judgment light wrote:

Half
00:03:340 (6) - 00:04:720 (6) - 总感觉如果这两个去掉会更好听 改回去了
00:11:444 (3) - 弄成两个circle也许会好听一点 分别占红线和蓝线 不知道该怎么表达啊.. 大概是想说跟钢琴 不过这边准备白线结束所以先保留了
00:52:478 (1) - 个人认为可以折返多一次会好听一点 test了一下效果不好于是没改
00:54:202 (4) - 拖到红线这里会不会合拍一点 不会（喂
01:43:341 (2) - 这个去掉试一试？done
01:44:030 (4) - 改成一个放在01:44:202的circledone
好歌好图好音效！

1. 这歌bpm这么低, 感觉难度也低, 建议难度名n->e h->n i->h

1. 00:12:133 (4,5,6) - 加几个圈怎么样ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/659256
2. 00:40:754 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/659263 看看0.0
3. 01:00:065 (1,2) - 建议在(2)这里new combo 这样01:01:444 (3) - 刚好是五分之三 嗯
4. 01:30:237 - 这里放个note比较好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/659259
5. 01:43:513 (2) - 做成对称的多好

1. 不是三星半, 不够魔法
2. 01:18:685 (3) - 滑条头clap?
3. 01:40:754 (2) - 滑条头的地方放clap 音量大概需要85%-90%
4. 01:56:271 (2,3) - 尾上的whistle去了

1. 00:18:685 (1) - remove whistle
2. 00:44:202 (6) - slider end的点->111:91
3. 01:37:306 (3) - 3往外放点o.o

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from mapping queue


General

1. 这歌bpm这么低, 感觉难度也低, 建议难度名n->e h->n i->h

嗯 问了泡泡 说Normal最好别跳于是就改了 而且也stack啥的 先放着看看

Half

1. 00:12:133 (4,5,6) - 加几个圈怎么样ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/659256 之前有人提都没试 这次又被提出来稍微试了下不是希望的感觉于是keep
2. 00:40:754 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/659263 看看0.0 改的话要重新摆串 有点懒233
3. 01:00:065 (1,2) - 建议在(2)这里new combo 这样01:01:444 (3) - 刚好是五分之三 嗯 done
4. 01:30:237 - 这里放个note比较好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/659259 懒试 因为改就得连排列一起..
5. 01:43:513 (2) - 做成对称的多好 后修的...本来是两个直的滑条

Hard

1. 不是三星半, 不够魔法
2. 01:18:685 (3) - 滑条头clap? done
3. 01:40:754 (2) - 滑条头的地方放clap 音量大概需要85%-90% 其实本来上面一个也是有clap的 然后这边和drum whistle冲突就把两个都删了 上面那个加了
4. 01:56:271 (2,3) - 尾上的whistle去了 done

感觉是LTY比较好的曲子, 个人不太喜欢LTY但是这个曲子好听w 喵

1. 00:07:306 (3) - why clap ? why not?
2. 00:32:478 (1) - removing finish sounds better imo 音量降到20%
3. 00:35:237 30% sounds a little low. try raise by 5%~10% ^
4. 01:02:478 (5,1) - not so perfect blanket... no change
5. 01:19:375 (1) - 70% kind of too high. try reduce by 10%~15% 不改 因为其它难度一样所以没理由

00:31:099 (6) - ds 哪里有问题？
00:09:030 (2) - 用00:07:651 (1) - 的反转 flow不好 不改
01:18:858 - 绿线 fix~

1. 00:18:685 (1) - remove whistle 对应 00:15:927 还有后面有个whistle所以没理由去掉
2. 00:44:202 (6) - slider end的点->111:91 改了方向 ok
3. 01:37:306 (3) - 3往外放点o.o 意义不明 233

Midasmens wrote:

这么好的曲子上传了怎么不通知一声 一不小心就忘记了

http://puu.sh/2k0sW

1. 試試把所有的lyric外發光+描邊？

1. 00:35:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這裡的節奏怪怪的~試試這個↓
   SPOILER

   http://puu.sh/2lLCf
2. 01:46:444 (2,3) - NC...有點突然。
3. 。。。。nothing i can find...

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from Moe Moe Russian Modding Room

[Half]

00:11:444 - here sounds 3 notes, then replace this slider on double 1/4 or 3 notes. deliberately made it and not that bad for playing (though it have been pointed out twice) fun to guess which track followed during playing
00:12:133 - hm very strange what you not use notes here, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/671578 I think this will be sounds muck better. tried once and not want to
00:21:099 - this slider not sound here, better replace on note. It will be more rhytmically ok
00:31:961 - plz add note here, sound better for me, and follow for previous rhythm i want to make this section more relax, for it will enter the vocal part, then kept
00:34:547 - you forget add clap here, on start and on end of slider. It sounds much better followed the music, here are two drumwhistle but clap
01:20:754(1,3) - plz stack it~ Will be looks better deliberately made it here, if it stacked, it will show up right-below the (1)
01:37:823 - this slider better replace on 1/4, it will be better follow for rhythm ok
01:56:616(2) - better ctrl + G for better flow no

[Hard]

00:05:927 - http://puu.sh/2nF6L this rhythm better follow for piano beat happenly can't get access to puush link, will check them when puush be fine
00:10:409(1,2,3) - this pattern looks a bit confusing~ rotate slider 2 on 135 degrees http://puu.sh/2nFdf It looks nicer ^^
00:34:202 - maybe ctrl +J http://puu.sh/2nFfl looks more pleasant they blanket well to me now
00:37:651 - remove nc here and add on next slider. separated combo on sentences, will consider yours, though
00:40:754 - ^ same
00:51:444 - ^ same
01:02:133 - ^ etc better put nc on downbeat, it's better follow for rhythm.

Good luck~

Katty Pie wrote:

[Midas' Normal]

00:07:306 - honestly I don't see reason put lonely clap here, if you want use claps on this part then add on 00:02:823(2,4), 00:05:582, 00:06:961, 00:08:340 and 00:09:720. It's sounds better. if not then replace this clap on whistle. After some disscussion with the map creator. We decide to decrease the volume to 30%
00:36:271 - here better add note for a vocal no
00:58:340 - if you add note here it will be sounds much better than now ok
01:32:478 - remove nc here and add on next note no
01:43:513 - ^ same ^
01:50:409 - add nc. Hm very strange what in this places you put wrong nc, bcz in another places it is right. Are you serious? The rhythm is not end here. Why should I put NC ?

moonlightleaf wrote:

Normal

01:31:789加个note... 没有必要

1. 00:11:444 (3) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up a little?
2. 00:15:754 - Add circle
3. 00:56:616 (7) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up a little?
4. 01:39:375 (3) - ^
5. 01:50:754 (3) - ^
6. 01:54:547 (3,4) - (only suggestion) you can recplace this 2 circles to 2 sliders
   

1. 00:14:202 (2) - Replace this slider into a circle+slider
   http://puu.sh/2FwuW.png
2. 00:16:961 (2) - same
3. 00:19:720 (2) - This slider is out of the grid
4. 00:37:651 (1) - Remove NC
5. 00:37:996 (2) - Add NC

1. 00:12:823 - Add circle maybe?
2. 00:23:858 - Add circle
3. 00:31:099 (3) - Add NC
4. 00:54:202 - Add circle here

Drianel wrote:

Hi from my mod queue :3 I had to do this mod twice cause my computer crashes T_T but anyway: op..sorry to hear that

>>>> HALF <<<<

1. 00:11:444 (3) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up a little? done
2. 00:15:754 - Add circle was ok
3. 00:56:616 (7) - This slider is out of the grid, can you move up a little? done
4. 01:39:375 (3) - ^ not that much and i think is ok
5. 01:50:754 (3) - ^ done
6. 01:54:547 (3,4) - (only suggestion) you can recplace this 2 circles to 2 sliders was ok
   

>>>> HARD <<<<

1. 00:14:202 (2) - Replace this slider into a circle+slider followed the beats quite well
   http://puu.sh/2FwuW.png
2. 00:16:961 (2) - same
3. 00:19:720 (2) - This slider is out of the grid done
4. 00:37:651 (1) - Remove NC nc according to the lyric
5. 00:37:996 (2) - Add NC

- Drianel -

Drianel wrote:

Hi from my mod queue :3 I had to do this mod twice cause my computer crashes T_T but anyway:

>>>> Mida's Normal <<<<

1. 00:12:823 - Add circle maybe?
2. 00:23:858 - Add circle
3. 00:31:099 (3) - Add NC
4. 00:54:202 - Add circle here

1. 00:51:789 (6,7,1) - 这三个做成弧度更一致的话看起来会更好看，现在感觉不是在一个弧度上
   

Breeze wrote:

[Mida's Normal]

1. 00:51:789 (6,7,1) - 这三个做成弧度更一致的话看起来会更好看，现在感觉不是在一个弧度上 联系gd mapper改过了
   

其他没发现什么

wonders wrote:

banana快填坑

Awaken wrote:

香蕉一定要rank啊！