xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested via forum pm ~


[Easy]
00:09:469 (3) - Remove a reverse. no fix. seems better now imo
00:10:623 - Add a circle? ^
00:37:161 (3) - Try to stack the end of the slider better? fixed
00:50:238 (3) - Stack with (1) fixed
01:23:700 (1) - Move this back one tick and end at the same place. fixed


[Normal]
- Bookmarks can be removed ~ owo removed owo
00:07:546 (6) - Line with (4) (x:108 y:172) fixed
01:01:007 (5) - Maybe break distance for a bit and stack the sliders end with (3) would u mind capture the screen for me .__.?


[Hard]
00:06:200 (1,2,3) - Stack. fixed


[Insane]
- HP Drain +1 ? owo fixed
00:25:815 (10) - Place where (5) was. fixed
00:31:007 (2) - Place the 4th tick at x:72 y:352 fixed


Nice map ~
Good luck with rank! >w<

1. You are overusing kiai i mean this fountais are so much should fix this:
   
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2. Source should be Robotics;Notes without caps
3. You can improve your hitsounds are really bad now imo
4. ロボティクス・ノーツ remove this from tags since is the source got no sense imo

• Unsnapped green line at: 00:08:030 - snap to 00:08:027
  00:09:469 this double repeat can be confuse in easy diff better make to sliders gonna fit better too
  00:11:777 remove this finish from slider body is not following nothing
  00:18:700 clap in the repeat fit alot imo
  00:31:007 remove whistle from slider body is really annoying imo
  00:50:238 (3,4,5,1) - this part is so lazy why no better make some sliders? make it fun for new players
  01:06:392 this so confuse for easy as i say before 2 repeats are not good for this maybe try to make another thing there
  01:09:469 whistle dont fit here add finish gonna sound alot better
  01:12:546 (1,2) - this is just my opinion but drum sound got no sense o.o sound really bad in this kind of songs
  01:28:700 same as 01:06:392
  01:28:700 were are the claps in there?
  00:04:853 this have to be new combo
  Ok this diff is good but you have to work with hitsounds

• 00:14:469 (2,3) - stack they like you did on the previous pattern 00:13:315 (4,1) - for consistency
  00:23:315 why drum sound here?
  00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rythm is wrong remember this is not hard is normal maybe try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:34:084 this is unrankable previous hitburts of 00:33:315 (3) - dont let see the repeat of (5) fix plz
  00:49:469 (4,1) - stack they perfect
  01:10:238 (2,4) - ugly overlap you see how 2 touch 4 that look so bad try to make it more clean
  01:26:777 so fast after spinner imo maybe remove it?
  same with hitsounds add more

• AR -1 for better difficult spread since normal got 5 and insane 9 this have to be 7
  00:06:200 (5,1,2) - (nazi) stack they perfect are a little wrong
  00:25:046 this unrankable same i tell you in normal about hitburst covering the repeat
  00:54:469 (1,2,3) - here better use 05 spacing 1.0 is so difficult for a hard diff
  01:00:238 (5,6) - why drum sound? dont fit in nothing here
  01:14:661 (3,5) - maybe can stack the tail of they complety?

• 00:21:777 (4) - Unsnapped slider
  00:30:812 green line unsnapped
  00:41:969 (3,4,5) - again drum sound dont following nothing
  00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - im not fan of using 1.0 distance for this streams maybe can you use 0.5?
  01:03:315 (5,6) - stack they perfec a little wrong
  drum hitsounds dont fit

Natsu wrote:

Hi forum pm request o3o

General

1. You are overusing kiai i mean this fountais are so much should fix this: I dont think I am overusing the kiai coz the one ranked has similar kiai to mine.
   
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2. Source should be Robotics;Notes without caps it doesnt matter coz ranked ones have both cap and non-cap
   and official also has both cap and non-cap.
   
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3. You can improve your hitsounds are really bad now imo remap the hitsound already :3
4. ロボティクス・ノーツ remove this from tags since is the source got no sense imo take a look at these two maps
   http://osu.ppy.sh/s/76947 and http://osu.ppy.sh/s/73390. why make no sense :3?

Easy:

• Unsnapped green line at: 00:08:030 - snap to 00:08:027 the line has been removed
  00:09:469 this double repeat can be confuse in easy diff better make to sliders gonna fit better too fixed
  00:11:777 remove this finish from slider body is not following nothing fixed
  00:18:700 clap in the repeat fit alot imo removed
  00:31:007 remove whistle from slider body is really annoying imo removed
  00:50:238 (3,4,5,1) - this part is so lazy why no better make some sliders? make it fun for new players
  01:06:392 this so confuse for easy as i say before 2 repeats are not good for this maybe try to make another thing there easy no need to be that fun. i think basic is okay for easy
  01:09:469 whistle dont fit here add finish gonna sound alot better removed
  01:12:546 (1,2) - this is just my opinion but drum sound got no sense o.o sound really bad in this kind of songs huh..i use lower volume now
  01:28:700 same as 01:06:392 remove hitsound.
  01:28:700 were are the claps in there? no
  00:04:853 this have to be new combo why D:?
  Ok this diff is good but you have to work with hitsounds

Normal:

• 00:14:469 (2,3) - stack they like you did on the previous pattern 00:13:315 (4,1) - for consistency fixed
  00:23:315 why drum sound here? removed
  00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - this rythm is wrong remember this is not hard is normal maybe try this: i think it is good imo :3
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:34:084 this is unrankable previous hitburts of 00:33:315 (3) - dont let see the repeat of (5) fix plz fixed
  00:49:469 (4,1) - stack they perfect fixed
  01:10:238 (2,4) - ugly overlap you see how 2 touch 4 that look so bad try to make it more clean why ugly= =they are symmetric aren't they
  01:26:777 so fast after spinner imo maybe remove it? are u sure? the next note is already in the middle D:
  same with hitsounds add more yeah remake the hitsounds already

Hard:

• AR -1 for better difficult spread since normal got 5 and insane 9 this have to be 7 it is not a rule isn't it?
  00:06:200 (5,1,2) - (nazi) stack they perfect are a little wrong fixed in the previous updates
  00:25:046 this unrankable same i tell you in normal about hitburst covering the repeat are u sure they are unrankable= =? this is a hard diff :3
  00:54:469 (1,2,3) - here better use 05 spacing 1.0 is so difficult for a hard diff consistent DS so no :3
  01:00:238 (5,6) - why drum sound? dont fit in nothing here fixed hitsounds
  01:14:661 (3,5) - maybe can stack the tail of they complety? fixed

Insane:

• 00:21:777 (4) - Unsnapped slider fixed
  00:30:812 green line unsnapped fixed
  00:41:969 (3,4,5) - again drum sound dont following nothing fixed
  00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - im not fan of using 1.0 distance for this streams maybe can you use 0.5? that's okay for me and its the challenging place of my map. can u fc it ?
  01:03:315 (5,6) - stack they perfec a little wrong fixed
  drum hitsounds dont fit fixed

You can improve this map special with hitsounds, sorry for the short mod, but I'm sick I cant concentrate well hope that help you good luck

bmin11 wrote:

[Insane]
00:01:777 (1) - Delete this timing point. It's just unnecessary. fixed
00:07:930 (1) - Slider should start from here. fixed
00:08:700 (2) - Add whistle, or else this note is just a blank note with nothing to follow. added
00:09:469 (1) - Add clap on the start of the slider. added
00:10:046 (3) - Add clap added
00:10:430 (6) - Add clap on the start of the slider. added
00:47:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Feels like you are abusing the drum. Maybe lower the volume around 40%? remove all those drums
00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Normal hit sounds better IMO fixed

I'm not too sure how I should tackle this diffs hitsound. Drums give more of an comical value and I can't help but to think it doesn't fit to the song.


[Hard]
00:01:777 (1) - Delete this timing point. It's just unnecessary. fixed
00:08:892 (2,3,4) - Awkward. I would just space it out evenly. fixed
01:18:892 (4) - Add another return fixed

Again, can't help but to think Drums aren't appropriate to the song. Also, this diff needs to tone the soft whistles down a bit. Needs a balance between soft hits and soft whistles.


[Normal]
00:01:777 (1) - Delete this timing point. It's just unnecessary. fixed
00:31:007 (5) - Increase the slider length. seems better now imo
00:34:084 (5) - Shorten the slider length. ^
00:43:315 (5) - Remove the return and add a note at the end. ^ and for consistency of pattern


[Easy]
00:01:777 (1) - Delete this timing point. It's just unnecessary. fixed
01:04:469 (2) - Way too loud. Lower the volume a bit. hitsound removed



That's all for me. I'm not a big fan of Drum hitsound to be all honest, unless it fits the song. I just think Drum only has a small niche for it. remake the hitsound already. would u mind rechecking my map .__.?

Good luck with the map.

bmin11 wrote:

[Insane]
00:05:238 (1) - Increase the slider length (delete the note after)
00:06:584 (6,7,8) - Make it into a 1/1 returning slider
00:21:777 (4) - Increase the slider length
00:30:815 (1) - Remove clap
00:31:007 (2) - Remove clap and add finish at the start of the slider
00:38:411 (12,13) -Move it 1/4 forward
all fixed

Now the problem is that I can't even hear those drums anymore. The volume is way too low to the point it feels like it was done with soft hitsounds. Better then before though. yeah i realize the background music is already so loud, if there are loud hitsounds, it becomes noisy imo.

[Hard]
00:06:584 (1,2,3) - Increase the slider length (delete the note after) seems weird for me
00:09:469 (5) - Increase the slider length (different slider, but it's the same idea) fixed
00:16:200 (4) - New combo since the spacing changes fixed
00:31:007 (6) - Increase the slider length by 1/4 fixed

Lukareia wrote:

Random Hong Kong taiko mod

[Taiko Oni]
00:10:142 (2,1) - delete fixed

00:15:430 (2,1) - d , K fixed

00:27:930 - add k added

00:47:738 (2,1) - d , K changed to k , D instead.

01:13:892 - add d added

01:18:507 (3) - D fixed

01:19:277 (2,1,1) - k d d or k k d changed to k k d

01:28:315 (2) - k d is better imo ;w;

Quality mod, thanks a lot

Mio_chan wrote:

[Insane]
AR 8? AR9好似太快 轉左做8 hard做7
正歌D NC有D怪...但係唔知點改好-3- 自己重新汁一次;w;

00:09:469 (1,2) - spacing fixed
00:14:853 (5) - 個slider好似有D長...而且placement有D怪，改做兩個triplet? (姐係00:15:142 - 唔好有野) fixed
00:16:200 (4,5) - 唔要sliders，變做notes加jump? (因為兩個slider end其實無野) fixed
00:18:507 - 空左有D怪 ;w;. . .
00:19:565 (2,3) - 個人唔鐘意咁既stack~__~不過亦都ranked map係咁~_~ ~_~
00:29:469 (1,2,3) - stack埋? fixed
00:34:084 (5) - NC? no D: follow lyrics is better in insane
00:34:661 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 彎得有D怪 fixed
00:37:162 (6) - ^ fixed
00:40:238 (5) - ^ why? D:
00:41:392 - 又係空左有D怪= = ;w;. . .
00:41:777 (1,2,3) - 變做1個 1/1 slider? fixed
00:44:854 (7) - NC? no
00:57:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 唔知點解覺得好嘈~_~建議唔好塞滿每1個1/2...同首歌唔係好match 考慮下
00:58:700 - - NC (因為我叫你改呢度...所以依家呢個位係slider end，如果改完呢度無野就上個red tick加) ^
00:59:661 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:00:238 (2) - NC fixed
01:01:007 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:03:892 (2) - (nazi)stack得唔係咁靚 fixed
01:04:661 (4) - NC no
01:10:815 (5) - ^ no
01:27:930 (1,2,3,4) - 用正方形/長方形好似好D....因為你之後都係用菱形 最後啦wor 無之後啦ww

[Hard]
AR 7? fixed
其實個hard我覺得可以易多少少...不過都ok ge 甘容易我覺得曬左個背景音樂

00:06:200 (5) - NC fixed again (有個modder同你調轉 前面remove NC 後面NC..
00:06:584 (1) - Remove NC fixed
00:16:007 (3,4) - Ctrl + G? 甘未仲難?!
00:18:508 (5) - NC? fixed
00:20:623 (11) - Ctrl + G? 會搞到Next:2.79x..
00:21:777 (4) - 似番個正方形D fixed
00:27:930 (5) - NC? fixed
00:43:315 (6) - NC? no D:
00:46:392 (6) - Ctrl + G? 同NC? no 襯返 00:46:969 (7,8)
00:47:546 (8) - 放呢個位打落有D怪 ^
00:48:700 (3) - stack落4開頭上面? intentionally tricky place .__.
00:49:277 (5) - NC? combo too short previously
01:00:238 (5) - NC ^
01:01:007 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:11:007 (5) - NC too short D:
01:16:007 (6) - NC fixed
01:21:777 (5) - NC fixed

[Normal]
唔想再講NC...放NC放得有規律一D...依家比人感覺好亂，可能係每1個bar或姐2個bar既長白線加，或姐係D強調位再加咁 fixed all diff ;w;
00:51:777 (2,3,4,5) - 個形可以放好D，slider (5)唔好指向(4) fixed
01:00:238 (3,4,5) - (3) (5) 重疊 5明;w;
01:10:238 (2,3,4,5) - 重疊得唔係咁好睇 fixed
01:16:777 (5) - 放去(4)上面? fixed in another way
01:21:777 (1,2,3) - unstack? stack
01:23:315 (1) - spinner同後面有D近 ok la 已經擺得好近中間..

[Easy]
00:21:777 (2,3) - 呢個拍子easy好似有D難 -o-
00:54:469 (4) - 指上D? fixed
01:06:392 (1) - 唔用repeating? 5明lol
01:28:700 (3) - ^ ^

+oil
rank左佢

Irreversible wrote:

hey, from my queue!


yes, it's funny to post food xD

[General]

I have NO plan about taiko, i'm sorry, i have to skip it :c that's fine XD
The hitsounds are very quiet, imo idk anything about hitsound. Some modders said too loud and some said too quiet. Anyone tell me what to do t.t..?

[Easy]

00:10:623 - i would add a circle here, it fits added
00:41:392 (6) - delete this circle, this way, the next slider gets more tension. it has a bigger effect. fixed

the rest is fine for me

[Normal]

00:29:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - meh. it's like.. you never used that many 1/2, and this time you did xD lol but they fit imo
01:00:238 (3,5) - the slider is abit hidden, idk if it's confusing for newbies, would think about changing it i think it should be okay coz it is not totally overlapped.


[Hard]

this diff is really nice made, but it's a bit too hard imo.. i would go over it again, and maybe remove some hard patterns.
for example:
00:06:200 (5,1,2) -
00:20:623 (11) -
00:24:084 (3,4,5,6) -
etc.
Those are the challenging parts of this HARD!

[Insane]

First impression: Well first of all, it plays a bit weird, idk why tbh.. i think it's because of the slider velocity, i would have taken a higher one, but it's nothing really like 'omg this beatmap sux' It's good, but it could be better with higher sv imo. Next thing, there are a few triplets which are just weird to play.. i would think about taking out some (i'll list them up). Last but not least, you tried to make jumps, thats ok, but sometimes at the wrong place. you should make a special point, where the song goes 'special' and not just randomly put some in. i dunno if you did, it just feels like this q:

00:09:853 (2) - uhm, well in fact that it has nothing to do with the rhyhthm at all, you should really stack it with the slider before it .. so it's at least possible to get it xD fixed
00:18:316 (5) - This slider is too long, i would shorten it, so you don't destroy the flow of the map but it is more weird when i cut to a slider and a note ;w;. . . any suggestions?
00:19:277 (1,2,3) - ..i'm really not a fan of this! currently, very many ppl are doing this :c either stack it, or make a constant ds, but not something between :c fixed
00:22:930 (9,1) - why the second slider? it has nothing to do with the beatmap, it doesn't fit, so remove it no coz i wanna emphasize the ding sound there and the symmetry pattern.. ;w;
00:25:815 (9) - ^ same (or replace it by something) ^
00:24:084 (3,4,5,6,7) - this is weird to play, i don't suggest a up and down pattern fixed
00:34:661 (7) - the bow is on the wrong side, make it otherwise (ctrl + h), for the flow fixed
00:34:950 (8) - NC? fixed
00:43:315 (8,1) - the fact that she's singing yooo or w/e, is perfect to put a longer slider there, instead of 2 circles @@? which notes?
00:44:277 (5) - this slider is too long, make it more fitting to the lyrics by replacing it for some sliders / circles why too long in fact they are fit D:
01:04:661 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - that's what i wanted to mention above. this part is like the highlight of the map, but there's nothing special, so i recommend putting a jump here really a jump there D:
01:08:411 (2) - nosense- circle imo deleted really no sense when I listen it one more time using 25% .__.
01:27:161 (4) - NC? no D:

There might be many things i mentioned, still, the beatmap is nicely done!


GOOD LUCK~~

1. Your maps are really lacking in hitsounds. You use next to no claps, and you're missing a lot of finishes on important beats and downbeats. I suggest adding claps on the offbeats in the following sections:
   00:11:007 to 00:15:623
   00:17:161 to 00:26:392
   00:35:623 to 00:38:700
   00:47:930 to 00:52:546
   00:55:623 to 01:04:853
   01:07:930 to 01:14:084
   01:26:392 to end
   
   These are the parts of the song with a steady percussion beat going on, so it would be nice to have claps on the offbeats to accent those beats just like the song is doing. It's especially important in the kiai. This will help players that rely on hitsounds for rhythm.
   
   Here's a pic that I stole that might help.
   
   Also you can try to add more finishes in the kiai during the really crashing parts. Basically when you hear lots of finishes in the music.
   
   
2. The kiai burst at 01:01:777 is kinda weird and not necessary imo. I suggest removing it.
   
   
3. In your .osb file for each diff, look for this text under "Events"
   

   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"BG1.jpg",1,1

   Please change it to this for each diff:
   

   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"BG1.jpg",0,0

   The reason is because when it's set to 1,1, the BG will be offset by one pixel in play.

1. 00:16:777 - This section would play nicer if you added a note here. You did so in the hard diff. o.o
   
   
2. 00:18:123 (3,4,5) - This triplet feels a bit random, it's not following the music very well, and the 1/1 slider that ends on the downbeat feels strange. It would be better to replace the triplet, and then to have a 1/2 slider at 00:18:507 and another at 00:18:700 to follow the vocals more closely.
   
   
3. 00:23:507 - I think it would be nicer to start this slider at 00:23:700 try to change the rhythm here to follow the vocals a bit smoother.
   
   
   00:22:738 to 00:24:084
   
   
4. 00:24:277 (3,4,5,6,7) - The placement on the 6 is pretty strange, and it starts after the vocals hold, so it feels off somehow. I suggest deleting the 00:24:661 (5) and moving the 6 to there, and extending it like so:
   
   
   Also, you could try to place the slider in a way that flows a bit better and isn't being overlapped by the previous hitbursts:
   
   Just a sample placement. If you flip the 6 over like show, do so for the 7 also.
   
   
5. 00:31:007 (6,7) - Some of your sliders are kind of weird and unfitting. Here's an example. Were you trying to make a slider that blankets the 7? Try only using three points for the curve in the 6 and not four, like so:
   
   
   
   
6. 00:34:661 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The rhythm here is very difficult to understand in play and feels too random. The 00:35:334 (5) is overmapped because it's not mapped to something in the music. The stream stops at 00:35:238 in the music. I suggest changing it like so:
   
   
   The stream is much easier to read when it's not on the end of the slider like this, and in the music the stream is only 5 notes like so.
   Also, you could try to place the stream in a nice curve in the center of the 00:34:084 (5,6,7) which might play well. Try something along these lines:
   
   
   
7. 00:41:200 (6) - This slider is a bit strange, I think it might be nicer to have 3 circles to fit with the vocals instead. Also I feel that you're missing a NC at 00:41:777 (7) when the new vocal line starts.
   
   
8. 00:44:084 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I'm not sure how you came up with all of these triplet rhythm here...They feel sort of strange in play, there aren't triplets in the music. Same point as 00:41:200 (6), I feel that the 00:44:277 (5) would be better as three circles in a pattern and then the slider at 00:44:853. Something like so:
   
   
   00:43:700 to 00:45:815
   
   
9. 00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This is super difficult to read when it's stacked on the end of the previous slider like that. I think having a spinner before this stream to follow that flux in the music would play much better, so here's what I suggest:
   
   
   Delete the spinner at 00:50:815 and map it out with a rhythm like so, then have a spinner at 00:52:546. Then you could have the pause at 00:53:892 just like in the music and have the 00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) start somewhere in the center of the screen. That would play much better imo.
   
   
10. 01:04:277 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel that you missed out on the chance for large spacing here. This is the most epic part of the song, but your spacing and rhythms are very simple and easy here. Just an opinion.
    
    
11. 01:08:507 (2) - Try to make this placement look nicer. Make the curve on the 2 more refined and more even. Here's an example:
    
    
    
    
12. 01:18:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I know you'd like to repeat this pattern again, but this long stream isn't fitting to what's happening in the music very well, so it feels really overmapped and bad. I suggest changing the rhythm to something like this to fit the music better:
    
    
    01:18:507 (1) to 01:20:238 (1)
    
    
13. 01:23:219 (1) - I think starting this at 01:23:315 fits better to the music, and would be better for osu!mania unless I'm mistaken.

1. 00:07:930 (1) - Missing a finish on the head here I believe.
   
   
2. 00:08:507 (2) - Why finish here? o.o
   
   
3. 00:08:700 (3) - Why is this the only diff that switches to soft sample set here?
   
   
4. 00:32:546 (4) - Missing normal finish on the end?
   
   
5. 00:34:084 (5) - Finish? Just like 00:31:007 (6).
   
   
6. 00:41:777 (7) - Finish on the end.
   
   
7. 00:43:315 (6) - Finish?

1. 00:09:469 (5,6,7,8,9) - The 5 being a 3/4 slider doesn't really work well imo. It would be better to extend it to make it a 1/1 slider. Also it would be better to have the at 00:10:046 instead. It fits the music and reads nicer. A triplet at 00:10:815 fits well also. So consider this rhythm:
   
   
   
   
2. 00:13:315 (5,6) - I don't recommend stacking these, I think lots of players will have a really hard time reading that stack after playing the triplet.
   
   
3. 00:17:546 (6) - Strange that you don't NC here where the vocals start again, but you NC later at 00:18:508 (1). Why?
   
   
4. 00:26:392 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This placement is really nice, why didn't you do something like this in the insane diff? In the insane diff, the placement here is really random compared to this.
   
   
5. 00:35:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section really doesn't play well. The reason is because you stop following the vocals with the 00:36:007 (2) but then you start following them again with the 00:36:969 (4,5,6,7) awkward stacks. Try extending the 00:35:623 (1) like so:
   
   
   If you want to, experiment with putting sliders here. Just the circles with gaps are kinda meh. The vocals actually do hold, so the circles don't feel that great, sliders would feel better. It would play nice if you made the 2, 3 and 5 a 1/2 slider for example.
   
   
6. 00:49:853 (6,7) - The jump feels a bit random, I suggest using normals spacing here instead.
   
   
7. 00:57:161 (1,2) - Again this 3/4 slider doesn't fit well. I highly suggest deleting the 2 and extending the 1 to 00:57:546.
   
   
8. 01:04:469 (1) - Consider ending the spinner at 01:05:623 instead. I think it fits better with the music and gives the player more time to recover.
   
   
9. 01:14:084 (1) - Consider placing this around (64,132) to remove the anti-jump and to keep in a pattern with the 01:12:546 (1,3).
   
   
10. 01:23:219 (1) - Same as insane, maybe starting at 01:23:315 would be better.

1. 00:32:546 (4) - Missing finish on the end?
   
   
2. 00:56:200 (2) - Why so many finishes on this slider? I suggest removing them, they aren't fitting.

1. 00:09:084 (2,3) - Nazi, move them up and left one grid (grid size 4) so that they perfectly reflect each other across the axis. Try using CTRL+H to check.
   
   
2. 00:13:315 (4,1,2,3) - Rhythm is kinda strange imo. The stacks don't feel like they are following the song very well. Can I suggest another rhythm?
   
   
   Single circles and then a slider at 00:14:084 to follow the vocals.
   
   
3. 00:33:315 (3,4,5) - The pause is kind of awkward, and reading the timing on the 4 is difficult. I suggest using a similar rhythm here at you did at 00:30:238 (3,4,5). So make the 00:33:315 (3) a 1/1 slider instead perhaps.
   
   
4. 01:00:238 (1,3) - Ugly placement imo, try to place the 3 in a way that doesn't overlap the hitburst from the 1, or try to make it so the 3's tail is perfectly overlapping the 1.
   
   
5. 01:01:777 (4) - According to your pattern, this should be a NC.
   
   
6. 01:03:315 (1) - Maybe make blanket instead?
   
   
   
   
7. 01:22:930 (4,5) - This isn't fitting very well to the song. It's a bit awkward. I suggest deleting the 4 and 5 and instead adding a repeat to the 01:22:161 (3). That fits nicer and it's easier to play imo.
   
   
8. 01:23:315 (1,1) - Try to give more time for the player to recover after this spinner. Maybe end the spinner at 01:26:007 instead.

1. 00:29:469 (1) - Shouldn't the finish be on the end there instead?
   
   
2. 00:41:777 (1) - Missing finish on the end?

1. 00:17:546 (3) - Same as hard, it's strange that you don't NC here to follow the vocals like you do in the insane diff.
   
   
2. 00:26:007 (6) - Maybe delete this. I don't think it's necessary and the pause feels nicer imo since the section gets a bit spammy on 1/1 rhythms.
   
   
3. 00:53:123 (2,3) - Make them aligned vertically for a better looking pattern.
   
   
   
   
4. 00:56:200 (2) - This would play better if you made it a slider instead. This will give players more leeway to time the hit, and will transition better into the next slider. Plus it follows the vocals more closely, so it feels nicer. Same applies for 01:02:353 (2) and 01:08:507 (2).
   
   
   
   
5. 01:21:777 (1,2,3) - Maybe try making these centered on the grid instead.
   
   

Dooms wrote:

Everything seemed fine to me in the taiko department o-o. Felt like I was playing a ranked map xD. Good job!

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey! :>
Modding as you requested.
Sorry so late.

[General]

1. Your maps are really lacking in hitsounds. You use next to no claps, and you're missing a lot of finishes on important beats and downbeats. I suggest adding claps on the offbeats in the following sections:
   00:11:007 to 00:15:623
   00:17:161 to 00:26:392
   00:35:623 to 00:38:700
   00:47:930 to 00:52:546
   00:55:623 to 01:04:853
   01:07:930 to 01:14:084
   01:26:392 to end
   
   These are the parts of the song with a steady percussion beat going on, so it would be nice to have claps on the offbeats to accent those beats just like the song is doing. It's especially important in the kiai. This will help players that rely on hitsounds for rhythm.
   
   Here's a pic that I stole that might help.
   
   Also you can try to add more finishes in the kiai during the really crashing parts. Basically when you hear lots of finishes in the music. fixed!!!
   
   
2. The kiai burst at 01:01:777 is kinda weird and not necessary imo. I suggest removing it. removed :3
   
   
3. In your .osb file for each diff, look for this text under "Events"
   

   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"BG1.jpg",1,1

   Please change it to this for each diff:
   

   //Background and Video events
   0,0,"BG1.jpg",0,0

   The reason is because when it's set to 1,1, the BG will be offset by one pixel in play.

fixed

[Insane]

Design

1. 00:16:777 - This section would play nicer if you added a note here. You did so in the hard diff. o.o added o.o
   
   
2. 00:18:123 (3,4,5) - This triplet feels a bit random, it's not following the music very well, and the 1/1 slider that ends on the downbeat feels strange. It would be better to replace the triplet, and then to have a 1/2 slider at 00:18:507 and another at 00:18:700 to follow the vocals more closely. fixed
   
   
3. 00:23:507 - I think it would be nicer to start this slider at 00:23:700 try to change the rhythm here to follow the vocals a bit smoother. fixed
   
   
   00:22:738 to 00:24:084
   
   
4. 00:24:277 (3,4,5,6,7) - The placement on the 6 is pretty strange, and it starts after the vocals hold, so it feels off somehow. I suggest deleting the 00:24:661 (5) and moving the 6 to there, and extending it like so: fixed
   
   
   Also, you could try to place the slider in a way that flows a bit better and isn't being overlapped by the previous hitbursts:
   
   Just a sample placement. If you flip the 6 over like show, do so for the 7 also.
   
   
5. 00:31:007 (6,7) - Some of your sliders are kind of weird and unfitting. Here's an example. Were you trying to make a slider that blankets the 7? Try only using three points for the curve in the 6 and not four, like so: fixed
   
   
   
   
6. 00:34:661 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The rhythm here is very difficult to understand in play and feels too random. The 00:35:334 (5) is overmapped because it's not mapped to something in the music. The stream stops at 00:35:238 in the music. I suggest changing it like so: fixed
   
   
   The stream is much easier to read when it's not on the end of the slider like this, and in the music the stream is only 5 notes like so.
   Also, you could try to place the stream in a nice curve in the center of the 00:34:084 (5,6,7) which might play well. Try something along these lines:
   
   
   
7. 00:41:200 (6) - This slider is a bit strange, I think it might be nicer to have 3 circles to fit with the vocals instead. Also I feel that you're missing a NC at 00:41:777 (7) when the new vocal line starts. fixed
   
   
8. 00:44:084 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I'm not sure how you came up with all of these triplet rhythm here...They feel sort of strange in play, there aren't triplets in the music. Same point as 00:41:200 (6), I feel that the 00:44:277 (5) would be better as three circles in a pattern and then the slider at 00:44:853. Something like so: fixed
   
   
   00:43:700 to 00:45:815
   
   
9. 00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - This is super difficult to read when it's stacked on the end of the previous slider like that. I think having a spinner before this stream to follow that flux in the music would play much better, so here's what I suggest: D: this is the part which I like most in my insane map so I don't want to change it .__.
   
   
   Delete the spinner at 00:50:815 and map it out with a rhythm like so, then have a spinner at 00:52:546. Then you could have the pause at 00:53:892 just like in the music and have the 00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) start somewhere in the center of the screen. That would play much better imo.
   
   
10. 01:04:277 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel that you missed out on the chance for large spacing here. This is the most epic part of the song, but your spacing and rhythms are very simple and easy here. Just an opinion. yeah! someone said that so I immediately change it now lol
    
    
11. 01:08:507 (2) - Try to make this placement look nicer. Make the curve on the 2 more refined and more even. Here's an example: fixed
    
    
    
    
12. 01:18:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I know you'd like to repeat this pattern again, but this long stream isn't fitting to what's happening in the music very well, so it feels really overmapped and bad. I suggest changing the rhythm to something like this to fit the music better: fixed
    
    
    01:18:507 (1) to 01:20:238 (1)
    
    
13. 01:23:219 (1) - I think starting this at 01:23:315 fits better to the music, and would be better for osu!mania unless I'm mistaken.

fixed

Hitsounds

1. 00:07:930 (1) - Missing a finish on the head here I believe.
   
   
2. 00:08:507 (2) - Why finish here? o.o
   
   
3. 00:08:700 (3) - Why is this the only diff that switches to soft sample set here?
   
   
4. 00:32:546 (4) - Missing normal finish on the end?
   
   
5. 00:34:084 (5) - Finish? Just like 00:31:007 (6).
   
   
6. 00:41:777 (7) - Finish on the end.
   
   
7. 00:43:315 (6) - Finish?

hitsound all fixed

[Hard]
all fixed in hard
Design

1. 00:09:469 (5,6,7,8,9) - The 5 being a 3/4 slider doesn't really work well imo. It would be better to extend it to make it a 1/1 slider. Also it would be better to have the at 00:10:046 instead. It fits the music and reads nicer. A triplet at 00:10:815 fits well also. So consider this rhythm:
   
   
   
   
2. 00:13:315 (5,6) - I don't recommend stacking these, I think lots of players will have a really hard time reading that stack after playing the triplet.
   
   
3. 00:17:546 (6) - Strange that you don't NC here where the vocals start again, but you NC later at 00:18:508 (1). Why?
   
   
4. 00:26:392 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This placement is really nice, why didn't you do something like this in the insane diff? In the insane diff, the placement here is really random compared to this.
   
   
5. 00:35:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section really doesn't play well. The reason is because you stop following the vocals with the 00:36:007 (2) but then you start following them again with the 00:36:969 (4,5,6,7) awkward stacks. Try extending the 00:35:623 (1) like so:
   
   
   If you want to, experiment with putting sliders here. Just the circles with gaps are kinda meh. The vocals actually do hold, so the circles don't feel that great, sliders would feel better. It would play nice if you made the 2, 3 and 5 a 1/2 slider for example.
   
   
6. 00:49:853 (6,7) - The jump feels a bit random, I suggest using normals spacing here instead.
   
   
7. 00:57:161 (1,2) - Again this 3/4 slider doesn't fit well. I highly suggest deleting the 2 and extending the 1 to 00:57:546.
   
   
8. 01:04:469 (1) - Consider ending the spinner at 01:05:623 instead. I think it fits better with the music and gives the player more time to recover.
   
   
9. 01:14:084 (1) - Consider placing this around (64,132) to remove the anti-jump and to keep in a pattern with the 01:12:546 (1,3).
   
   
10. 01:23:219 (1) - Same as insane, maybe starting at 01:23:315 would be better.

Hitsounds

1. 00:32:546 (4) - Missing finish on the end?
   
   
2. 00:56:200 (2) - Why so many finishes on this slider? I suggest removing them, they aren't fitting.

The placements and patterns in this diff are for the most part much nicer than the ones in the insane. For example 01:16:007 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - the placement and rhythm here felt much better than the one you used in the insane, consider doing something similar there.

[Normal]

Design

1. 00:09:084 (2,3) - Nazi, move them up and left one grid (grid size 4) so that they perfectly reflect each other across the axis. Try using CTRL+H to check. fixed
   
   
2. 00:13:315 (4,1,2,3) - Rhythm is kinda strange imo. The stacks don't feel like they are following the song very well. Can I suggest another rhythm? fixed
   
   
   Single circles and then a slider at 00:14:084 to follow the vocals.
   
   
3. 00:33:315 (3,4,5) - The pause is kind of awkward, and reading the timing on the 4 is difficult. I suggest using a similar rhythm here at you did at 00:30:238 (3,4,5). So make the 00:33:315 (3) a 1/1 slider instead perhaps. imo it is okay so i don't change it.
   
   
4. 01:00:238 (1,3) - Ugly placement imo, try to place the 3 in a way that doesn't overlap the hitburst from the 1, or try to make it so the 3's tail is perfectly overlapping the 1. fixed
   
   
5. 01:01:777 (4) - According to your pattern, this should be a NC. fixed
   
   
6. 01:03:315 (1) - Maybe make blanket instead? fixed
   
   
   
   
7. 01:22:930 (4,5) - This isn't fitting very well to the song. It's a bit awkward. I suggest deleting the 4 and 5 and instead adding a repeat to the 01:22:161 (3). That fits nicer and it's easier to play imo. pm:3
   
   
8. 01:23:315 (1,1) - Try to give more time for the player to recover after this spinner. Maybe end the spinner at 01:26:007 instead but it doesn't fit the music imo D:

Hitsounds all fixed

1. 00:29:469 (1) - Shouldn't the finish be on the end there instead?
   
   
2. 00:41:777 (1) - Missing finish on the end?

[Easy] all fixed too :3

Design

1. 00:17:546 (3) - Same as hard, it's strange that you don't NC here to follow the vocals like you do in the insane diff.
   
   
2. 00:26:007 (6) - Maybe delete this. I don't think it's necessary and the pause feels nicer imo since the section gets a bit spammy on 1/1 rhythms.
   
   
3. 00:53:123 (2,3) - Make them aligned vertically for a better looking pattern.
   
   
   
   
4. 00:56:200 (2) - This would play better if you made it a slider instead. This will give players more leeway to time the hit, and will transition better into the next slider. Plus it follows the vocals more closely, so it feels nicer. Same applies for 01:02:353 (2) and 01:08:507 (2).
   
   
   
   
5. 01:21:777 (1,2,3) - Maybe try making these centered on the grid instead.
   
   

Ok, whew. Well generally not a bad mapset. Just work more on filling out your hitsounding. Maybe try and find a clap that could fit nicely with the music during the more active percussion sections that I mentioned. You can find lots of hitsounds here: t/15407
Also work more on creating intuitive rhythms and placements in your insane diff.

Ok I hope this helps you.

//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG1(or 2).jpg",0,0

SPOILER

SPOILER

SPOILER

Irreversible wrote:

[Muzukashii]

well i wanna try to mod taiko ._.

00:18:700 (1) - uhm.. maybe remove this? XD I think retaining it is better imo~
i give up. xD

MineC24 wrote:

PM request~

Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii

d = don k = kat

imo, HP Drain - 1 HP Drain is still kept as 5, as OD is not high.

00:13:315 (1) - d (ddk pattern -> Very hard Muzukashii pattern. If you make more hard, no change this mod ) remain unchanged
00:17:065 (4) - remove this or 00:17:161 (1) - k this remain unchanged
00:19:853 (1) - same as 00:13:315 (1) remain unchanged
01:14:469 (2) - d..? fixed
01:22:546 (1,2,1,2) - how about this? -> ddkkd fits more imo ;w;
01:26:392 (2,3,4) - d k is better imo ;w; strong hitsound there.

Nardo's Taiko Oni

00:37:642 (1) - k fixed
00:59:757 - add d as there is a sv increment in chorus part, simpler patterns here can act as a buffer region, so remain unchanged.
01:14:469 (4) - d..? fixed

GL

MineC24 wrote:

PM request~

<- fix plz

Easy

No Problem

Normal

AR - 1? no coz it doesn't match the SV

00:27:161 (2,3) - change this pattern plz (So confuse..) fixed
01:28:700 (4) - add finish (slider end) no coz easy doesn't have finish there

Hard

00:30:430 (4,5) - umm.. It's look so bad.. reason?
00:41:200 (6) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/711270 fixed
01:28:700 (1,2,3,4) - use jump please..? hard enough imo
01:29:277 (4) - add finish same as normal and easy

Insane

01:29:277 (4) - add finish no

GL

jamjamjam616 wrote:

[Easy]
00:52:161 (5,1,2) - 在easy難度突然這樣跳個人覺得有點怪 讓人可以把手向右移一點再向左上角打回去吧

建議

fixed
除此之外都沒有了

[Normal]
01:28:700 (4) - 分成兩個sliders吧 本身已經夠短 5想再增加難度

[Hard]
00:11:007 (1) - NC 本身已經NC
這個難度已經沒有什麼破綻了

[Insane]
01:03:027 (4) - 建議加多個combo啦 節奏上太齊整啦 reason? 有音?
01:13:507 (4) - 同上 ^

坐等rank嚕

happy623 wrote:

姨媽gogogo

[Easy]
00:38:700 (1) - Normal sampleset drum好似fit d wor
00:50:623 - add a note? (突然空左有d難觸摸 ;w; fixed
00:51:007 (4) - 換做 slider 到 00:51:777 ? ( ^同上 fixed
01:01:007 (3) - 70% volume fixed
01:17:161 (5) - 80% volume fixed


[Normal]
00:38:700 (1) - Normal sampleset fixed
01:01:007 (3) - 70% volume fixed
01:17:161 (1) - 80% volume fixed


[Hard]
01:01:007 (7) - 70% volume fixed
01:16:969 (4) - 80% volume 本身係80% ;w;

[Insane]
01:01:007 (3,1) - 70% volume
01:06:777 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/715542 better ? 整左 ;D
01:17:161 (2) - 80% volume fixed
01:21:777 (1,2,3) - 試下整個跳?;w; 整左:3

其實係大細聲有d懸殊 大致都OK ;w; 加油姨媽

jonathanlfj wrote:

srry for the delay, now that i finally finished my exams...
oh yes robo note~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
Disable video in the taiko diffs? also bg offset should be (0,0) not (1,1), change that in the .osu files of the taikos

//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG1(or 2).jpg",0,0

[Easy]
00:20:238 (5) - NC fixed
00:34:084 (3) - curve this slider so you get a natural flow onto 00:35:238 (4) fixed
01:00:238 (1,2,3,4,1) - 5 consecutive circles may be quite challenging for newbies since most of them are in straight lines, try 2 sliders + 1 note here fixed
01:20:623 (2) - put a blanket around 01:21:777 (1) would look better fixed

[Normal]
00:33:507 - sounds like there should be a note here no but instead add a note at the white line before that red tick
01:06:392 (5) - NC fixed
01:17:738 (3) - this plays better as a 1/1 slider with no repeat imo in fact there is a sound at the reverse part so no change

[Hard]
should spam more NC so u wont see numbers like 12 in combos
00:15:815 (2) - perfectly stack this under end of 00:14:661 (8) fixed
00:33:892 (4,5,6) - this is quite difficult to read for a hard imo, try this: fixed

SPOILER

00:57:161 (1) - clap on end fixed
01:06:392 (2,3,4,5) - something like this would be cool: fixed

SPOILER

01:18:892 (4) - 1/6 snap cannot do that technically isn't it?

[Insane]
00:14:084 (1,2,3,4) - these flow better as sliders imo, such as this:

SPOILER

fixed
00:18:700 (5) - NC fixed
00:33:123 (1) - stack where 00:31:584 (7) was fixed
01:04:661 (4) - u should break this into 1/2 slider + note, since the instrumentals heavily suggest a beat at 01:04:853 fixed
01:18:987 (2,3,4,5) - if u listen carefully these are actually in 1/6 snap, so might want to swap the stream for a repeat slider how to do that 1/6 snap ;w;?

Thats all, nice mapset~ Good luck in ranking ^_^

QMAZZ wrote:

開頭的轉盤 建議結束位置改到00:03:507

加油:D

1. 為甚麼Video是852x480 @@? 確定這個大小沒有問題麼

1. 00:04:853 (1) - NC BUG
2. 01:06:392 (1) - Easy的話不能放2次以上的迴轉
3. 01:17:738 (1,2) - 用Slider代替嗎，紅線的點比較容易打錯
4. 01:28:700 (3) - 同 01:06:392 (1)

1. 00:07:930 (1) - 它的尾巴跟 00:07:161 (5) 和 00:09:853 (3) 重疊，不好看，移動一下會比較美觀 http://puu.sh/2GIK0.jpg
2. 00:32:546 (1,3,4,5,6) - 這個排位真的不討好@@ 好多新手會連次序都分不清楚
3. 00:39:469 (2) - 確定這個Clap在這個位置？
4. 00:42:161 (1) - 結尾Clap?(後面略

1. 00:24:661 (7,1,2) - 重疊有點亂，拍子數得不夠清楚就打錯了@@ 畢竟那個(7)是屬於前面的4拍，要不要將(7)跟(1,2)分開來放？另一個方法就是將 00:24:853 (1) 刪掉，效果我覺得也不錯
2. 00:33:507 (7) - 移動它到跟 00:33:892 (8) 重疊，因為前面同樣的部份你是用跳:3
3. 00:42:353 (2,3,4) - 不弄跳嗎，同上面的理由
4. 00:45:430 (2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:47:546 (3) -
6. 00:48:700 (3) - 它會擋到後面的Slider，把它跟 00:48:892 (4) 分開吧
7. 00:52:546 (1) - 它的開頭為甚麼要Clap @@?
8. 01:06:392 (2) - Finish
9. 01:21:777 (1,2,3,4) - 這個跳對比於前面來說有點小，甚至跟 01:22:738 (4,5,6) 是一樣；要不要弄成這樣 http://puu.sh/2GJ2i.jpg

1. 00:06:200 - 綠線是多餘的
2. 00:14:469 (2) - 開頭是不是少了一個Clap?
3. 00:18:892 (1) - 結尾確定要Clap?
4. 00:23:700 (2) - Clap
5. 00:47:545 (5) - 這個note的時間偏了，移動到 00:47:546
6. 00:53:027 (4) - 這個Note刪掉，聽起來我覺得會比較舒服
7. 01:06:392 (1) - Finish
8. 01:20:238 (1) - Finish
9. 01:23:122 (6) - 同樣場這個note的時間也偏了，移動到 01:23:123
10. 01:28:700 (1) - Finish

1. 為甚麼Video是852x480 @@? 確定這個大小沒有問題麼 16:9嘛 應該無問題的 做5到854x480

1. 00:04:853 (1) - NC BUG fixed
2. 01:06:392 (1) - Easy的話不能放2次以上的迴轉 fixed
3. 01:17:738 (1,2) - 用Slider代替嗎，紅線的點比較容易打錯 fixed
4. 01:28:700 (3) - 同 01:06:392 (1) fixed

1. 00:07:930 (1) - 它的尾巴跟 00:07:161 (5) 和 00:09:853 (3) 重疊，不好看，移動一下會比較美觀 http://puu.sh/2GIK0.jpg fixed
2. 00:32:546 (1,3,4,5,6) - 這個排位真的不討好@@ 好多新手會連次序都分不清楚 fixed
3. 00:39:469 (2) - 確定這個Clap在這個位置？ fixed
4. 00:42:161 (1) - 結尾Clap?(後面略 這個有保留 這裡音樂比較有個性及突出 所以我不加太多hitsounds了

1. 00:24:661 (7,1,2) - 重疊有點亂，拍子數得不夠清楚就打錯了@@ 畢竟那個(7)是屬於前面的4拍，要不要將(7)跟(1,2)分開來放？另一個方法就是將 00:24:853 (1) 刪掉，效果我覺得也不錯 這個我覺得還好啊@@
2. 00:33:507 (7) - 移動它到跟 00:33:892 (8) 重疊，因為前面同樣的部份你是用跳:3 fixed
3. 00:42:353 (2,3,4) - 不弄跳嗎，同上面的理由 fixed
4. 00:45:430 (2,3,4) - ^ fixed
5. 00:47:546 (3) - fixed
6. 00:48:700 (3) - 它會擋到後面的Slider，把它跟 00:48:892 (4) 分開吧 fixed
7. 00:52:546 (1) - 它的開頭為甚麼要Clap @@? fixed
8. 01:06:392 (2) - Finish fixed
9. 01:21:777 (1,2,3,4) - 這個跳對比於前面來說有點小，甚至跟 01:22:738 (4,5,6) 是一樣；要不要弄成這樣 http://puu.sh/2GJ2i.jpg fixed

1. 00:06:200 - 綠線是多餘的
2. 00:14:469 (2) - 開頭是不是少了一個Clap?
3. 00:18:892 (1) - 結尾確定要Clap?
4. 00:23:700 (2) - Clap
5. 00:47:545 (5) - 這個note的時間偏了，移動到 00:47:546
6. 00:53:027 (4) - 這個Note刪掉，聽起來我覺得會比較舒服
7. 01:06:392 (1) - Finish
8. 01:20:238 (1) - Finish
9. 01:23:122 (6) - 同樣場這個note的時間也偏了，移動到 01:23:123
10. 01:28:700 (1) - Finish
    insane all fixed 了

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Insane]
00:11:007 (1) - add soft finish fixed
00:15:623 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fixed
00:17:161 (9) - add normal finish fixed
00:19:084 (2) - 忘了加clap嗎 對:P
00:23:315 (1) - add soft finish fixed
00:32:162 (2) - 這裡為什麼要改用drum 你的建議是?
00:51:007 (6) - 加一顆note，spinner放到這後面 fixed
00:53:123 (4) - 頭尾加clap？ 只+了頭
00:53:892 (6) - 頭加clap？ added
00:54:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 這串音量建議條小一點 這是這個難度的高難度地方 所以我不打算改了
01:01:007 (3,4) - 建議換個音效 fixed
01:05:238 (2) - add soft finish fixed
01:06:007 (5) - ^ fixed
01:06:392 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fixed
01:12:546 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡用drum略違和 建議?
01:17:161 (2,3,4,5,1) - 建議改成soft finish，drum的聲音在這裡不太明顯 太多finish了吧-x-
01:28:700 (1,2,3,4) - add soft finish 音樂已經夠強勁 再+hitsound 其一 聽不到 其二 聽到的話只會覺得太嘈吵

[Hard]
00:16:584 (1) - 建議擺遠一點 fixed
00:48:892 (4) - 這種排法是不能rank的 fixed
01:04:469 (1) - 為什麼要在這裡放spinner 為甚麼不能?;w;

音效跟insane的部份差不多

還有跳少放一些吧，我覺得這hard有點難o3o 激昂的音樂需要激烈的map配合 所以我覺得現在就好:3

[Normal]
00:04:277 (x) - 加顆note？ 或著把spinner換掉 不了 還是白線完spinner比較好
00:40:623 (3) - 這裡怎麼跑出一個whistle 沒有啊

[Easy]
這個easy也有點難阿 我覺得還好啊 因為只是TV Size罷了
節奏簡單一點會更好

熱血妹子激萌阿
其實我也有作這首，不介意的話可以參考一下 你的是full version 所以容易一點也ok啊 但TV Size比較短 所以可以map盡那些音樂