Muya wrote:

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00:56:788 (3) - 1/4 snap is right (if you fix, dont forget spacing fix too) fixed
01:04:188 (3) - add whistke to end? added
01:09:588 (1) - ^ to beginning? added
01:17:588 - add note here, or 01:17:688 (1) - start at 01:17:588 and resnap section length increased + resnapped

Muya wrote:

[Hyper-Rj]
01:04:388 (1) - add whistle to beginning (and slide?) There is finish here :O

Kite wrote:

[Hyper]
Somewhat hard for a Hyper diff, you could tone it down by mapping similar things that you have done here 00:41:188 (2,1) - for example If MATs or BATs say that it's unrankable, I'll tone it down :<
00:19:988 (1,2,1,2) - It's kinda weird having only the ends of these sliders silenced and not the later ones too, you should either silence all ends to similar sections or silence none to keep it consistent IMO Oh, I had sections from Another, so... But fixed it
01:11:588 - Why is the return silenced? It lands perfectly on a beat in the song so there should be no reason to reduce the volume to 5% same as above, but fixed too :3

Kite wrote:

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00:37:388 - I think silencing the slider-end here is uncalled for oops, i forgot to remove some of Natteke's timing sections, now fixed.
00:52:588 (2) - Whistle here? sure
00:58:388 (1) - Add a whistle to slider-start? added
01:01:188 (1,2) - Add whistles to slider-end? done
01:03:188 (1) - Whistle? yes
01:04:788 (1) - ^ at start and end ok
01:07:588 (1,2) - ^ at ends accepted

ampzz wrote:

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1. 00:42:388 (1,2) - Would like for these two to combo into each other nicer than what they are currently. curved (2,3)
2. 00:55:988 (2) - Suggestion for this would be to just use a 1/1 slider as the hold time feels weird and there isn't enough emphasis on the downbeat. i'll probably need to consult natteke about this. personally, i'm fine with both ways.
3. 01:01:988 (2,3) - This I feel would be better as a combination like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:08:388 (2,3) - Same as above. it sounds ok, but i tried and i don't see where i can squeeze in those 1/2 sliders :<

Good work on the structure for this.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

The reason your land is getting bombed by meteorites is cause you make too awesome maps and its not fair.

Nemis wrote:

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00:13:588 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/23bI3 ?
moved a bit to the left but not much since i don't like how close they are on your screenshot.
00:43:588 (2) - I think that if you change the form with something more creative this slider would be better (a different slider in this point is good! something like http://puu.sh/23bN2 ? changed shape from C to S. without red joints though.
00:48:788 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/23bNR ?
moved down slightly, but not too much. don't like them being too close.
00:58:388 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/23bOB ?
keeping as it is. don't know why but i like how these two not-too-identical sliders look like together =\
01:08:388 (2) - You should make this slider with the same inclination of 01:08:388 (2) -
i adjusted it a bit, but i don't want them to be 100% parallel.

happy30 wrote:

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- Raise OD by 1 or 2 OD TO THE MAXXX (+1)

some patterns break your consistent 1.00x spacing:
00:45:588 (1) - Too close to to (3) oh, right, i was changing the slider shape before and forgot to fox spacing :<
01:09:588 (1) - too far from (3) don't know how this happened, fixed.

00:46:788 (3) - add clap on start? i kinda want to keep it as part of 00:45:588 (1,2,3) so i'd like to have no clap there if possible

TicClick wrote:

Я поздно, но так или иначе, тут нечего модить. Единственное, что бросилось в уши, -- 00:50:588 (1,2) на последней дифке, потому что в треке на этом месте трипл.

1. if you are having troubles understanding my suggestions, forum PM me or contact me in game and i will explain so you can understand :3
2. There is really no need to use 1.6 SV. Please use 1.4 SV, makes the map so much easier to read.
3. OD+1, OD5 seems low cause you use OD5 in muzukashii/futsuu.
4. 00:21:388 (2) - I would recommend a don here instead of a kat for variety, it sounds pretty good too. This is because you have a kat on 00:22:988 (2) and that part fits much more to have a kat on than this one here, and they sound a bit different. Also because the upcoming downbeat has a kat instead of a don too.
5. 00:27:788 (2) - Same thing as above. (for the repeating part that comes afterwards, it's fine to have all kats though, it's for variety after all)

1. In general this is a bit too hard for a muzukashii, regardless of the BPM. Some of the patterns are just too hard.
   

   Firce777 wrote:

   I think this diff is more like easier oni, but still nice

   ^ Totally agree, should use some adjustments. You will still have some ddk patterns, but a lot should be changed to ddd imo. It is also very important to make it easier because currently there is a too big gap between futsuu and muzukashii, and reducing the difficulty will help a lot.
2. 00:20:988 (1) - Would recommend to change to a don. ddk this early in a muzukashii (and quite often) is a bit hard.
3. 00:23:388 (2) - I would recommend to remove this note because there is no beat in the music. It would be easier to hit the remaining notes.
4. 00:25:788 (1) - Would also recommend a change to don. It sounds just as good and reduces the difficulty a bit.
5. 00:27:688 (3) - This note should not be here. The melody was at 00:27:488, not here. Might want to move it there or just remove.
6. 00:30:388 (1) - Change to don. There is nothing special in the music here to have ddk, not in a muzukashii at least.
7. 00:30:788 (2) - It would be nice to have a kat here because of high pitched melody and the drum hit.
8. 00:32:588 (1) - I would also recommend a don here, just to reduce the difficulty a bit. There are a lot of streams already and 150 BPM isn't that slow to have so many different patterns in a muzu. :3
9. 00:33:788 (1) - ^
10. 00:38:588 (1) - ^
11. 00:43:188 (1) - Change this to a kat. It sounds better and reduces the difficulty.
12. 00:47:988 (3,4,1,2,1) - This is too hard. kkddk is way too hard for a muzukashii. You need to change this. I would recommend ddddk but see if you can think of something better here.
13. 01:02:988 (1) - Change to kat, it's too hard like this. It sounds better as a kat too, because the next note is a downbeat with a don.
14. 01:09:288 (1) - Also change to kat please.

1. 00:29:588 (1,1,1,1) - There is too little information for the players to notice 2nd and 4th sliders are fast. You will either need to use tickrate2 so the others have ticks, or you should reshape the 2nd and 4th slider into something more unique.
   Great map otherwise.

1. 00:55:988 (2,3) - This is a problem. It's quite hard to read, and the last repeat doesn't happen so it sounds confusing. I would recommend this: http://puu.sh/29D63/95611d9746 This sounds better because you don't skip a repeat, and is easier to read.

lolcubes wrote:

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1. 00:55:988 (2,3) - This is a problem. It's quite hard to read, and the last repeat doesn't happen so it sounds confusing. I would recommend this: http://puu.sh/29D63/95611d9746 This sounds better because you don't skip a repeat, and is easier to read. ok.