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NoHitter

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NoHitter 2013-05-23T11:27:23+00:00

/me claps. Great map.

[General]
- Add rekiai on the choruses at 01:07:231, 02:20:142, and 03:11:788?
- 02:57:927 () - Add a break here on all diffs then move the ending part of the break to 02:58:117. Like this.

[Insane]
- 01:43:307 (5,6,1) - Pretty large spacing here. The shift of spacing may also be confusing given the spacing on combos like 01:41:218 (2,3,4) is similar. Tone down your spacing like what you did on 03:10:648 (2,3,4).

That's all. Contact me afterwards.

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-23T13:00:08+00:00

NoHitter wrote:
/me claps. Great map.
wow thank you~!
[General]
- Add rekiai on the choruses at 01:07:231, 02:20:142, and 03:11:788? ok
- 02:57:927 () - Add a break here on all diffs then move the ending part of the break to 02:58:117. Like this. actually for this part, I kinda like the suspension created from having no break here. It makes players think when the next beat is going to hit and it conveys the echo of her voice better than having a break I think

[Insane]
- 01:43:307 (5,6,1) - Pretty large spacing here. The shift of spacing may also be confusing given the spacing on combos like 01:41:218 (2,3,4) is similar. Tone down your spacing like what you did on 03:10:648 (2,3,4). ok fixed

That's all. Contact me afterwards.thanks!!

@azu-nyan14, eldnl, xChippy:
thanks for starring !!

!

@Azathozkula:
Very nice!
I can't even FC this
haha

@SakiK!
arigatou!!!

:D

@Quilt:
萌Quilt! :>

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NoHitter

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NoHitter 2013-05-23T13:05:58+00:00

Bubbled!

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-05-23T17:34:33+00:00

Hi ~ hoLysoup ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

01:31:534 - Add finish,sound much better.
02:34:952 - You are forgot add clap to here.

[Hard]

01:02:673 (2) - Unsnapped slider.
01:31:534 - Add finish,sound much better.

[Normal]

02:44:446 - Remove clap,same as other diff.

Always nice map ~ but sorry i have popped ~ because of unsnapped ~

I'll back later ~

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-23T19:11:55+00:00

Rika all fixed desu :>!
<3

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2013-05-23T19:55:45+00:00

Odd. I checked for the unsnapped sliders with AIBat but it didn't show up.
Oh well, good luck either way!

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-05-23T21:35:12+00:00

hi ^^

General
cool

Normal
01:33:053 (3) - the clap of the tail seems a bit loud? You had the previous part 00:20:142 (2) - set to 60% volume, while here is set to 80%. If this isn't intentional, make sure the volumes are consistent in each section. (same for other diffs if you fix)
02:32:484 (1) - Whistle sounds nice here
02:43:876 (4) - try Drum Finish on the tail =v=
03:28:496 (3) - Finish on tail, like 00:12:547 (1) - ?

Hard
01:03:433 (4) - NC, like 01:15:585 (1) -
02:44:066 (5) - same as Normal, i thought Drum finish sounded kinda nice
03:30:015 (1) - same as Normal, Finish on head maybe

Insane
00:52:041 (1) - Finish sounds nice imo
02:04:952 (1) - ^
02:27:547 (2,4) - pretty sure you can avoid the unnecessary touch here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772147 or something
02:44:446 (1) - Drum finish

great lovely map <3
call me back

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-23T22:05:36+00:00

LunarSakuya~
hihi~! so fast omg
all fixed desu :>

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-05-24T00:28:53+00:00

Good luck!!

reb

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2013-05-24T01:42:12+00:00

OK ~ Much better now ~

Here you go <3

NewRulerNA

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NewRulerNA 2013-05-24T01:59:48+00:00

gratz~ :3

Umi

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Umi 2013-05-24T02:00:49+00:00

wow gratz ! it was fast :3

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-05-24T02:08:38+00:00

Congratz!~~ Time to mod is too short!! Great!!

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2013-05-24T02:41:43+00:00

<3

Quilt

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Quilt 2013-05-24T03:10:23+00:00

ome萌soup ^-^

Laurier

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Laurier 2013-05-24T03:25:35+00:00

おめ～！

wring

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wring 2013-05-24T04:11:53+00:00

yey <3

meiikyuu

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meiikyuu 2013-05-24T04:33:47+00:00

grats ~~

Mythol

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Mythol 2013-05-24T04:40:48+00:00

so fast o:

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-24T06:31:34+00:00

LunarSakuya:
<3 thanks so much for fast mod!!

Rika:
/me eats
<3

NewRulerNA:
thank you so much!!

-Umi-:
thanks!!

Oyatsu:
thanks!!

Quilt:
arigatou~!!

Laurier:
sankyuu!!

wringu!:
arigatou arigatou!!

美酒:
謝謝!

MythoL:
:>! capitaL L!

y u c a

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y u c a 2013-05-24T06:37:14+00:00

ooo omesoup w

cRyo[iceeicee]

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cRyo[iceeicee] 2013-05-24T06:50:12+00:00

kawaiiiiiiiiiii >3<!!!
Grats~! (:

Kirino Kousaka

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Kirino Kousaka 2013-05-24T06:59:34+00:00

wow! grats! >w<

Rare

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Rare 2013-05-24T07:28:48+00:00

GRATZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Suimya

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Suimya 2013-05-24T07:49:23+00:00

Gratz !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:>!!!!

S o r d a

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S o r d a 2013-05-24T08:37:45+00:00

ome~

Dino99

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Dino99 2013-05-24T11:55:48+00:00

Gratz!!~~

h3k1ru

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h3k1ru 2013-05-24T12:15:04+00:00

osu! need more meis clauson~

gratz!

pimp

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pimp 2013-05-24T18:55:25+00:00

that was fast !!!

congratulations hoLysoup

- Miomio Chii -

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- Miomio Chii - 2013-05-25T00:36:31+00:00

恭喜你ranked了~!

Kinomi

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Kinomi 2013-05-25T06:49:32+00:00

好快，恭喜

merchat7

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merchat7 2013-05-25T13:58:26+00:00

Congrats!

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2013-05-25T14:06:23+00:00

Holysoup so pro! :3

hoLysoup

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hoLysoup 2013-05-25T23:32:35+00:00

yuca
yuka sensei :>!

cRyo[iceeicee]
too much kawaiii!

Kirino Kousaka
thank you!

Rare
arigatou!!!!!!!!! Rare!

sekaiNyaN!
thank you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:>!!!!

S o r d a
sankyuU!!

12BARRY21
thankyouthankyou~!!

h3k1ru
yea!! and Chata too!
actually Meis ClausoN needs to make songs for Chata!

HEHEHEHEHHEHEH!

pimpG
haha thank you!!

- Miomio Chii -
哇真是謝謝你啊!!

baldrace
恩恩感謝感謝!

merchat7

! thanks so much!

BeatofIke
not pro! Meis Clauson + Nomizu iori pro!

IchigoDJ

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IchigoDJ 2014-06-18T13:32:19+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
你好
from my queue

easy

00:19:667 (2) 移到X304，Y212 后面两个slidder也要微调一下
00:41:788 这个whistle 我觉得有点莫名
02:04:193 (3,4,1)大概是这种感觉后面的slider向上弯一点
02:18:813 (2)这个不用那么直，把尾端向右弯吧=w=
03:11:788 (1)尾端的点移到X160，Y296 后面的稍微动了一下，可能需要调整2-3个slider
03:22:610 (3)不好看啊，尾端到X188，Y280

先看一下easy,吃饭了

hard

01:55:838(1) 尾端移到X400，Y148 或者干脆再往右歪一点
03:13:307 这个whistle移到头部比较好？
01:01:534 去掉whistle
02:42:262 这边只加2的whistle是不是好一点

水平有限
只能找到那么多了

好歌好图

其实tag可以多加点

good luck