remy11 wrote:

ゆかりーん！

Dark_Ai wrote:

wah ...
I wanted to map this too ;___;)/
/me late

newtoniorock8 wrote:

hi ~ #modreqs

Easy

00:01:399 / 00:02:794 / add whistle ~ nah,I feel like it's not match for this time.
00:02:096 / 00:03:492 / add finish ~ ^
00:10:468 / 01:04:887 - remove the control point here, it doesn't make sense, imo >.< it make silence of spinner.
00:17:096 (3) - add clap ~ I really want to follow clap pattern. so I won't add clap.
00:21:980 (2) - change the whistle to a clap ~ I feel like it's not match for this time.
00:21:980 (2) - ^ same as above..
00:28:259 (4) - add clap ~ same.
01:02:794 (2) - ctrl-g for this one, I like current pattern than yours.
01:08:724 (4) - add clap ~ no. you know why.
01:09:073 (1) - add finish ~ nah,it's not match for this.
01:11:515 / 01:14:306 (4) - add clap ~ no.
01:27:561 (2) - add finish ~ ^

Normal

00:20:585 / 00:21:282 - / 00:23:375 / 00:24:073 / 00:25:468 (6) - / add clap ~ all no,same as Easy.
00:27:910 (5) - change this hitobject to a slider k,change it.

01:16:747 / 01:27:561 (2) - - add finish ~ no. same as Easy.

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thats all ~ >.< Nice beatmap :33 Goodluck!

BuBBLe1q wrote:

Good work!

NoHitter wrote:

[General]
Offset -4. kk.
[Insane]
- AR - 1 fits the song better. nah,i don't think so..
- 00:20:933 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I'm concerned about the readability of these anti-jumps. You should increase the spacing a bit at the very least. k,change it.
- 01:27:039 (6,1,2,3) - Same as above. ^

That's all. Pretty nice map you got here

NoHitter wrote:

Well in my opinion, AR 9 doesn't fit the song at all. I highly suggest you reconsider. If you do contact me again.

For now:
Bubbled.

Edit:
Rebubbled after mapper fixed a slider.

MiLu wrote:

Here I come.
OK Looks much better~　ranked~



...Oh, my god! am I not a BAT ?

Kawayi Rika wrote:

NICE <3 GOGOGO ~

Ryafuka wrote:

Kawayi Rika wrote:

NICE <3 GOGOGO ~

moemoe tsukiko <3

Byakugan249 wrote:

ok let's see what we got here~.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it
Blue: Comments, Advice, or other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:05:929 - i think you can add a circle here to keep the flow steady and to follow the vocals here. yes,added notes.
00:06:278 (1,2,3,4) - move this pattern around, mainly the circles so that it'll look better to follow during gameplay IMO. like this if you don't know. change like your opinion.
00:50:929 (1) - i think a finish here instead of a whistle fits here since it follows a new phrase in the vocals and shows emphasis in the vocals IMO. k,changed all diff.
00:55:290 (3) - you should move this slider down for neatness and for a smoother transition for beginners to follow during gameplay. like this. changed~
01:27:208 (1,2,3) - personally, i think a 1/1 repeat slider would be a lot easier for beginners to follow since 3 circles feels a bit too hard for me IMO. sorry,no change. I made this pattern like this 00:21:627 (1,2,3) - . I want to keep it for consistency.

[Normal]
00:16:050 (3,4) - move these sliders down so that (3) is aligned to (1). it'll make a triangular pattern between (1,2,3), which would make the flow increase during gameplay IMO. it should look like this. nice.Changed~
00:32:096 (2) - not a big deal but maybe you can do a perfect stack at the ends for neatness in this part? yes,fixed.
00:56:166 (6) - *nazi* align this to (3). same reason as above. if you do this, then you have to fix the spacing for the other notes ahead. sorry no change.I feel like current pattern are good enough.

[Insane]
00:25:468 (6) - i think Ctrl+G makes the diff more fun and exciting for players during gameplay IMO. agree,changed~

[Hard]
00:00:701 (2) - i think you can do a NC here because it'll be consistent with the insane diff IMO. k,Added.
00:11:340 (5) - consider a NC here since this follows a different phrase in the BGM. um..sorry no.. I don't want to add short NC for this time.

pretty good set. contact me when you're ready :3.

popner wrote:

In addition:
[Insane]
00:10:639 (7) - can you remove this note? You follow the drum in 00:09:767 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and switch to vocal immediately at 00:10:639 (7). This plays weird and unexpected, especially with the jump here.　um,I agree.. removed notes.
01:26:511 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern at 00:20:929 (3,4,5,6) flows good, but now it is not good enough, for the movement from lower right to upper left. sorry no,I really want to keep current pattern.
You can try this:

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Byakugan249 wrote:

ok fixed a minor spacing issue in normal, and we're all set, so here's your rank .

Ryafuka wrote:

変態さんですね。

xsrsbsns wrote:

hentai-san desu ne