This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年2月26日 at 0:53:20

Artist: Hanazawa Kana
Title: happy endings
Source: 絶園のテンペスト
Tags: Taiko Zetsuen no Tempest Ending Snowy Heart meetmeetdee
BPM: 130
Filesize: 6784kb
Play Time: 04:17
Difficulties Available:

1. Kantan (1.38 stars, 330 notes)
2. Meet's Oni (3.29 stars, 1201 notes)
3. Muzukashii (2.42 stars, 859 notes)
4. Oni (3.58 stars, 1156 notes)
5. Snowy Heart's Futsuu (1.96 stars, 567 notes)

Download: Hanazawa Kana - happy endings
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1 - Taiko mapset
BG - 100%
Kantan - 100%
Snowy Heart's Futsuu - 100% (by Snowy Heart)
Muzukashii - 100%
Oni - 100%
Meet's Oni - 100% (by meetmeetdee)

Hi There

Here some Correction Time


By The Way, you must Re Upload the Newest of your beatmap ,

Okay, Ignore it if you want

egas00 wrote:

Hi There

Here some Correction Time

Timing Check

BPM = 130
Offset = 437

By The Way, you must Re Upload the Newest of your beatmap ,

Okay, Ignore it if you want

Thanks for your timing check~ <3

Hi ( >w<)/

[Kantan]

1. 01:41:283 (132) - Move to 01:41:052? it would be easier to play than now imo.
2. 02:47:052 - Add note like as 01:29:513?
3. 03:26:744 (268) - Remove this for consistency with 03:19:360.
4. 03:41:974 (288) - D?
5. 04:04:592 (322) - Snap this note.
6. 04:05:515 (323) - Same as above.

[Snowy Heart's Futsuu]

1. 02:16:360 (295) - Remove? this may be a bit confused.
2. 03:08:513 - Add note for consistency?
3. 03:13:129 - Same as above.
4. 03:31:360 (468) - Remove? This big note may be a bit hard for beginners imo.
5. 03:57:206 (524,525,526) - d d k for consistency.

[Muzukashii]

1. 02:50:283 (253,254,255) - How about changing as follows?
   SPOILER

   

[Oni]

1. 02:03:437 (120) - k to follow drum? i think it would be not bad.
2. 02:50:513 (354) - Move to 02:50:629. melody is there.
3. 02:54:090 (373,374) - Swap these.

Ploenar wrote:

Hi ( >w<)/

[Kantan]

1. 01:41:283 (132) - Move to 01:41:052? it would be easier to play than now imo. I would prefer following the instrument at 01:41:283 -
2. 02:47:052 - Add note like as 01:29:513? As music becomes calmer, it would be better to use fewer notes.
3. 03:26:744 (268) - Remove this for consistency with 03:19:360. fixed
4. 03:41:974 (288) - D? It would be a bit overemphasized imo.
5. 04:04:592 (322) - Snap this note. fixed
6. 04:05:515 (323) - Same as above. ^

[Snowy Heart's Futsuu]

1. 02:16:360 (295) - Remove? this may be a bit confused. Retained for a better spread from Kantan to Muzukashii.
2. 03:08:513 - Add note for consistency? A break would be more natural.
3. 03:13:129 - Same as above. same as ^
4. 03:31:360 (468) - Remove? This big note may be a bit hard for beginners imo. fixed
5. 03:57:206 (524,525,526) - d d k for consistency. Remain unchanged for cohering with 03:53:513 (515,516,517) -

[Muzukashii]

1. 02:50:283 (253,254,255) - How about changing as follows? This would be a bit hard to play imo.
   SPOILER

   

[Oni]

1. 02:03:437 (120) - k to follow drum? i think it would be not bad. I think d would fit the drum kick more.
2. 02:50:513 (354) - Move to 02:50:629. melody is there. fixed
3. 02:54:090 (373,374) - Swap these. Nope, 374 has a higher pitch.

Thanks for your mod and star~

Hey!!~ M4M!!

<Kantan>

1. 00:08:744 - Add a d here?? I feel a bit weird to the short pause here~~ o.oa
2. 01:11:513 (91,92) - Move these two to 01:11:975 - & 01:12:437 - sounds better to me!!
3. 01:29:513 (117,118) - Maybe you can delete them to make a short break here??
   (Because kDk maybe looks not that good in Kantan??~~) or you can replace them with a Spinner or Slider ww
4. 01:51:667 (146) - Delete?? or 01:50:745 (144) -
5. 02:29:051 (195,196) - Same as I said~ Move to 02:29:513 - & 02:29:975 -
6. 02:46:590 (220) - Hmm I think replace it with a Slider (end at 02:48:437 - ) is pretty fit the music here!!
   If you agree then remove 02:48:437 (221,222,223) - :3
7. 03:33:437 - Hmm Here is a bit awkward situation xD .....But I suggest you add a k at 03:33:437 -
   and remove 03:33:667 (277,278) - to follow the high sound only owo
   or you can try only delete 03:32:975 (276) - Sounds a bit better to me!!
8. 03:42:897 (290,291) - Same~~ But if you wanna make a bit different then you can keep it!!
9. 04:00:898 (316) - Delete or replace with Slider and Spinner~~~
10. 04:06:898 - Add a d here~

<Snowy Heart's Futsuu>

1. 00:18:206 (37,38,39) - Sounds better with dkd here~
2. 01:28:129 (189,190) - Move these to 01:27:206 - & 01:27:437 - and add a d at 01:28:129 - fit the music better IMO~
3. 01:37:590 (212,213,214) - Her voice should be dkd?? I don't know.... Orz
4. 01:43:129 (223,224) - dk?? Becasue you all use dk before~ :3
5. 01:44:975 (228,229,230) - Same~ maybe dkd or kkd??
6. 01:52:360 (245,246,247) - Still dkd~
7. 02:45:667 (363,364) - Move to 02:44:744 - and 02:44:975 - then add a d at 02:45:667 -
8. 02:59:744 (395) - k to follow the piano sound??
9. 03:06:898 (412,413) - kd and remove 03:07:360 (414) -
10. 03:33:898 - Maybe you can add a d here to follow the clear drum sound~ ww
11. 03:59:513 (530,531) - Same~~ You know~ owo

<Muzukashii>

1. 01:14:167 (233) - Move it to 01:13:937 - and add finish on 01:14:283 (234) - fit the music nicely~
2. 01:20:975 - & 01:21:206 - Add dk here??
3. 02:31:360 (185,186,187,188,189) - Same as I said!! o3o
4. 02:38:513 - & 02:38:744 - Same~
5. 03:01:590 (298) - Maybe delete this d to make a short break here??
6. 03:30:667 (403) - Hmm remove this and 03:31:360 (406) - to emphasize the sound??
7. 03:45:205 (455,456,457,458,459) - Same~
8. 03:52:360 - yes... Same~
9. 04:13:129 (1) - Maybe change to a Slider?? Because it can end precisely~ owo

<Meet's Oni>

1. 00:09:206 (27) - k sounds better to me
2. 00:09:667 (28) - Add finish??
3. 00:14:975 (51,52,53,54,55) - Sounds weird here lol ...Try to change these to a Slider and end at 00:16:129 -
4. 00:16:360 (56,57,58) - ddk fit the music better~~
5. 00:17:052 (60) - Add finish
6. 00:23:167 (2) - Move it to 00:23:398 - Sounds cool ww
7. 00:31:821 (2) - Add finish
   
8. 00:38:283 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Change to d-ddk-k-d sounds much better here!!
9. 00:44:629 (3) - Hmm move it to 00:44:513 - and then you can add finish on 00:44:744 (1) -
10. 01:09:667 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 kkk is enough here IMO~~ :3
11. 01:22:360 (2,1) - Add two note in the middle to make 1/6 too?? Follow the other 1/6 you have used~~
12. 01:29:052 (1) - Replace it with a Slider/Spinner and end at 01:30:898 - plz~
    or you can just add finish on it~
13. 01:49:360 (2,3,1,2) - Hmm add a note to make them to "ddddk" here??
14. 02:04:013 (3) - Same~ Move it to 02:03:898 - and then add finish on 02:04:129 (1) -
15. 02:27:206 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6 isn't fit the music here~ change to kkk (1/4) plz!!
16. 02:39:898 (2,1) - Same add two note in the middle to make 1/6 here too~~
17. 02:42:898 (1,2,3,4) - ddd (1/4) and 02:44:052 (2,3,4) - dddk (1/6) here~ owo
18. 02:46:590 (1) - Add finish
19. 03:15:898 (3,4) - Move to 03:15:783 - and add finish on 03:16:129 (5) -
20. 03:29:513 (79) - finish plz
21. 03:31:360 (86,87,88,89,90) - Remove all finsh here... I think it sounds a bit too loud
22. 03:41:052 (36,37,38,39) - kdd (1/4) is enough
23. 03:45:667 (63) - Add finish
    
24. 03:53:744 (110,111) - Same make it to 1/6~~
25. 04:07:360 (33) - k sounds better~
26. 04:07:937 (35) - Delete it and add finish on 04:07:821 (34) -

<Oni>

1. 00:44:513 (156) - k sounds better here ww
2. 01:49:936 (57) - Delete it and then you can add finish on 01:49:821 (56) -
3. 02:38:629 (301) - d sounds better here~~
4. 02:54:090 (373) - k to follow the piano sound?? and 02:54:206 (374) - should be d~~
5. 02:54:783 (379) - k is better~~
6. 03:31:360 (565) - Remove the finish?? I don't hear the Cymbal here... <w>a ~~and it can emphasize 03:30:898 (563,564) -
7. 04:13:129 (1) - Replace it with a Slider?? Same reason as I said~~ owo

Relax Song~ ^^b

Have my Star!

Good Luck Nardo~

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hey!!~ M4M!!

<Kantan>

1. 00:08:744 - Add a d here?? I feel a bit weird to the short pause here~~ o.oa Retained for a better spread with Futsuu.
2. 01:11:513 (91,92) - Move these two to 01:11:975 - & 01:12:437 - sounds better to me!! fixed
3. 01:29:513 (117,118) - Maybe you can delete them to make a short break here??
   (Because kDk maybe looks not that good in Kantan??~~) or you can replace them with a Spinner or Slider ww This is for pattern consistency as 00:02:744 (2,3) -
4. 01:51:667 (146) - Delete?? or 01:50:745 (144) - deleted the note at 01:50:744 -
5. 02:29:051 (195,196) - Same as I said~ Move to 02:29:513 - & 02:29:975 - fixed
6. 02:46:590 (220) - Hmm I think replace it with a Slider (end at 02:48:437 - ) is pretty fit the music here!!
   If you agree then remove 02:48:437 (221,222,223) - :3 A 4/1 break would work better just after the kiai imo.
7. 03:33:437 - Hmm Here is a bit awkward situation xD .....But I suggest you add a k at 03:33:437 -
   and remove 03:33:667 (277,278) - to follow the high sound only owo
   or you can try only delete 03:32:975 (276) - Sounds a bit better to me!! I think the current pattern would fit the vocal in a way better.
8. 03:42:897 (290,291) - Same~~ But if you wanna make a bit different then you can keep it!! Yep, the last kiai is supposed to be a bit harder than the previous two.
9. 04:00:898 (316) - Delete or replace with Slider and Spinner~~~ same as 01:29:513 (117,118) -
10. 04:06:898 - Add a d here~ same as 00:08:744 -

<Muzukashii>

1. 01:14:167 (233) - Move it to 01:13:937 - and add finish on 01:14:283 (234) - fit the music nicely~ I think the current one is simpler.
2. 01:20:975 - & 01:21:206 - Add dk here?? The break is intentional owing to the dense kiai.
3. 02:31:360 (185,186,187,188,189) - Same as I said!! o3o same as 01:14:167 (233) -
4. 02:38:513 - & 02:38:744 - Same~ same as 01:20:975 -
5. 03:01:590 (298) - Maybe delete this d to make a short break here?? fixed
6. 03:30:667 (403) - Hmm remove this and 03:31:360 (406) - to emphasize the sound?? deleted the note at 03:30:667 - only.
7. 03:45:205 (455,456,457,458,459) - Same~ same as 01:14:167 (233) -
8. 03:52:360 - yes... Same~ same as 01:20:975 -
9. 04:13:129 (1) - Maybe change to a Slider?? Because it can end precisely~ owo There are no drum sounds...

<Meet's Oni> I'm fixing on behalf of meetmeetdee as he is AFK.

1. 00:09:206 (27) - k sounds better to me fixed
2. 00:09:667 (28) - Add finish?? ^
3. 00:14:975 (51,52,53,54,55) - Sounds weird here lol ...Try to change these to a Slider and end at 00:16:129 - deleted 00:15:321 (54,55) - instead.
4. 00:16:360 (56,57,58) - ddk fit the music better~~ fixed
5. 00:17:052 (60) - Add finish -> ^
6. 00:23:167 (2) - Move it to 00:23:398 - Sounds cool ww ^
7. 00:31:821 (2) - Add finish -> ^
8. 00:38:283 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Change to d-ddk-k-d sounds much better here!! ^
9. 00:44:629 (3) - Hmm move it to 00:44:513 - and then you can add finish on 00:44:744 (1) - Gonna keep the dd kd pattern there. It does not sound bad.
10. 01:09:667 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 kkk is enough here IMO~~ :3 fixed
11. 01:22:360 (2,1) - Add two note in the middle to make 1/6 too?? Follow the other 1/6 you have used~~ ^
12. 01:29:052 (1) - Replace it with a Slider/Spinner and end at 01:30:898 - plz~
    or you can just add finish on it~ added finish there.
13. 01:49:360 (2,3,1,2) - Hmm add a note to make them to "ddddk" here?? same as 00:44:629 (3) -
14. 02:04:013 (3) - Same~ Move it to 02:03:898 - and then add finish on 02:04:129 (1) - ^
15. 02:27:206 (1,2,3,4) - 1/6 isn't fit the music here~ change to kkk (1/4) plz!! fixed
16. 02:39:898 (2,1) - Same add two note in the middle to make 1/6 here too~~ ^
17. 02:42:898 (1,2,3,4) - ddd (1/4) and 02:44:052 (2,3,4) - dddk (1/6) here~ owo fixed the former part.
18. 02:46:590 (1) - Add finish -> fixed
19. 03:15:898 (3,4) - Move to 03:15:783 - and add finish on 03:16:129 (5) - ^
20. 03:29:513 (79) - finish plz ^
21. 03:31:360 (86,87,88,89,90) - Remove all finsh here... I think it sounds a bit too loud fixed except 03:31:360 (86,90) -
22. 03:41:052 (36,37,38,39) - kdd (1/4) is enough fixed
23. 03:45:667 (63) - Add finish -> ^
24. 03:53:744 (110,111) - Same make it to 1/6~~ ^
25. 04:07:360 (33) - k sounds better~ ^
26. 04:07:937 (35) - Delete it and add finish on 04:07:821 (34) - ^

<Oni>

1. 00:44:513 (156) - k sounds better here ww I would prefer following the drums by a don.
2. 01:49:936 (57) - Delete it and then you can add finish on 01:49:821 (56) - I followed the background music there.
3. 02:38:629 (301) - d sounds better here~~ I think both are okay because of the trumpet tune.
4. 02:54:090 (373) - k to follow the piano sound?? and 02:54:206 (374) - should be d~~ I think dk would fit the pitch increase more.
5. 02:54:783 (379) - k is better~~ d would accompany the pitch drop well.
6. 03:31:360 (565) - Remove the finish?? I don't hear the Cymbal here... <w>a ~~and it can emphasize 03:30:898 (563,564) - I think the vocal is important enough to be emphasized with a finish.
7. 04:13:129 (1) - Replace it with a Slider?? Same reason as I said~~ owo same as Muzukashii.

Relax Song~ ^^b

Have my Star!

Good Luck Nardo~

Thanks for your mod~

Nardooo!!
From my Queues




Good Luck!!
I think that it is necessary to get good luck in the Meet's Oni.But good map~

EdamaMe411 wrote:

Nardooo!! Hello!!
From my Queues

Kantan

Good up beat map
01:47:052 (138) - move to 01:46:590 - you need to return normal pattern from 01:37:590 (127) - (I think normal pattern is 1/1 pattern notes) Retained to keep it consistent with 01:39:667 (129) -

03:43:360 (290) - move to 03:43:590 - ?,,,,sorry this is not strong suggestion, The snapping will be a bit complicated if I do so.

Meet's Oni

00:14:629 - add d　、、、、to protect the flow of your map It would be better to keep it the same as 00:10:937 -

00:15:090 (52) - delete.....extra notes same as ^

00:20:283 (1) - k and 00:20:513 (2) - delete!!!! strong suggestion You should separate notes line fixed

00:22:706 (2) - move to 00:22:937 - ^

00:23:398 (3) - delete ,,,,,extra note ^
00:24:321 (5) - ^ ^

00:24:090 (3) - move to 00:23:860 - ^

00:35:283 (1) - delete ^

00:37:360 (1,2,3,1) - i think this pattern is not best. Because music same fiow, not change music image changed another pattern there.

00:42:667 (4,5) - delete fixed
00:43:013 (2) - ^ ^
00:43:706 (5) - ^ ^

00:44:629 (3) - move to 00:44:513 - above same reason ^

01:07:590 (2,3,4,1) - 01:08:975 (2,3,4,1) - not match music image >< i suggest 1/4 Keeping these atm. Let's see what other modders say about such patterns.

01:11:283 (2) - delete fixed
01:12:783 (3) - ^ ^
01:14:513 (2) - ^ Remain unchanged to keep it the same as 00:59:744 -
01:18:090 (2,3) - ^ fixed
01:19:706 (3) - ^ Retained to fit the long vocal tone.

01:22:360 (2,3,4,1) - 01:23:744 (1,2,3,4) - 01:27:437 (1,2,3,4) - above same reason same as above

etc-----------------------

Your diff there is a need to review many times. I think a good map, but it is not suitable for　Ranked ,,,Good Luck

Oni

00:42:321 (144) - move to 00:42:090 - This note line is starting 00:41:513 (140) - (1/1 note) so you should start 1/1 of Triplet(English a little hard ) I think there are exceptions. Not all of them have to follow o o ooo pattern imo.

Good Luck!!
I think that it is necessary to get good luck in the Meet's Oni.But good map~

Thanks for your mod~

<Snowy Heart's Futsuu>

1. 00:18:206 (37,38,39) - Sounds better with dkd here~ Ok I change
2. 01:28:129 (189,190) - Move these to 01:27:206 - & 01:27:437 - and add a d at 01:28:129 - fit the music better IMO~^
3. 01:37:590 (212,213,214) - Her voice should be dkd?? I don't know.... OrzI think kdk is better,Because this voice is little high
4. 01:43:129 (223,224) - dk?? Becasue you all use dk before~ :3Not change
5. 01:44:975 (228,229,230) - Same~ maybe dkd or kkd?? Ok I change
6. 01:52:360 (245,246,247) - Still dkd~^
7. 02:45:667 (363,364) - Move to 02:44:744 - and 02:44:975 - then add a d at 02:45:667 - ^
8. 02:59:744 (395) - k to follow the piano sound??Not change ,I think d is ok
9. 03:06:898 (412,413) - kd and remove 03:07:360 (414) - OK
10. 03:33:898 - Maybe you can add a d here to follow the clear drum sound~ not change
11. 03:59:513 (530,531) - Same~~ You know~ owo

Yes I know www

Thanks for your mod~~~
[quote="EdamaMe411"]Nardooo!!
From my Queues


Thanks for your mod~~~

New map :http://puu.sh/jHUZZ/e5c10c887a.osu

Updated Snowy Heart's Futsuu~

Hello, Nardo, from my queue :3

[Kantan]
01:01:360 (77,78,79) and 01:03:206 (80,81,82) - Swap
01:23:975 (107,108) - ^
01:16:129 (97) - d?
03:04:590 - Some note?
03:10:590 (245,246) - dd?

[Snowy Heart's Futsuu]
00:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This?
00:19:360 - Some note
00:26:744 - ^
00:37:821 - ^
00:41:513 - ^
01:29:744 - ^
01:38:744 - ^
01:57:206 - ^
02:02:744 and 02:03:206 - ^
01:34:360 (206) on 01:33:437
03:17:052 (437) on 03:17:283
03:20:744 (445) on 03:20:975
03:24:436 (453) on 03:24:667

[Muzukashii]
00:05:052 - d?
00:45:667 (133) - ^
02:05:052 (93) - ^
02:29:283 (177) - ^
02:51:437 (257) - k?
02:56:513 (277) - ^
00:15:206 (40) - Remove, can add slider
00:21:898 - Some note?
04:07:349 - ^
01:03:206 (191,192) - Swap
02:20:745 (145,146) - ^
03:10:129 (325,326,327) - dkd?

[Meet's Oni]
00:15:667 and 00:16:129 - Some note?
00:59:398 - ^
00:18:898 (3) - d
01:13:821 (5) - ^
01:38:513 (2) - ^
00:22:360 (3) - ^ (or 00:22:013 (1,2) - swap)
02:30:898 (1) - ^ (don)
02:38:744 (1) - ^
02:45:206 (4) - ^
03:55:360 (119) - ^
00:41:744 (2,3) - Swap
01:23:283 (1,2) - ^
01:26:975 (1,2) - ^
02:07:013 (2,3) - ^ (02:07:360 (1) - kat, if not denied)
02:40:821 (1,1) - ^
03:39:898 (30,32) - ^
03:58:360 (132,134) - ^
00:52:129 (1) - k?
01:49:360 (2) or 01:49:475 (3) - ^
02:11:513 (1) - ^
02:55:937 (2) - ^

[Oni]
00:44:513 (156) or 00:44:744 (157) - k
02:57:667 (397) - ^
03:01:129 (419,421) - ^
03:22:244 (519) - ^
03:32:744 (571) - ^
01:00:783 (227) an 01:00:321
01:13:475 (286) an 01:13:244
02:18:090 (195) an 02:17:629
02:21:783 (214) an 02:21:321
01:16:821 (305,306) - Swap
01:20:052 (321,322) - ^
01:23:283 (338,340) - ^
02:22:821 (220,221) - ^
03:04:360 (435,436) - ^
03:44:629 (631,633) - ^
01:51:206 (64) - Remove

It's finished :3
Good luck with rank

Hi, from my queue~

I mod this only 2:00 min for my rules.

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

00:49:821 - Change to k to follow the drums.
02:09:206 - ^

[ Snowy Heart's Futsuu]

01:25:821 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.
02:24:898 - ^
02:41:283 - Change to k to follow the pattern and the drums.

[ Muzukashii]

00:20:283 - Change to k to follow the drums and the pattern.
01:34:129 - Change to k to follow the pattern and the rhythm.
02:42:206 - Change to k for the rhythm in this part.

[ Meet's Oni]

00:40:360 - Ctrl G with 00:40:590 - To follow the vocal and the drums.
00:42:437 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.

[ Oni]

Perfect! *-*

Great Beatmap, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~

Hi from queue~
Wow, old map.

Kantan

00:08:283 - Add a k here. I'm guessing you didn't put it in intentionally to create a fairly large break time. However playing it, I thought it felt a bit 'incomplete', since you made a k d k rhythm with 00:04:590 (4,5,6) so I'd expect to do it again, especially when the same rhythm is clearly audible.

00:17:052 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - There's nothing wrong with this section, but the way you mapped this difficulty in most of the non-kiai time sections, sound much better, like from 00:31:821 to 00:42:898. In this section, you put hits around the guitar strum to make a d k d pattern, but I liked the patterns where you started and ended them with the guitar strums; k d k.

00:47:513 (59) - As I mentioned before, I liked the constant k d k rhythm. I didn't see anything that would be a good reason to stray away from this style (Some good reasons are for example: 00:36:437 (45,46,47) to focus more closely on the vocals, or 00:54:898 (69,70,71) to half focus on the vocals, but also because it has a finisher at the end of this rhythm). Remove this hit and add a k at 00:47:052 and at 00:47:975. Same thing at 02:06:898 (165).

01:16:590 (98) - Change to d. For the same k d k reason as before. Even if you were matching to the vocals, I'd still make it a d to contrast the higher pitched vocals in the next hit. Alternatively, you could make 01:16:129 (97,98,99) into d k d to keep consistency with the next two kiai times.

01:22:590 (105) - Change to k. I presume you did this because the pitch increase between the two is much smaller than the original vocals at 01:06:898 (84,85), but I personally think these two rhythms both should be the same, like Snowy Heart did it. This goes for all of your diffs and all areas like this.

01:26:283 (111) - ^

02:46:590 (219) - Rather than this empty space after, maybe replace this hit with a spinner or a slider until 02:48:437 (Delete 02:48:437 (220))? Just a personal preference.

03:05:052 (239) - Change to k. The pitch of the trumpet is higher than the next hit.

03:10:590 (245) - Change to d. Same with 03:11:513 (247). I think it would be more fitting with the way you mapped this area.

03:30:437 (272) - Change to k to keep the k d k rhythm, like how you did it at 03:34:129 (277).

The rest looks good

Snowy Heart's Futsuu

00:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Since this is still the beginning of the song and it shouldn't be as hard as the kiai time (I think it is), I think you should put in a short rest by deleting 00:05:975 (10). Same with the next chain, 00:09:667 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31), delete 00:13:360 (26), although it's not as bad here.

00:18:206 (37,38,39) - Switch the colours of these hits. You look like you're mapping to the vocals, and it would match better I think.

00:21:436 (44) - Change to d. The pitch goes up from this hit to the next. Same with 00:25:590 (53), 00:36:206 (77) and 00:40:360 (86).

00:34:821 (73,74,75) - Ctrl + G these three hits. It would match the vocals better.

00:48:898 (103) - Change to d. It would match the vocals better, unless you're matching to the instrumentals in the background in which case do not change.

01:19:821 (170,171,172) - You've mapped almost the whole song around the vocals where there are any, so abruptly changing to instrumentals in the middle of a kiai time is weird, when you could easily map it to the vocals. Move 01:19:821 (170) to 01:19:590, 01:20:283 (171) to 01:20:513 and 01:20:513 (172) to 01:20:744. Same with 02:37:360 (344,345,346), and 03:51:206 (511,512,513).
Image: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3560714
You did a good job matching to the vocals though. Sounds great

01:27:206 - I have a feeling this space was for a rest period, which is perfectly fine, but rather than have it here, move 01:27:667 (188) to 01:28:129 and move 01:28:129 (189,190,191) to 01:27:206 to make a break between 01:27:667 and 01:29:052 to make a transition out of the kiai time. I feel like this would be a more suitable place to put a break, rather than stop doing the rhythm you had a couple of seconds ago. If you accept, do this for all kiai times.
It should look like this imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3560681

01:37:590 (212,213,214) - Switch the colours of these three hits. It would match the vocals better. Same with 01:44:975 (228,229,230), 01:52:360 (245,246,247), and 02:01:360 (264,265,266).

01:39:437 (215,216) - Ctrl + G for the same reason as above. Same with 01:46:821 (231,232).

02:00:206 (263) - Change to d to match the vocals.

Pretty good after that (except for the spots I mentioned in my previous suggestions).

03:53:513 (515,516,517) - First of all, Ctrl + G to match the vocals. Second, in this section, you put a 1/1 hit, then three 1/2 hits, whereas in the previous two choruses, you started with the three 1/2 hits then a 1/1 hit. Compare second chorus: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3560742 to third chorus: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3560747
I'd change this part to match the second chorus, but it's fine the way it is.

Muzukashii

The first three suggestions are not in chronological order, since it was easier to explain all three suggestions in the order I've put them in.

00:07:129 (14,15) - Ctrl + G these two hits. It seems like you're matching to the trumpet in this part, so it would match the pitch better (There's not much of an explanation of having this hit 00:07:129 (14) if you weren't matching to the trumpet ).

00:03:667 (4) - Change to d, if you DIDN'T deny the first suggestion, to match the last two hits in the rhythm of the previous suggestion. Same at 00:11:052 (26). Ignore if you DID deny my first suggestion.

00:03:437 - Again, if you DIDN'T deny the first suggestion, you should add a k here to keep consistency with the first suggestion. Same at 00:10:821. If you DID deny the first suggestion, you should add a d instead to keep consistency. Same at 00:10:821.

00:17:513 (45,46) - Ctrl + G these two hits. It would match the pitch of whatever instrument that is. However, you do seem to be matching with the drums in the background and that's perfectly fine.

00:22:360 (61) - Change to d. You started to match the vocals near the end of this section, so a d would work better. If you were matching to the instrumentals it should also be a d because of the k d 1/2 pairs you have throughout this short section. Same thing at 00:24:898 (66,67), and other places like that.

00:35:975 (102) - Remove this hit. It's ok to have it there, but I personally think you should keep this part strictly to the vocals.

00:54:667 (161) - Change to d. It looks like you're matching more to the instrumentals in this section, so make it the same as 00:47:283 (139).

01:08:629 (212) - Remove this hit. There's nothing wrong with having it there, but this is the best part of the song (imo) and having a triplet here kind of ruins the well matched vocals. Same at 01:25:706 (274), 02:26:168 (166), 02:43:245 (228), and so on in the third chorus.

01:34:360 (1) - This spinner is questionable, since you didn't use a spinner at 00:14:975.

01:43:129 (22,23) - Ctrl + G these two hits. It would match the vocals better. If you're matching to the instrumentals here, Ctrl + G hits 01:43:590 (24,25).

01:44:975 (28,29) - ^ for vocals, 01:45:436 (30,31) - for instrumentals.

01:46:821 (34,35) - This definitely seems like you're matching the vocals here. I'd suggest using Ctrl + G.

The chorus is so nice <3

02:59:975 (291) - Having a finisher in the middle of all this might be a bit hard for a Muzukashii. Remove finisher.

03:14:975 - Add a d here, and at 03:15:090. I feel like the instrumentals could allow having a triplet here.

Meet's Oni

There's lots of repetitive suggestions for the chorus for this diff.

00:12:437 (39,40,41) - Ctrl + G these three hits to create a ddk triplet. I think this sounds better, and it matches 00:05:052 (10,11,12).

00:22:360 (3) - The way you mapped this, it's changes from instrumentals to vocals very frequently, but I'm guessing this part is matched to the vocals, so you should change this hit to d.

00:23:744 (1,2) - ^, change both.

00:29:052 (2,3,1) - Ctrl + G these three hits. You seem to be matching around the vocals here too, and the pitch at the beginning of this triplet is lower than the end.

00:34:821 (1,2,1) - ^

00:40:360 (1,1,2,1) - Try switching the colours of these three hits. See if you like it.

00:56:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - Rather than having a stream here, putting a stream from 00:58:590 to 00:59:513 would sound better with the instrumentals, similar to the one at 02:15:667 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1).

01:06:667 (3,4) - Ctrl + G these two hits. 01:06:898 (4) is probably matched to the vocals, so it should have a k, while 01:06:667 (3) is matched to the instrumentals where it's not too high pitched so it should be a d.

01:07:360 (1) - Change to d. The pitch of the vocals is same, if not, lower than the previous hit.

01:08:283 (2,1) - Ctrl + G to matchs vocals better.

01:08:975 (2) - Change to d; this sounds identical to 01:07:590 (2,3,4,1).

01:23:744 (1) - Change to k; this sounds identical to 01:22:360 (2,3,4,1).

01:25:590 (2,3,1) - You should make this four hit 1/6 rhythm of dddk. The vocals sound similar to 01:27:437 (1,2,3,4), so you should keep it consistent. You could even do it at 01:26:513 (2,3,4), but it's more optional. If you have three of these in a row, it may be quite hard, but it will be a good challenge.

01:38:513 (2) - Change to d. You're matching with the instrumental, and there's no drum hit sound here. Change it so that it matches 01:36:898 (1,2,1,2).

02:03:090 - Add a hit of your choice here. It sounds like there's an instrumental sound here.

02:24:206 (3,4) - Ctrl + G these two hits, for the same reason as 01:06:667 (3,4).

02:24:898 (1) - Change to d to match vocals.

02:25:821 (2,1) - Ctrl + G to match vocals.

02:26:513 (2) - Change to d, it sounds the same as 02:25:129 (2,3,4,1).

02:41:283 (2) - Change to k, it sounds the same as 02:39:898 (2,3,4,1).

02:42:898 (1,2,3) - As mentioned before, I think you should make this a 1/6 four note pattern. Same, but more optional at 02:44:052 (2,3,4).

02:43:360 (1,2,1) - Ctrl + G these three hits to match the vocals.

02:52:590 (2,3,1,1,2) - Try dddkk see if you like it.

03:01:360 - If you're going to have a rest period here, you should have it go all the way to at least up to 03:15:437. You start the rest period at the beginning of the trumpet main area, but then decide to end the rest period in the middle of it. It doesn't feel like a good place to begin playing in the middle of the trumpet section.

03:38:052 (21,22) - Ctrl + G for the reason said before.

03:38:975 (25) - Change to d to match 03:40:360 (32,33,34,35). They sound the same.

03:57:437 (128,129,130) - Make into a 1/6 rhythm, as said before. I'm too lazy to right my reasoning every time x.x

Oni

This diff was amazing <3

01:21:667 (331,332) - Ctrl + G. I think the pitch of the vocals go down in this section.

01:34:360 (1) - I mentioned this in the Muzukashii as well, but this slider is questionable.

01:39:437 (13) - Change to d. This matches the vocals better, like at 00:20:052 (60,61,62).

02:26:167 - Add a d here to create a kkddd 1/4 five not pattern. You had it at 01:08:283 (262,263,264,265,266).

02:52:937 (368) - Maybe change to k? See if you like it.

03:39:783 - As said two suggestions ago, you should make this a kkddd pattern to keep it consistent throughout the three choruses. Add a k here, and remove the finisher on 03:39:667 (605).

Great diff


Great map, great song! Great as always Nardo
This song sounds so much like Hanazawa Kana song it's so good <3
Have my star and good luck on rank~

EMD wrote:

Hello, Nardo, from my queue :3

[Kantan]
01:01:360 (77,78,79) and 01:03:206 (80,81,82) - Swap The current pattern would fit the vocal well.
01:23:975 (107,108) - ^ ^
01:16:129 (97) - d? Retained for consistency as 01:01:360 -
03:04:590 - Some note? The break here is intentional due to difficulty concern.
03:10:590 (245,246) - dd? k would fit the pitch of instrument in a way better.

[Muzukashii]
00:05:052 - d? Remain unchanged for a better spread.
00:45:667 (133) - ^ k would fit the vocal pitch well.
02:05:052 (93) - ^ same as ^
02:29:283 (177) - ^ the pitch of instrument is the same as 02:29:052 (176) -
02:51:437 (257) - k? There would be too many k imo.
02:56:513 (277) - ^ It is k already.
00:15:206 (40) - Remove, can add slider Again, the break is intentional.
00:21:898 - Some note? same as 00:05:052 -
04:07:349 - ^ same as 00:15:206 (40) -
01:03:206 (191,192) - Swap Retained to fit the increasing vocal pitch.
02:20:745 (145,146) - ^ ^
03:10:129 (325,326,327) - dkd? The pitch at 03:10:129 (325,327) - is higher.

[Meet's Oni]
00:15:667 and 00:16:129 - Some note? A bit strange to add notes there.
00:59:398 - ^ changed 00:59:513 (1) - to D instead.
00:18:898 (3) - d k seems to be fine.
01:13:821 (5) - ^ Retained to follow the snare.
01:38:513 (2) - ^ fixed
00:22:360 (3) - ^ (or 00:22:013 (1,2) - swap) k would follow vocal in a way better.
02:30:898 (1) - ^ (don) changed 02:31:129 (2,3) - to d instead.
02:38:744 (1) - ^ same as 01:13:821 (5) -
02:45:206 (4) - ^ ^
03:55:360 (119) - ^ ^
00:41:744 (2,3) - Swap fixed
01:23:283 (1,2) - ^ k d would accompany the vocal well.
01:26:975 (1,2) - ^ same as ^
02:07:013 (2,3) - ^ (02:07:360 (1) - kat, if not denied) same as 00:22:360 (3) -
02:40:821 (1,1) - ^ same as 01:23:283 (1,2) -
03:39:898 (30,32) - ^ ^
03:58:360 (132,134) - ^ ^
00:52:129 (1) - k? There is no high-pitched sound to map with...
01:49:360 (2) or 01:49:475 (3) - ^ ^
02:11:513 (1) - ^ ^
02:55:937 (2) - ^ ^

[Oni]
00:44:513 (156) or 00:44:744 (157) - k d would fit the drums nicely.
02:57:667 (397) - ^ There is no high-pitched sound to map with...
03:01:129 (419,421) - ^ ^
03:22:244 (519) - ^ Retained to cohere with 03:21:783 (516) -
03:32:744 (571) - ^ same as 02:57:667 (397) -
01:00:783 (227) an 01:00:321 Both positions are fine to me.
01:13:475 (286) an 01:13:244 ^
02:18:090 (195) an 02:17:629 ^
02:21:783 (214) an 02:21:321 ^
01:16:821 (305,306) - Swap d k would fit the vocal well.
01:20:052 (321,322) - ^ Remain unchanged to follow the snare.
01:23:283 (338,340) - ^ Again, vocal concern here.
02:22:821 (220,221) - ^ same as 01:20:052 (321,322) -
03:04:360 (435,436) - ^ ^
03:44:629 (631,633) - ^ Retained to cohere with 03:44:167 (628) -
01:51:206 (64) - Remove The beat is important.

It's finished :3
Good luck with rank

game rock wrote:

Hi, from my queue~

I mod this only 2:00 min for my rules.

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

00:49:821 - Change to k to follow the drums. As vocal pitch is low, d would sound better.
02:09:206 - ^ same as ^

[ Muzukashii]

00:20:283 - Change to k to follow the drums and the pattern. As vocal pitch is low, d would sound better.
01:34:129 - Change to k to follow the pattern and the rhythm. d would fit the pitch drop there.
02:42:206 - Change to k for the rhythm in this part. The music is not high-pitched.

[ Meet's Oni]

00:40:360 - Ctrl G with 00:40:590 - To follow the vocal and the drums. fixed
00:42:437 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. ^

[ Oni]

Perfect! *-*

Great Beatmap, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from queue~
Wow, old map.

Kantan

00:08:283 - Add a k here. I'm guessing you didn't put it in intentionally to create a fairly large break time. However playing it, I thought it felt a bit 'incomplete', since you made a k d k rhythm with 00:04:590 (4,5,6) so I'd expect to do it again, especially when the same rhythm is clearly audible. A 4/1 break is necessary here. Otherwise the pattern chain would be a bit long.

00:17:052 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37) - There's nothing wrong with this section, but the way you mapped this difficulty in most of the non-kiai time sections, sound much better, like from 00:31:821 to 00:42:898. In this section, you put hits around the guitar strum to make a d k d pattern, but I liked the patterns where you started and ended them with the guitar strums; k d k. I would prefer keeping this to vary a bit from the k d k.

00:47:513 (59) - As I mentioned before, I liked the constant k d k rhythm. I didn't see anything that would be a good reason to stray away from this style (Some good reasons are for example: 00:36:437 (45,46,47) to focus more closely on the vocals, or 00:54:898 (69,70,71) to half focus on the vocals, but also because it has a finisher at the end of this rhythm). Remove this hit and add a k at 00:47:052 and at 00:47:975. Same thing at 02:06:898 (165). same as ^

01:16:590 (98) - Change to d. For the same k d k reason as before. Even if you were matching to the vocals, I'd still make it a d to contrast the higher pitched vocals in the next hit. Alternatively, you could make 01:16:129 (97,98,99) into d k d to keep consistency with the next two kiai times. Retained to follow the snare there. There is no need to make the three kiais exactly the same imo.

01:22:590 (105) - Change to k. I presume you did this because the pitch increase between the two is much smaller than the original vocals at 01:06:898 (84,85), but I personally think these two rhythms both should be the same, like Snowy Heart did it. This goes for all of your diffs and all areas like this. The vocal patterns in these two parts have noticeable difference. That's why I used different constellations to represent them.

01:26:283 (111) - ^ same as ^

02:46:590 (219) - Rather than this empty space after, maybe replace this hit with a spinner or a slider until 02:48:437 (Delete 02:48:437 (220))? Just a personal preference. same as 00:08:283 -

03:05:052 (239) - Change to k. The pitch of the trumpet is higher than the next hit. Its pitch is lower than 03:03:206 (238) - , so it would be better to use d.

03:10:590 (245) - Change to d. Same with 03:11:513 (247). I think it would be more fitting with the way you mapped this area. The pitch of trumpet is still high enough to be mapped with k imo.

03:30:437 (272) - Change to k to keep the k d k rhythm, like how you did it at 03:34:129 (277). There is no snare or high-pitched sound to map with...

The rest looks good

Muzukashii

The first three suggestions are not in chronological order, since it was easier to explain all three suggestions in the order I've put them in.

00:07:129 (14,15) - Ctrl + G these two hits. It seems like you're matching to the trumpet in this part, so it would match the pitch better (There's not much of an explanation of having this hit 00:07:129 (14) if you weren't matching to the trumpet ). I followed the snare at 00:07:360 -

00:03:667 (4) - Change to d, if you DIDN'T deny the first suggestion, to match the last two hits in the rhythm of the previous suggestion. Same at 00:11:052 (26). Ignore if you DID deny my first suggestion. same as ^

00:03:437 - Again, if you DIDN'T deny the first suggestion, you should add a k here to keep consistency with the first suggestion. Same at 00:10:821. If you DID deny the first suggestion, you should add a d instead to keep consistency. Same at 00:10:821. added don instead.

00:17:513 (45,46) - Ctrl + G these two hits. It would match the pitch of whatever instrument that is. However, you do seem to be matching with the drums in the background and that's perfectly fine. The pitch is decreasing, so k d would be fine.

00:22:360 (61) - Change to d. You started to match the vocals near the end of this section, so a d would work better. If you were matching to the instrumentals it should also be a d because of the k d 1/2 pairs you have throughout this short section. Same thing at 00:24:898 (66,67), and other places like that. I have considered this before. k would result in a smoother flow because of the upcoming pattern.

00:35:975 (102) - Remove this hit. It's ok to have it there, but I personally think you should keep this part strictly to the vocals. Places like 00:33:667 - also have no vocal. Such notes serve as connections that would improve flow.

00:54:667 (161) - Change to d. It looks like you're matching more to the instrumentals in this section, so make it the same as 00:47:283 (139). I would prefer mapping the relatively high-pitched vocal with k.

01:08:629 (212) - Remove this hit. There's nothing wrong with having it there, but this is the best part of the song (imo) and having a triplet here kind of ruins the well matched vocals. Same at 01:25:706 (274), 02:26:168 (166), 02:43:245 (228), and so on in the third chorus. Retained for a better spread with Oni.

01:34:360 (1) - This spinner is questionable, since you didn't use a spinner at 00:14:975. fixed

01:43:129 (22,23) - Ctrl + G these two hits. It would match the vocals better. If you're matching to the instrumentals here, Ctrl + G hits 01:43:590 (24,25). I'm following the special percussion there using k.

01:44:975 (28,29) - ^ for vocals, 01:45:436 (30,31) - for instrumentals. same as ^

01:46:821 (34,35) - This definitely seems like you're matching the vocals here. I'd suggest using Ctrl + G. ^

The chorus is so nice <3 Thanks :3

02:59:975 (291) - Having a finisher in the middle of all this might be a bit hard for a Muzukashii. Remove finisher. I think it is still of acceptable difficulty.

03:14:975 - Add a d here, and at 03:15:090. I feel like the instrumentals could allow having a triplet here. The 1/2 + 1/4 pattern would be a bit long imo.

Meet's Oni

There's lots of repetitive suggestions for the chorus for this diff.

00:12:437 (39,40,41) - Ctrl + G these three hits to create a ddk triplet. I think this sounds better, and it matches 00:05:052 (10,11,12). fixed

00:22:360 (3) - The way you mapped this, it's changes from instrumentals to vocals very frequently, but I'm guessing this part is matched to the vocals, so you should change this hit to d. k would flow better somehow because of the next pattern.

00:23:744 (1,2) - ^, change both. fixed

00:29:052 (2,3,1) - Ctrl + G these three hits. You seem to be matching around the vocals here too, and the pitch at the beginning of this triplet is lower than the end. kkd seems to be fine. I guess the mapper wants to emphasize the snare at 00:29:513 -

00:34:821 (1,2,1) - ^ fixed

00:40:360 (1,1,2,1) - Try switching the colours of these three hits. See if you like it. fixed

00:56:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - Rather than having a stream here, putting a stream from 00:58:590 to 00:59:513 would sound better with the instrumentals, similar to the one at 02:15:667 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1). The current placement seems to be more coherent according to the music.

01:06:667 (3,4) - Ctrl + G these two hits. 01:06:898 (4) is probably matched to the vocals, so it should have a k, while 01:06:667 (3) is matched to the instrumentals where it's not too high pitched so it should be a d. fixed

01:07:360 (1) - Change to d. The pitch of the vocals is same, if not, lower than the previous hit. Retained to follow the snare.

01:08:283 (2,1) - Ctrl + G to matchs vocals better. changed to k k instead.

01:08:975 (2) - Change to d; this sounds identical to 01:07:590 (2,3,4,1). fixed

01:23:744 (1) - Change to k; this sounds identical to 01:22:360 (2,3,4,1). ^

01:25:590 (2,3,1) - You should make this four hit 1/6 rhythm of dddk. The vocals sound similar to 01:27:437 (1,2,3,4), so you should keep it consistent. You could even do it at 01:26:513 (2,3,4), but it's more optional. If you have three of these in a row, it may be quite hard, but it will be a good challenge. I guess the mapper would prefer easier patterns for this relaxing song, so such patterns are not used.

01:38:513 (2) - Change to d. You're matching with the instrumental, and there's no drum hit sound here. Change it so that it matches 01:36:898 (1,2,1,2). fixed

02:03:090 - Add a hit of your choice here. It sounds like there's an instrumental sound here. A 7-plet would add too much pace here.

02:24:206 (3,4) - Ctrl + G these two hits, for the same reason as 01:06:667 (3,4). fixed

02:24:898 (1) - Change to d to match vocals. same as 01:07:360 (1) -

02:25:821 (2,1) - Ctrl + G to match vocals. changed to k k instead.

02:26:513 (2) - Change to d, it sounds the same as 02:25:129 (2,3,4,1). fixed

02:41:283 (2) - Change to k, it sounds the same as 02:39:898 (2,3,4,1). ^

02:42:898 (1,2,3) - As mentioned before, I think you should make this a 1/6 four note pattern. Same, but more optional at 02:44:052 (2,3,4). same as the first kiai.

02:43:360 (1,2,1) - Ctrl + G these three hits to match the vocals. Retained for pattern consistency as the first kiai.

02:52:590 (2,3,1,1,2) - Try dddkk see if you like it. Again, I guess the mapper is following the snare at 02:52:590 -

03:01:360 - If you're going to have a rest period here, you should have it go all the way to at least up to 03:15:437. You start the rest period at the beginning of the trumpet main area, but then decide to end the rest period in the middle of it. It doesn't feel like a good place to begin playing in the middle of the trumpet section. Upon testing, I think it would be a bit awkward to start mapping at 03:15:437 -

03:38:052 (21,22) - Ctrl + G for the reason said before. fixed

03:38:975 (25) - Change to d to match 03:40:360 (32,33,34,35). They sound the same. fixed

03:57:437 (128,129,130) - Make into a 1/6 rhythm, as said before. I'm too lazy to right my reasoning every time x.x same as before

Oni

This diff was amazing <3 Nice to hear that :3

01:21:667 (331,332) - Ctrl + G. I think the pitch of the vocals go down in this section. It seems that d k here would help emphasize 01:23:052 (337,338) -

01:34:360 (1) - I mentioned this in the Muzukashii as well, but this slider is questionable. fixed

01:39:437 (13) - Change to d. This matches the vocals better, like at 00:20:052 (60,61,62). same as Muzukashii

02:26:167 - Add a d here to create a kkddd 1/4 five not pattern. You had it at 01:08:283 (262,263,264,265,266). fixed

02:52:937 (368) - Maybe change to k? See if you like it. Keeping it as d would sharpen the k at 02:53:052 -

03:39:783 - As said two suggestions ago, you should make this a kkddd pattern to keep it consistent throughout the three choruses. Add a k here, and remove the finisher on 03:39:667 (605). fixed

Great diff

A Request for Nardo

Hi Nardo,
Before you finished reading my mod, I wanted to ask for a mod for one of my beatmaps. I think my beatmap is in the late modding stages where only the final touches are needed, and I need an experienced mapper to mod my map (like you ). If you aren't busy, could you please take the time to mod my map? I'd appreciate it if you could. Since you're a BN as well, I was hoping you could make black and red suggestions in the mod, red meaning it's strongly recommended to get my map bubbled and ranked. Then, maybe once I implement those changes, you could BN Check the map for qualification.
Map Link: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/317208
Genre: Anime (J-Pop)
Length: 1:20 drain, 5 Difficulties (Kantan - Inner Oni)
Well, this is all only if you do accept my request. Please PM regarding your response. Sorry to bother you if you're busy. Thanks for your time and consideration.
Note: I do realize I've asked you before via PM, but since then, I have been looking through all the BN's; most of the Taiko BN's userpages say that they aren't taking BN Check requests, and the ones that don't say anything don't respond to my PMs. You seem to be one of the few active BN's so hopefully you'll be able to mod my map. Sorry if I'm being persistent.
Once again, thanks for your time and consideration.
~newyams99

Great map, great song! Great as always Nardo
This song sounds so much like Hanazawa Kana song it's so good <3
Have my star and good luck on rank~ Thank you :3

Thanks for the mods~

Skeuddy wrote:

Hello, Nardo, from my queue :3

[Snowy Heart's Futsuu]
00:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This? [url]I think my style is ok ,Sorry.[/url]
00:19:360 - Some note add a note
00:26:744 - ^ No.This voice a little low,not good.
00:37:821 - ^ add a d
00:41:513 - ^ add a d
01:29:744 - ^ No
01:38:744 - ^ Add a d
01:57:206 - ^ Add a d
02:02:744 and 02:03:206 - ^ [url]2:02:744 add a note. and 02:02:744 (275) - add dkkd[/url]
01:34:360 (206) on 01:33:437 Fixed, and I add another note on 01:34:360
03:17:052 (437) on 03:17:283 Fixed
03:20:744 (445) on 03:20:975 ^
03:24:436 (453) on 03:24:667 ^

Good luck with rank

Thanks for your mod and wish.

[ Snowy Heart's Futsuu]

01:25:821 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. Fixed
02:24:898 - ^ Fixed
02:41:283 - Change to k to follow the pattern and the drums. Not change,I think it's ok
Thanks for your mod


Snowy Heart's Futsuu

00:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Since this is still the beginning of the song and it shouldn't be as hard as the kiai time (I think it is), I think you should put in a short rest by deleting 00:05:975 (10). Same with the next chain, 00:09:667 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31), delete 00:13:360 (26), although it's not as bad here.
Good，I think your idea is better,So I change delete it ~

00:18:206 (37,38,39) - Switch the colours of these hits. You look like you're mapping to the vocals, and it would match better I think.
Not change ,I think is OK
00:21:436 (44) - Change to d. The pitch goes up from this hit to the next. Same with 00:25:590 (53), 00:36:206 (77) and 00:40:360 (86).I only change 77 and 53.I think Other notes are OK.

00:34:821 (73,74,75) - Ctrl + G these three hits. It would match the vocals better.OK

00:48:898 (103) - Change to d. It would match the vocals better, unless you're matching to the instrumentals in the background in which case do not change.
Not change to d

01:19:821 (170,171,172) - You've mapped almost the whole song around the vocals where there are any, so abruptly changing to instrumentals in the middle of a kiai time is weird, when you could easily map it to the vocals. Move 01:19:821 (170) to 01:19:590, 01:20:283 (171) to 01:20:513 and 01:20:513 (172) to 01:20:744. Same with 02:37:360 (344,345,346), and 03:51:206 (511,512,513).
Image: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3560714wuu...I change some..
You did a good job matching to the vocals though. Sounds great Thanks for your congratulations.

01:27:206 - I have a feeling this space was for a rest period, which is perfectly fine, but rather than have it here, move 01:27:667 (188) to 01:28:129 and move 01:28:129 (189,190,191) to 01:27:206 to make a break between 01:27:667 and 01:29:052 to make a transition out of the kiai time. I feel like this would be a more suitable place to put a break, rather than stop doing the rhythm you had a couple of seconds ago. If you accept, do this for all kiai times.
It should look like this imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3560681 Sure,I think your idea is better than mine.

01:37:590 (212,213,214) - Switch the colours of these three hits. It would match the vocals better. Same with 01:44:975 (228,229,230), 01:52:360 (245,246,247), and 02:01:360 (264,265,266). Not change,I think it is good.

01:39:437 (215,216) - Ctrl + G for the same reason as above. Same with 01:46:821 (231,232).

02:00:206 (263) - Change to d to match the vocals.Change it

Pretty good after that (except for the spots I mentioned in my previous suggestions).

03:53:513 (515,516,517) - First of all, Ctrl + G to match the vocals. Second, in this section, you put a 1/1 hit, then three 1/2 hits, whereas in the previous two choruses, you started with the three 1/2 hits then a 1/1 hit. Compare second chorus: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3560742 to third chorus: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3560747
I'd change this part to match the second chorus, but it's fine the way it is. I not change it ~
Thanks for you mod~~Thanks ！

New map：http://puu.sh/jQ4ZC/0a00e83ea3.osu
前几天家里的Wifi一下断一下断的- -根本上传不了，现在回学校了才上来

Snowy Heart wrote:

New map：http://puu.sh/jQ4ZC/0a00e83ea3.osu
前几天家里的Wifi一下断一下断的- -根本上传不了，现在回学校了才上来

Updated~

here we go....

[Kantan]
01:13:821 (94) - delete this note to give a bit of a break, this pattern becomes quite a long chaing of 1/1 patterns in a row so at least having a 3/1 break here would be good imo
01:36:437 - the red tick rythm you're using here is slightly questionable because it's inconsistent than the previous parts and red tick rythms should be avoided in Kantans anyway if there is something simpler that could be mapped
02:31:359 (197) - same as earlier
02:56:744 (229) - maybe change to d, lower sound than the last repetition of the pattern and 2x kkd feels repetitive
03:13:360 (249,250) - delete and 03:14:283 - add d to create a 4/1 break. This pattern is becoming rather long even though it's a relatively calm part in the music.
04:01:822 (316) - delete this note, the pattern gets too long otherwise and Kantan players will need a bit of a break after such a constellation using many 4plets and 5plets

as far as triplets go the diff only relies on dkd kdk and kkd, maybe you could add some more variety?

[Futsuu]
02:08:744 (285) - delete, pattern gets a bit too long otherwise for the calm part, also consistency with 00:49:360 -
02:02:744 (270,271,272,273) - also delete this and add a d at 02:00:898 - for the same reason

[Muzukashii]
01:01:360 (186,187,188) - these 1/4 feel weird and out of place here, maybe move the 1/4 triplet 1/2 to the right
01:16:129 (242,243,244) - ^
02:18:899 (445,446,447) - ^
02:33:668 (501,502,503) - ^
03:47:513 (769,770,771) - ^

[Meep's Oni]
why use SV1.6? 1.4 fits better here imo.

00:21:667 (1,2,3,1,2) - kkddk would fit better, kdkdk is a bit too intense here
01:07:590 (2,3,4,1) - not a fan of the overmapped 1/6 here. 1/4 would fit better imo
01:08:975 (2,3,4,1) - ^
01:22:360 (2,3,4,1) - ^
01:23:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:27:437 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:25:129 (2,3,4,1) - ^
02:26:513 (2,3,4,1) - ^
02:39:898 (2,3,4,1) - ^
02:41:283 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:44:975 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:38:975 (25,26,27,28) - ^
03:40:360 (32,33,34,35) - ^
03:53:744 (109,110,111,112) - ^
03:55:129 (116,117,118,119) - ^
03:58:821 (134,135,136,137) - ^

[Oni]
seems fine for now, i'll look again afterwards to see if i missed something

Chromoxx wrote:

here we go....

[Kantan]
01:13:821 (94) - delete this note to give a bit of a break, this pattern becomes quite a long chaing of 1/1 patterns in a row so at least having a 3/1 break here would be good imo fixed
01:36:437 - the red tick rythm you're using here is slightly questionable because it's inconsistent than the previous parts and red tick rythms should be avoided in Kantans anyway if there is something simpler that could be mapped I have tried different simpler patterns here before. The tic-tok sounds absent in the previous parts at 01:37:590 - etc. are really prominent, so it would sound a bit unnatural if white tick rhythms are used. There are also sufficient 4/1 and 3/1 breaks near the pattern, so it would still be acceptable imo.
02:31:359 (197) - same as earlier fixed
02:56:744 (229) - maybe change to d, lower sound than the last repetition of the pattern and 2x kkd feels repetitive Okay.
03:13:360 (249,250) - delete and 03:14:283 - add d to create a 4/1 break. This pattern is becoming rather long even though it's a relatively calm part in the music. fixed
04:01:822 (316) - delete this note, the pattern gets too long otherwise and Kantan players will need a bit of a break after such a constellation using many 4plets and 5plets Since the song bpm is rather low and there is a 4/1 break few seconds later, I would prefer keeping the note to make it consistent with the starting rhythm, i.e. 00:03:667 -

as far as triplets go the diff only relies on dkd kdk and kkd, maybe you could add some more variety? Added some ddk.

[Futsuu]
02:08:744 (285) - delete, pattern gets a bit too long otherwise for the calm part, also consistency with 00:49:360 - Fixed as I was allowed to make minor changes for Snowy Heart.
02:02:744 (270,271,272,273) - also delete this and add a d at 02:00:898 - for the same reason Fixed in another way for a 2/1 break.

[Muzukashii]
01:01:360 (186,187,188) - these 1/4 feel weird and out of place here, maybe move the 1/4 triplet 1/2 to the right fixed
01:16:129 (242,243,244) - ^ ^
02:18:899 (445,446,447) - ^ ^
02:33:668 (501,502,503) - ^ ^
03:47:513 (769,770,771) - ^ ^

[Meep's Oni]
why use SV1.6? 1.4 fits better here imo. fixed

00:21:667 (1,2,3,1,2) - kkddk would fit better, kdkdk is a bit too intense here ^
01:07:590 (2,3,4,1) - not a fan of the overmapped 1/6 here. 1/4 would fit better imo ^
01:08:975 (2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
01:22:360 (2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
01:23:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:27:437 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:25:129 (2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
02:26:513 (2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
02:39:898 (2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
02:41:283 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
02:44:975 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
03:38:975 (25,26,27,28) - ^ ^
03:40:360 (32,33,34,35) - ^ ^
03:53:744 (109,110,111,112) - ^ ^
03:55:129 (116,117,118,119) - ^ ^
03:58:821 (134,135,136,137) - ^ ^

[Oni]
seems fine for now, i'll look again afterwards to see if i missed something

Thanks for your mod Chromoxx~

quick recheck

[General]
BG has a bit of a weird resolution :thinking:

[Oni]
03:32:513 (956,957,958,959) - this 1/6 feels weird, i'd suggest just using 1/4 ddd

[Meet's Oni]
01:29:052 - upon further consideration i've come to the conclusion that this break doesn't really fit here. Would be cool if you could map this part too
03:01:360 - this part doesn't really need a break either but at least it seemed more natural when playing.. your choice here!

Chromoxx wrote:

quick recheck

[General]
BG has a bit of a weird resolution :thinking: Changed a new one, hope it looks better now.

[Oni]
03:32:513 (956,957,958,959) - this 1/6 feels weird, i'd suggest just using 1/4 ddd Alright.

[Meet's Oni]
01:29:052 - upon further consideration i've come to the conclusion that this break doesn't really fit here. Would be cool if you could map this part too Done.
03:01:360 - this part doesn't really need a break either but at least it seemed more natural when playing.. your choice here! Kept the break as per meetmeetdee's intention.

Thanks again~

seems good now... must be a strange feeling ranking your very first mapset after all this time lol

Qualified~

wow first map......