Mod Request from Queue

• 1. [Easy]
  2. Edits:
     - 00:47:566 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
     - 00:47:694 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
     - 00:55:771 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
     - 00:55:900 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
     - 01:06:028 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 2
     - 01:06:156 - Add Inherited Point Here With Sampleset Custom 1
     - 01:13:207 (1) - Remove this circle.
     - 01:13:207 - Add a slider from here until 01:13:719, with a NC.
     - 01:58:335 (1) - From Here To Here 02:06:284 (1) - You can remove all the circles and sliders because this is Easy
  
  
• [Normal]
• Edits:
  - 00:27:566 (7) - Remove this circle.
  - 00:28:079 (8) - Remove this circle.
  - Replace them with a slider since this is Normal ↓ ↓
  - 00:27:566 - Add a slider from here until 00:28:078.
  - Add A Break in this Diff
  

[Hard]Edits:
- 00:34:746 (5) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 00:35:002).
- 00:35:515 (6) - Add a whistle on the start.
- 00:36:156 (8) - Add a clap.
- 00:36:284 (1) - Add a clap and remove the finish.
- 00:51:925 (7) - Add a whistle.
- 00:52:694 (2) - Add a clap on the end.
- 00:53:464 (4) - Add a clap.
- 00:53:720 (5) - Add a clap and remove the whistle on the start, add a clap on the end.
- 00:54:489 (7) - Add a clap.
- 00:54:746 (1) - Add a clap and remove the whistle.
- 00:55:002 (2) - Move to {x:304 y:276}, add a clap.
- 00:55:259 - Add a slider from here until 00:55:515, with a clap on the start, with a clap on the end.
- 00:55:259 (3) - Remove this slider.
- 00:55:771 - Add a circle at {x:462 y:182}, with a clap.
- 00:56:028 - Add a slider from here until 00:56:284, with a clap on the start, with a clap on the end.
- 00:56:541 (4) - Add a clap.
- 00:57:053 (2) - Add a clap.
- 00:57:566 (4) - Add a clap.
- 00:57:823 (5) - Add a clap and remove the whistle.
- 00:58:079 (6) - Add a clap.
- 00:58:335 (7) - Add a clap on the end.
- 01:01:412 (3) - Add a clap on the end.
- 01:01:925 (4) - Add a clap and remove the whistle on the start, add a clap on the end.
- 01:02:438 (5) - Add a clap on the end.
- Add A Break For This Diff

[Insane]Edits:
- 00:52:951 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 00:52:951 - Add a circle
- 00:57:053 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 00:57:053 - Add a circle
- 01:01:156 (2) - Remove this slider.
- 01:01:156 - Add a circle
- Add A Break For This Diff

Nice Song, Nice Map.
I Hope You Like My Mod And I Hope Your Map Get Ranked
Please If You Didn't Do Anything Of My Mod PM Me In-game, Okay?

Banana wrote:

sorry for being lazy and let you waiting .-.

[General]
miao
[Storyboard]
generally it is good enough to me, here are some suggestions that can be discussed
01:07:053 - the scales here are early by 1/2. to follow the drum, the point start drum is at low volume, and the scale should be go with it IMO
01:08:079 - fade the foreground here? and origin background or white will do as background here
[Insane]
00:39:618 (11) - the previous notes 00:36:541 (2,3,4) are go round and round, and it become the different direction here, ctrl+g will keep this flow to me, and it goes well with the next repeat slider at 00:41:669 (4), (the stack repeat arrow is readable to me
00:49:105 (2) - suggestion is like this , and (4) is moved a little
01:07:310 - i suggest here to go with the storyboard, and go with the drum (or piano), a straight repeat slider will do
01:10:130 (3) - (2) in the next combo is going upwards, and I suggest here to go the opposite like this, and (1) in this combo is also suggested to change after
01:14:746 (7) - it curved too much to me, and it is also suggested to be straight to go with the following 01:16:028 (5)
01:17:310 (1) - its tail, the previous (5)'s tail and (6) to form a triangle? this jump wouldn't be too large and the pattern will be more decent
01:19:618 (6) - curved too much again, straight slider not always means lazy mapping, you know._.
01:21:925 (6) - slightly overlap with (4), not a problem, but I just think it can be easily avoid
01:24:233 (6) - actually i assume here to have some jump after the normal spacing at 01:22:694 (1,2,3)
01:33:335 (6) - distance snap
01:37:823 (1) - i think this note can be moved to the right below of the playfield, for it is empty here, just a suggestion
01:37:823 (1) - x:336 y:76?
01:46:797 (2) - this pattern need more work IMO... spacing between (3,5) is small

[Hard]
00:31:669 (4) - i don't like nazi mod.. but.. two grids down
00:36:028 (7,8,1) - straight three notes would be better IMO
00:41:669 (4) - nazi again like this, to avoid overlap
01:01:412 (3) - a fan pattern would be better, rotate 01:02:438 (5) -33° and the pattern can be made to this, for better patter, (3) needs one more rotate
01:07:053 (1) - same suggestion as Insane, go with storyboard
01:21:412 (4) - i suggest to disable grid snap and polish up this two sliders, to make them same spacing each other everywhere
01:22:438 (7) - this long~ repeat slider is not my way, try add a circle at 01:24:233 (go with piano) if anyone ever suggested not repeat it
01:30:130 (2) - curved too much IMO, 01:54:489 (2) - is the same issue

nazi a lot lol

[Normal]
01:01:412 (2) - curved too much
this diff is no big issue to me, I just want to say 1/2 is too much for a Normal. circle like 01:31:412 (4) is ok, no matter it is here or not.
another thing i think is worth to pointed out is the note after spinner
00:36:284 (1) - i suggest it be a way more readable for newbies, (2) is on the way move the cursor from the center of spinner to (1)
00:52:182 (1) - this note is a bit far consider it is after a spinner, ctrl+g or something will make it more friendly

[Easy]
00:52:182 (1) - same issue as Normal
01:03:464 (4) - overlap with (3), move (4,5) separately to avoid

that's it, good luck then

Banana wrote:

[Storyboard]
generally it is good enough to me, here are some suggestions that can be discussed
01:07:053 - the scales here are early by 1/2. to follow the drum, the point start drum is at low volume, and the scale should be go with it IMO
01:08:079 - fade the foreground here? and origin background or white will do as background here

01:07:053 - not changing
01:08:079 - fixed

thanks for SB mod

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\other\White.jpg",320,240
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

Setsurei wrote:

Banana wrote:

[Storyboard]
generally it is good enough to me, here are some suggestions that can be discussed
01:07:053 - the scales here are early by 1/2. to follow the drum, the point start drum is at low volume, and the scale should be go with it IMO
01:08:079 - fade the foreground here? and origin background or white will do as background here

01:07:053 - not changing
01:08:079 - fixed

thanks for SB mod

new osb

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

Nyquill wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:51:669 - This transition is VERYYYY weird. Maybe you could fade in the bg from here to 00:52:182.

fixed, thanks for SB mod

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

Nyquill wrote:

I guess its time to start clearing my requests.
[General]
Theres two .osb files in your folder. Delete the one labled (TV Size).
Offset -10

[Storyboard]
00:51:669 - This transition is VERYYYY weird. Maybe you could fade in the bg from here to 00:52:182.

[Hard]
01:16:797 (10,1) - I think ctrl-G with this would be better... the distance between these two notes won't make much sense if you have 01:17:310 (2) so close to 01:17:053 (1).


[Insane]
00:38:079 (5) - You should turn off grid snap to stack it properly.

00:45:515 (2) - This really doesn't work well for this BPM and AR, as things are more subject to clutter, and now just seems like a very random jump. I really suggest reconsidering this jump. If you want to keep it, at least stack on top of 00:46:028 (1) correctly.

Actually, are you purposely not stacking anything over sliders? Can you explain please, since you really shouldn't worry about it being absolutely stacked that much.

01:04:996 (4) - The correct length of this slider is a full 1/1.

01:26:028 (3) - I'd personally suggest removing a repeat so you can have 01:26:541 (4) 1/2 sooner, seeing the player can relate a lot more to the vocals than the very muted percussion. Then you can have two notes at 01:27:310 and 01:27:438. I'd also suggest brining this slider to the left instead of right like http://puu.sh/360gg.jpg . The way you bring it to the right right now is pretty weird since you're changing the angle back downwards.

01:48:079 (1) - This long slider doesn't empathize anything in the music, as the instrumental, the percussion, AND the vocals are on 1/2. I would really suggest using a mix of a 1/2 slider and a note to cover it up.

Call me back when you're done.

Setsurei wrote:

Nyquill wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:51:669 - This transition is VERYYYY weird. Maybe you could fade in the bg from here to 00:52:182.

fixed, thanks for SB mod

new osb

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

Nyquill wrote:

After multiple derps.

Bubbled! ~

leon1341414 wrote:

Hello , From PM

Insane

01:46:791(1) - 01:74:816(5) - seems you can modify this part's shape if you want^^

SPOILER

01:47:047 (2) - set on x=180 , y=228
01:47:303 (3) - x=204 , y=128
01:47:560 (4) - x=308 , y=128
01:47:816 (5,1,2) - x=336 , y=228

EX :

Not thing else. prefect to me .

short mod , so no kd plz.


fast bubble xd.

Satellite wrote:

gogo^^

Xinely wrote:

just confirmed little problem
Remove "duca" in all tags
due duca is already in artist
fix this when BAT check this map

no kds
Good Luck

1. As stated in a post above, remove "duca" from the tags in all difficulties, as it already is in the artist.
2. For the sake of stanza, offset should be 2432. You don't need to resnap after this, it's the same offset as yours, but with the correct stanza count.

1. Your slider placement makes your comboing inconsistent. You went for a new combo every second white tick, which is a good idea, but sliders like 01:28:073 (4) - that end on said white tick make this impossible to follow sometimes, and makes your comboing inconsistent. List of said sliders: 00:27:047 (4) - 00:31:150 (1) - (this one's the worst) 00:52:175 (1) - (probably not needed to fix as it's a special case) 01:28:073 (4) - 01:32:175 (4) - 01:47:047 (4) -
2. 00:44:483 (5,1) - The new combo should be on (5), not on (1), for consistency.
3. 01:17:303 (5,1) - Same remark.
4. Map the break ? Easy is the only diff for which there is a break.

1. Once again, sliders break the comboing, like in Easy: 00:43:970 (6) - 01:45:252 (3) - 01:29:098 (9) - 01:33:201 (7) - 01:49:868 (3) - (this one's a big problem because a combo transitions between kiai and non-kiai, which doesn't make much sense imo, since kiai is the highlighted part of the song and non-kiai isn't, so there's no sense in linking them within the same combo... They're two different parts of the song)
2. 00:12:176 (3,4,5) - Make them symmetric ?
3. 00:17:817 (7,1) - I'm not quire sure if this spacing is a mistake or not... It's quite confusing for a Normal as it's an unexpected anti-jump and makes this rhythm hard to read. Space them properly ?
4. 00:26:021 (4) - It would be better for the flow if this slider was curved down like 00:24:483 (3) -
5. 01:04:483 (1,2) - New combo should go on (2) for consistency.
6. 01:11:150 (4) - Make this blanket (3) (the approach circle), it will look better
7. 01:17:303 (6,1) - New combo should go on (6) for consistency.
8. 01:58:329 (1,2,3) - That was very weird to play. What I suggest is to use a smaller jump for (1,2) than what you currently have and use the same jump for (2,3), which would be more fitting and play better.

1. Aaaand once again, sliders are breaking the comboing: 00:14:484 (2) -
2. This map is quite calm, so AR7 feels too much for the Hard and the way it is mapped.
3. 00:30:893 (1) - I'm not sure I understand what this new combo follows. If you're following the vocals, then the new combo should go on 00:30:380 - but your slider placement makes this impossible. Rework 00:29:868 (4,5) - to make that possible ?
4. 00:30:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - Very surprising jumps. I thought they were 1/1 apart, honestly. I'm not against using jumps here, but make them shorter, so they don't look like different rhythms with proper spacing.
5. 00:46:534 (1,3) - These aren't stacked properly. Was that on purpose ?
6. 00:48:585 (1,2) - This jump isn't following anything.
7. 00:52:175 (1) - To make this play better, turn it into two circles, and keep using jumps like for 00:51:662 (6,7) - and add the new combo on 00:52:688 (2) -
8. 00:57:816 (5,6,7) - Please space these properly. This doesn't look very good and plays weird. I understand why you lower the spacing, but don't do it progressively like this.
9. 01:07:047 (8,1) - New combo should be on (8).
10. 01:17:047 (1,2) - New combo should go on (2). Also why hide (1) under the sliderend of 01:16:021 (9) - ? It was pretty confusing to me.
11. 01:19:611 (6,1,2) - If you're using a jump between (1,2), I think it'd be better and more consistent to use a jump as well for (6,2), as the vocals have the same intensity at this point, and it would play better.

1. The use of 1/4 triples in this diff is nearly abusive. Most don't follow anything in the song and don't bring anything to the map either: 00:21:662 (6,7,8) - 00:22:944 (2,3,4) - 00:24:226 (2,3,4) - 00:38:585 (7,8,9) - 00:42:944 (1,2,3) - 00:44:226 (5,6,7) - 00:45:765 (3,1) - 01:10:637 (4,5,6) - 01:13:457 (2,3,4) - 01:26:534 (4,5,6) - 01:44:739 (5,6,7) - 01:57:560 (5,6,7) - 02:03:201 (4) -
2. Same goes for jump. You can't just place a jump for pure visual purposes or for no good reason: 00:12:176 (4,5) - 00:28:842 (2,3) - 00:46:791 (2,3) - 01:19:098 (4,5) -
3. And as usual, sliders that break the comboing: 00:48:073 (5) - 01:57:816 (7) -
4. 00:14:484 (1,2,3) - New combo should go on (3).
5. 00:28:073 (10,1) - New combo should go on (10).
6. 00:45:509 (2,3,1) - That's very counter-intuitive and doesn't flow at all. You first stay on top of (2,3), then rush downwards because of a jump only to go back up slowly because of the slider...
7. 00:50:380 (5,6,7) - That was very confusing and borderline rankable. The sliders overlap one another in a way that makes them look like circles. Change this pattern to make this less confusing.
8. 00:51:662 (7,1) - If I understand what these follow, (7) should be split into two circles and bear the new combo.
9. 01:07:047 (1,2,3) - Why not make these jumps... regular ? Why is (2,3) bigger ? It doesn't look that good and plays weird...
10. 01:11:662 (2,3,4) - This had horrible flow. You go up slowly, then rush back down, then go to right slowly, then rush to the left. The movement for this is chaotic, and this part of the song has pretty much nothing going on, which means the jumps are... very unfitting.
11. 01:17:047 (5,1) - Same kind of counter-intuitive and counter-flowy movement as ^
12. 01:19:611 (6,1,2) - ^
13. 01:24:483 (7,8,9,1) -
14. 01:39:355 (4) - That's a pretty gimmicky slider... I don't like how it plays but it makes sense. Your choice whether or not to change.

Shiro wrote:

As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. As stated in a post above, remove "duca" from the tags in all difficulties, as it already is in the artist.
2. For the sake of stanza, offset should be 2432. You don't need to resnap after this, it's the same offset as yours, but with the correct stanza count.

Easy

1. Your slider placement makes your comboing inconsistent. You went for a new combo every second white tick, which is a good idea, but sliders like 01:28:073 (4) - that end on said white tick make this impossible to follow sometimes, and makes your comboing inconsistent. List of said sliders: 00:27:047 (4) - 00:31:150 (1) - (this one's the worst) 00:52:175 (1) - (probably not needed to fix as it's a special case) 01:28:073 (4) - 01:32:175 (4) - 01:47:047 (4) -
2. 00:44:483 (5,1) - The new combo should be on (5), not on (1), for consistency. Fixed
3. 01:17:303 (5,1) - Same remark. ^
4. Map the break ? Easy is the only diff for which there is a break.

I think it is good. Let you see this map of kanpakyin: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/32273. Easy has break ^^

Normal

1. Once again, sliders break the comboing, like in Easy: 00:43:970 (6) - 01:45:252 (3) - 01:29:098 (9) - 01:33:201 (7) - 01:49:868 (3) - (this one's a big problem because a combo transitions between kiai and non-kiai, which doesn't make much sense imo, since kiai is the highlighted part of the song and non-kiai isn't, so there's no sense in linking them within the same combo... They're two different parts of the song) I don't understand your mean. It doesn't have kiai or not kiai here ><
2. 00:12:176 (3,4,5) - Make them symmetric ? Not
3. 00:17:817 (7,1) - I'm not quire sure if this spacing is a mistake or not... It's quite confusing for a Normal as it's an unexpected anti-jump and makes this rhythm hard to read. Space them properly ? Fixed
4. 00:26:021 (4) - It would be better for the flow if this slider was curved down like 00:24:483 (3) - Fixed
5. 01:04:483 (1,2) - New combo should go on (2) for consistency. Fixed
6. 01:11:150 (4) - Make this blanket (3) (the approach circle), it will look better Fixed
7. 01:17:303 (6,1) - New combo should go on (6) for consistency. Fixed
8. 01:58:329 (1,2,3) - That was very weird to play. What I suggest is to use a smaller jump for (1,2) than what you currently have and use the same jump for (2,3), which would be more fitting and play better.

Not

Hard

1. Aaaand once again, sliders are breaking the comboing: 00:14:484 (2) - Not
2. This map is quite calm, so AR7 feels too much for the Hard and the way it is mapped. Fixed
3. 00:30:893 (1) - I'm not sure I understand what this new combo follows. If you're following the vocals, then the new combo should go on 00:30:380 - but your slider placement makes this impossible. Rework 00:29:868 (4,5) - to make that possible ? Not
4. 00:30:893 (1,2,3,4,5) - Very surprising jumps. I thought they were 1/1 apart, honestly. I'm not against using jumps here, but make them shorter, so they don't look like different rhythms with proper spacing. Sorry, I think they were very short here. How do you want? ><
5. 00:46:534 (1,3) - These aren't stacked properly. Was that on purpose ? Yes
6. 00:48:585 (1,2) - This jump isn't following anything. My purpose. Make that to creat a place and order next notes near with nest rhythm
7. 00:52:175 (1) - To make this play better, turn it into two circles, and keep using jumps like for 00:51:662 (6,7) - and add the new combo on 00:52:688 (2) - That's good idea but I don't have that plan
8. 00:57:816 (5,6,7) - Please space these properly. This doesn't look very good and plays weird. I understand why you lower the spacing, but don't do it progressively like this. Fixed
9. 01:07:047 (8,1) - New combo should be on (8). Difficult to understand about rhythm
10. 01:17:047 (1,2) - New combo should go on (2). Also why hide (1) under the sliderend of 01:16:021 (9) - ? It was pretty confusing to me. Fixed
11. 01:19:611 (6,1,2) - If you're using a jump between (1,2), I think it'd be better and more consistent to use a jump as well for (6,2), as the vocals have the same intensity at this point, and it would play better.

I don't understand. Maybe you copied false ><. I can't correct this link

Insane

1. The use of 1/4 triples in this diff is nearly abusive. Most don't follow anything in the song and don't bring anything to the map either: 00:21:662 (6,7,8) - 00:22:944 (2,3,4) - 00:24:226 (2,3,4) - 00:38:585 (7,8,9) - 00:42:944 (1,2,3) - 00:44:226 (5,6,7) - 00:45:765 (3,1) - 01:10:637 (4,5,6) - 01:13:457 (2,3,4) - 01:26:534 (4,5,6) - 01:44:739 (5,6,7) - 01:57:560 (5,6,7) - 02:03:201 (4) - Sonething fixed
2. Same goes for jump. You can't just place a jump for pure visual purposes or for no good reason: 00:12:176 (4,5) - 00:28:842 (2,3) - 00:46:791 (2,3) - 01:19:098 (4,5) - ^
3. And as usual, sliders that break the comboing: 00:48:073 (5) - 01:57:816 (7) - I don't know but unchange
4. 00:14:484 (1,2,3) - New combo should go on (3). Fixed
5. 00:28:073 (10,1) - New combo should go on (10). ^
6. 00:45:509 (2,3,1) - That's very counter-intuitive and doesn't flow at all. You first stay on top of (2,3), then rush downwards because of a jump only to go back up slowly because of the slider... ^
7. 00:50:380 (5,6,7) - That was very confusing and borderline rankable. The sliders overlap one another in a way that makes them look like circles. Change this pattern to make this less confusing. ^
8. 00:51:662 (7,1) - If I understand what these follow, (7) should be split into two circles and bear the new combo. I don't think so
9. 01:07:047 (1,2,3) - Why not make these jumps... regular ? Why is (2,3) bigger ? It doesn't look that good and plays weird... Fixed
10. 01:11:662 (2,3,4) - This had horrible flow. You go up slowly, then rush back down, then go to right slowly, then rush to the left. The movement for this is chaotic, and this part of the song has pretty much nothing going on, which means the jumps are... very unfitting. Not
11. 01:17:047 (5,1) - Same kind of counter-intuitive and counter-flowy movement as ^ Fixed
12. 01:19:611 (6,1,2) - ^ ^
13. 01:24:483 (7,8,9,1) - ^
14. 01:39:355 (4) - That's a pretty gimmicky slider... I don't like how it plays but it makes sense. Your choice whether or not to change.

Not
I'm taking the bubble for the offset change, tags and slider overlaps.

P A N wrote:

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SPOILER

20:03 Oyatsu: hi
20:04 P A N: hi :3
20:04 Oyatsu: if you are free
20:04 Oyatsu: Can you check my map again (most Isane)?
20:04 Oyatsu: I re diff- Isane
20:10 P A N: 00:17:816 (7) - remove repeat make it end at 00:18:329 sounds better
20:11 P A N: 00:18:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think this stream is overmap, and not fit the song
20:11 Oyatsu: I think it is good
20:11 Oyatsu: sorry unchange
20:11 Oyatsu: so
20:11 Oyatsu: How must I change?
20:12 P A N: hmm let me see
20:12 P A N: maybe remove them
20:12 P A N: and add spinner with finish hitsound instead
20:13 P A N: try it, maybe better :3
20:13 Oyatsu: I try empty
20:13 P A N: spinner end at 00:19:867 -
20:14 Oyatsu: I make it empty ok, continue
20:16 P A N: 00:41:021 (3) -
20:16 Oyatsu: how?
20:16 P A N: move it to 00:41:150 and add note at 00:41:021
20:17 Oyatsu: fixed
20:17 P A N: is it sounds better?
20:17 Oyatsu: ^ that?
20:17 P A N: yup
20:18 Oyatsu: ok
20:18 P A N: then try it with 00:49:483 (5) - too
20:19 Oyatsu: fixed
20:19 P A N: 00:54:098 (5) - too
20:19 Oyatsu: I make vocal
20:19 Oyatsu: let you hear
20:19 Oyatsu: unchange
20:20 Oyatsu: continue plz
20:22 P A N: 01:03:585 (4) - if you follow the vocal, move it to 01:03:714 sounds more fit
20:23 Oyatsu: fixed
20:24 P A N: 01:22:175 (3) - change this repeat slider to 2 notes at 01:22:175 - and 01:22:303 -
20:24 P A N: then move 01:22:560 (4) - to 01:22:432 -
20:24 P A N: more fit for me
20:25 P A N: and end at current time
20:26 Oyatsu: fixed
20:26 P A N: 01:40:637 - u can tripple note here
20:27 Oyatsu: I don't like so, unchange
20:28 P A N: ok next, about pattern
20:28 Oyatsu: ok
20:30 P A N: 00:20:637 (3) - u can make it blanket like http://puu.sh/3aY72.jpg
20:31 Oyatsu: fixed
20:31 P A N: 00:21:919 (6) - move center to 28|172 and move tail to 16|68 for make it more blanket
20:31 P A N: and move (7,8) to 92|228 , 112|232 to follow the flow
20:32 Oyatsu: hm...
20:32 P A N: 00:24:483 (2) - move to 255|201
20:33 Oyatsu: ok
20:34 P A N: (3) move to 168|97
20:35 P A N: 00:26:278 (1) - dont forget to move this to perfect stack with the previous (2)
20:36 Oyatsu: fixed
20:37 P A N: 00:26:354 (2) - center to 404|200 and tail to 416|148
20:39 Oyatsu: fixed
20:39 P A N: also u can copy ^ and paste at 00:25:765 - then ctrl+H + remove repeat
20:40 Oyatsu: I want it is straight, sorry unchange
20:40 Oyatsu: ah no
20:40 Oyatsu: ok, fix
20:42 P A N: 00:28:329 (6) - this is a bit overlap, move it to 156|204 for make to triangle with previous (3,4) too
20:43 Oyatsu: fixed
20:43 P A N: then move 00:25:585 (1) - to 80|260 for make it triangle with previous (6) and next (2). then move center to 72|312 and move tail to 96|356 for make it more blanket
20:44 Oyatsu: ??
20:44 Oyatsu: I can't use link
20:44 Oyatsu: ah ok
20:45 P A N: oops sry
20:45 P A N: fail
20:45 P A N: mean 00:28:585 (1) -
20:45 Oyatsu: ok
20:46 Oyatsu: fixed
20:46 P A N: 00:32:175 (4) - 1 grid left?
20:46 P A N: right*
20:46 Oyatsu: fixed
20:47 P A N: 00:31:662 (3) - also move this 1 grid down
20:47 P A N: (5) too
20:47 Oyatsu: fixed
20:47 P A N: 00:36:791 (3) - 1 grid up
20:49 P A N: 00:54:996 (7) - center to 80|148 and tail to 40|164 for blanket
20:50 P A N: 01:01:406 (3) - move tail to 88|292
20:51 P A N: 01:07:047 - U can make it to jump pattern
20:51 P A N: its fit the song
20:53 P A N: 01:10:124 (4) - move center to 296|148 and tail to 208|188 and move (5) to 220|200
20:54 P A N: 01:15:509 (1,6) - 1 grid left and 1 grid down
20:55 P A N: 01:18:073 (3) - this is overlap. try to move to another way or change the shape to avoid that
21:00 P A N: 01:27:560 (3) - distance error
21:02 P A N: 01:47:047 (3,4) - same reason at 01:10:124 -
21:04 P A N: 01:47:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - 192|272 , 156|160 , 252|88 , 352|156 , 316|272
21:05 P A N: 01:49:355 (1) - move to 208|340 and move next (1) to 304|220

1. Offset was changed, so it's all good.

1. Not going to repeat what I said in previous mod, so I have nothing more to add.

1. 01:00:893 (7,1) - The new combo should be (7).

1. 00:48:585 (1,2) - Random jump. You don't use jumps to "create space to place something", they're supposed to follow the song, and this one doesn't.
2. 00:57:816 (5,6,7) - This spacing still isn't fixed although you said you did fix it.
3. 01:11:406 (7) - This slider's repeat is hidden under 01:10:124 (3) -
4. 01:44:996 (4) - This is a purely aesthetic suggestion but make this blanket 01:46:278 (5) - ?

1. Still has duca in tags.
2. This was remapped, wasn't it ? It feels better, but the 3/4 slider usage is confusing because they are nowhere in the song: 00:46:021 (9) - should be 1/2 00:54:098 (5) - 00:55:637 (8) - 01:02:047 (4) - should be 1/2 and start on the white tick 00:58:842 (2) - should be 1/2 01:28:329 (5) - should be either 1/2 or 1/1 without a repeat. Why not keep 1/2 sliders or just 1/1 sliders ?
3. 00:17:047 (4,5,6,7) - This rhythm doesn't make sense and is nowhere in the song. It felt very weird... If you want to keep the 1/4, why not, but 00:17:560 (6) - this one didn't fit at all and should be a circle, and 00:17:816 (7) - should be a 1/1 slider.
4. 00:24:996 (3) - This slider's repeat is entirely hidden under 00:23:970 (1,2) -
5. 01:18:073 (3) - This repeat is partially hidden under 01:17:303 (1) - . it's readable but you should fix that (it's not hard)

Shiro wrote:

It's me again, rechecking after the bubble pop.
Considering your answer to my mod I will only point out what I think is important again.

General

1. Offset was changed, so it's all good.

Easy

1. Not going to repeat what I said in previous mod, so I have nothing more to add.

Normal

1. 01:00:893 (7,1) - The new combo should be (7).

Hard

1. 00:48:585 (1,2) - Random jump. You don't use jumps to "create space to place something", they're supposed to follow the song, and this one doesn't.
2. 00:57:816 (5,6,7) - This spacing still isn't fixed although you said you did fix it.
3. 01:11:406 (7) - This slider's repeat is hidden under 01:10:124 (3) -
4. 01:44:996 (4) - This is a purely aesthetic suggestion but make this blanket 01:46:278 (5) - ?

Insane

1. Still has duca in tags.
2. This was remapped, wasn't it ? It feels better, but the 3/4 slider usage is confusing because they are nowhere in the song: 00:46:021 (9) - should be 1/2 00:54:098 (5) - 00:55:637 (8) - 01:02:047 (4) - should be 1/2 and start on the white tick 00:58:842 (2) - should be 1/2 01:28:329 (5) - should be either 1/2 or 1/1 without a repeat. Why not keep 1/2 sliders or just 1/1 sliders ?
3. 00:17:047 (4,5,6,7) - This rhythm doesn't make sense and is nowhere in the song. It felt very weird... If you want to keep the 1/4, why not, but 00:17:560 (6) - this one didn't fit at all and should be a circle, and 00:17:816 (7) - should be a 1/1 slider.
4. 00:24:996 (3) - This slider's repeat is entirely hidden under 00:23:970 (1,2) -
5. 01:18:073 (3) - This repeat is partially hidden under 01:17:303 (1) - . it's readable but you should fix that (it's not hard)

Shiro wrote:

Well, you've come a long way - this is now much better. Rebubbled.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Oyatsu ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:21:919 (6) - I don't think 3/4 is suitable,1/2 is enough to here.
2. 01:23:970 (1) - You can hear a drum for 01:23:842 and 01:24:226 -.
   
3. 02:02:560 (3) - Try move to 02:02:303 - ,sound much better.

[Hard]

1. AR6 looks too slow IMO,+1 is better.
2. 00:19:355 - Please slience to here,i did not hear anything.
3. 00:49:355 (3) - Move to X:144 Y:184,balanced spacing.
4. 01:41:662 (4,5) - This rhythm sound weird for me,The vocal start on 01:41:919 -,
   try this rhythm,would be better.
   

[Easy]

1. HP2 is enough to here.
2. 00:45:252 - Add a note,followed with piano.
3. 02:00:893 (4) - Make more blanket with 02:00:380 (3) - ,like this.
   
   Screenshot and Code

   
   

   212,192,120893,2,0,P|176:140|178:80,2,125,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Nice SB ~ Call me back ~

Lally wrote:

gratz \o3o/

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Zeroarg wrote:

Duca <333333333

Gratz for first ranked. Good effort you made.

Satellite wrote:

congratz~~!

- t e n n y a - wrote:

1st ranked grats

P o M u T a wrote:

gratz

P A N wrote:

wowwwwww congratz oyatsu :3

Wreath wrote:

grats on your ranked!