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Sako Tomohisa - Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size)

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Xinchii
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月29日 at 下午 10:54:31

Artist: Sako Tomohisa
Title: Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size)
Source: Zetsuen no Tempest
Tags: 絶園のテンペスト ending Shounen-T mintong89
BPM: 110
Filesize: 15228kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.49 stars, 88 notes)
  2. Hard (4.83 stars, 206 notes)
  3. mint's Normal (3.77 stars, 112 notes)
Download: Sako Tomohisa - Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size)
Download: Sako Tomohisa - Bokutachi no Uta (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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佐香智久 --- 僕たちの歌
絶園のテンペスト Ending 2
いつの日か 君と 「ほら運命だったね」って
一緒に 笑えるといいな

-----
Easy - by me
mint'normal - by mintong89
Hard - by me
mintong89
求给做Normal GD :D

Offset 是 1,239 哦~
Topic Starter
Xinchii

mintong89 wrote:

求给做Normal GD :D

Offset 是 1,239 哦~

喔喔~~Ok喔~~

不過我還是作圖新手
Rank可能會比較慢點

不介意的話歡迎喔~
ShiauKe
尼最好是新手
Topic Starter
Xinchii

ShiauKe wrote:

尼最好是新手
:roll:
RealCuT
gogo ;)
Topic Starter
Xinchii

121561995 wrote:

gogo ;)
:D
mintong89
做完了 0 0

http://puu.sh/22Il6

哦对了 还有一些要更改的~ (全部diff包括我的)

1. Lean-in Seconds 不放?
2. Countdown 和 Letterbox during breaks 去掉吧~
Topic Starter
Xinchii

mintong89 wrote:

做完了 0 0

http://puu.sh/22Il6

哦对了 还有一些要更改的~ (全部diff包括我的)

1. Lean-in Seconds 不放?
2. Countdown 和 Letterbox during breaks 去掉吧~
感謝~ :)

Lean-in Second 每個 Diff 我都插入1秒了
countdown 和 Letterbox during break 也去掉了 (雖然不太清楚 Letterbox during break 是什麼 :? )

Pending~
EmPao
卡位 射星 之後補mod :D
Flask
潛力圖 =w= 丟星 !
Topic Starter
Xinchii

EmPao wrote:

卡位 射星 之後補mod :D
先感謝star囉~~~

Flask wrote:

潛力圖 =w= 丟星 !
wow大器丟星星

感謝~ :D
qkenan
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. Tags: ending Shounen
    另外Easy和Hard的Tag里多了个空格(强迫症犯了无视就好


Easy

  1. 00:11:602 (3) - 首尾的锚点水平对齐
  2. 有些地方不是很齐,Grid level缩小点比较好做形状,快捷键G。或者干脆关了Grid snap

mint's Normal

  1. 01:05:875 (3) - 在这组NC里,直的slider比较好看

Hard

  1. 排列细节都还好,但是总体放不开,Ctrl+A一看,紧紧的一团notes……打起来也挺拘束。
    ar8在目前的排列下有点略快,-1试试?
    od-1,hpd感觉还成
  2. 00:07:239 (3) - NC
  3. 00:18:694 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五边形摆的不是很标准,关掉Grip Snap修排列
  4. 00:29:875 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉不要stack会好一些
  5. 01:02:875 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  6. 01:06:557 干脆再加一个circle做成长串,不过可能排列要动不少,所以随意吧
  7. 01:12:966 (4) - 改成直的?

Nice mapset,Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Xinchii

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. Tags: ending Shounen
    另外Easy和Hard的Tag里多了个空格(强迫症犯了无视就好

:arrow: fix~ 真的有空格耶lol

Easy

  1. 00:11:602 (3) - 首尾的锚点水平对齐
  2. 有些地方不是很齐,Grid level缩小点比较好做形状,快捷键G。或者干脆关了Grid snap

:arrow: Ok~ fix~

mint's Normal

  1. 01:05:875 (3) - 在这组NC里,直的slider比较好看

Hard

  1. 排列细节都还好,但是总体放不开,Ctrl+A一看,紧紧的一团notes……打起来也挺拘束。
    ar8在目前的排列下有点略快,-1试试? :arrow: fix~
    od-1,hpd感觉还成 :arrow: 我覺得OD6頗剛好耶0.0
  2. 00:07:239 (3) - NC :arrow: fix
  3. 00:18:694 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五边形摆的不是很标准,关掉Grip Snap修排列 :arrow: fix
  4. 00:29:875 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉不要stack会好一些 :arrow: fix
  5. 01:02:875 (1,2,3,4) - ^ :arrow: fix
  6. 01:06:557 干脆再加一个circle做成长串,不过可能排列要动不少,所以随意吧 :arrow: 這邊就沒修了
  7. 01:12:966 (4) - 改成直的? :arrow: 我覺得有一點點弧度比較漂亮w

Nice mapset,Good luck :)
Thanks your mod~~~ :)
mintong89
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ED2N.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 48421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Bokutachi no Uta (TV size)
TitleUnicode:僕たちの歌 (TV size)
Artist:Sako Tomohisa
ArtistUnicode:佐香智久
Creator:leon1341414
Version:mint's Normal
Source:Zetsuen no Tempest
Tags:絶園のテンペスト ending Shounen T mintong89
BeatmapID:220705
BeatmapSetID:78854

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"01.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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thanks~
Topic Starter
Xinchii
update~
qkenan
少年T的歌一直都这么治愈呢~

Starrrr~
Topic Starter
Xinchii

qkenan wrote:

少年T的歌一直都这么治愈呢~

Starrrr~
超喜歡他>w<

感謝星星~~~ :)
Cloudchaser


[General]
  1. Is this "絶園のテンペスト." necessary in tags?
[Hard]
  1. 00:46:239 (5) - decrease distance please.
[mint's Normal]
  1. 00:46:784 - at 00:48:420 - add a little breaktime I suggest ^^ ~
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:784 - add a note with clap
Good enough ovó)b
Sorry for my short mod, im a little busy
Topic Starter
Xinchii

-Cloudchaser wrote:



[General]
  1. Is this "絶園のテンペスト." necessary in tags?
will think about it.......

[Hard]
  1. 00:46:239 (5) - decrease distance please.
fix~

[mint's Normal]
  1. 00:46:784 - at 00:48:420 - add a little breaktime I suggest ^^ ~
[Easy]
  1. 00:13:784 - add a note with clap
fix~

Good enough ovó)b
Sorry for my short mod, im a little busy
That's ok

thanks your mod~
:)
ShiauKe
irc mod
07:48 ShiauKe: 00:13:784 (4,5,6,7) - 可以往右下角移
07:49 ShiauKe: 可以解決有點擠and 6,7有點hid noteㄉ問題
07:50 ShiauKe: 這首bpm110 .0.
07:50 ShiauKe: 可以2,3,4等距
07:52 ShiauKe: 00:33:694 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - 有點擠
07:53 ShiauKe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/639561
07:53 ShiauKe: 像這樣
07:54 ShiauKe: 00:59:875 (3) - 有點hid note
07:54 ShiauKe: 可以試試左上角
07:55 ShiauKe: 雖然我知道你要用三角形拉XDD
07:55 ShiauKe: 也可以00:59:329 (1,2,3) - 換ㄍ位置
07:55 ShiauKe: 這樣能保持你ㄉ三角形
07:57 ShiauKe: 01:06:693 (1) - 這要把Grid Level調成4才能對稱
07:59 ShiauKe: 可以用http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/117425 製作完美對稱的Slider Σ(=゚ω゚)ノ 這個技巧看有沒有對稱
07:59 ShiauKe: 其實也可以不用對稱拉 只是說說XDD 因為我處女座ww
08:00 ShiauKe: 應該沒啥問題了 我來看看音效o_O
08:01 ShiauKe: 00:09:966 (1) - finish
08:01 ShiauKe: 00:29:330 (4) - 長白線finish
08:02 ShiauKe: 哦對了 00:35:875 (2) - 聽起來像3連拍 看你要不要改
08:02 ShiauKe: 00:38:330 (3) - finish
08:03 ShiauKe: 00:42:693 (3) - finish
08:03 ShiauKe: 00:49:239 (1) - ^
08:04 ShiauKe: 01:06:693 (1) - ^
08:05 ShiauKe: end.
08:06 ShiauKe: 你把紫色1.2.3選起來 把3對到3
08:07 ShiauKe: 要是我的話 我會把3個三角形的3都用在同一點
08:07 ShiauKe: 給你參考._.
08:08 ShiauKe: 囧
08:09 ShiauKe: 我覺得00:24:966 (1,2,3,4) - 有點擠XD
08:10 ShiauKe: 恩
kelvinli
Hi again, from queue
[General]
01:06:693 - I suggest to make a re-kiai here.That means the kiai is cut and then re-added
[Hard]
00:02:875 (1,2) - swap NC
00:07:239 (1) - Maybe a finish @the end of the slider?
00:26:057 (4,7) - this overlap is weird, try something like this?
00:32:330 (4) - the deceleration is pointless IMO, and it still goes well without it; http://puu.sh/2fgXQ
00:33:694 (3,4) - You might want to move them to the left so it looks naturally with the slider
00:47:057 (1,4) - Finish?
00:49:239 (1) - There are lyrics on every 1/2 beat, so I think breaking it up into a slider+circle would be better
00:55:511 (1) - pointless deceleration
01:14:057 (3) - There are lyrics on every 1/2 beat, you could try this: http://puu.sh/2fhgE
01:16:239 (6) - finish?

A nice diff :)

[mint's Normal]
00:22:239 (1,2,3,4) - I don't dislike this, but this somehow looks better and smoother flow
00:26:057 (1) - end on 00:28:239?
00:57:966 (2) - This is nothing in the music to support the existent of the note.Delete it?
01:16:239 (2) - finish@the head?
01:24:966 (1) - starts on 01:24:284 like in Easy?

[Easy]
00:24:693 (3,4) - not a perfect blanket: http://puu.sh/2fhwr
00:31:784 (3,4) - you can make (3) curved then put (4) bottom-right to (3) so its flow is better: http://puu.sh/2fhA6
01:15:966 (3) - Finish@the end?

Nothing else to complain.Good Luck!~
Topic Starter
Xinchii

kelvinli wrote:

Hi again, from queue Hi see you again~~ :3
[General]
01:06:693 - I suggest to make a re-kiai here.That means the kiai is cut and then re-added Fix~
[Hard]
00:02:875 (1,2) - swap NC Fix
00:07:239 (1) - Maybe a finish @the end of the slider? Fix
00:26:057 (4,7) - this overlap is weird, try something like this? Fix
00:32:330 (4) - the deceleration is pointless IMO, and it still goes well without it; http://puu.sh/2fgXQ Umm......reserve This suggestion. I will think about it
00:33:694 (3,4) - You might want to move them to the left so it looks naturally with the slider Fix~
00:47:057 (1,4) - Finish? Because I want make this part no hitsound , so I have not add finsh :?
00:49:239 (1) - There are lyrics on every 1/2 beat, so I think breaking it up into a slider+circle would be better I
follow sound of durm here......but I will reserve This suggestion. I will think about it

00:55:511 (1) - pointless deceleration Reserve This suggestion too.
01:14:057 (3) - There are lyrics on every 1/2 beat, you could try this: http://puu.sh/2fhgE This part I think I will not fix , sorry. because there is no sound of durm , I feel .........
But I will look about it too.

01:16:239 (6) - finish? Fix~

A nice diff :)

[mint's Normal]
00:22:239 (1,2,3,4) - I don't dislike this, but this somehow looks better and smoother flow
00:26:057 (1) - end on 00:28:239?
00:57:966 (2) - This is nothing in the music to support the existent of the note.Delete it?
01:16:239 (2) - finish@the head?
01:24:966 (1) - starts on 01:24:284 like in Easy?

[Easy]
00:24:693 (3,4) - not a perfect blanket: http://puu.sh/2fhwr
00:31:784 (3,4) - you can make (3) curved then put (4) bottom-right to (3) so its flow is better: http://puu.sh/2fhA6
01:15:966 (3) - Finish@the end?

Easy diff all fix. :)

Nothing else to complain.Good Luck!~
Thanks your nice mod~~ :)
Topic Starter
Xinchii

ShiauKe wrote:

irc mod
07:48 ShiauKe: 00:13:784 (4,5,6,7) - 可以往右下角移
07:49 ShiauKe: 可以解決有點擠and 6,7有點hid noteㄉ問題
07:50 ShiauKe: 這首bpm110 .0.
07:50 ShiauKe: 可以2,3,4等距
07:52 ShiauKe: 00:33:694 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - 有點擠
07:53 ShiauKe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/639561
07:53 ShiauKe: 像這樣
07:54 ShiauKe: 00:59:875 (3) - 有點hid note
07:54 ShiauKe: 可以試試左上角
07:55 ShiauKe: 雖然我知道你要用三角形拉XDD
07:55 ShiauKe: 也可以00:59:329 (1,2,3) - 換ㄍ位置
07:55 ShiauKe: 這樣能保持你ㄉ三角形
07:57 ShiauKe: 01:06:693 (1) - 這要把Grid Level調成4才能對稱
07:59 ShiauKe: 可以用http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/117425 製作完美對稱的Slider Σ(=゚ω゚)ノ 這個技巧看有沒有對稱
07:59 ShiauKe: 其實也可以不用對稱拉 只是說說XDD 因為我處女座ww
08:00 ShiauKe: 應該沒啥問題了 我來看看音效o_O
08:01 ShiauKe: 00:09:966 (1) - finish
08:01 ShiauKe: 00:29:330 (4) - 長白線finish
08:02 ShiauKe: 哦對了 00:35:875 (2) - 聽起來像3連拍 看你要不要改
08:02 ShiauKe: 00:38:330 (3) - finish
08:03 ShiauKe: 00:42:693 (3) - finish
08:03 ShiauKe: 00:49:239 (1) - ^
08:04 ShiauKe: 01:06:693 (1) - ^
08:05 ShiauKe: end.
08:06 ShiauKe: 你把紫色1.2.3選起來 把3對到3
08:07 ShiauKe: 要是我的話 我會把3個三角形的3都用在同一點
08:07 ShiauKe: 給你參考._.
08:08 ShiauKe: 囧
08:09 ShiauKe: 我覺得00:24:966 (1,2,3,4) - 有點擠XD
08:10 ShiauKe: 恩
三角型窩決定不fix了w


這樣感覺也很U fu ._.
mintong89
fixed some :D

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Topic Starter
Xinchii
Update~
Natsu
Hi from my Queue

General
  • Clean
Easy:

  • 00:03:420 (3) - try to make it more curved for better blanck with (2) actually look really bad
    If you want the code:
    208,192,2875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    199,299,3420,2,0,B|278:298|303:232|303:232|330:262|358:280,1,180
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    00:09:966 add finish like you did in the other diffs
    00:11:602 x:219 y:273 for better flow
    00:19:784 x:262 y:247 to be perfect in line with previous slider (nazi)
    00:20:875 x:423 y:147 to fix distance error
    00:24:693 x:219 y:229 for be in line with previous and better blank with nex and to fix a little distance too
    00:29:602 Finish fit with music
    00:33:966 ^
    00:33:966 (1,2,3,4) - distance is a little wrong here fix it plz
    00:38:329 add finish like you did in the others diffs
    00:42:693 ^
    00:42:693 (1,2,3) - distance is a little worng here
    00:45:966 this can be confuse for easy maybe delete one repeat and add a circle or convert it in 2 sliders?
    00:49:239 add finish here like the others diff
    00:57:966 finish fit better imo
    01:02:329 (5,1,2,3,4) - fix distance plz
    01:06:693 add finish since kiai start here
    01:14:602 (1,2,3) - a little distance error
    01:22:511 can you map that part cuz is realy confuse a new playyer can think all finish here 01:21:148
    01:21:148 finish in the tail
    spinner should finish here 01:26:875
Mint Normal:

  • 00:42:693 add finish fit good with music
    01:02:329 finish fit better here
    00:18:693 (1,2) - make they in perfect line?
    00:20:602 (3,4,1) - distance is not the same here
    00:28:784 too early after spin imo
    01:22:511 i think should map this part
    well no much to mod here map dessign is nice but i dint understand your hitsound pattern maybe im baka T-T
Hard:

  • 00:29:602 add finish fit with music
    00:30:148 (2,3,4) - this part look better in this way:
    00:33:966 finish
    00:57:966 finish fit better imo
    01:00:966 (3,1) - i think the distance here is too long just my opinion
    01:02:329 finish like the other diffs
    01:21:420 finish i the tail
    spinner should finish here 01:26:875
Nice map hope i help you in something
Topic Starter
Xinchii

Natsu wrote:

Hi from my Queue

General
  • Clean
Easy:

  • 00:03:420 (3) - try to make it more curved for better blanck with (2) actually look really bad
    If you want the code:
    208,192,2875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    199,299,3420,2,0,B|278:298|303:232|303:232|330:262|358:280,1,180
    435,219,4784,6,0,P|363:171|331:83,1,180
    Fix~
    00:09:966 add finish like you did in the other diffs Fix~
    00:11:602 x:219 y:273 for better flow Fix~
    00:19:784 x:262 y:247 to be perfect in line with previous slider (nazi) Fix~
    00:20:875 x:423 y:147 to fix distance error Fix~
    00:24:693 x:219 y:229 for be in line with previous and better blank with nex and to fix a little distance too Fix~
    00:29:602 Finish fit with music Fix~
    00:33:966 ^ ^
    00:33:966 (1,2,3,4) - distance is a little wrong here fix it plz Fix~
    00:38:329 add finish like you did in the others diffs Fix~
    00:42:693 ^ ^
    00:42:693 (1,2,3) - distance is a little worng here Fix~
    00:45:966 this can be confuse for easy maybe delete one repeat and add a circle or convert it in 2 sliders? change to 2 slider~~
    00:49:239 add finish here like the others diff Fix~
    00:57:966 finish fit better imo Fix~
    01:02:329 (5,1,2,3,4) - fix distance plz Fix~
    01:06:693 add finish since kiai start here Fix~
    01:14:602 (1,2,3) - a little distance error Fix~
    01:22:511 can you map that part cuz is realy confuse a new playyer can think all finish here 01:21:148 Fix~
    01:21:148 finish in the tail Fix~
    spinner should finish here 01:26:875 Fix~
Mint Normal:

  • 00:42:693 add finish fit good with music
    01:02:329 finish fit better here
    00:18:693 (1,2) - make they in perfect line?
    00:20:602 (3,4,1) - distance is not the same here
    00:28:784 too early after spin imo
    01:22:511 i think should map this part
    well no much to mod here map dessign is nice but i dint understand your hitsound pattern maybe im baka T-T
Hard:

  • 00:29:602 add finish fit with music Fix~
    00:30:148 (2,3,4) - this part look better in this way:
    Fix~
    00:33:966 finish Fix~
    00:57:966 finish fit better imo Fix~
    01:00:966 (3,1) - i think the distance here is too long just my opinion
    I make this part step-by-step distance , but I think here is not too far to hit.

    01:02:329 finish like the other diffs Fix~
    01:21:420 finish i the tail Fix~
    spinner should finish here 01:26:875 Fix~
Nice map hope i help you in something
awesome mod.

Help a lot , thanks~~~
:)
mintong89
fixed thanks :)

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MineC24
Modding queue~
(Sorry. I'm late :( )

Easy
OD - 1

00:20:875 (4) - remove slider point
00:26:466 (1) - spin start change (00:26:466 -> 00:26:602 )
00:47:057 (1) - add spin (00:47:057 ~ 00:48:148 )
01:24:284 (1) - spin start change (01:24:284 -> 01:24:420 )

mint's Normal
00:47:057 ~ 00:47:875 - add note or slider...

Hard
00:40:784 (1) - remove NC

Nice map :D
GL :)
Topic Starter
Xinchii

MineC24 wrote:

Modding queue~
(Sorry. I'm late :( )

Easy
OD - 1

00:20:875 (4) - remove slider point
00:26:466 (1) - spin start change (00:26:466 -> 00:26:602 )
00:47:057 (1) - add spin (00:47:057 ~ 00:48:148 )
01:24:284 (1) - spin start change (01:24:284 -> 01:24:420 )
All fix~
mint's Normal
00:47:057 ~ 00:47:875 - add note or slider...

Hard
00:40:784 (1) - remove NC
Fix~
Nice map :D
GL :)
Thanks your mod~ :)
Topic Starter
Xinchii
Update~ :)
mintong89
@MineC24: nope, it need break

没变 ~
Topic Starter
Xinchii
Add video ~
Yuki-kun
Hi~
From my queue.~ :D

General

Nothing here~ :3

My Mod

[mint's normal]
00:30:693 (4,5) - You can improve this part for better flow like this (example)

00:45:420 (2) - Boring pattern :o
01:05:602 - Add note here. I feel somehow it's so empty
01:24:148 (1) - Change into a slider and end at 01:24:693

[Hard]
00:38:330 (3,4) - Wrong distance :o
00:49:239 (1,2) - Bad flow. Try to make it better.

[Easy]
00:17:057 - Add a note.
00:22:511 - ^
00:51:966 (4) - Reapeat one more
01:09:420 (4) - ^

Nice song. Good luck~ <3
mintong89
fixed thanks

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: ED2N.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 48421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Bokutachi no Uta (TV size)
TitleUnicode:僕たちの歌 (TV size)
Artist:Sako Tomohisa
ArtistUnicode:佐香智久
Creator:leon1341414
Version:mint's Normal
Source:Zetsuen no Tempest
Tags:絶園のテンペスト ending Shounen T mintong89
BeatmapID:220705
BeatmapSetID:78854

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"01.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Bokutachi no Uta.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Topic Starter
Xinchii

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
From my queue.~ :D

General

Nothing here~ :3

My Mod

[mint's normal]
00:30:693 (4,5) - You can improve this part for better flow like this (example)

00:45:420 (2) - Boring pattern :o
01:05:602 - Add note here. I feel somehow it's so empty
01:24:148 (1) - Change into a slider and end at 01:24:693

[Hard]
00:38:330 (3,4) - Wrong distance :o
00:49:239 (1,2) - Bad flow. Try to make it better.

[Easy]
00:17:057 - Add a note.
00:22:511 - ^
00:51:966 (4) - Reapeat one more
01:09:420 (4) - ^

Nice song. Good luck~ <3
All fix~

Thanks your mod ~
:)
DingGGu
Hello, From DingGGu's Modding Queue!

[General]

[Easy]
  1. Very Good! no more mod
[mint's Normal]
  1. 01:22:511 - No more Circle? why not add any beats try to long slide


[Hard]
  1. 00:12:421 (1) - NC
  2. 00:34:512 (6) - copy 00:33:966 (5) -
  3. 00:40:511 (2) - I Think Add note will be better
  4. 00:51:420 (5,6,7,8) - try it like this

Topic Starter
Xinchii

DingGGu wrote:

Hello, From DingGGu's Modding Queue!

[General]

[Easy]
  1. Very Good! no more mod
[mint's Normal]
  1. 01:22:511 - No more Circle? why not add any beats try to long slide


[Hard]
  1. 00:12:421 (1) - NC a little bit strange , so not fix here
  2. 00:34:512 (6) - copy 00:33:966 (5) - fix
  3. 00:40:511 (2) - I Think Add note will be better fix
  4. 00:51:420 (5,6,7,8) - try it like this seens little strange on rhythm.......


Thanks your mod ~ :)
Oyatsu
hi, from my modding queue,
<EASY>
Perfect ^^
<NORMAL>
00:13:511 (5) - Add a circle ( rhythm is sensible as I think)
00:36:148 (4) - No need NC
00:24:966 (7) - Can you make as: http://puu.sh/2DCLL.jpg
01:21:693 (4,1) - Why does between them have a empty? Add note ( I see it isn't good here)
<HARD>
00:03:421 (2) - No NC
00:48:420 (1,2,3) - Please, distance snap
01:08:602 (5) - In the same lyrics, so No NC
01:22:784 (1,2,3,4) - Distance snap

I like this map very much. I hope it will rank soon! Shoot a star!
neonat
Some minor suggestions

Hard

00:35:875 (2) - make it 1/4 beat rhythm?
00:42:557 - add a note
01:10:102 - ^
01:22:239 - ^
Topic Starter
Xinchii

Loki-san wrote:

hi, from my modding queue,
<EASY>
Perfect ^^

<HARD>
00:03:421 (2) - No NC :arrow: I remove 00:02:875- 's NC seens easier to read
00:48:420 (1,2,3) - Please, distance snap :arrow: deliberately here
01:08:602 (5) - In the same lyrics, so No NC :arrow: Fix~
01:22:784 (1,2,3,4) - Distance snap :arrow: OK~

I like this map very much. I hope it will rank soon! Shoot a star!

Glad you like it . and thanks star ~ :)
Topic Starter
Xinchii

neonat wrote:

Some minor suggestions

Hard

00:35:875 (2) - make it 1/4 beat rhythm? :arrow: Umm.....seens a little sudden on this part's rhythm , so not fix here sorry....
00:42:557 - add a note :arrow: fixing
01:10:102 - ^ :arrow: fix here
01:22:239 - ^
:arrow: fix~
Topic Starter
Xinchii

neonat wrote:

Some minor suggestions

Hard

00:35:875 (2) - make it 1/4 beat rhythm? :arrow: Umm.....seens a little sudden on this part's rhythm , so not fix here sorry....
00:42:557 - add a note :arrow: fixing
01:10:102 - ^ :arrow: fix here
01:22:239 - ^ :arrow: fix~
Thanks your suggestions :)
creampuff
Yo~ Mod request from my queue.

[General]
Make the overall volume higher. I can barely hear anything :<

[Easy]
00:26:329 - 00:26:602 (5,1) I wouldn't recommend doing this. If you're going to place a spinner at this point, remove 00:26:329 (5) and place the spinner there instead. End the spinner at 00:28:511.
00:37:784 - Place a note here? It feels empty.
00:42:148 - ^
00:53:057 - ^
01:00:966 - 01:01:784 (1,2) This is quite unfitting. Try something like this instead.01:05:057 (4) Also unfitting. Just remove the repeat.
01:06:148 - Add note here
01:10:511 - ^
01:24:420 (1) Make this spinner silent.

[mint's Normal]
Hey~
00:26:057 (1) End spinner at 00:27:420 instead?
01:23:602 - Add note here?
01:24:966 (1) Like in the easy, make this silent.

[Hard]
00:09:966 - 00:11:057 (1,2,3) Flow's not good here. Flip 00:11:057 (3) horizontally so it flows better with 00:09:966 (1)
00:58:784 - Ctrl + H
01:14:057 (3) Try to stack the tail with 01:12:966 (4) 's tail. It'll look better
01:16:784 - 01:17:329 (1,2,3) Again, doesn't flow very well. Flip 01:17:329 (3) horizontally.
01:25:102 (1) Silent

I love this song~ So good luck!
luxoDeh
Hi! mod from my queue

EASY

00:07:239 (3) - move this one grid right to be alligned with 00:06:420 (2) -
00:53:057 - maybe add a note here or make something like this 01:24:420 (1) - make this silent

NORMAL

00:26:057 (1) - maybe make this spinner end at 00:28:239 -
00:47:057 - maybe add a spinner here? like in easy diff

HARD

00:01:239 - in this first part of the diff I feel strange with hitsounds, maybe use soft sound somewhere is better
00:25:921 (3) - maybe delete this note, in my opinion it sounds better
00:50:057 (2,3,4) - maybe try to do something like this if you want 00:50:875 (4) - make this slider end at 00:51:420 -
00:58:784 (3) - maybe move the last pont of the slider one grid down to make it be in the middle of the two notes

that's all. well the map is good and good luck for rank ^.^ I'll also give you a star :)
Topic Starter
Xinchii

Tsusuko wrote:

Yo~ Mod request from my queue.

[General]
Make the overall volume higher. I can barely hear anything :<

[Easy]
00:26:329 - 00:26:602 (5,1) I wouldn't recommend doing this. If you're going to place a spinner at this point, remove 00:26:329 (5) and place the spinner there instead. End the spinner at 00:28:511.
00:37:784 - Place a note here? It feels empty.
00:42:148 - ^
00:53:057 - ^ here not fix
01:00:966 - 01:01:784 (1,2) This is quite unfitting. Try something like this instead.01:05:057 (4) Also unfitting. Just remove the repeat.
01:06:148 - Add note here
01:10:511 - ^
01:24:420 (1) Make this spinner silent.

Other all fix ~ :)

[Hard]
00:09:966 - 00:11:057 (1,2,3) Flow's not good here. Flip 00:11:057 (3) horizontally so it flows better with 00:09:966 (1) Here not fix , sorry
00:58:784 - Ctrl + H This part is deliberately , so I did'n fix here , but a little adjustment
01:14:057 (3) Try to stack the tail with 01:12:966 (4) 's tail. It'll look better
01:16:784 - 01:17:329 (1,2,3) Again, doesn't flow very well. Flip 01:17:329 (3) horizontally.
01:25:102 (1) Silent

Other all fix~

I love this song~ So good luck!
Thanks your mod ~ :)
mintong89
久等了!!

fix some thanks~

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 48421
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:僕たちの歌 (TV size)
Artist:Sako Tomohisa
ArtistUnicode:佐香智久
Creator:leon1341414
Version:mint's Normal
Source:Zetsuen no Tempest
Tags:絶園のテンペスト ending Shounen T mintong89
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Topic Starter
Xinchii

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! mod from my queue

EASY

00:07:239 (3) - move this one grid right to be alligned with 00:06:420 (2) -
00:53:057 - maybe add a note here or make something like this 01:24:420 (1) - make this silent

Easy all fix ~~ :)

HARD

00:01:239 - in this first part of the diff I feel strange with hitsounds, maybe use soft sound somewhere is better
00:25:921 (3) - maybe delete this note, in my opinion it sounds better
00:50:057 (2,3,4) - maybe try to do something like this if you want 00:50:875 (4) - make this slider end at 00:51:420 - Here not fix.
00:58:784 (3) - maybe move the last pont of the slider one grid down to make it be in the middle of the two notes

Hard others are all fix.

that's all. well the map is good and good luck for rank ^.^ I'll also give you a star :)
Thanks your mod and star ~ :)
Topic Starter
Xinchii
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