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Silent Siren - Stella [OsuMania]

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ExPew
No kudosu, here for pro pattern check

[Pro]

00:10:027 (10027|0,11546|0,13824|0) - move on |4| if at |1| looks so weird pattern i guess

00:22:179 (22179|6,23697|6,25976|6) - ^

00:23:887 (23887|3) - move on |1|

00:26:356 (26356|3,26356|1) - move on right side

00:26:546 (26546|2) - move on left side 00:26:546 (26546|4) - move on right side

00:27:875 (27875|6) - this part shud be same pattern with previous note pattern with 00:27:685 (27685|5) and 00:28:065 (28065|5) - move on |7| because 00:28:444 (28444|6) - looks like cymbal pattern line, so keep it same pattern

00:28:824 (28824|5) - ^ same move on |7|

00:28:634 (28634|5,28634|1) - move on left side

00:30:723 (30723|1,30913|0,31103|1,31292|1,31482|0,31672|5,31672|1,31862|1) - same case with 00:27:685 , mirror it (ctrl + H only that part)

00:32:432 (32432|1,32432|5,32622|4,32622|2) - reverse and flip (ctrl G + H)

00:59:014 (59014|5,59014|3) - keep same position with 00:58:634 (58634|1,58634|3)

01:02:052 (62052|3,62052|1) - ^ 01:01:672 (61672|5,61672|3)

01:14:963 (74963|5,75058|6,75153|4) - weird pattern, try another (i suggest http://puu.sh/2TkWG.png)

01:24:267 (84267|2,84267|4) - move on |1| and |7|

01:24:647 (84647|5,84647|1) - ^

01:25:027 (85027|1,85027|5) - move on |3| and |5|

01:25:596 (85596|2,85596|4) - ^

01:25:786 (85786|4,85786|2) - move on |1| and |7|

01:25:976 (85976|4,85976|2) - move on |2 and |6|

01:39:077 (99077|1,99172|2,99267|3,99362|2,99457|3,99552|4,99647|5) - drum pattern looks no good on ladder try like this ? http://puu.sh/2Tl9b.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlah.png or http://puu.sh/2TldE.png or http://puu.sh/2TleT.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlgu.png

02:09:742 (129742|5,129837|3,129932|1) - move on left side

02:10:122 (130122|1) - move on |4|

02:14:204 (134204|1,134299|2,134394|3) - flip? (ctrl + H)

02:35:660 (155660|5) - move on |7|

02:38:698 (158698|1) - move on |1|

02:50:090 (170090|5,170090|1) - move on |1| and |7| or |3| and |5|

02:51:039 - add a note on |4| (looks more ballance with 02:48:951 (168951|6,168951|3,168951|0) 'just suggest if feel good')

03:19:141 (199141|1,199520|4,199710|4,199900|3) - same pattern with 03:17:622 (197622|5,198001|1,198191|5,198381|2) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:22:179 (202179|5,202558|5,202748|2,202938|4) - ^ 03:20:660 (200660|2,201039|5,201229|2,201419|1) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:25:216 (205216|2) - move on |7|

03:26:735 (206735|6) - move on left side

03:52:748 (232748|1,232843|5,232938|1,233033|5,233128|1,233223|5,233318|1,233413|5) - should flip?(ctrl + H) because same with 03:04:141 (184141|1,184235|5,184330|1,184425|5,184520|1,184615|5,184710|1,184805|5) -

04:18:951 (258951|1,259046|5) - move on |3| and |5|
Topic Starter
indyinyou

ExPew wrote:

No kudosu, here for pro pattern check

[Pro]

00:10:027 (10027|0,11546|0,13824|0) - move on |4| if at |1| looks so weird pattern i guess

00:22:179 (22179|6,23697|6,25976|6) - ^

00:23:887 (23887|3) - move on |1|

00:26:356 (26356|3,26356|1) - move on right side

00:26:546 (26546|2) - move on left side 00:26:546 (26546|4) - move on right side

00:27:875 (27875|6) - this part shud be same pattern with previous note pattern with 00:27:685 (27685|5) and 00:28:065 (28065|5) - move on |7| because 00:28:444 (28444|6) - looks like cymbal pattern line, so keep it same pattern

00:28:824 (28824|5) - ^ same move on |7|

00:28:634 (28634|5,28634|1) - move on left side

00:30:723 (30723|1,30913|0,31103|1,31292|1,31482|0,31672|5,31672|1,31862|1) - same case with 00:27:685 , mirror it (ctrl + H only that part)

00:32:432 (32432|1,32432|5,32622|4,32622|2) - reverse and flip (ctrl G + H)

00:59:014 (59014|5,59014|3) - keep same position with 00:58:634 (58634|1,58634|3)

01:02:052 (62052|3,62052|1) - ^ 01:01:672 (61672|5,61672|3)

01:14:963 (74963|5,75058|6,75153|4) - weird pattern, try another (i suggest http://puu.sh/2TkWG.png)

01:24:267 (84267|2,84267|4) - move on |1| and |7|

01:24:647 (84647|5,84647|1) - ^

01:25:027 (85027|1,85027|5) - move on |3| and |5|

01:25:596 (85596|2,85596|4) - ^

01:25:786 (85786|4,85786|2) - move on |1| and |7|

01:25:976 (85976|4,85976|2) - move on |2 and |6|

01:39:077 (99077|1,99172|2,99267|3,99362|2,99457|3,99552|4,99647|5) - drum pattern looks no good on ladder try like this ? http://puu.sh/2Tl9b.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlah.png or http://puu.sh/2TldE.png or http://puu.sh/2TleT.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlgu.png

02:09:742 (129742|5,129837|3,129932|1) - move on left side

02:10:122 (130122|1) - move on |4|

02:14:204 (134204|1,134299|2,134394|3) - flip? (ctrl + H)

02:35:660 (155660|5) - move on |7|

02:38:698 (158698|1) - move on |1|

02:50:090 (170090|5,170090|1) - move on |1| and |7| or |3| and |5|

02:51:039 - add a note on |4| (looks more ballance with 02:48:951 (168951|6,168951|3,168951|0) 'just suggest if feel good')

03:19:141 (199141|1,199520|4,199710|4,199900|3) - same pattern with 03:17:622 (197622|5,198001|1,198191|5,198381|2) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:22:179 (202179|5,202558|5,202748|2,202938|4) - ^ 03:20:660 (200660|2,201039|5,201229|2,201419|1) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:25:216 (205216|2) - move on |7|

03:26:735 (206735|6) - move on left side

03:52:748 (232748|1,232843|5,232938|1,233033|5,233128|1,233223|5,233318|1,233413|5) - should flip?(ctrl + H) because same with 03:04:141 (184141|1,184235|5,184330|1,184425|5,184520|1,184615|5,184710|1,184805|5) -

04:18:951 (258951|1,259046|5) - move on |3| and |5|
thx so much :D all fix
ExPew
good map....

and omg OD 9 T__T

EDIT :

wait 00:31:672 (31672|5,31672|1,31862|1,31862|4) - did i missing something??? i shud be like this http://puu.sh/2TRW2.png
because its refered from 00:28:444 (28444|2,28444|6,28634|4,28634|0,28824|6,28824|2) - this patttern http://puu.sh/2TRX8.png
Topic Starter
indyinyou

ExPew wrote:

good map....

and omg OD 9 T__T

EDIT :

wait 00:31:672 (31672|5,31672|1,31862|1,31862|4) - did i missing something??? i shud be like this http://puu.sh/2TRW2.png
because its refered from 00:28:444 (28444|2,28444|6,28634|4,28634|0,28824|6,28824|2) - this patttern http://puu.sh/2TRX8.png
All fix thx you agin xD ExPew
HanzeR
[pro drum]
02:25:027 (145027|5) - move to 6? seems weird because you have all this nice space between all your other chords besides this one XD

Loved this map since you showed me it a long time ago <3
Topic Starter
indyinyou

HanzeR wrote:

[pro drum]
02:25:027 (145027|5) - move to 6? seems weird because you have all this nice space between all your other chords besides this one XD

Loved this map since you showed me it a long time ago <3
fix thx for mod xD
DJKero
Amateur Drum:

00:45:533 (45533|1,45913|1,46292|1,46482|6,46672|3) - Invert pattern like "mirror"

00:48:571 (48571|5,48951|5,49330|5) - Move to column 2

01:18:951 (78951|1,79330|1,79710|5,80090|1,80470|1,80849|1) - Invert pattern like "mirror"

01:21:989 (81989|5,82368|5) - Move to column 2

02:44:014 (164014|5,164394|5,164773|1,165153|5,165533|5,165913|5) - Invert pattern like "mirror"

02:47:052 (167052|1,167432|1) - Move to colum 6

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Add:

03:29:394 - Add from here a stair following the Piano until the current break ends. 8-)
Topic Starter
indyinyou

DJKero wrote:

Amateur Drum:

00:45:533 (45533|1,45913|1,46292|1,46482|6,46672|3) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<< not fix

00:48:571 (48571|5,48951|5,49330|5) - Move to column 2 <<< fix

01:18:951 (78951|1,79330|1,79710|5,80090|1,80470|1,80849|1) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<< fix

01:21:989 (81989|5,82368|5) - Move to column 2 <<< not fix

02:44:014 (164014|5,164394|5,164773|1,165153|5,165533|5,165913|5) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<<< not fix

02:47:052 (167052|1,167432|1) - Move to colum 6 <<< not fix

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Add:

03:29:394 - Add from here a stair following the Piano until the current break ends. 8-) <<< sry my mapset follow drum sound
thx for mod
Loooctav
Hi~
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|
|1|2|3|4|5|
|1|2|3|4|

[Basic Drum]
  1. Repetitive diff
00:24:267 What instead of repeating why not put it on the line 7 (The 3 notes)?
00:38:318 Line 5. imo
00:59:204 Line 1
00:59:584 Line 6
00:59:963 Line 1
01:50:280 Add in line 6 (6 and 2)
03:48:191 Line 6
03:52:843 add note in line 3
04:05:660 Add note in line 6
04:06:039 add note in line 2

the other diffs are well

Good luck with rank
Topic Starter
indyinyou

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hi~
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|
|1|2|3|4|5|
|1|2|3|4|

[Basic Drum]
  1. Repetitive diff
00:24:267 What instead of repeating why not put it on the line 7 (The 3 notes)? <<< not fix
00:38:318 Line 5. imo <<< fix
00:59:204 Line 1 <<< not fix
00:59:584 Line 6 <<< not fix
00:59:963 Line 1 <<< not fix
01:50:280 Add in line 6 (6 and 2) <<< not fix
03:48:191 Line 6 <<< not fix
03:52:843 add note in line 3 <<< i think for easy diff i don`t want add note more than 1 note
04:05:660 Add note in line 6<<< ^
04:06:039 add note in line 2<<< ^

the other diffs are well

Good luck with rank
thx for mod
woc2006
1.Since they are a team, it's better if you adding their names to tag: Yoshida Sumire, Umemura Hinako, Yamauchi Aina, Kurosaka Yukako.

2.Turn off "letterbox"
Topic Starter
indyinyou

woc2006 wrote:

1.Since they are a team, it's better if you adding their names to tag: Yoshida Sumire, Umemura Hinako, Yamauchi Aina, Kurosaka Yukako.<<<<< Add tag

2.Turn off "letterbox" <<< fix
thx for mod :D
woc2006
Good work, bubbled.
chonicle
Ranked~
Natsu
congratz :D
Frostmourne
โอ้ ยินดีด้วยพี่ ~~~~
regenz
จนได้นะแก
Topic Starter
indyinyou

regenz wrote:

จนได้นะแก
คนทำเมพจัด :D
Lolicakey
ขอแสดงความยินดี! >w<
Fumika
เหยดดดดดด
Mikkuri
GRATZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Makar
yay an osu!mania map I can actually comprehend!
Hanyuu
Congrats! :)
HeatKai
omg indyinyou ;_; i love you <3 <3 <3
Runamii
I LOVE THIS MAP :D
-Seren-
really nice map :D

congrats ^^, and it's a really nice song too =w=
Loooctav
ขอแสดงความยินดี! >w<
ExPew
congrats......
Maiz94
Didn't get enough time to mod @@

Anyway, congratz :D
merchat7
Wow I really love this, congrats!
[-XiaoRemix-]
The Wallpaper is nice ^^ so as the song.Kepp it up :)
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