1. Hard (4.52 stars, 287 notes)
2. Normal (2.98 stars, 166 notes)
3. Ruby (4.83 stars, 453 notes)

LKSeyren wrote:

Hi!, i am not an expert mod at osu!, i am better at mania but while looking at your map i saw a note from 01:37:024 to 01:37:324 that in my opinion didn't fit very well, maybe it's just me

Also i heared the song and i just loved it, i would like to ask you if i can make a osu!mania map for it ^^, in any keys and difficulty, i can make from a 4k easy thing to an impossible 8k map

i hope this little help does something and let me know what you think ^^

Flower wrote:

LKSeyren wrote:

Hi!, i am not an expert mod at osu!, i am better at mania but while looking at your map i saw a note from 01:37:024 to 01:37:324 that in my opinion didn't fit very well, maybe it's just me

Also i heared the song and i just loved it, i would like to ask you if i can make a osu!mania map for it ^^, in any keys and difficulty, i can make from a 4k easy thing to an impossible 8k map

i hope this little help does something and let me know what you think ^^

I agree with that this part does not fit but I'm afraid the part's bpm is very unstable.
I'd like to ave a GD but I maybe put this in pending in very few days. Sorry about that.

qq944364487 wrote:

先把你的发出来再说

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi :3
Summoned here because M4M

[General]

[Lapis]
01:36:274 - How about doing this, actually your 3/2 slider sounds a bit weird Hmm, I think there is some other problems rather than 3/4. Keep at the moment

02:23:684 (2) - Maybe open the curve to the other side, it'd look better imo. Good idea

[Jade Star]
I enjoyed this so much.

[Pure Ruby]
00:54:632 (1) - I'd suggest to remove this note, it's a bit sudden as it is in 3/4. I just follow the vocal
Also I felt that some of the triples in the beginning (after the 70BPM part) you use are overmapped, but maybe it's just me.

This mapset looks so good, sorry for being short ;n;
Good luck o/

1. 00:34:370 (1,2) - 不好看 建议重做
2. 01:08:656 (1) - 能不能把sliderslide留下tick去了
3. 01:30:675 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/949172
4. 01:42:711 (1,2) - 这两个拉开
5. 02:25:443 - add note(?
6. 02:13:293 (4) - 用和1一样的形状比较好
7. 02:37:296 - 在这里加一串
8. 美丽

1. 02:10:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 为什么要这样233
2. 我不会mod了

1. 好饿, 没什么问题, 我不mod了
2. 不是lapis lazuli吗
3. 然后我书一下啊难度星数的算法是只算第一个红线的BPM的, 就是70, 而你的主体是200BPM
4. 结果就是你这个三星比普通的三星图要难不少, 四暗刻

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi


Pure ruby

1. 00:34:370 (1,2) - 不好看 建议重做 为毛要重做 我微调了一下 现在应该好一些
2. 01:08:656 (1) - 能不能把sliderslide留下tick去了 我改成了很低的volume 不过不知道能不能rankable 我等bat来看
3. 01:30:675 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/949172 您好这个是有概率的我故意藏起来的 反正能看见
4. 01:42:711 (1,2) - 这两个拉开 移动了一点
5. 02:25:443 - add note(? 跟前面统一 所以不加 加速的效果 感觉从最后再加比较好 比较友善
6. 02:13:293 (4) - 用和1一样的形状比较好 改了这里要remap 我现在风格狂抄dear you 要是做的话就改不会去了
7. 02:37:296 - 在这里加一串 先加了下试试 要是被喷了只好再改回去
8. 美丽

Jade star

1. 02:10:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 为什么要这样233 四暗刻 应该是x1.1的我忘记调绿线了
2. 我不会mod了

Lapis

1. 好饿, 没什么问题, 我不mod了
2. 不是lapis lazuli吗
3. 然后我书一下啊难度星数的算法是只算第一个红线的BPM的, 就是70, 而你的主体是200BPM
4. 结果就是你这个三星比普通的三星图要难不少, 四暗刻

最后祝你身体健康

1. 00:27:513 (1) - 这一段不加点Whistle吗?...或者弄一些很小声的clap
2. 01:08:656 (1) - 其实在play的时候我看这朵花感觉右边肥了...
3. 01:15:534 (1,2) - 嗯红线滑条打的时候没感觉一到edit界面就强迫症想改掉
4. 01:16:134 (3) - 加个N：1clap？
5. 01:37:261 - 这段最好就是取消01:37:113 (3) - 的尾巴clap
   然后不要漏掉01:37:261 -这个音，然后给这里的物件加clap
   另外我觉得
6. 01:37:113 - 可以加个Whistle
7. 01:53:493 (1) - 这个滑条尾的Whistle感觉可以去掉
8. 02:09:693 (5) - 这一段全程都很紧凑，但这里我觉得这样放不太好了，稍微有点空
9. 02:37:296 (4,5,6,7,8) - 以我的习惯来看，感觉0.2x好看点

1. 02:15:093 (1) - 不暂停下来我还以为你没下东西,感觉这clap加了会听不出。不过问题不大
2. 03:07:200 (4) - 感觉改成noet更合适

1. 傻了吧我也有star

ryuu wrote:

hi :3
from ur req
all suggestions

I checked the unsnapped sections. They are acceptable, since they are not kiai sections :>

[Lapis]


00:50:656 (2) - may u up or down slider's end? it will look nicer, imo cool
01:01:799 (1,2) - may u change form these sliders? made some change
01:20:184 (1) - 1-2 grid right? I turned gird off and found my DS was ok. So no change
01:58:893 (2,2) - may u up or down slider's end? it will look nicer, imo okay
02:22:293 (3) - ^ yea
02:34:467 (1,2) - why not same form as 02:30:555 (1,2)? Isn't symmetry ok? I temporarily won't change it.

[Jade Star]


why so many summeric sliders at the beginning? I like symmetry. Don't beat me D:
i know, u can make it more interesting
01:19:284 (1) - 2nd point - x:256, y:168 cool

[Pure Ruby]

01:08:656 (1) - THIS FLOWER ;W;
cool diff o.o
cool hs o.o

sorry
i can't find anything else ;_;
good luck, hana-san :о

N E K O wrote:

唯一的一个建议是pure ruby难度里面的大量往返等距离的跳，可以试试看变距离以及移动的方向稍微往不同方向拉伸.
比如像frost常用的那种跳梗。感觉会更爽一点。 我看了一下好像都是不等距的跳诶……总之先放着

Natsu wrote:

HI~ Flower you ask me to check this in game c:

General:

1. Just some unsnaped green line they dont affect the game play anyways I think

Pure Ruby:

1. I preffer OD 7 in maps like this with alot of jumps but up to you According to the high bpm I think OD8 should be OK
2. 00:33:942 This circle sound kinda bad here i suggets you to remove it better if you want to keep it add one here 00:32:227 for consistency imo I choose the former one.
3. 01:16:209 I cant hear nothing in the music here Ain't nobody had time checking dat xD
4. 01:16:584 (1,2,3) - try This rhythm better cuz the sound in 01:17:034 is really important and need the hit action on it so a circle or slider head fit alot with it a slider tail dont follow the music really well imo Hmm, I don't think I can come up a better idea about arrangement. I will keep this until I think of any idea.
5. 01:22:431 add whistle on the tail too? the music is exactly the same with the slider head and fit very nie with the song cool
6. 01:23:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - what do you think about This xuz i preffer if the jump is on (4) that beat got a strong sound making this natural for play well maybe just me Nope, that jump rapes the pattern. As long as no better ones given I'll still keep this ;p
7. 01:36:670 move this to x:424 y:160 actually thew jump is kinda big and dont fit very well with the music imo. I think this jump is placed well. I even didn't notice any difference.
8. 01:38:696 I cant hear nothing here too maybe you want to remove that beat. I want not. It sounds good.
9. 01:39:984 (1,3) - I dont like how that sliders touching themselves maybe move 3 to the right It flows well. It does not touch itself. Such kind of overlapping is fun, impov
10. 02:14:193 (1,2) - this pattern is kinda bored too straight imo atleast im not sure but ctrl g on 02:14:643 make it fun imo This is to make 02:15:093 (1) - respon to them. I prefer not, until more ideas are given.
11. 02:37:296 NC so the player can read this better? personally that stream take me offguard :c sure
12. 03:07:500 add NC here too it follow your stanzas pattern also fit alot with the end and finish sound imo I like what it is like imo

Jade Star:

1. HP +1 or 2 for better diff spread actually the jump from this to Pure Ruby is too big also up the OD to 6 5 is kinda low and the same for better spread here :l +1'ed
2. 01:16:284 move this a little down so previous 01:15:234 dont touch it? It doesn't matter imo, since hit300 should cover it anyway, and the slider body has already disappeared.
3. 01:22:431 add whistle on the head maybe you forget it (if you follow my suggestion on ruby add one on the tail too) Nope. I did not add them cause the rhythm is more sparse in this diff.
4. 01:24:681 add clap instead of whistle sound alot better I followed the music pitch :q
5. 01:26:031 what about to rotate this in -15 and move it to x:140 y:100 making a cool blanket with previous slider like Actually I was not intended to make a blanket, just want to flow flow, etc. d:This
6. 01:34:425 maybe stack this one with 01:33:675 tail just for better design I prefer not, because This stack may make it hard to read.
7. 03:07:500 same as Pure Ruby Same

Ai Normal:

1. 01:01:799 (1,2) - Fic the distance here? you was using just 1.0 in all the previous part done
2. 01:22:431 (2) - same as Pure Ruby nope
3. I just notice this diff dont have hitsounds will be cool if you add the claps like pure ruby I like they alot I was intended to do this d: cuz I think the rhythm is even more sparse in this diff. So yeah, no taiko hits.
4. 01:57:993 mmm end this here 01:58:293 and add a circle in 01:58:593 follow alot better the song here that downbeats have a important sound imo I think it isn't bad to put a 2/1 slider here, to emphasize the first downbeat. Also, this is 3/4 rhythm so it may be different from common 4/4 imo.
5. 02:54:900 sound alot better if you finish this in 02:55:200 I use it to make the part not too boring x.x

popner wrote:

[Hard]
03:03:900 (1,3) - try to avoid the overlap by moving (3) up a little 改了
[Insane]
02:37:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这节奏对么？ 对，原曲是1/8，我用1/4没啥不对

Zero__wind wrote:

General
There are maaaaaaany unsnapped inherited points in each diff from 01:14:934 - to the end, resnap them plz I think

Cadet
OD3 for better spread
01:05:442 (1) - missing finish all fixed

Ace
01:14:784 (1,2,3) - wrong rhythm from the start, should use only a circle at 01:15:084 - and start a 1/2 slider from 01:15:234 - instead changed. should fit now
01:34:275 (4,5) - CTRL+G to fit in the style of this map better? nah, that is kinda sick to me
01:57:243 (2,3,4) - 这里其实可以做成两组三连打的摆成这样感觉非常浪费 不嘛
02:19:443 (4,1) - swap NC for better readability changed
02:21:843 (2) - not really intuitive rhythm in here, still acceptable though 1. too lazy 2. there's sound in the background so I think it fits

美丽
顺便悄悄告诉我timing是谁给你测的 不会是自己测的吧这么叼逼

1. Timing feels off, specifically at the part starting at 01:48:993
2. Lots of unsnapped inherit sections
3. Hitsounds at the start are way too loud. (also parts like 02:26:793 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - should be fading in volume as they currently are just overshadowing the song too much with their hitsounding)
4. 01:08:656 (1) - cute slider, but it's overlapping
5. Samplesets do not really seem fitting to the song's set of instruments
6. Occasional overmap, not respecting the song's soundpatterns enough (such as putting 1/2 sliders on two very strong beats or mapping very monotoneously in peak parts of the song)
7. Sliderends often feel out of place with the hitsounds on them (for example 02:12:393 - this whole part has issues with that)
8. 02:44:455 - You would probably want to start the "lead in time" from the break here as that'd feature the atmosphere a lot more.
9. In kiai time, it felt very random where you decided to place tripples or streams and therefore very unnatural to play since basically, the played rhythm was never alike in any combos while the song was simply looping this part all over.

Tsukuyomi wrote:

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