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DeletedUser_1574070
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DeletedUser_1574070
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年3月24日 at 21:38:12

Artist: dj TAKA
Title: Elpis
Source: Beatmania iidx 20 Tricoro
Tags: Kloyd jieusieu narangd koreapenguin
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3292kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 566 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.53 stars, 101 notes)
  3. Extra (4.76 stars, 707 notes)
  4. Hyper (4.89 stars, 367 notes)
  5. Normal (4.24 stars, 173 notes)
Download: dj TAKA - Elpis
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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130301
TRICORO ONE
Beginner (All done)
Normal (All done)
Hyper (All done)
Another (All done)
Extra (Collab done)
special thanks (jieusieu koreapenguin narangd on Extra collab)
Last edited by DeletedUser_1574070 , edited 12 times in total.
jtd1
195 posts
Joined June 2012
jtd1
M4M

General

Set a preview point for the song, which can be done by finding a point in the song, eg. Where the chorus starts, and then going to the 'Timing' section, and then clicking on 'Set Current Position as a Preview Point'.

Beginner

00:38:733 - Remove Hitsound

Normal

00:56:561 (2) - I think this should be stacked between 00:55:533 (1) and 00:56:904 (3)

Extra

Streams :O (not a problem)

00:40:790 (5,6) - Double note sounds wrong here. Maybe remove (6) or remove hitsound on both notes to make it clearer that the 2 notes are there.
00:49:018 (1,2) - ^
00:51:761 (2,3) - ^
00:59:990 (1) - Remove note

Hyper
Nothing wrong, but this seems easier than Extra. Think you should change the order to make it go Hyper, Extra.

Another
00:49:018 (1,2) Same as Extra at 00:40:790
00:51:761 (1,2) ^
00:59:990 (1,2) ^
01:29:818 - 01:51:761 : Where are all the hitsounds? I only heard a few there, so add some more please.

Can't really mod the streams, only a newbie.
Good luck to anyone that plays the 5* maps, and good luck for getting this ranked! :D
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
M4M from your modding queue i actually did this midnight omg
anyway, i hope this will helps :)


Another
AR-1 (to make it more playable since the position is kinda hard to comprehend for the first time)
should be mapped in 1/8 beat snap divisor

00:04:276 (6,1) - overlaps
00:16:790 (13) - end this here 00:17:090 -
01:10:961 (2,3,4) - why not arrange them into more beautiful formation
01:12:076 (2,3,4,5) - they are a little bit close with the HP bar. lower it a bit
01:38:047 (5) - ^
01:48:676 (6) - ^

Hyper
AR-1
nice diff~

00:19:876 (1,1) - lessen the distance between them a little bit
00:30:847 (1,1,1) - ^
01:44:904 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:50:390 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:53:990 (5) - stack this slider behind where the previous reverse slider ends

Extra
00:56:733 (15,16,1,2) - doesn't seem really nice
01:18:504 (14,15,16,17) - ^
01:33:761 (7,8,1,2) - ^
01:00:076 (2) - stack properly
01:31:876 (1) - put this at where the previous reverse slider ends

for the reason why i said "doesn't seem really nice" is because the stream suddenly changed its path in the middle and it's kinda uncomfortable because the change is anti-clockwise (or clockwise if the stream was anti-clockwise at first)

Normal
00:32:218 (1) - too close with the HP bar. lower it
00:55:533 (1,3) - stack properly
01:01:019 (4) - nc (big white line)
01:01:361 (1) - remove nc
01:29:818 (1) - a bit too close with the HP bar. lower it a bit
01:51:076 (3) - ^

Beginner
00:33:933 (1) - lower the spinner end sound

usually multiple short reverse slider like these 00:51:418 (2) - 00:54:161 (3) - 01:03:761 (1) - 01:11:990 (2) - 01:16:104 (2) - 01:33:933 (1) - 01:39:418 (1) - 01:42:161 (3) - 01:44:904 (3) - 01:50:390 (1) - can confuse beginners. consider only making one reverse for each reverse slider. This one 01:27:076 (2) - is an exception because the slider is long enough so beginner will have more time to recognize the reverse arrow

01:24:333 (2,3) - make them parallel to each other

My map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song..

Good luck with your ranking~
MineC24
1,072 posts
Joined May 2010
MineC24
Modding queue~

Story Boarding
Letterbox during breaks 항목 왠만하면 체크 해제해주세요.

Beginner
00:08:561 (1) - 00:07:190 (1) 하고 겹치는게 보기 안좋아요... 두 슬라이더의 위치를 바꿔주세요.
00:33:933 (1) - 스핀의 끝지점을 00:39:076 으로 바꾸는게 좋아보여요.
00:52:790 (1) - 00:51:418 (2) 하고 겹치는게 보기 안좋아요... 위치를 바꿔주세요.
00:55:533 (1) - ^
00:56:904 (3) - x:168 y:332 로 이동해주세요
00:57:590 (4) - x:64 y:256 으로 이동해주세요
01:24:333 (2) - 이 슬라이더를 복사한 후, Ctrl + G를 해서 배치시키는게 좋아보여요

Normal
00:33:247 (4) - x:224 y:59로 이동시켜주세요. (이동하는게 힘들다면 Grid snap을 끄고 이동시켜보세요)
01:35:304 (1) - 1의 슬라이더 모양이 이상해요.(슬라이더의 빨간 포인트를 좀 더 중심에 맞춰주세요)
01:46:276 (1) - 슬라이더 모양이 이상해요.(2개의 빨간 포인트중 하나를 마우스 오른쪽 클릭한 후에, 디스턴스에 맞게 다시 배치해주세요)
01:49:018 (1) - x:196 y:220 으로 이동시켜주세요.

Hyper
OD를 + 1 시켜주세요.

00:10:790 (2) - 앞에 있는 슬라이더에 약간 가려져서 치기 불편해요... 이동시켜주세요.
00:47:818 (3) - 스택시키는게 더 좋아보여요.
00:51:418 (1) - 뉴콤보 설정하고, 00:51:761 (1) 를 뉴콤보 해제시켜주세요.
00:54:161 (6) - ^
01:40:276 (4,5,6) - 모양이 조금 이상해요. 배치를 바꿔주세요.
01:44:904 (1,2,3,4) - Hyper 난이도는 하드~인세인 정도의 난이도인데, 이 패턴은 인세인이상의 어려운 패턴이에요...
쉽게 바꿔주세요.
01:50:390 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Another
HP Drain - 1

00:44:218 (3) - x:104 y:100 으로 이동시켜주세요.

Nice Stream :)

Extra
개인적인 의견이지만 HP Drain - 2 (어려울수록 체력게이지는 줄이는게 좋다고 생각해요.)
OD - 1

00:07:190 (7) - x:212 y:272 로 이동시켜주세요.
00:07:533 (1) - x:300 y:272 로 이동시켜주세요.
00:45:246 (9) - 스트림에서 간격이 갑자기 크게 증가하면 어려울 수 있으니 이 구간을
원래부터 DS 1.0의 스트림으로 하시거나, 이 노트에 뉴콤보를 설정하시는게 좋아요.
00:45:847 (16) - 이건 전에 나오는 노트때문에 제대로 치기가 어려울 것 같아요. 이동시켜주세요.
00:56:904 (1,2) - 이것도 위의 의견과 마찬가지... 이동시켜주세요.
01:17:390 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제시키고, 01:17:476 (17) 에다가 뉴콤보 해주세요.
01:17:476 (2) - 위의 의견과 마찬가지.
01:18:676 (16) - 마찬가지.

스트림을 잘 짜시네요 :D

랭크되시길.. :)
DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070
Thanks jaehn215 AlpacaCokelat jtd1

gonna give kudosu in advance cuz I found many things to fix from your mods
I'll fix in a week thank you all.
neonat
Beatmap Nominator
3,528 posts
Joined April 2012
neonat
M4M. This is what I noticed, and suggest.

Beginner

00:33:933 (1) - why not end it at 00:39:076
00:51:418 (2) - try not to have repeat sliders that repeat more than once (more than just one reverse arrow) for beginner
00:54:161 (3) - ^
01:03:761 (1) - ^
01:11:990 (2,2) - ^ (if possible, do not have so many, change some)
There are many more 2 reverse arrow sliders in the rest of the song, try and change some if you can
01:05:133 (1) - end at 01:06:504 ? Then add a note at 01:07:190 -(Should be fine, it's 2 beats away from end of slider)
01:23:990 (1) - remove NC add on 01:24:333 (2)
01:26:733 (1) - ^


Normal

00:46:961 (4) - clap?
00:56:904 (3) - covered by the end of 00:55:533 (1) -, doesn't look really nice, I suggest you shift 00:56:904 (3) somewhere else


Extra

00:18:847 (6) - NC here instead, 00:19:104 (1) - remove NC
Reduce the volume of hitsounds during the streams


Hyper

00:13:018 (7) - NC
00:15:761 (5) - ^
00:23:990 (8) - ^
00:26:733 (8) - ^

Good luck.
DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

jtd1 wrote:

M4M

General

Set a preview point for the song, which can be done by finding a point in the song, eg. Where the chorus starts, and then going to the 'Timing' section, and then clicking on 'Set Current Position as a Preview Point'. okay

Beginner

00:38:733 - Remove Hitsound yeah thx

Normal

00:56:561 (2) - I think this should be stacked between 00:55:533 (1) and 00:56:904 (3) yes yes

Extra

Streams :O (not a problem)

00:40:790 (5,6) - Double note sounds wrong here. Maybe remove (6) or remove hitsound on both notes to make it clearer that the 2 notes are there.
00:49:018 (1,2) - ^
00:51:761 (2,3) - ^
00:59:990 (1) - Remove note

okay~
Hyper
Nothing wrong, but this seems easier than Extra. Think you should change the order to make it go Hyper, Extra.
I don't know how to change order of the maps T_T
Another
00:49:018 (1,2) Same as Extra at 00:40:790
00:51:761 (1,2) ^
00:59:990 (1,2) ^
01:29:818 - 01:51:761 : Where are all the hitsounds? I only heard a few there, so add some more please.
I did all
Can't really mod the streams, only a newbie.
Good luck to anyone that plays the 5* maps, and good luck for getting this ranked! :D

Thanks for a mod! :)
DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

M4M from your modding queue i actually did this midnight omg
anyway, i hope this will helps :)


Another
AR-1 (to make it more playable since the position is kinda hard to comprehend for the first time)
should be mapped in 1/8 beat snap divisor

00:04:276 (6,1) - overlaps
00:16:790 (13) - end this here 00:17:090 -
01:10:961 (2,3,4) - why not arrange them into more beautiful formation
01:12:076 (2,3,4,5) - they are a little bit close with the HP bar. lower it a bit
01:38:047 (5) - ^
01:48:676 (6) - ^

Hyper
AR-1
nice diff~

00:19:876 (1,1) - lessen the distance between them a little bit
00:30:847 (1,1,1) - ^
01:44:904 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:50:390 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:53:990 (5) - stack this slider behind where the previous reverse slider ends

Extra
00:56:733 (15,16,1,2) - doesn't seem really nice
01:18:504 (14,15,16,17) - ^
01:33:761 (7,8,1,2) - ^
01:00:076 (2) - stack properly
01:31:876 (1) - put this at where the previous reverse slider ends

for the reason why i said "doesn't seem really nice" is because the stream suddenly changed its path in the middle and it's kinda uncomfortable because the change is anti-clockwise (or clockwise if the stream was anti-clockwise at first)

Normal
00:32:218 (1) - too close with the HP bar. lower it
00:55:533 (1,3) - stack properly
01:01:019 (4) - nc (big white line)
01:01:361 (1) - remove nc
01:29:818 (1) - a bit too close with the HP bar. lower it a bit
01:51:076 (3) - ^

Beginner
00:33:933 (1) - lower the spinner end sound

usually multiple short reverse slider like these 00:51:418 (2) - 00:54:161 (3) - 01:03:761 (1) - 01:11:990 (2) - 01:16:104 (2) - 01:33:933 (1) - 01:39:418 (1) - 01:42:161 (3) - 01:44:904 (3) - 01:50:390 (1) - can confuse beginners. consider only making one reverse for each reverse slider. This one 01:27:076 (2) - is an exception because the slider is long enough so beginner will have more time to recognize the reverse arrow

01:24:333 (2,3) - make them parallel to each other

My map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song..

Good luck with your ranking~
changed except AR -1 thx!
DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

jaehn215 wrote:

Modding queue~

Story Boarding
Letterbox during breaks 항목 왠만하면 체크 해제해주세요.

Beginner
00:08:561 (1) - 00:07:190 (1) 하고 겹치는게 보기 안좋아요... 두 슬라이더의 위치를 바꿔주세요.
00:33:933 (1) - 스핀의 끝지점을 00:39:076 으로 바꾸는게 좋아보여요.
00:52:790 (1) - 00:51:418 (2) 하고 겹치는게 보기 안좋아요... 위치를 바꿔주세요.
00:55:533 (1) - ^
00:56:904 (3) - x:168 y:332 로 이동해주세요
00:57:590 (4) - x:64 y:256 으로 이동해주세요
01:24:333 (2) - 이 슬라이더를 복사한 후, Ctrl + G를 해서 배치시키는게 좋아보여요

Normal
00:33:247 (4) - x:224 y:59로 이동시켜주세요. (이동하는게 힘들다면 Grid snap을 끄고 이동시켜보세요)
01:35:304 (1) - 1의 슬라이더 모양이 이상해요.(슬라이더의 빨간 포인트를 좀 더 중심에 맞춰주세요)
01:46:276 (1) - 슬라이더 모양이 이상해요.(2개의 빨간 포인트중 하나를 마우스 오른쪽 클릭한 후에, 디스턴스에 맞게 다시 배치해주세요)
01:49:018 (1) - x:196 y:220 으로 이동시켜주세요.

Hyper
OD를 + 1 시켜주세요.

00:10:790 (2) - 앞에 있는 슬라이더에 약간 가려져서 치기 불편해요... 이동시켜주세요.
00:47:818 (3) - 스택시키는게 더 좋아보여요.
00:51:418 (1) - 뉴콤보 설정하고, 00:51:761 (1) 를 뉴콤보 해제시켜주세요.
00:54:161 (6) - ^
01:40:276 (4,5,6) - 모양이 조금 이상해요. 배치를 바꿔주세요.
01:44:904 (1,2,3,4) - Hyper 난이도는 하드~인세인 정도의 난이도인데, 이 패턴은 인세인이상의 어려운 패턴이에요...
쉽게 바꿔주세요.
01:50:390 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Another
HP Drain - 1

00:44:218 (3) - x:104 y:100 으로 이동시켜주세요.

Nice Stream :)

Extra
개인적인 의견이지만 HP Drain - 2 (어려울수록 체력게이지는 줄이는게 좋다고 생각해요.) 1 줄였어요
OD - 1 지금은 그냥 놔둘게요

00:07:190 (7) - x:212 y:272 로 이동시켜주세요.
00:07:533 (1) - x:300 y:272 로 이동시켜주세요.
00:45:246 (9) - 스트림에서 간격이 갑자기 크게 증가하면 어려울 수 있으니 이 구간을
원래부터 DS 1.0의 스트림으로 하시거나, 이 노트에 뉴콤보를 설정하시는게 좋아요.
00:45:847 (16) - 이건 전에 나오는 노트때문에 제대로 치기가 어려울 것 같아요. 이동시켜주세요.
00:56:904 (1,2) - 이것도 위의 의견과 마찬가지... 이동시켜주세요.
01:17:390 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제시키고, 01:17:476 (17) 에다가 뉴콤보 해주세요.
01:17:476 (2) - 위의 의견과 마찬가지.
01:18:676 (16) - 마찬가지.

스트림을 잘 짜시네요 :D

랭크되시길.. :)
빨간글자 이외에는 다 고쳤어요. 모딩 감사합니다!
jieusieu
460 posts
Joined March 2011
jieusieu

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Extra
00:56:733 (15,16,1,2) - doesn't seem really nice
01:33:761 (7,8,1,2) - ^

for the reason why i said "doesn't seem really nice" is because the stream suddenly changed its path in the middle and it's kinda uncomfortable because the change is anti-clockwise (or clockwise if the stream was anti-clockwise at first)
ㄴ
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Joon
hi

Joon's Hit sound modding

[Beginner]
*볼륨을 65% -> 55% 로 감량해주세요 clap소리가 너무 튑니다.

00:33:933 (1) - add finish
00:50:047 (1) - 왜 여긴 무음이죠? 의도하신건가요?
01:03:761 (1) - 1,3st notes add finish
01:18:847 (1) - start notes add finish

[Noraml]
00:11:647 (1) - End notes add clap
00:33:590 (1) - Beginner 처럼하면 좋겠습니다.
00:45:590 (2) - remove clap [어색합니다]
00:56:561 (2) - add clap
00:57:933 (4) - ^
01:03:761 (1) - add finish
01:11:990 (5) - 2,4st notes add clap
01:17:476 (5) - ^


[Extra]
*whistle를 이용하여 좀더 꾸며보시길 권장합니다.

[Hyper]
00:21:247 (2) - start notes remove clap
00:33:676 (1) - Beginner 처럼하면 좋겠습니다.

[Another]
00:14:390 (1) - End notes add clap
00:14:904 (2) - ^
00:16:790 (13) - start notes add clap
01:16:447 (2,4) - start notes add clap
01:40:447 (3) - ^


아직 히트사운드 작업이 덜 되신건가요 의도하신건가요..
뭔가 많이 허전합니다.
좋은 결과 있으시길
DeletedUser_1574070
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_1574070

Joon wrote:

hi

Joon's Hit sound modding

[Beginner]
*볼륨을 65% -> 55% 로 감량해주세요 clap소리가 너무 튑니다.

00:33:933 (1) - add finish
00:50:047 (1) - 왜 여긴 무음이죠? 의도하신건가요?
01:03:761 (1) - 1,3st notes add finish
01:18:847 (1) - start notes add finish

[Noraml]
00:11:647 (1) - End notes add clap
00:33:590 (1) - Beginner 처럼하면 좋겠습니다.
00:45:590 (2) - remove clap [어색합니다]
00:56:561 (2) - add clap
00:57:933 (4) - ^
01:03:761 (1) - add finish
01:11:990 (5) - 2,4st notes add clap
01:17:476 (5) - ^


[Extra]
*whistle를 이용하여 좀더 꾸며보시길 권장합니다.

[Hyper]
00:21:247 (2) - start notes remove clap
00:33:676 (1) - Beginner 처럼하면 좋겠습니다.

[Another]
00:14:390 (1) - End notes add clap
00:14:904 (2) - ^
00:16:790 (13) - start notes add clap
01:16:447 (2,4) - start notes add clap
01:40:447 (3) - ^


아직 히트사운드 작업이 덜 되신건가요 의도하신건가요..
뭔가 많이 허전합니다.
좋은 결과 있으시길
타이밍이 몇개가 지워지고 그래서 녹색선 작업부터 다시해놨어요

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I WROTE APPROXIMATELY 7 MOD REQUSTS ON THE QUEUE AND I WROTE CORRECT ANSWER ON 3 QUEUES
I CHECKED THE RULES OF THE QUEUES, AGAIN AND AGAIN BUT...

NOBODY TOUCHED MY SHIT JUST BECUZ I'M A TROLL MAPPER

DAMN IT. SUCK MY SKILL HAH
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