This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, June 24, 2013 at 7:27:42 PM

Artist: Hinatabi Bitter Suites
Title: Meumeupettantan!!
Source: ひなビタ♪
Tags: Hinabita Konami Bemani TOMOSUKE jubeat saucer taiko REFLEC BEAT colette
BPM: 185
Filesize: 3179kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:

1. Futsuu (2.85 stars, 199 notes)
2. Inner Oni (4.89 stars, 742 notes)
3. Muzukashii (4.5 stars, 367 notes)
4. Oni (4.83 stars, 563 notes)

Download: Hinatabi Bitter Suites - Meumeupettantan!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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really for rank ...
Difficulty
Inner Oni - 9★ - ★★★★★★★★★☆
Oni - 7★ - ★★★★★★★☆☆☆
Muzu - 4★ - ★★★★☆☆☆☆
Futsuu - 2★ - ★★☆☆☆☆☆

mod as req






GL, and please find better mp3 at here.

mintong89 wrote:

mod as req

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
BG unrankable you know. and don't png picture, please convert to jpg.
mp3 bitrate is lower than 128, which is unrankable, and sound of mp3 is low quality too. please find better mp3.
BPM should be 185 but not 185.05. maybe. talked at irc.
"REFLEC BEAT colette" is a game so should be at source, the real artist is call " 日向美ビタースイーツ♪ " (Hinata Bi bitasuitsu)
there is a lot unused SB call "black.png", please delete it.
Please put Preview time.
all fixed.

[Taiko Oni]
HP+1?, HP5 is quite easy for oni player. ok

00:19:183 (98) - D? it sound good. umm..no
00:24:371 (130) - K or D, because it's a big sound here. fixed
00:29:558 (167) - ^
00:32:152 (192,193) - dd please, kkk k sound weird. umm..no
00:32:801 (196,197,198,199) - ddk k ,^
00:36:043 (220,221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - i think you can use other pattern here, it same with other two is boring.
00:47:716 - => 00:48:851 - why you didn't put anything? that some drum sound here is perfect to put note.
00:52:255 (333,334,335,336,337) - try kkddk? d at last part is sound weird. really.
00:55:659 (356) - k, make it same with 00:55:335 (355) - . fixed
01:08:791 (446) - K?
01:19:329 (516) - k, it sound good. no.that is just like the end of a sentence

[Taiko Muzukashii]

00:19:183 (73) - as i say at oni, D will better at here.
01:24:517 (200) - K, maybe it better.

just saying, maybe it too hard for muzu player. just like 00:59:388 - => 01:09:115 - that 1/2 spam-note, it really weird.

[Taiko Futsuu]

i think this Futsuu is too hard, but i can't say anything. i suggest you add a kantan to make better.

GL, and please find better mp3 at here.

thanks for mod

[Taiko Oni]

Add/drop part

00:01:107 -add k

00:02:405 - add d

00:03:702 - add d

00:05:405 (21) - delete

00:06:297 - add d

00:07:594 - add d

00:08:891 - add d

00:08:891 - add d

00:10:188 - add d

00:10:432 (48) - delete

00:19:918 - add k

00:20:567 - add k

00:25:675 (161) - delete

00:29:567 (189,191) - delete

00:45:540 - add d

00:45:783 - add dk

00:46:026 - add d d d d

01:15:297 (500) - delete

01:25:675 (578) - delete

01:36:459 - add k

hit sound part

00:17:324 (102) - k

00:17:648 (105) - d

00:46:675 (304) - d

00:47:486 (312) - d

00:48:297 (319) - k

00:50:080 (335,336) - dk

Lukareia wrote:

[Taiko Oni]

Add/drop part

00:01:107 -add k

00:02:405 - add d

00:03:702 - add d

00:05:405 (21) - delete fixed

00:06:297 - add d

00:07:594 - add d

00:08:891 - add d

00:08:891 - add d

00:10:188 - add d

00:10:432 (48) - delete fixed

00:19:918 - add k

00:20:567 - add k

00:25:675 (161) - delete fixed

00:29:567 (189,191) - delete removed 191.

00:45:540 - add d fixed

00:45:783 - add dk fixed

00:46:026 - add d d d d fixed

01:15:297 (500) - delete deleted to make it as original I make.

01:25:675 (578) - delete

01:36:459 - add k

hit sound part

00:17:324 (102) - k fixed

00:17:648 (105) - d fixed

00:46:675 (304) - d fixed,as well as deleted some notes

00:47:486 (312) - d fixed

00:48:297 (319) - k fixed

00:50:080 (335,336) - dk

fixed

thanks for mod.

...

#modreqs, taiko
____________________________________

Kantan

the sv is too fast, change to 1,0 (if you change it,shorten the slider)
00:17:486 (23) - k
00:19:107 (26) - d
00:26:567 (40) - K
00:27:215 (41) - D
00:29:810 (45) - k

Futsuu

00:21:215 (60) - K
00:21:702 (61) - d
00:26:242 (71) - k
00:43:432 (128) - d
00:43:918 (130) - d
00:53:810 (162) - d
00:55:756 (170) - ends at 00:56:729 -
01:01:918 (188) - K
01:47:648 (337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351) - so many kats for futsuu, ithink its hard
01:52:188 (356) - d
01:52:513 - useless speed change

Muzukashii

01:52:513 - d
00:24:378 (110) - remove d, that triplet is not fit in that part
00:25:513 (117) - ^
00:26:567 (122) - K
00:26:891 (123) - d
00:27:053 (124) - remove d
00:27:215 (125) - k
00:29:242 (135) - remove d
00:31:107 (147,148,149,150,151) - why dont KDKDK
00:32:405 (153,154,155,156,157) - ^
00:33:702 (159,160,161,162,163) - ^
00:43:107 (210,211,212) - ddd
01:31:594 (244) - d
01:33:378 (251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - very fast for muzu player
01:40:594 (279) - remove d
01:41:891 (287) - ^
01:41:891 (287) - remove k
01:47:242 (315) - remove d
01:47:648 (317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333) - KDKDK
01:47:648 (317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,1) - the speed change is too hard for muzu

Uchiha_sorayuki wrote:

#modreqs, taiko
____________________________________

Kantan

the sv is too fast, change to 1,0 (if you change it,shorten the slider)
00:17:486 (23) - k fixed
00:19:107 (26) - d
00:26:567 (40) - K
00:27:215 (41) - D
00:29:810 (45) - k

Futsuu

00:21:215 (60) - K
00:21:702 (61) - d
00:26:242 (71) - k
00:43:432 (128) - d fixed
00:43:918 (130) - d fixed
00:53:810 (162) - d fixed
00:55:756 (170) - ends at 00:56:729 - fixed
01:01:918 (188) - K
01:47:648 (337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351) - so many kats for futsuu, ithink its hard
01:52:188 (356) - d
01:52:513 - useless speed change

Muzukashii

01:52:513 - d
00:24:378 (110) - remove d, that triplet is not fit in that part
00:25:513 (117) - ^
00:26:567 (122) - K
00:26:891 (123) - d
00:27:053 (124) - remove d
00:27:215 (125) - k
00:29:242 (135) - remove d
00:31:107 (147,148,149,150,151) - why dont KDKDK
00:32:405 (153,154,155,156,157) - ^
00:33:702 (159,160,161,162,163) - ^
00:43:107 (210,211,212) - ddd
01:31:594 (244) - d
01:33:378 (251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258) - very fast for muzu player fixed
01:40:594 (279) - remove d
01:41:891 (287) - ^
01:41:891 (287) - remove k fixed
01:47:242 (315) - remove d fixed
01:47:648 (317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333) - KDKDK
01:47:648 (317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,1) - the speed change is too hard for muzu

thanks for mod.

Hello NewibornCLivee, sorry for a bit late to mod the mapset.
Suggestions are listed as follows. :3

[General]

Remove "Taiko" in the names of all difficulties, as it is no longer necessary.

[Taiko Kantan]

00:12:945 k
00:26:242 (39,40) D K , following the pitch
01:34:026 (46,47) D D ? As consecutive 8 blue finish may be monotonious
01:35:324 (50,51) D D , ^
01:42:783 (64,65) D K , same as 00:26:242

[Taiko Futsuu]

00:17:161 (47,48,49,50) d k d k
00:20:729 (58,59) K D , may fit the pitch better
00:26:242 (71,72) D K , same as Kantan
00:34:999 (96,97,98,99,100,101) k k k d d d
00:55:432 d k or k k
01:34:026 D D or D K
01:35:324 D D or D K
01:37:269 K D, same as 00:20:729
01:42:783 D K, same as Kantan

[Taiko Muzukashii]

00:20:729 K D, same as Futsuu
00:26:242 D K or K K
01:37:269 K D, same as Futsuu
01:42:783 d k d ?

[Taiko Oni]

00:20:729 K D, same as Futsuu
00:45:783 remove

希望幫到你
Rank 圖加油~

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hello NewibornCLivee, sorry for a bit late to mod the mapset.
Suggestions are listed as follows. :3

[General]

Remove "Taiko" in the names of all difficulties, as it is no longer necessary. fixed

[Taiko Kantan]

00:12:945 k fixed
00:26:242 (39,40) D K , following the pitch
01:34:026 (46,47) D D ? As consecutive 8 blue finish may be monotonious
01:35:324 (50,51) D D , ^
01:42:783 (64,65) D K , same as 00:26:242

[Taiko Futsuu]

00:17:161 (47,48,49,50) d k d k fixed
00:20:729 (58,59) K D , may fit the pitch better
00:26:242 (71,72) D K , same as Kantan
00:34:999 (96,97,98,99,100,101) k k k d d d fixed
00:55:432 d k or k k
01:34:026 D D or D K
01:35:324 D D or D K
01:37:269 K D, same as 00:20:729
01:42:783 D K, same as Kantan

[Taiko Muzukashii]

00:20:729 K D, same as Futsuu
00:26:242 D K or K K
01:37:269 K D, same as Futsuu
01:42:783 d k d ?

[Taiko Oni]

00:20:729 K D, same as Futsuu
00:45:783 remove

希望幫到你
Rank 圖加油~

thanks for mod

Yo! Taiko mod from #modreqs

[Kantan]
I know 1.40 SV is recommended, but it just seems a little too fast for Kantan. ;3; Maybe set it to 1.20?
00:13:594 (18) - k
00:55:756 (18) - Make this slider end on the white tick. http://puu.sh/2Td10.png
01:47:648 (73,75,77) - Make these sliders end on the white ticks. Just like here 00:31:107 (47,49,51) -

[Futsuu]
Again, set SV to 1.20.
00:24:297 (66,67) - k d
00:37:594 (107) - d
00:38:405 (110) - d
00:38:567 - k
00:48:945 - k
00:49:269 (148) - d
00:55:756 (172) - End it on the white tick, maybe? http://puu.sh/2Tdh6.png
01:09:864 (218,219) - d k
01:12:621 - I really don't like the speed up here. It may confuse beginners. Remove it, maybe?
01:12:621 (225) - If you remove the speed up here, then make it a big kat.

[Muzukashii]
00:49:918 (21,22,23,24) - I think this pattern is better: http://puu.sh/2TdsH.png
00:59:161 (69,70,71) - d k k
01:21:215 (194) - k

[Oni]
00:32:080 (207,217) - K K

That's it. Good luck!

Leyko wrote:

Yo! Taiko mod from #modreqs

[Kantan]
I know 1.40 SV is recommended, but it just seems a little too fast for Kantan. ;3; Maybe set it to 1.20? ok
00:13:594 (18) - k fixed
00:55:756 (18) - Make this slider end on the white tick. http://puu.sh/2Td10.png umm...the original one is already like this
01:47:648 (73,75,77) - Make these sliders end on the white ticks. Just like here 00:31:107 (47,49,51) - also for this..

[Futsuu]
Again, set SV to 1.20. umm..keep unchange
00:24:297 (66,67) - k d
00:37:594 (107) - d fixed
00:38:405 (110) - d
00:38:567 - k
00:48:945 - k
00:49:269 (148) - d
00:55:756 (172) - End it on the white tick, maybe? http://puu.sh/2Tdh6.png orz...again
01:09:864 (218,219) - d k
01:12:621 - I really don't like the speed up here. It may confuse beginners. Remove it, maybe? yep removed
01:12:621 (225) - If you remove the speed up here, then make it a big kat. fixed

[Muzukashii]
00:49:918 (21,22,23,24) - I think this pattern is better: http://puu.sh/2TdsH.png
00:59:161 (69,70,71) - d k k no..both vocal and music is not fit
01:21:215 (194) - k

[Oni]
00:32:080 (207,217) - K K fixed

That's it. Good luck!

thanks for mod

Add tag

Konami
Bemani
TOMOSUKE
jubeat saucer

No kd

MineC24 wrote:

Add tag

Konami
Bemani
TOMOSUKE
jubeat saucer

No kd

thanks~will fix later.

Hi o/
Sorry for late >-<
Thanks for modding my map :3
Here I go~

[General]
Preview point is missing in all diffs except Oni. Please make it the same in all diffs.
Delete bg.png, you're not using it in the mapset.
I really wonder why you use different volume for some parts, no need to change, I'm just curious.

[Kantan]
Increase HP and OD at least to 4, This settings should be between 4 and 7 if you're aiming for rank.
In my opinion this looks like a Futsuu, try to simplify some 1/1 patterns with more than 3 circles. I'll give you some suggestions here, but you maybe need more opinions here before making any further change.
00:01:270 - 00:16:837 - This part would be nice if you put circles every big white tick, but keep the sliders, it may be a too boring or too easy, but all Kantan in Taiko no Tatsujin games are like that, but as I said above, you may need more opinions here x3
00:55:756 (18) - Finish it in 00:56:729.
01:33:378 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - This is too hard for a Kantan in my opinion, lower the density of notes here, delete 01:33:702 (45,47,49,51)
All the kiai time
01:51:864 (80) - Remove.
Try to simplify some more rhythms if you can, I just pointed those that are really unfitting for a Kantan.

[Futsuu]
Increase HP and OD at least to 4, This settings should be between 4 and 7 if you're aiming for rank.
As I said in Kantan try to simplify a bit the rhythm, some of them are more fitting for a Muzukashii, like a long part with 1/1, try to remove some notes to give a little break, in a Futsuu you would be using 1/1 patterns and some ocasional 1/2 streams, depends of the song itself. I'll give some suggestions of what you can remove or simplify.
00:12:297 (31) - Remove
00:13:594 (35) - ^
00:14:891 (39) - ^
00:17:486 (48) - ^
00:18:783 (52) - ^
00:19:432 (54,55,56,57,58,59) - Remove the finish, hitting this may be a bit hard considering this is a Futsuu.
01:35:972 (303,304,305,306,307,308) - ^

[Muzukashii]
This seems to be a bit hard for a Muzu also, but here just remove some objects to give a little rest, like 00:58:188 (63) - 00:59:486 (71) - , just try to not make the 1/2 streams too long, this looks like an Oni for me.

[Oni]
Looks a bit overmapped, but maybe it's just me. Parts like 00:31:107 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205) sounds too spammy, this would be better if mapped as a 1/2 stream, like you did in Muzu. Sadly I can't help here as I wasn't able to play it orz

Sorry for being short, but when I recommend simplifying rhythm in Taiko I like to give that freedom to the mapper, I don't want to come with an iron hand an tell you how to do it. I'd recommend you to search full spread Taiko mapsets and look how Kantan and Futsuu looks, as they' re the diffs that need more work. I can provide you some, just ask me in PM.

Good luck, get a better mp3 if you can, I couldn't find any >-<

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi o/
Sorry for late >-<
Thanks for modding my map :3
Here I go~

[General]
Preview point is missing in all diffs except Oni. Please make it the same in all diffs.
Delete bg.png, you're not using it in the mapset.
I really wonder why you use different volume for some parts, no need to change, I'm just curious.

[Kantan]
Increase HP and OD at least to 4, This settings should be between 4 and 7 if you're aiming for rank. i think is ok since many kantan/futsuu in taiko mapset have lower than 4
In my opinion this looks like a Futsuu, try to simplify some 1/1 patterns with more than 3 circles. I'll give you some suggestions here, but you maybe need more opinions here before making any further change.
00:01:270 - 00:16:837 - This part would be nice if you put circles every big white tick, but keep the sliders, it may be a too boring or too easy, but all Kantan in Taiko no Tatsujin games are like that, but as I said above, you may need more opinions here x3
00:55:756 (18) - Finish it in 00:56:729.
01:33:378 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52) - This is too hard for a Kantan in my opinion, lower the density of notes here, delete 01:33:702 (45,47,49,51)
All the kiai time
01:51:864 (80) - Remove.
Try to simplify some more rhythms if you can, I just pointed those that are really unfitting for a Kantan. accept,will try

[Futsuu]
Increase HP and OD at least to 4, This settings should be between 4 and 7 if you're aiming for rank.
As I said in Kantan try to simplify a bit the rhythm, some of them are more fitting for a Muzukashii, like a long part with 1/1, try to remove some notes to give a little break, in a Futsuu you would be using 1/1 patterns and some ocasional 1/2 streams, depends of the song itself. I'll give some suggestions of what you can remove or simplify.
00:12:297 (31) - Remove
00:13:594 (35) - ^
00:14:891 (39) - ^
00:17:486 (48) - ^
00:18:783 (52) - ^
00:19:432 (54,55,56,57,58,59) - Remove the finish, hitting this may be a bit hard considering this is a Futsuu.
01:35:972 (303,304,305,306,307,308) - ^

[Muzukashii]
This seems to be a bit hard for a Muzu also, but here just remove some objects to give a little rest, like 00:58:188 (63) - 00:59:486 (71) - , just try to not make the 1/2 streams too long, this looks like an Oni for me.

[Oni]
Looks a bit overmapped, but maybe it's just me. Parts like 00:31:107 (197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205) sounds too spammy, this would be better if mapped as a 1/2 stream, like you did in Muzu. Sadly I can't help here as I wasn't able to play it orz

Sorry for being short, but when I recommend simplifying rhythm in Taiko I like to give that freedom to the mapper, I don't want to come with an iron hand an tell you how to do it. I'd recommend you to search full spread Taiko mapsets and look how Kantan and Futsuu looks, as they' re the diffs that need more work. I can provide you some, just ask me in PM.

Good luck, get a better mp3 if you can, I couldn't find any >-<

For mp3...i really couldn't find a better one x.x

btw thanks for mod thanks for advice and suggestions

From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[General]
Artist: iTunes romanization is Hinatabi Bitter Suites♪ https://itunes.apple.com/jp/artist/hinatabi-bitter-suites/id593748018?l=en. Dance Dance Revolution inclusion description uses "Sweets" instead of "Suites". Choose the one you prefer.
Source/Tags: A more correct source should be Hinabitter♪ / ひなビタ♪, the web-linked music distribution project under KONAMI. Plus its first appearance in the BEMANI series is at the 2013 Dance Dance Revolution arcade.
Preview Time: 01:12:134. Make this uniform across the difficulties.

[Futsuu] Perceived difficulty rating: 2* Futsuu
Outside the chorus it is just a bit too easy for Futsuu. Must be the lack of 1/2 clusters.
It would have been better to declare it a 4* Kantan.

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 4* Muzukashii
Appeared to be lyrics-based, but too easy wrt. the structure of the song. For example, in the chorus you can have 7-note 1/2 clusters to cover「めめめめうめう」in the vocal.
Would be a good 6* Futsuu though.
00:45:215 (131,132), 00:55:594 (166,167) and similar - Do not split the long vocal syllable here. Use one whole slider across the whole length
01:14:567 (228) and similar - This location has no respective vocal or background that I can pick up to support a note here. Remove.

[Oni / Ura Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 7* Oni 8* Ura Oni
00:01:107 and similar - Complete the three electronic beep pattern with notes at places like here.
01:14:567 and similar - This location has no respective vocal or background that I can pick up to support a note here. Remove.

tetsutaro wrote:

From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[General]
Artist: iTunes romanization is Hinatabi Bitter Suites♪ https://itunes.apple.com/jp/artist/hinatabi-bitter-suites/id593748018?l=en. Dance Dance Revolution inclusion description uses "Sweets" instead of "Suites". Choose the one you prefer.
Source/Tags: A more correct source should be Hinabitter♪ / ひなビタ♪, the web-linked music distribution project under KONAMI. Plus its first appearance in the BEMANI series is at the 2013 Dance Dance Revolution arcade.
Preview Time: 01:12:134. Make this uniform across the difficulties.

[Futsuu] Perceived difficulty rating: 2* Futsuu
Outside the chorus it is just a bit too easy for Futsuu. Must be the lack of 1/2 clusters.
It would have been better to declare it a 4* Kantan.

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 4* Muzukashii
Appeared to be lyrics-based, but too easy wrt. the structure of the song. For example, in the chorus you can have 7-note 1/2 clusters to cover「めめめめうめう」in the vocal.
Would be a good 6* Futsuu though.
00:45:215 (131,132), 00:55:594 (166,167) and similar - Do not split the long vocal syllable here. Use one whole slider across the whole length
01:14:567 (228) and similar - This location has no respective vocal or background that I can pick up to support a note here. Remove.

[Oni / Ura Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 7* Oni 8* Ura Oni
00:01:107 and similar - Complete the three electronic beep pattern with notes at places like here.
01:14:567 and similar - This location has no respective vocal or background that I can pick up to support a note here. Remove.

thanks for mod all considered

hey New here the mods that you requested to me

[Muzu]

1. 00:17:161 (44) - k. i think it's better than you use d there
2. 00:21:702 (57) - d. (57) has lower pitch sound than (58)
3. 01:10:999 (215) - how about k there. so the notes ((215) (216)) are kd
4. 01:34:026 (306,310) - D and D. those notes have lower pitch sounds than 304 305 307 308 309 311. you can hear it again. so, if you use K on 306 and 310, the sounds'll too flat :/ no variation note too there right? so, how about try that?

[oni]

1. 00:22:351 (100) - how about k there?
2. 00:38:080 (184) - d, for the low vocal sound there. better use d than k
3. 00:48:459 (13) - ^. and i saw you used same pattern right? so, if you use my mod before, you must change this too
4. 00:55:432 (54) - k. for the higher pitch sound than (53). it's too flat if you use d d on (53) and (54). give a variation note there
5. 01:34:026 (253,257) - D and D. same reason like Muzu diff (if you use my mods before)

[inner]

1. 00:05:648 (25,26) - dd. give variation notes. you always use kkk paterns there._.
2. 00:10:675 (51,52) - dd. i hear lower pitch sounds there. so the stream is kkddkkk.
3. 00:16:026 (93,94) - same reason like 00:05:648 (25,26) -
4. 00:18:134 (108,109,110,111,112) - kdkkd. d in 00:18:459 (112) - is for the low vocal sound too. before it you used k, it's not really fit and good well for the low vocal sound.
5. 00:31:432 (202,203) - kk?
6. 00:32:729 (212,213) - ^
7. 00:34:026 (222,223) - ^
8. 00:39:540 (259) - d. it's not fit if you use k.
9. 01:16:675 (516) - d?
10. 01:27:053 (593) - ^
11. 01:34:026 (617,621) - D and D. same like Muzu and Oni diffs if you the mods before
12. 01:39:702 (642,643) - dk? it's better than kd
13. 01:44:242 (677,678) - ^
14. 01:47:972 (710,711) - kk?

hope it's usefull for you @o@//

mingmichael wrote:

hey New here the mods that you requested to me

[Muzu]

1. 00:17:161 (44) - k. i think it's better than you use d there
2. 00:21:702 (57) - d. (57) has lower pitch sound than (58) but it got the same pitch with (56), and so I use K for 58
3. 01:10:999 (215) - how about k there. so the notes ((215) (216)) are kd
4. 01:34:026 (306,310) - D and D. those notes have lower pitch sounds than 304 305 307 308 309 311. you can hear it again. so, if you use K on 306 and 310, the sounds'll too flat :/ no variation note too there right? so, how about try that? yup. fixed

[oni]

1. 00:22:351 (100) - how about k there?
2. 00:38:080 (184) - d, for the low vocal sound there. better use d than k
3. 00:48:459 (13) - ^. and i saw you used same pattern right? so, if you use my mod before, you must change this too
4. 00:55:432 (54) - k. for the higher pitch sound than (53). it's too flat if you use d d on (53) and (54). give a variation note there yup. fixed
5. 01:34:026 (253,257) - D and D. same reason like Muzu diff (if you use my mods before) yup. fixed

[inner]

1. 00:05:648 (25,26) - dd. give variation notes. you always use kkk paterns there._.
2. 00:10:675 (51,52) - dd. i hear lower pitch sounds there. so the stream is kkddkkk.
3. 00:16:026 (93,94) - same reason like 00:05:648 (25,26) -
4. 00:18:134 (108,109,110,111,112) - kdkkd. d in 00:18:459 (112) - is for the low vocal sound too. before it you used k, it's not really fit and good well for the low vocal sound.
5. 00:31:432 (202,203) - kk? fixed
6. 00:32:729 (212,213) - ^ fixed
7. 00:34:026 (222,223) - ^ fixed
8. 00:39:540 (259) - d. it's not fit if you use k. fixed
9. 01:16:675 (516) - d?
10. 01:27:053 (593) - ^
11. 01:34:026 (617,621) - D and D. same like Muzu and Oni diffs if you the mods before yup. fixed
12. 01:39:702 (642,643) - dk? it's better than kd
13. 01:44:242 (677,678) - ^
14. 01:47:972 (710,711) - kk?

hope it's usefull for you @o@//

thanks for mod again =D