Hi m4m request :3[General]• on Hinsvar's Easy different kiai time what on another diffs~
now : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:58:585, ends on 01:29:155
shold be : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:58:584, ends on 01:29:154
• The same with PreviewTime:
now : 58575
shold be : 58574
[Insane] 00:02:382(4,5) - put slider 5 in centre and note 5 on x128 y300 and slider 6 on x44 y 244
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638333 looks much better
00:06:369 - here better make the advent of sound: 00:06:369 - 20%, 00:06:559 - 25%, 00:06:749 - 30%, 00:06:939 - 35%. It creates sound effect what good follow for music
00:08:647 - better replace finish on whistle bcz it's not sounds here. Don't feels good
00:14:723 - ^ same
00:23:742 - this note sounds overmapped and don't follow for music here, will be better remove it
00:24:407(7,10,11) - 1 grid left for perfect star
http://puu.sh/2bmW600:27:255(9,10,11) - this pattern looks ugly >.> maybe try so
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638358 ?
00:28:204 - remove nc and add on slider 3 on downbeat
00:29:913 - If you put NC on every second down beat then remove nc here, 00:31:432 add nc, 00:32:951 remove nc. It will be looks more
consequentially
00:33:331 - 1 grid down for better flow with stream
00:43:299 - this place sounds a bit empty, so
http://puu.sh/2bn4y this rhythm sounds better and will be more playable.
00:46:622(1,2) -this sliders not symmetry,
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638375 This will be looks more pleasant
00:47:951 - not symmetry slider >.<
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/63837900:55:166(4) - this slider a bit ugly, put point 2 on x116 y116 for blanket with previous note
http://puu.sh/2bndi01:16:242 - add note here, it's folow for the last syllable in a string
01:27:445(1) - this slider not symmetry >.<
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638409300,236,87445,22,0,B|376:212|424:156|424:76|408:20|352:-4|296:4|256:76|256:76|216:4|160:-4|104:20|88:76|88:148|136:196|212:236|212:236|252:256|252:328,1,900,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:33:521 - here and on start slider 6 better put finished, it sounds better for me~
[Hard]00:23:742 - same on Insane
00:28:204 - remove nc here and add on slider 3 and e.tc with NC same on Insane
00:37:318 - remove NC here and add on slider 2
00:37:888(2,3) - make symmetric sliders, will be looks better
http://puu.sh/2bnFu00:43:774(3,4) - make blanket here
http://puu.sh/2bnHi00:49:660 - add NC here
00:51:749 - remove Nc here
00:52:698 - add nc
00:53:268(2,3,4) - fix blanket
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/63843401:27:445 - ugly slider >.< I already gave exaple for this slider, fixed it plz
P.S Plz check nc on kiai time on Insane and hard >.< It's have many mistakes with it, better put nc on 2down beat same as well as in other parts of the map![Xinely's Normal]00:02:571 and 00:05:609 - I really don't see reason put claps here, better replace on whistles. It's sounds better for low part
00:19:280 - here NC bcz you put it on every second down beat
00:22:318 - better replace on finish it feels better and indicates a new part of music
00:23:078 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:30:673(5,6) - 1 grid left for centre with end slider 4
00:38:647 - here need a note, better replace note 2 on slider 1/2, it's better follow for music
00:41:496(1,2) - make blanket here, will be looks more pleasant and playable
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/638467[Hinsvar's Easy]00:04:470 - for consistency better add NC here
Good luck :3