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scarlet.MP5 - Ore no Medley ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai

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popner
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年1月15日星期三 at 16:02:23

Artist: scarlet.MP5
Title: Ore no Medley ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai
Tags: collab collaboration Scorpiour kanpakyin spboxer3 LKs eveless Vocaloid Vocaloid2 Vocaloid3 Claris Hanazawa Kana 花澤香菜 Shiomiya Shiori 汐宮栞 Luo Tian Yi Tianyi 洛天依 H.K.君 H.K.Kun Perfume Hatsune Miku 初音ミク ryo Kagamine Len 鏡音レン halyosy Iguchi Yuka 井口裕香 livetune Megpoid GUMI メグッポイド グミ 8#Prince Kasane Teto 重音テト gojimaji-p ゴジマジP AcFun AC娘 Famifami Mart KTG 猫柳 Mao Liu irony コイノシルシ Koi no Shirushi 千年食谱颂 Qian Nian Shi Pu Song ねえ Nee メルト Melt Fire Flower Fire◎Flower 白金ディスコ Platinum Disco 恋愛サーキュレーション Renai Circulation Redial Electric Star Smiling おちゃめ機能 Ochame Kinou Mischievous Function Acfun 入站歌 Ru Zhan Ge Bilibili Yeah 幸福就在你身边 Xing Fu Jiu Zai Ni Shen Bian 俺の妹がこんなに可愛いわけがない Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai 神のみぞ知るセカイ Kami Nomi zo Shiru Sekai The World God Only Knows 偽物語 Nisemonogatari 化物語 Bakemonogatari
BPM: 160
Filesize: 10649kb
Play Time: 07:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Remix (5 stars, 1470 notes)
Download: scarlet.MP5 - Ore no Medley ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai
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我的串烧不可能那么可爱(俺の串焼きがこんなに可愛いわけがない)
http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av510379/
Rimix by: popner, Scorpiour, kanpakyin, spboxer3, LKs, eveless.
Last edited by popner , edited 27 times in total.
popner
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00:00:007 - 00:30:007 irony -------------------------------------------popner
00:30:007 - 01:18:007 コイノシルシ -------------------------------Scorpiour
01:18:007 - 01:57:007 千年食谱颂 ----------------------------------Scorpiour
01:57:007 - 02:09:007 ねえ -------------------------------------------popner
02:09:007 - 02:21:007 ねえ -------------------------------------------break
02:21:007 - 02:58:507 Melt --------------------------------------------kpy
02:58:507 - 03:27:007 Fire Flower -----------------------------------popner
03:27:007 - 03:42:007 Fire Flower -----------------------------------break
03:42:007 - 04:06:007 白金ディスコ---------------------------------kpy
04:06:007 - 04:30:007 恋愛サーキュレーション -----------------sp3
04:30:007 - 05:06:007 Redial ------------------------------------------LKs
05:06:007 - 05:18:007 Electric Star + Smiling --------------------break
05:18:007 - 05:54:007 Electric Star + Smiling --------------------popner
05:54:007 - 06:12:007 おちゃめ機能 --------------------------------eveless
06:12:007 - 06:36:007 Acfun入站歌 ---------------------------------sp3
06:36:007 - 07:00:007 Bilibili Yeah -----------------------------------sp3
07:00:007 - 07:24:007 Bilibili Yeah ------------------------------------popner
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digiaria
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庆祝开坑~~~~~~~~~~~ :)
Scorpiour
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00:30:007 - 01:18:007 コイノシルシ
01:18:007 - 01:57:007 千年食谱颂

抢座位！
mintong89
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05:54:007 - 06:12:007 おちゃめ機能

求给这段 大大感谢~

Edit: http://puu.sh/2qGWN 你看看吧行不行
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AcFun入站歌做好了 http://puu.sh/2qBHg
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前排支持!
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Pokie wrote:

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我是来打酱油的



popner edit: (irc mod log)
SPOILER
2013-05-10 00:09 popner: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/233726 DJ scarlet.MP5 - Ore no Medley ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai]
2013-05-10 00:09 popner: 试图?
2013-05-10 00:10 chickgod: 嗯，下
2013-05-10 00:12 chickgod: 能完？
2013-05-10 00:15 chickgod: 感觉那些二连好奇怪
2013-05-10 00:15 popner: 。。
2013-05-10 00:15 popner: 按节奏下的啊
2013-05-10 00:15 popner: 前面两首确实比较怪
2013-05-10 00:16 chickgod: 嗯。。。
2013-05-10 00:16 popner: 这歌是5个人做的
2013-05-10 00:17 chickgod: 。。。
2013-05-10 00:18 chickgod: 我室友睡觉了
2013-05-10 00:18 popner: 。。
2013-05-10 00:18 chickgod: 感觉第二首开始就坑爹了
2013-05-10 00:18 chickgod: 后面各种读图
2013-05-10 00:18 popner: 第一首是我做的
2013-05-10 00:18 popner: 第四首是我做的
2013-05-10 00:19 chickgod: 。。。
2013-05-10 00:20 chickgod: 我刚才玩到第四首了？
2013-05-10 00:20 popner: t/124610
2013-05-10 00:20 popner: 你玩到第7首
2013-05-10 00:20 chickgod: 我觉得第一首开始那几个2连怪怪的，感觉再打一遍还会坑。。。
2013-05-10 00:21 chickgod: 后面几首虽然坑，但是节奏不奇怪
2013-05-10 00:22 popner: 第一首只有1个二连啊
2013-05-10 00:22 popner: 最开始
2013-05-10 00:22 popner: 第一首开始前的鼓
2013-05-10 00:23 chickgod: 。。。说明我对第一首哪里截止的不清楚
2013-05-10 00:23 chickgod: 。。
2013-05-10 00:23 popner: 说明这remix神衔接
2013-05-10 00:24 chickgod: 。。。
2013-05-10 00:24 chickgod: 感觉略2
2013-05-10 00:24 chickgod: 带坏风气
2013-05-10 00:25 popner: 。
2013-05-10 00:25 chickgod: 干脆站着茅坑布拉斯
2013-05-10 00:25 chickgod: 这个主意怎样
2013-05-10 00:25 chickgod: 。。
2013-05-10 00:26 chickgod: 应该是第二首有几个二连不爽
2013-05-10 00:27 popner: 嗯
2013-05-10 00:27 chickgod: 00:34:413 (6) -
2013-05-10 00:27 chickgod: 比如这里很不爽！
2013-05-10 00:27 popner: 就这样
2013-05-10 00:27 chickgod: 00:50:632 (7) -
2013-05-10 00:28 chickgod: 这里更不爽。。
2013-05-10 00:28 chickgod: 刚才那个好歹有个古典。。这个7是什么情况？
2013-05-10 00:29 popner: 。
2013-05-10 00:29 chickgod: 。
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坐到大后排，才发现这场戏已经结束了 Q^Q
Irreversible
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Hi there! Summoned via PM b: Why would you want me to mod a map which in graveyard for over 4 months now?

First of all, most of them are personal opinions! If I say something looks nicer, it's more subjective stuff, but it'd still nice if you think about them after all.

[General]

There is actually some unrankable stuff!

06:12:194 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
06:12:569 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
06:12:757 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
06:13:507 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
06:13:882 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Please snap those.

Add some tags, such as collab, Scorpiour, kanpakyin, spboxer3, LKs, eveless, vocaloid and maybe all the singers who are in there?


Will there be a SB or something? :D You could make it like that it changes the BG with the songchange. Would look pretty nice I guess, and it wouldn't be too hard to find some Vocaloid pictures. Don't forget collab names btw!

Hitsounds are where? :S Please add some.

Alright, enough General

[Remix]

I'll put every part in spoilers, so you can read it easier.

popner
00:04:319 (4,5,1,2) - This change would be more for consistency, to follow your placement pattern before. Let me show you what I'm talking about:
00:00:007 (1,2) - up and down 00:01:507 (1,2) - left and right 00:03:007 (1,2) - up and down 00:04:507 (1,2) - up and down. So what about left and right 00:04:507 (1,2) - as well? :)

00:07:882 (2) - This circle here covers the same 'beat' as 00:07:132 (5) - . Yet there's no jump, you could put one, with the same DS.

00:09:944 (3) - Very nazi - Move this one 1 grid up, to make the same distance between 00:09:569 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/4qjI1.jpg

00:15:944 (6) - 00:15:569 (3,4,5) - Goes downwards, so I suppose it flows better if you put 6 to somewhere like 300 88. The up and down part created is pretty cool as well.

00:22:319 (1,2,3) - Not sure about this, but I guess the strong beats are on the white points (00:22:507 - here for example) It's weird if you can't click them, so I suggest that you make those sliders start on a white slider.

00:24:382 (2) - In my opinion, this blue tick isn't fitting here. I'd rather adjust it 00:24:007 (1) - here and make this one longer! Try it, it's completely up to you though.

Comment: Solid part, my suggestions were only about consistency. It flows pretty nice though.

01:57:569 (2,3) - Cirlce 2 is on a beat which you can hear VERY very bad.. it plays awkward imo. If I were you, I'd skip that beat like you've done b4.

02:01:507 (1,2,3) - I can understand that jump here, yet it flows a bit bad because 02:00:757 (4,5,6,1,2) - this part is flowing really good. http://puu.sh/4ql7q.jpg Try that once, i also created a triangle jump there, where jump 4 to 5 is still there.

Comment: Small part and except those 1/4 things mentioned above i don't have smth to say. The flow issue is smth you should also eliminate imo.
03:20:444 (4,5) - I would unstack those two, since there is a quite big pressure behind those two beats. It would be a waste of a jump imo if you leave them stacked!

Comment: Really great part, nothing to say here! I really like the way how you placed the sliders, since they aren't exactly straight for example 03:15:757 (5) - this one!

05:52:788 (2,3) - Well I hear that you wanna build up pressure here, but this is just a frustrating combo breaker. Please space it properly, or maybe even delete 2.

05:46:507 (1) - What about applying a slight curve to the left here? Just a really slight one. Would make it a bit more special imo!

05:51:944 (4) - Slider end of this is not perfectly stacked with 05:50:444 (5) - . You might not see it ingame, yet it bothers me, haha!

Comment: I agree with the rhythm you've placed here, and the jumps are fitting. Your mapping style has a good quality.

07:24:044 - The end seems so empty, what about a finishing spinner? ^-^

Comment: Wow, this part is so cool with the funny sliders! A really good finish for the map good job!

Scorpiour
00:32:632 (7,1) - I can't really hear something here, and it's weird to click them. A slider would create a nice bridge here though, wouldn't it?

00:34:413 - Up to you but i'm a bit split up about that circle, it's placed on nothing .. You could fill this place though pretty well if you place a slider starting here 00:34:132 - to here 00:34:319 - .

00:39:007 (1) - Could be rather confusing due to the spacing, I supposed a 1/4 note here. I'd place them properly, to avoid those situations.

00:41:632 (3,4,5,6,1) - Well, just aesthetics but what about making this a nicer made curve?

00:44:069 (6,7,8) - Pretty ugly overlap here, and you've never put one here before, so I don't assume i'd hurt your mapping style suggesting this: http://puu.sh/4qk6E.jpg Special here: slider start 7 is stacked with 3, what makes a cool square. 00:44:819 (8) - To avoid something ugly here, just place it to 416 308

00:51:382 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Uh i love patterns like that!

00:53:444 (5) - Maybe adjust a NC here? To keep consistency with your other pattern before, well depends if you made NC for patterns though, but yeah.

00:54:757 (4,5) - Flow suggestion here: http://puu.sh/4qkwG.jpg It has not been made properly, but it's enough to show you what I mean. It would this confusing stack before, and makes a nice kick slider flow which leads towards 6. Hopw you can see what i mean~

00:58:507 (2,3,4) - I liked these kind of rhythms before, but it doesn't fit here imo. Well i would palce single circles to emphasize the single words, but that might be too boring for you.

Comment: Not much to say, looks nice tbh but the only thing i'm bothered about is that you all of a sudden overused this 1/4 slider thing (01:12:194 (2,3) - like these) It can be nice to empahsize lyrics, but it has to be fitting. . You might consider changing them to some 1/2 rhythm.

01:24:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - That's probably something only I do, but I like putting NC's on patterns like that, because they look more special with more colors.

01:25:132 (7,8,1) - Well you've mapped the background very often, why ignoring this cool drrr sound? It builds up SUPER much tension, and makes the player feel super concentrated when he has to stop pushing the button to go onto the next slider. (hope you get what I mean, that's how I feel at leasT) I guess it's 1/16 rhythm or 1/8.

01:37:132 (7) - lol, exactly what I was looking for. ^ Put it there too :P

01:51:757 (6) - :( Shorten this slider to 01:51:944 - , and make a rather big jump between 01:52:132 (7,1) - . I mean, how can you ignore that.

01:51:569 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/4qkSG.jpg Try this rhythm once, to perfectly emphasize the WUB WUB sound in the background with a rather big jump (6 and 7 in the picutre) I don't understand at all why you put an even slower slider there.

Comment: Square patterns, other nice patterns, really funny to play!

kanpakyin
02:22:319 (5) - Well, I can see that you probably created a jump on purpose here, yet I don't find it very Fitting. The flow could be improved much if you simply ctrl + g 02:22:319 (5,6) - those two.

02:24:757 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - Can you explain me this Kind of NCing? Somehow it doesn't follow the song, nor the pattern itself.

02:33:007 (2) - Just some nazi, but it still bothers me: It would look neater if you'd place that http://puu.sh/4r9lI.jpg like this.

02:35:632 (5) - Slider end on a strong beat? Kinda weird to leave it out clicking. I suggest making a shorter slider and a circle to make it clickable.

02:39:569 (4,3,2) - If you wanna apply a pattern like this, please make it 100% perfect. What I mean is, that those 4 circles should build up a straight pattern going up, shouldn't they? 02:39:569 (4,3,2,1) -

02:43:319 (1) - I suggest making 0.18 DS, to make it the same like 02:43:507 (2,3) - . It would make everything more consitent, and a bit more confusing as well (I assume you wanted that?)

Comment: At some parts you mapped the Background which is sometimes quite unfitting imo; 02:46:507 (5,6,7,8,1) - For example this one, you mostly followed the vocals, but here you didn't, what makes it a bit out of place imo. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. The part Overall Looks good~

03:42:757 (4) - How about moving this some grids up so that slider end and sliderslide of those two touch each other? Looks a bit more polished to be honest.

03:43:507 - Maybe a Suggestion you'll dislike: but i would find it pretty Fitting according to the rhythm! http://puu.sh/4r9XU.jpg Try this rhythm once. It's a 1/4 slider after the 1/2 slider!

03:45:944 (6,1) - I hear the jump here definetly! Unfortunately, you've made here one as well 03:46:132 (1,2) - , which 'steals' the empahsizing of the jump before. Also, i think you should emphasize the things where are those.. strong beats, you know? What about moving it to 328 168?

03:47:069 (5) - Stack with 03:45:382 (3) - ? Just some nazi.. xD

03:54:194 (2,3) - Check those two DS once, 03:54:944 (5,6) - and then those two. shouldn't they be consistent? The second one is too less now.

04:00:007 (5) - This should definetly end on the red tick, where as this 04:00:288 (6) - should be moved back to 04:00:288 - . It's technically wrong now I suppose, according to the vocals, which you've followed before already. Don't Forget making 6 longer as well.

04:05:350 (1,1) - NC fail?

Comment: Basically just those things i've mentioned above, maybe take care of the rhythm.

sp3
04:08:257 (4) - How about CTRL + G here? It looks more consistent with the 1/4 thing before, and also it creates a kinda funny jump which is also pretty fitting imo.

04:13:132 (6,7) - Well it fits pretty well but makes it a bit unneccessary hard to play, also since this is a quite big jump with 3.54. You might consider lower it a bit.

04:22:132 (4) - I find this DS too less in comparison with the other stuff before, and since this is also 1/4 rhythm, so why not keeping it consistent?

04:22:975 (1) - Why does this actually start on a blue tick? Can't really hear anything really significant that would make sense..

04:25:132 (1,1) - I would either delete the NC here or before (same rhythm, I mentioned it above) since you didn't apply a NC there.

Comment: Many spacing unconsistency here, I mentioned some above. Well, not too many, but I hope you get what I mean. I agree to the 1/4 rhythm here (slider end on blue ticks), but well, a little bit overused imo.

06:15:757 (4,5) - Something about this rhythm bothers me, can't really say what though. It sounds like too much..

06:18:382 (1) - Remove NC, this is really unnecessary.

06:21:757 (4,5) - ^

06:24:382 (2,3,4) - The arrangement of this doesn't fit to your mapping style before, it looks odd to me. http://puu.sh/4rcA3.jpg ? Looks simpler and nicer imo. Well nicer.. maybe think about it yourself haha

06:31:319 (1) - delete NC, i think i've mentioned this somewhere before already

Comment: Is okay! Not many complaints. I like the SV changes!

06:34:882 (2) - Please move this to 420 136 or somewhere, to avoid this 'being-close' to the slider before. It also makes the spacing more consistent

06:39:007 (1,2,3,4) - This would flow nicer if 06:39:757 (5) - was closer to 4.

06:47:913 (2) - 1 grid up to make it straight? Or is it on purpose a little curve?

06:50:257 (3,4,5,6,1) - Same for these ones here, please align them straight.

06:58:413 (2,3) - Unfitting 1/4 jump. Please remove it! Something like this must fit 100%, otherwise it's confusing and.. yeah not fitting

06:59:444 (1) - Can you make this orange or something? IT's so the same color, which confuses me slightly.

Comment: Well what I've seen before of you, i'm rather disappointed. You've overused those 1/4, and the 1/4 sliders are not paralell etc, and sometimes the slight curves bother me a bit. I'm sure you could do that better :X

LKs
04:47:257 (4) - Blanket issue here, please fix it!

04:33:944 (4,5,1) - Unfitting rhythm in compare with the stuff before, it's just out of the nowhere, you've used streamy patterns before, and well i don't think this kind of rhythm is fitting here anyway. I would just follow your rhythm pattern before!

04:36:382 (2,3,4) - Technically 1/4 jumps are allowed, but they have to be really fitting, can you explain me why you've placed it like this? I would just make it simpler, with stacking, or you place it with a lower DS

04:38:444 (5,6) - Can you hear those strong beats in the background? Imo, between those two should be a jump, not between 04:38:632 (6,7) - .

04:48:007 (6) - This 04:48:382 - is a strong beat i suppose, it's weird to leave it without something to click there. I suggest making the current slider shorter and apply a circle here.

05:05:257 (1,1,2,1) - What's up with this kind of NCing?


Comment: Many jumps which aren't actually fitting, there is a way better way to apply those in this kind of song I suppose. You can often hear those strong beats, right? For example 04:38:444 (5,6) -. How about focussing on these ones more instead of random ones? Of course, leave some random ones. It makes everything funnier! But maybe not so many.

eveless
I just point out some nazi stuff, since I don't wanna hurt your mapping style. It's very different to the rest of the map, that's why I'd like to leave the personal suggestions out!

05:54:569 (3,4,5,6) - 05:56:069 (3,4,5,6) - , It makes your map looking very messy if you place them unconsistent like this. I would appreciate it if you place them with the same DS for each section. So 05:54:850 (5,6) - and 05:56:350 (5,6) - should have the same DS

06:01:132 (7,1) - This overlap looks a bit bad imo. Please find another spot to place it, stacking it with the slider start of 06:00:007 (1) - would maybe fit, to emphasize the strong beats in the background.

06:07:319 (8,9,1) - Is it supposed to be a curvy something? I suggest making it straight to make it look more polished.

Comment: As said above, the map is mapped quite cool, but looks a bit messy. Hope you can arrange them a bit nicer!

Last words

This map is so long oh god. Well, I hope I could help you improving the nazi stuff i've found, because overall, the map is really good already! I'm asking me why this is in graveyard, well anyway.

Good luuuck!~

Ask me for a star, as soon as this is in pending again.
Scorpiour
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Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
thank you for your mod Irreversible

sorry i can't reply your mod line by line since i decided to remake many pattern after i read your mod and reviewed my part. But it's really useful for me~

New version of my part Please double check the green lines that i changed a lot
code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ACBili Medley.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 5444
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6007,30007,79507,117007,141007,180007,222007,246007,270007,306007,354007,372007,396007
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Ore no Medley ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai
TitleUnicode:Ore no Medley ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai
Artist:DJ scarlet.MP5
ArtistUnicode:DJ scarlet.MP5
Creator:popner
Version:Scorpiour
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.76
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
7,375,4,2,1,100,1,0
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58975,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,30,0,0
59069,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,100,0,0
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70132,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,100,0,0
70413,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,30,0,0
70507,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,100,0,0
78757,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,100,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 26,135,255
Combo2 : 255,133,74
Combo3 : 171,244,0
Combo4 : 0,242,91

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popner
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popner
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osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
popner

Irreversible wrote:

Hi there! Summoned via PM b: Why would you want me to mod a map which in graveyard for over 4 months now?

First of all, most of them are personal opinions! If I say something looks nicer, it's more subjective stuff, but it'd still nice if you think about them after all.

[General]

There is actually some unrankable stuff!

06:12:194 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
06:12:569 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
06:12:757 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
06:13:507 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
06:13:882 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Please snap those.
Added a missed green line to fix this.

Add some tags, such as collab, Scorpiour, kanpakyin, spboxer3, LKs, eveless, vocaloid and maybe all the singers who are in there?
added

Will there be a SB or something? :D You could make it like that it changes the BG with the songchange. Would look pretty nice I guess, and it wouldn't be too hard to find some Vocaloid pictures. Don't forget collab names btw!
SB is on going

Hitsounds are where? :S Please add some.

Alright, enough General

[Remix]

I'll put every part in spoilers, so you can read it easier.

popner
00:04:319 (4,5,1,2) - This change would be more for consistency, to follow your placement pattern before. Let me show you what I'm talking about:
00:00:007 (1,2) - up and down 00:01:507 (1,2) - left and right 00:03:007 (1,2) - up and down 00:04:507 (1,2) - up and down. So what about left and right 00:04:507 (1,2) - as well? :) Since there is rhythm change in 00:04:507 (1,2), I think there is no need to keep such consistent

00:07:882 (2) - This circle here covers the same 'beat' as 00:07:132 (5) - . Yet there's no jump, you could put one, with the same DS. 00:06:757 (4,5,1) is a transition part so I put a bigger spacing here. If I stack 00:07:132 (5,2) I will lose the flow of 00:07:882 (2,3,4,5,6)

00:09:944 (3) - Very nazi - Move this one 1 grid up, to make the same distance between 00:09:569 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/4qjI1.jpg ok

00:15:944 (6) - 00:15:569 (3,4,5) - Goes downwards, so I suppose it flows better if you put 6 to somewhere like 300 88. The up and down part created is pretty cool as well. 00:15:569 (3,4,5,6,7) is a similar pattern as 00:15:007 (1,2,3), so I want to keep the pattern here

00:22:319 (1,2,3) - Not sure about this, but I guess the strong beats are on the white points (00:22:507 - here for example) It's weird if you can't click them, so I suggest that you make those sliders start on a white slider. 00:22:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6) is a transition part too and I use this kind of rhythm intentionally

00:24:382 (2) - In my opinion, this blue tick isn't fitting here. I'd rather adjust it 00:24:007 (1) - here and make this one longer! Try it, it's completely up to you though. Actually there is a drum on that blue tick, and drum is the track that I mainly follow

Comment: Solid part, my suggestions were only about consistency. It flows pretty nice though.

01:57:569 (2,3) - Cirlce 2 is on a beat which you can hear VERY very bad.. it plays awkward imo. If I were you, I'd skip that beat like you've done b4. I think it is fine, since the double drum is very clear

02:01:507 (1,2,3) - I can understand that jump here, yet it flows a bit bad because 02:00:757 (4,5,6,1,2) - this part is flowing really good. http://puu.sh/4ql7q.jpg Try that once, i also created a triangle jump there, where jump 4 to 5 is still there. Changed

Comment: Small part and except those 1/4 things mentioned above i don't have smth to say. The flow issue is smth you should also eliminate imo.
03:20:444 (4,5) - I would unstack those two, since there is a quite big pressure behind those two beats. It would be a waste of a jump imo if you leave them stacked! Changed

Comment: Really great part, nothing to say here! I really like the way how you placed the sliders, since they aren't exactly straight for example 03:15:757 (5) - this one!

05:52:788 (2,3) - Well I hear that you wanna build up pressure here, but this is just a frustrating combo breaker. Please space it properly, or maybe even delete 2. I thought so at first, but after twice plays I feel that it is not so hard as I thought before

05:46:507 (1) - What about applying a slight curve to the left here? Just a really slight one. Would make it a bit more special imo! 05:45:944 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - As a pair of 05:45:944 (4,5,6), I think it is better to leave it straight

05:51:944 (4) - Slider end of this is not perfectly stacked with 05:50:444 (5) - . You might not see it ingame, yet it bothers me, haha!
fixed

Comment: I agree with the rhythm you've placed here, and the jumps are fitting. Your mapping style has a good quality.

07:24:044 - The end seems so empty, what about a finishing spinner? ^-^ Ok

Comment: Wow, this part is so cool with the funny sliders! A really good finish for the map good job!

Good luuuck!~
Thank for mod!
kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
Thanks for mod!

my part
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Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
K,说好的mod，久等了
如果我觉得最好更正的地方我会用*标注
仔细一看做图的全是dalao，压力山大

Remix
popner
00:02:819 (4) - 移动到00:01:507 (1) - 的开头似乎可以
00:04:132 (3) - 移动到00:03:007 (1) - 的开头也是一个选择
00:05:444 (4) - 往左下方移动一些距离试试
00:14:069 (3,4) - 他们的距离似乎应该再远一些
00:19:132 (4,5) - Ctrl+G，我认为这里应当舒展开
00:26:257 (4,5,6,7) - 5,6换个位置，还是觉得需要跳
PS：其实这一段我确实是没怎么看懂，我不是很清楚你究竟是按照一个什么规律来排布的……

01:57:007 - 02:09:007 Good

03:01:319 (5) - 这里试试分成两个kick slider？03:13:319 (5) - 也是一个意见，因为这一段从感觉上明显是属于一个休息段，在八分拍的处理上应与前面不同
03:09:569 (3,4,5,6,7) -试试这种排列？ http://puu.sh/6o7rF.jpg

05:20:632 (5,6,7,8,1) - 感觉这里还是小一点间距能好，05:23:444 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 一个意见
05:30:007 高潮部分不加个1.25绿线？滑条改起来主要是在开头点拉一下

07:00:007 - 07:24:007 Epic！

Scorpiour
00:51:944 (1,2,3) - 1与3换个位置吧，这里一来一回似乎更能表现节奏

01:35:257 (1,2,3,4) - 果然还是觉得2,3在一起好啊，4移动到1的位置
01:42:007 (1) - 这里应该是六分拍，要不要改呢？
Nice Part

kpy
02:22:319 (5,6) - 换个位置，原来的摆法是刻意为之么？
02:32:257 (3) - 试验型意见，加长一个四分拍试试？

03:45:194 (2,4) - 试验型意见，换个位置看看？这里4和5都是一个音阶，而且接下来的6也是比4,5低一个音节，故认为可以一试
03:58:507 (1,2,3,4,5) - 顺序更改为2,1,5,4,3，就是觉得这样看着舒服。。怀疑强迫症

sp3
Good
只是感觉04:22:132 (4,5,6) -卡着音乐有些不是很适合，要不要做一些调整？
04:26:819 (7) - Ctrl+G 也是可以的感觉

06:13:319 (6,7) - 这里做成原地二连或者从下至上的小间距二连会好些……大概
这部分没其他的想法了……

06:43:882 (2) - Ctrl+H，虽然是有点突兀了……
06:53:163 (3) - 这里直接顺下来不就行了，是刻意为之么？

LKs
我是你的脑残粉！所以没有问题！！
事实上我确实找不出问题……

eveless
05:54:850 (5,6) - 感觉这里往下走更好啊？，往上走是刻意为之么？
05:58:600 (1,2,3,4) - 要不要试试逆时针呢？

其实我有些看不懂你对于连打间距的使用规律

Over~
……果然太监品质还是得花时间来摆脱
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