kanpakyin wrote:

Hi.

[General]

1. Hitsounds are too loud. Some hitsounds covered the music and instrument, thus I would suggest using normal 70% volume. Fixed.

[Oni]

1. 00:29:370 (52,53,54) - kdd doesn't fit the music that much. I prefer using ddk to fit the high pitch (white tick) there. No, mainly because I don't want to have 3 ddk in a row.
2. 00:37:236 (110,111,112,113) - Diplets sound weird. The rhythm is quite awkward here. I would suggest changing it into simple 1/2 or even 1/1 and then it should be much better. I made this diplets because I want to have a bit of pattern variation.
3. 00:55:711 (199,200,201,202,203) - hum...This 5-plet doesn't make any sense in my opinion. It doesn't fit the music at all. This would be better if you can change it to 1/2 or triplet + 1/2 Well, same as above.
4. 01:22:236 (355,356,357,358,359,360,361) - ^similar to this. Change this to a 5-plets + 1/2 would be nice. ^
5. 01:39:614 (464,465,466) - Same as 00:29:370 - Same thing here as well.
6. 01:43:181 (492) - kat here? Hmm... no, I don't like it.
7. 01:47:480 (518,519,520,521) - Again. The diplets rhythm. Would suggest to change it. Same as 00:37:236.
8. 02:07:053 (638) - Change this to kat to fit the instrument behind the music? Oh, you're right, fixed.
9. The inferior part is much better.

[Muzukashii]

1. 01:26:626 (299) - How about changing this to big kat because the pitch here is higher than 01:26:260 - so that a big kat can fit the music perfectly. This big don is on purpose, there are a lot of K here so to have a bit of variation I added a D.
2. 02:25:163 (234) - ^ ^
3. 02:45:650 (46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - I'm afraid that this is too hard for muzu level because the big notes are irregular (not placed at white tick) and double k k (1/2 space) with a big don would make confusion to some player. Hmm... well, I could do this to make this pattern a bit easier but I don't really like it, the current pattern actually fit the song.
4. 03:04:309 (138,139) - How about change these notes to big kat since the pitch of this part is the highest. Done.
5. 03:28:454 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72) - These finish could be removed. First, they don't really fit the music, they don't fit the atmosphere there, big notes were supposed to be used on accent point. Second, x X x X x X pattern is too hard for muzu diff. To be honest I think this pattern fits the song a lot, also I don't think it's too hard for a muzu, it's a pretty basic pattern.

[Futsuu]

1. 01:22:784 (186) - kat here? Ok.
2. 03:04:309 (508,509) - How about change these notes to big kat since the pitch of this part is the highest. Done.
3. 03:18:576 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - This 1/2 chain is too long for Futsuu diff. Also the pattern is way too complicated. Change it please. I want to have higher density here, I know that this is a bit hard for a Futsuu but this is actually what I want.

[Kantan]

1. 02:05:407 (32) - Change this to kat and then change 02:06:139 (33) - back to don? I want to have a bit of variation here. (02:01:748 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36) - d k d k d d k kkd)
2. 03:26:626 (22,23,24,25,26) - These big notes might be too hard for newbie. Try to fix it please. Meh, I could delete some dons here to make things easier but I don't like the result, also I don't want to remove these big notes, they really fit here.

Mayzel wrote:

Ito Hakanaki You no Gotoku
だと思いますがね

xxheroxx wrote:

Uh... "いと儚き燿の如く" is the correct title afaik, just google it and you'll find tons of result which lead to this song, same for romanised title.