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I tried your beatmap. I think the bmp and offset is perfect... or at least close to it.
Some Problems I found:
You don't use any bookmarks. It would make it easier to get to different parts of the beatmap.
Is the normal difficulty supposed to end earlier?
In the normal difficulty there are parts where I think beat circles are too close to the end of the spinner, making it difficult to hit the beat circle.
What level grid did you use? Using a level 3 grid makes distance snapping more accurate. There's nothing wrong with how your beatmap is distanced though, just a tip I guess.
It might be a bad idea to listen to me because my level isn't too high and I haven't gotten a ranked beatmap myself. But if I said anything incorrect I'm sure a mod would tell you.
Some Problems I found:
You don't use any bookmarks. It would make it easier to get to different parts of the beatmap.
Is the normal difficulty supposed to end earlier?
In the normal difficulty there are parts where I think beat circles are too close to the end of the spinner, making it difficult to hit the beat circle.
What level grid did you use? Using a level 3 grid makes distance snapping more accurate. There's nothing wrong with how your beatmap is distanced though, just a tip I guess.
It might be a bad idea to listen to me because my level isn't too high and I haven't gotten a ranked beatmap myself. But if I said anything incorrect I'm sure a mod would tell you.
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timing没有什么大问题，谱面需要改进。spacing有点摸不透..(grid snap一般不要开, disatance snap一般要开, 有些nazibat可能会因为spacing这点不好而放弃这图)
开distance snap重新摆放一遍吧,有些地方还没有添加音效，填上吧。
Special:
01:24:151(1)：这点无论如何也不会被bat认可的……建议继续按歌词做，最后添一个spinner即可。
01:37:362(1): 从这里开始使用soft音效
01:58:004(6): 换成1个周期的长slider比较好。
02:04:885(sp): 既然前面类似的地方没有spinner，这里也不要用了吧（接不上好讨厌- -)
02:09:701(4): 这里跟歌词不太好,删掉这个slider，前面的白线开始做一条slider到红线(02:10:114)
然后把后面的slider(02:10:389)改成两周期的slider到(02:10:389)
02:14:518(5): 周期太长。（可以用一短接一长的slider来代替,比如在(02:14:518)红线处放一根到蓝线的短slider，
再在白线紧跟一条到红线(02:15:068)的slider.)
02:20:573(1): 这里开始使用normal音效
02:27:178(9): 使用new combo
02:46:720(11):缩短周期到(02:47:270)
02:48:233(1): 奇怪的circle..
02:47:545 : 添一个spinner
02:52:224(1): 参见第一条
04:05:710(10): 使用new combo
04:07:499(1): 奇怪的circle..
还有一些地方，铺面没有错误但是有些单调，可以尝试一些其他map使用过的搭配方法，这个就要看经验了
ps:那个留言的美国人,要给他kud哦
开distance snap重新摆放一遍吧,有些地方还没有添加音效，填上吧。
Special:
01:24:151(1)：这点无论如何也不会被bat认可的……建议继续按歌词做，最后添一个spinner即可。
01:37:362(1): 从这里开始使用soft音效
01:58:004(6): 换成1个周期的长slider比较好。
02:04:885(sp): 既然前面类似的地方没有spinner，这里也不要用了吧（接不上好讨厌- -)
02:09:701(4): 这里跟歌词不太好,删掉这个slider，前面的白线开始做一条slider到红线(02:10:114)
然后把后面的slider(02:10:389)改成两周期的slider到(02:10:389)
02:14:518(5): 周期太长。（可以用一短接一长的slider来代替,比如在(02:14:518)红线处放一根到蓝线的短slider，
再在白线紧跟一条到红线(02:15:068)的slider.)
02:20:573(1): 这里开始使用normal音效
02:27:178(9): 使用new combo
02:46:720(11):缩短周期到(02:47:270)
02:48:233(1): 奇怪的circle..
02:47:545 : 添一个spinner
02:52:224(1): 参见第一条
04:05:710(10): 使用new combo
04:07:499(1): 奇怪的circle..
还有一些地方，铺面没有错误但是有些单调，可以尝试一些其他map使用过的搭配方法，这个就要看经验了
ps:那个留言的美国人,要给他kud哦
hi
oh well, starred, of course. although the map's not without problems, it's still nice for a mapping rookie like you. ^^
by the way, get more people star your map. maps having less than 8 stars won't be given bubbles or ranked.
below is mywork-in-progress finished map. beware.
Download: Shimamiya Eiko - Naraku no Hana (SunnyMario) [ignore's L5].osu
oh well, starred, of course. although the map's not without problems, it's still nice for a mapping rookie like you. ^^
by the way, get more people star your map. maps having less than 8 stars won't be given bubbles or ranked.
below is my
Download: Shimamiya Eiko - Naraku no Hana (SunnyMario) [ignore's L5].osu
Normal：
fine，前面空了好长，可以做一些吧。
special：
我觉得一个红线的OFFSET有问题？
我听的OFFSET：18098，换这个之后动一下notes感觉就对了。
此外tick rate听上去有些奇怪，建议用2，不过分数也少了不少。
00:20:06 (1) - 1/8做的，是不是短了1/8？
00:22:54 (3) - 长了一点1/8
00:29:97 (8) - 长了1/8，要不就是后面的9放太远？
00:32:72 (7) - 短了1/8
00:33:27 (8) - 短了1/8
这之前的好像都是用1/8做的，建议再用1/4check一下。
01:25:25 (1,1) - 建议再多分几个
ingore：
fine，能不能把跳放小一点啊，单指连打加跳，累啊。。。
here is the star
fine，前面空了好长，可以做一些吧。
special：
我觉得一个红线的OFFSET有问题？
我听的OFFSET：18098，换这个之后动一下notes感觉就对了。
此外tick rate听上去有些奇怪，建议用2，不过分数也少了不少。
00:20:06 (1) - 1/8做的，是不是短了1/8？
00:22:54 (3) - 长了一点1/8
00:29:97 (8) - 长了1/8，要不就是后面的9放太远？
00:32:72 (7) - 短了1/8
00:33:27 (8) - 短了1/8
这之前的好像都是用1/8做的，建议再用1/4check一下。
01:25:25 (1,1) - 建议再多分几个
ingore：
fine，能不能把跳放小一点啊，单指连打加跳，累啊。。。
here is the star
Topic Starter
sohuhard wrote:
Normal：
fine，前面空了好长，可以做一些吧。
special：
我觉得一个红线的OFFSET有问题？
我听的OFFSET：18098，换这个之后动一下notes感觉就对了。
此外tick rate听上去有些奇怪，建议用2，不过分数也少了不少。
00:20:06 (1) - 1/8做的，是不是短了1/8？
00:22:54 (3) - 长了一点1/8
00:29:97 (8) - 长了1/8，要不就是后面的9放太远？
00:32:72 (7) - 短了1/8
00:33:27 (8) - 短了1/8
这之前的好像都是用1/8做的，建议再用1/4check一下。
OK. But I always use 1/4 and resnap
01:25:25 (1,1) - 建议再多分几个
ingore：
fine，能不能把跳放小一点啊，单指连打加跳，累啊。。。
It's interested to play ignore's difficulty
here is the star
nice song~
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