Kenterz9 wrote:

For the normal GD O!M ? Whynot... (but i'm shy =3)

Maybe i'll ask some people for the collab STD too...

sumaru100 wrote:

5th please XD

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Why Title is Kusare Gedou to Chocolate???

I think title correct is Kusaregedou to Chocolate

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Please your change because val0108 and Katty Pie have this map and Ranked maps

If you don't change, this map is unranked

sumaru100 wrote:

HIIIIIIIIIIII


The map has 2 Timing points, i think 1 it´s ok.
Put sumaru100 on Tags XD (cause i made a GD).
My diff (again, with 1 timing point)

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212,320,180867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,320,180982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,268,181097,6,0,P|104:228|112:160,1,90,6|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,196,181328,2,0,P|224:164|232:116,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,120,181559,2,0,P|136:76|160:32,1,90,6|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
155,36,181790,2,0,L|256:40,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,182020,5,6,1:0:0:0:
428,48,182136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,136,182251,2,0,L|428:252,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,288,182482,2,0,P|344:248|344:204,1,90,6|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,182713,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,104,182828,6,0,P|192:128|168:232,1,180,6|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,276,183174,2,0,P|136:320|172:316,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,292,183405,1,6,1:0:0:0:
328,328,183520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,312,183636,2,0,P|456:272|464:212,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,192,183867,6,0,L|368:100,1,90,6|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
300,44,184097,2,0,L|260:144,1,90,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
268,220,184328,2,0,L|184:180,1,90,2|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
156,96,184559,1,2,2:0:0:0:
116,272,184790,6,0,L|212:288,1,90,6|4,2:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
276,344,185020,2,0,L|288:248,1,90,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
356,196,185251,2,0,L|264:176,1,90,4|4,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,185482,1,4,3:0:0:0:
108,192,185713,5,6,2:0:0:0:
192,224,185828,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,288,185944,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,288,186059,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,288,186174,1,2,2:0:0:0:
320,224,186290,1,2,2:0:0:0:
404,192,186405,1,2,2:0:0:0:
256,64,186636,5,6,2:0:0:0:
256,152,186751,1,4,3:0:0:0:
256,152,186867,1,4,3:0:0:0:
256,240,186982,1,4,3:0:0:0:
256,240,187097,1,4,3:0:0:0:
256,332,187213,1,4,3:0:0:0:
256,332,187328,1,4,3:0:0:0:
256,192,187559,12,6,191309,0:0:0:0:

Im working on a O!M Diff :3


And Finally... TAKE A CHOCOLATE STAR!!!! :3

Vainslay wrote:

Can I join Chocollab?

:Edit .. uh oh... Stupid internet, Sorry for the spam posts!

sumaru100 wrote:

Vainslay wrote:

Can I join Chocollab?

:Edit .. uh oh... Stupid internet, Sorry for the spam posts!

Jajajajaja don't worry, that Was funny XD

And.. about the collar, i think it's Ok XD...

sumaru100 wrote:

Quiero hacer mas partes del Chocollab ;__________;

leon1341414 wrote:

I think you need to put "ピノキオP" in artist

And remove "pinoccio-p" in tag , since it is already show in romaised artist :3


Btw , I just saw this and I love this map so much <3

Good luck ! and hope it can be rank !

Star for you !

Kenterz9 wrote:

leon1341414 wrote:

I think you need to put "ピノキオP" in artist

And remove "pinoccio-p" in tag , since it is already show in romaised artist :3


Btw , I just saw this and I love this map so much <3

Good luck ! and hope it can be rank !

Star for you !

Title : Okay
Tags : Okay
Chocolate Star : I eat it <3

Thanks <3

sumaru100 wrote:

No las comas... las necesitamos u.u

XD

Kenterz9 wrote:

Finally I think the Chocollab is going to be make by me and sumaru... xD

sumaru100 wrote:

I´m working in the hitsounds... but I´m really bad x.X
Heeeeeeelp ;w;

Kenterz9 wrote:

sumaru100 wrote:

I´m working in the hitsounds... but I´m really bad x.X
Heeeeeeelp ;w;

Give me that without hitsounds, i'll do something cause i'm god good with hitsounds =3

P o M u T a wrote:

you need 'sumaru100' and 'Naryuga' tags.
and, remove 'chocolate' tag please! because already Subject name.

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~

more or less fine already~
good luck for rank~ <3

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself Ignore them if you think they are helpless

[General]

Done

[Easy]
00:18:636 (1) - it's too quick and short for a newbie player to finish it Deleted
If you consist on that, I think there should be enough blanks just like 00:33:405 (1) -
here are other spinners which I think should be changed....
00:47:713 (1) -
01:24:405 (1) -
02:02:020 (1) -
02:40:328 (1) - All Okay ~

(I have asked for two newbies with less than 500 PC to test it and they both made X at most of these spinners...)

00:13:328 (2) - not suitable for beginners may take it earlier Done
00:44:482 (2) - More than one reverse may made beginners confused Done
02:19:097 (2) - move to x256 y84 Done
02:22:790 (2) - ^ Done

Meanwhile....
00:56:424 - this green doesn't make any sense
Only if you think displaying fireworks won't bother player at this time in insane diff........

[Insane]
AI mod: you may forget to change the arrange after adjusting offset.....
02:09:409 (1) - and 02:17:713 (1) - and the notes after them Done

01:12:982 (1,2,3) - Why not change it into 4 sliders..... Done


01:12:174 (7) - NC Done

01:14:020 (5) - NC Done

01:16:790 (8) - Maybe not necessary? No change

01:22:213 (8) - remove it Done

01:28:328 (3) - divide into two slider? Done

01:57:405 (12) - NC Done

02:02:020 - Maybe Another arrange with NC
No Change but NC

02:10:332 (5) - NC Done

02:20:828 (6) - With a 0.5x green line and Done

02:29:251 (3) - The same with 01:28:328 (3) - No 'cause it follows the vocal

Finally

I was to week to finish chocolate............casue it was really difficult
And I was not skilled in modding high-BPM map...

That's all, good luck

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[Naryuga's Muzukashii]
0.7SV is a weird value orz... I dunno if this is not allowed (I know higher values will probably be too fast) so check with a Taiko BAT. - 0.7 = Half of 1.4 (1.4 is normal use), so I think it is ok in such veryyyyyy high bpm
00:52:559 (1) - k? - ok

[Naryuga's Oni]
nothing~

more or less fine already~
good luck for rank~

tellertheworld wrote:

(NO KD)

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue.
Let's mod some Miku.
Note that 1/4 vocaloid songs were banned/ignored from my queue for Normal Slots...

General

1. Diff spread between "Easy" and "Collab" is too high, you have to make another diff like "Normal"
2. "Easy" is not really easy because this song is supposed to be a 1/4 vocaloid song, the real BPM is 130, but if you use 260, consider undermapping it. You should mostly use a 2/1 spacing between objects. Or just make another easier diff.

Easy

1. SV is too high for an easy diff, consider reducing it or see what i said above.
2. 00:05:713 (1) - Don't remove NC on each slider, just NC at the second measure.
3. 00:15:866 (1,2) - Strange flow imo, using a "V" slider followed with a "U" slider has a strange flow imo, consider uonly using "U" sliders.
4. 00:32:482 (1) - add reverse here for this slider, you hear a note which has to be played...
5. 00:50:020 (2) - change the curve like this for a better flow imo :
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:53:713 (2) - make this slider less curved and changed like ^ (i mean change the curve)
7. 00:49:097 - 00:54:636 this part has some polarity issue, i mean you finish a slider on a red tick and then you start another slider on a white tick, it is confusing, and hard to read for a beginner imo.
8. 01:13:097 (1) - same as ^, just add things like a reverse on this slider... awh, i'll help you more :
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:56:482 (2) - flow is broken here imo, just change this slider's curve as i said above.
10. 02:02:943 (1) - same ^
11. 02:39:866 (1) - about spinners like this (and more) make long spinner to give time to beginners, this spinner is less than 1sec...

I think i'm gonna remapping an Easy and Normal.

Chocollab

• 
  Let's pretend that it is a Hard Difficulty.

1. 00:09:636 (2,3,4) - make curves like this ? :
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:020 (1,2,3) - Not the same spacing between objects, you might fix it.
3. 00:15:866 (1) - reduce to 00:16:097
4. 00:20:482 (4) - remove a reverse and ass a note here 00:21:174
5. 00:24:982 (8) - stack on (1), not on (7), fits better imo.
6. 00:39:866 (1,2) - If this diff is supposed to be a "Hard", so, confusing sliders, keep the same length. add or remove reverse, (you should remove imo)I changed the patern
7. 00:49:790 (4,5,6) - (6) is overlapping (5) it annoys me... you might move a bit further (6) because (4) doesn't overlap (5)
8. 01:29:366 (1,2,3,2,3) - three notes, a slider, and two notes, it can make people confusing with this BPM, that is the real issue which you can find with this type of song and mapping imo(i mean for hard diffs...)
9. 01:36:059 (4,5,6) - hard to play imo, just unstack (5) So stack with (6) cause it's better to read
10. 01:57:174 (6,1) - are you really sure that hard players will be able to read this and not sliderbreaking, on first try ? no imo, you might unstack it.
11. 02:28:213 (6,1,2) - Do not stack 2 notes at the end of a slider since you stacked 1 note at the end of a slider like this. 02:27:405 (3,4)
12. 02:59:020 (3,4) - lol are you joking ? this spacing is too far...

Really nice diff, nice designed for playing, but this is not a hard imo. Maybe hard +, so maybe I can map an "easy" hard ?

Insane

1. 00:12:520 (2,3) - Not a perfect blanket here, you might fix it.
2. 00:13:328 (2,1) - ^
3. 00:14:251 (2,3) - ^
   (and many more...)
4. 00:31:213 - must be played, change pattern.
5. 00:52:559 (7,8,9,10,1) - as i said above, this is a 1/4 130BPM song, YOU HAVE NO REASONS to add a stream here, that's overmapping. It's going to be hard to convince me... I think because of the 260 BPM, the insane is like an "insane +" or something else so the stream isn't overmapped imo...
6. 00:56:251 (6,7,8,9) - ^ Just changing patern
   and more...
7. 01:12:982 (1,2,3,4) - not following well the song, you might add a note like this : There's justa big jump between (4) and (1)... I think it's okey
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:20:828 (2,3) - not really a good idea to suddenly stop here imo...
9. 02:05:713 (6) - make a blanket for 3 ?
10. 02:20:828 (6) - NC because you changed the SV

Really interresting diff and well designed for playing but have issues, maybe unrankable, as i said above. I don't think so but I know it's hard

sumaru's Extreme Addiction

1. 00:09:406 (1) - redo this sliderit is not well done, you see that with the second point.
2. 00:18:174 (3,4) - why using a low spacing here ? it makes no sense imo, stack the whole circle on the beginning of the slider.
3. 00:24:636 (2) - CTRL+G, better flow imo.
4. 00:25:328 (5,6) - swap both slider, no CTRL+G, better flow imo
5. 00:28:905 (3,4,5) - don't align these notes, make something curved for a better flow imo.
6. 00:31:559 (6,1) - spacing issue, you might fix it.
7. 00:35:136 (4,1) - Overlap, you might fix it.
8. 00:37:674 (4) - i know that you want to create your own rhythm, but i think that is note is useless because you cant hear anything on the song imo, remove it.
9. 01:00:520 (3,4) - as i said above, keep the same spacing or stack but dont add close spacing, i think that it is randomly placed, it makes me confused.
10. 01:19:444 (5,1) - try to stack (5) with (1)'s end ?
11. 01:55:558 (1) - add finish at the beginning to the slider.
12. 01:56:943 (3,4,1) - you know what i will say...
13. 02:30:636 (1,3) - Overlap, you might fix it.
14. 02:41:713 (1,3) - ^
15. 02:43:559 (2,4) - ^
16. 03:07:559 (1) - Fix the end of the spinner, you know what to do.

Nice diff too, there are inconsistent parts imo but it's not important.

Not modding "Chocolate Extra Adiction" because i can't pass it and it is overmapped as hell (to be friendly...), this diff makes no senses, you will be killed by a BAT because it's unrankable imo even though it is AR10, i suggest you to remove this diff, "Insane" and "sumaru's Extreme Addiction" are hard enough, there is no reason to make a harder diff. 0108 didnt make a harder diff than your Insane or sumaru's diff imo... I'll see with a BAT if I can letf this diff. in the map. But I'll not remove it, I'll left a link in the description I think

I love val0108 but I think it's sad there's not Extra in the map imo (Cause I love 0108's extra map =D)
Good Luck ~

Kenterz9 wrote:

Changing sumaru100's diff.'s name and "Chocolate Extra Addiction"'s name because of new rule : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2725713

I don't know if "Chocolate Overdose" is available.

Naryuga wrote:

Kenterz9 wrote:

Changing sumaru100's diff.'s name and "Chocolate Extra Addiction"'s name because of new rule : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2725713

I don't know if "Chocolate Overdose" is available.

Well then maybe "Chocollab" needs rename into something like Chocollab Hard

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

wait
Chocolate Overdose (this map)
Insane (Val0108 map)
Dat hardness so Close enough

K4zuya K wrote:

hello there, here's my third mod. i'm a new modder, so i'm sorry if my mod is bad . and i will only mod your map, not GD and collab
ok then, let's start

Easy

SPOILER

01:11:251 (1,2) - why don't blanket this? it will look better (maybe) Yay, it makes a sort of symmetry with the slider after (2)
01:11:251 (1,2) - ^ Same time as above !?
02:45:405 (1) - it's just my prefference, but i don't really like this shape, it will be better if you make this more curvy Just I made it blanket

Normal

SPOILER

01:14:943 (1) - make this shape more symmetric I don't think it's needed
01:22:328 (1,2) - rather than like this, try to blanket properly Hard with Distance Snap

Insane

SPOILER

can't found anything wrong

that's all from me
really like your map, i think i will keep this map. hope this will be ranked soon I'm waiting forever for BATs, but Thanks ^w^
good luck with your map Thanks =3

OstrichSupreme wrote:

Disclaimer

I'm still new to modding, so sorry for anything not being of help.

Easy

This one is perfect IMO.

Normal

00:17:597 (1,2) - I liked this with the ending overlapping the beginning of the next note
02:04:790 (1,2,3,1) - I would make one of these more wavy, this map is fun for having such abstract sliders, and the best part is that they aren't putrid to look at Changed
01:23:251 (2) - I would blanket this in the previous note I cant because of the Distance Snap, so I changed the patern.

General Notes

Well then, I haven't played a pending beatmap with such high quality. I really tried, to find anything wrong, but I didn't, just some suggestions. Storyboard is nice, notes is smooth and fluent. Thanks OwO
I'm sorry I could mod the other difficulties. Can't even get far in the harder ones. I'm sorry I couldn't be of much help.
I think I'll keep this song. Good luck to getting it ranked, I look forward to playing it again!

1. Tags: Il y a le mot "addiction". Pourquoi? Je ne vois pas trop le rapport avec la chanson.
2. Même si ce n'est pas obligatoire il est fortement recommandé que les diff finissent en même temps ce qui n'est pas le cas ici. Pour 20s t'aurais pu faire en sorte que toutes les diffs finissent en même temps. Surtout qu'en plus il n'y a pas de logique sur les difficulté car la hard fini en même temps que l'extra et plus tard que l'insane, l'overdose et l'easy et normal. A la limite s'il y avait une logique du genre "les diffs faciles finissent plus tôt" ca pourrait aller mais ce n'est pas le cas ici.
3. Le timing est différent dans la diff "chocolate Overdose". Même si le BPM est le même l'offset diffère des autres diff ce qui est UNRANKABLE.
4. J'y conais rien en SB mais AImod indique
   
   Donc, check ton SB.
5. 01:16:559 - Cet effet dans le SB m'a parru vraimen bizarre. Il ne correspond pas à rien en particulier dans la musique comparé aux autres effets et à l'air plus random qu'autre chose.
6. Le difficulty spread n'est pas bon. Ta normal n'est pas assez difficile. L'écrat de difficulté entre la normal et la hard est beaucoup trop grand et ça risque d'être unrankable (faudrait le faire tester par un BAT pour confirmation). Ta normal utilise un SV de x0.8 avec un DS de x0.8 et l'écart entre les notes est de 1~2 beat. Ta Hard utilise un SV de x1.3 un DS de x1.2 et à un note tout les 0.5 Beat. L'écart est vraiment monstrueux et il y a peu de chance que ça passe pour le rank.

1. 00:19:559 - Rajoutes une note ici.
2. 01:02:866 - ^
3. 02:09:405 (1) - Ce slider devrait finir 1 beat plus tard.
4. 02:39:866 (1) - Remplace ce spinner par un slider. Il n'y a rien dans la musique qui justifie vraiment un spinner ici.

1. 00:08:482 (1) - Ce slider illustre plutôt bien le problème majeur qu'il y a dans cette diff. c'est que le genre de slider tordu, autant ça passe dans les diff insane et plus autant dans les difficultées easy/normal (et un peu hard) ça ne va pas du tout. Ce genre de diff demande surtout des formes plus harmonieuses et ce genre de slider ne doit être utilisé que lorsque quelque chose le justifie dans la musique. Là, ça fait vraiment moche. Si tu veux mettre des formes complexes c'est bien mais mieux vaut privilégier les formes harmonieuses. Je te conseille d'aller voir la Easy du mapset ranked de Katty Pie de Kusaregedou to Chocolate pour te donner une idée de ce qu'il vaut mieux faire. En tout cas il vaut mieux que tu changes tout les sliders comme celui-là.
2. 00:10:328 (2) - Décale le slider d'un cran vers le haut pour avoir une plus belle blanket. Celle que tu as overlap un peu.
3. 00:14:020 (1) - (nazi) Bouge le 2eme slider point pour une meilleure blanket.

1. 00:14:020 (1) - Retire le NC. Il n'y a rien dans la musique qui justifie vraiment des combos aussi petit. Si tu as peur que le combo est trop long regarde
2. 00:04:790 (1,2,1,2,1). Tu as un SV tout les 12 beats. Donc
3. 00:17:713 (1) - ^
4. 00:28:790 (1) - ^
5. 00:32:482 (1) - ^ etc.... En fait tu peux carrement retirer un NC sur deux dans ta map XD

1. 00:04:790 (1,2,1,2) - Je trouve qu'il y a beaucoup trop de finish ici. Même s'il est vrai que la musique justifie de mettre des finish à ces endroits ils faut savoir les disposer ave parcimonie. Lorsqu'on a peu de note on met peu de hitsounds par ce que si on en met de partout après ça fait pas très joli. D'ailleurs dans le reste de la diff tu mets un finish tout les 8 beats alors ca ne sert à rien d'en mettre un tout les 4 beats ici.
2. 01:23:251 (2) - Retire le finish. T'en a un tout les 8 beats normalement.
3. 02:02:943 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,1) - Retire 1 finish sur 2 pour les mêmes raisons.
4. 02:26:943 (1) - Pendant tout ce kiai retire un fin
5. 02:26:943 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - La encore. Chaque note a soit un finish doit un clap. Ca fait beaucoup trop imo.

1. 01:03:866 - Comme pour la Easy. D'ailleur en Easy ton break commencait ici. Là pour une raison mysterieuse il commence 4 Beat plus tôt à 01:02:943.
2. 02:39:924 (1) - Comme pour la Easy aussi.

1. 00:59:251 (2) - Il manque un finish sur sa tête.

1. 00:33:463 (1) - This spinner is really short. I think you can make it finish 1/2 beat later.
2. 00:37:328 (4,5,6) - I think the rhythm here should be more something like this:
   
3. 00:53:597 - Add a note? This gap felt weird while playing.
4. 00:54:982 - ^
5. 01:02:597 (3) - Add a reverse to the slider?
6. 01:54:636 (1) - Same as 00:33:463. Plus you should lower the volume of this spinner.
7. 02:26:713 (1) - Remove this slider? It's very surprising while playing because it doesn't follow the music in itself. It just follow the weird song there is before the music start.
8. 02:40:847 (1) - Same as 00:33:463.

1. 00:35:482 (5,6) - (nazi) Small unaesthetical overlap. CTRL+H on 00:35:713 (6) should fix this.
2. 03:05:366 (4,1) - These two are too close which might be confusing while playing.

1. 01:16:847 - Pourquoi ce vide ici. A 00:39:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6) qui est identique musicalement tu as mis des notes et en plus tu as mis des jump. Tu dois donc faire la même chose ici afin d'être consistant.
2. 01:39:866 (1) - Il n'y a pas d'instru ici pas de musique. Pourquoi un spinner? S'il n'y a rien ben... On ne met rien.

1. 00:45:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - CTRL+H tout à cause de 00:44:482 (4,5,6,7,1). 4-5-6 te fait aller de la gauche vers la droite ensuite a 6 tu fais demi-tour et tu pars à 7 et le fait que 4-5-6 soit symmétrique et 7 sur l'axe du milieu fait que l'on pense instincivement à ce que ce qui va suivre va se trouver à gauche alors que là non. Tu forces à enchainer un deuxième demi-tour sur le 7 ce qui ne donne pas un super bon flow.
2. 01:58:674 (8,9) - Eloigne 9 un peu plus pour éviter l'overlap.
3. 02:08:482 (1,2) - Ces sliders sont pas beaux!
4. 02:20:828 (1) - Evite les randoms changement de SV! Rien dans la musique ne justifie qu'on le fasse. D'ailleurs tu ne l'as pas fait pour 02:18:982 (6) qui est musicalement la même chose.
5. 02:26:482 (4,5) - Cet Anti-jump est vraiment bizarre.

1. 01:10:328 (1) - Il n'y a pas d'instru à cet endroit là de la musique donc rien ne justifie de mettre un finish.
2. 02:31:559 (6) - Oubli d'un finish?

1. 01:24:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Theis particular pattern is usually used when there is an increasing in intensity in the song. Here you just hear miku sing with no background music. There is no increase in intesity whatsoever so you shouldn't have this pattern.
2. 02:41:943 (2,3) - I think this overlap can be avoided.
3. 02:43:559 (2,4) - ^

1. 00:26:020 (1,2,3,4) - These claps sounds really weird and feels out of place. Remove them or change them with custom hitclap that fits better the song.
2. 01:40:097 (1,2,3,4) - Remove all the finish. They are way too much. There is no cybal sound, no powerful note, nothing that justify having these finish in the song.

SPOILER

rezoons wrote:

Bon voilà mon mod ,
Et souviens-toi, ça va être douloureux mais c'est pour ton bien! (C'est la devise de mes mods)
Par contre j'ai commencé le mod à 23h00 et là il est 2h00 donc dsl de toutes les fautes d'orthographe et les phrases aux tournures bizarres. XD (surtout que j'ai écrit un pavé)

Avant de commencer je tiens à rappeler que même si j'ai de l’expérience dans le domaine je n'ai pas la science infuse. Donc il ne faut pas prendre tout ce que je dis comme étant la vérité absolue mais plutôt comme des conseils venant de moi ^^
Mon but n'est pas d'être méchant mais d'aider! (Si je voulais juste être méchant je ne passerai pas autant de temps dessus )

[General]

1. Tags: Il y a le mot "addiction". Pourquoi? Je ne vois pas trop le rapport avec la chanson. En faite au début il y avait aussi "chocolate", ce qui donnait "chocolate addiction". Mais vu que chocolate est déjà dans le titre, je l'ai enlevé. Donc Addiction est tout seul, donc je vais l'enlever aussi xD
2. Même si ce n'est pas obligatoire il est fortement recommandé que les diff finissent en même temps ce qui n'est pas le cas ici. Pour 20s t'aurais pu faire en sorte que toutes les diffs finissent en même temps. Surtout qu'en plus il n'y a pas de logique sur les difficulté car la hard fini en même temps que l'extra et plus tard que l'insane, l'overdose et l'easy et normal. A la limite s'il y avait une logique du genre "les diffs faciles finissent plus tôt" ca pourrait aller mais ce n'est pas le cas ici. Je vais continuer l'édit de toutes les maps alors je pense ^w^ youpi c'est l'éclate
3. Le timing est différent dans la diff "chocolate Overdose". Même si le BPM est le même l'offset diffère des autres diff ce qui est UNRANKABLE. J'y remède =3
4. J'y conais rien en SB mais AImod indique
   
   Donc, check ton SB. Juste pour raconter ma vie, "white_" = "white-[1;7]" oh la belle intervalle. Donc il a pas détecter "white_" en tant que fichier réel (vu que "white_" est créé dans le menu du SB (si je suis clair xD)
5. 01:16:559 - Cet effet dans le SB m'a parru vraimen bizarre. Il ne correspond pas à rien en particulier dans la musique comparé aux autres effets et à l'air plus random qu'autre chose. Mais, critique pas mes SB ='( Nan c'est bon j'ai laissé la taille de l'image et j'ai fait une apparition "en fondu" (je crois qu'on dit comme ça xD)
6. Le difficulty spread n'est pas bon. Ta normal n'est pas assez difficile. L'écrat de difficulté entre la normal et la hard est beaucoup trop grand et ça risque d'être unrankable (faudrait le faire tester par un BAT pour confirmation). Ta normal utilise un SV de x0.8 avec un DS de x0.8 et l'écart entre les notes est de 1~2 beat. Ta Hard utilise un SV de x1.3 un DS de x1.2 et à un note tout les 0.5 Beat. L'écart est vraiment monstrueux et il y a peu de chance que ça passe pour le rank. Bah soit je trouve quelqu'un pour GD, soit je fait une hard, soit je fait en sorte que la normal soit plus dure. Dans les 3 cas c'est galère xD

[Easy]
Rhythm

1. 00:19:559 - Rajoutes une note ici. Done
2. 01:02:866 - ^ 01:03:866 * Done
3. 02:09:405 (1) - Ce slider devrait finir 1 beat plus tard. Done
4. 02:39:866 (1) - Remplace ce spinner par un slider. Il n'y a rien dans la musique qui justifie vraiment un spinner ici. J'ai changé le patern

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:08:482 (1) - Ce slider illustre plutôt bien le problème majeur qu'il y a dans cette diff. c'est que le genre de slider tordu, autant ça passe dans les diff insane et plus autant dans les difficultées easy/normal (et un peu hard) ça ne va pas du tout. Ce genre de diff demande surtout des formes plus harmonieuses et ce genre de slider ne doit être utilisé que lorsque quelque chose le justifie dans la musique. Là, ça fait vraiment moche. Si tu veux mettre des formes complexes c'est bien mais mieux vaut privilégier les formes harmonieuses. Je te conseille d'aller voir la Easy du mapset ranked de Katty Pie de Kusaregedou to Chocolate pour te donner une idée de ce qu'il vaut mieux faire. En tout cas il vaut mieux que tu changes tout les sliders comme celui-là. Pour être franc, je m'inspire de happy623. Un bon exemple de map : Neru - Ningen Shikkaku [623's Easy].
2. 00:10:328 (2) - Décale le slider d'un cran vers le haut pour avoir une plus belle blanket. Celle que tu as overlap un peu. Done
3. 00:14:020 (1) - (nazi) Bouge le 2eme slider point pour une meilleure blanket. Done

NC

1. 00:14:020 (1) - Retire le NC. Il n'y a rien dans la musique qui justifie vraiment des combos aussi petit. Si tu as peur que le combo est trop long regarde
2. 00:04:790 (1,2,1,2,1). Tu as un SV tout les 12 beats. Donc
3. 00:17:713 (1) - ^
4. 00:28:790 (1) - ^
5. 00:32:482 (1) - ^ etc.... En fait tu peux carrement retirer un NC sur deux dans ta map XD Done

Hitsound

1. 00:04:790 (1,2,1,2) - Je trouve qu'il y a beaucoup trop de finish ici. Même s'il est vrai que la musique justifie de mettre des finish à ces endroits ils faut savoir les disposer ave parcimonie. Lorsqu'on a peu de note on met peu de hitsounds par ce que si on en met de partout après ça fait pas très joli. D'ailleurs dans le reste de la diff tu mets un finish tout les 8 beats alors ca ne sert à rien d'en mettre un tout les 4 beats ici. Done
2. 01:23:251 (2) - Retire le finish. T'en a un tout les 8 beats normalement. Done
3. 02:02:943 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,1) - Retire 1 finish sur 2 pour les mêmes raisons. Done
4. 02:26:943 (1) - Pendant tout ce kiai retire un fin Done
5. 02:26:943 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - La encore. Chaque note a soit un finish doit un clap. Ca fait beaucoup trop imo. Done

Cette diff n'est malheureusement pas de qualité suffisante pour être rankable. Les hitsounds ne sont pas agréables, les sliders rendent la diff pas belle et il y a beaucoup trop de NC. Je te conseille vraiment de retravailler cette diff. Moi je dit que tu a trouvé plein de défauts sur la diff. que tout le monde trouvait la meilleure de toute la map. Ce qui montre que ton modding est vraiment aidant et pointilleux. Merci ^w^

[Normal]
Cette diff a les mêmes problèmes que la diff précédante (mais en moins pire) alors je ne vais pas me répéter. Il faut corriger les NC et la les sliders chelou. Sinon pour les hitsounds ca passe un peu mieux car il y a beacoup plus de notes/sliders cette fois-ci.
Rhythm

1. 01:03:866 - Comme pour la Easy. D'ailleur en Easy ton break commencait ici. Là pour une raison mysterieuse il commence 4 Beat plus tôt à 01:02:943. Done
2. 02:39:924 (1) - Comme pour la Easy aussi. Done

Hitsound

1. 00:59:251 (2) - Il manque un finish sur sa tête. Done

J'ai fait comme la easy pour les NC, c'est moint coloré ^w^

Même défauts que la Easy mais en moins grave. Par contre comme je l'ai déjà dit la difficulté n'est pas suffisante. La map est trop facile comparé à la Hard qui vient après. Donc je vais opter pour la solution "Standart" GD ou que je fasse moi même une "Standart"

[Hard]
Rhythm

1. 00:33:463 (1) - This spinner is really short. I think you can make it finish 1/2 beat later. Done
2. 00:37:328 (4,5,6) - I think the rhythm here should be more something like this: I think it doesn't follows all the background
   
3. 00:53:597 - Add a note? This gap felt weird while playing. Done
4. 00:54:982 - ^ Done
5. 01:02:597 (3) - Add a reverse to the slider? Done
6. 01:54:636 (1) - Same as 00:33:463. Plus you should lower the volume of this spinner. Done
7. 02:26:713 (1) - Remove this slider? It's very surprising while playing because it doesn't follow the music in itself. It just follow the weird song there is before the music start. I'll ask sumaru...
8. 02:40:847 (1) - Same as 00:33:463. Done

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:35:482 (5,6) - (nazi) Small unaesthetical overlap. CTRL+H on 00:35:713 (6) should fix this. Like a blanket, Done
2. 03:05:366 (4,1) - These two are too close which might be confusing while playing. Done

The diff is good. And it didn't have all these weird sliders of yours kenterz. (Well, not much) xD
The diff could exploit the song a little bit more but for a fist map this hard is quite good. Good job! It's the first "for rank" but the diff. isn't old =3 But Thanks ^w^

[Insane]
Cette diff a bien trop de break. Et ils ont tendance à casser le flow plus qu'autre chose. Il se passe plus ou moins la même chose dans une marathon qui a été approved: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/89289 si tu veux check. Tu verras qu'avoir beaucoup de break ça casse l'experience de jeu très rapidement. Je te conseille de prendre les mêmes break que dans la Hard. C'est à dire de virer celui à 00:19:559 et celui à 01:40:790. Je le ferais =p (En plus je vois bien le genre que je vais faire à 01:40:790. Will be done =3
Rhythm

1. 01:16:847 - Pourquoi ce vide ici. A 00:39:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6) qui est identique musicalement tu as mis des notes et en plus tu as mis des jump. Tu dois donc faire la même chose ici afin d'être consistant. Done
2. 01:39:866 (1) - Il n'y a pas d'instru ici pas de musique. Pourquoi un spinner? S'il n'y a rien ben... On ne met rien. Logique xD, Done

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:45:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - CTRL+H tout à cause de 00:44:482 (4,5,6,7,1). 4-5-6 te fait aller de la gauche vers la droite ensuite a 6 tu fais demi-tour et tu pars à 7 et le fait que 4-5-6 soit symmétrique et 7 sur l'axe du milieu fait que l'on pense instincivement à ce que ce qui va suivre va se trouver à gauche alors que là non. Tu forces à enchainer un deuxième demi-tour sur le 7 ce qui ne donne pas un super bon flow. Même moi j'ai du mal à comprendre, Done
2. 01:58:674 (8,9) - Eloigne 9 un peu plus pour éviter l'overlap. Done
3. 02:08:482 (1,2) - Ces sliders sont pas beaux! Done
4. 02:20:828 (1) - Evite les randoms changement de SV! Rien dans la musique ne justifie qu'on le fasse. D'ailleurs tu ne l'as pas fait pour 02:18:982 (6) qui est musicalement la même chose. Done
5. 02:26:482 (4,5) - Cet Anti-jump est vraiment bizarre. J'ai mit un slider

Hitsound

1. 01:10:328 (1) - Il n'y a pas d'instru à cet endroit là de la musique donc rien ne justifie de mettre un finish.
2. 02:31:559 (6) - Oubli d'un finish?

Mise à part les breaks qui cassent un peu trop le rythme rien à en redire. C'est une insane cool. c'est même vraiment bien! Meilleure que celle de Kattie Pie (mais moins bonne que celle de 0108). Par contre les 1/4 sont un peu de trop imo. 260 BPM c'est violent quand même. Ya pire (comme "Yousei Teikoku - The Creator", même si c'est une "insane +")

[sumaru's Extra]
This diff is not an extra diff. It has the same level of difficulty as the two insane of val0108 and Katty Pie which are ranked so rename it sumaru's Insane.
A lot of stuff are unsnapped. Check the Aimod and resnap them.
Placement/Aesthetic

1. 01:24:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Theis particular pattern is usually used when there is an increasing in intensity in the song. Here you just hear miku sing with no background music. There is no increase in intesity whatsoever so you shouldn't have this pattern.
2. 02:41:943 (2,3) - I think this overlap can be avoided.
3. 02:43:559 (2,4) - ^

Hitsound

1. 00:26:020 (1,2,3,4) - These claps sounds really weird and feels out of place. Remove them or change them with custom hitclap that fits better the song.
2. 01:40:097 (1,2,3,4) - Remove all the finish. They are way too much. There is no cybal sound, no powerful note, nothing that justify having these finish in the song.

Clean diff. Some pattern feels out of place. Except that nothing really to say about it.

[Chocolate Overdose]
Pas sur que le nom de la diff passe avec le changement de règle qu'il y a eu récemment. Là aussi faudra demander à un BAT. Bah je pense que c'est mieux de renommer en "EXTRA EXTRA WTFFFFFF". Ou plus esthétiquement : "Extra Overdose".

Sinon à propos de la diff je suis incapable de la jouer mais la diff m'a paru vraiment bizarre donc j'ai demandé à un ami de la tester. Un joueur d'un haut niveau qui a participé pour la France à l'OWC4 (donc pas de la merde quoi) et le résultat:

SPOILER

Quand je lui ai demandé ces impressions il a confirmé ce que je craignait. Il m'a dit que la map lui donnait l'impression d'être une collab 7odoa+skystar (ce qui n'est PAS un compliment). Il trouvait que certains pattern (genre 00:14:020 (1,2,3)) sont complètements WTF, que la map a un flow WTF et est quasiment impossible à lire. Le mapping n'est pas adapté du tout aux maps à haut BPM et ça fait que c'est désagréable à jouer.
Je sais c'est violent mais j'ai spec et j'ai vu comment il a réagi et de plus j'ai un peu d'expérience dans le domaine et malheureusement je suis plutôt d'accord avec lui. Je te conseille vraiment de retirer la diff (au pire si tu veux tu peux toujours l'upload ailleurs et mettre un lien dans la description et en faire une diff bonus) ensuite à toi de voir. Si tu n'est pas convaincu essaye de la faire testée par d'autres personnes. WubWoofWolf, je compte sur toi xD
Nan, je pense que j'ai du pêter un cable, donc je l'enleve. Mais je sait pas si je vais refaire une extra.

Au final voilà ce que je te conseille de faire pour la suite:
*Corriger tout les nc/hitsounds/sliders de l'Easy ou alors la rempaper completement (ou demander une GD)
*Remapper la Normal en prenant en compte des conseils que je t'ai donné et avec une plus grande difficulté. Utilise un SV de x1.0 et utilise des écarts de 1 beat principalement avec de temps en temps des notes sur les demi-beat. Pour ça je te conseille fortement de t'inspirer de la normal sur le mapset de Kattie Pie.
*Enlever la chocolate overdose.

Après avoir fait ça:
*Cherche encore quelques mods. Mais pas la peine de demander à n'importe qui, ne demande qu'à des personnes qui savent modder! Recevoir des mods avec 5 lignes qui te font quasiment rien changer ça ne sert à rien (mise à part augmenter artificiellement le nombre de SP). Cherche plutôt des moddeurs de qualité cela profitera beaucoup mieux.
*Va chercher des Bats lorsque tu penses que ta map est prête. C'est pas les BAT qui vont venir vers toi, c'est à toi d'aller vers eux.

Voilà, j'espère que tout cela va t'aider. Pas qu'un peu *w*
Ça fait beaucoup à avaler (Ne pas avoir l'esprit mal tordu...) donc bonne chance pour la digestion. Les débuts en beatmapping sont souvent assez dur. Là je pense que j'ai un bon style, mais faut pas faire comme j'ai fait là xD
Au vu de ton insane et de ta hard je pense que tu as vraiment du potentiel mais il faut encore que tu bosses tes easy/normal. Tu t'es lancé dans du mapping d'une certaine catégorie de map que sont les high BPM dont le mapping est vraiment particulier et loin d'être le plus facile. C'est plutôt courageux et je te souhaite bonne chance pour la suite.
Et si jamais tu as des questions n'hésite pas à me PM!

P.S. Les bats n'en n'ont rien a faire du SP des maps. Je t'assure! Ah ça oui, quand j'ai vu des maps bubbled de 17 SP, j'ai pleuré xD

rezoons wrote:

[sumaru's Extra]
This diff is not an extra diff. It has the same level of difficulty as the two insane of val0108 and Katty Pie which are ranked so rename it sumaru's Insane.
A lot of stuff are unsnapped. Check the Aimod and resnap them. DONE
Placement/Aesthetic

1. 01:24:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Theis particular pattern is usually used when there is an increasing in intensity in the song. Here you just hear miku sing with no background music. There is no increase in intesity whatsoever so you shouldn't have this pattern. DONE
2. 02:41:943 (2,3) - I think this overlap can be avoided. BUT IT´S PRETTY ;w;
3. 02:43:559 (2,4) - ^

Hitsound

1. 00:26:020 (1,2,3,4) - These claps sounds really weird and feels out of place. Remove them or change them with custom hitclap that fits better the song. O.O DONE
2. 01:40:097 (1,2,3,4) - Remove all the finish. They are way too much. There is no cybal sound, no powerful note, nothing that justify having these finish in the song.

DONE

Clean diff. Some pattern feels out of place. Except that nothing really to say about it.

Je vais continuer l'édit de toutes les maps alors je pense ^w^ youpi c'est l'éclate

Pour être franc, je m'inspire de happy623. Un bon exemple de map : Neru - Ningen Shikkaku [623's Easy].

Bah soit je trouve quelqu'un pour GD, soit je fait une hard, soit je fait en sorte que la normal soit plus dure. Dans les 3 cas c'est galère xD

Moi je dit que tu a trouvé plein de défauts sur la diff. que tout le monde trouvait la meilleure de toute la map.

Donc je vais opter pour la solution "Standart" GD ou que je fasse moi même une "Standart"

Ya pire (comme "Yousei Teikoku - The Creator", même si c'est une "insane +")

Nan, je pense que j'ai du pêter un cable, donc je l'enleve. Mais je sait pas si je vais refaire une extra.

Extra GD Welcome if you want ^w^

Ah ça oui, quand j'ai vu des maps bubbled de 17 SP, j'ai pleuré xD

Applied rezoons's mod (16/12/2013)

Vaiment mille merci pour le mod ^w^

rezoons wrote:

Bon je vais rajouter quelques précisions à mon gros pavé bien moche mod.

Je vais continuer l'édit de toutes les maps alors je pense ^w^ youpi c'est l'éclate

Les premières maps c'est souvent ça. La plupart des gens que je connaisse ont beaucoup edit leurs premières maps. genre Cherry qui vient enfin de ranker sa toute première map. Ben, la map ne ressemble en rien à ce qu'elle était au début tellement il a edit. Perso, pour ma première map j'ai remappé entièrement tout le mapset 2 fois avant de ranker..... Bon c'était censé te rassurer tout ça mais quelque chose me dit que c'est en train de faire l'inverse... Tout ça pour te dire que c'est normal d'edit beaucoup! C'est le métier qui rentre! En faite je passe 70 % de mon temps sur osu à éditer, donc ça rentre bien =3

Pour être franc, je m'inspire de happy623. Un bon exemple de map : Neru - Ningen Shikkaku [623's Easy].

C'est pas parce que quelqu'un le fait que c'est une bonne idée. D'ailleurs ses sliders à lui sont moins déformé que les tiens donc ça passe un peu mieux. Bon je ne vais m'étendre sur la beauté des sliders d'un point de vue de la régularité parce que ça va être moche. Enfin bon, je peux aussi te donner des exemples de maps Easy magnifique avec des sliders n'ayant des formes pas forcement simples mais pas toutes biscornues non plus: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/230427. Ensuite si tu te sent confiant dans ton style vas-y assumes jusqu'au bout. Je ne suis pas là pour casser tes envies d'originalité. Je suis juste là pour donner mon opinion.
Après j'ai pensé que faire des sliders moins écrasés sur eux même semblait mieux... Je vais en changer quelques-uns donc ^w^

Bah soit je trouve quelqu'un pour GD, soit je fait une hard, soit je fait en sorte que la normal soit plus dure. Dans les 3 cas c'est galère xD

Sachant que plus il y a de diff plus le mapset est difficile à modder et plus le temps de rank est ralenti je ne te conseille pas d'en rajouter mais plutôt de modifier la normal qui a un niveau proche de l'Easy. Si jamais tu prends une GD je te conseille de préciser à la personne la difficulté précise que tu veux. Parce que si le GuestDiffeur te fais une belle diff mais pas assez difficile ça n'aura servi à rien!

Moi je dit que tu a trouvé plein de défauts sur la diff. que tout le monde trouvait la meilleure de toute la map.

Serieux?.... Je trouve ça complètement insultant envers ta hard et ton insane. Après je pense que es gens se sont juste arrêtés sur l’esthétique et non sur la difficultés de ces sliders... (dont moi =D)

Donc je vais opter pour la solution "Standart" GD ou que je fasse moi même une "Standart"

"Standart" est un mot qui existe ni en Français ni en anglais XD Le mot que tu cherches c'est "Standard". Sinon je te déconseille d'utiliser ce nom.
Ce nom est en général utiliser pour les maps basées sur des chansons de Beatmania/BMS/DDR/Jubeat etc..... Mais pas vraiment pour les vocaloid.
De plus ces maps ont des noms de difficulté bien à eux. Beginner/Standard/Hyper/Another. Du coup, tu n'est pas censé mélanger les deux notations.
Si tu veux vraiment faire une difficulté supplémentaire. Ben, faut trouver un autre nom. Mise à part Normal+ je vois pas vraiment (mais bon cette notation fait un peu vieillot). Donc je vais revoir la "Normal" =D

Ya pire (comme "Yousei Teikoku - The Creator", même si c'est une "insane +")

Sauf que dans The Cretor les 1/4 s'entendent beaucoup plus. Mais bon, c'était juste une remarque en fin de mod. Le fait que je n'aime pas les stream et que j'ai surement été beaucoup influencé par les 2 mapsets déja ranké à du altérer mon jugement. N'y prête pas trop attention

Nan, je pense que j'ai du pêter un cable, donc je l'enleve. Mais je sait pas si je vais refaire une extra.

Extra GD Welcome if you want ^w^

A 260 BPM les Insanes sont déjà assez dures comme ça! De plus, mapper des Extra quand on ne sait pas les jouer n'est jamais une super bonne idée. Certains mappeurs y arrive mais ils sont un peu plus expérimenté. Qui plus est, plus de diff = Mapset plus difficile à ranker. Deja qu'avec les taiko tu t'es tiré une bonne grosse balle dans le pied mieux vaut ne pas en rajouter ^^ Sinon je pourrais plus marcher xD

Ah ça oui, quand j'ai vu des maps bubbled de 17 SP, j'ai pleuré xD

Pour qu'une map soit bubbled elle doit remplir 2 conditions:
1) Avoir au moins 12 SP.
2) Avoir une qualité suffisante.
C'est tout ^^

Applied rezoons's mod (16/12/2013)

Dis comme ça, tout seul sur ta description, on dirait que tu n'as reçu qu'un seul mod. XD
Mieux vaut enlever complètement la phrase ^^ Si tu veut xD

Vaiment mille merci pour le mod ^w^

La dernière fois que j'ai fait ce genre de mod où je met un gros pavé et explique qu'il y a du remapping à faire la personne à qui je l'ai fait à complètement ragequit le beatmapping. Je suis content que non seulement tu l'es bien pris mais qu'en plus tu restes motivé. C'est le bon état d'esprit! Bah le mapping c'est un peu ma vie sur osu, et vu que faut juste ré-éditer quelques diff. c'est pas dramatique =3

rezoons wrote:

Je vais continuer l'édit de toutes les maps alors je pense ^w^ youpi c'est l'éclate
Les premières maps c'est souvent ça. La plupart des gens que je connaisse ont beaucoup edit leurs premières maps. genre Cherry qui vient enfin de ranker sa toute première map. Ben, la map ne ressemble en rien à ce qu'elle était au début tellement il a edit.