I felt obliged to do this.
To get better at drawing anime, stop drawing anime.
It's derived from realism in that it's a stylized representation of what we see in real life. It breaks a few rules to accommodate this stylization which is what results in the unique visual appearance of anime. However, one must first know the rules in order to break them, and the study of realism will lay a sound foundation from which you can build upon.
you should study some anatomyYep, I know that I have problems with that. .__.'
her torso looks really really really long
its cute tho, and nicely made, just the body that looks really wonkyGlad to hear.
You could most likely move up the hips more then 30% of her torso upwardsThanks for the advice! ^^