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Kin
Hi M4M ~

Hinsvar's Easy :

00:01:053 (1) - add finish ?
on this part 00:44:344 - ~~ 00:56:875 - the clap don't follow the drum or it's maybe original hit sound clap ?
the drum is like this
00:44:344 (2) - add clap
00:48:521 (4) - remove clap at slider end and begin + add clap on arrow
00:49:660 (1) - add clap at arrow
00:51:180 - remove clap begin and end + add clap on arrow
00:52:698 (1) - add clap slider end
00:53:837 (2) - remove clap
00:54:217 (3) - add clap slider end
00:56:496 (1) - add clap begin + remove clap slider end
01:23:458 (1) - make this spinner begin here ? 01:23:268 -

Xinely's Normal :

00:16:622 (1,2,3,4,5) - this kind of pattern is too much confusing for normal diff (for me)
01:09:787 (5,1) - (kinda nazi) the 2 slider end look too close for me, if you move 1 one grid bot, that can make a perfect blanket
On this part, 00:47:002 - ~~ 00:57:635 - the clap don't follow the drum or it's maybe original hit sound clap ?
the drum is like this
00:47:002 (1) - remove clap begin + add clap slider end
00:47:761 (2) - remove clap
00:48:521 (3) - remove clap begin + add clap end
00:50:040 (2) - remove clap begin and end + add clap arrow
00:51:559 (4) - remove clap begin + add clap slider end
00:52:318 (5) - remove clap
00:52:698 (1) - add clap slider end
00:53:837 (2) - remove clap
00:54:217 (3) - remove clap slider end
00:54:977 (4) - add clap
00:55:356 (5) - remove clap
00:55:736 (1) - add clap on arrow
01:13:774 (1) - remove clap slider end
01:14:344 (2) - add clap begin

Hard :

00:13:204 (1) - try to make a blanket, like this
00:27:825 (8,1) - in editor, the spacing is good, but when you play it, with the stack they are really close http://puu.sh/29IoI
00:37:128 (9) - add clap
00:53:268 (5) - make a blanket, it's feel ugly next to 4
00:56:496 (3,4) - in editor, the spacing is good, but when you play it, with the stack they are really close http://puu.sh/29Isx

Insane :

00:37:888 (2,3,4,5,6) - overmaping, I don't know why there is a stream here
00:46:622 (1) - make a better blanket, this one feel really ugly for me
00:47:192 (2) - if you do this ^, don't forget this one

ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii :


00:57:065 (1) - wrong color ~
00:45:863 (1) - k ?

ReySHeL's Taiko Onii :

01:34:280 (2) - K sound better for melody

that all I can find ~

Good luck ~
Hinsvar

Kin wrote:

Hinsvar's Easy :

00:01:053 (1) - add finish ? No; it's too loud there.
on this part 00:44:344 - ~~ 00:56:875 - the clap don't follow the drum or it's maybe original hit sound clap ?
the drum is like this
00:44:344 (2) - add clap Done.
00:48:521 (4) - remove clap at slider end and begin + add clap on arrow ^
00:49:660 (1) - add clap at arrow ^
00:51:180 - remove clap begin and end + add clap on arrow ^
00:52:698 (1) - add clap slider end ^
00:53:837 (2) - remove clap ^
00:54:217 (3) - add clap slider end ^
00:56:496 (1) - add clap begin + remove clap slider end ^
01:23:458 (1) - make this spinner begin here ? 01:23:268 - ...I'm seriously confused about this. Will make the spinner stay as is for now.
Also followed everything from Gloria Guard's mod.

Thanks for the mod \:D/

To Natsu: If you decided to change the offset, change it on my diff too.

http://puu.sh/29IVh
Xinely
fix all
thanks Kin ~

http://puu.sh/29IWL
Topic Starter
Natsu
Kin

Kin wrote:

Hi M4M ~

Hard :

00:13:204 (1) - try to make a blanket, like this ok
00:27:825 (8,1) - in editor, the spacing is good, but when you play it, with the stack they are really close http://puu.sh/29IoI i move it a little
00:37:128 (9) - add clap upps done
00:53:268 (5) - make a blanket, it's feel ugly next to 4 fix
00:56:496 (3,4) - in editor, the spacing is good, but when you play it, with the stack they are really close http://puu.sh/29Isxk

Insane :

00:37:888 (2,3,4,5,6) - overmaping, I don't know why there is a stream here i always overmap in sme parts xD foxed now :3
00:46:622 (1) - make a better blanket, this one feel really ugly for me i keep it :3
00:47:192 (2) - if you do this ^, don't forget this one ^
[u][b]


that all I can find ~

Good luck ~

thanks alot :3
Raose
First time modding, sorry if it's not good :(
Easy and Normal look fine to me, and I can barely do Insane maps, let alone mod them...

[Hard]

Generally, I'm not a fan of long combos, so all the NC's are my personal opinion!

00:17:761 (6) - NC
00:31:432 (5) - NC and take off the NC at 00:32:002 ?
00:32:951 (4) - NC
00:42:825 (1,2) - turn off NC at 1 and put it on at 2
00:49:660 (8) - NC
00:51:749 (1,4) - turn off NC at 1 and put it on 4
01:03:331 (1,2,3,4) - personal preference, but I prefer this rhythm:



01:07:879 (6,7) - extend slider to 01:08:173 and have it repeat only once, move 7 down slightly to compensate
HabiHolic
Hello~ From My Queues~



[Hinsvar's Easy]

00:13:204 (1) - Start Finish?
00:45:863 (4) - NC?
00:46:622 (1) - Remove NC?
00:54:217 (3) - Easy difficulty is still so difficult ... I think the pattern
00:55:546 (5) - ^
01:36:179 (2) - ^

[Xinely's Normal]
00:17:382 (2) - Distance check

[Hard]
None!

[Insane]
None

Good Luck~
Hinsvar

HabiHolic wrote:

[Hinsvar's Easy]

00:13:204 (1) - Start Finish? Nope; too loud there.
00:45:863 (4) - NC? Nope; I want to keep the combo going ahead in the pattern.
00:46:622 (1) - Remove NC? ^
00:54:217 (3) - Easy difficulty is still so difficult ... I think the pattern It can only be mapped correctly without things going awkward that way, IMO...
00:55:546 (5) - ^ ^
01:36:179 (2) - ^ ^
Well, thanks for modding ._.

edit: and xinely didn't change anything
Topic Starter
Natsu
Zhengster

Zhengster wrote:

First time modding, sorry if it's not good :(
Easy and Normal look fine to me, and I can barely do Insane maps, let alone mod them...

[Hard]

Generally, I'm not a fan of long combos, so all the NC's are my personal opinion!

00:17:761 (6) - NC
00:31:432 (5) - NC and take off the NC at 00:32:002 ?
00:32:951 (4) - NC
00:42:825 (1,2) - turn off NC at 1 and put it on at 2
00:49:660 (8) - NC
00:51:749 (1,4) - turn off NC at 1 and put it on 4
01:03:331 (1,2,3,4) - personal preference, but I prefer this rhythm: you right :3



01:07:879 (6,7) - extend slider to 01:08:173 and have it repeat only once, move 7 down slightly to compensate
Niko-nyan
BAKAVAR's diff was here ;w;
MOENELY's diff was here too o.o

Taiko Oni~
why just this diff that i can mod o.o
01:29:913 - add a note because i hear the low vocal

o.o star~
Poggo
Hi m4m request :3

[General]

• on Hinsvar's Easy different kiai time what on another diffs~
now : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:58:585, ends on 01:29:155
shold be : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:58:584, ends on 01:29:154

• The same with PreviewTime:
now : 58575
shold be : 58574

[Insane] :?

00:02:382(4,5) - put slider 5 in centre and note 5 on x128 y300 and slider 6 on x44 y 244 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638333 looks much better
00:06:369 - here better make the advent of sound: 00:06:369 - 20%, 00:06:559 - 25%, 00:06:749 - 30%, 00:06:939 - 35%. It creates sound effect what good follow for music
00:08:647 - better replace finish on whistle bcz it's not sounds here. Don't feels good
00:14:723 - ^ same
00:23:742 - this note sounds overmapped and don't follow for music here, will be better remove it
00:24:407(7,10,11) - 1 grid left for perfect star http://puu.sh/2bmW6
00:27:255(9,10,11) - this pattern looks ugly >.> maybe try so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638358 ?
00:28:204 - remove nc and add on slider 3 on downbeat
00:29:913 - If you put NC on every second down beat then remove nc here, 00:31:432 add nc, 00:32:951 remove nc. It will be looks more
consequentially
00:33:331 - 1 grid down for better flow with stream
00:43:299 - this place sounds a bit empty, so http://puu.sh/2bn4y this rhythm sounds better and will be more playable.
00:46:622(1,2) -this sliders not symmetry, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638375 This will be looks more pleasant
00:47:951 - not symmetry slider >.< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638379
00:55:166(4) - this slider a bit ugly, put point 2 on x116 y116 for blanket with previous note http://puu.sh/2bndi
01:16:242 - add note here, it's folow for the last syllable in a string
01:27:445(1) - this slider not symmetry >.< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638409
300,236,87445,22,0,B|376:212|424:156|424:76|408:20|352:-4|296:4|256:76|256:76|216:4|160:-4|104:20|88:76|88:148|136:196|212:236|212:236|252:256|252:328,1,900,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:33:521 - here and on start slider 6 better put finished, it sounds better for me~

[Hard]

00:23:742 - same on Insane
00:28:204 - remove nc here and add on slider 3 and e.tc with NC same on Insane
00:37:318 - remove NC here and add on slider 2
00:37:888(2,3) - make symmetric sliders, will be looks better http://puu.sh/2bnFu
00:43:774(3,4) - make blanket here http://puu.sh/2bnHi
00:49:660 - add NC here
00:51:749 - remove Nc here
00:52:698 - add nc
00:53:268(2,3,4) - fix blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638434
01:27:445 - ugly slider >.< I already gave exaple for this slider, fixed it plz

P.S Plz check nc on kiai time on Insane and hard >.< It's have many mistakes with it, better put nc on 2down beat same as well as in other parts of the map!


[Xinely's Normal]

00:02:571 and 00:05:609 - I really don't see reason put claps here, better replace on whistles. It's sounds better for low part
00:19:280 - here NC bcz you put it on every second down beat
00:22:318 - better replace on finish it feels better and indicates a new part of music
00:23:078 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:30:673(5,6) - 1 grid left for centre with end slider 4
00:38:647 - here need a note, better replace note 2 on slider 1/2, it's better follow for music
00:41:496(1,2) - make blanket here, will be looks more pleasant and playable http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638467

[Hinsvar's Easy]

00:04:470 - for consistency better add NC here


Good luck :3
Kuro
Mod request from ~ Kuro's Taiko Modding & GD Queue

d = Don | D = Big Don | k = Kat | K = Big Kat
Anything with a "?" is a suggestion

[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]

2-step process
00:15:103 (2) - delete
00:15:293 (1) - If you did the previous step change to d

2-step process
01:30:483 (2) - d
01:30:673 (1) - If you did the previous step delete this for consistency

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]

00:20:799 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Delete 00:21:559 (5) It will tie your rhythm closer to the music.
00:54:122 (4) - Move to 00:53:742 (2) ?

That's all I could find, sorry for short mod
Nice song, good luck with rank (>_o)b
Topic Starter
Natsu
Katty Pie

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi m4m request :3

[General]

• on Hinsvar's Easy different kiai time what on another diffs~
now : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:58:585, ends on 01:29:155
shold be : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:58:584, ends on 01:29:154

• The same with PreviewTime:
now : 58575
shold be : 58574

[Insane] :?

00:02:382(4,5) - put slider 5 in centre and note 5 on x128 y300 and slider 6 on x44 y 244 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638333 looks much better
00:06:369 - here better make the advent of sound: 00:06:369 - 20%, 00:06:559 - 25%, 00:06:749 - 30%, 00:06:939 - 35%. It creates sound effect what good follow for music
00:08:647 - better replace finish on whistle bcz it's not sounds here. Don't feels good
00:14:723 - ^ same
00:23:742 - this note sounds overmapped and don't follow for music here, will be better remove it
00:24:407(7,10,11) - 1 grid left for perfect star http://puu.sh/2bmW6
00:27:255(9,10,11) - this pattern looks ugly >.> maybe try so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638358 ?
00:28:204 - remove nc and add on slider 3 on downbeat
00:29:913 - If you put NC on every second down beat then remove nc here, 00:31:432 add nc, 00:32:951 remove nc. It will be looks more
consequentially
00:33:331 - 1 grid down for better flow with stream
00:43:299 - this place sounds a bit empty, so http://puu.sh/2bn4y this rhythm sounds better and will be more playable.
00:46:622(1,2) -this sliders not symmetry, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638375 This will be looks more pleasant
00:47:951 - not symmetry slider >.< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638379
00:55:166(4) - this slider a bit ugly, put point 2 on x116 y116 for blanket with previous note http://puu.sh/2bndi
01:16:242 - add note here, it's folow for the last syllable in a string
01:27:445(1) - this slider not symmetry >.< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638409
300,236,87445,22,0,B|376:212|424:156|424:76|408:20|352:-4|296:4|256:76|256:76|216:4|160:-4|104:20|88:76|88:148|136:196|212:236|212:236|252:256|252:328,1,900,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:33:521 - here and on start slider 6 better put finished, it sounds better for me~

[Hard]

00:23:742 - same on Insane
00:28:204 - remove nc here and add on slider 3 and e.tc with NC same on Insane
00:37:318 - remove NC here and add on slider 2
00:37:888(2,3) - make symmetric sliders, will be looks better http://puu.sh/2bnFu
00:43:774(3,4) - make blanket here http://puu.sh/2bnHi
00:49:660 - add NC here
00:51:749 - remove Nc here
00:52:698 - add nc
00:53:268(2,3,4) - fix blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638434
01:27:445 - ugly slider >.< I already gave exaple for this slider, fixed it plz

P.S Plz check nc on kiai time on Insane and hard >.< It's have many mistakes with it, better put nc on 2down beat same as well as in other parts of the map!


nice mod thanks all fixed in hard and insane


Good luck :3
B2IN
o/ hi Natsu
from my q

 General

  • fine

 Hinsvar's Easy

  • fine

 Xinely's Normal

  1. 00:27:065 (3) - i felt a bit odd clap shound. if you want to add clap, add clap slidertick and use the clap slidertick on 00:27:255 .
  2. 01:01:622 (1) - ^
  3. 01:21:559 (1,2) - not bad pattern. btw try this even once. i think fit this more than now with music.

 Hard

  1. 00:53:268 (5,6,7) - select all stuff and move to x352 y344 will better blanket with 00:52:698 (4) .
  2. 00:54:597 (8,9) - if follow above opinion, try this arrangement for regular distance.
  3. 01:03:141 (1) - same as Insane diff. remove finish and add finish on 01:03:141 .

 Insane

  1. 00:25:736 (2,3,4,5,6) - ovemapping,, but i don't mind if you want not to change it. :d
  2. 00:45:103 (1) - can you remove finish on slider? and add finish on 00:44:913 // 00:45:483 // 00:46:242 or 00:44:913 // 00:45:483 better to me. 00:46:242
  3. 00:49:660 (1,2) - try this. blanket with 00:49:470 (7) better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/637571
    SPOILER
    313,294,49660,6,0,B|368:232|316:164|316:164|312:108,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,108,50230,2,0,B|196:164|196:164|144:232|198:294,1,200
  4. 00:54:027 (8) - add whistle on slider start intead on slider body whistle .
  5. 01:03:141 (1) - remove finish. kinda odd. and add finish on 01:03:141 .
  6. 01:19:280 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this arrangement for smooth flow ?
    SPOILER
    130,70,79280,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    108,80,79375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    84,92,79470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    64,108,79565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    44,124,79660,2,0,P|0:216|48:304,1,200,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

gl ~
Topic Starter
Natsu
B2IN

B2IN wrote:

o/ hi Natsu
from my q

 General

  • fine



 Hard

  1. 00:53:268 (5,6,7) - select all stuff and move to x352 y344 will better blanket with 00:52:698 (4) .
  2. 00:54:597 (8,9) - if follow above opinion, try this arrangement for regular distance.
  3. 01:03:141 (1) - same as Insane diff. remove finish and add finish on 01:03:141 .

 Insane

  1. 00:25:736 (2,3,4,5,6) - ovemapping,, but i don't mind if you want not to change it. :d
  2. 00:45:103 (1) - can you remove finish on slider? and add finish on 00:44:913 // 00:45:483 // 00:46:242 or 00:44:913 // 00:45:483 better to me. 00:46:242
  3. 00:49:660 (1,2) - try this. blanket with 00:49:470 (7) better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/637571
    SPOILER
    313,294,49660,6,0,B|368:232|316:164|316:164|312:108,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    200,108,50230,2,0,B|196:164|196:164|144:232|198:294,1,200
  4. 00:54:027 (8) - add whistle on slider start intead on slider body whistle .
  5. 01:03:141 (1) - remove finish. kinda odd. and add finish on 01:03:141 .
  6. 01:19:280 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this arrangement for smooth flow ?
    SPOILER
    130,70,79280,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    108,80,79375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    84,92,79470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    64,108,79565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    44,124,79660,2,0,P|0:216|48:304,1,200,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

all fixed on hard and insane thank alot for mod :3

gl ~
Xinely

B2IN wrote:

o/ hi Natsu
from my q

 Xinely's Normal

  1. 00:27:065 (3) - i felt a bit odd clap shound. if you want to add clap, add clap slidertick and use the clap slidertick on 00:27:255 . remove clap
  2. 01:01:622 (1) - ^ ^
  3. 01:21:559 (1,2) - not bad pattern. btw try this even once. i think fit this more than now with music.
i prefer my own ~

gl ~

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi m4m request :3

[Xinely's Normal]

00:02:571 and 00:05:609 - I really don't see reason put claps here, better replace on whistles. It's sounds better for low part
00:19:280 - here NC bcz you put it on every second down beat no, i think it's consisten
00:22:318 - better replace on finish it feels better and indicates a new part of music
00:23:078 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:30:673(5,6) - 1 grid left for centre with end slider 4
00:38:647 - here need a note, better replace note 2 on slider 1/2, it's better follow for music
00:41:496(1,2) - make blanket here, will be looks more pleasant and playable http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638467
thanks 4 mod all~
Hinsvar
Already told Natsu to fix the kiai time and preview, and also to apply the NC.

Thanks Pie, and also to B2IN for checking it.

I'm not feeling well today...
KantoKun
mods Taiko~ Yeah!
SPOILER
Taiko Muzukashii
00:28:394 (1) - d
add note d in 00:51:939
00:57:065 (1) - newcombo ?
01:00:103 (1) - d
01:12:255 (1) - d
01:13:774 (1) - d
Spin is long Cut from 01:27:635 - 01:28:774
SPOILER
Taiko Oni
01:00:103 (1) - d
01:01:622 (1) - d
01:12:255 (1) - d
01:13:774 (1) - d
Oni is very is easy. I recommend that,ReSHel do it new because it's too easy for Oni. :o :o
<---- Give Kudosu~~~
BounceBabe
Hi, from the Queue!

Easy

01:23:458 (1) - Delete the circle here and let the spinner start at 01:23:458 so it fits the vocal, or place it right after at 01:23:173 -
01:29:534 - Fill this break because it seems like the map ended here to the player


Hard


00:07:698 (2,3) - Spacing isnt fully correct
00:16:242 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

00:17:761 (7) - NC so the combo isnt too long
01:12:255 (5,1) - Vocal wise, since you mapped to the vocal, combo should be reversed
01:16:432 (1,2) - ^, delete nc at 01:17:761 (1) -
01:18:521 (3,1) - Reverse NC
01:20:230 (3) - NC
01:21:369 (1,3) - Reverse NC
01:25:736 (1,1) - Change these combo colours, so the heart is pink?

Insane

The difficultie is so overmapped. So many streams which doesnt fit. For example
00:06:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - , 00:32:951 (6,7,8,9,10) - , 00:42:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream doesnt fit at all, no BG relates to it
- Give me a good explanation, and no, "It fits good" is not an explanation, why you want to keep them, otherwise change them.

00:17:761 (7) - Combo too long, NC here
00:20:799 (7) - ^
00:38:837 (6) - Make a better curve
00:43:964 (8) - ^
00:46:622 (1,2) - ^
01:02:571 (11,12,1) - Litte spacing difference
01:25:736 (1,1) - Same as Hard

Thats it, GL
Hinsvar
Sorry, won't change anything in my diff.

About the spinner and slider, if I don't end the slider at 01:27:635, it will feel very empty there since there's no hitsound if a spinner starts from there.

For the break, I see no problem with that. How will people think it's the end of the map, in the first place...

Thanks anyway~

Oh, Xinely checked my diff and I got two things changed.

Here's the new version: http://puu.sh/2bVVc
ReySHeL

Kin wrote:

Hi M4M ~



ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii :


00:57:065 (1) - wrong color ~
00:45:863 (1) - k ?

ReySHeL's Taiko Onii :

01:34:280 (2) - K sound better for melody

that all I can find ~

Good luck ~
fix all >w<
thanks for mod :)


Kuro wrote:

Mod request from ~ Kuro's Taiko Modding & GD Queue

d = Don | D = Big Don | k = Kat | K = Big Kat
Anything with a "?" is a suggestion


[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]

2-step process
00:15:103 (2) - delete
00:15:293 (1) - If you did the previous step change to d

2-step process
01:30:483 (2) - d
01:30:673 (1) - If you did the previous step delete this for consistency

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]

00:20:799 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Delete 00:21:559 (5) It will tie your rhythm closer to the music.
00:54:122 (4) - Move to 00:53:742 (2) ?

That's all I could find, sorry for short mod
Nice song, good luck with rank (>_o)b
thanks for mod :)

kantokun wrote:

mods Taiko~ Yeah!
SPOILER
Taiko Muzukashii
00:28:394 (1) - d
add note d in 00:51:939
00:57:065 (1) - newcombo ?
01:00:103 (1) - d
01:12:255 (1) - d
01:13:774 (1) - d
Spin is long Cut from 01:27:635 - 01:28:774
SPOILER
Taiko Oni
01:00:103 (1) - d
01:01:622 (1) - d
01:12:255 (1) - d
01:13:774 (1) - d
Oni is very is easy. I recommend that,ReSHel do it new because it's too easy for Oni. :o :o
<---- Give Kudosu~~~
thanks for mod :)

Muzu~ http://puu.sh/2bZdH
Oni~ http://puu.sh/2bZdT
Topic Starter
Natsu
BounceBabe

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from the Queue! hi

Hard[/b]

00:07:698 (2,3) - Spacing isnt fully correct
00:16:242 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^[/color] ^
00:17:761 (7) - NC so the combo isnt too long my combo pattern are long always xd
01:12:255 (5,1) - Vocal wise, since you mapped to the vocal, combo should be reversed ok
01:16:432 (1,2) - ^, delete nc at 01:17:761 (1) - sure
01:18:521 (3,1) - Reverse NC^
01:20:230 (3) - NC ^
01:21:369 (1,3) - Reverse NC ^
01:25:736 (1,1) - Change these combo colours, so the heart is pink?good idea

Insane

The difficultie is so overmapped. So many streams which doesnt fit. For example
00:06:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - , 00:32:951 (6,7,8,9,10) - is enhancing the vocals i think fit good imo , 00:42:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stream doesnt fit at all, no BG relates to it
- Give me a good explanation, and no, "It fits good" is not an explanation, why you want to keep them, otherwise change them.[/color] i gonna see other modders point about it i think fit perfect with music and vocals
00:17:761 (7) - Combo too long, NC herei make long combos x_x
00:20:799 (7) - ^ ^
00:38:837 (6) - Make a better curve fixed
00:43:964 (8) - ^ ^
00:46:622 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:02:571 (11,12,1) - Litte spacing difference ^
01:25:736 (1,1) - Same as Hard done

Thats it, GL
thanks for mod
Andrea
~Hinsvar's Easy~

00:04:470 (4) - Adding a new combo here would be nice.
01:29:534 - I don't think this is break is necessary, better mapping it.

~Xinely's Normal~

00:15:863 (6) - New combo.
00:16:622 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:18:521 (4) - New combo.

~Hard~

You overused the Finish hitsound here, please add less of them.


00:17:761 (7) - Adding a new combo here would be nice.
00:38:837 (4) - Remove the whistle from the slider body, it sounds bad to me.
01:22:983 (1) - I'd remove this finish here, it doesn't follow anything.

~Insane~

You overused the Finish hitsound here, please add less of them.


00:06:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This stream in such a calm part is just wrong in my opinion, I highly suggest you to remove it.
00:38:837 (6) - Yeah, same as Hard.
00:53:268 (6) - Remove the whistle from the slider body, it sounds bad to me.
01:22:983 (1) - Same as Hard, again.
01:27:445 (1) - It would be better to stack this slider under 01:26:496 (5).

Good map.
Topic Starter
Natsu

Andrea wrote:

~Hard~

You overused the Finish hitsound here, please add less of them.
i remove some finish here

00:17:761 (7) - Adding a new combo here would be nice. done
00:38:837 (4) - Remove the whistle from the slider body, it sounds bad to me. yeah
01:22:983 (1) - I'd remove this finish here, it doesn't follow anything. i remove it and add whistle better

~Insane~

You overused the Finish hitsound here, please add less of them.
yup i remove some of they

00:06:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This stream in such a calm part is just wrong in my opinion, I highly suggest you to remove it. you right done
00:38:837 (6) - Yeah, same as Hard. ok
00:53:268 (6) - Remove the whistle from the slider body, it sounds bad to me. oks
01:22:983 (1) - Same as Hard, again. fixed
01:27:445 (1) - It would be better to stack this slider under 01:26:496 (5). upps fixed

Good map.
thanks for mod :D
Hinsvar

Andrea wrote:

~Hinsvar's Easy~

00:04:470 (4) - Adding a new combo here would be nice. Nope; I want to keep the consistency of the combo on the calm part, especially since it's a part of a symmetrical pattern.
01:29:534 - I don't think this is break is necessary, better mapping it. I'm only following the sound of the bells (?) at the end, so nope.

~Xinely's Normal~

00:15:863 (6) - New combo.
00:16:622 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:18:521 (4) - New combo.
Accepted all suggestions.
Thanks for modding, although there's no change on my diff :D

Natsu, please follow Andrea's suggestions on Xinely's diff. She isn't going to be here until April 18th, so I'll be in charge of her diff (:
Topic Starter
Natsu

Hinsvar wrote:

Natsu, please follow Andrea's suggestions on Xinely's diff. She isn't going to be here until April 18th, so I'll be in charge of her diff (:
oh oka and you going to change her diffs in my other map too :o?
Hinsvar

Natsu wrote:

Hinsvar wrote:

Natsu, please follow Andrea's suggestions on Xinely's diff. She isn't going to be here until April 18th, so I'll be in charge of her diff (:
oh oka and you going to change her diffs in my other map too :o?
Yes, I will, either until April 18th comes or this (and that other map) gets ranked, whichever comes first.

Don't worry; I've got her permission for this :D
moonlightleaf
Just my opinion , hope these can help you

Hard
00:04:090(1) end at 00:04:280 then 00:04:470 add a note maybe is good

00:20:040(3)(4) maybe like this is much better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649319

00:22:318 should't be new note

00:23:837(6) end at 00:24:027 then 00:24:217 add a note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649324

00:25:356(1)can delete or not is never mind ,i suggest to delete

00:25:736(2) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649327

00:28:204(9)should be new note

00:29:154(3)(4) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649330

00:31:432(1)(2) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649331

00:34:470(1) not new note

00:35:040(3)(4) exchange

00:35:609(5)(6)(7) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649334

00:39:425(5) add a return 00:39:787(6) delete

00:40:166(7) new note

00:42:445(7)(1)(2) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649335

00:45:103(1)(2)(3) not new note

00:46:053(4) new note

00:49:470(7) new note

00:51:749(5) move to 00:51:559

00:51:939(6) move to 00:51:749 and add 2 returns

00:52:318(7) delete

00:52:508 add a new note

00:55:736(1)(2)(3) not new note

00:57:065(4) new note

01:00:103(7) new note

01:05:609(4) new note

01:06:749(2)(3) exchange

01:08:647(7) not new note

01:11:685(3)(4) exchange

01:13:774(4) not nwe note

01:14:534(4) end at 01:15:103

01:15:103(5)(6)(7) all move to red line

Insane:
00:13:774(2)(3) exchange

00:22:318(1) not new note

00:22:698(2) new note

00:22:888(3)(4) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649346

00:25:546(2)(3) exchange

00:28:204 new note

00:29:344(4)(5) exchange

00:34:470(1) not new note

00:34:850(2) new note

00:34:850(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7) refer Hard's

00:37:888(2) new note

00:45:103(1)(2) not new note

00:46:053(3)(4)(5) new note

00:47:097 add a note , do you think so ?

00:47:666 the same ↑

00:48:901(6)(7) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649351

00:49:470(8) new note

00:51:559 note

00:51:749(1) not new note

00:52:508(4) not new note

00:54:597(1) note new note

...note's new or not is too much , just listen to music , according to

↑ more of these ,you can find them , i have missed much maybe

Nice music
Topic Starter
Natsu

moonlightleaf wrote:

Just my opinion , hope these can help you

Hard
00:04:090(1) end at 00:04:280 then 00:04:470 add a note maybe is good

00:20:040(3)(4) maybe like this is much better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649319

00:22:318 should't be new note

00:23:837(6) end at 00:24:027 then 00:24:217 add a note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649324

00:25:356(1)can delete or not is never mind ,i suggest to delete

00:25:736(2) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649327

00:28:204(9)should be new note

00:29:154(3)(4) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649330

00:31:432(1)(2) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649331

00:34:470(1) not new note

00:35:040(3)(4) exchange

00:35:609(5)(6)(7) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649334

00:39:425(5) add a return 00:39:787(6) delete

00:40:166(7) new note

00:42:445(7)(1)(2) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649335

00:45:103(1)(2)(3) not new note

00:46:053(4) new note

00:49:470(7) new note

00:51:749(5) move to 00:51:559

00:51:939(6) move to 00:51:749 and add 2 returns

00:52:318(7) delete

00:52:508 add a new note

00:55:736(1)(2)(3) not new note

00:57:065(4) new note

01:00:103(7) new note

01:05:609(4) new note

01:06:749(2)(3) exchange

01:08:647(7) not new note

01:11:685(3)(4) exchange

01:13:774(4) not nwe note

01:14:534(4) end at 01:15:103

01:15:103(5)(6)(7) all move to red line

Insane:
00:13:774(2)(3) exchange

00:22:318(1) not new note

00:22:698(2) new note

00:22:888(3)(4) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649346

00:25:546(2)(3) exchange

00:28:204 new note

00:29:344(4)(5) exchange

00:34:470(1) not new note

00:34:850(2) new note

00:34:850(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7) refer Hard's

00:37:888(2) new note

00:45:103(1)(2) not new note

00:46:053(3)(4)(5) new note

00:47:097 add a note , do you think so ?

00:47:666 the same ↑

00:48:901(6)(7) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649351

00:49:470(8) new note

00:51:559 note

00:51:749(1) not new note

00:52:508(4) not new note

00:54:597(1) note new note

...note's new or not is too much , just listen to music , according to

↑ more of these ,you can find them , i have missed much maybe

Nice music

thanks for mod sorry for no answer all but my pc crash when i was doing it T-T updated
Mythiax
Hi~ In-game mod req.

Natsu's diffs mod will be in spanish.

[General]

  1. Source should be: 彼女と俺と恋人と Romanized: Kanojo to Ore to Koibito to
  2. Title should be: シアワセ定義 Romanized: Shiawase Teigi
[Hinsvar's Easy]

  1. 00:04:470 (1) - NC
  2. 00:34:850 (1) - Stack this note with 00:32:571 (2) -
  3. 00:32:571 (2) - Stack this note with 00:32:951 (3) -
    ^ If you followed my suggestion, fix spacing of 00:36:369 (3)(4) -
  4. 00:54:217 (3) - Ctrl + H for a better flow.
  5. 00:55:546 (5) - ^
  6. 01:16:812 (4) - Ctrl + J for a better flow.
  7. 01:19:660 (3)(1)(2)(3)(4) - Try this pattern. Helps flow and looks better imo




    If you like it, here is the code:

    280,156,79660,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    340,68,80040,6,0,P|376:160|352:260,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,320,81179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    204,252,81559,2,0,P|132:236|68:272,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,320,83078,1,6,0:0:0:0:
[Xinely's Normal]

  1. 00:51:559 (4) - Flip this sliders curve for a better flow like this:
  2. 01:03:141 (3)(4)(5) - These sliders looks unpleasent.Try this for a better flow.


    The code if you like it:
    368,52,63141,2,0,P|412:96|432:152,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    320,140,63901,2,0,P|304:200|328:260,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    236,320,64660,2,0,P|208:244|208:156,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Hard]

  1. 00:25:166 (9)(1) - Intentá colocarlos así, se ven mejor.
  2. 01:00:103 (7) - NC
  3. 01:00:673 (1) - Quita el NC
  4. 01:01:622 (1) - NC
  5. 01:13:015 (2) - Ctrl + J se ve mejor imo
[Insane]

  1. OD +1 ?
  2. 00:03:521 (7) - Ctrl + J?
  3. 00:20:799 (7)(8)(9)(10) - Intenta ubicarlos así.Queda mejor. También podés agregar un NC acá.
I hope my mod helps. Duca <3 Good luck with this song. I leave a star. Bye~
[Luxord]
Hello from my Modding Queue~

[General]
There is inconsistency in combo colors in this mapset~

[Easy]
  1. 01:03:141 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651349 .-.?
  2. 01:32:002 (1,2) - I think the Slider (2) should be moved a grid to left for the symmetry ;)
    Other than that, everything is nice in Easy *-*
[Normal]
  1. Nothing wrong here, very enjoyable~ :)
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:154 (3) - I think this should come few grids to left. Something like this: 00:40:166 (7,1)
  2. 00:47:951 (4) - I personally dislike that slider~ You could work it much more in my opinion.
  3. 01:25:736 (1,2,3,4) - Those 4 are not symmetrical.
  4. 01:27:445 (1) - That slider is love(skip this, is not part of the mod lol)
[Insane]
  1. 00:33:711 (11,12) - Not symmetrical
  2. 00:55:166 (4) - The second slider point(the one that makes the curve) move it 3 or 4 grids up for a more cute curve~
Nothing else, the rest of the map is very nice~ Good job!
[NSER]-Zazalng

Hi sir I from my modding queues

[General]
Inconsistency in combo colours - Not same Combo Colors

[Hinsvar's Easy]
00:13:204 - 00:15:863 Move Note Like this it look good http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651359 | Combo 2 Outlayer
00:34:850 Move slider to x:188 y:100
00:35:989 Move Note to x:280 y:136
00:47:571 - 00:51:179 fix it like this it good & correct beat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651364 | Incorrect at combo 3

[Xinely's Normal]
Impassive Nothing to see i will star for this

[Hard]
00:03:521 Look not good try this ^^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651372 | Combo 6 Outlayer (Reverse Point)
00:08:647 - 00:09:217 Try This http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651376 | Combo 6 Outlayer
00:51:939 - 00:53:078 Try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651384 | Combo 6 Outlayer (Start Point) 6 Again ?
00:55:736 - 00:56:875 Combo 1 & 3 outlayer Try This ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651392

Nothing to see!

[Insane]
00:02:951 Holy ..... Unrankable Slider Fix it NOW!
01:19:660 Again ?? ^

WOW it a big problem Why Slider are ....

But Thanks for use my Modding Queues I will star for Normal Diff
Topic Starter
Natsu
Zeroarg

Zeroarg wrote:

Hi~ In-game mod req.

[General]

  1. Source should be: 彼女と俺と恋人と Romanized: Kanojo to Ore to Koibito to just romanized is fine but thanks
  2. Title should be: シアワセ定義 Romanized: Shiawase Teigi
thanks

[Hard]

  1. 00:25:166 (9)(1) - Intentá colocarlos así, se ven mejor. ok
  2. 01:00:103 (7) - NC ok
  3. 01:00:673 (1) - Quita el NC ok
  4. 01:01:622 (1) - NC ok
  5. 01:13:015 (2) - Ctrl + J se ve mejor imo
ok

[Insane]

  1. OD +1 ? no es un mapa relajado no lo quiero hacer mas dificil
  2. 00:03:521 (7) - Ctrl + J? ok
  3. 00:20:799 (7)(8)(9)(10) - Intenta ubicarlos así.Queda mejor. También podés agregar un NC acá. quiero conservar mi pattern

    I hope my mod helps. Duca <3 Good luck with this song. I leave a star. Bye~

KiyoshiX101

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello from my Modding Queue~

[General]
There is inconsistency in combo colors in this mapset~ oh that is cuz taiko just got 2 colours that is not a problem


[Hard]
  1. 00:29:154 (3) - I think this should come few grids to left. Something like this: 00:40:166 (7,1) ok
  2. 00:47:951 (4) - I personally dislike that slider~ You could work it much more in my opinion. i always make 1 like they on my maps T-T
  3. 01:25:736 (1,2,3,4) - Those 4 are not symmetrical. fixed
  4. 01:27:445 (1) - That slider is love(skip this, is not part of the mod lol)
thanks

[Insane]
  1. 00:33:711 (11,12) - Not symmetrical fixed
  2. 00:55:166 (4) - The second slider point(the one that makes the curve) move it 3 or 4 grids up for a more cute curve~
ok

Nothing else, the rest of the map is very nice~ Good job!

Zazalng

Zazalng wrote:


Hi sir I from my modding queues

[General]
Inconsistency in combo colours - Not same Combo Colors taiko got just 2 combo thats why is not necesary to be the same

[Hard]
00:03:521 Look not good try this ^^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651372 | Combo 6 Outlayer (Reverse Point) ok
00:08:647 - 00:09:217 Try This http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651376 | Combo 6 Outlayer is ok
00:51:939 - 00:53:078 Try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651384 | Combo 6 Outlayer (Start Point) 6 Again ? ^
00:55:736 - 00:56:875 Combo 1 & 3 outlayer Try This ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651392^

Nothing to see!

[Insane]
00:02:951 Holy ..... Unrankable Slider Fix it NOW! why?
01:19:660 Again ?? ^ why?

WOW it a big problem Why Slider are .... i dont see a problem

But Thanks for use my Modding Queues I will star for Normal Diff

thanks to all for mods updated
Hinsvar

Zeroarg wrote:

[Hinsvar's Easy]

  1. 00:04:470 (1) - NC Did you mean (4)? Nope. I think I have explained the reason before...
  2. 00:34:850 (1) - Stack this note with 00:32:571 (2) - Nope. I'm strongly against stacking on Easy diffs, since I think stacks are difficulty for new players.
  3. 00:32:571 (2) - Stack this note with 00:32:951 (3) - ^
    ^ If you followed my suggestion, fix spacing of 00:36:369 (3)(4) -
  4. 00:54:217 (3) - Ctrl + H for a better flow. It's following the curve of 00:52:698 (1).
  5. 00:55:546 (5) - ^ I did this, though. Done.
  6. 01:16:812 (4) - Ctrl + J for a better flow. ^
  7. 01:19:660 (3)(1)(2)(3)(4) - Try this pattern. Helps flow and looks better imo




    If you like it, here is the code:

    280,156,79660,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    340,68,80040,6,0,P|376:160|352:260,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,320,81179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    204,252,81559,2,0,P|132:236|68:272,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,320,83078,1,6,0:0:0:0:
    Nope. It looks really weird, if I have to be honest, and I think the pattern I have now is better.
[Xinely's Normal]

  1. 00:51:559 (4) - Flip this sliders curve for a better flow like this:
    Done.
  2. 01:03:141 (3)(4)(5) - These sliders looks unpleasent.Try this for a better flow. I can see what pattern she's trying to make, and while the blanket-ish pattern (4,5) made looks good, I still think Xinely's pattern is better overall, so I won't change that. We'll see later if there's anyone who could make a better pattern than this, though...


    The code if you like it:
    368,52,63141,2,0,P|412:96|432:152,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    320,140,63901,2,0,P|304:200|328:260,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    236,320,64660,2,0,P|208:244|208:156,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 01:03:141 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651349 .-.? Made something similar.
  2. 01:32:002 (1,2) - I think the Slider (2) should be moved a grid to left for the symmetry ;) ...They're already symmetrical.
    Other than that, everything is nice in Easy *-* \:D/
[Normal]
  1. Nothing wrong here, very enjoyable~ :) (:

Zazalng wrote:

[Hinsvar's Easy]
00:13:204 - 00:15:863 Move Note Like this it look good http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651359 | Combo 2 Outlayer It's to follow 00:13:204 (1)'s curve...
00:34:850 Move slider to x:188 y:100 Done.
00:35:989 Move Note to x:280 y:136 ^
00:47:571 - 00:51:179 fix it like this it good & correct beat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651364 | Incorrect at combo 3 Umm, it follows the vocal, so nope, I think it's okay.

[Xinely's Normal]
Impassive Nothing to see i will star for this Xinely so pro \o\ *runs*
Thanks for the mods, people \o\

Hinsvar's Easy: http://puu.sh/2gIha
Xinely's Normal: http://puu.sh/2gIhZ

*In case people is confused for why am I changing stuff on Xinely's diff, I'll say it once again: I'm taking control over her diff since she can't go online until April 18th (well, she might occasionally try to go online at times, but still, she won't be here for most of the time...) (:
[NSER]-Zazalng
:)

natsu wrote:


Hi sir I from my modding queues

[General]
Inconsistency in combo colours - Not same Combo Colors taiko got just 2 combo thats why is not necesary to be the same

[Insane]
00:02:951 Holy ..... Unrankable Slider Fix it NOW! why?
01:19:660 Again ?? ^ why?

WOW it a big problem Why Slider are .... i dont see a problem

But Thanks for use my Modding Queues I will star for Normal Diff
Ok Let's See | Recheck no Kuds
00:02:951 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651827 The slider is Long and track is outlayer it unrankable.
01:19:660 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651831 ^

Ok i will Ex. for fix it
00:02:951 You can fix like this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651832
44,248,2951,2,0,B|80:212|80:212|84:208|80:204|80:204|40:180|40:180|40:172|40:172|40:172|40:132|40:132|56:84,1,200
01:19:660 You can fix like this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651835
44,124,79660,2,0,B|24:148|24:156|24:156|24:164|48:168|48:176|48:176|48:184|24:192|24:200|24:200|24:208|48:212|48:220|48:220|48:228|24:232|24:240|24:240|24:248|44:264,1,200
120,328,80230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Natsu
SPOILER

Zazalng wrote:

:)

natsu wrote:


Hi sir I from my modding queues

[General]
Inconsistency in combo colours - Not same Combo Colors taiko got just 2 combo thats why is not necesary to be the same

[Insane]
00:02:951 Holy ..... Unrankable Slider Fix it NOW! why?
01:19:660 Again ?? ^ why?

WOW it a big problem Why Slider are .... i dont see a problem

But Thanks for use my Modding Queues I will star for Normal Diff
Ok Let's See | Recheck no Kuds
00:02:951 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651827 The slider is Long and track is outlayer it unrankable.
01:19:660 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651831 ^

Ok i will Ex. for fix it
00:02:951 You can fix like this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651832
44,248,2951,2,0,B|80:212|80:212|84:208|80:204|80:204|40:180|40:180|40:172|40:172|40:172|40:132|40:132|56:84,1,200
01:19:660 You can fix like this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651835
44,124,79660,2,0,B|24:148|24:156|24:156|24:164|48:168|48:176|48:176|48:184|24:192|24:200|24:200|24:208|48:212|48:220|48:220|48:228|24:232|24:240|24:240|24:248|44:264,1,200
120,328,80230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
since is ok if they got a little away from grid imo lets see next mod but thanks :3
captin1
Heeey!
Ingame req :D

Hinsvar's Easy

Can't think of anything, nice diff!

Xinely's Normal

00:11:685 (3) - move to the right so it's not super straight line
01:03:901 (4,5) - rotate (4) counter-clockwise about 10ish degrees, then adjust (5) for distance
01:34:850 (5,1) - blanket? it's not quite there

Hard

I think you should decrease the volume on the finishes in the verse just a bit, so that they don't stick out as much
00:25:356 (1) - lower this finish
00:28:394 (1) - ^
00:31:432 (1) - ^
00:34:470 (1) - places like this finish is fine at its current volume cause it feels much more like the end of one phrase and the start of a new one
00:37:508 (1) - lower this finish
00:40:546 (1) - ^
00:43:584 (2) - ^
00:49:660 (1) - ^
01:07:888 (6) - make this repeat one less time and then add a note at 01:08:458 (7)
01:13:774 (4) - finish for consistency
01:15:293 (5) - ^
01:23:078 (1) - add a note w/ finish here and start spinner at 01:23:268 (1)
01:35:799 (4) - up to x:224 y:36 to smooth out curve a bit, then adjust (5) for spacing

Insane

00:12:255 (7,1) - nazi overlap
00:25:166 (9,11,1) - super nazi, (9) at x:224y:360, (11) at x:180 y:204, and (1) at x:96 y:152. The pattern of five looked a bit off, and then adjusted (1) for spacing
00:42:825 (1) - don't think this whistle fits
00:53:837 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - woah pretty :3
01:35:230 (1,2,3,4) - I think this would look better with a smoother curve. I see the pattern with (5,6), but it doesn't really come across imo
Topic Starter
Natsu
captin1

captin1 wrote:

Heeey! hi
Ingame req :D

Hard

I think you should decrease the volume on the finishes in the verse just a bit, so that they don't stick out as much
00:25:356 (1) - lower this finish
00:28:394 (1) - ^
00:31:432 (1) - ^
00:34:470 (1) - places like this finish is fine at its current volume cause it feels much more like the end of one phrase and the start of a new one
00:37:508 (1) - lower this finish
00:40:546 (1) - ^
00:43:584 (2) - ^
00:49:660 (1) - ^
01:07:888 (6) - make this repeat one less time and then add a note at 01:08:458 (7) done
01:13:774 (4) - finish for consistency
01:15:293 (5) - ^
01:23:078 (1) - add a note w/ finish here and start spinner at 01:23:268 (1) done added on insane too
01:35:799 (4) - up to x:224 y:36 to smooth out curve a bit, then adjust (5) for spacing mmm did that pattern in my way wanna keep it

Insane

00:12:255 (7,1) - nazi overlap fixed
00:25:166 (9,11,1) - super nazi, (9) at x:224y:360, (11) at x:180 y:204, and (1) at x:96 y:152. The pattern of five looked a bit off, and then adjusted (1) for spacing yup
00:42:825 (1) - don't think this whistle fits it fit
00:53:837 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - woah pretty :3 :D
01:35:230 (1,2,3,4) - I think this would look better with a smoother curve. I see the pattern with (5,6), but it doesn't really come across imo
is on purpose
Hinsvar

captin1 wrote:

Hinsvar's Easy

Can't think of anything, nice diff! (:

Xinely's Normal

00:11:685 (3) - move to the right so it's not super straight line I'm sure enough there's nothing wrong with that...
01:03:901 (4,5) - rotate (4) counter-clockwise about 10ish degrees, then adjust (5) for distance Err, why should this be done...?
01:34:850 (5,1) - blanket? it's not quite there
Xinely's Normal: http://puu.sh/2hseQ

Thanks for modding.
Piscis
Hi~

[Insane]
00:20:230 (6) - Remove clap at the start and end of this slider.
00:20:989 (8,9,10) - I think not fit clap, remove clap and add finish.
00:26:875 - Missing whistle at the end of this slider.
00:29:913 (7) - Missing whistle at the start of this slider.
00:32:951 (6) - Add whistle?
00:34:090 (12) - I want the clap. add whistle at the start of this slider?
00:35:989 (6) - Missing whistle at the start of this slider.
00:37:128 (9) - Missing clap at the start of this slider.
00:42:065 (6) - Add whistle.
01:02:571 (11) - Missing whistle at the start of this slider.
01:04:660 (1) - Missing whistle at the end of this slider.
01:06:369 (1) - Missing whistle at the start of this slider.
01:07:888 (1) - Add whistle.
01:14:344 (2,3,4,5,6) - suggestion~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/653541
01:22:983 (1) - Start 01:23:078 , end 01:25:356 .
01:34:280 (6) - Add finish at the end of this slider. Follow the flow~

Nice map! good lock~
Topic Starter
Natsu
Piscis

Piscis wrote:

Hi~

[Insane]
00:20:230 (6) - Remove clap at the start and end of this slider. yeah
00:20:989 (8,9,10) - I think not fit clap, remove clap and add finish. im using clap2 there it fit imo
00:26:875 - Missing whistle at the end of this slider. ok
00:29:913 (7) - Missing whistle at the start of this slider.ok
00:32:951 (6) - Add whistle?ok
00:34:090 (12) - I want the clap. add whistle at the start of this slider?ok
00:35:989 (6) - Missing whistle at the start of this slider.ok
00:37:128 (9) - Missing clap at the start of this slider.ok
00:42:065 (6) - Add whistle.ok
01:02:571 (11) - Missing whistle at the start of this slider.k
01:04:660 (1) - Missing whistle at the end of this slider.k
01:06:369 (1) - Missing whistle at the start of this slider.k
01:07:888 (1) - Add whistle.k
01:14:344 (2,3,4,5,6) - suggestion~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/653541 i preffer it on my way
01:22:983 (1) - Start 01:23:078 , end 01:25:356 . i did that on purpose
01:34:280 (6) - Add finish at the end of this slider. Follow the flow~ mmm no cuz finish fit better in the next one

Nice map! good lock~
thanks :3
ReySHeL
fix some
update plz >w<

Muzu~ http://puu.sh/2hUcq
Oni~ http://puu.sh/2hUcD
Topic Starter
Natsu

ReySHeL wrote:

fix some
update plz >w<

Muzu~ http://puu.sh/2hUcq
Oni~ http://puu.sh/2hUcD

ok ok done o3o
Verlaren
Hi~ From Aincrad modding queue~


Hinsvar's Easy:
00:04:470(4) - new combo.

Hinely's normal:
Pretty good~

Hard:
00:34:470(1) - move NC to 00:34:850(2)
00:34:375 - add note
00:34:375(5,6) - move to x:200 y:316(on the end of the previous slider). In my opinion it will be much better.

Insane:
01:10:166(5) - Why not do as well as on 01:09:787(2,3,4)?


P.S. BG & map is very beauty.
and sorry for a very small mod.
Topic Starter
Natsu
Verlaren

Verlaren wrote:

Hi~ From Aincrad modding queue~ hi

Hard:
00:34:470(1) - move NC to 00:34:850(2) mmm no because new combo is for advice of next jump
00:34:375 - add note i think about it
00:34:375(5,6) - move to x:200 y:316(on the end of the previous slider). In my opinion it will be much better. i move the last one a little

Insane:
01:10:166(5) - Why not do as well as on 01:09:787(2,3,4)? for variability


P.S. BG & map is very beauty. thanks
and sorry for a very small mod.
is ok thanks alot :3
MineC24
Modding queue~~

(Sorry. I'm late :( )

Hinsvar's Easy
00:47:951 (3) - change slider by note (and whistle sound)

Xinely's Normal
HP Drain - 1 ..?

00:43:204 (5) - Distance

ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii
00:26:685 (5) - k
01:13:204 (2) - remove this
01:22:888 (3,1) - remove this and spin start at 01:22:888
01:27:445 (1,1) - ^ (same)

ReySHeL's Taiko Oni
00:14:534 (2) - add d
00:21:559 (5) - remove this
01:22:888 (1,1) - (Muzukashii)
01:27:445 (1,1) - ^
01:29:913 (2) - add d

Hard
00:01:053 (1) - remove Finish sound
00:04:090 (1) - ^
01:32:192 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2iy1x <- blanket

Insane
HP Drain - 1..?

00:01:053 (1) - remove Finish sound
00:04:090 (1) - ^
00:20:799 (1) - NC..?

GL :)
Topic Starter
Natsu

MineC24 wrote:

Modding queue~~

(Sorry. I'm late :( ) is ok :3

Hard
00:01:053 (1) - remove Finish sound no cuz i want start song with finish
00:04:090 (1) - ^ done here added a whistle
01:32:192 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2iy1x <- blanket
fixed

Insane
HP Drain - 1..? nah is ok

00:01:053 (1) - remove Finish sound same reason as hard
00:04:090 (1) - ^ done added a whistle
00:20:799 (1) - NC..? yup added in hard too

GL :)
thanks alot
HelloSCV
from my queue

[General]

  • - how about cut kiai time 01:10:641 - here and add new kiai time 01:10:736 - here?

    [Easy][list:cc47e]
    nice easy
[Normal]

  • - 00:37:318 (5) - why you added 1/2 slider here? there are no reason to add this imo :3 try delete that and 00:37:508 (5) - add note here?
    - 00:55:736 (1) - add finish on head instread whistle?
    - 01:03:141 (3,4) - clap on end
    - 01:15:293 (4) - NC + 01:16:053 (1) - delete NC
    - 01:21:559 (1) - finish?
    - 01:31:812 (3) - try delete this, same reason with before

[Hard]

  • - 00:44:534 (5) - delete clap on repeat and adding it end
    - 00:51:749 (5) - i think delete this note and 00:50:989 (4) - add 1 repeat here is better for rhythm
    - 01:12:255 (5) - NC + 01:12:825 (1) - delete NC
    - 01:13:774 (4,5,1) - this tripet is feels weird delete 01:13:774 (4,5) - these and 01:13:963 (1) - move this slider to 01:13:775 (1) - here
    - 01:14:439 (4) - delete this tripet isn't works well in this rhythm
    - 01:15:483 (1) - NC
    - 01:18:521 (5) - ^
    - 01:19:280 (1) - delete NC
    - 01:21:464 (2) - delete this, you may know why
[Insane]

  • - 00:20:799 (1,2,3,4) - try some other jump pattern? such as Star or Pentagon pattern :U feels little bit boring when playing
    - 00:21:558 (5) - if you added star or pentagon pattern as i said, how about add note with clap?
    - 00:44:534 (9) - delete clap on repeat and adding it end
    - 00:46:622 (1,2) - you can improve this blanket
    - 01:01:622 (7) - finish on start
    - 01:13:774 (8) - ^
    - 01:22:508 (6) - ^
    - 01:34:280 (6) - ^
    - 01:36:179 (5,6) - try to add jump here? feels nice
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Natsu

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

[General]

  • - how about cut kiai time 01:10:641 - here and add new kiai time 01:10:736 - here? yup feel good



    [Hard][list:7801e]
    - 00:44:534 (5) - delete clap on repeat and adding it end ok
    - 00:51:749 (5) - i think delete this note and 00:50:989 (4) - add 1 repeat here is better for rhythm i keep it for now
    - 01:12:255 (5) - NC + 01:12:825 (1) - delete NC ok
    - 01:13:774 (4,5,1) - this tripet is feels weird delete 01:13:774 (4,5) - these and 01:13:963 (1) - move this slider to 01:13:775 (1) - heredid something symilar
    - 01:14:439 (4) - delete this tripet isn't works well in this rhythm yup
    - 01:15:483 (1) - NC
    - 01:18:521 (5) - ^
    - 01:19:280 (1) - delete NC done combos
    - 01:21:464 (2) - delete this, you may know why ok e_e xD
[Insane]

  • - 00:20:799 (1,2,3,4) - try some other jump pattern? such as Star or Pentagon pattern :U feels little bit boring when playing yup i did another thing here
    - 00:21:558 (5) - if you added star or pentagon pattern as i said, how about add note with clap? done
    - 00:44:534 (9) - delete clap on repeat and adding it end k
    - 00:46:622 (1,2) - you can improve this blanket i like it T-T i gonna keep it :3
    - 01:01:622 (7) - finish on start
    - 01:13:774 (8) - ^
    - 01:22:508 (6) - ^
    - 01:34:280 (6) - ^ done finish ^
    - 01:36:179 (5,6) - try to add jump here? feels nice yeah
Good luck~
thanks nice mod
ReySHeL

MineC24 wrote:

Modding queue~~

(Sorry. I'm late :( )

ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii
00:26:685 (5) - k
01:13:204 (2) - remove this
01:22:888 (3,1) - remove this and spin start at 01:22:888
01:27:445 (1,1) - ^ (same)

ReySHeL's Taiko Oni
00:14:534 (2) - add d
00:21:559 (5) - remove this
01:22:888 (1,1) - (Muzukashii)
01:27:445 (1,1) - ^
01:29:913 (2) - add d

GL :)
fix some >w<
thanks for mod :)

Muzu~ http://puu.sh/2j3vo
Oni~ http://puu.sh/2j3vN
Xinely
fix some
thanks all~
given to natsu in game
Totoro
Hello~~ M4M from your queue

General

Nice Song, Nice Map, Love It. Star~~

Hinsvar's Easy

AR-1

00:04:470 (4) - NC

00:16:242 (1) - 2nd slider dot move it to x:184 y:268

01:00:103 (3) - NC

01:08:268 (5) - NC

01:08:647 (1) - Remove NC

01:17:382 (1) - NC

01:17:761 (2) - Remove NC

Xinely's Normal

00:05:609 (3) - NC

00:35:230 (2,3,4) - make it to a perfect triangle

00:37:888 (1) - 2nd dot move it to x:376 y:260

00:43:584 (1) - 2nd dot move it to x:144 y:252

00:50:040 (2,3,4) - perfect triangle

00:52:698 (1) - move 2nd dot to x:452 y:80

00:55:736 (1) - 2nd dot 1 grid left

01:00:103 (4) - NC

Hard

00:07:698 (2,3,4,5) - make it into a square

00:08:647 (5) - 2nd dot 1 grid down and left

00:11:496 (5) - better blanket by moving the first dot 1 grid down and right

00:13:204 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle

00:20:040 (3,4,1) - ^

00:23:837 (6) - 1st dot 1 grid down

01:04:470 (1) - Remove NC

01:05:039 (2) - NC

01:20:230 (5,6,7) - perfect triangle

01:32:192 (1,2) - make a better blanket

01:34:850 (7) - make this slider straight

Insane

00:19:470 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - not stacked properly

00:29:723 (6,7) - better blanket please

00:37:508 (1) - remove NC

00:37:888 (2) - NC

00:44:534 (9,1,2) - perfect triangle

00:55:166 (4) - 2nd dot 2 grid up

01:00:103 (7) - NC

01:00:673 (1) - remove NC

01:05:039 (2,3,4,5) - perfect square

01:31:242 (6,3) - might as well stack these two

01:32:761 (2) - move it to x:280 y:36

01:36:179 (5,6) - useless jump in my opinion
Topic Starter
Natsu
-iCo-

-iCo- wrote:

Hello~~ M4M from your queue

General

Nice Song, Nice Map, Love It. Star~~ Thanks


Hard

00:07:698 (2,3,4,5) - make it into a square since i dont like squares

00:08:647 (5) - 2nd dot 1 grid down and left is ok

00:11:496 (5) - better blanket by moving the first dot 1 grid down and right ^

00:13:204 (1,2,3) - perfect triangle done

00:20:040 (3,4,1) - ^ ^

00:23:837 (6) - 1st dot 1 grid down ^

01:04:470 (1) - Remove NCno

01:05:039 (2) - NC ^

01:20:230 (5,6,7) - perfect triangle ok

01:32:192 (1,2) - make a better blanket is perfect for me

01:34:850 (7) - make this slider straight look better

Insane

00:19:470 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - not stacked properly fixed

00:29:723 (6,7) - better blanket please is perfet for me

00:37:508 (1) - remove NC ok

00:37:888 (2) - NC ok

00:44:534 (9,1,2) - perfect triangle done

00:55:166 (4) - 2nd dot 2 grid up fixed in other way

01:00:103 (7) - NC ok

01:00:673 (1) - remove NC no

01:05:039 (2,3,4,5) - perfect square i dont like squares :c

01:31:242 (6,3) - might as well stack these two is ok for me

01:32:761 (2) - move it to x:280 y:36 done

01:36:179 (5,6) - useless jump in my opinion
thanks for mod
[Luanny]
\o3o/

[Insane]
-Overall you should try to encircle notes better.
-I didn't like the fact it is mostly 1/2 nonstop and spacing everywhere. Some jumps are nice and this 1/2 constant rhythm is kinda boring imo.
00:29:913 (7) - this blanket is not perfect ;_;
00:38:837 (6) - this shape seems really wrong
00:47:951 (4) - quite ugly, try to make sexy curves instead of this M
01:01:622 (8) - I don't think this kind of slider fits with your map
I don't have much to say here.

[Hard]
-Really nice diff.
00:47:951 (4) - again lol
00:54:027 (4) - a little nazi but this one is not perfect
01:15:863 (2,3) - this is kinda unexpected and weird to read
01:32:761 (2) - well, not perfect again
You should encircle the notes better here too

[Normal]
00:34:470 (1,2) - this is weird to read o.o

[Easy]
Nothing o3o

[Oni]

hi ReyShel :3
Just one thing: the map is nice but the first half id kinda boring because your rhythm is mostly 3 or 5 notes 1/2. Changing it is nice sometimes, plus you should use some more kats. You did nice on kiai.

[Muzukashii]
Well, the parts when you follow vocals are way better. You only follow the drums and background music in the beginning. Why not following vocals again? This 5 and 3 notes patterns doesn't fit well.
I liked this diff more than the oni because the rhythm is way better.

Good luck :3
crap mod.
Topic Starter
Natsu

[Luanny] wrote:

\o3o/

[Insane]
-Overall you should try to encircle notes better. yup
-I didn't like the fact it is mostly 1/2 nonstop and spacing everywhere. Some jumps are nice and this 1/2 constant rhythm is kinda boring imo. i know i dont make jumps since i wanna make a relax map
00:29:913 (7) - this blanket is not perfect ;_; fixed
00:38:837 (6) - this shape seems really wrong yup i thing you right fixed
00:47:951 (4) - quite ugly, try to make sexy curves instead of this M is not a M is other thing ^^ and is sexy T-T i gonna keep it
01:01:622 (8) - I don't think this kind of slider fits with your map you right
I don't have much to say here.

[Hard]
-Really nice diff. thanks
00:47:951 (4) - again lol same as insane
00:54:027 (4) - a little nazi but this one is not perfect fixed
01:15:863 (2,3) - this is kinda unexpected and weird to read yup your right i delete it and i add a repeat in previous slider
01:32:761 (2) - well, not perfect again fixed
You should encircle the notes better here too kk

Good luck :3
crap mod.
thanks for mod help alot :)
ReySHeL

[Luanny] wrote:

\o3o/

[Oni]

hi ReyShel :3
Just one thing: the map is nice but the first half id kinda boring because your rhythm is mostly 3 or 5 notes 1/2. Changing it is nice sometimes, plus you should use some more kats. You did nice on kiai.

[Muzukashii]
Well, the parts when you follow vocals are way better. You only follow the drums and background music in the beginning. Why not following vocals again? This 5 and 3 notes patterns doesn't fit well.
I liked this diff more than the oni because the rhythm is way better.

Good luck :3
crap mod.
thanks Luanny >w<
Hinsvar

Verlaren wrote:

Hinsvar's Easy:
00:04:470(4) - new combo. Nope; I want to keep the combo pattern consistent with the symmetrical pattern.

-iCo- wrote:

Hinsvar's Easy

AR-1 ...Why would I? It's too low, IMO.

00:04:470 (4) - NC No. See above.

00:16:242 (1) - 2nd slider dot move it to x:184 y:268 ...Can't really see any point in that, but done anyway.

01:00:103 (3) - NC Why?

01:08:268 (5) - NC Nope; the combo pattern follows the vocal.

01:08:647 (1) - Remove NC ^

01:17:382 (1) - NC ^

01:17:761 (2) - Remove NC ^
Thanks for modding everyone (including Luanny and SCV); I appreciate you guys :D

http://puu.sh/2looC
Topic Starter
Natsu
Updated
BrokenArrow
Mod from my Queue

[General]

The timing is off, I found a better one for you.
Offset: 1.074ms (+21 on current)
BPM: 158,01 (+0,01 on current)

Don't forget to resnap all notes and timing sections when you apply it.

[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]

Remove the "Taiko" from the difficulty's name since it's no longer neccessary.
Decrease the OD by 1?

I have nothing to say towards your mapping style here, the patterns and hitsounds are fine for a Muzukashii diff and I can't find anything wrong here.

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]

Same as before, remove the "Taiko" from the difficulty's name.

00:22:318 - 00:46:622 - This part seems to be undermapped, you might consider adding some tripples here and there to make it a bit more challenging for players. Of course they should be mapped on fitting places and not just randomly over the map, for example:
00:27:065 - ddd here
00:34:280 - kkd here
00:37:318 - dkd here
etc.

00:29:723 (5) - turn this one into a kat


That's it. Some nice taiko difficulties you have there, good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Natsu

BrokenArrow wrote:

Mod from my Queue

[notice][General]

The timing is off, I found a better one for you.
Offset: 1.074ms (+21 on current)
BPM: 158,01 (+0,01 on current)
I thing my currenti timing fit better btw i ask to other people for this and waiting to ReySHeL check the mod


That's it. Some nice taiko difficulties you have there, good luck! :)
thanks for mod
ReySHeL

BrokenArrow wrote:

Mod from my Queue

[General]

The timing is off, I found a better one for you.
Offset: 1.074ms (+21 on current)
BPM: 158,01 (+0,01 on current)

Don't forget to resnap all notes and timing sections when you apply it.

[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]

Remove the "Taiko" from the difficulty's name since it's no longer neccessary.
Decrease the OD by 1?

I have nothing to say towards your mapping style here, the patterns and hitsounds are fine for a Muzukashii diff and I can't find anything wrong here.

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]

Same as before, remove the "Taiko" from the difficulty's name.

00:22:318 - 00:46:622 - This part seems to be undermapped, you might consider adding some tripples here and there to make it a bit more challenging for players. Of course they should be mapped on fitting places and not just randomly over the map, for example:
00:27:065 - ddd here
00:34:280 - kkd here
00:37:318 - dkd here
etc.
let me think about it
00:29:723 (5) - turn this one into a kat ok


That's it. Some nice taiko difficulties you have there, good luck! :)
diff name changed~
thanks for mod :)
Muzu~ http://puu.sh/2mmOn
Oni~ http://puu.sh/2mmOz
Lundlerol
Mod from My queue~
Natu's req~

[General]
ReySHeL's Taiko Oni
ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii
Where did the taiko go? lol

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]

01:10:641 - delete.音無し。
01:10:736 (1) -  D
01:17:761 (2,3,4,5,1) -  kkddk

[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:21:749 (3) - K?

以上で終わりです。
modすくない理由はまあお察しください。
Topic Starter
Natsu
thanks for mod waiting to ReySHeL reply :3
yurunneram
Easy
Slider velocity quite high but what the hell
AR -1?
00:53:837 (2,3,4,5) - Rhythm is a bit weird for an easy map
Uh... not much

Normal
00:18:521 (2) - I dun think should overlap 00:17:382 (3) ... Filp vertically?
00:33:521 - Add note?
01:21:559 (4) - Move to 01:21:749 ?
01:31:812 - Add note?

Hard
00:12:445 (7,8) - Uh... how do I explain this? The 8 is hidden behind the 6 (exact same slider copy and paste) There is no change in timing thought this might make it fun to play =w= unless ya think its too hard
01:08:647 (3) - repeat and delete 4? o.o make the rhythm symmetrical
01:27:445 (1) - Sweet, I like this

That's all
You have been modded out by Yurun Neram~
Topic Starter
Natsu

yurunneram wrote:

Hard
00:12:445 (7,8) - Uh... how do I explain this? The 8 is hidden behind the 6 (exact same slider copy and paste) There is no change in timing thought this might make it fun to play =w= unless ya think its too hard mak something like you say
01:08:647 (3) - repeat and delete 4? o.o make the rhythm symmetrical symetrical things are not good for the map make this bored is ok the actual rhythm
01:27:445 (1) - Sweet, I like this im glad you like it :3

That's all
You have been modded out by Yurun Neram~
thanks alot
ampzz
Requested mod as given in my modding queue.

[General]
Offset was slightly off, change it to 1056 which is +3 over what you had.

Note: All of these mods are after the offset correction has been implemented.

[Insane]

Just going to put it out there but I am a real sucker for natural flowing movement in maps so most of the stuff I'll nitpick on will be because it just feel right or that it gets too repetitive (going around in a big circle) quickly.

I would also like for the custom hitsounds to not be used until the kiai, have a play around with the drum sample set to get the necessary flair.
They really work well with soft songs like this.

  • 00:01:056 (1) - Remove finish, doesn't fit.
    00:01:435 (2) - Remove whistle.
    00:01:815 (3) - Place a whistle on the start of this slider and remove the whistle at the end.
    00:02:385 (4,5,6) - Didn't like the abrupt snap you had to do in reaching from (5) to (6). Would suggest to bring the slider (4) to the right more so the 5 can comfortably flow into the next slider.
    00:03:524 (7) - What's this supposed to match? The only thing I can dominantly hear is a single circle on 00:03:714 -.
    00:05:992 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - The nice flow from previous combos is instantly shattered here, I would suggest reworking this pattern area so that it will lead in to your slider appropriately.
    00:09:220 (6,7,8,9) - Not a nice angle to run on, feels too random and out of place.
    00:10:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Would like for this to have a nicer path and for the end to be a flow continuation of the arc you get into from following the slider or even going in the reverse direction would work too just to mix it up.
    00:12:068 (6,10) - I would suggest removing the claps from these and replacing with finishes instead.
    00:13:207 (1) - If you apply above replace the finish on this slider start with a whistle.
    00:13:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - With this I was really getting bored of going in a clockwise direction and some of this combo made no sense to me, why not mix it up a bit?
    The actual rhythm for this you could easily copy from your previous 00:07:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - which made sense.
    00:16:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - What happened here? It's like all the focus on a nicely shaped section just went right out the window, please try and make it more appealing.
    00:19:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Then we come to this cluttered mess. It didn't feel intuitive at all and really awkward to play on mouse as well as tablet. I would suggest remapping this entire section by using a rhythm like this:
    SPOILER
    00:19:283 (1,2,3,4) - Circles.
    00:20:043 (5) - 1/2 slider.
    00:20:423 (6) - 1/2 slider.
    00:20:802 (1,2,3,4) - Circles.
    00:21:562 - Remove this and you'll notice it all follows the music nicely.
    00:22:701 (2,3,4,5,6) - Another place in the map which doesn't look nice, fix it up please.
    00:25:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as above, also remove the (11) as it doesn't fit.
Going to stop here since I think you get the general idea that a lot of your combos require prettying up and for flow to be corrected quite a bit.

After you do apply a bunch of fixes on this difficulty I'll let you hit me up for a recheck and I'll polish up your Insane with suggestive fixes/corrections that could do with implementing. Either pm me in-game, on the forums or just post up for a recheck ticket in my thread.

I'll also mod the other difficulties too.
Topic Starter
Natsu
i gonna fix tomorrow i feel so sick now hope i get better tomorrow T-T
IamKwaN
hi m4m :3

[General]
nothing went wrong :3
But it would be perfect if there is a SB .__.

[Easy]
00:48:521 (4) - 184,336
00:54:217 (3) - straight slider is better imo
00:55:546 (5) - ^
01:00:103 (3) - 216,344
01:01:622 (1) - end 412,116
01:08:647 (1,2,3) - suggestion
01:35:230 (1,2) - suggestion

[Normal]
00:28:964 (2) - 116,96
00:29:534 (3) - increase volume of the clap
00:38:458 (2) - 408,184
00:41:496 (2) - 444,192 blanket .__.
00:45:483 (2) - 192,168 in the middle
00:47:002 (1,2,3) - how about an increasing volume of whistle?
00:52:698 (1) - middle node: 452,80 end node: 424,276
01:01:242 (6) - 280,44 following the flow of the previous slider
01:04:660 (5) - suggestion
01:06:369 (2) - 200,88 (straight line)
01:06:749 (3) - 296,140 (symmetry)
01:07:128 (4) - 392,196 (straight line)
01:11:306 (2) - 344,208
01:12:255 (4,1) - symmetry?
01:14:344 (2) - 356,192

[Hard]
01:32:761 (2) - blanket?

[Insane]
00:25:356 (1) - whistle is better imo
00:29:913 (7) - this blanket is not perfect enough .__.
01:00:673 (2,3,4,5,6,8) - maybe these guys could be arranged in a symmetrical form :D
01:35:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about making a jump like this lol? sounds exciting in insane :3

Overall, good songs, good mapsets.
Good luck and star :3
Topic Starter
Natsu

ampzz wrote:

Requested mod as given in my modding queue.

[General]
Offset was slightly off, change it to 1056 which is +3 over what you had.
since i thing mine is more accuracy but i wanna heart more opinion keeped for now

Note: All of these mods are after the offset correction has been implemented.

[Insane]

Just going to put it out there but I am a real sucker for natural flowing movement in maps so most of the stuff I'll nitpick on will be because it just feel right or that it gets too repetitive (going around in a big circle) quickly.

I would also like for the custom hitsounds to not be used until the kiai, have a play around with the drum sample set to get the necessary flair.
They really work well with soft songs like this.

  • 00:01:056 (1) - Remove finish, doesn't fit.
    00:01:435 (2) - Remove whistle.
    00:01:815 (3) - Place a whistle on the start of this slider and remove the whistle at the end.
    00:02:385 (4,5,6) - Didn't like the abrupt snap you had to do in reaching from (5) to (6). Would suggest to bring the slider (4) to the right more so the 5 can comfortably flow into the next slider. i think this have good flow i keep it too
    00:03:524 (7) - What's this supposed to match? The only thing I can dominantly hear is a single circle on 00:03:714 -.
    00:05:992 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - The nice flow from previous combos is instantly shattered here, I would suggest reworking this pattern area so that it will lead in to your slider appropriately.
    00:09:220 (6,7,8,9) - Not a nice angle to run on, feels too random and out of place.
    00:10:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Would like for this to have a nicer path and for the end to be a flow continuation of the arc you get into from following the slider or even going in the reverse direction would work too just to mix it up.
    00:12:068 (6,10) - I would suggest removing the claps from these and replacing with finishes instead. keeped for consistency with the hitsounds in all the map
    00:13:207 (1) - If you apply above replace the finish on this slider start with a whistle. ^
    00:13:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - With this I was really getting bored of going in a clockwise direction and some of this combo made no sense to me, why not mix it up a bit?
    The actual rhythm for this you could easily copy from your previous 00:07:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - which made sense.
    00:16:245 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - What happened here? It's like all the focus on a nicely shaped section just went right out the window, please try and make it more appealing. dint understand what you mean
    00:19:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Then we come to this cluttered mess. It didn't feel intuitive at all and really awkward to play on mouse as well as tablet. I would suggest remapping this entire section by using a rhythm like this:
    SPOILER
    00:19:283 (1,2,3,4) - Circles.
    00:20:043 (5) - 1/2 slider.
    00:20:423 (6) - 1/2 slider.
    00:20:802 (1,2,3,4) - Circles.
    00:21:562 - Remove this and you'll notice it all follows the music nicely.
    is for transition is another modder told me i will remove it
    00:22:701 (2,3,4,5,6) - Another place in the map which doesn't look nice, fix it up please.
    00:25:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as above, also remove the (11) as it doesn't fit.
Going to stop here since I think you get the general idea that a lot of your combos require prettying up and for flow to be corrected quite a bit.

After you do apply a bunch of fixes on this difficulty I'll let you hit me up for a recheck and I'll polish up your Insane with suggestive fixes/corrections that could do with implementing. Either pm me in-game, on the forums or just post up for a recheck ticket in my thread.

I'll also mod the other difficulties too.
thanks for mod i just reply the things i no change the other are done
Topic Starter
Natsu

IamKwaN wrote:

hi m4m :3

[General]
nothing went wrong :3 :D
But it would be perfect if there is a SB .__. i know im getting the video

[Hard]
01:32:761 (2) - blanket?

[Insane]
00:25:356 (1) - whistle is better imo i thing finish fit better this
00:29:913 (7) - this blanket is not perfect enough .__.
01:00:673 (2,3,4,5,6,8) - maybe these guys could be arranged in a symmetrical form :D
01:35:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about making a jump like this lol? sounds exciting in insane :3 i wanna keep this map a relax one

Overall, good songs, good mapsets.
Good luck and star :3
thanks for mod and start i will do your tonight (i just response the things i no fix others are done
Hinsvar

yurunneram wrote:

Easy
Slider velocity quite high but what the hell ...Okay, I'll admit this is kinda high, but oh well.
AR -1? This is to support the high SV...
00:53:837 (2,3,4,5) - Rhythm is a bit weird for an easy map What? I don't think so. Seriously, the weirdness of a part's rhythm doesn't correlate to how hard the difficulty is. The song just asks to be mapped that way.
Uh... not much

IamKwaN wrote:

[Easy]
00:48:521 (4) - 184,336 I don't see anything wrong with the current position...
00:54:217 (3) - straight slider is better imo It's to follow 00:52:698 (1)'s curve.
00:55:546 (5) - ^ That one's to follow 00:54:787 (4)'s curve.
01:00:103 (3) - 216,344 Same as 00:48:521 (4).
01:01:622 (1) - end 412,116 Done.
01:08:647 (1,2,3) - suggestion I'm fine with what I have now.
01:35:230 (1,2) - suggestion Nope; (2) is supposed to follow (1)'s curve so the flow will be better there.
Thanks for modding guys (:

http://puu.sh/2qq6t
eveless
Request from eveless's normal queue

[General]
  1. Prewtime is different in your diffs, check Xinely's Normal and ReySHeL's Muzukashii, Both of them are 58574, others are 58584.
[Hinsvar's Easy]
  1. 00:34:850 (1) - How about change it to this? I dont like the tail's position cuz it didnt have a good flow with others. This is not that important but i think you can make it better if you try this. then you can find it will have a good flow from 00:32:951 (3) to 00:36:369 (3)
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/2qxnm
  2. 00:47:951 (3) - How about extend it to 00:48:331 , 1/2 slider is too short for an Easy imo, and it can happily combine the vocal and drum.
  3. 01:16:812 (4,5) - Change it to with ^Same reason, and dont forget add clap in the end.
  4. 01:23:078 (4) - try stacking it under 01:21:179 (2), i mean this It will be neater if you try this.

[Xinely's Normal]
  1. 01:32:002 (1,2,3,4) - Try to use finish instead of whistle, It's hard to click cuz the red line slider, These sliders need more emphasis.

[Hard]
  1. in the beginning part, from 00:01:053 (1) to 00:06:369 (7), the way you put whistle is really random and weird. Since the music itself is quite quiet, how about try to reduce some whistles.
  2. 00:45:673 (3) - when i heard it i thought this whistle is really annoying, move the whistle from end to beginning will be better.
  3. 01:36:179 (5,6) - I don't like this placement much, especially 6. I just don't think it looks or flows very well. How about try this?

[Insane]
  1. "in the beginning part, from 00:01:053 (1) to 00:06:369 (7), the way you put whistle is really random and weird. Since the music itself is quite quiet, how about try to reduce some whistles." For example, I dont think whistle at 00:04:090 (1)'s end is needed.
  2. I found Insane and Hard are are similar at the first sight, Maybe they've some different in detail but similar on the whole. I hope you can notice it next time.
  3. 01:04:280 (4,5,6,7,1) - I dont like these streams cuz they're not make sense.
Gero
GO! Baka e.e!
Topic Starter
Natsu

goodbye wrote:

Request from eveless's normal queue

[General]
  1. Prewtime is different in your diffs, check Xinely's Normal and ReySHeL's Muzukashii, Both of them are 58574, others are 58584.
fixed


[Hard]
  1. in the beginning part, from 00:01:053 (1) to 00:06:369 (7), the way you put whistle is really random and weird. Since the music itself is quite quiet, how about try to reduce some whistles. ok i wll try to remove some
  2. 00:45:673 (3) - when i heard it i thought this whistle is really annoying, move the whistle from end to beginning will be better. removed
  3. 01:36:179 (5,6) - I don't like this placement much, especially 6. I just don't think it looks or flows very well. How about try this?
done

[Insane]
  1. "in the beginning part, from 00:01:053 (1) to 00:06:369 (7), the way you put whistle is really random and weird. Since the music itself is quite quiet, how about try to reduce some whistles." For example, I dont think whistle at 00:04:090 (1)'s end is needed. fixed
  2. I found Insane and Hard are are similar at the first sight, Maybe they've some different in detail but similar on the whole. I hope you can notice it next time. yup a little symilar thats is not a problem imo o3o
  3. 01:04:280 (4,5,6,7,1) - I dont like these streams cuz they're not make sense.
i did something there

thanks for mod
Xinely
fix all (previewtime too) ~
thanks eveless ~
http://puu.sh/2qDS3

Go Go Natsu~
Hinsvar

goodbye wrote:

[Hinsvar's Easy]
  1. 00:34:850 (1) - How about change it to this? I dont like the tail's position cuz it didnt have a good flow with others. This is not that important but i think you can make it better if you try this. then you can find it will have a good flow from 00:32:951 (3) to 00:36:369 (3)
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/2qxnm
    Done.
  2. 00:47:951 (3) - How about extend it to 00:48:331 , 1/2 slider is too short for an Easy imo, and it can happily combine the vocal and drum. Umm, nope; I want to follow the vocal here, and I don't think it's that short.
  3. 01:16:812 (4,5) - Change it to with ^Same reason, and dont forget add clap in the end. But then I would miss the sound at 01:17:002, which is a tall white tick, so I won't do that.
  4. 01:23:078 (4) - try stacking it under 01:21:179 (2), i mean this It will be neater if you try this. Done.
Thanks for modding ;)

http://puu.sh/2rHuw
Topic Starter
Natsu
Updated :D/
ReySHeL

Lundlerol wrote:

Mod from My queue~
Natu's req~

[General]
ReySHeL's Taiko Oni
ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii
Where did the taiko go? lol

[ReySHeL's Taiko Oni]

01:10:641 - delete.音無し。
01:10:736 (1) -  D
01:17:761 (2,3,4,5,1) -  kkddk

fix all
[ReySHeL's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:21:749 (3) - K?

以上で終わりです。
modすくない理由はまあお察しください。
thanks for mod :)

Oni~ http://puu.sh/2tiWG

and diff name changed
Muzu~ http://puu.sh/2tj2w
Topic Starter
Natsu
Im waiting for the video i will update your taiko when he gift it to me :3

I update your part :D
LunarSakuya
hey :idea:

General
Change TitleUnicode to "シアワセ定義 (Short Ver.)"

Hinsvar's Easy
00:01:053 (1) - Whistle. if you hear closely, it has a similar instrument in the bg music as the other whistles
00:20:799 (3) - NC, i think it'll be easier for beginners to notice the little change in rhythm
00:22:698 (1) - Delete clap from tail? was inconsistent with the other claps
00:40:546 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691732
00:47:951 (3) - Try to avoid these 1/2 sliders, the slow SV might make it hard to see, it'd be safe to go along with the 1/1 rhythm imo =v=
01:13:774 (1) - Clap on reverse

Xinely's Normal
00:04:090 (1) - perhaps use 30% volume here ;)
00:22:698 - starting the rhythm here would be more natural
00:27:065 (3) - Delete clap on head?
00:38:458 (2) - I feel like there should be something after this, maybe even one big slider would work http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691951?
01:29:534 - Start rhythm here
01:01:622 (1) - Extend by 1/2 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691957 and delete the note after, the clap will fit then
01:12:255 (4) - you could do something similar ^
01:21:559 (1,2) - Combine these into a slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691961, fits vocal's tone better imo

Hard
00:21:369 (4) - Finish sounds kinda nice
00:28:299 (10) - Delete note, i hear no emphasis in the bg; there are more triplets like this but i'll let you judge them
00:38:458 (3) - Angle like this so (4) blankets it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691968, don't be afraid to break distance snap :lol:
00:58:394 (10) - Delete note, intentional gap with the music~ (if you do, move (9) down a bit to give some space)
01:22:508 (5) - Finish on head, i hear some cymbal in the bg music
01:35:799 (4) - Finish, or on any of the surrounding notes xD feels a bit empty atm

Insane
00:20:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - Great place for star jump if you like, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691982 or something
00:39:407 (7) - Ctrl + G, some nice cursor flow variety
01:04:660 (1) - Finish on tail? similar to 01:17:002 (7) - kinda lol
01:14:439 (3) - Delete note, going here from the previous note felt like it wasn't following anything
01:17:002 (7) - Rotate this so it matches the stream's direction better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691991
01:25:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the repeat of this cycle seems a bit boring imo, love the heart btw <3
01:35:799 (4) - again, some Finishes wouldn't hurt
Hmm I feel like you're relying on Distance snap a lot. Get crazy, it's Insane! xD There were also some "overmap" streams that was probably for the sake of difficulty but try to create some jumps and challenges :P

Very sweet map :D
A couple more mods should do it~! :oops:
Topic Starter
Natsu

LunarSakuya wrote:

hey :idea:

General
Change TitleUnicode to "シアワセ定義 (Short Ver.)"

Hard
00:21:369 (4) - Finish sounds kinda nice
00:28:299 (10) - Delete note, i hear no emphasis in the bg; there are more triplets like this but i'll let you judge them
00:38:458 (3) - Angle like this so (4) blankets it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691968, don't be afraid to break distance snap :lol:
00:58:394 (10) - Delete note, intentional gap with the music~ (if you do, move (9) down a bit to give some space)
01:22:508 (5) - Finish on head, i hear some cymbal in the bg music
01:35:799 (4) - Finish, or on any of the surrounding notes xD feels a bit empty atm
all done here

Insane
00:20:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - Great place for star jump if you like, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691982 or something
00:39:407 (7) - Ctrl + G, some nice cursor flow variety
01:04:660 (1) - Finish on tail? similar to 01:17:002 (7) - kinda lol
01:14:439 (3) - Delete note, going here from the previous note felt like it wasn't following anything
01:17:002 (7) - Rotate this so it matches the stream's direction better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691991
01:25:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the repeat of this cycle seems a bit boring imo, love the heart btw <3 i keep it :3
01:35:799 (4) - again, some Finishes wouldn't hurt
Hmm I feel like you're relying on Distance snap a lot. Get crazy, it's Insane! xD There were also some "overmap" streams that was probably for the sake of difficulty but try to create some jumps and challenges :P hahahha all modders say that :c i just gonna keep this a relax map :3 i thging is ok

all fixed except red things :D

Very sweet map :D Thanks :3
A couple more mods should do it~! :oops:
ok ok i will get 2 or 3 mods more also im getting the video thanks alot for mod

EDIT: XINELY HINSVAR REYSHEL REDOWNLOAD FOR NEW ARTIST UNICODE o3o dont be lazys :D
Hinsvar

LunarSakuya wrote:

Hinsvar's Easy
00:01:053 (1) - Whistle. if you hear closely, it has a similar instrument in the bg music as the other whistles Done.
00:20:799 (3) - NC, i think it'll be easier for beginners to notice the little change in rhythm ^
00:22:698 (1) - Delete clap from tail? was inconsistent with the other claps Added clap on the head instead. Okay, I don't know if it's the right thing to do, but we're talking about hitsound consistency, correct?
00:40:546 (1,2,3) - Try this rhythm instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691732 I'm emphasizing the vocal here, and I think it's better that way, so I'll have to reject this.
00:47:951 (3) - Try to avoid these 1/2 sliders, the slow SV might make it hard to see, it'd be safe to go along with the 1/1 rhythm imo =v= The problem is, if I lengthen this, the slider will go past the tall white tick (the beginning of a new stanza), and it would be weird if I made that spot the path of a slider.
01:13:774 (1) - Clap on reverse lol missed that. Added.

Very sweet map :D
A couple more mods should do it~! :oops:
Thanks for modding~

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Xinely

LunarSakuya wrote:

hey :idea:

Xinely's Normal
00:04:090 (1) - perhaps use 30% volume here ;) done
00:22:698 - starting the rhythm here would be more natural done
00:27:065 (3) - Delete clap on head?done
00:38:458 (2) - I feel like there should be something after this, maybe even one big slider would work http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691951? changed with my own
01:29:534 - Start rhythm here done
01:01:622 (1) - Extend by 1/2 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691957 and delete the note after, the clap will fit then it's broken spacing and i think my own still okay, well, will look 2-3 mods again
01:12:255 (4) - you could do something similar ^ ^
01:21:559 (1,2) - Combine these into a slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/691961, fits vocal's tone better imo done

Very sweet map :D
A couple more mods should do it~! :oops:
Thanks sakuya <3

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108,284,40166,2,0,L|172:308,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,324,40546,6,0,B|304:328|352:228,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,224,41496,2,0,P|412:176|348:164,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,164,42065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,56,42445,2,0,L|256:92,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,60,43204,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,164,43584,6,0,P|144:252|264:264,2,220,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,160,45483,2,0,L|278:83,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,68,46242,2,0,L|448:48,2,55,8|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,87,47002,6,0,P|299:143|275:207,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,47761,2,0,P|364:232|320:264,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,308,48521,2,0,P|370:337|316:342,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,280,49660,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,168,50040,2,0,L|116:52,2,110,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,280,51179,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,220,51559,2,0,P|256:192|288:140,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,56,52318,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,80,52698,6,0,P|476:188|436:296,1,220,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,332,53837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,332,54217,2,0,L|188:212,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,121,54977,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,44,55356,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,120,55736,6,0,P|288:160|400:103,2,220,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,180,57635,2,0,L|136:228,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,304,58204,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,336,58584,6,0,B|356:316|340:284|392:252,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,212,59154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,148,59534,2,0,L|448:104,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,212,60103,2,0,P|360:184|304:196,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,60673,2,0,P|240:152|256:88,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,44,61242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,48,61622,6,0,P|112:52|68:88,2,110,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,44,62761,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,56,63141,2,0,P|432:96|452:160,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,136,63901,2,0,P|356:196|324:268,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,300,64660,2,0,P|248:220|204:132,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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188,72,66369,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,128,66749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,192,67128,2,0,L|440:136,2,82.5,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,67888,6,0,P|312:296|256:332,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,328,68647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,320,69027,2,0,L|60:264,1,55,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,220,69597,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,192,69787,2,0,P|248:128|336:88,1,165,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,80,70736,6,0,B|393:105|409:137|361:157,1,110,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,212,71306,2,0,B|368:264|368:264|324:308,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,304,71875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,304,72255,2,0,P|112:268|108:212,2,110,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,304,73394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,312,73774,6,0,P|416:268|396:204,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,204,74344,2,0,L|296:176,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,74913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,68,75293,6,0,P|128:120|152:180,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,193,76053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,168,76432,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,192,76812,2,0,P|264:112|332:60,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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416,260,78521,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,264,78901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
415,260,79280,2,0,P|419:196|404:144,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,80040,6,0,P|264:64|204:48,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,64,80609,2,0,P|128:112|68:128,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,232,81369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,116,86496,2,0,P|294:149|354:169,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,87445,12,4,89154,0:0:0:0:
284,168,89534,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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116,48,92761,2,0,P|68:60|24:100,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,212,93521,2,0,P|58:247|115:265,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,268,94280,2,0,P|280:249|315:214,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,172,94850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,112,95230,6,0,P|396:72|328:84,1,110,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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mathi747
Hi Natsu
Ingame chat request noob mod ( ._.)
all suggestions

[Insane]

subile un poco (como un 10%) al volumen a las partes que estan en 40% y 45% parecen muy bajos
01:25:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - esta parte se siene un poco rara porque no probas agregando algunos sliders o cambiando un poco la distancia?
00:06:369 (1) - saca el nc?

[Hard]

lo mismo de volumen que la anterior
01:17:571 (2) - este un poco mas para la izquierda no se, se siente mejor xD
00:37:318 (1) - cambia este nc para 00:37:888 (2) - ?

[Normal]

01:04:660 (5) - how about curving this slider to the other side?
01:25:736 - how about adding a 1/4 slider here and delte 01:26:116 (1) - ?
01:36:179 (3) - add reverse?
01:01:622 (1) - change this nc to 01:03:141 (3) - maybe

[Eeasy]

01:26:116 (1,1) - i think those 2 are too close for an easy
nice easy :D

Not really much to say with that much mods and ds in all diffs
Rank please xD
Topic Starter
Natsu

mathi747 wrote:

Hi Natsu
Ingame chat request noob mod ( ._.)
all suggestions

[Insane]

subile un poco (como un 10%) al volumen a las partes que estan en 40% y 45% parecen muy bajos esta bien como esta xq es relax
01:25:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - esta parte se siene un poco rara porque no probas agregando algunos sliders o cambiando un poco la distancia? esta bien para mi creo lo mantendre
00:06:369 (1) - saca el nc? porque :o

[Hard]

lo mismo de volumen que la anterior
01:17:571 (2) - este un poco mas para la izquierda no se, se siente mejor xD ok hecho :p
00:37:318 (1) - cambia este nc para 00:37:888 (2) - ? nah esta bien asi

Not really much to say with that much mods and ds in all diffs
Rank please xD
yes plzxD, thanks for mod

updated hinsvar and xinely diff already
Hinsvar

mathi747 wrote:

[Eeasy]

01:26:116 (1,1) - i think those 2 are too close for an easy It should be fine if it is a spinner after a slider; it wouldn't be good if it's the inversion, though~
nice easy :D Thanks :D

Not really much to say with that much mods and ds in all diffs
Rank please xD
Thanks for modding anyway :D
KokoroStudiox3
irc mod
SPOILER
2013-03-27 20:35 Natsu: [Come join my multiplayer match: "[osump://759/ Inkka_GD's game]"
2013-03-27 21:15 eLtigreXXx: slot
2013-03-27 21:15 eLtigreXXx: cÑ
2013-04-03 20:48 Natsu: [Come join my multiplayer match: "[osump://8752/ Natsu's game]"
2013-04-05 22:37 Natsu: estas libre para un mod?
2013-04-05 22:37 eLtigreXXx: aver el mapa
2013-04-05 22:37 Natsu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/223185 Duca - Shiawase Teigi (Short Ver.) [Insane]]
2013-04-05 22:37 Natsu: es q necesitun mod mas para bubble
2013-04-05 22:37 Natsu: T-T
2013-04-05 22:41 eLtigreXXx: oks irc
2013-04-05 22:41 Natsu: okay :D
2013-04-05 22:41 Natsu: solo insane o hard si queres :D las otras no son mias orz
2013-04-05 22:43 eLtigreXXx: okarina
2013-04-05 22:43 Natsu: okay xD
2013-04-05 22:58 eLtigreXXx: vamos a ver
2013-04-05 22:58 Natsu: ok :D
2013-04-05 22:58 eLtigreXXx: 00:03:521 (6) -
2013-04-05 22:59 eLtigreXXx: aqui ai un peque;o problema
2013-04-05 22:59 Natsu: que paso
2013-04-05 22:59 eLtigreXXx: se sale de la pantalla i pega en la barra de hp
2013-04-05 22:59 eLtigreXXx: xD
2013-04-05 22:59 eLtigreXXx: si te lo mira el bat te ba adesir que lo corrijas
2013-04-05 22:59 Natsu: ok fixed
2013-04-05 23:04 eLtigreXXx: àqui no deveria aver ido un clap por consistencia 00:38:647 -
2013-04-05 23:04 Natsu: added se me habia olvidado
2013-04-05 23:10 eLtigreXXx: bueno en mi opinion todo se mira be mui bien y se juega bien
2013-04-05 23:11 Natsu: okay :o podes postear esto en verdad me ayudaria T-T
2013-04-05 23:13 eLtigreXXx: oks en la insane 01:01:622 (8) -
2013-04-05 23:13 eLtigreXXx: aqui no deveria de aver un nuevo combo ?
2013-04-05 23:13 eLtigreXXx: es n los kiai time pususte puros combos cortitos
2013-04-05 23:13 Natsu: si tenes razon added
2013-04-05 23:16 Natsu: si
2013-04-05 23:16 eLtigreXXx: no pues no miro nada malo
2013-04-05 23:16 Natsu: ok T-T gracias por revisar postealo porfa :o
2013-04-05 23:17 eLtigreXXx: okarinas c>
que buen mapset tienes aqui :) :) :) :)
Topic Starter
Natsu

eLtigreXXx wrote:

irc mod
SPOILER
2013-03-27 20:35 Natsu: [Come join my multiplayer match: "[osump://759/ Inkka_GD's game]"
2013-03-27 21:15 eLtigreXXx: slot
2013-03-27 21:15 eLtigreXXx: cÑ
2013-04-03 20:48 Natsu: [Come join my multiplayer match: "[osump://8752/ Natsu's game]"
2013-04-05 22:37 Natsu: estas libre para un mod?
2013-04-05 22:37 eLtigreXXx: aver el mapa
2013-04-05 22:37 Natsu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/223185 Duca - Shiawase Teigi (Short Ver.) [Insane]]
2013-04-05 22:37 Natsu: es q necesitun mod mas para bubble
2013-04-05 22:37 Natsu: T-T
2013-04-05 22:41 eLtigreXXx: oks irc
2013-04-05 22:41 Natsu: okay :D
2013-04-05 22:41 Natsu: solo insane o hard si queres :D las otras no son mias orz
2013-04-05 22:43 eLtigreXXx: okarina
2013-04-05 22:43 Natsu: okay xD
2013-04-05 22:58 eLtigreXXx: vamos a ver
2013-04-05 22:58 Natsu: ok :D
2013-04-05 22:58 eLtigreXXx: 00:03:521 (6) -
2013-04-05 22:59 eLtigreXXx: aqui ai un peque;o problema
2013-04-05 22:59 Natsu: que paso
2013-04-05 22:59 eLtigreXXx: se sale de la pantalla i pega en la barra de hp
2013-04-05 22:59 eLtigreXXx: xD
2013-04-05 22:59 eLtigreXXx: si te lo mira el bat te ba adesir que lo corrijas
2013-04-05 22:59 Natsu: ok fixed
2013-04-05 23:04 eLtigreXXx: àqui no deveria aver ido un clap por consistencia 00:38:647 -
2013-04-05 23:04 Natsu: added se me habia olvidado
2013-04-05 23:10 eLtigreXXx: bueno en mi opinion todo se mira be mui bien y se juega bien
2013-04-05 23:11 Natsu: okay :o podes postear esto en verdad me ayudaria T-T
2013-04-05 23:13 eLtigreXXx: oks en la insane 01:01:622 (8) -
2013-04-05 23:13 eLtigreXXx: aqui no deveria de aver un nuevo combo ?
2013-04-05 23:13 eLtigreXXx: es n los kiai time pususte puros combos cortitos
2013-04-05 23:13 Natsu: si tenes razon added
2013-04-05 23:16 Natsu: si
2013-04-05 23:16 eLtigreXXx: no pues no miro nada malo
2013-04-05 23:16 Natsu: ok T-T gracias por revisar postealo porfa :o
2013-04-05 23:17 eLtigreXXx: okarinas c>
que buen mapset tienes aqui :) :) :) :)
gracias and thanks for mod o3o
Gero
YO!

IRC MOD BLA BLA BLA XD!
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: muevete a tu mapa
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: XD
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: me da flojera
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: postearlo IRC MOD
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: orele ala hard
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/224830 Duca - Shiawase Teigi (Short Ver.) [Hard]]
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: Empezemos
2013-04-06 01:38 Natsu: ok xD
2013-04-06 01:39 Natsu: okay :D
2013-04-06 01:39 Natsu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/224830 Duca - Shiawase Teigi (Short Ver.) [Hard]]
2013-04-06 01:39 Gero: (*) Nazi* 00:24:407 (7) - Mueve este slider a X:392 Y:120 IMO Queda mejor el blanket con este slider 00:23:837 (6)
2013-04-06 01:39 Natsu: hecho lechugin
2013-04-06 01:40 Gero: (*) Nazi* 00:24:787 (8) - Mueve el segundo punto del slider a X:469 Y:288 Para que forma un blanket con esta nota 00:25:166 (9) -
2013-04-06 01:41 Gero: 00:25:736 (2,6) - creo que fluye mejor si en vez de hacer este slider todo disparejo 00:27:255 (6) le das copiar a este 00:25:736 (2) - y lo colocas en el mismo sitio XD
2013-04-06 01:41 Gero: fluye mejor
2013-04-06 01:41 Gero: recuerda snapear las notas siguientes
2013-04-06 01:41 Natsu: okay xD
2013-04-06 01:42 Gero: 00:38:837 (4) - :V Feo feo .w. mueve el punto rojo a X: 280 Y:185
2013-04-06 01:42 Gero: el segundo punto blanco muevelo a X:243 y:148
2013-04-06 01:42 Gero: y el ultimo punto blanco a X:276 Y:260
2013-04-06 01:42 Gero: 00:43:964 (4) - Same ^
2013-04-06 01:43 Gero: 00:46:622 (1,2) - me me arreglalo mas bonito no e.e
2013-04-06 01:43 Gero: 00:47:951 (4) - slider nada estetico :<
2013-04-06 01:43 Natsu: deja mi culo .-.
2013-04-06 01:43 Natsu: xD
2013-04-06 01:44 Gero: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692279
2013-04-06 01:44 Gero: haz el "culo" mas redondo
2013-04-06 01:44 Gero: XD
2013-04-06 01:44 Gero: asi parece no se que tiene frio XD LEL
2013-04-06 01:45 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692282
2013-04-06 01:45 Natsu: esta redondito :3
2013-04-06 01:45 Gero: 01:14:344 (3,4) - mueve estas notas a X:196 Y:312 para blanket con 01:13:774 (1,2) -
2013-04-06 01:45 Gero: recuerda ponerle la distancia correcta
2013-04-06 01:46 Gero: alas notas siguientes
2013-04-06 01:46 Gero: 01:27:445 (1) - que feo corazon X'D sin ofender haslo mas stetico pls
2013-04-06 01:46 Gero: 01:35:799 (4,5) - porque no sustituyes estos circles
2013-04-06 01:46 Gero: por un slider
2013-04-06 01:46 Natsu: omg :c me rompes el corazon con eso
2013-04-06 01:46 Gero: para darle mas fluyes :3
2013-04-06 01:47 Gero: XDD!
2013-04-06 01:47 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/223185 Duca - Shiawase Teigi (Short Ver.) [Insane]]
2013-04-06 01:47 Natsu: nah lo ultimo sliders = free acc q les den xD
2013-04-06 01:48 Gero: (*) 00:20:799 (1) - Este circle no esta perfectamente apilado e.e muevelo a X: 317 Y:93
2013-04-06 01:48 Gero: 00:21:179 (3) - IGUAL PERO ESTE MUEVELO A X:418 Y:84
2013-04-06 01:49 Gero: 00:21:749 (6) - MEH MEH MEH esto es un salto muy innesperado pls ponlo mas cerca e.e
2013-04-06 01:49 Natsu: el mat me dijo q lo hiciera asi xD
2013-04-06 01:49 Natsu: el salto T-T
2013-04-06 01:49 Gero: 00:28:204 (10) - por estetica mueve este circle a X: 264 Y:208
2013-04-06 01:49 Gero: o.o pues dejalo asi
2013-04-06 01:49 Gero: pero algun BAT te dira algo de eso
2013-04-06 01:50 Natsu: ahi lo cambiare xD
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: 00:46:622 (1,2,4) - que afan tuyo de hacer los sliders feos e.e
2013-04-06 01:50 Natsu: es que no se el me dijo a big jum fit alor here
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: componlos y aslos mas bonitos
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: :I
2013-04-06 01:50 Natsu: son cucharas
2013-04-06 01:50 Natsu: :D
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: tu ano son cucharachas
2013-04-06 01:50 Natsu: q eso lol
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: idiota
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: .w.
2013-04-06 01:51 Natsu: hddjadhadfa
2013-04-06 01:51 Gero: 01:27:445 (1) - que bonito bollo XD ah perdon
2013-04-06 01:51 Gero: es un corazon
2013-04-06 01:51 Natsu: lol q gay se nota q es mi corazon lleno de sentimientos T-T
2013-04-06 01:51 Natsu: insensible lechugin xd
2013-04-06 01:52 Gero: 01:29:534 (1) - meh porque no haces algo asi http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692293
2013-04-06 01:52 Gero: dale amor a tu corazon XD
2013-04-06 01:52 Gero: mentira dale blanket y formas
2013-04-06 01:52 Gero: con ese slider
2013-04-06 01:52 Natsu: hahahaah bueno e_E
2013-04-06 01:53 Natsu: le pondre un arete mejor :3
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: ya eso es todo
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: e.e
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: iva a modear las demas pero que flojera
2013-04-06 01:53 Natsu: postealo pues lechugin con brocoly hare ensalada
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: XD
2013-04-06 01:53 Natsu: lol
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: eres un desmadre
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: XD
2013-04-06 01:53 Natsu: soy un loquillo
2013-04-06 01:54 Gero: una loquisha
2013-04-06 01:54 Gero: :$


Pinche Mapa Feo Bonito :3
Topic Starter
Natsu

Gero wrote:

YO! vos!

IRC MOD BLA BLA BLA XD!
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: muevete a tu mapa
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: XD
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: me da flojera
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: postearlo IRC MOD
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: orele ala hard
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/224830 Duca - Shiawase Teigi (Short Ver.) [Hard]]
2013-04-06 01:38 Gero: Empezemos
2013-04-06 01:38 Natsu: ok xD
2013-04-06 01:39 Natsu: okay :D
2013-04-06 01:39 Natsu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/224830 Duca - Shiawase Teigi (Short Ver.) [Hard]]
2013-04-06 01:39 Gero: (*) Nazi* 00:24:407 (7) - Mueve este slider a X:392 Y:120 IMO Queda mejor el blanket con este slider 00:23:837 (6)
2013-04-06 01:39 Natsu: hecho lechugin
2013-04-06 01:40 Gero: (*) Nazi* 00:24:787 (8) - Mueve el segundo punto del slider a X:469 Y:288 Para que forma un blanket con esta nota 00:25:166 (9) -
2013-04-06 01:41 Gero: 00:25:736 (2,6) - creo que fluye mejor si en vez de hacer este slider todo disparejo 00:27:255 (6) le das copiar a este 00:25:736 (2) - y lo colocas en el mismo sitio XD
2013-04-06 01:41 Gero: fluye mejor
2013-04-06 01:41 Gero: recuerda snapear las notas siguientes
2013-04-06 01:41 Natsu: okay xD
2013-04-06 01:42 Gero: 00:38:837 (4) - :V Feo feo .w. mueve el punto rojo a X: 280 Y:185
2013-04-06 01:42 Gero: el segundo punto blanco muevelo a X:243 y:148
2013-04-06 01:42 Gero: y el ultimo punto blanco a X:276 Y:260
2013-04-06 01:42 Gero: 00:43:964 (4) - Same ^
2013-04-06 01:43 Gero: 00:46:622 (1,2) - me me arreglalo mas bonito no e.e
2013-04-06 01:43 Gero: 00:47:951 (4) - slider nada estetico :<
2013-04-06 01:43 Natsu: deja mi culo .-.
2013-04-06 01:43 Natsu: xD
2013-04-06 01:44 Gero: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692279
2013-04-06 01:44 Gero: haz el "culo" mas redondo
2013-04-06 01:44 Gero: XD
2013-04-06 01:44 Gero: asi parece no se que tiene frio XD LEL
2013-04-06 01:45 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692282
2013-04-06 01:45 Natsu: esta redondito :3
2013-04-06 01:45 Gero: 01:14:344 (3,4) - mueve estas notas a X:196 Y:312 para blanket con 01:13:774 (1,2) -
2013-04-06 01:45 Gero: recuerda ponerle la distancia correcta
2013-04-06 01:46 Gero: alas notas siguientes
2013-04-06 01:46 Gero: 01:27:445 (1) - que feo corazon X'D sin ofender haslo mas stetico pls
2013-04-06 01:46 Gero: 01:35:799 (4,5) - porque no sustituyes estos circles
2013-04-06 01:46 Gero: por un slider
2013-04-06 01:46 Natsu: omg :c me rompes el corazon con eso
2013-04-06 01:46 Gero: para darle mas fluyes :3
2013-04-06 01:47 Gero: XDD!
2013-04-06 01:47 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/223185 Duca - Shiawase Teigi (Short Ver.) [Insane]]
2013-04-06 01:47 Natsu: nah lo ultimo sliders = free acc q les den xD
2013-04-06 01:48 Gero: (*) 00:20:799 (1) - Este circle no esta perfectamente apilado e.e muevelo a X: 317 Y:93
2013-04-06 01:48 Gero: 00:21:179 (3) - IGUAL PERO ESTE MUEVELO A X:418 Y:84
2013-04-06 01:49 Gero: 00:21:749 (6) - MEH MEH MEH esto es un salto muy innesperado pls ponlo mas cerca e.e
2013-04-06 01:49 Natsu: el mat me dijo q lo hiciera asi xD
2013-04-06 01:49 Natsu: el salto T-T
2013-04-06 01:49 Gero: 00:28:204 (10) - por estetica mueve este circle a X: 264 Y:208
2013-04-06 01:49 Gero: o.o pues dejalo asi
2013-04-06 01:49 Gero: pero algun BAT te dira algo de eso
2013-04-06 01:50 Natsu: ahi lo cambiare xD
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: 00:46:622 (1,2,4) - que afan tuyo de hacer los sliders feos e.e
2013-04-06 01:50 Natsu: es que no se el me dijo a big jum fit alor here
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: componlos y aslos mas bonitos
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: :I
2013-04-06 01:50 Natsu: son cucharas
2013-04-06 01:50 Natsu: :D
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: tu ano son cucharachas
2013-04-06 01:50 Natsu: q eso lol
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: idiota
2013-04-06 01:50 Gero: .w.
2013-04-06 01:51 Natsu: hddjadhadfa
2013-04-06 01:51 Gero: 01:27:445 (1) - que bonito bollo XD ah perdon
2013-04-06 01:51 Gero: es un corazon
2013-04-06 01:51 Natsu: lol q gay se nota q es mi corazon lleno de sentimientos T-T
2013-04-06 01:51 Natsu: insensible lechugin xd
2013-04-06 01:52 Gero: 01:29:534 (1) - meh porque no haces algo asi http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/692293
2013-04-06 01:52 Gero: dale amor a tu corazon XD
2013-04-06 01:52 Gero: mentira dale blanket y formas
2013-04-06 01:52 Gero: con ese slider
2013-04-06 01:52 Natsu: hahahaah bueno e_E
2013-04-06 01:53 Natsu: le pondre un arete mejor :3
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: ya eso es todo
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: e.e
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: iva a modear las demas pero que flojera
2013-04-06 01:53 Natsu: postealo pues lechugin con brocoly hare ensalada
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: XD
2013-04-06 01:53 Natsu: lol
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: eres un desmadre
2013-04-06 01:53 Gero: XD
2013-04-06 01:53 Natsu: soy un loquillo
2013-04-06 01:54 Gero: una loquisha
2013-04-06 01:54 Gero: :$
gracias gorda :p por el nazi mod xD
Gero
Ahora Bubbies ~ o3o! (?
ampzz
Video as per request in my multi-purpose queue.

Natsu wrote:

Video enconding request for this map



Artist: Duca
Title: Shiawase Teigi (Short Ver.)

And here is the video in HD: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TLHeY6GPyiU

thanks alot
Used a completely different (non Youtube) source so that I could encode a rather quality video and this is the best as I could get it whilst keeping the video size relatively small (only 13MB in total) including the need to fix up the source's ridiculous amounts of aliasing.

http://puu.sh/2uR40
Topic Starter
Natsu

ampzz wrote:

Video as per request in my multi-purpose queue.

Natsu wrote:

Video enconding request for this map



Artist: Duca
Title: Shiawase Teigi (Short Ver.)

And here is the video in HD: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TLHeY6GPyiU

thanks alot
Used a completely different (non Youtube) source so that I could encode a rather quality video and this is the best as I could get it whilst keeping the video size relatively small (only 13MB in total) including the need to fix up the source's ridiculous amounts of aliasing.

http://puu.sh/2uR40
thanks alot man really nice quality

Redownload for video :D/
LunarSakuya
Hinsvar's Easy
01:10:166 (3) - Maybe like this would be a neater pattern (in contrast to (1))? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695488
01:23:458 (1) - Try this rhythm https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695482 , i basically shortened 1st spinner by 1/2, & moved slider and 2nd spinner back by 1/2

Xinely's Normal
00:23:647 (3,4) - Combine these into 1 slider, it'll help lower star rating
00:37:888 (1) - Move down a little so it blankets (5) better
00:41:496 (2,3) - also combine these into a slider for similar reasons as before, the slider tick will be enough emphasis imo (like the previous note) =v=
01:02:761 (2) - Clap sounds out of place
01:12:255 (4,1) - it'd be neater if you could use identical sliders
01:19:280 (4) - how about this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695499
01:25:736 - Start the rhythm here since it's where the emphasis is?
01:35:230 (1) - move a little to the left to blanket (5) better if you want

Hard
00:38:837 (4) - move the 2nd slider point up a little so you get a prettier curve http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695512
00:42:065 (6) - NC, then delete NC on 00:42:825 (1) - , then NC on 00:43:774 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695517 , i think it fits the tone of the vocals better, what do you think?
00:45:483 (2) - Clap
00:50:989 (4) - Clap on tail
00:54:027 (4) - ^, hear bg music
00:58:204 (9) - Finish would be nice

Insane
00:20:799 (1) - Finish~
00:21:749 (6) - if it's a relax map like you said, i think stacking the head of this on (1) and rotating a bit would make the jump less dramatic xD =v=; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695522, sorry for not paying attention orz
00:50:989 (4) - Clap on tail
00:58:204 (6) - Finish
01:17:002 (7) - 1 grid up sry lol to equalize stream spacing

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695531 lol wtf reminds me of SAO

no kds nice vid
Topic Starter
Natsu

LunarSakuya wrote:

Xinely's Normal
00:23:647 (3,4) - Combine these into 1 slider, it'll help lower star rating star rating is crazy o3o if you play the diff you will se is so easy like other normals also 3 tail and 4 have t be mapped cuz the sound in music is so strong imo
00:37:888 (1) - Move down a little so it blankets (5) better done
00:41:496 (2,3) - also combine these into a slider for similar reasons as before, the slider tick will be enough emphasis imo (like the previous note) =v= same as 00:23:647
01:02:761 (2) - Clap sounds out of place fixed
01:12:255 (4,1) - it'd be neater if you could use identical sliders done
01:19:280 (4) - how about this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695499 keep xinely way
01:25:736 - Start the rhythm here since it's where the emphasis is? gonna be to soon after spinner :o
01:35:230 (1) - move a little to the left to blanket (5) better if you want done

Hard
00:38:837 (4) - move the 2nd slider point up a little so you get a prettier curve http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695512 done
00:42:065 (6) - NC, then delete NC on 00:42:825 (1) - , then NC on 00:43:774 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695517 , i think it fits the tone of the vocals better, what do you think? yeah fit better for e done
00:45:483 (2) - Clap ok
00:50:989 (4) - Clap on tail ok
00:54:027 (4) - ^, hear bg music ^
00:58:204 (9) - Finish would be nice yes

Insane
00:20:799 (1) - Finish~ sure
00:21:749 (6) - if it's a relax map like you said, i think stacking the head of this on (1) and rotating a bit would make the jump less dramatic xD =v=; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695522, sorry for not paying attention orz hahha is ok fixed o3o
00:50:989 (4) - Clap on tail ok
00:58:204 (6) - Finish done
01:17:002 (7) - 1 grid up sry lol to equalize stream spacing :c ok xD

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695531 lol wtf reminds me of SAO lol you right so symilar wdf xD

no kds nice vid
I know is so cute now :3
LunarSakuya
Topic Starter
Natsu
thanks :3 here for you

balter 666
Plz other god mapp OMG MAPP ! VERY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
scanter
\o/ Go Go Natsu xD
Topic Starter
Natsu

scanter wrote:

\o/ Go Go Natsu xD
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Gero
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