This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 27, 2013 at 11:31:03 AM

Artist: SHK
Title: Turkey March
Source: O2Jam
BPM: 128
Filesize: 1441kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

1. Bronze (3.32 stars, 109 notes)
2. Chrome (4.82 stars, 254 notes)
3. Gold (4.99 stars, 426 notes)
4. Rust (1.98 stars, 88 notes)
5. Silver (4.61 stars, 179 notes)

Download: SHK - Turkey March
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I respect all the people who can play Gold by single-tapping.
This is disappointing :/

Hello there

Keep in mind that my Mods are not meant to modify your mapping style but just suggestions to improve it which is your choice to use them or not. If something is urgent to be changed it will be marked Red with a legal explanation.

[General]
Set preview time to your map.

Set current position as Preview Point.
* The Preview time must be the same in all difficulties.

[Easy]
Easy needs remap, sadly.
Reasons:

1. It's too hard for "Easy"
2. Easy difficulties must be lower than 3.00 Stars to meet the Ranking criteria.

Try to map the Easy difficulty using only 1/1. Newbie players are not that experienced with the game to read quickly the approach rate in short distance hits.

[Normal]
Use 70% Volume as first. 50% is too low for that song. I can barely hear the hit sounds.
I would say to remove some circles and make it easier other wise remap :/.
4.61 Stars for Normal is a crime ; - ;

[Hard]
00:07:128 (5) - Remove NC, the Combo does not change here.
00:13:690 (4) - ^
00:14:628 (7) - ^
00:24:003 (5) - ^
00:25:409 (1) - Here needs NC
00:25:878 (2) - Remove from here.
00:34:315 (3) - Remove NC, combo doesn't change here.
00:44:628 (5) - Remove NC from here.
00:45:096 (1) - and put it here


[Insane]
The following doubles are off beat and not needed :/
00:05:253 (1,2) - The beat starts here 00:05:253 (1)
00:06:190 (1,2) - This here: 00:06:190 (1)
00:07:128 (1,2) - And this here: 00:07:128 (1)
00:12:753 (1,2) - The beat Starts here: 00:12:753 (1)
00:13:691 (1,2) - The beat starts here: 00:13:691 (1)
00:14:628 (1,2) - The beat starts here: 00:14:628 (1)
01:21:190 (1,2,3,4) - Split them, the spacing is not correct.


Overall, I can't say it's bad but it needs much work, you made Easy and Normal very hard for their level.

Good luck!!

Hi, M4M
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Note:Most is just suggestions!

[General]
Preview time varies!! Use constant preview time on ALL difficulties

[Gold]
Din't find anything...(It's too difficult for me anyway )


[Chrome]
00:08:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why not just stack them?
00:09:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:10:409 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
00:12:753 (1,2,3) - how about don't stack this?
00:13:690 (1,2,3) - ^
00:17:440 (3) - ^
00:18:846 (2) - Slider missing one reverse?00:19:198 - or add a circle here?


[Silver]
00:01:034 (1,1) - no need to be different combo?


[Bronze]
Din't spot anything

[Rust]
Since this is suppose to be [Easy], why not use circle size=3?




That's all that I can find, not bad in general, GL for rank
P.S: Sorry for short mod

Hi, M4M from your queue!

General

The part from 01:23:065 to 01:23:768 is not 1/4 if you use 25% playback...

Rust

The main thing I noticed is there aren't many hitsounds... I'd try to add a clap on avery second white tick, for example in 00:03:846 in 00:07:596 in 00:11:346 in 00:15:096 or in 00:22:596 and so on!
00:40:878 (1) - I don't like this slider, it's different from the others... Maybe try to make it round or at least move the red point and make it symmetrical
01:22:128 (3) - 184|344? There's not a big difference but I like it more here

Bronze

Well, why there isn't any hitsound? I think you haven't added them yet, tell me if I'm right
01:23:768 (2,3) - The music here is a bit confused and newbie players can't read the pattern, I don't know how to explain... Anyways I'd replace this note with a slider for this reason, fuck my english

Silver

00:01:034 (1) - 5% volume on this slider?
00:06:190 (3) - I don't know... Something like this would flow better. Or maybe use Ctrl+h if you don't want to change the slider

Chrome

00:01:034 (1,2,3,4) - Again, 5% volume?
00:07:596 (2) - Move final sliderpoint to 124|66 for a perfect blanket
00:13:221 (2,3,2,3,2,3) - I don't know, I'm not sure but I think that these notes are not perfectly stacked under the sliders
00:16:971 (2,3) - These too, they are not perfectly stacked
00:20:721 (3,4) - ^
00:30:096 (2) - I'd decrease a bit the volume on this slider, it's a bit noisy...
00:41:346 (2) - For a better flow you can use ctrl+g on this
00:42:284 (4,5) - Select these notes and use ctrl+g, the flow will be better imo and you can also create a small jump
01:18:846 (2) - Move 3rd sliderpoint to 35|233 for a perfect blanket
01:23:065 (3) - I'd end the slider here 01:23:651 And start a new 1/4 slider here 01:23:768 since there is a chenge in the music

Gold

00:01:034 (1,2,3,4) - Again, 5% volume?
00:05:253 (1,2) - I'm not sure but I think you should move these 1/8 earlier and make the slider finish 1/8 later...
00:06:190 (1,2) - ^
00:07:128 (1,2) - ^
00:12:753 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These too
00:30:096 (2) - I'd decrease a bit the volume on this, it's noisy
01:01:503 (1) - It's not aligned with the stream, move it to 454|107 or something
01:06:073 (8,1) - When I played the map I couldn't read this... I thought it was 1/2
01:12:753 (1,2,3,4) - Why don't you put these four sliders like this? (Ignore the timeline lol)

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Finished, very good map, as usual. Take my star!

hi ww


Gold

1. 00:01:503 (5,5) - i think better clap at the slider ends, whistle at 00:01:971 (1) - and (6)
2. 00:09:003 (5,5) - ^
3. 01:16:503 (5,5) - ^
4. 01:06:190 (1) - why only this stream has jump, add jump in every stream is better way (?
5. 01:23:065 (1,2,3,4,5) - the rhythm is actually like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/702439 0,0 not sure if can play

Chrome

1. 00:18:846 (2) - do it like 00:16:971 (2) - www
2. 00:34:315 (1) - reverse arrow problem o.o?

Silver

1. 01:00:565 (4) - o.o

why all diff circle size 4 0,0
rust/bronze can have 3 or 2

I am a new modder. hope my mod can help you

Rust:
Make Audio Lead-In Seconds min. 1,5

Bronze:
Make Audio Lead-In Seconds min. 1,5
00:55:878 This slider is too many right please put it more inside Areal
01:09:471 Maybe add Circle

Silver:
Make Audio Lead-In Seconds min. 2

Chrome:
Make Audio Lead-In Seconds min. 2
00:34:315 This looks a little bit confused, please add slider exactly like 00:33:378

Gold:
Make Audio Lead-In Seconds min. 2

It's a very good map, thats why i must say "Well that's All =)"

hi. M4M

• [General]

1. Use Audio Lead-in
   
   [Rust]
   
2. CS+1?
3. why 4beats interval between claps? You didn't do this to other diffs. Add a clap on each second white tick
   
   [Bronze]
   
4. Hitsounds ? :<
5. 01:23:768 (2) - confusing. try to make something like you did on Rust. delete this. and keep the 1.0 distance between (1) and (3), for example 160,368
6. 00:23:065 (2,3) - not a really good flow imo. change it like this?
   

   329,257,22128,6,0,P|249:270|209:236,1,120
   168,168,23065,2,0,P|168:136|184:96,1,60
   192,80,23533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   288,109,24003,6,0,P|358:107|376:259,1,240

   
   [Silver]
   
7. 00:08:065 (3) - delete clap at the head. you didn't do this at other diffs so there's no rly a good reason to do this.
8. 00:53:065 (3) - It'll be better if you make the tail pointing to (1)
   
   [Chrome]
   
9. 00:12:753 (1,2,3) - stack
10. 00:13:690 (1,2,3) - ^
11. 00:14:628 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 00:19:198 - to make it consistent with 00:22:948 (5) , add a note here.
13. 00:46:503 (1,2,3,4) - It feels like you were forcing this pattern to follow the music (my english sux meh). I prefer 1/2 notes. Like this :
    
    SPOILER

    
    Fix the others too.
14. 01:23:065 (1,2,3) - this is exactly the same as [Silver], make it better. Like this?
    

    161,181,83065,2,0,L|142:146,5,40
    144,128,83768,2,0,L|125:93,2,40

    
    [Gold]
    
15. 00:05:253 (1,2) - no. a bit overmapped. It doesn't even follow the song very well. Change it to a slider. Fix the others too.
16. 00:59:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - for better look, place these circles straight. Like this :
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:04:315 (9) - blocked by (7,8)
18. 01:08:534 (2) - blocked by (1)
19. 01:09:940 (1) - welp
20. 01:21:190 (1,2,3,4,1) - why anti jump?
21. 01:21:190 (1,2,3,4,1) - out of sight in 5:4. move it to somewhere else.

Great map. I like it. So, Here's a star. GL