RULES
3-4 star is appreciated but will mod higher. may not be as good as that range
This is my first attempt at modding, take everything I say with alot of salt
Currently only accepting two at a time
Idol kpop will get higher priority
Please mod my map well, im still trying to learn how to do it

My Map
beatmapsets/1374476
Only one diff right now working on others

beatmapsets/1374656#osu/2841892
Would love a mod on the 5 star diff and have just the same amount of modding experience as you do, but I will do my best to provide noteworthy criticisms

sulfate wrote:

beatmapsets/1374656#osu/2841892
Would love a mod on the 5 star diff and have just the same amount of modding experience as you do, but I will do my best to provide noteworthy criticisms

00:07:770 (1,2,3) - a little hard to read, slider is coming in as the previous one is fading out
00:09:770 (1,2,3) - same thing here
00:11:770 (1,2,3) - here too
00:13:103 (3,1) - Jump was hard to read, and a little far for what the distance snap at the section was
00:20:270 (3) - hard to read
00:21:103 (3,1) - same as here ~00:13:270 (1)~ but at least it was consistent
00:22:270 (2) - hard to read
00:29:103 (3,1) - once again
00:24:603 (1,2,3) - i get why you did it like this for the next portion, but for consistencies sake, i wouldve kept it the same as here ~00:23:603 (1,2,3)~
00:27:603 (1,2,3) - same here
00:29:103 (3,1) - jump again
00:29:770 (4) - would recommend a new combo here
00:30:770 (5) - might consider shortening this half a beat
00:32:270 (6) - new combo here to
00:37:103 (3,1) - i like this one
00:44:770 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this was really hard to read,
00:46:770 (3,3) - I would have these peek out from under the slider a bit so they're visble
00:48:103 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe scale the spacing the down a little bit, specifically 4 and 5, far jump for the short time between
00:50:103 (4,5,6) - move this a little, hard to read it since it comes right of the previous one
00:51:103 (8,9) - way to far
00:53:770 (5) - peek it out slightly or reverse it
00:55:104 (3,4) - spacing again
00:58:103 (3,4,3,4,3,4,3,4,5,3,4,3,4) - spacing and consider kiai for this
01:20:149 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe increase spacing a little bit to compensate for the previous jumps
01:22:149 (1,2) - i would rotate this so that the slider head is at the tail of the previous one
01:22:816 (3) - i would make this more consistent with the other ones similar to it
01:22:816 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - - spacing is misleading and inconsistent
01:26:982 (2,3,1,2,3) - scale spacing down a bit
01:30:316 (5) - new combo maybe
01:34:816 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - spacing here is large, with this 01:35:149 (3,1) - being shorter than 01:34:982 (2,3) - when it should be the same or the opposite
01:42:816 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:43:316 (1) - fix stack or maybe dont stack
01:53:149 (3,4) - little far, but not terrible
01:55:816 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing
01:59:816 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing
02:03:816 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing
02:08:316 (2,3) - spacing is really far compared to the other jumps in this section alone
02:10:835 (4) - new combo
02:11:168 (5,6) - spacing
02:11:835 (1,2,3,4) - why was this mapped differently?
02:12:835 (5) - new combo
02:13:335 (7) - slider is too long, overlapping with next beat
02:13:835 (8) - new combo
02:14:835 (11) - new combo
02:16:863 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - spacing
02:20:213 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - inconsistent spacing
02:23:380 (3) - poke it out from the slider
02:23:713 (1,2,3) - why was this mapped visually different than this ~02:22:713 (1,2,3)~
02:24:713 (4) - new combo
02:24:880 (1) - dont make this new combo
02:24:713 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - then spacing again
02:27:213 (4,5,6,4,5,6) - these jumps should be the same distance
02:30:880 (7) - new combo
02:34:546 (1,2,3) - why are these here
02:34:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
02:38:880 (7) - new combo
02:42:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing
02:46:880 (1,2,3) - these should be same distance
02:50:546 (1,2,3) - stack em or make em jumps
02:51:213 (4,5,6) - little less distance
02:52:546 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as the two above
02:54:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same as above
02:58:546 (1,2,3) - bad flow
02:59:213 (4,5,6) - spacing
03:00:546 (1,2,3) - increase a bit to make it consistent with other 1,2,3's you have
03:01:213 (4,5,6) - spacing
03:03:880 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing
03:05:880 (1,2,3,4) - these are almost the same distance apart form each other despite having a full beat between 2 and 3
03:07:880 (1,2,3,4) - 1 should be further away from previous beat, then everything should be closer
03:09:880 (1,2,3) - bad flow
03:11:880 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
03:12:880 (1,2,3,4,5) - why was it spaced like this? timeline is short gap, short gap, short gap, long gap. but play-field has big gap, big gap, big gap, short gap
03:13:713 (5,1,2,3) - make the gap between 5 and 1 bigger, or gaps between 1, 2, and 3 shorter
03:14:546 (3,1) - shorten this distance
03:14:880 (1,2,3) - I see same distance on timeline but shortening distance on play-field
03:19:880 (1,2,3) - scale spacing down, but keep it increasing distance
03:22:420 (1) - non new-combo
03:28:920 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing
03:37:086 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - spacing
From 3:21:920 to the end, make it 2/3 beat sliders except for ~03:28:920 (1,2,3,1,2,3)~ and ~03:36:920 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1)~

beatmapsets/1359774#osu/2832660 could you do a NM for the 4,3 and 2 star please

Tokubetsu wrote:

beatmapsets/1359774#osu/2832660 could you do a NM for the 4,3 and 2 star please

It's a m4m queue?

this map has too much potential to be made into a ztrot style map
I like the usages of triangles and distance snap
00:00:684 (2,3) - maybe make this a slider to make the beginning less "all over the place"?
00:04:240 (2,3) - same here
00:05:795 (6,7,8) - spacing of the 7 between the 6 and 8
00:06:684 (9,1,2,3,4) - find a way to make the firstlyric of the song more exciting?
00:07:795 (1,2) - theres no reason for the 2, make this a slider
00:11:351 (3) - the curve of the slider is too sharp
00:15:573 (2) - make this a new combo
00:17:351 (5,6) - add another note to make it a triplet
00:23:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would say completely rethink this part, the 3 is in a weird spot and doesnt really fit
00:26:684 (5) - lessen slider curve
00:28:462 (7,8,9) - having it go straight diagonal left doesnt flow well
00:29:351 (1,2,3,4) - i dont think these should be horizontal jumps, you should rerplace them with circles going in one direction
00:34:906 (1) - lessen slider curve
00:40:239 (2,3) - i think the g/k syllable should one of the vertical jumps and not a slider end
00:44:684 (1,2,3) - spacing between hitcircles
00:49:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the songs drum pitches go down, so i think the final 4 hitcircles should face downward in some way
01:03:128 (3) - i think you should make the three part of a triangle
01:03:351 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - change the curve of the second half of th stream
01:04:573 (3,4,5,6) - maybe change the 3-4 to be sliders?
01:10:239 (1,2,3,4) - move the 4 up to coincide with consistency
01:08:906 (5) - move that slightly left/down so that the movement from the previous slider is more flowy
01:14:018 (6) - have this slider be as long as the previous red on for consistency
01:18:239 (4) - angle the slider 90 degrees so that the player doesnt notelock the slider
01:23:351 (3) - slider curve
01:26:017 (2) - slider curve
01:40:906 (5) - make a new combo
01:43:128 (5) - have slider end on the white line?
01:46:017 (3,4) - having two parallel sliders with different curve isnt aesthetically pleasing
01:52:240 (1,2) - two differently curved sliders one after the other isnt pleasing to the eye
01:53:128 (2,3) - i think the g/k syllable should one of the vertical jumps and not a slider end
02:02:017 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - slider should be rotated to the left so the stream is more pleasing to the eye
02:19:240 (3,4,5,6) - spacng for all objects
02:21:351 (4) - have the 2 circles before the circle more glide into the slider
02:42:017 (1) - have slider end on the previous white line
02:52:684 (1,2,3) - slider curve
03:20:906 (5) - odd placemnt
03:10:240 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pattern is too repetitive

overall not a bad map

beatmapsets/1379266#osu/2850098

not rlly experienced modding but i will try to mod for u