hi
make sure suggestions improve your map
Ayu wrote:
Damn this map is good.
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00:03:380 (6) - try moving this to x236 y140? I think it helps get a bit more circular of a motion for 00:03:230 (5,6,7,1) -
plus it makes another triangle with 00:02:780 (1,2,6) - hue00:05:780 (6,7) - I would have liked to see more spacing between these two, every other spot in this intro where you have two sliders you do a lot with the flow and leniency of them, except here. Maybe copy 7 and flip it for 6? so like this
00:08:780 (1,2) - move these two farther away from 00:08:480 (7) - ? I think it would feel just a bit nicer to have some room here.
For 00:10:580 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:15:380 (1,2,3,4) - consider adjusting them like this. I think it would play really cool, and also let you be consistent with both of them, since the two of them play differently from each other right now
00:20:180 (1) - I feel like I should ask why this starts moving off of 3, instead of 4 like most of the other streams in this section do. It plays alright as is, but it might be just a bit better to adjust it
00:27:680 (1) - it might help readability to unstack this, like you have with the notes after, because otherwise one might try to play this like 00:26:930 (2,3,4,5,1) - and then get to 00:27:980 (1) - too soon.
01:27:680 (7) - just wanna throw in, this stream is awesome :3
02:08:030 (5,1) - this transition seems different from all the rest of them for some reason, it's like with the other 3, you start the next stream along with the curve of the 1/4 slider, but here you go against it. Seems strange to me
03:58:130 (2,3) - ctrl+g? I feel like this goes with the circular motion of 03:56:780 (4) - as well. With this, you could also blanket 03:58:280 (3,1) - and have it be noticeable, and a rather cool effect in my opinion
04:01:751 - I found myself wishing that this stream started out with a 1/4 repeat, as while the bpm change does occur earlier and you give time to adjust, the way that the music feels during the 04:00:380 - to 04:01:751 - it's hard to grasp exactly what the tempo is until the drum track solidifies at 04:01:751 - again and then suddenly it's a stream much slower than we're used to.
06:07:365 (2,3,4) - why not make these three a pattern of 3 rotated exactly 120 from each other? imo the flow 3-4 is maybe a little jagged so having them be more consistent in the angles between them would help a lot
just some small thoughts, feel free to take whatever you think is best for your map. Good luck!