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M2U - Nightmare

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Leader
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1,849 posts
Joined January 2011
Leader
Hello, m4m :3

[EZ]
  1. 00:06:352 (1,2,1) - Try something like this, it plays better http://puu.sh/2MVXQ.jpg
  2. 00:12:352 (2) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/738474
  3. 00:18:352 (3) - Move to x:184 y:24
  4. 00:44:247 (1) - This will be much easier for beginners, move slider like that
  5. 01:12:036 (1) - Move second slider point to x:324 y:312
  6. 01:16:142 (2,3) - Like this flows better for beginners (remember to fix spacing!)
[NM]
  1. 00:30:352 (2,3,1) - This should flow better
    SPOILER
  2. 00:56:563 (4) - Stack on 00:56:878 (1) - ?
  3. 00:51:352 (3,4) - They shouldn't be covered by slider, they are a bit hard to hit from Normal players and it will be worse.
  4. 01:01:457 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:41:089 (3) - x:252 y:220
[HD]

  • Gap between NM and HD is a bit high, try to reduce difficulty on this one
  1. 00:44:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whistle spam?
  2. 01:08:878 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739304
  3. 01:12:984 (3) - Move to the same line of (2)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739305
  4. 01:45:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whistle spam?
[MX]
  1. 00:10:142 (1,2,3,4) - This slowdown doesn't fit with song, map it with 1.0 SV
  2. 00:20:247 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. 01:06:352 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same spacing or at least make a progressive line, it's confusing to sightread
    Great diff, good job!
Nemis
847 posts
Joined May 2012
Nemis
[MX]
00:10:773 (3) - I suggest to reverse selection here and 00:11:089 (4) - here too (so the sliders go up)
00:14:878 (4,1) - I suggest to reverse their positions since the pattern flows better
00:16:142 (4,1) - Make a blanket here
For sliders like 00:21:984 (3) - this one I suggest to do the first and the last part with the same inclination:
SPOILER
00:27:826 (6,7,8) - Increase this spacing
00:29:089 (1) - I suggest to stack this slider under 00:28:300 (7) - 's end
00:30:194 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Increase this pattern's spacing
00:34:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here you did a nice flowing, but not 00:35:721 (9,10,11,12) - here. It flows horrible, I really suggest to fix it so it will be better to play
00:48:036 (4) - I suggest to reverse the selection, it flows a lot
00:53:089 (6,7,8) - I suggest to change it to the pattern in this screenshot:
SPOILER
01:00:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I suggest to change the rhythm as in this screenshot:
SPOILER
01:03:194 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't flow so good, I suggest to change it in something else
01:06:826 (8,1) - Unstack them, I suggest to move 01:06:826 (8) - at x:124 y:280 for example
01:16:931 (6) - I suggest to move this circle on 01:16:457 (4) - 's head, the pattern would be really better
01:18:668 (6) - Move this slider at x:276 y:228, testplay it and you'll understand my suggestion
01:24:352 (8,9,1) - Fix this blanket
01:36:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest to use 01:32:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream's spacing here too
I like this difficulty!

[HD]
Please, put OD6 or OD7, OD5 is awful here D: HP6 too
00:13:142 (6,1) - I suggest to make a blanket here
00:18:194 (5,1,2,3) - I suggest to make a blanket here too
00:44:247 (11) - I suggest to add a note here
00:50:247 (3,4,1) - This stack under 00:49:300 (1) - this slider is not a good idea, if you play it you see an awful stack
00:55:615 (1) - Here is missing a clap I think (on his end)
01:03:194 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket
01:11:405 (4,5,1) - Same as above
01:14:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above again
01:27:194 (1,2) - ^
01:29:721 (1) - I suggest to move this slider to x:404 y:72 to create a triangle 01:29:089 (8,9,1) - here
01:38:247 (5) - I suggest to move this slider a bit down to create a blanket 01:37:931 (4,5) - here and a triangle 01:37:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - here
01:44:878 (5) - I suggest to add a note here

[NM]
Nothing important to say, I only suggest to put HP4

[EZ]
00:03:194 (1) - Start this spinner 00:01:615 (1) - here 'cause the vocals start here and 00:03:194 (1) - here there is anything. I suggest to decrease his end's volume
I hope this map will get ranked :) I like it!
DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

Leader wrote:

Hello, m4m :3

[EZ]
  1. 00:06:352 (1,2,1) - Try something like this, it plays better http://puu.sh/2MVXQ.jpg
  2. 00:12:352 (2) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/738474
  3. 00:18:352 (3) - Move to x:184 y:24
  4. 00:44:247 (1) - This will be much easier for beginners, move slider like that
  5. 01:12:036 (1) - Move second slider point to x:324 y:312
  6. 01:16:142 (2,3) - Like this flows better for beginners (remember to fix spacing!)
[NM]
  1. 00:30:352 (2,3,1) - This should flow better
    SPOILER
  2. 00:56:563 (4) - Stack on 00:56:878 (1) - ?
  3. 00:51:352 (3,4) - They shouldn't be covered by slider, they are a bit hard to hit from Normal players and it will be worse.
  4. 01:01:457 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:41:089 (3) - x:252 y:220
[HD]

  • Gap between NM and HD is a bit high, try to reduce difficulty on this one
  1. 00:44:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whistle spam?
  2. 01:08:878 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739304
  3. 01:12:984 (3) - Move to the same line of (2)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739305
  4. 01:45:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whistle spam?
[MX]
  1. 00:10:142 (1,2,3,4) - This slowdown doesn't fit with song, map it with 1.0 SV for shape and for its tempo, I think I should keep this.
  2. 00:20:247 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  3. 01:06:352 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same spacing or at least make a progressive line, it's confusing to sightread I didnt fix this cuz I wanted to express the sound there
    Great diff, good job!

Thanks for a mod!! :)
Arrival
1,418 posts
Joined June 2012
Arrival
Hi ! From my queue.

[HD]
00:36:352 (9) - Offscreen a bit, put it just a bit up.
01:36:668 (8) - Clap here ? (Suggestion)

[MX]
00:10:142 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand why your sliders slow down here, first i thought you were playing with the clours of your beats, but no, so i don't agree with your choice of reducing the speed here.
00:16:457 (1) - Better blanket here ?
00:20:247 (1,2,3,4) - Here too, or at least, put the red combo here (?)
00:51:510 (7) - Clap here ?
00:57:510 (3,4) - Why not use two 1/2 sliders ? To fit better with the second part of your combo
01:06:984 (1) - Just a question : Why did you choose 0.84 ? :D
01:29:721 (1,2,3,4,5) - Put this stream up a bit
01:44:721 (8,1) - i think you have to place an other circle on 01:44:878 -, you miss a note of the music here, and i think this is'nt the moment to place an anti jump. This part of the music goes crazy a bit, i really find this sad to not place a beat here.

[NM]
00:30:668 (2) - Clap ?
00:37:300 (2,3) - Please put them up a bit
01:37:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Why did you stop use whistle sample ?

[EZ]
01:23:405 (2) - Blanket here
01:27:194 (1) - Blanket the 01:25:931 (3) -


Your mapset is really good ! Starred !
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi o/
Summoned here because M4M
Sorry for late, here I go~

Placement is good, I'll just point some things that bothered me about rhythm.

[EZ]
00:12:352 (2) - Shorten this slider by 1/2 beat, making the reverse arrow be in 00:12:826, sounds a lot better to me.
00:19:773 (2) - Move this to 00:20:089, it'd sound better imo.
Remember fix placement if you do what I pointed above.

[NM]
00:08:089 (3) - Begin this in 00:08:247, I know you make this to follow the piano, but as you're following guitar in previous notes, this is quite ankward while playing, most of my suggestions in this diff will be related to this.
00:08:878 (1) - Remove the reverse and make 00:10:142 (2) begin in 00:09:984, as an additional option, you can add a circle in 00:09:668, like this

00:13:142 (3) - Begin in 00:13:300.
00:18:194 (3) - Begin in 00:18:352.
00:18:984 - Something like I said in 00:08:878.
00:23:247 (3) - Begin in 00:23:405.
00:51:826 (1) - This stack may be a bit confusing for beginners after that 1/2 circles before this, I recommend unstack and move it elsewhere.
01:01:931 (1) - As above.

[HD]
Some changes in beat placement, I felt it a bit weird while playing, this is just my opinion, feel free to follow or ignore.
00:07:615 (5) - Do this instead, I felt the guitar should be hit instead begin in a slider.

00:09:826 (4) - Maybe split this in two circles.
00:14:878 (4) - Do this, reason explained a bit above

00:19:931 (4) - Maybe split in two circles.

[MX]
Same as HD, some suggestions in beat placement.
00:09:826 (4) - Maybe plit in two circles
00:14:878 (4) - ^
00:19:931 (4) - ^
01:06:352 (3,4,5,6,7) - I felt this is a bit weird, maybe make this stream equally spaced?

I felt this mapset so nice, take a star, good luck o/
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
A quick check before both of us having an afk trip ;_; 文章にわかりづらいところがあったら遠慮なく私に聞かせてくださいね！

[General]
  1. The repeat arrow is now performing as white color on the light grey combo, which may cause a sight-reading problem on repeat sliders. I would suggest to adjust a lighter color here, please apply this code to every difficulty: 
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 128,0,128
    Combo2 : 255,0,0
    Combo3 : 202,202,202
    SPOILER
    ======>
[NM]
00:08:089 (3,1) - Uh oh, mistake? These two objects should be placed with 1.00x spacing
00:51:352 (3,4,1) - Ahaha, I suppose normal players will receive a miss here apparently, I'd say this combination isn't friendly to rookie players. Please replace two circles (3,4) to a single 1/2 slider, then unstack (1)
SPOILER

00:53:089 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - And yup, these stuffs may need an adjustment on spacing. It would be better to leave a screenshot and code here instead of wording the changes
SPOILER
Code from 00:50:563 (2) - to 00:55:615 (3) - 
292,320,50563,2,0,L|403:348,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,276,51352,2,0,L|224:232,1,55
292,144,51826,6,0,B|232:152|192:100|192:100|124:120,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,196,53089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,88,53405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,56,53721,2,0,P|280:24|292:0,2,55
216,152,54352,6,0,P|196:204|152:236,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,54984,2,0,P|83:322|136:352,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,344,55615,2,0,B|304:344|304:344|352:360|352:360|420:360,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:01:457 (3,4,1) - ^, same process. I would leave this part for you this time xD

[EZ]
00:01:615 (1) - Seems it's the only spinner which used from the beginning through all difficulties, is there any reason for using a Easy-specific spinner? Of course I'm not saying it's a bad idea for adding a spinner on current position, it could also avoid the "same score conflict" on score board. In a short word, add a spinner to all difficulties, or remove it from Easy

Please call me back asap orz!
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
I remember playing this song in stepmania back in the day. Anyways, good luck with your map. :3

DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070
waitwait gimme time to fix omg

anyway thanks everybody!
DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

Nemis wrote:

[MX]
00:10:773 (3) - I suggest to reverse selection here and 00:11:089 (4) - here too (so the sliders go up)
00:14:878 (4,1) - I suggest to reverse their positions since the pattern flows better
00:16:142 (4,1) - Make a blanket here
For sliders like 00:21:984 (3) - this one I suggest to do the first and the last part with the same inclination:
SPOILER
00:27:826 (6,7,8) - Increase this spacing
00:29:089 (1) - I suggest to stack this slider under 00:28:300 (7) - 's end
00:30:194 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Increase this pattern's spacing
00:34:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here you did a nice flowing, but not 00:35:721 (9,10,11,12) - here. It flows horrible, I really suggest to fix it so it will be better to play
00:48:036 (4) - I suggest to reverse the selection, it flows a lot
00:53:089 (6,7,8) - I suggest to change it to the pattern in this screenshot:
SPOILER
01:00:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I suggest to change the rhythm as in this screenshot:
SPOILER
01:03:194 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't flow so good, I suggest to change it in something else I thought again and again but I found no way to replace these.....
01:06:826 (8,1) - Unstack them, I suggest to move 01:06:826 (8) - at x:124 y:280 for example
01:16:931 (6) - I suggest to move this circle on 01:16:457 (4) - 's head, the pattern would be really better
01:18:668 (6) - Move this slider at x:276 y:228, testplay it and you'll understand my suggestion
01:24:352 (8,9,1) - Fix this blanket
01:36:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest to use 01:32:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream's spacing here too
I like this difficulty!

[HD]
Please, put OD6 or OD7, OD5 is awful here D: HP6 too
00:13:142 (6,1) - I suggest to make a blanket here
00:18:194 (5,1,2,3) - I suggest to make a blanket here too
00:44:247 (11) - I suggest to add a note here
00:50:247 (3,4,1) - This stack under 00:49:300 (1) - this slider is not a good idea, if you play it you see an awful stack
00:55:615 (1) - Here is missing a clap I think (on his end)
01:03:194 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket
01:11:405 (4,5,1) - Same as above
01:14:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above again
01:27:194 (1,2) - ^
01:29:721 (1) - I suggest to move this slider to x:404 y:72 to create a triangle 01:29:089 (8,9,1) - here
01:38:247 (5) - I suggest to move this slider a bit down to create a blanket 01:37:931 (4,5) - here and a triangle 01:37:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - here
01:44:878 (5) - I suggest to add a note here

[NM]
Nothing important to say, I only suggest to put HP4

[EZ]
00:03:194 (1) - Start this spinner 00:01:615 (1) - here 'cause the vocals start here and 00:03:194 (1) - here there is anything. I suggest to decrease his end's volume
I hope this map will get ranked :) I like it!
Fixed most of your suggestions except the red colored quotations. thanks so much!! :)
DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

litoluna wrote:

こんにちは~
ModRequestありがとうございます
[General]

  • fine
全て提案です！

[EZ]
  1. 00:45:510 (3) - Sliderで00:45:826 - まで伸ばして配置してみてはどうでしょうか。00:45:826 -の音もとれて00:46:142 (4,5) - にもつなぎやすくなると思いました。 :)
[NM]
  1. 00:07:773 (2,3) - 音取りの提案です。
    Back音で取っている(2)の音が00:08:089 - まで伸びてるためSliderを使って伸ばしたほうが合っていると思いました。
  2. 00:12:826 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:17:878 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:22:931 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:44:563 (2,3,4) - HitSoundの提案です。
    00:44:563 (2) - 始端のclapをremoveしリバース部分にclap
    00:45:510 (3) - 始端にclap
    Backの音が00:46:773 (1) - に向かってじょじょに大きくなってきているので音付けの変化をつけてもいいと思いました。
HDとMXは自分の技量では指摘できなかったです :(

short mod sorry (ﾉω･､)
Good Luck~ヾ(o･д･)ﾉ

いえいえ＾＾　ありがとうございました！！ :)
Pokie
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Joined December 2009
Pokie
[General]
  1. オフセットちょっと早かったのかな・・・Offset+12 (1314 1312) Please resnap all notes+timing sections after changes
[NM]
00:08:878 (1) - Not yet fixed
00:08:089 (3,1) - Uh oh, mistake? These two objects should be placed with 1.00x spacing
[MX]
01:41:405 (8,11) - Unsnapped slider's end

(´・ω・｀)
DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

Pokie wrote:

[General]
  1. オフセットちょっと早かったのかな・・・Offset+12 (1314) Please resnap all notes+timing sections after changes
[NM]
00:08:878 (1) - Not yet fixed
00:08:089 (3,1) - Uh oh, mistake? These two objects should be placed with 1.00x spacing
[MX]
01:41:405 (8,11) - Unsnapped slider's end

(´・ω・｀)

え。。。直したのに。。
とにかくフィックスしました！
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
(｀・ω・´)ｼｬｷｰﾝ
NatsumeRin
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Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Interesting.
Apricot
565 posts
Joined July 2010
Apricot
おめでとう！
LQA20Ans
1,344 posts
Joined November 2011
LQA20Ans
첫랭 축하드려요. Gratz!

그리고 님이 트롤 맵퍼라니 전 나가죽어야할듯.
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
modできなくてごめんなさい :o
good mapです :)
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,191 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
Goooooooooood!!! congratz
MineC24
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Joined May 2010
MineC24
첫 랭맵 축하해요~~
happy623
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Joined April 2010
happy623
congratzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz :) :) :)
y u c a
844 posts
Joined April 2009
y u c a
おめでとございます(・∀・)！
DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070
Thanks y'all :)
Arrival
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Joined June 2012
Arrival
Nice :D
Sonnyc
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Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
ㅊㅋ
lkx_Shore
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Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
So fuuny map :D
Metro
692 posts
Joined April 2010
Metro
great map
xsrsbsns
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Joined July 2010
xsrsbsns
this is already ranked... late grats, and wow great map!
(honestly my loss for not remembering this sooner)
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