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Kalafina - Lacrimosa

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HarryOrunitia
289 posts
Joined August 2008
HarryOrunitia
Lol@Kyo's post XD

By the way °w°

Normal:
00:40:95 (6) - Questo lo farei più lungo di 1/4, facendolo finire al segno bianco. Vedi come ti suona meglio
01:16:73 (2,3) - Questi li sposterei di 1/4 indietro, andrebbero rispettivamente uno sul rosso ed uno sul bianco
01:44:94 (5,6) - Questi non sono snappati, metti il 5 sul segno blu e il 6 sul segno rosso
01:52:44 (2,3,4) - Non snappati, mettili tutti e tre sui segni rossi

Hard:
00:17:51 (3) - La fine non è snappata, dovresti allungarlo fino al segno bianco
00:38:45 (1) - ^
00:45:79 (1) - Fallo iniziare 1/4 dopo, al segno bianco, e metti a posto la fine, non è snappata (dovrebbe finire al segno bianco)
00:55:29 (6) - Non snappato (segno bianco)
00:59:11 (7) - Non snappato, e fallo finire al segno bianco (01:00:018)
01:11:26 (1) - La fine non è snappata, di nuovo, fallo finire al segno bianco (01:11:581)
01:11:97 (2,3) - Spostali di 1/4 avanti, rispettivamente al rosso e al bianco
01:16:65 (3,4) - ^

I'll wait before modding Henkie's, and I'll check it again once you'll fix these things and you'll finish the hard difficulty.
You already have my star ^w^
Henkie
728 posts
Joined July 2008
Henkie
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
HarryOrunitia
289 posts
Joined August 2008
HarryOrunitia
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Henkie
728 posts
Joined July 2008
Henkie

HarryOrunitia wrote:

HenkieBP wrote:

HarryOrunitia wrote:

I'll wait before modding Henkie's, and I'll check it again once you'll fix these things and you'll finish the hard difficulty.
You just want to earn extra kudos D:< Ill mod my own

[Henkie's]
PERFETTO

done :) kudos plz ( xD kidding )
You just want to hear me say "PERFETTO", so I won't mod yours D:
That's a good thing? xD

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HarryOrunitia
289 posts
Joined August 2008
HarryOrunitia
Yes Henkie, I've just told you your map is already perfect ._."""

Anyway, I've checked it again, and I noticed I actually overlooked some things before ç_ç"
So...

Normal:
00:19:70 (8) - Questo lo allungherei di 1/4, al segno rosso.
00:27:90 (7,8) - Non sono snappati, il 7 va sul blu e l'8 sul rosso
01:12:04 (3) - Non è snappato, dovrebbe finire al segno bianco
01:02:83 (1) - Questa è una cosa soggettiva, ma io lo farei finire al segno bianco prima, o a quello dopo.
02:08:45 (1) - Anche questo è soggettivo, ma io lo farei finire 2/4 prima (segno bianco). Vedi tu, ovviamente ^^
02:12:83 (1) - Ricordati di mettere un break subito dopo!

Hard:
00:14:55 - 00:16:90 Questo pezzo è vuoto, potresti riempirlo con uno spinner o uno slider, o metterci un break.
00:31:74 - 00:34:55 ^
00:59:11 (7) - Non snappato, fallo partire al segno bianco 00:59:081, allungalo di 1/4 facendolo finire al segno bianco 01:00:018 (Già detto nel post precedente, probabilmente ti sei scordata di correggerlo :P)

Henkie's:
PERFETTO :P
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
Hi :D
[Normal] DS - 1.6x (2x BPM - 0.8x)
  • 00:22:83 (4) - Spacing
    00:27:98 (7,8) - Align vertically with slider's end - (6)
    00:30:64 (3) - Spacing and after changing align (4) with (3)
    00:39:70 (3) - Spacing
    00:40:95 (6) - Spacing
    00:45:01 (3) - Spacing
    00:49:08 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing
    00:57:04 (2,3) - Spacing
    00:58:14 (4) - New combo
    01:00:64 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing
    01:04:39 (2,3,4) - Spacing
    01:06:58 (5) - Spacing and align vertically with slider's end - (4)
    01:12:04 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing
    01:13:45 (5,6,7) - Spacing
    01:16:73 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing
    01:40:01 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing
    01:44:08 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing
    01:53:14 (3,4) - Spacing
    02:01:58 (2) - Spacing
    02:02:51 (5) - Spacing
    02:35:64 (4,5) - Spacing
[Hard] (You said Hard isn't finished yet, but I'll mod it :)) DS - 1.3x (2x BPM - 0.7x)
  • 00:10:01 (3) - Spacing
    00:10:79 (5,6,7) - Spacing
    00:12:51 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing
    00:17:36 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing
    00:21:26 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing
    00:25:95 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Spacing
    00:30:64 (5) - Spacing
    00:35:64 (2,3,4) - Spacing
    00:39:39 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing
    00:43:14 (1,1,2) - I prefer normal spacing here
    00:49:39 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing
    00:50:33 (4,6) - Imperfect stacking, stack it manually
    00:53:14 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing
    00:57:04 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing
    00:58:14 (4) - New combo here
    01:00:95 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing
    01:04:39 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing
    01:08:14 (2,3,5) - Spacing
    01:12:05 (2,3) - Spacing
    01:13:14 (4) - New combo here
    01:13:45 (5) - Spacing
    01:16:26 (2,3,4) - Spacing
    01:18:61 (2,3,4) - Spacing
    01:40:95 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Spacing
    01:43:76 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Spacing
    01:45:01 (5) - Imperfect stacking
    01:47:83 (2) - Stacking
    01:48:45 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing
    01:51:89 (4,5,7) - Spacing
    01:57:83 (2,3) - Spacing
    01:59:39 (2,3,4) - Spacing
    02:05:64 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing
    02:10:33 (2,3) - Spacing
    02:27:51 (2,3,4,5,6,7,9) - Spacing
    02:31:58 (2) - Align vertically with slider's end - (1)
    02:31:58 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing
    02:34:39 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing
    02:38:45 (2,3,4) - Spacing
    02:40:33 (2) - Spacing
    02:41:89 (1) - Hidden by (2)
    03:04:39 (2,3,5,6,7,8) - Spacing
    03:08:14 (2,3,4) - Spacing
    03:13:14 (4,5,6,7) - Spacing
    03:16:73 (4,5) - Spacing
    03:18:14 (2,3,4) - Spacing
Ehh... I got a real headache after modding this :(

[Henkie's] You're my only hope Henkie! D:
Gratz! D: I couldn't find anything seriously bad. Only one this is this, you could make smaller hitcircles. :3
-----------------AFTER ALL-----------------
I'll give you after fixing.
-----------------------------------------------
Here's
Kyocciola
146 posts
Joined November 2008
Kyocciola
Normal
00:31:26 (4) - 1 a sinistra
01:12:04 (3) - prova a vedere se accorciandola al segno bianco ti suona meglio


Hard
01:40:95 (6) - new combo
02:05:33 (?) - maybe aggiungi una nota qui?
02:12:20 (1) - 1 a destra
02:53:45 (1) - 1 a sinistra
02:57:20 (1,1,1) - 1 su
02:59:08 (1,1) - 1 a sinistra
03:14:08 (7) - vedi se ti suona meglio allungandola al segno bianco dopo... anche se non è necessario, a me sembra meglio


Henkie's
Ok.


And finally.... Starred~!
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Zodiark1020
Bellissima la musica, e divertente la beatmap, nn sn bravo a moddare quindi: Star'd^^
Henkie
728 posts
Joined July 2008
Henkie
Wow, my difficulty really is good from the beginning? (except for the "doesnt sound good":P) that's a first xD cool
thx guys
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
Hi it's me again! :D
[Normal]
  • 00:39:39 (2) - Stack it manually (Disable Grid Snap, Distance Snap and then align.)
    00:44:08 (2) - Align vertially with slider's end - (1) - and then also move (3)
    00:55:33 (5) - Align with slider's end - (4)
    00:57:04 (2,3) - Spacing
    01:00:64 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing
    01:44:86 (5,6,7) - Spacing
    02:12:67 (1) - Should start at - 02:12:674 - and end at - 02:19:706
    02:35:64 (4,5) - Spacing
[Hard]
  • 00:17:20 (1,2,3) - Spacing
    00:45:01 (2) - Align vertically with slider's end - (1)
    02:12:518 - I suggest to add note here (New combo etc.)
    02:12:67 (1) - Should start at - 02:12:674 - and end at - 02:19:706
    02:35:64 (4,5) - Spacing
Wow, it looks much better now :) .
HarryOrunitia
289 posts
Joined August 2008
HarryOrunitia
Normal:
Non ho notato alcun errore :D

Hard:
00:24:70 (1,2,3,4,5) - Non mi piace lo stack qui, le vedrei meglio posizionate a stream
00:55:29 (6) - Non snappato, mettilo al segno bianco
01:39:70 (1,2,3,4,5) - Come 00:24:70
01:57:83 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Forse questo pezzo è un po' noiosetto?
02:34:70 (3) - Questo slider potrebbe essere più simmetrico rispetto al (4)
03:28:14 (4) - Questo se vuoi fallo finire al segno bianco prima, così eviti anche il "pallino" quasi alla fine.
03:28:92 (5) - Allinealo con il (6) se vuoi
03:30:95 (1) - Come 03:28:14 (4)
03:41:89 (1) - Spostalo di un quadratino a destra con la grid 3

Henkie's:
01:05:64 (4) - Wooh, I hadn't noticed this one before, but it's actually kind of ugly. You could try making it look like 01:04:70 (3), or you could just copy and flip (3) directly. I just don't like how asymmetrical it looks at the moment.


Other personal advices you can totally ignore (XD):
-Yumiko, your [Hard] feels kinda empty in some parts. You could add some beats to it, especially some more sliders.
-I noticed [Normal] has a slider tickrate of 2, while [Hard] has only 1. Maybe you just didn't notice it, or maybe you want it like this, but I think that tickrate 2 is better for this song.
-Henkie, I'd go for smaller circles in your difficulty. [Henkie's] is way harder than [Hard], but your circles are much bigger.
vytalibus
osu! Alumni
870 posts
Joined May 2008
vytalibus
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Yumiko
505 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Yumiko
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Henkie
728 posts
Joined July 2008
Henkie
We pwn x3, c'mon someone rank it D: xD please <3
and bubble mine while you're at it (signature) /me flees
deepsea
osu! Alumni
855 posts
Joined April 2008
deepsea
Everything is good, good song, good map, good bg, I like this all except the dark blue note color, it makes my eyes hurt D:

If there isn't a reason to use it, I suggest change it.


EDIT:Fixed, ranked.
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
why isn't kuroshitsuji and black butler in tags ;~;?
Yumiko
505 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Yumiko
I'm sorry i didn't think of that ç_ç
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Don't worry, now they're on Tags ;)
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
:) Yay Beuchi! <3
Yumiko
505 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Yumiko
Thank you Beuchi :D
Daebutt
5 posts
Joined July 2017
Daebutt
How is it normal when you lose with two mistakes? -.-
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