_Erra_ wrote:

Heeey,i will make diff for your beatmap? :3

1. BG0~2.png,jpg - pixel size over 800*600. so I processed them all. ( pixel size change to 800*600 )
2. BG1.png - Blank in the lower left. This has no meaning. and I feel a little distortion by this. so Processing to remove the blank in the lower left.
3. l6,l9.png - Same character. so remove one.(remove l9.png )

1. BG1.png - 00:10:296~00:10:397 feel a distortion at this turning point. ⇒ change it to see it naturally
2. sakura.png - 00:00:668~ appear suddenly. ⇒ add fade effect
3. some lyrics - It does not fit with the vocal some. ⇒ matched a fading effect with vocal

• • Tags: add "KayeSara".
  • Check AIMod/AIBat, there is an unused SB image and a missing SB element.
  • I don't like how each phrase of "l1.png" disappear into the BG without a fade effect, consider to do something about it.

xxheroxx wrote:

General

• • Tags: add "KayeSara". sorry but we don't need to add sber to the tag. This has been discussed in previous
  • Check AIMod/AIBat, there is an unused SB image and a missing SB element. //done
  • I don't like how each phrase of "l1.png" disappear into the BG without a fade effect, consider to do something about it. //sber thinks that is fine and it shows a good effect so just leave it \o/ I personally think that is fine also.

Call me again after you check these suggestions.

Nymph wrote:

[SB]
01:08:776 屏幕最下方前面的图没有完全挡住后面的...
看起来像这样：


别的没了

Nyquill wrote:

I think those "1"s have something to do with it.

those wrote:

Nyquill wrote:

I think those "1"s have something to do with it.

Nothing in the storyboard code above with a "1" has anything to do with positioning.

1. Colour 1 and Colour 3 are rather similar. Perhaps a yellowish tone for Colour 3 can contrast this better. What do you think of (255,255,128)?

1. 01:24:992 - Ring.png at the bottom - I think its position can be much better if it's either exactly centre compared to the lyrics l5.png, or further away from it. So like, move it a little to the right, or move it a lot to the left, or move it a lot to the right.
2. Starting from 01:31:478 - some of the characters that appear one by one can be coded more accurately "toku" at 01:46:073 - , for example, has "ku" appearing exceptionally late. Additionally, by the time you see "i" at 01:36:343 - the whole line has already began to fade out. Try fading out starting from 01:37:154 - instead.

1. Tick rate 2 helps a lot with the reading. Same with [Andrea].
2. 00:02:897 (1,2,3) - Plays a little strangely and is also hitsounded strangely. http://puu.sh/2QSuH.jpg is much more structurally sound, whistling on 00:03:100 - and 00:03:911 - . Same with [Andrea].
3. 01:49:519 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - The pattern in http://osu.ppy.sh/b/145601 was fun to play; perhaps if you restructure this triangle to be an equilateral one it can be better.

Nymph wrote:

[SB]
01:08:776 屏幕最下方前面的图没有完全挡住后面的...
看起来像这样：


别的没了

those wrote:

[SB]

1. 01:24:992 - Ring.png at the bottom - I think its position can be much better if it's either exactly centre compared to the lyrics l5.png, or further away from it. So like, move it a little to the right, or move it a lot to the left, or move it a lot to the right. 　⇒move left. fixed for kanpakyin.
2. Starting from 01:31:478 - some of the characters that appear one by one can be coded more accurately "toku" at 01:46:073 - , for example, has "ku" appearing exceptionally late. ⇒i know. but I put all them on the constant rhythm intentionally. the singing is very characteristic, so it seems natural to put on the constant rhythm than to appear to match only the beginning of the lyrics to me >.<
   Additionally, by the time you see "i" at 01:36:343 - the whole line has already began to fade out. Try fading out starting from 01:37:154 - instead. ⇒i think it will improve the appearance more~ changed everything about it.

those wrote:

[General]

1. Colour 1 and Colour 3 are rather similar. Perhaps a yellowish tone for Colour 3 can contrast this better. What do you think of (255,255,128)? //Did some amendment on that color but not yellow, sorry.

[Hard]

1. Tick rate 2 helps a lot with the reading. Same with [Andrea]. //Actually tick rate2 doesn't fit the calm part of the song because it the tick is too noisy for the calm. Tick rate1 sounds better there. Also, those sliders are not that hard to read.
2. 00:02:897 (1,2,3) - Plays a little strangely and is also hitsounded strangely. http://puu.sh/2QSuH.jpg is much more structurally sound, whistling on 00:03:100 - and 00:03:911 - . Same with [Andrea]. //00:03:308 - and 00:03:713 - are the high pitch there. I start the slider there to emphasize the pitch. I changed the hitsound.
3. 01:49:519 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - The pattern in http://osu.ppy.sh/b/145601 was fun to play; perhaps if you restructure this triangle to be an equilateral one it can be better. //did some amendment.

1. 01:41:821 (1,2) - I really dislike how this starts on the blue tick; you don't have this kind of gap from the previous anywhere else it seems. I suggest either moving the note to 01:41:618 or creating a 1/4 slider starting at 01:41:618

1. Only thing I'd complain about is the random 1/4 triple spacing inconsistencies throughout the difficulty, but it's really minor so w/e

1. 01:17:801 - I suggest making this transition w/ the black boxes start at 01:18:510 since that's when the next phrase starts (that or make it finish the transition at this point)

Makar wrote:

[Normal]

1. 01:41:821 (1,2) - I really dislike how this starts on the blue tick; you don't have this kind of gap from the previous anywhere else it seems. I suggest either moving the note to 01:41:618 or creating a 1/4 slider starting at 01:41:618 //I changed it to 1/2 instead.